Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 22


Hi guys,SWASAN fan fiction (Season 2) episode 22
Scene 1: Next day afternoon,Sanskar’s house
Sanskar is leaving for college,his classes will start the next day,there is almost 5 hrs travel to his college,Ragini’s father Arnab is accompanying him as Sanskar’s father is ill,Sanky prays before the idol in the small in house temple,Laksh’s mom and brother,Ragini’s parents and Sumi and Chetan has come,Sanskar seeks blessings from everyone,he hugs his mom and kisses her forehead,she wipes her tears,he goes to dad’s room,touches his feet,he is very sick and tired after the second stroke,he needs support ,Sanskar moves closer to him and hugs him and tells him, “Papa,don’t worry about me or anything,I know you will pray for me,and your prayers and blessings will be my light,don’t think about anything and stress yourself,I will come every fortnight,and Lucky will be here,I didn’t tell anything but he himself told he will take you for check up,then Rags and Swara,everyone will be there”,his dad’s speech is not clear,he just nods to say that he will not worry,he touches his son’s forehead,Sanky hugs him again and kisses him on his cheek,he comes out,Swara has come to that area to drink water,she sees Sanskar coming out of dad;s room and quickly wiping his tears,Sanskar comes near her ,winks at her and tells, “not because of dust,I cried,but Papa didn’t see,but u saw,it will stay between us na,Sanky cant cry,no?Swara is about to hold his hand but he just hits her shoulder gently and says,”come,we wil go” and walks away,Swara realises that she is in tears and wipes it off quickly….
Scene 2:Bus stop
In three two wheelers they have come,Arnab-Ragini,Swara-Meera(Sanky’s sister),Laksh and Sanskar..The bus arrives,Mukesh goes to check the seats,Laksh keeps Sanky’s luggage,he comes out and punches Sanskar on his stomach,Sanskar says, “ouch”,Lucky moves forward and hugs him tightly,Sanskar hugs him back and then Laksh tells him, “aree yaar,why no good colleges here in town,will miss you yaar”,Swara and Ragini moves closer to them,Snaskar says, “hei, Lucky boy has tears in his eyes,Oh,didn’t know you have so much love for me,”he turns to Swarag and tells them, “and you two,girls,don’t taunt my Lucky ,ok”Arnab calls from window and tells Sanskar to get inside,Swara moves a step backwards,she feels her heart heavy,she to hide her restlessness,looks elsewhere,Sanskar hugs Meera first and tells her to take care,then he goes near Ragini and tells, “hei Rags,don’t trouble aunty”,Ragini hugs him and wishes him good luck and says, “why are u going man,don’t go,na”Sanskar smiles ,moves back and is about to leave,he then turns and walks towards Swara,she stands there not knowing wat to say,they look into each others eyes, Swara softly tells him, “all the best ,Sanskar,”,he moves closer to her,Swara is surprised,he hugs her gently and then quickly takes his hands off and says, “enjoy your college days,keep smiling,and……I hope u wont forget me” ‘ Swara’s eyes are filled and a tear rolls down,Sanskar sees it, “Hei ,now you too,M not going away for ever,we will meet every fortnight or atleast once a month”,Swara replies, “once a month,you wont understand,now go,Arnab uncle is waiting,Sanskar says, “yea,going,bye…and don’t forget,keep smiling”,Swara nods…he walks away,she feels as though a portion of herself is getting detached from her body,she walks towards the bus,Sanskar has a window seat,he waves to everyone as the bus moves,he looks at Swara ,shakes his head with an ’I’ m going’ expression………..bus has left and Ragini breaks down,Swara hugs her and stares in the direction where he left……..

Scene 3:Swara’s house
Swara is standing in front of her dad’s photo,she goes and hugs the photo and tells, “Papa,he left,I am happy for him,he has joined a professional course,mechanical is his favourite branch,glad that he got the same in a good college,but I cant console myself Papa,cant imagine that I wont see him tomorrow,this week,for next two weeks,I already miss him so much,Papa,I hid my love for 5 years,haven’t tried to express it,but yesterday and today,somewhere ,I was getting a feel that he too feels for me,but I’m not sure,cos twice or thrice I felt so in these two days but the next moment his expression made me feel that I am mistaken,I don’t know Papa,but as I remind you daily,tell God that Sanskar is the only blessing that I want from him”,suddenly her phone rings and she goes to check it,an unknown number flashes on the screen,Swara attends,the caller says, “it is me Sanskar and this is the first outgoing call,save this number,thought to call the person who suggested and selected this gift for me,so how r u,had supper?what were you doing?”Swara says, “if you want an honest answer,I was thinking about you,infact,Raglak should also be thinking about you,we miss you”,Sanskar says, “Swara,I know,now let me cut the call,have to call mom,Rags and Lucky also..,bye goodnight”,Swara turns to her dad’s photo and says, “this is what I told,I don’t get this boy at all,I am going to call him back,may be he has recharged for a small amount only”………she calls back and says, “Sanskar,forgot to tell,you have gone there to study,don’t go behind girls,in mech there wont be many but in other branches ,there will be a collection but remember we three will kill you,we are your buddies and we have the right”,Hearing that Sanskar laughs loudly and says, “ok,ok,you called to tell this,ah?,Swara is surprised to hear him and tells him, “first time I am listening to you laughing like this, “Sanskar says, “and ,you made me laugh that way,thank u,Swara seniors are coming,I am going to cut the call,bye,”Saying that,he cuts the call…….

Scene 4:After two weeks,bus stop
Lucky has come early and is waiting for Sanskar,Sanskar gets down, Lucky runs to him and says, “hei,man,how r u,”,Sanskar says, “this time u came early,cant believe,Lucky boy ,on time”,Laksh replies, “that is Lucky’s love and loyalty…”Sanskar says, “ok ok,then where is Swarag?,had sent sms that will also be there,Laksh says, “actually both couldn’t come,had told to tell a big sorry,now let’s leave”,they reach Sanskar’s house….He goes to his mom n dad,hus them,hugs Meera and goes to his room,he finds Swara and Ragini seated there, he is surprised, “Oh,so you two wanted to surprise me,not bad,I am surprised”.They sit and chat for a long time,Swara and Sanskar looks at each other in between though Sanskar quickly looks away when Swara looks at him,Sanky’s mamma brings coffee and snacks,they spend some good time together,decides to meet the next day………..After Laksh and Ragini left,Swasan goes for a walk in the garden,Swara checks for the blue pot that she had planted,she tells him that it was there the last time when she came,trimmed and maintained,Sanskar replies that before leaving he had replanted many,pulled out a few and painted the pots afresh,may be by mistake ,would have thrown that,Swara is sad to hear that,Mukesh comes to call her,on the way home,she keeps thinking why he forgot to maintain it in blue colour,is it a bad sign,will I lose him ??she tries to keep those thoughts away and for that looks outside the window and takes a deep breath,still,she becomes more restless and keeps asking herself in her mind, “why he forgot that he had maintained it all these years,though he had trimmed it periodically…..Mukesh notices her restlessness…………….

(Guys,I typed this just for the sake of posting something today,I know ,wud not have liked this,sorry…..)

Credit to: Vini(Veena)

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  1. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Eagarly waiting for d next episode Dr…bz want to know whether he maintained that blue pot and plant or not.swara ye pole njanum epo upset anu…

    1. Thank u dr,upset aayathu ithu vayichittu aano,glad to know that u liked those scenes,last episode comments,I have to respond to a few more,I will,blue pit scene njan paathi urakkathil type cheythatha,athivide varanullathallarnnu…

      1. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

        Haha BT athu click ayi

  2. Not at all….it was awesome as always…hope sanskar will also realise his love for swara soon….update soon

    1. Thank u dr,ur feedbk s regular nowadays,thanks,m satisfied if u all liked this cos this was written that casually,in the middle of sleep..

  3. Love u di…..eagerly waiting for next episode

    1. Thank u dear,love u all,especially for the feedbk,next one, tomorrow.

  4. Hi di!!!!!!;
    I have no wrds to describe the ff.
    It’s so good

    I am fine rupsikha . How are your studies going on?????

    Hi joya di!!!!!!!
    When my friend read your comment
    yesterday her expression was” even I fooled you in the same way”

    Hi Niyati di!!!! I have alot of relatives frm Gujarat. Actually my family is like a mini India. You can find ppl from almost all the communities of India .

    Hi shraddha di!!!? Glad to know u are fine.

    Take care di. You really bring a smile on my face everyday. I commented in your ff yesterday. Mine was the second last one probably….????
    Hi Niyati di!!!
    I have alot of relatives from Gujarat
    Actually my family is like a mini India
    You can find ppl from all across india

    1. hi vinita…….
      ur friend also read that comment……..
      they fooled me….uska bhi alag maza hai na…………………….
      but i m happy k wo dono pehle si apni feeling share kar chuke the…..

      how r u????????

    2. Hi Vinita tq dear tum logonke comments ke waje se I recovered soon so much we are chatting des days I was missing not being part of it …?? so wat do u do vinita?

    3. Hi dear,u come late nowadays bt u r in thoughts,I will respond to your comment there,ok,thank u for being there dear,next season of exams??vacation?

  5. My comment for niti di got typed two times!!

    1. Bt not displayed??above was to u..

  6. Luvd ur epi…eagerly waiting fr next epi..

    1. Thank u dea, next one tomorrow..

  7. Vinita,Joya,Sethooty, I will check previous ff n reply to all those asap,same with the ones under this ff,hope u will give me some time…I will respond for sure…

  8. Waiting for ur epi vini… and all bst for ur future…

    1. I will send it tomorrow, and thank u very much dear.

  9. hi dii
    l am commenting for the first time…
    Ur ff makes me remember my frnds…
    i feel both sad and happy at a timenl…
    the sad thing is i am staying in hostel(kerala) far away from my hometown(hyderbad) i cant meet my frnds for 4 months
    but feels happy to read ur story which makes me remember my frnds and gives a strong feeling that they are near me…
    Now also i am eagerly waiting for my sem hldays in may
    if u can plz post the next episode today only…
    waiting for ur next ff

    1. Hei,Akshita, I remember, u have commented before once or twice, oh u r in hostel,m from Kerala though living in B’lore now,which course u r studying,ITV’s tuf being away from home n friends, m happy u could recollect some memories..

  10. nc episode waiting foe next episode…

    1. Thanks dear,haven’t typed next one,shall do it asap.

  11. Hi!!!!!!!!
    Right guess di… My exams are starting frm Wednesday. The above chats were so hilarious.. Especially abla par ilzam lagana and statue. I was laughing while reading those comments.
    Shraddha di I am doing BA.good to see u back.
    Joya di aapke Hindi par Mai fida ho gayi………

    1. Haha dear,m also enjoying reading ur chats with me n more than that between u guys..the bond,it s amazing,oh,next season of exams??all the best dear,God bless,and Joya ‘s Hindi,even ,m a fan…

  12. Helllooooop di….sry ha…xuley mne prvs ff chck kya toh aapki cmnt dkha…yes he is a singer(zayn)…. i don’t knw y bt i lyk vampire stories…xuley mujhe bachpan se vmpre n horror stories psnd h…

    U knw di jab me class 2 me thi,dt tym ek hrr srl diya krti thi DD national par”Aa biti” raat 10 bje…hmsha wt krti thi 10 bje tk…mere doni bhaya bht darti thi bhoot se…so jb ai srl shuru ho jti thi wo dono bhaag jti thi..n i think mne sbse jyada vmpre n hrr story pdha h bchpn se…shayad isiliye…par abhi pdhna chod diya h…raat ko bura spna dkhti thi…so mummmma ne bht gli d

    1. yr hum bhi wo serial dekhte the………
      national tv pe aata tha…..
      aur aankhe,surag,100,hawayain……
      wo song aaj bhi hume yaad hai

      honewala hai kya koi jane nahi….

      aisa kuch tha……

      1. Hei ,even I used to watch Surag and aankhe..name sounds familiar ,I think I used to watch that too but I don’t remember exactly…

    2. Ok dear,horror movies are exciting to watch,aa dat was the serial I mentioned in reply to Joya,it was dubbed in malayalam n my cousins used to watch it seems,wen they used to come for vacation aunt used to narrate how scared these fellows were,yet watched, I was also at school dat time bt class I forgot ,I used to feel that funny, but my lil cousins used to narrate with much enthusiasm and I used to be a listener ,haha ,mom interfered ,ah?good,good,and brothers were scared that time,so sweet…

    3. Even I used to watch alot of horror shows like ssh…phir koi hai, akela with my dad. My ma always comments that both father and daughter are alike and like to watch paranormal soaps. I have twin brothers and whenever I see any horror show they always run away and scream didi se bachao

      1. Haha dad n daughter watching horror series together,so funny,wat my dad used to do wen were kids is some dance steps in front of TV while we are seriously watching something n me n bro used to say,Pappa pls move,we will watch ur dance latervbut this won’t be retelecasted so pls let us ,recalling that itself is making me smile..

  13. hi rupsikha! are u a directioner?? Glad to know evn u are a fan of zayn

  14. rupsikha, have u read twilight?

  15. di how are u? Take care…..

    1. I am fine dear..fever has subsided,busy days …

  16. Yes vinita…i lv one drctn sooo much..spcly zaynnn??…he is sooo cute naaaaaa…

  17. Hmm…twilight flm dkhi h mne

    1. Evn I love 1d

  18. Wow sanskar looks at swara and when she looks he averts his gaze away from her….. Liked it… I think he too feels something for swara….

    1. Thank u for the comment,I guess ur first comment under my ff,thanks ,hope u will keep reading.

  19. Didi…wat abt next epi….when u ll update di….i m waiting…..di update daily pls…u know i m feel like restless without reading all swaragini fan fiction…

    1. I haven’t typed next one,most probably tomorrow. Yea,I can understand dear that there are many ff’s n u guys are supporting us,so it s not right to make u all wait..shall upload tomorrow.

  20. cutiiiiiiiiii

    he Divi me to

    1. Seeing new names under our ff s motivating, knowing that there are many who read our ff will make NY ff writer happy n under this episode there are many new names…m happy n I thank each n every one if u who supported me thus far.

  21. Friends ,those who read my chats under ff should be bored reading that I have not planned the scenes though I have a one line in my mind ,bt I repeat, so I have to plan something for the next episode, shall try to post one episode each at least, from tomorrow, Mickey, Joya,Shraddha,Niti,Vinita,Sethooty,Appu,Harini,Navi,Sindhuja,Leku,did I miss any with whom I chat daily??sorry if I have…hope u guys had a good day,take care…

    1. I realy like ur ff its simply i read it frm da beginning pls continue it

  22. No di…
    Joya di akele chali gayi bahar wo v raat ko??no way…me toh drti nhi thi bchpn me par pta h me kya krti thi…xuley jb merr papa ko prssre stck hua tha tab hume raat ko dctr ki pss jna prta tha kvi kvi….bhaya papa ke pss rhti thi n me mumma ke ssath jti thi…n wo v 10,11 bje…toh me dar kr mumma ki hth pkd lti thi n aakhn bndh kr chlti rhti thi..

    Bt jab me bada hone loge toh mera aise darna km ho gaya…iska mtlb ye nhi ke me isiliye hrr stry pdhne me drti nhi hu Q ki me bada ho gaya hu…mtlb kuch aur he h…

    Jab papa ki prssre stck huyi toh usse rtre hona para jab se…n tab hum v chhote the…n mumma bht inncnt thi….i think mumma mjhse v zyada chhoti thi…n jab dctr ne kaha papa kvi bol nhi payege toh mumma bht royi thi…n jb ussdin offce me papa ke rtre hne par farewell rkha tab pta h ek aunty ne aise english me papa ki baare me kuch bola tha…n mumma englsh nhi jnte thi…n tab me cls 2 ki thi…pr phir v thodi thodi smjh me aa rhi thi uski baaton se…mumma ro rhi the n me mumma ko assmse me trnslte krke baata rhi thi ki wo kya keh rhe h papa k barre me..tb mumma ne kaha pta nhi aage kya hoga…ksise 2m lg ko smbhlga…mne kha dnt wry sb thk ho jayega…ussdin se har din bht tklf me gjari hum…

    Kvi kvi toh ppapa pain se bht jor se chllti thi roti thi…aisa hr din hoti thi…n end me baade bhaya ko kb mil gaye IB brnch me n sb phle jsa ho gayi…xuley jb hm chote the toh meri muuma bht incnt thi par halat ne uuse blkl bdl di…sbse strng n pyari si muummaa…bade bhaya aaj v khti h ki jb me ips bn jaugi toh dkhna kya kya krogi sbke liye…agr mumma nhi toh hum v nhi chahe jtne ne v baade Offcr Q na ho

    1. Hi dear,Mickey, except earthquake n elephant msgs most of ur msgs have brought a smile ,bt this one,
      really touched my heart,wen I imagined a little girl holding mom’s hand and walking with closed eyes at late night
      ,I felt very sad,lots
      of respect to yourparents,happy to know abt ur bro
      ,even I respect my parents a lot ,we are nothing without them,how’s your father now?glad to know abt ur brother chasing a Csat dream..God bless him.

  23. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Take ur own time Dr…we will wait… Actually last two episodes made me restless…its hunting me like they r my own memories..

    1. Thank u dr,hope u r fine..kepp in touch..

  24. He is fine nw..bt papa bol nhi skti di..papa ki ryt right syt km nhi krti…jo v krri sb lft hnd se krna pdhta h

    1. Ok dear,can understand,sad to hear,bt very happy to know that he is fine now,may God bless ur family n keep u all hale n hearty…

    2. good morning dear……
      tum aur tumhari family bahot brave hai…
      u know u r a cute princess……..sab thik ho jayega………..

    3. Salute to your parents!!!!! After reading this I was totally shocked. You are really a brave girl.
      Don’t worry rupsikha. Keep faith on God. Everything will be alright.

  25. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Vini can u write on blog,actually saba start her blog and she posted an introduction of her new story.plzz its a request

    1. Ayyo,dear, Saba is a good writer,I don’t consider myself one, honestly don’t think my writing s good enough to be posted on a blog,sorry,ok,we will continue here..

  26. Hi veena,

    I am secret admirer of your ff. I read all your fan fic episodes in one day yeah just one day! You are too poliet to consider yourself as amateur writer. You are too good infact. I want you to know i totally loveld your previous fan fiction and did not know about this one upuntill now. Just one request, pls try to update a episode daily( its kind a dose) lol! I am totally hooked to your fan fic. Pls keep writing

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