swasan – A complicated love story (41)


lucky- bahi!!
adi- lucky!! you here!! .. (his eyes were filled with tears seeing him after 3 years)
lucky too was emotional..
lucky ran towards adi n was about to hug him … just then a voice interrupted..
rp- adi beta.. reports!!
lucky-(mummered) dad..
lucky turned towards him n tears rushed from his eyes seeing his dad in front of him.. (remembering the flashback)

lucky- dad dad dad.. (exiciting n entring from main gate, revolving him)
rp- are are bacche aaram se, ur dad is getting old.. show some mercy on this old man..
lucky- are dad.. dare not to say my dad an old man.. (fake angry)
suddenly both brust into laughter…

imagining his all funny n sweet moments with his father he became emotional.. just then sujata enters..
suju- are u went to get adi but u just disappeared…

sujata aslo see lucky n she too became emotional.. n just wanted to hug his son ..
as she was about to go to him.. rp grabbed her hands n signalled her not to go there..
lucky ran from there watching his dad hating him..
he again goes into flashback..
continues from the same point..

both dad son duo wee laughing just then sujata came there..
sujata- what should i do with these dad-son duo?? they can start anywhere..
rp n lucky (in unison)- ha to beta/ pati kiska h..
Again trio brust into laughter..

sujata patted lucky’s head n blessed him n went from there blessing him..
rp- mee too..(indicating towards his own head)
sujata- aap bhi na..(blushing)
lucky- dad have some shame.. u r flirting with my mom in front of ur children..
Sujata left from there embaressed..

rp- so what.. i m flirting with my wife only…
Flashback ends…

thinking his lovely moments with his family n smiled with his teary eyes..
but suddenly his smile fades away thinking about his sepatation with his family..

lucky- dad plz believe me.. i didnt do anything like this..(pleading n teary eyes)
rp- i can clearly see that.. u just ruined my reputation in this society… (slapped him)
lucky- dad u can beat me wowever u want but plz dont be soo rude to me..
rp- go.. just go from here n dont ever dare to come in front of me..from today u are not my son..my son can never do this cheap act..
lucky- dad plz believe me.. i m telling the truth.. ye..(pointig towards a girl) its all her planning.. she wanna take revenge from me..
girl- lucky.. (crying) what.. what r u saying??… m i mean why will i do so.. why would i make fun of my own digninty..(saying this she started crying miserably)
lucky-(angry) ohh just shut up.. i know u.. u can go to any extent for ur revenge.. u cheap girl.(pointing towards her)
Rp- (again slapped him) how how can u stoop so low lucky.. once u were my proud n now.. see what u did with my respect..
lucky- dad plz just once try to understqand me.. she is lying..
rp- ohh.. to u want me to forgive u..
lucky- (shine came in his teary eyes) yes dad .. i didnt do anything..
rp- so u will obey my all decisions..
lucky- ji dad.. whatever u say..
rp- to marry this girl.. (girl smirked listening this but without anyone’s notice)
lucky- (shocked) what are u saying dad!! how can i ?? i mean no.. no no i cant do this.. she is such a characterless girl..
rp- then from now onwards our relation ends here.
lucky- no dad plz no..
rp- just get the hell out of my house..
suju- ji what r u saying??.. he is our own child.. our own blood…
rp- sujata!! u will not say anything today..
from today he has no relation with this family.. and whoever doesnt agree with it, they can also leave this house along with him..

sanskar- dad its not right.. i know bhai can never do this..
i m sure this girl has done something to defame bhai.. i know her..
she is obsessed with bhai.. she always wanted him but bhai refused him na thats why she is doing all this..
(to girl) hey girl.. tell me. tell me why did u do this..??

she again started crying miserably..(ofcourse fake)

Rp came to sanskar n slapped him also..
(adi n pari was out of amritsar, as they are newly marrried couple n uttra is in hostel for her higher secondary)

sanky- theek h dad.. i have seen today how much do u believe ur own children..
Seeing this heart breaking scnerio lucky was just crying sitting on floor..

Rp- mera decision final h.. and whoever want can leave with him..

sanky- theek h to..i will always be with my bhai..
(to uv) chaliyae bhai.. there no one cares about u.. we will not live here.. i know.. its not ur mistake..

lucky- (wiping his tears) nhi sanky.. mom needs u this time.. i think i should go now.. no one needs me here..
(to rp) dad.. i promise i will proove myself honest one day n then u will repent for not trusting ur beloved son..
(but rp turned his face indcating him that he dont care but only a fathers heart knows how much sad he is from inside but watching that girls face he made himself strong )
(bechara to kya pata ki vo ladki hi chudail h)

lucky- (to sanskar) sanky see here.. see towards me.. now u need to take care of mom.. she needs u..
u need to be here afterall u need to proove me innocent na…

sujata was just crying seeing her house breaking into pieces..

lucky left from there after touching both there parents feet but rp didnt even gave him blessings…

sanky n sujata went from there disappointed..
Girl’s father took her from there..

now rp was all alone standing in the hall helpless…

thinking this lucky was crying miserably..

lucky-(to himself) why dad why didnt to believe me?? how can u not believe me?? dont u trust me??
today also u didnt let mom meet me.. kyu?? mere saath aaisa kyu hua??

ragini cajme from behind n put her hands on his shoulder consoling him..
(ragini knows everything about his past but he she never met his family as they married after this incident when lucky started living in mumbai n started his own business)

ragini- (signalling him not to cry) wipped his tears..
lucky suddenly hugged ragini tightly not disturbing her baby bump..(remember she is 8 months pregnent)
Screen freezes..
i know its quite boring today..
but it was also necessary to unveil the past behind lucky being separated from his family..
now one more dhamaka will happen when swasan will come to know about them being married..?
but before that can anyone guess what will happen with swara??
will she be alright??
how will sanskar react knowing that swara is his wife?

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  1. Seebu_s

    Awesome mona?and ur tittle so correct?too many complications?

  2. Riyanjali


  3. Ur too much dear…… It was awesome… Please update soon.

  4. Sus


  5. Shreeyu


  6. Awesome???dear…..plzz post next soon

  7. Simi

    Awesome dear

  8. Nice dear post soon waiting eagerly

  9. It was to good…eagarly waiting for next part.

  10. Gayathri.visu

    Interesting…..and emotional too Monaa… Post next part soon dear…..

  11. Tamil


  12. Arshaanya

    Hi monna
    Strtd reading ur ff now only…
    Not reading all prvs chappy as u gve summary so nw i hve lil idea abt d story…
    Bt hve lots of quez n confusions…
    Hope u wil clear all dat n rep to my msgs..

    1. Monaa

      Sure dear..

  13. Parulkashyap

    nice epi

  14. Awesome dear….

  15. Mica

    awesome part

  16. Vyshu10


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