SWASAN Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 14

Hi guys,SWASAN Fan Fiction (season 2) episode 14

Scene 1 :After two months,december 31st

It is around 11.40,Ragini and Swara are awake in their respective homes,Sanskar and Laksh had told them that they will come to the road in front of their houses at 12 to wish them,noise of crackers from various corners,some bike riders are doing racing,some families have come out for a walk,Laksh watches it and says, “hmm,after a few years ,we will also buy bikes,hey na Sanky?”,Sanskar says, “yea definitely”,they push their cycle and are enjoying midnight moments ,suddenly Laksh says, “s**t,look at the time,to whose house should we go first,I think we should wish Swara first,they both wont bother but if we go to Ragini’s and come back to wish Swara,it will be very late,have to go to school,tomorrow,no?they leave for Swara’s house…

Scene 2:Road in front of Swara’s house

She has switched on the lights and is waiting for them,she hears the bell of their cycles,she quickly goes near the window,she sees Sanskar,he waves at her,Laksh has bent down and checking the wheel and doesn’t see Swara,it is 12,Swara and Sanskar smiles and says Happy new year (through lip movement),just then Laksh gets up,Swara wishes him as well,she opens the window and throws three roses to outside the compound,she somehow manages to throw it near them,they runs and picks it and sees each of their names written on the paper chits attached to it,she signs them to give one to Ragini,they nods,they leave from there pushing their cycle,Sanskar after a minute looks back and sees Swara at the window looking at them,he signs her to go,she smiles and pushes the curtain to position,she goes and sits on the bed and smiles……..

Scene 3:Sanlak at Ragini’s house to wish her

They hint using cycle bell,suddenly,they see somebody walking to the door,Arnab(Ragini’s father) opens the door and comes to the gate,Laksh and Sanskar gives a naughty smile and says, “Happy new year,uncle”,her father says, “me and Pooja knew you two would come this year also,so we were watching a movie and waiting,well,Ragi doesn’t know that we are awake,she should be waiting at her room window,he takes them inside and makes them sit in the hall,Pooja(Ragini’s mom) comes and Arnab goes to call Ragini,he knocks and she opens,he asks her to come down,she says, ‘’but why Papa ,let me sleep”,her father replies , “the two for whom you were waiting at the window has been arrested”,Ragini says, “Oh,where are they,she comes down and doesn’t see them,suddenly Sanky and Lucky who were hiding comes out and says, “bow”,Ragini gets shocked and says, “what a first wish,bow,it seems”,she then goes to hit them,Pooja brings a cake,Arnab says, “let the youth army cut it’’,Sanlakrag together cuts the cake,they first feeds Pooja and Arnab and wishes them Happy new year,Arnab and Pooja wishes them and says “may your friendship remain like this always”,Arnab asks them if he should leave them,they tell that they have to roam around and enjoy as today is the only day during a year where there is no time restriction to enter home,they go from there………

Scene 4:Next day,January 1st

Assembly is over,class teacher walks in,children wishes her happy new year and then teacher tells them it is time to exchange new year friend gifts,she tells them though some naughty ones would have found out who got their names many would be still clueless,she tells them that she just hope they enjoyed writing letters with hints to their new year friends,first roll number is called,that boy gives gift to his friend and it progresses like a chain,Swara’s turn comes,she goes to Sanskar’s bench and gives the gift to Sanskar,he is surprised,she smiles and says, “Happy new year ,friend”,he smiles and is in still in surprise.

Scene 5:Interval time

Swara and Sanskar are walking through the corridor,he tells her, “you,Swara,you didn’t give me any hint,not even a letter”,he smiles saying the word letter,Swara says, “I stopped letter writing,I wont write to anyone,last episode of writing letters is still there in my mind”.Sanskar bursts into laughter hearing that,he tells that , “I wonder how that fight ended up like this”,Swara tells Sanskar to open the gift after reaching home only,he agrees,he smiles and says, “I was your enemy a few months back and look now you got my name,so funny,na?She says, “but you are not my enemy now,so”Ragini comes running to them,she hugs Swara and wishes her happy new year,she asked Sanskar if he was surprised to see that Swara had got his name,Sanskar tells her, “so u also knew,what about Lucky?”,Ragini tells, “We didn’t tell him,he cant be trusted in these kind of things,u both always pull our legs ,na,so we don’t trust you”,interval time is over,they go back to their classes……

(Thank you guys for your support,I thought only a few like my way of writing and that is why I wrote like that yesterday,also I felt bored,but now,planning to continue…)

Credit to: Vini(Veena)


    • Vini

      Thanks yr,yea,I think yesterday also u had told to make it long but scenes will end abruptly dear as I haven’t planned much.Pls keep reading.

  1. Ur Rocking vini…. so ur doubts have been cleared by us…so continue ur fantabulous story… and today ws awesome… i wil be laughing always while reading ur ff… i love it to core .. keep writing…

    • Vini

      Thank u Navi, before also u had mentioned about smile ,I guess,glad that it made u smile,yea,doubts cleared,feeling responsible now, haha.

  2. joya

    rocking today………………………..
    i like d way of new year celebration………
    actually in our today’s lifestyle we wish any festival to our frnds and family by using sms……
    it’s very gooooooooooooooodddddd…………..

    • Vini

      Thank u Joya, yea,true,SMS,fb n Whatsapp,maximum ,a card.Now it has reached that point,I hail from Fort Kochi and there this Xmas -New year season,can’t describe,celebrations at its peak,so I thought about all that and included a small new year scene…

  3. Niti

    awww..very cute epi..all the swasanraglak moments were too good n sweet also..plz don’t think to stop the ff..we r pretty much involved in ur ff..so we won’t like if u stop this..its not at all boring..i feel refresh after reading ur ff..

    • Vini

      Thank u Niti for the good words,plan was to stop in a few episodes,now decided to go along with the flow,m glad to know that you are liking it…Once the characters reach adulthood same love track ,ah,let’s see.

    • Vini

      Thank u dear and hope u r happy now ,regards to ur loved ones,plan was to stop in a few episodes,now no plans like that,we’ll go along with the flow.

    • Vini

      Thank u dr,Mukesh is Swara’s step dad in this story,he hasn’t accepted him ,their scenes a few will be there in future..

  4. Sissy pls!!!now only read 13 & 14 !! Pls go with ur flow!!!its awesome actually we al should thankful to you for continuing ur writing!!!! Still ur season 1 part remembrance running in my mind!!!!! Ur friendship story ??!!!

  5. Appu

    Ya di vacation started.now im free.i had been reading ur ff daily but couldnt comment.evry time after reading ur ff automatically a smile comes to my face .just cherishing old memories .thank u di thanks a lot

    • Vini

      thank u Appu,once characters becomes adults it will be intense I think as per the one line in my mind,enjoy ur vaction dear and to the comment below I will reply under it ok

  6. Yeah di…fnlĺlllyyy i m soooo happppyyyyyy???

    N sry di xuley mera phle jo fb accnt tha wo bndh ho gaya so dat’s y me saba di ki waha nhi hu …

    N waise me eki nayi accnt khlgi 25th decmbr..it’s a vry spcl day 4me…n if u dnt mnd cn u plz tll me ur fb nme??
    Agr aap nhi btaoge dn it’s ok….?

  7. Shagun

    Dont dare to end this ff so soon
    its my favourite ff
    plz update nxt part soon and its becoming more interesting. …

    • Vini Ross

      Thank u Shgun,I dont know if it will be interesting once the characters grows up but for you guys,shall try to put the one line in my mind to paper

  8. Shraddha

    I’m so sorry I read ur ff now ? finally today my exams got over n 1st thing I did after coming home was search for ur ff n read it asap? well I’ll comment previous ff ka bhi yahi pe 1st of all plz stop underestimating ur talent??? ur great n dats why ppl crave to read ur ffs so next time u feel low just read all comments now coming to episode 13 oh wow I just love it the way u shape up each m every character so beautifully but the best of the best is the transition u bring in the characters like we don’t even realize how they changed in due course that’s how smooth u bring in changes as usual it was great now

    • Vini Ross

      I had noticed your absence and thought u wud be having xams,hope twas all good,I didnt fee low dear but felt bored but after reading all your comments tryg to continue,and ya,your analysis,thank u dear,short reply cos m on my vacation ,busy dear

  9. Shraddha

    Now coming to episode 14 sanky n lucky are so cute how sweet to go n wish them ? it made me remember we used to do conference calls since couldn’t go out n the way swara threw roses such sweet gesture n I loved rags dad wen he said the one ur waiting are arrested lol???wat a first wish bow ? ROFL ssly that moment is damn cute? n den swara gifting sanskaar n their friendship see this is wat I meant its actually just 2 episode prior that they became frnds now it’s Seems like they ve been bff since ages thts what I meant by the transition ur last ff I was mesmarised by the way u portrayed ur point of view abt love but I must say I’m loving this friendship pe ff more than the previous one because I some how can connect to each n eevery scene u present with my past memories frnds school teachers innonce kya din the n I feel happy that u present with such minute detailing with such elaboration

    • Vini Ross

      My dear,thank u for observing and mentioning everything and also for loving this ff,once our characters becomes adults it is not going to be interesting,I feel so,but shall continue for you all…and dear,sorry for the short reply but I read every word of all your comments…

      • Shraddha

        No I guess teenage n adulthood ka apna apna he maza hai I don’t think it might be boring so go for it with full confidence

  10. revathy

    Nice episode…ur way of thinking n writing is completely different n its sooo cute….eagerly waiting for the nxt epi.

  11. Vinita

    Hi di!!!!!! I simply love the way you describe all the scenes. I have no words to express. I am totally clueless what to write!!!!!!!! Are going to Kochi???? I heard that Christmas ? celebrations in Kochi is done with great pomp and show. Today in our class we got our Christmas ? gift ?. We got Christmas home made ? sweets, cards ? and key rings . Our teacher baked a cake ? and we all cut it together. Today I really enjoyed alot.

    • Vini Ross

      Thank u dear,yes dear,Kochi is a feeling for kochites and christmas new year season at Fort Kochi is like a month long festival and I hope u enjoyed a lot,oh so u got gift,at school and college,one excitement was definitely this xmas friend,yea at college I got the same friend three times,and ur teacher baked for u all,how sweet,wen u guys share your happiness like this ,I seriously think about starting a closed fb group where we can connect with each other,but many wont be comfortable as they dont know each other,but Saba has started a group fiction lover and I think many reader friends are there in it.

  12. sethooty

    Wow Vini..reached kochi? Fort kochi lu new year Xmas celebration adipoli allae…..advance Happy Xmas Dr.. Actually today is my Xmas celebration at office..

    • Vini Ross

      No dear,at Chalakkudy,sis in law’s place,to my house on 26th,yes dear, Fort Kochiyil athoru valiya aagoshanu,thank u for the wish ,wish u d same dear,office aagosham podi podichu kaanum ennu vijarikkunnu

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