swasan – A complicated love story (50)

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Episode-50

After 1 month

Now everything was back to place,Swara’s health is improving day by day, Sometimes she is so stutborn but sanskar handel her so well..

Sujata is now close to their sons but not normal like before..she cares for them, Wait for them n prepare one time food for her sons n dil..

Sanlak were happy after gaining their mother’s love once again but still cant share everything with her like before..

Swara always take care of ragini’s baby n Ragini take care of swara like her baby..
Sujata is here for their sons.. So in short, everything is going smooth…

Today is the naming ceremony of raglak’s prince..
Hall is decorated perfectly…
Everything is set for the pooja..

Rp n adi with pari n their daughter are comming for the function.. whatever their relations are but still everybody cared for each other..
N today is the most wonderful day of raglak’s life.. as their prince is going to get the name..

Pooja rituals are going on Raglak are together performing the rituals

Rp is still upset with their sons but cares a lot about their both dil.. n pamper them a lot..
(remember swara dont know them being lucky’s family, as she is hidden from any such info.. which can effect her health)

Ragini is gradually becoming part of sarna family.. the love which she was craving from childhood, she is happy to get it now from rp n sujata..
(parent’s love as she was an orphan,… there is a story behind ragini also.. dont worry will reveal it soon.. hope u will like the new twist..)

But she is upset by cold behaviour of rp towards sanlak..

@Evening–
Time of naming ceremony..

Baby is in swara’s lap.. he is more connected with swara than ragini.. afterall she takes care of him a lot n raginii is happy with their bond after all swara is his massi.. maa jaisi..

Swara also remain normal when she is with him..
otherwise she start getting some emotional attacks..
but with prince.. her happiness has no bounds..

Pooja rituals are being performed n raglak are performing rituals..
(i dont know what exactly happens in this pooja)

They are doing what panditji is telling them..
At last pandit ji announced to name the baby in his ears 3 times n then announce his name in public.. for this ritual bua should name the baby..

lucky- but panditji.. baby’s bua (uttra) is not present here..
{swara was just known that his family is getting close to raglak n sanky n they consider themselves as part of family thats why they are saying ki baua is not present)

pandit ji- No issues.. Baby’s father’s sister or mother’s sister can name the baby..

swara became happy listening this as she considered herself as ragini’s sis..

swara- Sacchi.. means i can name my prince na..(excitedly)

rag- why not!! afterall u r his masssi.. u have the right..(happily)

sanskar interrupted in between..

sanky- its not fare.. i m also here.. afterall, i m his chacha.. i too have the right.. (making faces.. funny cute)

swara- hey sadu!! havn’t u listened what panditji told.. only bua or massi can name the baby.. (angry pout)

sanky- hey miss syappa..(interrupted in bw)

suajat- now just stop u both.. u just need a hint to fight, u can start anywhere anytime.. (fake anger)
i dont want any delay in my grandson’s naming..

Both looked at each other being angry indicating that they are resopnsible for this scolding from maa..

swara- but maa. seee na he only started first..

sanky- nhi maa.. m ..

sujata- i said shut u both ur mouth ..

sanky- (scarastically) no one loves me here.. i m not given any rights in this house.. all because of this syapp aqueen..

swara was passing him dearth glares..

sujata- (slight laugh) Accha accha.. now stop.. do one thing.. u have 5 min.. both mutually decide the name of the baby asap..
n swara will say the name in baby’s ears..

swara put the baby in craddle n both started thinking the names..

After telling so many names to each other.. they reached at conclusion n decided a perfect name for the baby n became happy..

Swara went near baby n said his name in his ears.. Baby smiled n giggled at his name..

swara became excited..

swara- (excited) see ragini.. he is smiling.. i think he liked the name.. aww my baby.. (slightly pecked baby’s forehead with love)

rag- Yr.. bas now tell us the name of our prince..

swara- are ha.. i to forgot..
to our prince is named as AADIT means PEAK..

Pandit ji- So its decided that name of the baby is AADIT… everyone is happy with the name..

Poors are given clothes n sweets..

pandit ji is given Dakshina..
……………………

Everyone settled in the hall n playing with the baby…

Suddenly swara was not feeling well but she dont wanna trouble anyone at this happy ocassion so she headed to her room..
but sanskara noticed her change in behaviour.. n he went behind her to check whether she is alright or not..

As she reached her room she stumbled n her head went heavy..
she was going to fall but at the nick of time sanskar saved her.. n took her to bed..

He gave her water n asked her abt her health..

sanky- i think u r not well.. i should call the doc.

swara- (comforting herself on bed) n.. no sanky.. i m fine,, its just a little headache.. nothing else.. i m fine..

sanky- vo to i can see.. how much u r fine..(said scarastically)

swara- (got angry at his taunt) i m telling u na.. i fine fine..

Sanky understood that she is not in his senses n he tried to calm her..

sanky- okk ok meri maa.. i understood..
aacha ye medicine to le lo..

Swara nooded.. n took her medicines n sanskar made her sleep n went back in hall..

ragini asked him through eyes where he went..
he nooded in nothing as he dont wanna panic them in this auspicious ocassion where his whole family is together after a long time..

Today rp is talking n laughing normally with lucky unaware of his act.. n lucky is soo happy with this..

Screen freeses on happy family… sanskar admiring them n swara’s sleeping face…
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Hello friends!! i know some ppl are not happy with raglak scenes..
but gys i m just going with the flow..
n i seriously have no words.. i dont know what should i say in this matter..
i know its ur choice to read or not.. i m no one to force anybody.. 🙁
Its just that i dont know what to do..
i will stop this ff right here.. with a single episode showing its happy ending ,if u want(but there is a huge story in my mind)

I m sorry for disappointing u.. (

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21 Comments
  1. Swarna01

    No no dnt end it. Bht kuch baki hai.

  2. Riyanjali

    AWESOME DEAR!!!!AND U WRITE HOWEVER U WANT I WILL SURELY READ IT:)

  3. Tamil

    Amazing loved it

  4. Rabia

    Awesomee one dearr and just post with a floww what ever your mind tell dont stress yourself ??

  5. are area abhi end mt karna. abhi to swasan ki love story re create karni baki hi h.
    dont get sad plz

  6. Simi

    Awesome dear..
    Plz dont end..

  7. Nice dear plz don’t end it u go with ur flow waiting for next part

  8. Mica

    well Mona….i know you didn’t force us to read your story dear, but by the title Swasan, of course we demand more Swasan scene on the story.. i think it’s common one
    as even in many ff with title SWARAGINI for example, we will demand to our favorite scenes more or at least to get equal importance.
    be frank, being readers of ffs, some or mostly of us read according to our favorite couple..
    because your ff HAS TITLE SWASAN… that’s why being Swasan fans, we read it..
    then we found out that you provide more other couple scenes than Swasan….
    or maybe you just put wrong title, you should put SWARAGINI instead SWASAN….
    maybe no one will complain…. 🙂 🙂

    1. Awesome

  9. Sus

    nyc

  10. Awesome dear….. Please don’t end it soon. U please follow ur style. And congratulations for the half century

  11. Soujanya

    Awesome

  12. Pls don’t end it…… Its awesome………. Want swara to know the truth……….

  13. Seebu_s

    Sorry dear if u feel disappointed but we r reading for story and swasan…so.we will expect swasan scenes..from many episodes there is no swasan proper scene..so.we r upset

  14. nice part dont end it go with flow… but ha want to tell yes i admit that im upset bcz i didnt find any swasan scenes its obvious that the title is on SWASAN but no swasan scenes as a reader we will get upset…
    update next part soon dont end

  15. Awesome dear….

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