Swaraginiti ki kahani (chapter 15)

Hello guys…I am back with chapter 15….Guys some of u have questions about Swara being pregnant….some of u even asked me not to do this…but all the ff are showing couples get married,then they have kids and happy ending…I am thinking of doing something else…am I wrong?Please do tell me…

Lets go for the episode….(I’ll wait for your answer and will follow what the majority says…so twist is postponed)

Laksh is tensed to see Swara unconscious..He spinkles water on her eyes and she regains her consciousness…
Laksh:Can’t u take care of yourself?
Swara:Laksh,I’m fine….
Laksh:Yeah I can see how much fine u are…Lets go to doctor….
Swara:No need..its just that..ki I did not eat anything since morning and because for weakness….
Laksh:Whats this? Okay I’ll bring something for u to eat…u wait here…

The scene shifts to Ragsan(They is a mall)
Rags:Sanky..why did u bring me here?
Sanky:To dance…
Rags:What?
Sanky:See it’s a mall…Why do people come to malls?
Rags:Shopping…
Sanky:Yes…
Rags:Why did u bring me here?
Sanky:I wanted to gift u something….so I bought u here…
Rags smiles…They go to a jewellery shop….
Sanky ask Rags to choose something foe her…
Rags:U have a better choice…so u choose..
Sanky;How do u know that I have a better choice?
Rags:Because u chose me…..
Sanky:Okay madam….
Sanky selects a pendent for Ragini….
Rags:See I said na u have a better choice..such a beautiful pendent it is….
They leave the shop…

The scene shifts to Nitant…They are watching a horror movie…
Niti:Seriously Sid….this is our first movie….and u bought me to watch this horror movie and that to with your good for nothing friends…
Sid:Niti..i like horror movies…
Niti:I like romantic movies…..so I am leaving…
One of Sid’s friend Samir was watching her with lust….
Samir in mind:No u don’t deserve this Sid Niti…u deserve someone like me……this is the best chance…
Samir follows Niti….Its a empty/isolated corrider…
Niti sees Samir following her…
Niti:Samir what are u doing here?
Sam:I was just(He goes near her)
Niti:What are u doing Samir….stay away from me…
Samir:Why are u with that fattu Sid…a beautiful girl like u should be with a handsome guy like me….
Niti;Just shut up…
Niti starts running…..but falls down…
Samir:Ohho….Why are u running…u should be running from guys like Sid…
Niti:Aren’t u ashamed of doing this to your friend’s fiancé…
Samir:What shame if the girl is so beautiful as u then no shame….
(He is about to touch her when Sid hold his hand)
Sid:How dare u touch my Niti?
Samir:No no Sid..u are misunderstanding me…..she was the one who was trying to woo me….
Sid:Shut up….
Sid start beating him……..Samir runs away and Niti hugs him tightly…..

Precap:Depends on your decision….

Credit to: Eva

25 comments

  1. Riddhi Shah.

    Sid & Niti’s Marriage will happen…But Sanskaar & Swara’s Marriage will happen & Laksh & Ragini’s Marriage will happen…And Love After Marriage between SwaSan & RagLak…
    Biggest twist ever in a Fan-Fiction…

    • xxx

      this always happens in the ff’s… when they get married they always swap the bride or the groom around… plz dont do that twist Eva.. plzzz

  2. swasantha

    Sorry if im hurting you but i think it will actually make no sense if swara bcoms pregnant. I hope u get my point. Thanx and Apologies once again…..

    • xxx

      because her and laksh got intimate after confessing their love…
      That can happen to some girls befor marriage !!!

  3. Sathya

    I am fine with whatever twist you’re gonna place in ff. Pls do continue as I will always look forward to urs. The twist must be interesting and diff from other ff, if making Swara pregnant will do that, then my vote is yes.

  4. inu

    U are trying to do something different that’sgood but don’t separate the pairs and make it like they show in the serial.

  5. Eva for god sake dont separete pairs and come on yar its just few days before they got initimated
    Hiw can she be pregent withindays its impissible show some logic dear

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