swasan… dont hate me chap 28

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Recap
One year leap..

Chap
It was morning.. but a different one for maheshwari family… It was the naming ceremony of the grand daughter of house….
Ragini was making her sweet daughter ready for the function..
Ragini: my child.. Ur name will be decided today i know.. I wish ur bade papa could also see this moment…
Laksh saw her tearing up
Laksh: acha ragini.. U too will cry…no ragu…plz..you are my strength.. If you cry how will i…
Ragini hugged him..She was sobbing..
Ragini: till when i will hide my pain…sanskar bhai was like my elder brother.. He always protected me… Always took care of me like his younger sister… Seeing him in this condition has now become unbearable for me…and look at swara too…how pale she has become… How much she is hiding in her smile..

Ragini broke down in his arms.. Laksh too hugged hher.. Sanskar was the life line of the house… In his absence everyone was lifeless…

Swara was sitting near sanskar.. She was smiling faintly at him..
Swara: another morning without your voice… You Are Very bad…if you wanted to do this what was the need of making You my habit haa…
Tears streamed down her eyes.. She kissed his hand…

@ hall
Raglak were sitting near panditji holding baby in their lap…
Panditji: call elder brother of laksh… Acc to ritual its his duty to keep the name…
Raglak looked at each other…
Laksh: he can’t come panditji… He is busy in some imp work…

Panditji: ok…then call masi of baby…
Swara: ji..
Panditji: u ve to give name to baby…
Swara looked smilingly at the baby..She looked at ragini.. Then laksh..
Swara: she is the remembrance of true love… So i will call her SMRITI…
Everyone was happy… Swara hugged the baby..

@ night..
Dp was sitting near sanskar.. How painful is this to see his young son lying in such a helpless way..
Dp: beta…plz wake up… Comeon… Ur father has now become old… Come and take the responsibility…

Suddenly sanskar gripped his hand… Dp was shocked
Dp: sanskar..
The cardiogram showed his pulse increasing… Sanskar started to breathe heavily…
Dp shouted
Dp: AP JI…LAKSH… COME FAST…
Everyone rushed to his room…
Laksh: bhai…
Ragini: i am calling ambulance..

Swara too came rushing ti his room..seeing her love in such terrible condition her heart started to beat faster…
Ap: sanskar beta…no…nothing will happen…
Ap broke down near him…

@ hospital
Sanskar was admitted in icu..swara was watching him through a small window… Doctors were giving him shock… Various needles were pricked in various parts of his body…Doctor finally took an injection with a long syringe and pushed it with full force in his chest… Sanskar moved a bit…swara closed her eyes and let tears made their way..
Door opened… Doctor came with a sad face…
Doctor: m sry…mr maheshwari is very weak to handle the cardiac arrest… I am afraid to say that there are no chance of his survival now… He could make upto only one more hour…

Swara fell on the floor with a thud…laksh held his head and tried to close his eyes…
Swara: NO…NO… DON’T DO THIS GOD…TAKE MY LIFE… But plz….
She ran from there… She kept on running aimlessly on road…she finally went near a cliff…
Swara: GOD…YOU WANT A LIFE NAH…SEE…I AM READY TO GIVE UP MY LIFE… PLZ TAKE ME BUT PLZ RETURN HIM BACK…
Swara was about to jump when someone held her hand…swara turned and was not able to believe her eyes… Sanskar… Her sanskar was standing in front of her…
Swara: sanskar…

Sanskar smiled and kissed her forehead…
Sanskar: swara.. I ve to go…be happy always…
Swara: no..my happiness is in you…
Sanskar: plz swara.. Its important…
Swara: no..i will not hear you…
Sanskar smiled and held her hand..
Sanskar: swara..take care of my family… N get married to a good guy…
Swara was crying now… She sat on the ground and held his legs…
Swara: no…don’t go..don’t…
Her pain..her agony was flowing down with tears…
Sanskar: swara.. Don’t make me weak…plz promise me you will get married to a good person…
Swara: m already married to you…
Sanskar looked at her…swara stood up and hugged him…

Swara: i ve not given you permission to leave me…
Sanskar smiled..
Sanskar: you are very stubborn na…
Swara: let it be…but if you love me truly you will not leave me…
Sanskar tucked a flick of hair behind her ears…
Sanskar: i love you always…
And he vanished… Swara fell down unconscious near the cliff…

@ hospital
Sanskar was breathing very heavily… Laksh was staring at him teAry eyed… He was remembering all their moments…
Laksh: never ever in my life i thought i will see you in this condition…
ruth kar humse kabhi
jab chale jaoge tum..
laksh wiped his tears
ye na socha tha kabhi
itne yad aaoge tum…

minutes were passing…doctor has said for an hour…half an hour past…

laksh was remembering a flashback of his and sanskar…
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sanskar was trying to teach him how to ride bicycle…
laksh: bhai.. plz not leave me haa…
sanskar: never lucky..
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laksh smiled at the memory
mai toh na chala tha
do kadam bhi tum bin…
he looked at two brothers playing nearby
fir bhi mera bachpan
yahi smjha har din…

chord ke mujhe bhala
ab kaha jaoge tum
ye na socha tha kabhi
itne yad aaoge tum….

Doctor came out..
Doctor: his body has stopped responding to treatment…
Laksh sat on bench.. Ragini hugged him…
Laksh: ragu…ask him to come back otherwise i will not talk to him…
Tears were rolling down his eyes
DEKHO MERE AANSU
YAHI KARTE HAIN PUKAR…

AAO CHLE AAO…
MERE BHAI MERE YAR

Laksh: sanskar is my elder bro..how can he leave us on tears…

PONCHNE AANSU MERE
KYA NAHI AAOGE TUM
YEH NAH SOCHA THA KABHI
ITNE YAD AAOGE TUM..

@ cliff..
Swara woke up…she saw herself lying on the ground…
Swara: i will not let you go so easily mr maheshwari…

She ran towards hospital…

@ hospital
Nurse came out of ward…Doctor went inside in a hurry… Ap stood up and saw sanskar breathing very heavily… Fear was engulfing her heart…Doctor were injecting many injections to his body and all the pain was felt by ap…Tears were rolling down her eyes… Suddenly someone tapped her shoulders.. Ap looked behind and saw swara standing there..
Swara: he will not leave us…
Ap: beta…
Swara was standing firm…
Swara: i know he will fight with death…for his family…
Ap hugged her…swara looked at sanskar from the window… He was still fighting with death…
Doctor came out
Doctor: see..we are doing all the effort.. But… Plz pray to god…
Suddenly they heard a noise from behind.. Everyone turned and were shocked to see the scenario… A young man was being brought on stretcher. His head was bleeding… This will be common for hospital but the person who brought him to hospital was the biggest shock…RAJ MALIK…
Laksh felt an immense urge to kill him at the moment but anyhow he composed himself… Swara tightened her brows seeing the destroyer of her life…
The boy who has been hurt was admitted and raj sat on the floor there…he was crying… Swara did not feel any pity seeing him
Doctor came out from the boy’s ward…

Doctor: sir… Ur son is in grave danger…we need blood for his operation
Raj: take all the blood from my body but save him…
Doctor: sir..plz have patience… His blood grp is o negative which is quite rare…
Raj: take as much money as u want but save him
Doctor: sir it is not in blood bank..u just try to find out a donor..
Doctor went from there….Maheshwari family was watching this scenario…
Ap: god does justice…
Dp: let him be in his state…he even doesn’t need our hatred…
They turned and found swara missing…
Ragini: where does she go..
Swara went to reception…
Swara: mam..tgere is a patient who needs blood o negative… I am the donor…

After 1 hour..
Doctor came out of sanskar’s room
Doctor: a good news…mr sanskar has started to respond our treatment.. chances have been increased..

A ray of light in a cloudy night was this news..ap thanked god… Dp side hugged her..
On the other side…Doctor came to raj malik
Doctor: congratulations sir… Operation successful… Ur son has been saved…
Raj: doctor… Ask me the whole world and i will bring it to your feet…
Doctor: don’t thank me…thank to the girl who donated blood at the right time…
Raj: where is she…

Doctor: she is in this hospital only…she is very unlucky… Her husband is in coma since last one year…
Raj: take me to her…

Outside sanskar’s ward
Swara was sitting near ap
Swara: ma…just one more bite..ok..
Ap: beta…
Swara: no beta beta..see…very soon sanskar wiil waje up…when he will get to know i didn’t take care of u…he will scold me…
Ap hugged her…
Ragini was forcing laksh to drink juice..
Ragini: laksh… See…sanskar bhai gonna wake up soon..but till then you ve to take care of family na…
Laksh smiled through tears and turned to hug her…but his smile faded when he saw the face of raj malik… Ragini too turned and saw the killer of her father standing in front of her eyes…
Doctor: mr. Malik…meet the family of the girl who saved your son…
A feeling of fear mixed with guilt…whereas raglak looked at the doctor with a shock…

Precap
Sanskar woke up from coma… Happy moments…

Credit to: soumya

21 comments

  1. Swasan

    Awesome……wow swara help raj son….god have bless her to give sanskar life..such a nice moral

  2. silence

    I would just say thank u Somya for such a beautiful story…thank u so much for making sanskar fine……as I was reading the episode….I was afraid if u were planning to give the saddest ending ever…. But thankfully….u didn’t….instead u rocked the episode at the end….actually I hate sad endings….thank u once again

  3. Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    u really scared me!!!!!!
    huss !!!!!! …….. finally happy moments gonna come……. 🙂 🙂

    plzzzzz post asap……….

  4. G.S

    Seriously…u r too good emotional writer…each episode make me cryy…superb..awesome continue soon….

  5. mana

    U r so bad yarrr..from last 5 episodes,u r making me cry….?just kidding.. Hahaha..?bt seriously I must say u r very good writer …&I know in next episode u will make me cry with tears of happiness
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  6. sneha

    U know what.. i didnt read the chappy… coz i was not able to read as my vision is blurred now due to crying…
    Kya yr hr epi mn rula dia…bt thnk god happy momentzz now…
    U r toooo good saumya…

  7. Prakriti

    Di…Swara is very kind…The person who is responsible for all the this…She is saving his only….
    And Di My real name Smriti……
    My name is SMRITI VERMA…
    Love u so much Di…

  8. shona

    di….I was a silent reader of ur ff…..after reading it I couldn’t stp commenting….ur an excellent writer…..awsm stry line…..lov it……

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