Swasan – I dreamed a dream – “spoiler / promo” & need suggestion

Hey friends!!!!
Hope!!! You all are fit and fine. Thanks for your support. It’s the promo or spoiler for my fiction Swasan – I dreamed a Dream. I will update on this week end. I have an exam on New Year eve. It makes me to feel pity on myself. Hope, you will understand my situation. Go ahead…

‘sanskar!! You are going to know about the secret of my heart’, swara says while blushing, looking at his picture then sees the full moon and smiles.

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‘yes manisha, I love her so much’, says sankar while looking at the full moon. ‘I knew it, sanky. I am happy for you both’, says manisha, holding his hand while a thin layer of tear forms in her eyes.

Ishq hua plays in the back ground.

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‘what? Love? How could you think like that, mani? I just want him to fall for me and I know that I am near to my victory’, says swara while seeing sanskar’s reflection on the mirror without anyone’s notice.

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‘shona, don’t ever think that I will believe your bullshit. I won’t leave you and it will never happen’, says sankar holding swara closer by twisting her wrist at the back. Swara has tears.

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‘I hate you, sanskar!!! Why did you make fall in love with you? Why did you come into my life?’, shouts swara while throwing the things around the room.

‘shona, open the door. please’, says sankar while banging the door.

Hamari adhuri kahani plays in the back ground.

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How is it, friends? Give me your feedback. Waiting!!!!

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Now, it’s about my second fiction ‘swaragini – second love’. I will continue this fiction in two weeks.

Link: http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-second-love-episode-1/

I need suggestions.

1. Whether I pair ragini and laksh with some other characters or pair them itself?

2. Give me your view or ideas. If I can, I will use them.

Please comment. I will choose by your comments only. Thank you and love you all.

Credit to: Sindhuja

24 comments

  1. Arati

    After a long time, u continue with the same, don’t add extra characters, it doesn’t need, it spoil and confuse everything to imagine.

  2. aashi

    Yeh raglak is perfect …n can u write a ff for ragsan as some people are demanding for it and criticizing other ff of swasan,swalak,raglak.. ..its a request

  3. sumi

    ohh my god, so twists r on their way in ur ff…. I really like the suspenses.. so swara intentionally came close to sanskaar for her purpose (might be so revenges) liked this… ahh in favour of ur nxt ff I want raglak not to be paired wid eachother…. I am swalak fan.. though I enjy swasan too.. but I cannt nvr imagine raglak.. when I hear abt raglak then it easily gets on my nerves… sry if I hurted u…..
    and bst of luck for ur exam dear….

  4. bhagi

    no no no plz dnt do this swasan ko alag math karna bahuth sari ff’s hai revenge based ur ff is really different from starting so plz keep that uniqueness please yar

  5. Niti

    yar sindhuja..dear plz plz don’t separate swasan…:'(:'(:'(
    u know wt u hv shown both the characters very beautiful and good..i love the way they become friends..sanky’s carring for shona..their moments together…plz plz plz dear don’t separate them..i don’t feel that twist can be done only by separation or revenge n all…yar twist can be done by making them trust each other and fighting with their problem together..becoming strength of eachother ..plz think something different..plz dear..
    n ya make it raglak only..

  6. zella

    Ur promo was awesome. Please don’t separate swasan. They r made for each other. Pair ragini and laksh please

  7. Nidhi

    Where are you dear ?? Its more tban 1 week..why are you nor posting next part of i dreamed a dream. Pls upload nxt..

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