Swasan born to be together (Episode 1)

Hii this is my first ff….hope u all will like it…….nd I’m sorry to raglak fans as I will give more importance to swasan……….Imy really sorry

The episode starts with a young, beautiful ,pretty girl playing guitar and said -” this is my life , my passion ”.

A second voice interrupts in between and says- ” Swara di ! Why r u speaking so dramatic lines ??? ”

Swara -” Ragini ( a beautiful and talented girl ) why u interrupted in between , I was practising for my play in school. We r doing this play for the seniors , and one more important thing don’t call me di I’m just two years elder than u ” .

Ragini- ”Oh ho di (teasing her). I can’t call u only by ur name as u r elder than me ”.

They have a sweet convo (fight)

Sumi-” U both stop ur fight as u both r getting late for school .”

Swara nd Ragini in one voice-” Yes maa coming….”

They both get ready nd leave for school.


If u like the story plzz comment…..as I’m eagerly waiting for ur comments…..if u like the story tell me through ur comments nd if u want something to be added in the story tell to me I will try to add it………nd if I’m disappointing any one by this story than I’m really very very sorry.

If u will like my story than only I will continue……so plzz tell through ur comments.

Credit to: Laiba Khan


  1. If u give equal imortance raglak then i ill read ua ff oderwise from my side u ill lose one reader….i hope u ill think about it..

  2. Likhitha

    See in one episode we can’t say about the story..So my suggestion is that u write two or three episodes..number of readers would increase and I would like to give feedback if u want one..This is too short increase the length if u can and u didn’t give any intro? why so ? And school ? No clue of anything…plz mention details while writing…

  3. Laiba Khan

    Sorry to say but my next episode will also be of the same length but from third episode I will increase the length…..nd I wanna tell u all one thing that I’m not a writer I love swasan a lot so that’s why I’m writing it nd one more reason iz there for me writing this ff so that I will reveal later……Lve U ALL…..nd thnx for ur comments

  4. Ammulu

    ok but swara elder naa no ???ragini bada hona chayihey San also school naa plz change he is engineering will student not school student better for swara… I think dis is my opinion keep write… good luck

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