swaragini- its written (episode 5)

Hello everyone..this is simran..thankyou for reading my story and commenting and building my confidence…your comments gives me more confidence..thanks everyone..
I need a suggestion from all of you..do you want me to quickly wind up the ragsan part in 4-5 episodes more or you want me to drag it to 8-9 episodes more…plzz do tell me..then I will continue my story accordingly.
Previous episode link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-written-episode-4/

Recap: Ragsan meets at cafe..both are happy remembering their moments.
Next day.
Location: Kolkata. Maheshwari house.
Sujata: Jiji…what are you doing…
Annapurna: Am ordering sweets sujata..I don’t know why iam not feeling preparations are going..
Sujata: We will do everything jiji..dont worry…uttaraaaaa come her fast….
Annapurna: Tomorrow we have to leave for Kolkata..we don’t have tym and lots of preparations are not done yet..am very tensed sujata..
Sujata: Jijii…sit here..drink water..what happened to u..
Annapurna: If sanskaar’s papa would have been here, he would have done everything perfect..and am not able to manage this much also..he always dreamt of sanskaar’s marriage to be a grand event..
Just then sanskaar enters..
Sanskaar: Who told you maa dad is not with us..he is always there with us and blessing us..and you don’t worry about marriage..we will do everything by tomorrow and i will arrange a grand reception after my tour..
Uttara: Yess maa..we need not to be tensed..bhai is super excited for marriage..he will arrange everything grand according to Bhabhi’s choice…
Sanskaar eyes her…sujata scolds her and then everyone laughs…
Uttara: By the way bhai, where are you going after marriage.
Sujata: Yes sanskaar…where you both will go..
Sanskaar: Actually maa I haven’t planned anything yet..
Uttara: Don’t lie bhai..I know from last two days you are planning for that…
Everyone laughs at him and he runs away blushing.
Location: Mumbai. Marriage day.
Sharmistha goes in swaragini’s room.
Sharmista: My princess is looking so beautiful in the wedding dress..may you get all the happiness in your life..

Ragini: Thank you maa..she smiles sadly.
Sharmistha: What happened?
Ragini: Nothing maa..
Swara: Actually maa am looking more beautiful than diii…so dii is feeling inferiority complex.
Sharmistha: Swara go and asks Shekhar in how much time baraat will arrive.
Swara: No maa…am not going.. Am not ready yet..
Sharmistha eyes her and sign her to go…swara leaves.
Sharmistha : Now tell me what happened.
Ragini: I don’t know maa…am feeling nervous. Am not sure whether I will manage everything..whether I will keep him happy or not..and I can’t live without you all…
Sharmistha cups her face and said: Ragini, every girl has to go through this day. You are lucky you got sanskaar. I know you both will be happy together. Sanskaar is very good boy. you love him naa? If you feel that he is not the man for you, then tell me..its not late..
Ragini: No maa…nothing like that..i like him…but am not sure if he will be happy with me..
Sharmistha smiles: He loves you..that only matters first..
Ragini remember always

β€œYou may not be his first or his last. He loved before, he may love again. But if he loves you now, what else matters? He’s not perfectβ€”you aren’t either, and the two of you may never be perfect together but if he can make you laugh, if he cause you to think twice, and admit to being human and making mistakes, hold onto him and give him the most you can. He may not be thinking about you every second of the day, but he will give you a part of him that he knows you can breakβ€”his heart. So don’t hurt him, don’t change him, don’t analyze and don’t expect more than he can give. Smile when he makes you happy, let him know when he makes you mad, and miss him when he’s not there..the real lover is the man who can thrill you by kissing your forehead or smiling into your eyes or just staring into space.
Ragini smiles . She understands everything now.
Just then swara enters: Maaaa they are about to come…come fast.. Ohh god am not ready…..
Sharmistha: Don’t shout swara..go and ready..she kisses Ragini on her forehead and says ” remember my words betaa” and she leaves..
Ragini smiles. .
Maheswari family has come..they are welcomed by gadodia family. ..the marriage rituals start.
Panditji asked them to call Ragini.
Swara brings her…Ragini’s and sanskaar’s eyes met. They had a long eyelock. Swara notices it and elbows Ragini..

Swara: Diii you can concentrate on jiju later…first handle your dress.
Ragini blushes..sanskaar can’t take his eyes off from her.
Marriage rituals start………………..they take seven rounds and promises for lifetime..
Ragini thinks: I promise you sanskaar that I will keep you happy always.
Sanskaar: I promise you Ragini l will always be with you and love you.
Panditji asks groom to fill sindoor.
Sanskaar while filling sindoor says: I love you Ragini..
Ragini closes her eyes and she blushes……
Marriage is completed..
Both takes blessing from elders and its tym for her bidaaai..
Ragini is crying. She hugs everyone ….she says byee to everyone..
Sumi: Don’t forget my words beta…I will miss you..
Shekhar: It seems as if yesterday only you were 6 years old asking me for a chocolate and today my doll is grown up going to her home.
Ragini hugs him..everyone cry..
Swara: Diiii go away fast..jiju is waiting for you…
Ragini hugs her and both cries..
Everyone says bye to Ragini and she sits in the car..car starts.
Ragini sees them from window and cries hard..
Sanskaar holds her hand and consoles her….he rests her head on his shoulder…sanskaar kisses her forehead. Ragini felt good…she felt comfortable….she remembers sumi’s words and thinks. “maa is right…i love you sanskaar”

Sanskaar: What are you thinking my wife.
Ragini nods her head in noo.and says nothing…she holds his hand…
Both spend the most valuable tym of their life together in silence communicating with their hearts….
Precap: Sanskaar leaves for Russia.

Credit to: simran

34 comments

  1. anu

    nice and i think just came thought is ragini dead in ur ff.. in 1st part you told sanskar with a baby and calling swara when she is in temple and adressing baby as like her daughter,,,, please clear me.. anyone..

    • simran

      Hey Anu..thanx for commenting..I will clear it to you..actually the guess you made previously is right…i had scripted my story in that way..but that is just a small part of my story…my story will not end after swasan falling in love so easily..it will be a different story after swasan marriage..till swasan marriage you may find the story common..but I wont bore you guys..i will present it in a different way..my main story starts after swasan marriage..n swasan will be forced to marry..as you guessed it..but everything will be presented in a different way… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. Anu

    dear you can make it like this na sanskar is having infatuation towards ragini nd misunderstand it to be love because first love or infatuation nd true live is two different thing plz make it like this

    And u can make that ragsan dont love each other theu r just pretending to love each other nd sanskar love swara md eagini love laksh show some past in ragini nd sanskar POV that how they bith saw swalak nd fell for them nd then u can show that sanskar has agreed for this because swara is ragini sis nd ragini new about sanskar love nd same situation is with ragini
    So they both decided to get close to their love

    • simran

      Thanxx for your suggestions dear…i will try to add the suggestion in first para- the infatuation part…this is a nice idea..i will definitely use it..
      Second para don’t go well with my story……thanxx again friend πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  3. lovely

    plz don’t end ragini character it’s my req even though it is ff I’m connected to it make ragsan, swalak as a pair don’t separate tgem

    • simran

      I will show ragsan moments..but dear in the end it will be swasan… Ragini’s character is a strong one…I will not end it completely..

  4. faima

    Make sme mre ragsan scene yaar….Any ways at last ua mkng it to swarasan….so plz make 11epi ragsan

  5. Vini

    Very nice,actually,I am a swasan fan,so if it is a swasan fan fiction wish to read that soon,but write u
    What u have planned,cos at the end it is your effort and imagination,and mother’s advice to Ragini.that part,very nice,infact credit goes to you, the writer..superb.

    • simran

      Thank you so much…this was one of the most valuable comment for me…and I will start swasan part after 6-7 episodes… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • simran

      Thank you naimi….thanx for regularly appreciating me…and I will add more ragsan scenes… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  6. K

    Extend it and those who don’t like ragsan don’t read it we ragsan fans never come in between ur swasan ffs and say that pls end soon we can’t bear it anymore then who are u to say so

    • simran

      Hey dear.. Don’t be angry..dont worry because I will give equal importance to everyone…and everyone is special for me whoever is reading my story…..so don’t worry…you will get to see a lot of ragsan scenes.. πŸ™‚

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