Swasan _ does love need perfection ? Episode 23

Hello friends sinin here with the next part of DLNP. Hope you all like it. But but but… Why the comments are again reducing. Please all readers do comment. And thank you for comments on the last part.

Morning 4 am
Swara was still in the position leaning against the door, but she is sleeping. Sanskar opens the door and saw her sitting on the floor.
He kneels down and cups her face. Tear marks are the proof that she cried the whole night.
Sanskar (monologue) I’m sorry swara….this is the last time I’m hurting you.. But please don’t be stubborn.. Agree for the last time.

Swara slowly opens her eyes sensing the touch of her love. As soon as she woke up sanskar stood up and went from there ignoring her. Swara to ran behind him. She was very happy that he didn’t do anything wrong.

Sanskar : ram Singh ! Prepare the car..
Swara became puzzled. Sanskar went inside his room and started to bring out his stuffs from cupboard.
Swara : sanskar…are you going somewhere?
Sanskar : I’m going on a business tour.. Don’t know when will return. If you want I will sent you to Sonagora.
Swara became totally shocked and tried to stop him.
Swara : sanskar please…don’t go..I know your angry with me but please forgive me..how will I stay without you..
Sanskar jerks her hand
Sanskar : if you can lie to me, if you can doubt me then you can also stay without me..
Sanskar turns back. Swara sits on the floor with thud.
Swara : please mat jao…how will I stay without you.. Please don’t leave me..I leave my family that’s why I didn’t want you to bear the same pain.. I wanted to became educated and perfect for you so that they accept me..whatever I did was just for you…please don’t leave me…
She keeps crying. Sanskar closed his eyes in guilt.
He turns and make her stand up.
Sanskar : you’ll do whatever I say…
Swara : yes..I’ll do whatever you say…
Sanskar : then leave your education…
Swara : its over and bi just have exam…
Sanskar : don’t attend it !
Swara : what !
Sanskar : yes..if you love me and then don’t attend it..
Swara : but…
Sanskar : no if and but…decision is yours..
He holds her by shoulder
Sanskar : I don’t want to go swara please stop me…
Swara recalls all her moments with her friends.. Their teaching and specially Joy…
She nods in yes.
Sanskar hugs her happily
He brings her on the balcony.
Sanskar : do the last things for my satisfaction..
He brings her notes and ID card
Sanskar : throw all this !
Swara looks at him in helplessness
Sanskar : swara..!
Swara throws all the notes in the air. All this flies and falls on garden and other place,the new sun brings darkness again in her life.. Kamla and Suraj saw this from their window in helplessness.
Sniff was to inside his doghouse and looks the scenery.
Swara looks at her notes on ground. She feels her dream in tear into pieces and can’t be gathered again.
Sanskar makes her face him. He cups her face and removes her tear. He signs her not to cry and kissed her forehead.
Swara hugged him tightly. Sanskar became amuse and hugs her back. Sanskar feels his shirt is becoming wet… But he didn’t stop cause crying will help to remove the pain which he have given her.

Sanskar says while careressing her hair…” We will go and inform Mr mitral about your decision.”
Swara (monologue) : what will answer joy…how will I face all..I have broke their trust.. They had so many expectations from me…sanskar…your love costs me a lot…

At pathshala
All are sitting together and talking about swara.
Shravan : when will Swara didi come ?
Siya : yes…its so late..
Piya : I want to know her love story with the business tycoon.
Uncle : what will happen vto our J ?
All looks sad and worried. All knows that joy loves swara.
Joy and nandu were sitting far from them.
Nandu : everything is fine..but why her husband bought another Lady as his wife… And who was kavita if swara is Mrs Maheshwari ?
Joy : im having a negative feeling.. Maybe he is hiding something from shona..maybe name and fame issue..

Shravan : shona di…
Joy looks at the direction.. And saw his shona coming… No she is Swara sanskar Maheshwari with her husband..

Guys I know this is too small but if I got good response only then I Will post the next post..that you’ll open your eyes in morning and see my ff that too a long chappy….so all please comment.


  1. Pramudi

    Superb dear. Loved it a lot. 😍
    Sanskaar is vrery selfish..😠 He always uses swara’s innocence.
    Plz.. Plz.. Update the nxt one tomorrw.

  2. Madhu

    Feeling like killing sanky…..why he doing that……plz dr dont want to see swara like this plz dr do somthing……we want strong swara not like this……plz dr bring some lights to swara’s life……plz dr……….if he truly loves swara he never do that…….he must support swara instead destroy her dreams……..

    Part was soo emotional dr and superb……
    Fantastic dr…loved it….

    Plz dr dont feel bad becoz of my comment…….i truly love ur ff thats why i said all those things……

  3. anu

    awesome… i just hope swara didnt stop her study but she stopped… she lov es him very much but he … update next part soon….

  4. Heltej

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    Ohh this sanskar…. He is idiot…. Everyone wants their wife to be educated… Here this sanskar dont want his wifr to be educated! Fool!
    Poor swara… Felt bad for her! Waiting for next update

  5. Pia

    Awesome update as I said in last comment Plzz brings sanskar truth in front of swara soo that she can realize that he dosent love her its just he is habituated to her Plzz make her strong and sanskar to suffer & realize her importance

  6. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Wow superb chapie.. bt y is sanskar doing dis?? Swara left her dreamz for his happiness bt y cnt he see her hapiness.. sanskar try to learn her feelings too.. calm before strom waiting for dat.. d day swara lioness roaring against sanskar for his wrong doings. Yup its small chapie. Wil b waiting for long one do post it fast.

  7. MOU

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    He is doing same thing again n again……when he understand her…nd why she don’t protest him to do this thing…….don’t know what happens next…..

  8. G.S

    Feeling sad for swara…why sanky behaving like that..swara doing all for sanky na…so sad…gd epi contnue soonnn..

  9. Kakali

    Nice chappy.. loved it.. 😊.. Sanskar is becoming selfish.. bcz he cant loose Swara,, he loves her bt nt realising… only 4 him Swara left her dream.. why cant he see her dreams?? why is he not understanding that she wants to learn only 4 him.. she wants to become perfect 4 him.. n moreover he is using her innocence… urghhhhh let Swara know his truth..BDW nxt part soon…☺☺

  10. little princess

    Dear….its awesome part yaar…but dont let sanskar play with her feelings anymore…he is just using her…his selfishness is indicating more than his love…he could atleast confess all his bad deeds…but he didnt…. Instead of that he again played with her emotions n created a stupid drama…disguisting yaar…atleast nandhu n joy sensed something fishy.. But why cant our swara sense this… How can she be this much blind in his love….expose him asap infront of her…but dont break her….i am damn sure that she will be shattered to know the real truth of her life…let laksh n ragini come for her rescue soon and make her understand everything… One more thing,i thnk randhir is a good guy..but his wife that cavity is not less than a vamp…she dont deserve him….she should get the punishment for her deeds..she should suffer for hurting a innocent soul like swara…make randhir to support swara…let them share a bro-sis bond…make her a successful lady…also make sanskar realise his love for her…make him a good selfless human being who knows to love unconditionly n care n respect others…joy,nandu n her frnds should support swara…i hope joy,laksh,randhir,n ragini will play a important role in helping swara n uniting swasan…but teach sanskar a good lesson that he will never ever forget in his life πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ ….also teach that cavity n their partners in crime a superb lesson that they should not forget as well as remind them before hurting someone or playing with others emotions… Also expose that sahil n the truth behind his so called coaching center infront of the society…such illegal activities should be prohibited…show those dirty creatures their exact place…update next chappy asap….love ur ff

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  12. Riya

    Awesome….nowadays I become ur fan..from where u got ideas ….btw poor swara..feeling bad for her..pls post next sooon..😘😏 ….and pls post next part of Royal love ❀ too..waiting…

  13. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Nice….y does sanskar want to stop her studies? He too wanted a wife who is well educated and beautiful. Swara should not stop her studies. Upload soon

  14. Serena

    |Registered Member

    Yaar ab toh swara koko strong bana do… I liked joy..he is becoming CID…Ab maza aayega…
    N really now I want strong swara

  15. Mica

    |Registered Member

    how selfish this sanskar..
    1, he just want her body
    2. he want swara being uneducated forever
    huft this sanky… i just wanna…aarrrrgghhhhh
    wish swara know about his bad intention toward her…. and say good bye..

  16. Tulina

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    Let sanskar go to hell……….reveal sanskar truth to swara ASAP……….swara should not stop her studies………..update the next part today if possible………..

  17. Bhargavi

    All were telling the same but never I used to feel the same whenever I open the page but one think I don’t know why I love the fan fictions of this serial. Now I think it’s just my addiction to it as many were abruptly stopping in the middle telling that they have their own exams and so on and some are not even mentioning the reason and just discontinuing the ff. Then you only tell me how will readers feel like commenting.
    It happens sometimes that all can’t comment at the same time and let it be yar. Why you should stop your ff when many are there who are interested to read.

  18. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Awesome very nice….. Sanskar is very selfish…. I dont want this swara…. Pls show her boldness…. At first she didn’t study so she believed sanskar blindly…. But now she knows many thing…. Then y she is believing him blindly??? Dont say bcoz she loves him….. K dr leave it want to see swara’s bold character….. And sinin are you not satisfied with 35 comments dr???? Many writers are getting just less than 20….. But they are updating…. U get more comments then y u r saying like this??? If u are busy in studies or anything that u cant update its k dr or if u get less comments then k….. But u get more than 30 comments then y u r saying that only i will update when i get more comments????

    • Sinin_kabir


      Im really very sorry to hurt you all…I’ll never do it again.. Promise but I swear I posted the next part last night..I don’t know why it’s not published here

  19. seebu

    Awesome dear….but very short part😒😒😒n sanky is very selfish…poor swara she left her education for sanky…

  20. Arshaanya

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    Sanskar is a selfish man… he doesn’t love swara.. he only used her for his satisfaction ..
    I want him to suffer so much… m vry angry on sanskar aftr reading dis… feeling vry bad for swara… when wil she become strong cnt w8 more… post next part ASAP

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