swasan… dont hate me chap 17

Hello frnds…. Sry jwala..i had seen ur comment after writing my chap 16 ….ya dont worry… Sanskar is going to feel jealous by a new entry…but i can’t decide his name…plz suggest a good name…Plz you all…

@ morning
As usual laksh was sleeping… Sanskar came out after taking bath…he saw laksh again smiling in sleep
Sanskar: lucky… Wake up….mom dad have come…
Laksh woke up with a jerk….
Sanskar laughed….
Laksh: kya sanskar bhai… First you told then that i ssang song for ragini in a party….now you are teasing me….chain se sone b nhi dete….bhai ho ya kasai….

Ragini came there…
Ragini: laksh… Jldi utho…mom dad has come
Laksh: see…now she has also come to tease me..
Ragini: really mom dad has come… N she is very angry…bol rhi h hmare khandan me aisa aaj tak kisi ne nhi kia
Laksh: what…really…. Bhai bacha lo…save me from them….
Suddenly he heard a voice ” acha…nobody can save you from your ma”
Laksh: bhai… What happened… My ears…see… Her fear has been struck in my mind so that i am able to hear her voice even when she is not here
Someone pinched him…
Laksh: aaaaaaaaa
He turns and sees ap standing
Laksh shivered and almost clings on sanskar…
Sanskar: laksh utar… U are so heavy mote…utar neeche
Laksh : bhaiya bacha lo….bacha lo…
Ap: ha q…u sang in front of all for my bahu….
Laksh: mom…woh toh bas… Aise hi…meri koi glti nhi…
Ap pulls his ear…
Ap: acha…aaj tak apni ma ko toh ek gift nhi dia…haaa….at least my bahu is good… Otherwise i will die wuth these two monkey
Sanskar: mom..why i am a monkey….
Ap: because i said….now get ready… We will have to go to shopping today and tomorrow we have to leave for kolkata

Sanlak: ok madame….
Ap: acha.. Sanskar u too…ruko..btati hu tujhe
Laksh: mom…call swara…dekhna kaise bhagte hai bhai
Hearing swara’s name a curve appears on his face…
Ap: ohhhhh…( signs laksh)….why swara…what will that cat do…
Sanskar gets irritated
Sanskar: mom…she is not a cat ok
Ap: acha…u feel bad when i call her cat
Laksh: cheating bhai…when mom called me monkey you were laughing and now when she called swara cat you are angry…

Sanskar blushed and moves out of the room… Inside ap and laksh gave a hi fi

Suddenly sswara’s screams were echoed in the house…
Sanskar: swara….what happened…
They all went to swara’s room…she was standing on the bed…
Sanskar: swara bed is not a place to jump from and do suicide
Swara threw a pillow on him
Sanskar: acha…throw and catch khelna hai
Swara: aaaaa….can’t you ask simply what’s my problem
Sanskar: well problem ko kya problem ho skti hai….
Swara was about to throw a glass on him when he shouted
Sanskar : nooo…usse tez lag jayega… Stop..
Swara: aaaaahaaa…u are very bad…
Sanskar: acha tell me why are you standing on bed…
Swara signed on the floor…a cockroach was there…he was continuously staring at swara as if he is also wondering if she is mad…
Sanskar gulped seeing the cockroach.. He ran and at the next instant he was also standing on bed behind swara…
Swara: what happened
Sanskar: co..cick….cockroach
Swara: u r also afraid….
Sanskar nodded like a child…
Swara: dont worry haa…he will not be able to do anything to you when i am here…
Like heroes of bollywood, swara came in front of sanskar.. And sanskar too reacting like a girl hid behind her..
Swara: ooo…oo mr…. Mr cockroach… Leave from here…otherwise it will not be good….
Sanskar: yaa…otherwise my swara will kill u
Cockroach flew in the air and sat on sanskar….
Sanskar: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….help…swara bachao…
Swara: u…how dare you to touch him…
Suddenly cockroach flied and went out from window…
Sanskar was crying like a kid
Swara: are…plz don’t cry…see…he is gone now….

Sanskar: swara… Aaj agar tum nhi hoti…toh..woh….ahaaaahaaa…
Swara: are…why…why i would not be here haa….
Swara wipes his tears….she is about to go when sanskar held her hand
Sanskar: don’t go… What if he come back…
Suddenly they heard a laugh… They saw.. On the door raglak were sitting and laughing madly…
Sanskar: why you two are laughing…
Ragini: woh..we are not laughing…we were just busy watching your love story… Hero swara…heroine sanskar… And villain….. The greatest cockroach….
Laksh: bhai… He tried… He tried to rape you….haaa
Sanskar ran behind laksh…
Swara: didi…
Ragini: swara… You should go to industry yar..

@ evening
Sanlak were staring at their families while they were busy in shopping…
Sanskar: how much they will purchase…
Laksh: it seems that…pura banaras utha lenge…
Sanskar: aisa karte hai lets sleep…
Laksh: ya we should…

After 5 mins
AP: sanskar beta see…hwz this…
She looked at them…shopkeeper too looked at them…
Sanskar was sleeping sitting on the chair while laksh were busy watching girls….

Swara: ye toh so gye..aur jiju
Ragini: tumhare jiju….aaj mere hatho se gaye…
Swara giggled..
Laksh was not aware that sanskar has slept…so he keeps talking..
Laksh: bhai.. Sometimes i think that why am getting married… I mean i love ragu…but see those girls…i mean… How hot they are….
Ragini was standing just behind laksh… She tapped his shoulder… Laksh turned and his mouth opens
Laksh: ra…ragu u..
Ragini: yes me…
Laksh: tum kb ayi
Ragini: when you were busy in cancellation of our marriage…
Laksh: are…
Ragini goes from there….laksh sees sanskar still sleeping on the chair…
Laksh: sanskar bhai….
Sanskar wakes up

Sanskar: sone de na…
Laksh: u…u want to sleep and here…sanskar bhai ragini is cancelling the marriage…
Sanskar: toh…
Laksh: mere kasai bhai…if you will not help me in manaoing pataoing her….i will….mai aapki shadi se pehle hi divorce kara dunga…
Sanskar wakes up…
Sanskar: are nhi mera chotu bhai…mera motu bhai…plz…i will help you na…wait…just do what i say ok….

After sometimeS
Ragini was keeping begs in car while swara was helping her…
Ragini: baba ma and papa will come after sometimes… And those two monkeys… Better leave them here only…

Swaragini came back to home….but to their shock sanskar met them their…
Sanskar: ragini… Laksh…
Ragini: oh…plz bhai…stop your drama
Sanskar : no…its not a drama…laksh has met with an accident….
Ragini was shocked… Tears streamed down her eyes…
Ragini: where is he….
Sanskar : he is fine but still unconscious… He is inside…
Ragini ran as fast as she could…. She saw laksh sleeping on the bed…in order not to disturb his sleep…she went very quietly towards him….with a lot of care she took his hand and kissed his hand…
Laksh opened his eyes…
Laksh: aaahhh….mai kaha hu….
Ragini: laksh… U r fine….
Laksh: who are you…kon hai aap aunty…
Ragini: aunty….
Laksh: and what are you doing here….and how did i come here
Ragini: laksh… I am ragini… Ur ragini…
Laksh looks at him…
Suddenly they heard a crying voice… It was sanskar who was crying
Swara: stop crying.. Even beggers cry better than you…
Sanskar: my bro…..mera bhai
Laksh: who are you uncle…
Sanskar: haye ram…mera bhai…bhai…m ur bro…she is y

our soon to be wife….
Laksh : acha….but just 1 hour ago she said that she doesn’t want to marry me na
Ragini: are woh…i was angry at that time but………wait…..how did you know…
Sanskar gave a death glare to him
Sanskar: excited monkey…bhugat ab…i said na k keep calm…don’t be overexcited… Now bear…
Laksh gulped looking at ragini who was staring him like if she could she would have eaten him alive…
Laksh: are…ya…i am remembering something…. Ya…ragu…u..sanskar bhai you…
Ragini: abhi kaha… Let me do the whole treatment first…
Laksh: not my idea…it was sanskar bhai…
Ragini looked at sanskar who was trying to move slowly from the room..swara came im front of him
Swara: kahaa…where…u teased my didi na…
Sanskar: are toh….

Raglak start to chase whereas swasan tom n jerry fight begun….

Precap
New guy……jealous sanskar… Bad intention towards swara…

Credit to: soumya

21 comments

  1. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    hai.. hai.. new guy. hmm zain imam from tashan isq.. he will be good.. if you don’t like you can bring any other dear. . and don’t be sorry.. your work is amazing. . I love both swasan and raglak in your ff.. today’s episode was damn funny. keep the good work up dear.. waiting for next part

  2. Anu Ann

    Awesome dear.. Previous episodes u made us to cry.. BT while reading this part I’m laughing like a mad

  3. Prakriti

    Really di its aWesome…Keep writing Di…For name I suggest Aarav…I like laksh in your ff very much…He is too funny…
    Ok Bye Diii.
    Love U sooo much…

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