Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 18

Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 18
Scene 1:Next year,school reopening day.
Swara ,Ragini and Laksh has come early,Laksh tells them he is very excited to join them from that year,they wait at the usual place where Swaragsan meets daily,Ragini tells, “but where is this Sanky,I wana go and check if we all are in the same division,they see Sanskar running and coming,he says,”hi”,Ragini replies, “your hai,come here”.They go A division and their names are are not there,then to B and sees Laksh there,Laksh is sad,then they go to C and don’t find the the three names and is super excited and says, “so me,Swara and Sanky are in IX D,Lucky ji better luck next time ji…”Laksh shows anger seeing Ragini’s happiness,he says, “Don’t think I will leave u all,but now don’t come behind,let me go to my class ,”,Ragini says, “haha,only during free time and tuitions we will have to bear you,thank God”,Laksh again gets angry.Sanskar holds his shoulder and says, “come baba,new boy na,we will make you sit and then only we will go”Laksh again gets angry,other three smiles and leads him to his class.
Scene 2:Same day,afternoon after class
First day,so only half day,all four gather at the parking area,Swara reminds them, “tuitions will start tomorrow only,no?but don’t forget to come home today,Chetan is going to LKG,lazy he is,no body else will be there,a small get together,only you three are invited,so should come and boost him up,they agree and smile….

Scene 3:Evening,Swara’s house
Swara tells them that Chetan is now very excited to go to school,he has come to show them his new bag and books,SANLAKRAG smiles,Ragini goes and lifts Chetan up in the air,they spend some good time with the kid,they give him a small gift and after some time Laksh and Ragini leaves,Mukesh has taken taken Sanskar with him to the library at their home and tells him, “Swara had once told that only u have reading habit,u may take books from here,it is an old collection,u can read and return as per convenience,they then come out,Mukesh and Sumi asks Swara to take him to entertainment room,on the way to it,Swara shows her room to him from the corridor,through the door,Sanskar sees Shekhar’s photo on the wall,he asks her who that is?
Swara says , “I had always thought about telling you this,he was my role model,my best friend,my life,my Papa,left me alone and went away when I was in first standard,you know something Sanskar,we were in debt that time it seems,business graph was fluctuating,mom was forced to marry our G.M and he is my dad now,I know he is not a bad man,but still,I don’t even talk to him much,it is not because I hate him but I cant imagine anyone in my Papa’s place so I don’t give him space,you were right that day,I’m a bad girl,I hurt my dad,but at the end of each day after hurting everybody I used to get hurt myself,each day,Papa reminded me that I was wrong,wet pillow reminded me that my heart was wounded ,but now, I am atleast trying not to hurt others purposely,Sanskar stands there without knowing what to tell her,he just softly says, “Swara,if u don’t mind I want to go near Papa’s photo,”he goes inside and comes back after a minute, “Swara,I wanted to apologise to him first for hurting you,I had felt some sorrow was hidden in your eyes,but then thought u were a spoilt,stubborn girl,didn’t know the pain hidden inside your heart,I don’t know what to tell,but I know something,if you had somebody to be your support u at that time,atleast you would not have had to go through this pain,I am very sorry for mentioning about you not respecting dad,I am sorry for all the harsh words I have spoken to you,I mean it Swara,forgive me,She smiles and says, “leave it Sanskar,don’t spoil your mood,I am very happy,now I have three good friends to share everything and a best friend,Sanskar asks ,who is that best friend?She looks into his eyes and says, “you,Sanskar”,Sanskar is surprised as well as happy,he doesn’t know what to say,he tells her, “I don’t know if I deserve that status but thank u Swara,”Swara smiles looking at him,after some time ,Sanskar leaves.

Scene 4:Swara’s room
She goes and stands in front of Shekhar’s photo and tells him, “you saw Sanskar na papa?today I told him that he is my best friend,I wish I could tell him that I love him,but Papa,it is ok,but now itself tell God that I want him as my partner ,tell ok,God will listen to you,gudn Papa”,she goes and holds her pillow,she imagines all the moments with Sanskar,she smiles and hugs the pillow and lie down,now u r not getting wet ,u know why?because I am not sad,I feel I have a purpose in life,I will study well and I will wait for him ”…………

Credit to: Vini(Veena)

241 comments

    • Vini

      Thank u dear and I had replied thrice to ur comment under the episode on 24th but I think it is still not uploaded,m happy for u dear,tc…

  1. Shraddha

    Oh God Didi aaj toh u brought tears in my eyes? really !!! I am seriously touched by today’s episode uu cant imagine how much !!!! Swaras speaks of her father as if he’s still beside her like her shadow ders so much hidden in dat part of story the way she was describing him I’m so overwhelmed by ur writing that was I the moment my eyes were moist but wen sanskaar went in n came back Oh God this guy is soooooo adorable my eyes turned wet from moist by his words how understanding he is the way he asked sorry for all the things he did which were actually rite in der own way yet he apologized I must say he’s gem of a person wish i meet smbody in real life like him!!! Aaj ka episode de dil khush kar diya n best u always save for last the way she spoke to her dad n pillow oh God n dat brilliant line” i ve a purpose in life ill study n I’ll wait for hjob brilliantly written n expressed n BTW not to forget Chetans excitement in showing his new bag n book that was really cute moment Finally best friends eh? yet long way to go vinni great job

  2. Shraddha

    OMG I never realized it became this big?? but wat to say can’t cut short it because it’s not enough to praise u?

    • Shraddha

      No but seriously this episode will be very close to me I just donno but I read it out to my mom n she too said dat the writer thinks so deep it s very emotional I loved it….. A lot

      • Vini

        M happy,u know y,cos,I typed it in a hurry(most of the episodes are like that,thank God,u all r tolerating me)and ,regards to ur mom,,,

    • Shraddha

      Tolerating like ssly?? I’m dat case dear I’m ready to tolerate it for a lonnnggg loooooong looooonnnngg period

    • Shraddha

      N I agree with u I donno many a times wen u plan out n focus implement things it goes off beat but wen u just do it in hush hush it turn out to be extremely well☺

      • Vini

        That is true dr regarding last minute prep giving good results,mostly during vivas,aha,I dono wat u all will feel wen I proceed with the track I have planned,most probably u all will regret supporting my ff,cos that wonderfully stupid track it is going to be,I feel if I don’t put some effort to pull it off sensibly then this comments column will be filled with ‘good’ words for me,haha,can’t wait…

    • Shraddha

      Oh come on now… Ur being modest don’t u see these many comments u get inspite if having not even a single romantic scene or sequence wer as at this point if time viewers are fulfilling their demand through nyc sweet romantic ffs on SwaSan…. So that means mere pyari behna ki aap bohot acha likhte ho the way u write things makes us go deeper in our thoughts….. So why do u fear wen Shraddha is here? lol? kidding ur great u know it all ur readers know it u just chillax n keep loving us by updating mannnnyyyy ffs?

      • Vini Grace Ross

        Y do u fear wen Shraddha s here,no? Haha,m not afraid instead I feel strong cos f u all….actually I don’t think I will ever be able to write expressive romance,mine don’t have it ,still u guys r supporting me so much,n m not a good writer,there are a few good writers in this site,if I mention,others will feel bad,I feel if I get a scene to direct I may modify n do it in my style,have done small attempts for skits during college, but writing,still,honestly,I don’t consider myself as a writer.

    • Shraddha

      Ur concept is so refreshing n innocent n how u shape up the plot is the best part of it I atleast Love it now u plz start loving ur writings skills ? because itna nervousness theek nahi hai else shall I say ur becoming that topper girl which u had mentioned earlier??

      • Vini Grace Ross

        M not nervous baba,it s just that I know m not a writer,wen I type I visualise the scenes as though these characters are going to act in front f me,can’t call it script as it requires some more detailing,a mini script I would call…writing …topper girl told the same yesterday after PSC test.. Won’t change ..haha..bt m not like that baba,I know my limitations ,that’s y m saying like this..

  3. joya

    i m speechless today……..
    u rock today…..
    1st day of school,nok jhok between them.chetan’s excitement…superb……..
    swara and sanskar’s conversion is mind blowing…… she is sharing her feeling related to her dad (shekhar) to sanskar…..i think she is sharing dis feeling wid some1 at 1st time…….u have differentiated her feelings toward shekhar and mukesh very welll…..perfect……….
    sanskar’s apology 1st to her dad and then he says sorry to swara…..yr dis is so heart touching…………
    bina jane harsh word us karna and all superb…….
    last paragraph is amazing,superb,perfect most imp there is lots of innocence (tell to god na he will listen to u,pillow scenes and all perfect…….

    • Vini

      My dear,I dont know wat to say,u understand ,na,how much ur comments means to me,hope I will not disappoint u,thank u for understanding every word dear,thank u,don know wat else to say.

      • joya

        one thing i have noticed….
        i dnt knw i m ri8 or wrong…..but i want to share wid u…
        there is a scene mukesh has taken sanskar to his library….mukesh ko yaad raha ki only sanskar has a reading habit….
        matlb he loves swara a lot…..uski bachchhi ki face par uske jin doston k wajah se smile dubara wapas aayi hai wo log bhi mukesh k liye important hai.special hai….
        (old books collection…..aayla…superb….)

      • Vini

        You are cent percent right dear,I’m shaping Mukesh’s character in a such a way cos the track requires it later,and,ya,I have a small collection of books so I simply added that,then my parents knows about mine n bro’s friends,same way theirs knows about us,that is y I told m writing based on some characters I have met in real life…

      • joya

        same here di…….
        my friends are my equal partners in my parents love…..
        u have a collection of books….
        really good yr……….
        u r too good……

      • Vini

        Yea,now I miss my friends a lot,my bestie is in London,havent seen her for two years,then others are at different places,memories are precious,and collection of books,not many dear,m not a voracious reader…

      • joya

        i can understand ur feelings…..
        ur best frnds are at different places but at the same time they all are at the same place and that place is ur heart….they are away from u physically but they r wid u in ur precious memories….
        so always be happy….

  4. Niti

    omg..vini Di this was heart touching epi..the way swara told her feeling abt her father to sanky..it touch my heart..you have expressed her feeling very well that i got tears in my eyes..then the best moment of this epi when sanky went to swara’s fathers photo n apologies..ohh i hv no words abt that..other then this swaraglaksan were so cute..swara sanky “best friends”..!! swara telling her father to tell god abt sanky..wow..u know what Di this small small heart touching moments made me love ur ff..

    • Vini

      Niti ,I often forget to mention,u r also there in my army of analysts along with a few like Joya and Shraddha(a few more are there but these two daily makes me wonder),thanks dr for understanding this simple storyline of mine in the sense that I wish u all understood..

  5. Shagun

    make a leap and make sanskar a rich and spoiled brat coming back from london and swara a
    normal rich bookworm type of girl and raglak apair –that was suggestion if u like it then plz apply on story

    • Vini

      I respect ur suggestion,but m very sorry dear,most probably u will be very disappointed with the track that m going to write,but this one I wish to write in a way that I have planned,I think many would be disappointed,m waiting to see the feedbk under those episodes,but,sorry once again,m not being arroagnt and stubborn,I wish to develop the one line in my mind,a little away from typical style of all zz well…yea,all will be well but after a lot of moments..

  6. sethooty

    Awesome Dr..last para was very emotional wen she talked to her father’s photo…And her pillow.. Wow superb. Dr love u lot.. Ever time u make my day..

  7. Speechless.. No words to describe…
    Your writing in ff is so mature & heart touching…
    And the way the thinking of Swara u portrayed is really well…
    If possible please update two episodes per day…

  8. sindhuja

    once again, an amazing update… well going… loved it more than the word describes it… the blooming feelings are awesome… keep it up…

    • Vini

      Shria,thank u,m truly humbled and honoured but as the track proceeds it will have similarity to some familiar scenes…

  9. Vini

    Telly team has mentioned under submit new article that they will accept ff’s again from the 4th of January only( due to holidays)…………so next part will be on 4th,Wish u all a very happy new year in advance…….

  10. Shraddha

    This is just not done….. I mean 5 to 6 days without u all ? Happy New Year in advance then to all the readers n writers? but tellyupdates team rehem karo

  11. Vini

    Actually Joya and Shraddha,was not getting time to think about upcoming episodes,dont hit me but m feeling a bit relieved,haha,no need to think for two three days ,na?my father in law is here,can take care of him,ah,but shall try to be regular from 4th..

    • Shraddha

      Now coming to u my dear sissy see ajka episode ko he lelo hadbadi me likha hai lekin it itna dil ko chugaya woh…. Toh aapko time ki kya zarurat hai aptoh aise he itna acha likhte ho but since now u ve mentioned u got some time so let me put some pressure on u?? I would be expecting Vini spl episode on 4th eh?? just kidding nothing as such chill n enjoy thses days because I know its easy for us to read n comment but it takes a looooot n loooit more for u to write happy mini vacation??

      • Vini Grace Ross

        Mini vacation,ha,kind of,but busy too,I think it s better not to plan ,and next I have planned ,though,s simple one..take care dear

  12. joya

    ohhhh ho……
    u r feeling a bit relieved….. that’s nice……
    but what’s about me and specially my heart…?????
    i m going to miss u alot…
    thank you shraddha and vini di for ur valuable compliment ( related to my Hindi)
    humne nahi pata tha ki aap dono humre comment ko observe karte ho….
    thank you so much…..
    most imp happy new year……….
    telly updates ko follow shayad hume karna hi tha,
    aap jaise achchhe logon se mulakat k liye koi bahana bhi to jaruri tha….
    gujare is saal me yaade hongi kuch baate hongi
    aanewale saal me naye sapne,ummide nayi hongi…
    khushiyon ki samruddhi ki barasat har pal ho
    aap sabko naya saal tah-e-dil se mubarak ho…….
    again thank you….
    missing u guys….
    bye….

    • Vini

      Hi dear,will miss u too,shall share my thoughts with u,to start with,I was not a regular reader of this site,used to wonder Wats the use of commenting here,then happened to write one ff episode,felt bored after 7 and stopped,bt simply checked after a few days,a few were still there asking for next update,came bk and it reached 36 somehow though it is an average one,may be it was destined to meet u all thru the ff,a few of u r like younger cousins,we havent seen each other,diff states, language,culture n back grounds,still wen I reply,I get a feel that m responding to my cousins,(and u Rupsikha,if u r reading this,u r d one who broke the ice),I was n still is a little prejudiced if it is right to share n reply here bt the honesty in all ur comments makes me reply from heart,and I often think,since my name n things that I share is not fake,then I should not think that others are fake,they also will be genuine,and regarding ff,don’t know if I’ll write another one after completing this but will surely remember all of u especially you,Rupsikha,Vinita,Appu,Shraddha,Sethooty, Leku,Niti,Manu if I name a few ,others n their feedbk are also very important but I think I personally chat more with u guys,then ur words,especially those in Hindi,goes straight to my heart,I feel n see a strong support in u guys,thank u for being there,glad that m in touch with u,wish u a very happy new year, dear…God bless…

      • joya

        hi….
        actually i m not regular watcher of swaragini…i was not regular reader of dis site..u stopped ur writing at same time i read ur story.(dt was 1st ff jo humne padha tha)
        monday,Tuesday sometimes Wednesday ko ek marathi show dekhte hai..aise hi bus stop pe baithe baithe telly updates pe swaragini k missing episode padh rahe the aur apka ff dikha…fir bus waha se safar shuru huaa apke sath….aur aaj dekho naye rishton ki suruvat ho rahi hai…u r ri8.we have not seen each other…we r from different background but relationship does not need dis na..bus dil k rishte hai yeh..inke liye yeh sab jaruri bhi nahi hai na……
        we r trying to know each other through comments…… jaise har kisi ki comment unke soch ko represent karti hai…all r so supportive……truely speaking i m sharing special bond wid u…
        thank you so much….
        thank you so much RUPsikha…
        ha humne bhi lagta tha ki internet pe kai log fake hote hai..isliye actually humne bhi yaha par comment k liye dusra nam use kiya…actually i m not saying my name joya is fake bcz my my best frnd call me by using dis name….uska kuch spl bond hai joya nam k sath isiliye wo humne is naam se bulata hai….but my thoughts and feelings are genuine,true….hope u all understand……
        my real name is Sheetal….

        thank you so much
        thank you so much…….

      • joya

        vini di u said joya,u should write for us…..
        off course di……
        i know how bad writer i m…..
        bad me padhne ke baad yeh mat kehna aap log ki koi achchhi wall hi dundh kar deti yeh.wahi sir patak dete….isko likhne ki kya jarurat thi…..
        hehehehehehehehehe….

    • Shraddha

      Arey thank God warna I would ve missed this comment….
      1st of All Joya kya baat hai aap toh hint pe hint de rahe go ki aapki Hindi lajawab hai.isi baat pe try toh karke dekho kya pata likhna aapka kwaab hi…. N btw Thank you sooo much wish u all the luck health n happiness not only u to everybody!!!?

      • Shraddha

        Now coming to u my dear sissy see ajka episode ko he lelo hadbadi me likha hai lekin it itna dil ko chugaya woh…. Toh aapko time ki kya zarurat hai aptoh aise he itna acha likhte ho but since now u ve mentioned u got some time so let me put some pressure on u?? I would be expecting Vini spl episode on 4th eh?? just kidding nothing as such chill n enjoy thses days because I know its easy for us to read n comment but it takes a looooot n loooit more for u to write happy mini vacation??

      • Shraddha

        After reading urs now even I’m feeling like to express my feelings
        1st n for most I never thought that ppl actually do comment on this website I used to think its all fake? ?den 1 fine day I realised no they actually do comment n den these ffs started to be posted n vini didi urs is the 1st ff I ever commented on n now ders no stop? but ur ff I cudnt stop myself n u are the one who started this personal reply n I agree rupshika played a role in dat because i uesd to read dem but never ccomment because I used to feel how to say abt us without even knowing den n dp profile nothing is der just a name n dats it but gradually I opened up I realised ppl do share their details n all the comments are genuine n real now I’m one among dem

      • joya

        thank you so much shraddha….
        1st don’t call me aap….jaise upar ke upar k comment me kaha hai ki i m sharing special bond wid u guys….
        sach batao to likhte hai hum thoda thoda par wo itna achchha nahi hai…bus ek story ka editing kiya tha….
        koshish karenge achchha likhne ki……

      • Vini Ross

        Shraddha darling,U know something,thru comments I have an idea abt a few of u in my mind,I may be wrong but wen I thought about Ragini’s character in my ff today u came to my mind..don’t know..bt I’m not joking..n abt Joya’s writing,I love it..Joya,u should write for us…and Shraddha dear,a very Happy new year to u…regards to ur mom too…

      • Vini Ross

        Vini special episode,thank u for mentioning that it was a joke,is there something like that?? My vehicle s always moving in the same track,bt u guys r so good,haha,m too lazy dear,ah,if I write in a hurry,at least I will write something,I thought abt next episode bt feeling lazy to type it..I open a M word page n stare at it n close it,new hobby that is…

      • Shraddha

        Joyaaaa aka sheetall dono he naam bohot khubsoorat hai!!!! Aur dekha mujhe laga he tha ki aap sorry? tum likhti ho kyunki ur Hindi as a language I’m not saying ur thoughts abt ff n their interpretation is what that makes me think ki u might be good at writing n BTW Happy New year!

      • Shraddha

        N vini didi hawwww u guesed quite rite because I also keep comparing myself with ur ragini even I’m a total buk buk Rani….. During my school days my teachers used to call me chatter box n walky talky?? n even after being tall they used to make me sit in 1st bench to keep an eye on me? I also think that theres resemblance BTn me n her ? but ur dentist or psychiatrist ha?? n wish u too a very Happy New Year!!!! Thank you so much for wishes n Honestly even for me it has become a habit of checking out fr ur comments now?

      • Shraddha

        N no it wasn’t a joke by vini special episode I meant some really nyc stuff that u write…. N joke was a part but not for this it was wer I said I’m pressurising u?? hehe theres absolutely no pressure just go with the flow because that’s ur high point I feel like u just write it n it turns out to be great

      • Vini

        Hei dear,through ur comments u made me feel that u have resemblance to Ragini’s character in my ff,haha,sitting in first bench,was smiling reading that,u guys will expect a decent episode n dono wat rubbish I will type n post in episode 19,wen I used to write one daily I didn’t feel this laziness but now very very lazy ,ah,hope I will write something n post on Monday ,one thing I would like to mention ,things which may seem to be irrelevant in the episodes will have relevance later..simple n common track it is but even m waiting to c what all scenes will be there…

      • Shraddha

        Arey chill don’t worry ull be great as usual n u know what joya is actually rite bechare Monday ko itna pyaar aur importance kabhi nahi mila hoga?? n see didi pressure badhta ja raha hai badhta ja raha hai
        ??hehehe kidding no pressure nothing just exitment m fewling monday there will be over flow in sswaragini section m so gonna love Monday I tell u? n ragini part ssly ya I’m extremely chattar pattar but m composed a bit now wen I see rupshikhas comment I feel like arey yeh toh meri behen hai?

      • Vini

        Ha,u r right,there will be an overflow of ff episodes from Monday,all r not lazy like me,no?and regarding Rupsikha’s and ur comments, haha..bt she sounds like ur naughty younger sis…

    • Vini Grace Ross

      Hi dear,Sheetal,nice name,I’ll reply ok,m missing letters n typing wrong ones,sleep is playing with my eyes..If I continue typing now then most probably our relation will end..I will come bk dear n Niti,Mickey, Vinita, Harini.. I’ll respond ,ok…..

      • Vini Ross

        Joya dear,so it s my luck that u happened to read my ff that day ,I got to know u,yes dear,though we haven’t seen each other(Saba must have seen me thru fb) still I believe the honesty in our comments connects us,now like Whatsapp ,I check this site wen I get time,even my hubby laughed wen I read out a few comments at the start,I understand u dear n u have a beautiful name,thank u for mentioning it…lots of love…

  13. Ohhh??..dat’s nt fair yr..dt mns hume 5days wt krni hogi!!…me toh aapke ff ki liye 1din v wt nhi kr skti thk se…pta h bar bar chck krti rhti hu..bt kya kr skti hu wt krni ki alaba..so….!! !!Anyways Wish u a vry vry vry happpppppyyyy wala new year di n 2 allll offfffffffff u guyzzzzz???(in advnce)

    Hei Vinita?whre r u dr?…hmmmmmm 2maloi Noboborkhor bhtt bht bht huvessssa jonalu??..

    • Vini

      Mickey baba,after a long time u r bk to form under my comments column,glad to c that,u wer the one who made me reply to personal comments so ur silence was felt,but I understand the situation dear,and a very happy new year to u too,may u be blessed with all happiness n yea,thank u for the wishes,then since I didn’t understand wat u wrote for Vinita,is it a new year wish ??wat I felt like telling after reading that was,don’t scold Vinita like this,leave it ,leave it…

  14. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Ohh no I can’t wait…
    Vini dr..u should update 2 episode per day..for compensation of 5 days..
    wish u Happy new year Dr…31st nu Fort kochi full karangan plan cheythatha..but leave tharathe ente Project Manager um , fever vannu ente friend um enne pattichu..hum eppo enthaaa Ff only After 4 Jan …haha

    • Vini

      Sethooty,onnu thanne type cheyyaan madiyavunnu,time enganelum spare cheythalum,but nokkatte dear,thank u dr,wish u a very happy new year too,ah,I miss Kochi,just two days only I could stay there,miss my loved ones n the celebration there,so ur plans got spoiled cos f them n telly site also is on a long vacation, I can understand…tc..

  15. Vinita

    Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This episode is so good. Loved the last part where swara told that she will wait for sanskar and she will study hard and her love will not be an obstacle for him. Sanskar’s apology to shekhar was amazing and totally unexpected. Mukesh remembered that Sanskar likes reading. The entire episode was OSHADHARON!!!!!!!!!! Your ff has an inner meaning, one has to read each and every line and every line has an emotion concealed in it.
    Today my exams ended and I am so happy!!!!!!! After giving the exam, I wnet shopping with my mom, aunt and cousin, then we watched a film and returned i home a while ago. I am feeling so elated!!! After so many days I will have a good sleep. I know that I am sounding like a mad person now but I am feeling so happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Joya di you are absolutely correct. Di told that simply but we are quite serious regarding it!!!
    Your analysis is too good. I like your hindi. Even saba’s urdu was excellent.Loved the shayari which she wrote at the beginning of each episode.

    Rupsikha!!!!!!!!!!! Tomar ki khobor??????? Mur khobor valo. Tomaleo nonoborkhor bohut subecha!!!!!(I knw that I am writng something rubbish, my assamese is not at all good. Actually there is a deal between me and my friend. She is from Assam and since we both like to learn different languages, i teach her bengali and she teaches me assamese but at the end we mess up everytihng and get confused) Haha!!! Di, rupsikha is not scolding me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Vini Ross

      Hei dear,finally ur xams are over,a big hug and pat on your back from my side to celebrate ,m humbled by the good words abt my ff,thank u,writing,I m not bring modest ,I don’t think m a good writer,bt one thing I agree partially,many things will be said between the lines hereafter,it will be having relevance in future episodes, hope those who read word by word will make out…so u enjoyed shopping and some time wid ur loved ones,good wayvto end a year,Joya,if u r reading this, m a fan of whatever u write dear…wish to read in Hindi, give it a try,learning new languages,very very good Vinita,keep it up…

      • joya

        fan????????
        dis is not fair di………
        u said u dnt like dis word….
        then y r u using……..????
        actually is baat pe punishment milni chahiye aapko……4th jan ko 4 episode………….(kidding ha….)
        kuch jyada bolte hai na hum……..
        haye par kare kya aadat hai….
        bardasht kar rahe hai yaha sab hume (heheheheherhehe)
        sorry guys…………

      • Vini

        No problem, I don’t wish to c others being fans of my ff bt I like to admire others n no arguments,haha,I repeat,m a fan of ur writing…n I haven’t felt that u talk too much n I won’t mind if u talk more also…

  16. Vinita

    This is such a long comment!!!!!!! You all will get a severe headache after going through it.
    Di will b able to handle, she is a doctor but rupsikha and joya di pls dont get panicked after seeing such a lengthy comment.

    • joya

      no no no no….
      cuteness se kisi ko headache ho sakta hai bhala……..
      tumhe laga ki tumhara comment lengthy hai par humne nahi laga….
      are kuch episodes pehle to humne isse bhi lengthy comment likhe the…shayad tab sabko jarur headache huaa hoga……hehehehe….

    • Vini Ross

      No problem Vinita dr, with the length n number of comments,not cos I belong to fraternity but cos I value u and ur comments..and Joya,I didn’t get head ache ,I know u didn’t mean that abt me…

  17. Sree harini

    Before commenting for the episode..I would like to say something didi. You know what you really have magic in your fingers which results in this type of episodes. I always wonder at your way of describing each and every incident whether a minor one or a major. You always steal my heart with your words.and one more thing is the family environment that you create here.I really feel relaxed after reading your replies here..seriously di it shows how good you are at your heart. And regarding episode..I am speechless asusal. Everyday I will fix my mind to comment on your episode but after reading,I fell short of words to describe my feeling. But today,this family environment made me to comment. I love you so much from the core of my heart.
    And pleydint take any tension regarding the plot didi..everyone here are your fans and are ready to accept anything written by you..by the way can I join here??

    • Vini Ross

      First of all most welcome to this comments column dear,pls feel free,then ,thank u for the good words n love dear,wish u a very happy new year,no magic dear,during school days I used to say that I wish to become a director,then had prepared a little for CSAT after my graduation, bt I think destiny wanted me to become part of medical profession n I ended up in my current profession,my best friend still believes that I will become a director some day,it won’t happen,reason Num 1,m not talented,no 2 ,I’m not doing anything to pursue that, but I partially fulfill that thru my ff,though it is an ordinary plot I visualise the frames and how our characters will play it if this was the real story,so I know there is no magic at my finger tips,there are a few good writers among ff writers,who describes well n writes in the style of a novel,I’m not going into detailing cos m not that talented and second reason is I enjoy writing this like a written update in a ‘mini’ script style though I know this is not the style of script writing,regarding family environment here,all credits to my dear reader friends(pls dont mention the word fans I dont like that under my ff)especially (just scroll up and down ,you will understand who all),thank u guys,Harini,keep in touch..

      • Sree harini

        Oh wow didi..so your a doctor. I really respect them a lot and even I too prepared for that but ended up as microbiologist.

  18. Haha diiiii???? m nt sclding vinita..it’s a new year wish…n thank u??

    Haha vinita i knw yeh bht long cmnt h..par hamare liye toh bht chhoti h ryt??…hum headache lete nhi,dete h..

  19. Niti

    Hello vini Di…Hii joya..shraddha n everyone..,

    After reading ur comments i also want to share my experience..i am percuing CA..i m CA final student..so in my life there is no masti at all entering in this profession..i remember all my school n class days which was full of Masti..dhamal..Drama..Friendship..tension..n wt not..this is the main reason that i am diehard fan of uf this ff vini di..

    i do comment but i don’t read others comment in any other ffs but in this ff i used to read certain people’s comment like joya..rupshikha..shraddha..etc..i love to read ur comments..ya specially joya apki comment padhneka maja hi alag hai..

    as i hv already told you vini Di that ur ff was the very first ff which i hv started to read..i used to visit this site for ur ff only..though there were many other ffs..then due to bakavas story of original track..i stop watching real serial..n me ye ek hi serial dekhti thi..so for me there is no source of entertainment..so after reading ur ff i started following this site whenever i got some free time..now i follow many other ffs..

    I do afraid from this online cheating n all so i was not commenting..as i thought it ws all fake only..i don’t have fb or instagram accounts also..but when i first time comment i get to know that these all r genuine readers..so i also started commenting but with my nick name..ya just like joya..Niti is not my real name..my name is Niyati..

    this is the first time i am communicating with peoples online..i am glad ki muje ye chance mila..thank u soooooooooooooo much vini Di..
    ab pata nahi 4th Jan tak kese wait karenge..uff

    Wish u all n ur family…a very..”HAPPY NEW YEAR”..

    • joya

      all the best for ur studies……..
      thank you so much for good words……
      my bro is also preparing for CA.
      but he is not serious like u yeh alag baat hai (heheheheheh)
      thank you so much niti….niyati also sweet ha……
      take care dear…….and all d best….

      • Niti

        thank u soooooooo much joya..
        App ki wishes ki muje bahhot jyada jarurat hai….App k bhaiya Ko bhi All the best…bz u kn in CA everything is depending upon luck only..take care dear..bubye

      • Shraddha

        Heyya niti!!! 1st of all NIYATI is such a lovely name? niyati means destiny rite? Happy New Year BTW n ur a CA student omgggg its so hard no? I ve heard a lot from my family members there are a few …… Like they say if u clear in 1st attempt ur genius anyway All the best …. Take care

    • Vini Ross

      Hei dear,oh,wat a name dear,Niyati, loved it…my friends r into your profession,tuf it is no?all the best dear,even I was prejudiced dear,but now I know many r so genuine n to an extent frank also and it is reflected in their comments,thank u for the good words u spoke about my ff,truly ,humbled n honoured dear,thank u …Happy new year…

      • Vini Ross

        And one more thing,hinestly,m happy that I don’t have to type ff till 4th,dat lazy m feeling right now…

      • Niti

        thank u soooooooooooooo much Di..ya its very tuf..:'(

        ya even i feel the same that all r becoming frank now..n me agar personally meri bat karu to i want to maintain these relations with u all as long as i can.. but how ?? that u guys have to tell me…as i don’t use fb n all..

        plz plz plz vini Di..u hv to gives at least 3 part on 4th Jan..Akhir hum logo Ko intzar Karne ka ku6 to phal milna chahia na..so take a full rest n make ready at least 3 part to upload on Monday..bubye..tc

      • Vini Ross

        Dear,even I was thinking abt the day wen this ff will end,I don’t think I will write a new one,will surely miss u all,u need three parts on Monday,don’t make me faint ,dono know how I will type next cos of my laziness, shall try to write two,let me c..

      • Shraddha

        “Three parts on Monday don’t make me faint” haha vini di I loved this line but now looks like pressure is being builded ha?see all of us are starving n ready to pounce on 4th

  20. Wlcme [email protected]…waise ek baat kahu mjhe nhi pta 2m kisiliye thnx kh rhi ho???
    ?..n ya phle mjhe v fake lga tha..n phle bar jb cmnt kya tha toh thodi c dar gayi thi..bt now allll okkkkkaayyyy dr??..soo ur name is sheetal ryt..it’s so swt nme yr lyk U☺☺???…Happy new year dear?..lv u

  21. Vini

    OMG,so many comments to be read was my first reaction when I opened this page,read it at a stretch,truly,u all touched my heart today,u guys share a very special bond, so happy to see that,I will reply ok,a lil busy,have to go to church after dinner,here,prayer service is a little early at church,once again all of u,wish u a very happy new year,a big hug to u all…

  22. Vini

    Happy New year to u all especially to my dears who filled this page with ur lovely comments, tomorrow,as soon as m free, under each comment of urs, I will respond ok…Mickey baba, I have prayed for u all n after seeing ur comment have prayed again.. Some say that we should not tell others that we have prayed for them bt here since u tol to make a wish,I replied ok…

    • sethooty

      Happy new year Dr… This new year brought some happy news and excitements for me yaar.my best friend my sis going to be a mother , njan oru chitta akan pokunnu…haha..

    • sethooty

      Engine undarunnu new year..epo Bangalore ano..Today holiday anu enikku..I have enough time ..BT fan fiction mathram illa vayikkan

      • Vini Ross

        Happy New year dear,convey my congrats to ur sis,n congrats to u too would be Chitta,njangal Kerala Anglos,chechiye aanu Chitta ennu vilikkunnathu,wen I read I thought abt that,m at Bangalore dear…m feeling lazy to type ff

  23. Vinita

    Happy new year to all my didis and friends!! may this year bring lots of happiness to your lives… May God bestow His divine blessings on all of you!! even a big thank you to telly team because it is due to them i got so many elder sisters like di, sheetal di, niyati di(both sheetal and niyati are beautfl names) and a nice frnd like rupsikha ….. Initially i was extrmly scared to comment but to the warm response from di and the persnl touch added by rupsikha i felt so comfortable. its a plea

    • Vini Ross

      Hi Vinita ,Happy new year dear,may God bless u too,yea,even I wish to thank telly team cos it s thru this platform that we all got to know each other,now wen the name of each state comes to mind there is surely somebody to remember…(not forgetting my cousins and friends residing outside Kerala)…

  24. Vinita

    It is a pleasure to read your comments joya di. there are alot of typos in the above cmmt pls ignore it

  25. Niti

    Wish U all a very HAPPY NEW YEAR..hv a healthy n successful n rocking new year..n all the best u all for ur respective study..cerier..job..any kind of works..take care..

    thanks vinita n rupshikha for commenting on my name..i am also glad for this site..that i get friends n sisters..:-*:-*
    I call u vini Di as Di because once i read that u r merried..n so i love to call you as Di..n
    i love when vinita call me as Di..(i hope u r younger then me..;-)) n i will love to call all of u as Di whoever is elder then me..bz it gives me feeling of attachment with u guys..n all youngers r like my sis n friends..

    lots of luv n big hug to u ALL..keep smiling n stay blessd..love u vini Di

    • Vini Ross

      Hei Niti,Happy new year dear,no probs dear,as u said wen u guys call me di it really makes me feel attached to u all,then to ur comment above,I will respond there…lots of love and a big hug to u too…

  26. Oops sry sry Niti di n joya di..u r eldr thn me..mjhe nhi pta tha ki aaplog bade ho..sooo srryyyyyyyy??..xuley mne aap dono ko ek bar nm se pukara tha..bt jab vinita ki cmnt chck kya tab pta chala.so aaj se di khuga aap dono ko????

  27. Yes u r ryt Nitu(Vinita,sry ha mne 2mhre nm short kr diya??)..telly team ko ek bada wala thnx toh jarur krna chye…thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu telllllllllyyyyyyy teeeaaaammmmmmmmmmm….??…
    For me 2015 sbse bst year h..i m lcky 2 hv a frnd lyk uu??.n of course Meri choti si pyari si Cute si Vini di ko kaise bhul skti hu…Mera bhaya toh dono h par sis nhi thi koi..Toh humsha wish krti thi ki God plz ek sis djie..n seeeee mjhe wo v mil gaya..aur wo v ek nhi,bht sareeeee(Vini di,joya di,niti di ….??.)

    Waise mjhe bro v chahiye?????…haha..sb lg soch rhi hogi ki yeh pgl h???…aab toh mjhe v lg rha h ki me soch me pgl hu

    • Vini Ross

      Actually,after reading this I felt u r a lil crack,just kidding,haha,even I had wished for a sis older to me,but I love my bro..and yea,have two younger cousins n now thru this site a small army….very happy…

  28. joya

    hey guys…….
    happy new year……..
    aapke palakon ne sajaya har sapna pura ho…..
    khushiyon se daman hmesh hara ho……..
    bas itna hai kehna,
    har kisi ki har duaa qubool ho……

    thank you rupsikha,niti,vinita,vini di,shraddha for ur support and love…….
    rupsikha,koi bat nahi….tumhe jo achchha lage.di kaho ya naam lelo……
    and vini di itni aasani se humse pichha nahi chhutne wala………
    vinita it’s my pleasure dt u always read my stupid comments…..
    good Morning and have beautiful day…

  29. Niti

    Vini Di..me too agree with u..after reading ur comment i think u r Dramaqueen…i am also happy to have sis like u…u know we r two sisters..n i m elder than my lil princess.. n now i get many elder n younger sis..i m so happy 4 that..as till now i hv never made any girl as my sis..ya i hv made many boys as my bro ye alag bat hai..bubye dear..tc

  30. Vini Ross

    Joya,Shraddha,Mickey,Vinita,Sethooty,Niti,Harini,I think I have responded to almost all comments of yours…take care…

  31. Vinita

    Hahaha!!! 161 comments!!! We all are good at janani talks.
    Di i am eagerly waiting for 4th. on 4th vini di will come back with a bang!!! Like they say in serials,is somvar ko hoga kuch khaas, kuch nayab,kuch anokha…. dosti, masti,bachpan aur masumiyat!!! PARNA MAT BHULIEGA SHANDAR SOMVAR KA SWASAN FAN FICTION jo aapke dil ko khushiyon se bhar dega aur aapki duniya bhar uthegi gulzar khwabon se…..

    • Vini

      Haha Vinita,nothing s going to happen dear,I haven’t typed anything till now,and don’t know wat to type..

  32. joya

    vini di log jyada tar monday ko wait nahi karte qki us din holiday khatm hota hai….
    par yeh chamatkar to dekhiye har koi badi besabrise monday ko wait kar raha hai including me……….
    chamatkar…..!!!!!!!
    bahot bada chamatkar…!!!!!!!!!

    • Diya

      Are u a malayali?? R u from Kerala ??
      Oh sorry BTW iam silent reader who reads ur ff from episode 1 and doesn’t comment as iam lazy…

  33. joya

    goooooooooooood mooooooooornig guys…………………
    gaanv walooooo…..nahiiiiii……..o telly updates waloon…..aap logon ne woh purana song suna hai Bedardi balma tujhko mera man yaad karta hai????
    utna hi dard humre dilon me hai…..
    hayyyye samjho thoda……..telly updates walon aapko to sirf upload karna hai hum to di se kehna chahiye ab to likho……intjar nahi hota hai…….aaj sunday hai aur iske bad aayega monday..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    khatm hone ko hai intjar………..fir bhi pura ek din……………

    • Vini

      Gud afternoon dear,ah I typed two para for the next episode,tomorrow this site will be flooded with ff,take care dear…

      • sethulakshmy (sethooty)

        Hi vini..I saw u in fb..haha actually oru surprise akate ennu orthu..paranjilla…msg cheythittundu..
        I know u r not active in fb..nerathe paranjarunnaloo

  34. Waise mujhe rslts ki tension toh nhi h,par ha abhi mujhe aapni hair ko lekor bht tension ho rhi h..??..soch rhi hu kon si hair cut acchi lgegi????..

  35. Waise mujhe rslts ki tension toh nhi h,par ha abhi mujhe aapni hair ko lekor bht tension ho rhi h..??..soch rhi hu kon si hair cut acchi lgegi????….Q ki me thodi c pgl hu na hahaha ?????…har waqt smile krti rhti hu ..award milna chahiye mjhe sprkling pgliiii????? ke liye

    • Vini

      U often make me smile dear,actually, I often laugh after reading ur comments n dats y I gave u dat name n so u r thinking abt hair cut,ha good,need not mention, I understood abt ur mental status,just kidding,by the way how did u change ur emblem?no a heart is seen.Hw did u add it?

  36. Vini

    Ok ok understood regarding ur heart emblem..?,actually my phone was displaying it in a much larger size in place of ur green emblem…now,don know ,wat s wrong with my phone…

  37. Haha diiiiiiiiiii….aapko pta h mere phle wala clg me sb mjhe bht pyar krti thi. Mre bajah se sb smile krti thi n kisi ko rone he nhi deti thi ..sbki fvrte thi me???

  38. Di aur pta h scl me me aur mere dono bst frnz jor jor se smle krti thi..aur bht dur tak sunai deti thi ???…issiliye tchr ne hume bht baar punish kya tha..n clg me mjhe ”bharti”nam diya tha ek tchr ne??…

    • Vini

      Haha,teacher must have had a nice time managing u all,that was in school ,no?one of batchmate in college ,once she started laughing she loses control n even if it is UB class will go on laughing…we were shocked once cos teacher also noticed it once bt she didn’t punish ,may be she thought girl was having hiccups..

    • Vini

      Now only I saw your msg,ah in between type something in ur mother tongue,can learn some new words in a new language…I m staying at Bangalore dear…

  39. Mrng di..pta h aaj subha 4:30 me earthquake aaya tha..dar gayi thi bht..nve evr fcd such a tremor in my lyf di???…itne saalo me phli bar bht bada dkha mne

  40. Niti

    Gm vini Di..n everyone..hv a rocking day..!!

    ohhmmgg..!! Vini Di 215 comments..not bad..after 2 days i m visiting this page..guys u all rocked it..rupshikha..u r truly a dramaqueen..ha ha ha

    • Vini

      Hello dr,Gud afternoon, yea,we did chat simply n it reached 220…Joya,Shraddha,Rupsikha ,Sethooty,Vinita n all were there…

    • Vini

      Just now I read abt earthquake dr,now checked in net,6.8,strong one,thank God u r safe,Manipur s worst affected??,may God protect everyone..

  41. Vinita

    Hi!!!!!!!!!!
    Is everything ok rupsikha??
    val lagil tomar khobor vale huni.
    Even I was terrified today. Around 4:30 am suddenly the bed began to shake and the window panes and the doors were vibrating . In the neighbouring houses everyone was continuously blowing conch shells.

    Eagerly waiting to see today’s epi.

    • Vini

      Many states are affected, no?thank God u guys are safe,prayer with those who are suffering the impact of this…

    • sethulakshmy (sethooty)

      Hey mickey ..I just heard abt earthquake.. Is every thing okey na Dr..is anything affected to ur area?

    • Vini

      Dear,today’s,I had sent but may get uploaded after some time only…many ff’s are to be uploaded,I guess.

  42. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Hi all Tthere r less Ff..eagerly waiting for today’s episode..
    I heard news thart we have to wait one and half month for swasan union.

  43. Niti

    ohh god..vinita..rupshikha..n everybody from east India…u all take care dear..hope everything will b fine soon..nd god protect everyone

  44. Vini

    Hi guys, episode 19 I had posted early today but I think site admin should upload it,may be site s busy.And Sethooty, I stopped watching the serial…boring.

    • Niti

      that’s awesome..i hv stop after ragini’s memory loss drama..now u also..but u know i can’t stop myself loving the characters..i love sanskar..i like swara..i won’t say i like ragini but i like teju’s acting..

      n vini Di..you need not required to watch this boring stuff as u hv capability of making i mean writing whole serial..that will be better then the original one for sure.. uska proof ye hai ki many of us read urs and other ‘s ffs only n not original serial..

      • Sree harini

        Omg..I am really relieved after reading that rupiksha and vinitha are out of danger but I am equally sad for the victims. Actually I was out of the world from past one week. If I wouldn’t have read this page,I would never got to know about earthquake. You guys are really caring,affectionate,loving..I am not getting any words but I really love to read comments on your fiction.every time I read your episode,I will fall for your story as well as for you and also for this beautiful family. Thank-you telly updates for giving us such a wonderful author and commenters. I am not buttering anyone here..please don’t think like that. This is genuine feeling.

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