swasan… dont hate me chap 27

Hello frnds… This is my last chappy…. After this i will post on Sunday..and that may be the end of my ff… Don’t worry i will come up with another ff…its name will be swasan- don’t hate me season 2 …. It will be a love story of a princess swara and a righteous king sanskar… Yes the story will take you to era of kings and queens…a beautiful love story…please support me for that…now no bak bak

Recap
Sanskar slipped in coma

Chap
Laksh was crying like a baby hugging ragini… Broken by the death of her father Rag too was unable to console him..instead she too cried..
Laksh: ragu ….plZ… Plz tell him to come back…plz…
Each and every moment of sanskar with him was flashing in front of his eyes… How they used to tease ma n papa…how he used to beat him…
Ragini too was feeling broken… Sanskar was more of a kind of bro to her… He always favoured her… Always loved her like his little sister…
Suddenly someone pat on her shoulders.. She turned and saw ap standing…
Ap: plz don’t utter something wrong…
An unknown fear was clearly visible in her eyes…
Ap: say something ragini… Where is sanskar… Hwz my son…

Laksh looked at ap… How can he tell about his brother’s state to his mother… Words were not coming out of his mouth… Tears took the place of words…
Dp: say something you both…
Unable to take anymore a father’s emotions flooded out.. For the first time in life laksh had seen his father crying…
Ap: ragini… Beta…u tell me..plz…
Ragini had tears in her eyes… With great difficulty words came out of her mouth…
Ragini: ma…sanskar… Sanskar bhai has slipped in coma…
Ap held her chest….
Dp: ap ji…are…Doctor…..

After 15 mins
Doctor came out of ap’s ward..
Doctor: no need to worry… It was due to the shock…
Ragini looked at laksh… His eyes were bloodshot due to continue crying..
Ragini: laksh… Plz eat something…
Laksh: i just don’t wanr to have anything… I was not able-bodied to save my brother…
Ragini: laksh… See…sanskar bhai will surely come back…but till his return who will take care of ma n papa haa…
Laksh looked at her
Ragini: plz laksh… You ve to take care of urself… Not for anyone but ur bro…plz laksh…
Laksh gets into thinking… Ragini gives him juice…he drinks it in one gulp…he looked at her..
Laksh: ragu…how will swara react…
This question made ragini weak on her knees…sanskar was swara’s world… She laughed because of him…she believed on herself because of him…how will she be able to face this condition… How will she accept this bitter truth…

@ swara’s room
Swara opened her eyes.. Pain was unbearable for her… She saw nurse standing there…
Swara: sis…sister… Can you call my didi…
Nurse nodded…
After sometimes Ragini was standing outside swara’s ward…he tried to wipe her tears completely before entering her sister’s ward…what will she reply her when she will ask about her fiance… How can she tell her that her sacrifice became useless… Her sanskar is lying on bed just as a body…She entered the room…
Swara: didi.. Hwz sanskar..

Ragini managed to have a fake smile
Ragini: he is sleeping..
Swara: finally… He is fine…thank god…
Ragini tried hard to hide her tears…
Swara: didi… What are you trying to hide…
Ragini: me…no…nothing… You take rest…
Swara: didi… My heart is sinking… Plz tell me the truth… Where is my sanskar… Mere sanskar kaha hain…woh theek toh hain na….
Ragini felt her heart melting inside her… She was unable to hide the truth anymore… Her eyes brimmed up…
Ragini: swara… Sanskar… Sanskar bhai has been slipped in coma…
Swara got up om her bed without caring about her injuries
Swara: no…
Ragini hugged her..but seeing her not replying she looked at swara who fell unconscious in her arms…swara’s pain was unimaginable… She got happiness after lot of struggles but god also snatched that happiness

AFTER 1 YEAR
In kolkata
Ragini was standing in front of her father’s portrait…
Ragini: papa..today 1 year has been completed since you left your daughter.. Everything has been changed.. ap ma cries whenever she hears sanskar’s name.. Laksh too is not the same chirpy guy as he used to be… He has become quite matured.. He loves me a lot you know but i can see him in pain…yes pain has changed him to a very matured man.. Sanskar bhai is not showing any progress in his condition.. But our swara…she has not lost hopes… And ha papa…u know… U ve become nanu…yes i ve been blessed with a baby girl…she is really sweet…timmorrow is her naming ceremony.. I wish she could play in your lap…

@ sanskar’s room
Sanskar was lying on bed in coma… Some needles were pricked in his arms… A cardiogram to monitor his heart beat.. An oxygen mask to support his breathe.. And our swara sitting near him holding his hand..
Swara: good morning Sanskar…
She kissed his forehead..
Swara: sanskar… Plz..how much do you want to tease me..haa…now wake up kumbhkaran…
Her eyes teared up..
Swara: sanskar.. Plz… Try to wake up fast… Your swara is waiting for you…i want to get married to you…plz wake up..
Swara tried to go but suddenly she felt a tug on her hand…she turned and saw sanskar tightly gripping her hand…

Swara: sanskar… Haa…DIDIIIIII…AUNTYYYYY….SEEE….
Ap and ragini came in room…
Swara: didi… See sanskar is holding my hands….
Ap felt as someone lighted a candle in darkness..
Ragini: i am calling doctor…
Ap sits near sanskar and pat swara’s hair…
Swara : aunty…i told you na…see… Sanskar will wake up…
Ap nodded and smiled through her tears…

Doctor was checking sanskar.. Swara was praying to get a good news…
Doctor: seriously… Mr maheshwari is improving now.. If this improvement will be continued we will get good results within 2 -3 years..
Swara was beyond happy.. Ap thanked god..
Ragini: thanku so much doctor..

@ night
Laksh came and sat besides sanskar.. He caresses his hair and smiled
Laksh: bhai.. You wiill be alryt na…plz wake up fast..family is waiting for you..
Tears came down from his eyes…
Laksh: bhai… You ve become bade papa… Tomorrow is her naming ceremony… I wish she could be able to see how much her bade papa loves her.
Suddenly swara came from behind..
Swara: she will play in her bade papa’s lap…don’t worry jiju…
Laksh looked smilingly at swara..
Laksh: its because of you swara bhai has improved…
Swara: its because of me your bro is in such condition…
Laksh held her hand..

Laksh: don’t u ever say this thing again… You gave your everything for saving bhai… Plz don’t be sorry…
Suddenly they heard a noise downstairs… A woman of about 60 years was standing on the door…
Woman: dp… Why did you not tell my sanskar is in this condition… I am his dadi…
Dp: m sry ma…i just didn’t want to give you any kind of tension…
Dadi broke down on the couch…
Dadi: my pota..my sanskar.. Where is he..
Dp: aaiye…
Dp took her to sanskar’s room… Dadi saw laksh sitting near sanskar… Swara was holding sanskar’s hands…

Dadi: mera pota…my son…how….
She went and hugged him…she started to cry
Dadi: oh god plz…don’t give him pain…plz take my life…plz..but don’t give him pain…
Laksh: dadi…aap…
Dadi: u too don’t talk to me…how dare you ha…u just didn’t inform me about your brother’s condition…. And where are those people who did this… Where are those people who madw my sanskar so helpless…
Laksh: one is died and other is rotting in jail…
Dadi: and where is that girl because of whom they did this to my son..
Dp: ma..she was not at fault…
Dadi: dp…don’t you..first you fixed his marriage with charecterless girl then because of her my sanskar is in such condition… Where is she…
Swara was listening everything silently…
Dadi: just kill her… Just give her the same pain my sanskar went through…
Tears were rolling down swara’s eyes…
Dadi: where is that girl…
Swara kneeled down in front of her..
Swara: m ur criminal…
Dadi looked at her furiously… She slapped her hard…
Laksh: dadi….
Dadi: noone will cone in between me and her today… Otherwise i am noone to you all…
She again slapped swara… Swara fell on floor…
Dadi: you charecterless shameless creature…still you are daring to stay here…go and die…because of u my sanskar…. Ur would be husband is in such condition…
Tears were not enough to express swara’s pain…
Dp: ma…plz…not even a word against swara…she is not at fault…
Dadi: acha… You too….swara u witch…chudail kahi ki…what black magic did you do on my family haa….
Dadi pushed swara on floor… Swara was silent today…
Dadi: don’t you have shame…and before marriage in name of what relationship you are living here….

Suddenly a voice echoed RELATIONSHIP OF A WIFE OF SANSKAR
Everyone turned… Ap was standing there…
Ap: maji… You are our respected elder…but here u are at fault… I will not let you insult my daughter in law anymore…

Dadi: acha…if she loves sanskar this much then proof it…
Swara spoke now when point came on her love…she ran from there..
Dadi: see…when point came for proving her love she ran away…see
Suddenly they saw swara standing on the door…she had sindoor in her hand…
Ap: beta…
Swara: dadi ma…my love is true… I can give my life to sanskar… And today i vwill prove this…

She went near sanskar… She held his hand
And made a pinch..she dipped his finger in sindoor and was about to fill that im her hair…
Ap: beta no…
She came near her…
Ap: beta don’t take any decision in haste..beta what if he never….
Swara: my love is not so weak…i will dedicate my life for him…and i p you all that i will bring him back…and i will remain as his wife forever…
With tears in her eyes swara filled her hair with sindoor from sanskar’s hand… Tears escaped from her eyes… She closed her eyes… Never in her thoughts she thought this moment will happen in this way…she opened her eyes… She looked at sanskar… And she broke down In ap’s lap…
Swara: aunty…plz ask him to wake up and see…. I am his wife now…. Plz ask him to see me…ask him to give me wifey rights…

Everyone present there were teary eyed… Swara’s sobs were echoing in the mension… Sindoor in her hair said she is married but her eyes said she is not happy…

Everyone was in there respective room…swara was sitting near sanskar… She caressed his hair…
Swara: sanskar see…you will be very happy today na…i am your wife na…so see officially today is our wedding night…who sleep on wedding night…plz wake up na…
Tears were rolling down her eyes..

YE DIL TANHA KYU RAHE
KYU HUM TUKDO MEE JIYE..

Tears were falling continuously on sanskar’s hand…

KYU ROOH MERI YEH SAHE…

Swara kissed his handss.. She kept her head over the bed and sat on the floor… She closed her eyes…

MAI ADHURA JEE RAHA HU
HARDUM YEH KEH RAHA HU
MUJHE TERI ZARURAT HAI
MIJHE TERI ZARURAT HAI..

Memories were flashing in front of swara.. Their nok jhonk…their fights…their confession..

ANDHERO SE THA MERA RISHTA BADA
TUNE HI UJALO SE WAKIF KIA…

She looked at the photographs of raglak marriage… She closed and again went to sanskar
AB LOUTA MAI HU IN ANDHERA ME FIR
TOH PAYA HAI KHUDKO BEGANA YAHA…

Swara looked at moon and then sanskar…
TANHAI BHI MUJHSE KHAFA HO GYI
BANJARO NE BHI THUKRA DIYA…

MAI ADHURA JEE RAHA HU
HARDUM YE KEH RAHA HU
MUJHE TERI ZARURAT HAI
MUJGE TERI ZARURAT HAI..

Swara dozed off near sanskar…

Precap
Sanskar breathing heavily… Rushed to hospital.. Critical condition…

So frnds… Hope so you all were not crying while reading this…

Credit to: soumya

14 comments

  1. Seeba

    Diff story.. Well executed… Everything is perfect..I just loved it…keep rocking
    .stay blessed….

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