SWARASANSKAR! A journey from revenge to love<3! Chapter11

HII GUYS!! THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR COMMENTS! SO HERE IS THE ELEVENTH PART OF MY STORY!! AND ARE YOU GUYS ENJOYING IT??? PLEASE DO COMMENT!! SO HERE WE GO!!!! IWANT TO CONVEY MY MESSAGE TO EVRYONE THAT I AM BORED OF THAT SANSKAR WHO IGNORES HIS FEELINGS FOR SWARA AND ALWAYS JUST OBEYS HER IGNORING HIS FEELINGS! I WANT THIS GREY SHADED SANSKAR!! BUT YOU DON’T WOORY HE WILL CHANGE SOON!!! LOVE IS BLOSSIMING!! 
Swara is standing at the entrance of the rooftop of Maheswari Mansion. It is very cold there. It is the Dawn of December. She is rubbing her palms and running it over her face to keep herself warm. She is in her wedding dress and had wrapped tight the jacket of Sanskar which once he gave her to keep her warm. She feels like she is in his arms. Its silent everywhere. The only sound that persists is the sound of the night. She is looking here and there in search of something rather someone. Time is passing but she still hasn’t found the one she is looking for. Unable to wait anymore she dials the last call. She is breathing heavily. Where are you? She manages to ask.
The voice: Behind you.
Swara immediately turns around.
Its him! His Sanskar! 
He had came back.

Sanskar walks ahead and opens his arms and signals Swara to cone into his arms. Swara runs to cover the distance between them. The jacket had slipped down her body but she isn’t worried about it because she has found her Sanskar. She hugs him. Her eys are still closed. She quivers. Sanskar rubs her back to calm her down.
Swara in a tensed voice says: Where were you?
I am here, Sanskar whispers in her ears. A tear rolls down her eyes. She has tightened her grip around her Sanskar. When Swara opens her eyes she sees the sun is about to rise.
Love is where unseen and unsaid things
merge with each other where silence is thirsty of happenings!!

Then all of a sudden Swara wakes up to the sound of a knock on the door. She wakes up and sees she is still lying in the floor and her head in on the bed. She adjusts her face, wipes her tears and goes to poen the door. She opens the door and sees Ragini. She is wearing a pink and blue sarre with a veil on her head.
Ragini: Swara you are not ready yet? Go get ready. Maa is calling you. We have to do the rituals.
SWara nods and to change. She comes down wearing a green saree. She comes to the kitchen.
Uttara: Swara bhabi why are you so late?? She teases her.
Parineeta: Uttara, it was the first night of her marriage. May be she was busy with Sanskar. All Laughs.
SWara with tears: SAnaksr had not came. I was all alone the whole night.
Sujata: What are you saying?
AP: Where is Sanskar? Call Laksh.
Ragini calls Laksh and handover the mobile to AP.
AP: Laksh where is Sanskar?
Laksh: Ma Bhai is in office. Yesterday actually he met with a accident. He will come in the evening.
Ap tells everything to the women.
Sujaata: Thank God my son is alright.
SWara: Let him come in the evening.

EVENING
Sanskar arrives and straight goes to his room. He sees Swara but ignores her and goes to the cupboard and take out his cloth. Swara runs and hugs him from behind.
SWara: Are you alright?
Sanskar jerks.
Swara: Where were you last night. I was waiting for you the whole night?

Sanskar: Who told you to wait? Did I Said?
Swara: What are you saying Sanskar?
Sanskar: Leave it. Take this and see it?
Swara opens the file and sees it. She falls down. Some had pulled the rug under her feet. She starts crying. She breaks down.
Swara: What is this Sanskar?
Sanskar: Divorce paper.
Swara: but why? WE love each other. We promised to be with each other throughout our life.
Sanskar: Fake promises doesn’t last long. You love me. But I don’t love you. I was seeking my revenge on you for your slap. This is your punishment which you have to pay your whole life. Now sign these pares and get lost from my house.
Loving for the second time isn’t sweet; it’s bitter, and hurt more than the first
Saying these he walks to the washroom.
Swara: Sanskar( she calls in a low tone)
Sanskar hears her but ignores her and walks.
Swara falls unconscious.
Feeling like, life has been so unfair to me, but what can I say except, “I’m still here.” So I’m determined to make the best out of it, take every opportunity as a blessing, and live the rest of my life to the fullest.
Sanskar comes out of the washroom and sess Swara lying on the floor. He screams her name and lifts her on the bed. He calls everyone. Adarsh cals the doctor.
After Examining her the doctor comes out.
Doctor: She got the biggest shock of her life. But its amazing to see that she has not lost her hope of living. She still wants to live.
Sanskar who was almost in verge of cring gets happy to listen the doctor’s words.
Yes, I understand why things had to happen this way. I understand his reason for causing me pain. But mere understanding does not chase away the hurt. It does not call upon the sun when dark clouds have loomed over me. Let the rain come then if it must come! And let it wash away the dust that hurt my eyes!

GUYS THERE IS NO PRECAP BECAUSE I WANT TO KEEP IT AS A SUSPENSE.

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THE STORY! SORRY IF IT BORED YOU!

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Credit to: JYOTII

53 comments

  1. Kavita

    Please give us th next update soon…. Sanskar loves her but is not aware of it… I m sure they will find love… Please update soon… Awaiting

  2. Tania

    He has feelings for her but does not want to except as he had earlier started to make relationship with her only because of his so called revenge.
    Good episode.

  3. Varu

    Hey nice going….
    Pls make sanskar realise his love for swara slowly. …. make him realise her love dept… and nice character of her… and his inner feeling for swara. ..
    And show some spicy tom and jerry fight bw them….
    I love ur fan fiction very much dea… I WAiting for next update desperately….

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