SWASAN – Acceptance (26)

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Part 25

As promised, lenghty update friends and raglak lovers be ready for double update. Guys pay close attention because we are close to climax and it hardly takes six episodes. I had replied to everyone in my previous episode and my apologies for not commenting on any fiction but I am reading. It’s just that I am very late.

Swara is pacing in sanskar’s room, waiting for his arrival. Her curiosity increased thousand times after his nod at morning but he did abruptly leave for office and it is nearly 1:30am now.
Swara ran into corridor when she heard ramu kaka opening the main door. There she saw sanskar totally tired but his eyes are bright as always and also brave. What surprised her is seeing laksh behind sanskar with a file in his hands. He didn’t go to office for a while after the incident.

Sanskar casually opened the door of his room thinking to relax and forget the day which he had by a good sleep but stopped for a while seeing swara. Of course that was expected one for him.Her curious eyes did say him that she would surely won’t leave her until she gets what she wants.
Sanskar walked past swara to his closet ignoring her. He then went to washroom after collecting some night wear.

“Will you say me?” Swara snapped once he is out of washroom. He locked his eyes with her for a minute and then sat on his bed after drinking water.
” why are you not saying it to me?” She requested him this time.
“Because I don’t want to” he said quietly. It stabbed her heart. She felt rejected.
“Sorry” she mumbled with heavy heart before turning to the entrance. Sanskar closed his eyes for a second and then held her wrist.
” what do you want to know?” His same deep voice made her face him “that why I hate her”
Swara nodded. Sanskar patted the cot beside him gesturing her to sit and she obeyed him.
” just after a week of your parents demise,-”
” murder” swara cut him and he took a deep breath.
“okay murder, I did had a very bad dream in which laksh and I were left in a dark place and the only woman whom I know is trying to reach us but she did disappear suddenly” he exhaled heavily. Swara started him.
” Mrs. Annapurna MAHESWARI” he mouthed, every emotion did speak that word but mostly, it sounded like he worshiped it and ofcoruse he did.
” the most beautiful woman I have ever seen swara. Her smile, her heart, her kindness, her love everything are so pure” he shook his head still looking in the emptiness of the room “were, were so pure. I haven’t….haven’t seen my mother. She died the moment I opened my eyes but my ma, this woman did show me what a mother is.”
Tears, swara once again saw tears in his eyes and it started bothering her. She cuddled towards him and he smiled faintly.
“Ours was a good family swara. I have never seen my father so strong but bade papa mentioned me many a times that he turned soft after my mother’s death, after all she was my dad’s backbone ” he chuckled at his words before continuing ” I ran downstairs to ma’s room when I woke up from my nightmare. There was no pooja plate that usually used to be in mandir, I reached kitchen hoping that she was preparing our favorite paneer curry, but she wasn’t. I went to garden to check if she was watering the plants along with kamala bai that we three, I mean laksh, ma and I planted a few weeks ago but…” He trailed off as his voice started becoming horase and his eyes turned more darker.
” I ran to their bedroom hoping that she was with badepapa, helping him in his work but do you know what I saw there? ” the pain is evident in his voice. Swara did realise that he is staring at her when she didn’t listen his voice continue the story.
His honey brown eyes held some much of pain but still they are bright, curious and sharp as always. She simply shook her head. Sanskar snickered and placed his fingers with hers.
” bade papa, I have never seen him that way before. He was sitting on the chair of his study table with a paper in his hand. The eyes which were always sharp were blunt, his smile was replaced by something…painful. He looked so unlike him. Papa was beside him saying some soothing words. I walked two steps towards them but laksh hopped on to me from nowhere with a football in his tiny hands” sanskar explained. The moments of that day are still locked inside his heart.
Swara kept staring him trying to read his pain.

“Papa immediately got alarmed and sent us out of the room along with kamala bai whom I haven’t seen before in that room. I was so confused swara, so confused. I wanted to curl up into a ball and hide myself because my badepapa was in a state in which he was never before. The house is in some state which it wasn’t before..it looked so lifeless and fear started engulfing me. Tears came to my eyes. I wanted my ma to be myside, coo and soothe me the same way she did always but no, she wasn’t there for me”
” I waited the whole day for my mother to come into our room, hug me and laksh and say that everything was alright but kamala bai did come that night with our dinner plates. Laksh asked her about his mother, our mother” he shut his eyes in pain and squeezed swara’s hands and now, she is able to feel his pain. Her memories started coming to her.
” but she didn’t answer. I haven’t seen papa or bade papa that day. Laksh was crying all the time, probably he was also missing our mother. I got curious and went to bade papa’s room. I peeped inside to see if anyone were present but no, so I just went to his desk and Stole the paper that bade papa was holding that morning. I opened it when I came to my room.”
” laksh sat beside me and we both started reading it in the light of bed lamp”
His voice choked and suddenly his nostrils flared.

“Spill it sanskar. I am here” swara asuured him drawing comfort circles on his hands
” it stated that she…” He gulped “she never wished to stay with us. She never loved us swara.” His voice is so broken that it breaking swara too.
Swara gasped and then hugged sanskar when she felt his body shiver along with his voice.
“She married badepapa just for wealth and when she finally understood that the property will never be hers, she decided to leave the place with some other, who was more wealthier than us. She even mentioned that she never loved us swara. We were just a burden to her because what all she focoussed was wealth. She said that she would never return to our lives and did ask for some money as alimony”
He finished with a deep breath
“That’s all” swara asked a bit surprised. He pulled himself from hug and frowned
“I mean, why do you hate her?”
” it’s complicated. I was thirteen and laksh was ten when she left. It will be really difficult for a child to stay away from a mother at that age. Moreover, I saw my bade papa breaking down. Very badly. He did seriously love her a lot…a lot swara such that, he tried to end himself once. That was a very horrible night. I saw him being depressed, staying in study for hours together to forget her. We grew hundred times in tweleve years in business swara. you can understand his hard work”
” so, she married your bade papa just for money and when she didn’t get the one, she left you all for some wealthy person?” Swara asked him analyzing his words.
Sanskar nodded ” he betrayed me, laksh and papa in name of love. It’s the reason I hate betrayal because it did really affect us a lot. My bade papa spent many sleepless nights, laksh was bedridden for months with fever and ma was the only word he chanted, I started having severe nightmares swara. The walls of this Manison forgot to listen laugh when Kamala bai, our next mother left us” he inhaled sharply
“I don’t know anything about bade papa because he barely talked to us after that, papa was all in depression may be because of murder case and there I was left along with laksh”
” when he had severe attack of fits, bade papa appointed ramu kaka. Things started getting better and it’s when papa went into coma. Laksh was still in his fever phase. That’s another breakdown for the family. But this time, bade papa stood in place of my dad. The days starred becoming worse and we both did worst in academics. In one such day, I saw her on our way to home from school. Laksh left me and ran to her, hugging her tight but she didn’t hug him instead jerked out of his grip.

“Ma!, laksh screamed and pleaded her but her stone heart didn’t melt and she left the place with a person who came there with lavish car” sanskar closed his eyes remembering the day and it’s memories.
” laksh was broken as me but mine was more swara. This time, badepapa became our strength. He said that we should stand in such a place that she must feel bad for leaving us and that’s what we are now”
Swara leaned and placed her head on his shoulder but he didn’t respond it because he is preoccupied now.
” but why is she working as a nun?” Swara asked him.
” may be he left her”
“Or, she is repenting” she completed him. Sanskar inhaled once again and stood. Swara followed him to the corridor but she blocked in his way when his intentions became clear.
” you are not going anywhere” she declared. He narrowed his eyes and walked three steps past her.
” you are not”
” why?”
Swara started him for more than a minute and he waited patiently.
” okay fine, I will also join you in getting drunk” she spatted crossing her arms.
“No!” He almost screamed “you are not doing that” he added, disapproving her idea.
“why?” She imitated him.
Sanskar closed his burning eyes for a second and when he opened, they are soft.
” come let’s go” his words startled her.
” I am not. Drinking is sin” she offered him immediately. The corners of his lips twitched.
” you wanted to come right?” He prompted.
” no way, neither I am going nor you” she declared once again. Seeing his not so pleased face, she continued ” it’s because I can’t handle your stupid hangover tomorrow.”
“Then don’t” he simply shrugged not taking his eyes from hers.
Convincing him is something which she cannot do and now, it’s getting worse.
“Fine, If you will go out, I…I…” She shut her mouth out of words.
Sanskar angled his head to left side, rasing an eyebrow.
“Will you please get in without arguing, I am really tired to convince you” she finally muttered looking down. sanskar grinned and is about to turn but stopped when swara leaned to his ear
” you better follow me mister because you really don’t know what I can do to you” she whisper yelled at him. Before she could do anything, sanskar pulled her to himself grabbing he left elbow. It resulted her hitting his muscular body.

“And that’s what?” He asked her in a very low, seductive voice by moving the strands of her hair. Swara opened her mouth but realised that action speaks better than words. She raised her lashes to see his face which had an irritating smirk.
” if you don’t obey, I will elope with avinash. He is really good at riding copter” she said with a wink.
Sanskar smiled ” what are you, five?”
She leaned to his ear “how can I be five when you are six?. I am three” she whispered leaving him numb.
“So you are not going” swara declared as well as questioned him.
” what will be I rewarded with if I obey you?” He asked raising his eyebrows.
“This one” she pinched him on his stomach before running to her room.
Sanskar smiled at her before closing the door of his room. A pair of aged eyes smiled at them.

Swara casually glanced ragini’s room when she walked to downstairs to get a water bottle. She knocked it when she observed that lights are still on.
“Come in” ragini said adjusting her cap.
” where are you going?” Swara asked ragini seeing her dressed in uniform.
Ragini sighed before grabbing her mobile “my profession girl..some bank robbery”
Swara chuckled at ragini’s situation to which she received a glare.
“Did sanskar come home?” Ragini asked once swara shut her mouth.
“Yeah, even laksh” she didn’t fail to see the change of color in ragini’s face.
“You are still mad at him?”
” you are still mad at laksh”
Ragini nodded “I seriously want to irritate him a lot, but I can’t”
“You can” swara announced biting her nail.
“And that’s how?” Ragini asked placing her both hands on hips.
Swara winked before leaving the room.

As always, she is running far away from the fear, trying to chase the light of her life but all what she can see is darkness. She sat on her knees when finally she gave up. Every inch of her body is aching but that’s not what she is worried about. Suddenly, a door opened which surprised her as she thought that she was at some place which did had any entrance and exit just like no boundaries above and below her. A person walked inside wearing black clothes and a black mask. He heart is racing but she is not afraid because she has been seeing him from tweleve years. The person approached her and within a second she fell on the ground by his punch on her Right cheek. She heard him smile and once again she is not afraid because he is her death. He stamped her face with his left leg making her cry out with pain.
“What’s your last wish?” He asked her showing a sword from nowhere. The shiny surface of the sword made her close her eyes
“Tell Me” he roared and she flinched.
“Sanskar” she whispered. The person removed his leg from her cheek and moved few steps. There, she saw him, in complete white clothes, smiling at her in the same way he always does. So pure and fresh. His smile is infectious, she thought because she too started smiling but next moment, the smile on his is replaced by pain and fear. The white clothes turned to red and before she could call him, he disappeared in darkness. She turned to the person with tears in her eyes. She saw him aiming the sword to her and in the next moment…

Swara woke up with a jolt, panting heavily. She glanced her surrounds and understood that it is one of her stupid nightmare. She turned on the bed lamp and drank the water before wiping sweat on her forehead. She then leaned on head rest massaging her temples. Every time she had a night mare, her last wish was either their parents or their murderer but not sanskar. Sanskar! She immediately got onto her feet and turned to alarm clock to check the time. It is still 4:30am. She made her way to sanskar’s room, worried about him because last time when he scolded her about mandir, he too had a night mare and today he has said everything about Annapurna and now…. She slowed her walk when she saw his door open. She peeped inside and saw laksh sitting beside sanskar with his hands in laksh’s. Occasionally laksh ran his hand in sanskar’s hair caressing it. Swara lips curved at the scene. Sanskar’s love defeated her hatred and the brothers love will surely overpower laksh’s jealousy.

Sanskar streched his body and casually turned to his right but his eyes widened seeing laksh sleeping on couch. He knew, he knew his brothers love for him. It’s just that circumstances are not good for them now. He walked to laksh and covered him with comforter. Sanskar kissed laksh’s forehead before leaving for morning excersise.

After few hours, sanskar frowned while descending steps seeing his bade papa taking with pandit. Before he reached the hall, pandit ji left. Swara reached hall following sanskar and raised her eyebrows questioning laksh but he simply shrugged. Laksh smriked when swara turned the other side.
” sanskar” durga Prasad called him and everyone turned to him.
” pandit ji said that day after tomorrow will be best day for engagement ”
” whose?” Sanskar asked confused same as swara.
” mine and swara” laksh answered him with a fake smile. Swara opened her mouth wide and shut again in anger. Durga Prasad gave a disapproving look to laksh to which he shrugged.
“Your’s and swara” durga Prasad informed sanskar with a smile on his face
Swara turned to sanskar just to realise that he is simply shocked as her. Durga Prasad patted sanskar’s shoulder before leaving.
“So” laksh said forwarding his hand to swara “congratulations bhabhi”. Swara gave him a thight smile because everything that’s happening is so soon.

” so?” Ragini prompted swara once she came from duty.
“Come with me” swara dragged ragini to parking area backside the Manison.
They both stood before laksh’s car.
” men can tolerate anything but not when something happens to their car-”
“- because” ragini continued swara ” they are their ”
” babies” both of them said sarcastically before giggling
” but what shall we use to decorate this?” Swara asked biting her nails. Ragini turned to swara and suddenly an idea flashed. She nudged swara and both of them smriked evily.
Swara and ragini ran from the place and hid themselves behind a shrub when they heard laksh whistling.

Laksh approached his car playing with his keys but his jaw touched ground at the scene infront of him. His black color car is totally decorated, frankly speaking is destroyed by some stupid lady designs in different colors and also some mud on it. He dramatically dropped his keys and ran to his car.
“Who did this to you?” He screamed while kissing the car.
“Yewww” swara scrunched her nose at laksh’s gestures. Ragini giggled.
Laksh made a round of his car and it’s just not like his car. His face witnessed his worry and pain. He leaned on car bonnet and sniffed the design and that smelled very familiar, probably lipstick and nail polish.

Swara started laughing at laksh’s expressions
” shh” ragini closed swara’s mouth still giggling.
” oh my baby” laksh fell on the car hood stretching his hands on it “who did this to you? I will kill them” he spatted.
That’s it, ragini laughed aloud making swara laugh too. Laksh turned to source of noise and fumed with anger.
“You two” he raised his finger at them “come out…now” he ordered.
Swara and ragini came out of the shrub trying hard to surpress their laughter.
” will anyone address car as baby?” Ragini asked him in between her laughter.
” no ragini..did you hear. He did talk to car as if it’s going to answer. ‘Who did this to you'” she mimicked him and both of them bursted out laughing.
Laksh raised his eyebrow at them, crossing his arms and tapping his foot.
” you both are going to clean it. I want to see my reflection in it.” He ordered to which ragini glared. She went to the garden and came back with a bucket of water. He relaxed visibly and kept his eyes on her. She smiled at him sweetly before throwing the bucket full on water on his car
” what the hell” He roared at ragini who is laughing again.
” sorry laksh but the ones which used to paint your car are not smudge free” ragini said him seriously, batting her eyelashes. Swara raised her laughter and clutched her stomach which started aching.
” what’s happening? ” sanskar’s voice made them to turn to him.
Sanskar opened his mouth wide looking laksh’s car and then to swara and ragini.
” you must have not done this” he said quietly.
” and you will pay for that” laksh spatted and turned to his car but stopped seeing the smudged drawing of Mickey mouse. He then glared the ladies.
” leave it laksh.”
” what?” Laksh yelled ” I need to go out and are you expecting me to flaunt their master piece?”
Sanskar sighed ” take mine”
” I don’t need yours” he murmured before calling someone.

Swara frowned at sanskar who just entered the hall
” what’s special ?” Swara chirped because he is early to home today.
” planning to please my fiance” he answered her sarcastically placing his blazer on arm of the sofa chair.
She blushed to the color of her dress.
” I am serious swara. Get ready, we will go out for a dinner” he announced and went upstairs to get fresh.
After nearly twenty minutes, they are in the busy streets of Kolkata and then on highway.
” where are we going?” Swara asked curious.
” oh! There is a small town near.”
Swara remained silent.

“How was that?” Sanskar asked swara on their way to home.
” it would have been more better if you wouldn’t have shown chivalry ” she sarcastically replied but deep down, both of them knew that she enjoyed it.
” you won’t allow anyone to ride your car. Do you?” Swara asked him after few minutes.
” no man will do that. Seriously we consider them as second life”
Swara rolled her eyes before murmuring “babies”
” you must have not seriously not done that swara. I mean about laksh’s car” sanskar genuinely felt bad for that.
Swara chuckled “vansh too never allowed me touch his car”
He gave her a smile before shifting his gaze to road. Swara leaned to window but soon pulled her jacket close to her body
“Untimely rains” she cursed before closing eyes. Sanskar stopped the car at desserted place on highway.He then opened the door on swara’s side forwarding his hand
” what?” Swara asked him but then realised his intentions. She thought for a while before stepping out. The cool rain drops that touched her body irritated her. They both started walking.
” so you don’t like rains” sanskar asked lacing his fingers with her.
Swara raised her head to look at sky and then sighed ” I don’t know. For me, rain is always unexpressed sorrow. It always pours when I am in difficulties”
” but it’s not the same for me swara.” She turned to him “when badepap made his first deal and was successful, it rained that day. Rain is success”
She simply smiled at him but few thoughts are consuming her.
” why don’t you forgive your ….um…mother as you did for me and laksh?” She asked caustiosly studying his face.
He sighed deeply “what if I ask the same to you?”
” about your grandfather”
Swara felt like he literally slapped her with his answer and she kept quiet.
“the only woman whom I loved the most just left us not even thinking for once and you are asking me to forgive her?” His voice had that hatred which she has for Dean dayal.
” but..but you did forgive the one who tried to kill you sanskar. Take me as example, you forgive me even after betraying you in the name of love.”
” do you now?” He asked raising his eyebrows
” and also laksh, he betrayed you in brothers love” she completely ignored his words.
” I don’t understand why are you so desperate to make me forgive her swara. Look I always tolerate anyone who will be good with me in their second chance and I think, she lost her chance when she left both of us at school.”
Swara gulped and gave him a fake smile
” it’s because you still love her sanskar.” She answered his question. The rain is still pouring
” unlike me, you love her.”
Sanskar shook his head “drop this. And may be I used to love her swara but now, hate is the emotion I have for her”
Swara nodded “but it’s paining me to see you like this. I think you have experienced pain more in your life apart from all other emotions”
Sanskar turned to her and their eyes locked. Many messages transformed between them.
” there won’t be any spice if it is not this way” sanskar said still not breaking their eyelock.
” life”
Swara scowled and crossed her arms ” you know what, you should stop reading philosophies.. It’s overflowing now”
” but that really helped me to be the person for whom you fell for ” he added with a wink.
She couldn’t help but smile and once again intertwined their fingers. Both of them started shivering because of cold and luckily, the intensity of rain decreased. Both of them turned to each and smile before tightining their grip on each other’s fingers. The next moment, they jumped at once into the water that stagnated at one corner on road. They laughed when cold, muddy water splashed their faces.
” that was funny” swara said once they started going to their car.
” oh! How was swara gadodia as a child?” He asked curiously.
” hmm…I was the Apple of my house so noone dared to scold me except my mom. So I did seriously take revenge on her along with grandfather” she giggled at some memory.
” naughty in one word then” he said.
” I am still naughty. I did once break vansh’s car” she bursted out into fits of laughter. He joined her
” so what about you?” She asked him once they reached the car.
Sanskar shrugged and both of them sat in the car
” you can’t even imagine how naughty we brothers were” he informed igniting the engine
“Oh! Any memory to share?”
” yeah. I was in fourth standard and laksh was in first. One of his classmates teased him for some reason and we both ….” He started laughing . swara frowned at him.
” we both cut her hair at lunch break ” he laughed again till his nose turned pink.
” even I used to do this type of things with my dida and Nana”
” have you seen them after…um..your parents demise?” Sanskar asked her hesitatingly. She nodded in no “I miss them”

“Bye” swara said to sanskar cutting the awkward silence when they reached her room.
” good night” he whispered before sighing.
Swara placed her hand on door knob but someone called her from behind.
” will you sleep with me tonight?” Ragini asked swara with fear in her voice.
” why?”
” laksh had seriously warned me to punish us..mainly me for destroying his car” she said wiggling her eyebrows.
Swara opened her mouth when realisation hit her about their act.
” I am asking you to come to my room because it is far away from these brothers unlike yours” ragini informed with urgency.
” okay fine. I will come after changing. ” swara said pointing her wet clothes.
After few minutes, both of them went to ragini’s room.
Laksh smriked behind them, evily.

Credit to: Sree harini


  1. Neha

    Wow sree ur back oh this is pretty long… Haven’t read but on seeing the logo got so excited dear…. Don’t worry after reading also will comment but u tell how’s u now typhoid subsided or it’s still there with u…. Oh u took 15mins to read my comment on anju page…..oops sorry for complete Hindi what to do sometimes cracks happens ….OK OK now I’m going to read don’t disturb haan ????

    • Sree harini

      Hey you first!! That’s a wow
      It took 15min because I am slow at reading Hindi that too written in English. But its okay if you are comfortable with.

  2. angel

    Awesome sree….thnk u for updating…how is ur health now…plz take care and get well soon sweety

    • Sree harini

      I am good now angel,thankyou and no need to say thanks. I will surely take care dear

  3. Sree

    Thank u very very much for such a big update. I loved this ep. Poor swasan both have very sad past especially sanky’s. Loved swaragini’s prank 🙂 . Waiting to see swasan engagement so plz post nxt soon. I hope u r fine now. If so i am very happyyy about that but if not i am really sad . Love u a lot di and take care of urself.

    • Sree harini

      Hello Sree…nice to meet you after many days.
      Sanskars past is not sad but it emotionally broken him. Haha. Even I agree with you about swaragini prank..lol
      And about my health,just came home after the check up dear.


  4. Anjali

    Uk what.. After reading this, I just and stared at the screen blankly….. I was so stumped….

    Laugh or cry….
    Tell awww or Haww…

    It was fab!!! Absolutely <3 <3 <3 <3

    And only 6 more epis 😮 😮

    After that no more?? I am going to cry now… 🙁 🙁

    How is ur typhoid now??


    • Sree harini

      Haha.. I can imagine your expression anju.
      Many questions. OMG. About the fiction,I can’t help because I cannot bore you people for so long. And about my health,waiting for repots girl.

      Please don’t cry because it turns off my mood.


  5. stoneheart

    awesome episode …how r u feeling now ?? romance..prank .. everything simply mind blowing

    • Sree harini

      Thankyou thankyou so much for appreciation. I am okay now. Waiting for reports.

  6. Neha

    Haha ? first of all this laughter sign bcoz of last convo of swaragini n laksh smirk which gave a hint to me that I’m gonna enjoy next epi…..

    Coming to this it contains revealations of first betrayal for maheswaris n turning the brothers especially sanskar into a misery… Well sree I’m loving swasan bonding n understanding nature simply perfect n sudden engagement no no not sudden it’s shocking to swasan….. I loved laksh’s comment saying mine n swara’s engagement to which both swasan seemed angry n frustrated ……

    N dear u know the best realistic thing was u mentioned that a pair of aged eyes smiled at them…. Literally if I started to give u credit for this epi then I’ll surely end up in writing whole epi n then u will only say kitna irritate karti h yaar…. But it’s amazing swaragini spoiling laksh’s car was so logical I too want to do it now ? n his questions n reactions…. Who did this to u???…. Oh my baby!!!!! Seriously was laughing so bad at that thing….. Sanskar also asked u shouldn’t have done that to his car…. Gosh but it’s reality my bro is also so pathetic regarding his car but I being the most stubborn bow him down…..

    I think it’s already too long now plzz gussa mat hona ? OK now mera ho gaya ? ? tc ? u ??n yeah get well soon deari

    • Sree harini

      Now that’s a really lengthy one. About my health, I spent my day at doctors clinic and must wait till the reports come.

      Enjoy next episode?? Well I must make that because it will be probably the last one where you will see everyone smiling.

      Who said you didn’t wrote the whole episode? But I enjoyed reading your POV so no comments for them.. You are seriously a naughty girl I guess because bowing a man,especially brother is a difficult task.

      I can’t even be angry with you if I ever wish. So don’t talk something that makes my mood off.. Thanks for the wishes and ha,love you.

      • Neha

        Ok from now no using of word gussa…. Waiting for reports I hope n pray that everything comes out to be fine…. Last epi to see everyone smiling…. Ok but right now don’t wanna think that…. Yes I’m naughty that’s what my bro says but u r wrong here I didn’t bow down any man I did it to my bro I’m his jaan so he can..he does anything for me…. So usko patana or manana easy h ….lol I’m waiting for next part but plzz tc of ur health kitna bed se chipkogi… Enough of chipko movement now…. ? ? you too dear

    • Sree harini

      Is that you in the pic!!! Silly me. It must be you because you updated it. Did I you are really beautiful and your daughter is more???

  7. Hey sree nyc to c u back…
    How is your health now dr? ?..
    Improving. .??..

    Ep was mind blowing… u describe the pain best…
    Waiting for the revelation of all mysteries

    • Sree harini

      Hey sujju..you are also beautiful.??..yeah I guess but can’t predict until reports come.

      Pain!! Many said that but thankyou so much.the mystery will unfold soon.

  8. sweety

    Hey harini……. How is ur health dear….. Hope ur fine now…..may god bless you with health and prosperity…….good to see u back……
    Coming to the episode it was really awesome…… U just cracked it….fabulous…… Hmm laksh back in hus crazy avatar…..Don’t know was is getting cooked in laksh mind….I think ragini and swara are gone now….. Very much desperate to know…….
    Sanskar….. Oh god, harini the way ur portraying sanskars character is commendable……. I just want to give u a huge applause for this……… update the next part asap………

    • Sree harini

      Idk about my health. Still feeling the same drowsiness because of medicines.

      First of all hugs you back. Sanskar!!! What do I have to say about him. I just want to make this guy enter into your hearts till you remember my fiction and name.

      Laksh is back but seriously ha,he didn’t even share his plan with me. I am also waiting here.

  9. smiley

    Even I laughed my heart out…. Awesome part… Waiting for nxt… Keep writing….

    • Sree harini

      That’s a lovely one to read. I seriously feel happy when I make others smile.

  10. Jiya

    Sree how r u dear nd ur health? I hope it is best. U know by seeing logo of ur ff i just smiled automatically thanx for posting omg poor lucky his car i mean his baby awww! I was laughing all the time by imaging the scenes nd i love laksh in ur ff caring bt sometimes jeolous bt he do care for his brother waiting for laksh revenge plz plz plz post nxt part asap plz try to do so nd haan thnx for lengthy update love u a ton dear nd Take care

    • Sree harini

      Another new,I will faint with overwhelming happiness.

      I am glad to know that my fiction picture itself makes you curious and poor lucky. I really thought for a week for this one. Out come seems to be good. And you caught laksh. Will promise to show you more.

      I will try to update dear and will surely take care .

  11. Anu

    Hawww!! This was so good. So many Wows ??.
    I loved basically Sanskar here. Hid portrayal has been amazing. That’s what I love about al the Sanskarholics. The way they portray Sanskar’s character. Be it you or Anju. And the car “babies” part was awesome. My dad also calls his car baby. Lol. And I and my sister had once tried to destroy his baby with our artist paints but those weren’t permanent or else we would have been hanged. Update soon ♥

    Love ya. Take care :):)

    • Sree harini

      Any..I just can’t get over your pic… *sighs*

      I must say wow now. And see,there us nothing we can do to improve sanskar because he is he. I am just trying to shape the sanskar who will remain forever in my readers hearts.

      Lol..baby. I have seen my brother’s friends doing that but even uncle calls it baby..seriously men..!!

      I am really happy that you people didn’t mess up with his baby. Love you too.

    • Anu

      Aww! I know I look crazy in it ?

      And Sanskar is already saturated with all the goodness, cuteness, sacrifices, love, care, selflessness, awesomeness and what not! There’s seriously and absolutely nothing we can do about it.
      And I’m glad that we actually can’t.

  12. Serena

    Awesome part Di I think u read some detective or mysteries novels because it can be clearly seen by your writing style.

    • Sree harini

      Another new name..wow. I just read Sherlock Holmes till now. That’s all dear but thanks for appreaction.

  13. ♥priyu♥

    Whole episode was with mixed emotions sree . U balenced everything perfectly . What only six episodes . No sree u cant to this to us . When i lost my smile ur ff made me smile . I cant imagine my life without ur ff . I am a big fan of helly . First she can make me smile , next ur ff . How’s ur health ?? Please please dont end this na sree please please . Even i love my guitar as lucky loves his car .

    • Sree harini

      Hello priyu..thanks for the appreciation and I am really glad to know that you won’t be able to live without my ff but I will make you learn that..lol. I must end it because I can’t drag anymore by adding scenes.

      Helly fan!! Me, a sansakrian and then vkhokic and I am once again happy to know that I make you smile which is what I love.

      Guitar!! Lovely one ALL THE BEST

  14. Awww lush push epi jani really really enjoyed sanky always ber pain in his lyf so sad the engagement news was really unexpected one but also the happiest one n the car sceen oh my God no words haha literally just imagining the scenario of lucky expression n am laughing now also n the rain scene classy one thank God that sanky can share something with someone at least now overall full wow epi thanx for uploading waiting for lucky’s revenge

    • Sree harini

      Hadiiiiii..omg..missed you a lot girl.you have explained the whole episode in one para and seriously I am not so talented to say tanks in the same way.

      I planned for engagement because its one of the main element for climax. Next update will be on monday

      • Glad to know that u missed me u made my day dear I thought only readers miss the writers n their writings . Actually dear my exams r so near that’s why I am not commenting now a days but dear I read all the previous epis of urs don’t worry n han waiting for Monday desperately 🙂

      • N plz don’t talk about ur talent cox we r seeing ur talent in ur writings my comments are not at all equivalent to ur writings n han don’t need to say thanks as this is d swasan ff n sanky most common dialogue is that there is no sorry n no thank you in friendship haina? ;-);-) So I suppose that we r part of fiction family n apart from that we r friends ri8 ? Is that so or not? <3

  15. sethooty

    Hey Sree how r u Dr…read ur teaser..
    You must take care of ur health?
    Take rest…

  16. Sree harini

    Okay fine…I was at doctor giving some tests and yeah,I am okay now. So will start replying soon.

  17. aashi

    Just fantastic dear!!
    Hope you are fine now!! ?
    Babies was amazing….haha…how brilliantly they destroyed laksh car…….
    Rain part…where both told what they think about rain was nice!! ?…..
    About ap….what a good faker she was!!……and school incident. ..really felt pitied on laksh…..
    That line where sanskaar said that I tolerate anyone was nice….
    Their pranks…seriously haircut???……
    So many wows for you …sanskaar portrayal was just…”no words”…..
    Loved it!!…
    Loads of love??❤???

  18. Shabrin

    Phew!!Such a long part…it was superbbbbbbb in a word and some funny thing will happen in the next part it seems
    And how is your health now????

  19. sree harini

    hello everyone. i think everyone will be mad at me now but i am also feeling very bad for not updating regularly. i have never been like this because i used to triple update for my previous ff’s. the story is that i typed raglak episodes but due to untimely rains in hyderabad,our area is suffering from power cut. so i will update two raglak and one swasan tomorrow for sure. thanks for being patient and i will reply to every comment once the power comes

  20. Hey sree remember me??? I know I comment rarely!! Pls don’t be pissed off dear!
    I loved your episode to the for!! I am actually waiting for raglak!! Missed it so much and ya take care of yourself please. No need to hurry! I know untimely rains in hydrebad!
    Maa amma Nana hydrebad trip plan chesaru kani varsham!!! And also my college no holiday!
    Leka pote nenuippadu Hyderabad lo unnevadini! Anyways tried speaking Telugu I know isuck at it!
    But seriously coming to the episode it was bomb I must say! I totally totally loved it!!
    I don’t know how you manage to woo people with your ff!!!

    But I am crying right now thinking you will end this fan fiction. Please dear don’t end it!
    And even if you end it promise us you will be back with another ff. Pls!!
    But right now tell me how you are and take care. You got ur reports???

    ***love u!!!! My sweet sissy!!! Ummaaahhh***

  21. Hi Sree ,
    How r u dear ??????
    I missed u like hell.Hope u r doing well.Take rest and eat healthy.
    Episode was hilarious.Loved Laksh in this episode.’ Baby’ ,’Second life’ etc. was damn funny.I was laughing like a maniac.Swasan were so cute as always.Yipeeeeeee!!!!!!!! Two updates of Raglak.My happiness has no limit now.I was little bit sad as one of my favourite ff ended today but your update just brushed off all sadness. Gee , it’s going to end soon .* sad* Waiting for next update.
    Take care .Love u sissy.

  22. swathi

    hi…….happy. ..that till now ur both ff is not finished. …raglak I didn’t missed any epi to read but swasan ohh god..I.read all….ur simply best…seriously I sooooo happy….n dear first tc of ur health. …ru okay now????

  23. Lasya

    Hello everyone. I am sree’s friend. Due to weather fluctuations, she was affected by some virus which lead to temporary paralysis and the situation became complicated when pancreatic infection started. As she was already suffering from typhoid, her condition became critical and she is in I.C.U now. I went yesterday to meet her and she asked to inform you all about her condition and also apolozied for not keeping her promise.

    *fingers crossed* please be patient and don’t forget her works. She will be surely back within a week.

    Thankyou everyone.

    • ♥priyu♥

      Lasya is sree ok na , see i am really panicing , please convey my best wishes to her .

    • Anjali

      How is she now Lasya?
      I hope she is recovering?? 😮 😮

      Really worried for her!!

    • Anu

      Ofc Lasya! I just want her to be okay!! Hope she gets well soon. Really soon. Really worried yaar! I already told her so many times to take care.

      Sree please take care and Lasya keep updating us.

      Forget this story I just want my sis to be okay!!

      • angel

        omg……..is she ok??how is her condition now??paralysis???damn….plz ask her to take care and get well soon

  24. vaishnavi

    Sree nenu neeku mundugane cheppane to take care of ur health…. nd dis sudden change in d climate of Hyderabad even i am worried for dis ….anyways atleast now pls take care of urself …eat healthy stay healthy… I am really worried for u ….i hope u will get well soon…u know i want to see u now?????…forget abt dis promise nd all but pls pls pls take care…i will pray for u…

  25. Likhitha

    Hey divya!!!! Hmmmmm…..When I read this episode today….I had many things to tell u..Even before reading this I had many things to share with u…..Many means TOO MANY in this case…..from all these days I wanted to tell u regarding many things which I couldn’t tell….Now when I finally found time to talk with u…I saw ur friend’s comment here….that’s it…I forgot everything for a moment….On seeing the word ICU I panicked….U called me ur di na? So please come soon for ur sister…she is waiting for u here….Don’t leave me like my own sister did….Get well soon and come back… :'( Love you

  26. Nive...

    Icu oh my god … hey lasya how is sree now…? is she ok..? we are really getting worried for her… and pls ask her to take rest… sree we have so much of patience… pls take care of ur health dear…

  27. Harani

    Hey sree take care of your health Dr ..No need to worry about the ff ..your good health and happiness is first ..let everything other than that be ignored. …get well soon Dr ..my heart filled prayers are there for you. take care ..love you loads …just inform us about her health Lasya .pls 🙁

  28. sethooty

    What..Sree..hey Lasya..plz give us her update….after reading Mickey I was in hell shock..I thought she recovered….plz tell her to take rest…I am praying to god ..get well soon Dr…

  29. Joya

    I read rups comment……… Hey lasya plz give update yr……….. I though she recovered…………….
    Plz take care of her……shree take a proper rest………..forget about that promise…..ur health is more imp…..so take care and get wellll soon….

  30. Lasya

    Oh my god! You all really love her a lot and there is no wonder that she always keeps saying me about you.

    So to reduce the tension, I will give details guy . Actually, she was admitted in hospital on Sunday morning as her facial nerves (left side) went numb and its because of some virus which indices temporary paralysis. Thank god that it affected till her neck. So it will be easy for cure and also doctors are giving her some steroids.

    Then, some pancreatic infection started and she was immediately shifted to I.C.U but doctors said that it was not so difficult because they have indentified in early stages and also said that 48 hours in I.C.U would serve that. So she will be shifted to room tomorrow and if the infection gets cured, they will discharge her. About paralysis, it takes three months for compete recovery though 90% will be done by steroids.

    SO BREATHE.. I will make a visit tomorrow and will surely let you know her condition. If possible, I mean it is sree, so she will surely msg you guys..

    Sorry for typos cause I am not used to.

    • Anjali

      Ofc we love sree????

      Ur news makes me less worried….but not completely… Pls do give regular updates about her lasya!!! ????

    • ♥priyu♥

      Lasya say sree that , no need to worry about her ff , whenever she comes back no matter , say her to take care , thanks for the information . We will always support our sree , give a long hug to her from me

  31. swathi

    hello lasya….plz tell r to tc….I am really worried. …how is she now??? plz give us updates. …v just need her to be fine that’s all…..tc sree plz…

  32. Sree harini

    Hello everyone..actually I am scared to face you all because I am sure that everyone will beat me to death??. Lasya has came just now and she showed me your comments.

    Anju, priyu,anu,vaushu,likitha,seetothy, harani,nive,joya,rupikasha and Swathi and many more..thanks gir the sweet prayers and threats.

    Vaishu dear, as I am okay now, you don’t need to visit instead concentrate on EAMCET. I guess it is near. All the best?.

    Priyu darling take a breath. See..I am alive.☺

    Arey anju! You ate looking ugly with a tensed face. Smile a little.☺

    See anu, I took care but this stupid weather …it is the one to be blamed. *pouts*. I will surely take care.☺

    Hey likitha, just loosen up. I am perfectly not fine.??. And ha! I will surely come back to listen all that you have in your mind for me.

    Nive…I know how I will always make you practice being patient..lol.. I will take care friend.

    Harani..you prayers really worked *amazing wink*, see..I am out of I.C.U. I will take care of myself for you all.☺

    So sweet of you seethu do.??and will torture you with my Hindi skills..lol

    Joys..aww. Don’t cry baby?..seriously..I am fine now. You are not at all good with a pink nose..chali abb smile Karo…eee??

    Mickey dear..worry karne ni baat koi nahi hai..I am shifted to room na..so take a deep breath. ???smoke with me.

    Swathi dear…how was your vacation? I am already missing my home?? but ha, I will take care as you wished.

    See, I am grinning like maniac and Lasya is hitting me with pillow, scolding me. Frankly speaking, she is totally impressed by you all and asked me to say hi…so hiiii

    Ughh..I am seriously getting irritated because I must continue taking broths where I was dying hard to eat something..but I.C.U was good..don’t scold me now..it was so peaceful to sleep and I slept very well…very well means very well. I don’t know about my health condition because doctors will never say a word to patients..?? but I hope that I may get discharged by next week.

    And lastly,needhi, shabrin, aanya, Swathi,priyanshi,shreya for commenting and also any,had I and neha for replying.



    Lasya will come tomorrow again and I will reply to you all.don’t think about my condition because I am perfectly happy, surrounded by my parents, nurses come whenever I call them..they feed me…hmm and what more,occasional visits of friends and relatives with baskets of fruits though I cannot eat them.???. So shortly, I am enjoying this royal treatment..

    BYE FOR NOW..cause Lasya must go.. Sorry for any typos..

    • ♥priyu♥

      Sree i was laughing like a mad after reading that ur still alive?? , even i too got the same treatment , take rest and enjoy , and then come back with a bang……………. but sree please take care , nurse ki chappu idi priyu order , nurses andaru na sree ni queen samananga care tisukowali , and thanks to lasya too , please take care *puppy dog eyes* , uff now i can eat properly after lasya’s comment i didnt ate properly

    • Anjali

      Haww…. ugly and me???

      boo… 😛 😛

      Anyways… After reading this, i am smiling and no tensed face… So be happy…. 🙂 🙂 🙂

      Take care… take complete rest!! no thinking about Acceptance or anything now…

      Love you!!!

      And yeah, Thanks Lasya!! For keeping us informed….

    • Joya

      Can i say frankly?????????

      Hume sach me samaj me nahi aa raha hai kya kahe…………..plz take care shreeeeee……………..

  33. swathi

    Hello shree happy very happy to c that ur okay…well my vacation was awesome…n tc dear….enjoy ur royalty ? miss u too….dear…

  34. Lasya

    Hello guys…I am so sorry because I haven’t visited hospital due to personal problems but had called uncle, I mean her dad. He said that Sree is doing well and doctors may discharge her in three days…???
    Bye everyone.

    • Anjali

      That’s soo awesomeee…. Thnxxx lasya!!! Pls give her out love when u meet her tom…???

    • Anu

      Thanks a lot Lasya di! Really a huge burden off shoulders. Was really worried. But glad to know she’s doing well.

    • Likhitha

      Thanks lasya!! I’m happy to know that divya is recovering.. 🙂 thanks for informing!! I can sleep peacefully today…good night! 🙂

  35. Lasya

    Whoever raglak fans are waiting for update, will be rewarded with it. Sree sent me an episode of raglak and I will update by evening once I reach home.

    • ♥priyu♥

      Lasya how is sree ?? Please say her to take care , we all will be waiting for her

  36. Lasya

    Sree’s discharge is delayed because of increased infection..I have posted raglak.
    Thankyou and please remember her works.

  37. sethooty

    Lasya …just tell her to take rest…I really don’t know what to say…she was not discharged..still infection Am scared after reading this..

  38. Aami

    sreee where is the nxt episode…. plzzzzz post it sooon…. i cant to wyt this much more…. plzzzz……. i lvd ur wrk……

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