SWASAN- Acceptance (6)


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Episode 5

“What!” Sanskar screamed on phone.
Laksh smiled sheepishly. Sanskar glared laksh and disconnected the call.
” be ready laksh” sanskar said trying to suppress his anger
” what happened bhai?” Laksh asked innocently batting his lashes.
” Mr. Mark informed that he would make a deal with us only if I will come to Sydney.” Sanskar said rolling his eyes.
” whao!” Laksh screamed, ” that’s awesome”
” I will kill you” sanskar said between his breaths.
Laksh smiled and turned to swara.” What about her?”
” do you have a passport?” Sanskar asked swara.
” yeah but why?”
He turned to laksh and smiled.
” well she is coming with us”
Laksh winked but swara bit her nails in confusion.
” sanskar…with what status can I come there? I mean you don’t like to discuss business matters infront of strangers”
Her words stabbed him and she knew that
” you are my P.A” HS said after thinking for a while.
“From when?” She raised her eyebrows.
” just a minute ago” sanskar left the place to avoid further questions.
Swara and laksh bursted out laughing.
” it’s time for swara to get close to sanskar” laksh teased her and she blushed.

After three days, three of them landed in Sydney airport. The drive to hotel was smooth. Swara kept staring outside the window while laksh was busy in sleeping. Sanskar was equally bust in attending mobile calls.
” laksh getup” swara shouted once they reached the hotel.
” we came so soon” he said yawning.
Swara narrowed her eyes and three of them went inside. After filling the details, they were shown a double bedroom suit. Sanskar and laksh occupied master bedroom while swara occupied the other.
” take rest swara. I have the meeting at evening in hotel night star. So get ready. We will go out tomorrow. ” sanskar said to swara before closing the door if hos room. Swara sighed and glanced the room. She jumped in joy and waited for the sun to set.
” where is my blue file” sanskar shouted adujsting his tie.
” here bhai” laksh said handing it to him.
Sanskar smiled ” I really don’t know what might have happened if you were not in my side.
” I be always with you my dear Bhai. Stop acting emotional.” Laksh said.
After half an hour they reached the restaurant.
Swara glanced at the restaurant. Laksh and sanskar asked her to stay at restaurant while they went to banquet hall. Minutes passed but they didn’t come. Swara felt annoyed and she sighed heavily after eating third piece of cake.
” missed us?” Laksh winked coming towards her.
Swara rolled her eyes. The Victory in sanskar’s eyes said that they finalised the lead. Laksh gestured swara to come along with him. She silently followed them. Her eyes flew open when they entered the bar section in the restaurant. Almost everyone had loads of make up on their faces and minimal clothes. She looked odd among them with jeans and a formal shirt. Everyone are dancing madly and it is for sure because they drank. The total atmosphere irritated her and she wanted to punch laksh’s face. She turned to him and he signalled her to come on dance floor. She gave a disgusting look to him and stood still. But something unexpected happen. Her breath choked in throat when Sanskar literally dragged her to the dance floor. She raised her eyebrows but he nudged her to dance. She turned to laksh who was already dancing. Swara started tapping her feet to the rhythm and soon a pop is played and now every danced in hip hop. Swara coordinated with laksh and sanskar but she is shocked to see sanskar this way. He is laughing and seemed like he enjoyed dancing. Her steps gained speed seeing him and soon she started dancing with grace. All the three kept exchanging glances
” I am done” sanskar said panting once they reached the counter.
” I am surprised ” swara said to sanskar.
” I said you..right?” Laksh said with a look i-am-always-correct.
She smiled at him and understood how friendly sanskar is.
” so how about dinner?” Laksh asked sanskar. He already know what will be the answer from his dearest brother but he wanted swara to know it.
” seriously ” sanskar gave a disapproving look ” we will enjoy tonight, will hang out” he pouted.
Swara opened her mouth wide with unbelievable look.
Sanskar’s mobile rang and he went out
” I said you right. Bhai is really a good guy” laksh said to swara and she smile.
” I want to drink. Come ” without waiting for reply, laksh dragged her.
Laksh ordered shots . swara moved her head in accordance with laksh as he drank every shot.
” wanna taste?” Laksh asked drinking another. Swara didn’t want to buy she nodded involuntarily
” take this” laksh gave her a shot ” drink at a time.” He stated.
Following his orders, swara drank it in one gulp. The next moment she started jumping. It is her first time and really burned her throat. Her eyes filled with tears, everything went blurr.
laksh shouted ” drink another one, hurry up”
Swara drank another thinking that the buring sensation in her throat. After drinking, she learnt that the shot didn’t work. Her stomach, throat, mouth and lips. Everything burnt. She took deep breaths with her mouth but every thing pained. Slowly, she started feeling dizzy. She turned to laksh and wondered how was he drinking. Her hands reached for another shoot. She brought it to her lips to drink but felt something slap kind of thing in her hand. She turned her head and saw sanskar standing straight with Clenched jaw.
Shooting a glare to laksh which he ignored, sanskar dragged swara to washroom. As it is her first time, alcohol started showing its affect on her. She just followed sanskar stumbling. Everything seemed three.
Swara tried to read the words written on washroom door.
” GE..GE..” She batted her lashes and finally she did ” gents? ” she shouted but she knew little that she is already inside.
” bend” sanskar ordered.
She frowned and batted her lashes.
” sanskar..you have four brothers” she counted everyone and batted her lashes.
” you never said me” she pouted.
Sanskar sighed at her behaviour and he washed her face.
” feeling better?” He asked with concern.
” oops” she said and vomited.
Sanskar shook his head and again washed her face. He then went out and came back after few seconds.
” take this” he forwarded his hand
” what?”she murmured leaning to the wall
” swara!” He called her name in fake anger.
Swara pouted and took mouth freshner from him.
“where is laksh?” She asked seeing the bar counter empty.
” oh God! Some one kidnapped him” swara screamed crying.
Sankar gave her a disgusting look but felt pity for her condition.
” swara..just sit here. I will come in a minute” sanskar made swara sit on a chair and he went in search of laksh.
Finally he found him sitting in some dark corner almost drunk.
” Laksh” sanskar patted laksh’s hand.
” ha bhai!” Laksh fumbled.
” go and sit in car. I will be back in a minute”
Laksh nodded but sanskar had a fear whether his brother will reach the car or not. He might have went with him but swara is also important. He went back and found empty chair.
” swara” he screamed out of the music.
No reply
” swara” he called her name.
” sanskar maheswari is missing” he heard someone shouting back of him. He turned and saw swara arguing with watch men who looked more like body guards
” hey..search him..I am speaking to you” swara shouted at one of the person poking his bicep but he remained still.. It is their routine to see many drunkers behave in wiered way and so then didn’t even respond to her
” you..” Swara stumbled her steps and batted her lashes as her vision is getting more blur.
Sanskar grabbed swara’s arm and dragged her to the car
” sanskar..” She called his name as if she found some treasure.
” hmm” he replied.
” my head is paining sanskar.. Like hell” she cried. Tears came out of her eyes.
Sanskar sighed. He really felt bad seeing her condition and he understood that she is getting her hangover
” just get in” sanskar motioned her to back seat door. He then drove to theor boarding place.

” Aww” swara screamed holding her head.
She felt like someone is continuously hammering her head. It pained hell and her body became numb. She rolled on the bed holding her head but fell down. Even that didn’t effect cause her head ached a lot. She leaned to bed and pulled her kness close to chest. Tears filled her eyes and screamed
” please.. Kill me”. She stamped her legs sitting in the same position.
” swara” laksh shouted behind her ” will you stop screaming” he tossed himself to face swara. ” it’s disturbing my sleep” swara’s nostril flared. She grabbed a pillow from her right side and threw it on laksh who carelessly spread his limbs wide on bed.
” you idiot.. This is all because of you..aww” he again held her head and cuddled her self.
Sanskar smiled seeing swara from opposite side, shut his laptop and walked past her. She buried her face in her knees
” drink this” swara raised her head in frustration. She then glared at glass which he was holding
” I just said that I want to die but you really..” narrowing her eyes, she turned away murmuring ” what a friend you are!”
Sanskar grabbed her hand and placed glass forcefully.
” this is just lemon water”
She pouted and drank before sanskar disappeared. He came back with a tablet.
” now what is this?”
” it will reduce your hangover. You will be alright within two hours” he assured her handing medicine to her
” if not say me. I will give you another one”
” I think you have a collection of tablets. Experienced?” She teased him.
” yes” he said. She raised her eyebrows.
” I do drink but very rare” he turned to laksh and narrowed his eyes
” I was planning to hang out whole night by roaming on streets and shopping but you..” He ran a frustrated hand through his hair ” you and she spoiled everything. I need to be angry with you ”
” but you can’t ” laksh prompted. Sanskar gave a nod.
” but why do you drink sanskar” the thought him drinking ached her heart. The corners of his lips twitched for her innocence. Why will anyone drink, either to celebrate or to forget pain and he knew that he drank for celebration.
” sometimes, when I feel too stressed and I end up same like you with hangover” sanskar said it in one breath as he didn’t want to drag it.
” and it is really worth watching him swara” laksh said with a smile ” his room will be a mess and his face..oh god! It will be too funny” laksh laughed rewinding his experiences.
” yeah” sanskar rolled his eyes.
Swara opened her mouth to say something but they heard someone knock at the door.
” I will see” sanskar left the room. He opened the door. A girl probably working staff greeted him handing a boquet.
” sir, someone left this for you at reception”
” me!” Sanskar is shocked but shut the door after giving a friendly smile to her. He placed the boquet of red roses on table and saw some note in it. Be opened to read it and it read
‘roses represent love, a strong emotion but mine is not love. Red is color of love yet it is a sign for danger….its time to pay back Mr. Maheswari’

NOTE: not proof read. Guys enjoy reading the fillers. Mostly the next two updates will be the same. Enjoy reading because it’s time for the story to get intense.

Credit to: Sree harini

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  1. Absolutely fantastic sree

    1. Thank-you dev.

  2. Amazing..superb can’t wait for next update

    1. But need to wait till evening dear. Still typing.

  3. Amazing ep Sree I read all the chapters in one go…Sorry for late update…I am late but you know I was just wandering over all the pages aimlessly and was wondering that you didn’t post any new ff and just then I saw Acceptance with your Name and I was on cloud nine….Sorry again

    1. Felt happy reading that you read all the episodes but no need to say sorry for commenting dear . becareful because you are on clouds. Just kidding. I have uploaded raglak ff too. If you wanna read you can dear no force.

  4. Superb Harini I wonder how could u write so well

    1. Hello harshita. Don’t wonder dear because I feel like many others on this site are more talented than me. Thanks for the appreciation.

  5. Swalak ka drunk drama.was too good.

    1. Thank-you dhara. You will enjoy the next episode even.

  6. A small mistake I’m the lines * why will anyone drink, either to celebrate or to forget pain and he knew that he NEVER drank for celebration* sorry for inconvenience.

  7. Mind blowing ep shree. … I wanted to see more drunken drama of Swara. .. BT it was also amazing. .. I loved ur story…Once I wanna c sanskar’s reaction whn any one misbehaves with swara or flirt with her… bcoz she has also become important for him. ..plz if you can plz show it. .. its a kind request. .. as it will be fun…means lyk swara is nt able to understand that sanskar is feeling good if anyone is flirting with her. .. or misbehaving with her… ep can b fun… its ur story It’s merry a suggestion. .. n sorry if I was rude ??

    1. Hello sujatha… I really liked your suggestion but cannot keep it dear because it doesn’t fit in the story line.you will be able to see the friendliness of sanskar and more over he us man who generally doesn’t show up his emotions. Once again sorry. But sanskar of this story will just take away swara from the situation you suggested.

      1. No thnk u n no sorry in frnd ship. .. Sanskar’s famous dialogue. … I thnk I can call u a frnd if you don’t mind… n it’s ur story shree.. I just gave a small suggestion… actually I can’t control if anything pops into my mind… so u have to bear my suggestions sometimes.. n u r doing a gr8 job… n it’s ur story.. n u know abt the characters more than anyone else. ..

      2. Sanskarholic..haha. You can take me as a friend dear. No need to mention. Same pinch. Even I can’t control anything that comes in my mind and in majority situations, I regret. You can freely share your suggestions dear infact I will be happy reading them.

    1. Thank-you rosey.

  8. Hi sree….
    Jst nw im free nd read all 6 chapters in ine go…. superb awesome epi’s…..
    Dat too sanskar cold nature nd his affection towrds laksh , their bonding is cool..
    Im eager to knw abt swara secret…
    Today ws tooooo gooooddd

    1. Hello navi..after mnay days. Happy that you loved sanlak bonding. Swara’s secret..nothing as such till now. It’s just that she is orphan nd loves sanskar* winks* keep reading dear.

  9. Sree fabulous hey how is your exams tremendous job you did in this part the way sanskar told swara of being his P. A was really appreciating and then how she asked from when Ioved it good going I’m not going to miss even a single epi

    1. Girl you didn’t comment for one episode and I already missed you.my exam was good and most happiest part is I am on my vacation..yipeeeeee. Glad that you loved my story oops our story. And yeah don’t miss it because it’s worth reading..i felt the way.

      1. Sree I never missed your story and if I wish I can’t bcoz I’m in live with this sanskar and as you told it’s our story so how can you think I’ll miss my own story it’s just that my net pack was lasting and ended while reading a and when I recharged I commented in your last part for next one u can’t know how difficult it was for me from stopping to comment but anyways congrats for your vacation have fun but plzz don’t forget to post ur ff ???

      2. And yeah I missed something really happy to know that you did well in exams Congo give me a treat sorry I can’t stop myself from asking treats well you can fulfill my wish by posting next part asap haha ? take your own time dear love you ???

      3. Hey, I said how much I liked and loved you girl. Didn’t complain. I know that you will be my silent reader. Yeah sure I have already started enjoying my vacation. Treat?? Well I will give you when my results are out and now please don’t ask me when are there because I too don’t know. If possible I will give a treat tomorrow by posting two updates.

  10. Awesome honey… sanskar do feel something for swara…sanskar care nature towards swara the girl juz got into his house n life juz two days before is juz unbelievable… I think he juzap
    quite attracter towards her…swalak drunk moment was good… Good bonding…But I dunno y do I feel the threat note with red rose sent by swara ..

    1. Thankyou dear and I really feel very good when you address me honey. You are the first one. It’s just that sanskar is a reserved guy and when he opens, he is fun to be with. Swalak moment, actually I planned for a big now but I was too exhausted yesterday night so didn’t add that much…threat note, keep reading because after few episodes, your doubts turn to another person.

  11. Wow super duper epi Sree…drunken swara and Laksh.. God..want more drunken drama…

    1. Hey malar. I remembered your fiction after mentioning dear. I have actually planned for a lenghty episode but due to tiredness, I didn’t write it upto the mark.

  12. Hi sree ,
    Hope your exam was good. Last two episodes were just brilliant but ya this part has really increased my curiosity by thousandfolds especially the last part.Wonderful episode , neatly sandwiched between humor, suspence and love. I loved drunken Swara but as usual Sanskaar had different kind of charm. Loved Sanskaar. Laksh character is too good , caring and supporting our hero in best possible ways.I loved the way u have shaped Swara’s character.This JEE preparation is literally getting on my nerves.No matter how much i study but Physics is bound to create problem. God help me.Love u dear. Waiting for tge next update.ummmmmmahhhhhhh

    1. God..I missed you like hell girl…well your curiosity is worth and you will have more twists and turns on the way. But just after two episodes I guess every thought and assumption will become upside down. I can’t reveal more than this…I have planned to write so much fun with drunk swara but I reached my home pretty late so finished it. I am not satisfied but I will try my best not to do anything in hurry. JEE exam..wow this Sunday I think. Even my sister is appearing for it. All the best my dear sissy. You will rock and I am sure..haha..physics is physics..love you too..ummah

    2. All the best needhi for JEE physics is tough dear but don’t worry u will crack this tough nut all the very best

  13. Awesome

    1. Thank-you Khan.

  14. nice……upload next soon dr

  15. Ohhhhh…I am craving for more….who is the mysterious person now????

    1. Hey shabrin, will get to know about it in future episodes dear. Just keep reading.

  16. Splendid job yaar!!!!! I m just loving this…..yesterday night I waited so long though I had exam today…….and I was very happy when I got it in morning so I read at that time only but didn’t commented coz I was getting late 😉 but any ways yaar u r awesome as a writer….. Keep rocking…..and yup!!! Is dean dayal gadodia is swara s father who met her in sanskar’s office…..

    1. That’s so sweet of you but don’t waste your time in checking my update. Exams are very important. How was your exam today? …every charecter in my story is exactly SWARAGINI. So he is not swara’s father.

  17. Awesome epi sreee…..
    I read both 5th and 6th in the.morning
    . But didn’t comment kyunki test tha……
    Now.after finishing it….I decided to comment…. just loved it….and am waiting to see what is brewing in that mind of yours….. I’m so excited too…. oh one test left then freedom for another fortnight…..

    Anyways awesome sree… loved it loved it….

    1. Haha..actually I had many fictions to read but as I have promised you, I read 1st chapter of yours yesterday night with drowsy eyes and today I have completed it. From now I will be regular in commenting dear by the way how do you get time read and cmwnt on very fiction, then write yours and reply to each and everyone in it. Seriously hats off…nothing is brewing in my mind. If also just wait for few episodes cause it will be revealed.

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