SWASAN- Acceptance (2)

Thank-you for the wonderful comments. Here is the second part but sorry to say that there won’t be any episode tomorrow. If possible, I will try to upload epi 3 on 30th night.
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Laksh kept pacing through the room while sanskar sat beside the lady on the bed.
” what if something happened to her?” Laksh said in middle of the breaths.
” everything has happened because of you ” sanskar pointed laksh.
“What me?” Laksh said with wide eyes pointing himself.
” yes, if you were quiet, I would have focoussed on driving”
” very good, now you are blaming me. I was drunk” laksh said scrunching his nose
” I don’t know that” sanskar replied sarcastically.
They both stopped arguing when doctor turned to them.
” she is okay now but she needs rest.” Doctor said while handing prescription.
Sanskar went along with doctor while laksh remained with the lady. As soon as sanskar returned, laksh exclaimed.
” bhai, she is really hot. We were blind dude.”

Sanskar shook his head for laksh’s behaviour and turned to her and realised that laksh was absolutely correct.She had absolutely breath taking curves, the green color kurti which she was wearing was torn at some places due to accident but that didn’t affect her charm. Her oyster shell shaoed eyelides were closed together. A small smile on her face even in this condition made sanskar’s heart skip. The strands of her dark hair which were spread across the pillow highlighted her face and sanskar felt like he was staring a moon in the sheets of dark sky. A small bandaid on left side of her forehead, few bandages on her right palm and on legs didn’t stop him from adoring her.
” you are staring” laksh said sheepishly.
Sanskar turned to laksh and gave his best deathly glare but smiled inwardly.
” we need to inform her parents ” sanskar said finally after few minutes.
” but we don’t know anything about her” laksh said confused while glancing surroundings.
” you are right. She didn’t even had a mobile when we brought her here” sanskar said remembering how they brought her to farm house after feeling her pulse.
Meanwhile, the girl opened her eyes and looked around. Cool breeze from the adjacent window touched her cheeks but they pained. She then realised that every inch of her body is paining. She glanced the room and found it to be a very big and unfamiliar one. She turned casually but her breath caught in her throat looking two men staring her. She gulped and grabbed one of the pillow.
” don’t even dare to near me” she said in a low yet sharp voice.

” what! ” sanskar exclaimed.
” I..I will shout” the girl said gripping the pillow.
” oh.so you will hurt the one who helped you” laksh sounded annoyed.
The girl looked down to herself and a sharp pain shoot in her head.
” ahh” she screamed holding her head.
” instead of thanking us, you are..” Sanskar said running his hand through hair.
” you brought me here? What has happened to me? Did you people kidnap me? Or ..” She almost gulped rest of her words.
” shut up” laksh shouted to which she flinched.
” actually you met with an accident and we brought you here” sanskar said calmly.
” oh” she said biting her lower lip.” Sorry”
” that’s okay..actually I was the one who dashed you” sanskar said on low voice without meeting her eyes.

” hmm” swara responded sounding uninterested which surprised sanskar because he expected her to strangle him.
” hey baby, you can feel free. Assume this house to be yours” laksh said smiling.
She smiled back and turned towards sanskar who was busy in typing something in his mobile.
” so this is your house?” She asked after feeling a bit comfortable.
” yeah” laksh replied.
” farmhouse actually” sanskar corrected.
The girl’s widened and looked at sanskar. He immediately felt attracted to her eyes which held something according to him.
” so only we three are here?” She sounded a bit worried.
” don’t need to worry. As I said , feel free” laksh assured her.
” give me your parents number, I will inform them” sanskar said typing something in his phone.
Laksh observed her face becoming dull and she started pursuing her lips.
” it’s okay if you don’t want to” laksh said placing a hand on her shoulder.
” no..actually I am an orphan” the girl said calmly but her voice contained loads of pain which she tried to hide.
Sanskar raisd his lashes to see her and again lowered them.
” I am sorry” laksh sounded gentleman.
” by the way what is your name?” Sanskar asked.

” swara” she said smiling.
“Cool!, very common” laksh said whistling.
Swara and sanskar frowned at laksh as her name was not a common one and everyone knew it
” okay, unique” laksh said raising his hands ” satisfied ”
Swara smiled. Sanskar cleared his throat and turned to swara
” why were you roaming on roads during midnight?”
” actually I am in search of job so I went to meet my owner but that jerk, he asked me to meet me in a restaurant ” swara sounded annoyed.
” and misbehaved” sanskar added and got a nod from swara as response.
Laksh rolled his eyes.
” so where do you stay?” Laksh asked while hopping on bed.

” orphanage, Mumbai ”
” shit” sanskar said throwing his mobile on bed.
” what happened? ” laksh enquired.
” something is fishy with kunal” sanskar said before leaving the room.
Laksh and swara stared at each other for a minute and then laksh smriked. Before he could say anything, sanskar entered the room.
” we are leaving to our manison tomorrow after breakfast” laksh didn’t oppose sanskar as he was totally aware of his business minded brother.
” what about her?” Laksh questioned pointing swara.
” it’s okay. I will leave ” swara sounded disappointed.
” you can live with us until you get a job” sanskar said with a smile.
Swara tried to find any signs of angry or disappointment in his face but his were pure and he meant his words.

” I don’t want your sympathy” swara said breaking the eye contact.
” this is not sympathy swara.” Swara felt butterflies inside her hearing her name from his mouth.
” you need to take rest ” sanskar said while signalling laksh to come out of the room.
“What is your name?” Swara shouted behind sanskar.
Sanskar turned to her and smiled before answering.
” sanskar maheswari”. Swara almost jumped in shock.
” what!! You are a maheswari?” She thinks something and turns to him ” no..I am not going to stay with you. I mean how can I stay?” Swara asked wiggling her eyebrows.
” I am also a human being swara not a cannabial and yeah you stay freely with me I mean we can be friends.” Sanskar explained in matter of fact tone.
” seriously! Friends” swara asked forwarding her hand.
Sanskar smiled and shook hands with her.

” what about me?” Laksh pouted.
” you are always welcome laksh infact there won’t be any friend group with out you” sanskar pulled laksh and three of them shook hands.
” take rest now. Good night ” saying so, sanskar left the room.
” don’t you want to know my name?” Laksh asked raising his eyebrow.
Swara turned to laksh and smiled sheepishly. She then forwarded her hand.
” thank you laksh”. Laksh smriked again and shook his hands.” that’s like my girl” swara raised her eyebrow.

Credit to: Sree harini


  1. L Khan

    Superb dr love u nd ur ffs as always……I always find words to explain my feelings for ur ffsurprise but I’m always disappointed with myself becz I feel that I’m not having words to explain the way u write……it’s kk dr u can post ur next part on 30th night nd actually I’m eagerly waiting for 30th as my results will be out so I’m eagerly waiting for it nd Uffington dr

    • Sree harini

      Results!! Wow..I pray God that you should bang in all subjects..its okay dear, you no need to find any new words for expressing your feelings. I can understand it NY the way you comment.

    • Sree harini

      Thank kyou dhara..oh!! You found SWASAN cute!!! I will really feel happy if you will say the same after three episodes because it is not going to be the one you think.

  2. sweety

    Fabulous!!!!!!! loved it yaar…….the way u r portraying the characters is just awesome…….and yup its like I am again falling for this sanskars character…… And even I liked laksh character of this ff…..keep it up yaar….

    • Sree harini

      I am damn sure that you will fall for sanskar again. I specially wanted to potray him perfectly ( sanskarholic). That’s good to read that you loved laksh and you will surely love him more.

  3. Anjali

    Awesome sree harini….
    I don’t know if you remember me…I think I’ve commented only once or twice in ur seven shot…
    But I srsly love ur writing… And this story I just too good…. i can’t wait for the next….
    Sorry I couldn’t comment in the first chapter…
    I read it in the morning..but as I had 2 tests I did I T have time to comment so commenting now…
    And a request…. as an experienced writer could you check out my ff me maheshwari and I… I have uploaded 24 chapters…
    If you have time and if u r interested pls do check it out…. I would love to listen to ur opinion of it…. ??

    • Anjali

      Mr maheshwari and I*
      Btw I forgot to wish u for ur finals….
      All the best… do well and post soon…??

    • Sree harini

      Oh..so the author of maheswari and I is you..that’s too good dear. I think you have started it after finishing my fiction. I have read few parts of it and I thought it to be you but didn’t comment cause at the time of my fiction, you had another emblem..seriously girl..you are super and I promise you to read all the chapters once I finish my exams….its okay no need of any apologize.. All the best for your exams.

      • Anjali

        Thank you Soo much….
        Glad you liked.it…
        Yeah…pls do read it later once you finish ur exams…
        And thnxx for the wishes…

      • Anjali

        Lol…I’ll do my best to upload within the next 2 days…
        I actually have phy so may not be able to… but i’ll try..

  4. shan

    very nice sree….i was shocked nd surprised to c ur ff sree…..i was seriously happy when i saw ur ff…..no words to describe how happy i was when i c ur ff…..thank you nd we will wait for ur ff sree….

    • Sree harini

      I guess this is first time you are commenting..well thank-you so much for appreciation and no need to wait dear. Read it when it gets uploaded ..

  5. Anjali

    I just saw the comment of you being a sanskaaraholic….
    I am one tooooo…. A HUGE SANSKAAR FAN….
    And I love the way you portray his character… even in ur swasan ff…he was too good….
    Its always a treat to read it….

    • Sree harini

      High Fi Anjali…SANSKAR’S charecter is something beyond words. The intensity of his love for kavitha which made him bad then his hatred and love , caring towards swara..everything is just perfect but now a days they are really making him dumb….

      • Anjali

        And VARUN KAPOOR <3 <3 is too awesome…. I love him soooo much….

        I just hope they finish this kavya drama soon…And we see some actual realistic stuff

    • Sree harini

      Oye…I am very good at memorising names and specially I have a set of names which I will never dare to forget dear and you are one among them so never ask that.

  6. Neha

    Superb as usual but plzz let me know dear when you’re going to upload next and sorry I missed this to say in previous part all the very best for your exams ?

    • Sree harini

      I will try to upload it either on 30th night or 31st morning dear..thank-you so much for you wishes.

      • Neha

        Hi sree I just now read your comment for me in your last part yeah I too consider you as my friend and you will always be you were right dear I cried reading last epi of Saba’s ff u know when you guys were telling that sanskar died in last part I was like what may be the reason but seriously its end I never imagined every part was so touchy that I don’t have words sometimes I used to hate sanky then love him pity swara liked her courage after reading 50th and 51st part I was thinking that swara will lead him to a normal life may it will take months years but he will be changed but the end just shocked me I was just thinking that for what reason he brought her and for that girl only he ended himself when he said I love you too to swara I wished swara had listened it but no when she woke in midnight just bcoz of her bad instinct about her husband I wonder how she would have felt then her whole world would have become haulted I was reading those last parts in night around 11 or12 and after reading my tears didn’t stopped I’m still thinking that Saba might come back and tell that sanskar is alive is in coma anything like that but just wanna hear that swara’s love and world is still with her but I know it will not and that last HOPE I don’t know whether its a hope or reason to be alive but really it was terrific I wish to know that this was worst nightmare of swara nothing real for the first time I’m having this feeling what it feels when you accept someone with all his faults love him try to cure him and he just leaves but sanky wanted to pay for his deeds can’t criticize him also he started loving her gave her position of being the real wife and real happiness but just one wrong addiction that doctors’ words lead him to leave her don’t know but I’m still in affect of ff I don’t know whose love was more swara’s or San’s and don’t wanna know also but this tragic end I never imagined he took soul from her and gave hope

    • Sree harini

      Aww..thank-you so much dear..hope I will try to entertain my best and make you fall for laksh

  7. Sree harini

    Exams time…so I won’t be able to reply you all but will surely meet u in next episode. All the best for who are writing exams.

  8. harshitha

    Sree harini rocked again such a superb episode I loved it the way u write and portray is superb I love all ur ff alot ?

  9. needhi

    Wow…Perfectly written. Swasanlak convo highly suited the situation.i really don’t know for how many Sanskaar’s character i am going to fall but ya i am pretty sure that this cool headed businessman with little attitude is the next one in my list for whom i am going to be head over heels , after all it’s my sweet sissy’s creation ,so i am bound to develop a soft corner for sanskaar. To be honest Sanskaar name itself has became a big bang.i mean the momet i read this name my expectation becomes high. This name has surely done some spell bind on me and what to say about VK , the guy always manages to make my heart beat skip. Coming back to your ff ,swasan were really cute and adorable. His smile ,swara’s biting of her lover lips ,her expressions and his gestures towards her were just excellent. Laksh seems quite interested in Swara but as we all know the character swara is just born to become Sanskaar’s ,so there is nothing to panick even if Laksh loves Swara.Really looking forward to the next update.ummmmmmmmmmmahhhhh.Love u.one more thing u have not seen my comment in written updates because i started commenting in December .At that time , saba , kashish and most of swasan fans left the site.i got bonded well with shuva ,nik ,neha and rids as they were still commenting at that time.As a reader ,i am highly satisfied with your ffs , it’s just i love your ideas and just want to swim across each and every innovative thought of yours but it’s only possible when u write ff. I guess i am turning out to be selfish by imposing my wishes on u .i can understand u have studies and a lot of other things to deal with , so no problem dear u just proceed with what u have planned. Love u loads. ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS.Study well.i want my sis to rock the exam. Do read Swasan -Mr.Maheshwari and i , when u have time.it’s worth reading.Missing vini di. I feel like she has not uploaded her ff from ages.

  10. Priya

    Hi sree harini do u remember me I missed u badly after ur last ff but y u told this will be my last ff pls don’t say that again and I want 1 favour can u write swasan and raglak combined ff like limitless love it was ur best ff according to me and pls try to write 1 combined

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