swaragini- its written ( episode 15)

Recap: Ragini’s death. Swara gains consciousness.
Sharmistha: Swara, how are you beta.
Swara: Swara, who swara..am swara..i cant remember anything…oh godd…my head is paining..and she cries in pain..
Sumi starts crying: Doctor, what happened to my daughter.
Doctor: Please, give us some time..you all go outside..i will check her..
Sumi cryingly: No..am not going anywhere..i had lost my one daughter..i can’t afford to lose my second daughter…please doo something…..
Doctor: Please go outside..let me check her…please take her..
Sanskaar: Maaa, come..let doctor check her..
Three of them come outside..
Shekhar: What is happening…what happened….
Sanskaar: Papa, be strong…everything will be fine..nothing will happen to swara..
Shekhar cries..

Just then doctor comes..you all please come to my cabin….
Doctor: Listen shekharji, listen with patience…your daughter swara is suffering from anterograde amnesia . She got hit on her sensitive parts of brain..
Sumi: We cant understand.
Doctor: She had lost her memory..she will regain her memory but it can take days, weeks, Months…we can’t predict. She don’t remember anyone..
Shekhar: Then do something to help her regain her memory..
Doctor: We tried a lot..but whenever we tried she fainted..at this time we can’t give much stress to her brain..it will be dangerous for her..she may lose her life….
Sumi cries..
Doctor: We had given her injection…now you all can meet her tomorrow..you all can go home..
Shekhar: Tomorrow..no..we will stay here only.
Doctor: You all need to be fresh..go and get fresh…you all should be happy infront of swara…
Everyone comes home..

Shekhar told everything at home..
Dadi: This all happened because of swara..she killed my ladoo…
Shekhar: Maa..what are you saying….she herself is suffering a lot..please..
Dadi: Don’t stop me..am right….she killed my ladoo..i will never forgive her..
Sumi: Maa…plzzz….don’t say like that..we all…
Dadi: Stop it sumi. You will say this because you are swara’s maa..
Sumi: Maaaa…she cries…
Shekhar: Maa. What are you saying? You also know sharmistha has given more love to ragini than swara…
Dadi: I don’t want to listen anything…i just know that I lost my ladoo..
Sanskaar shouts: Stop it everyone…just stop it..you had lost your daughter..dadi you had lost your ladoo…what about me and misti…i had lost my wife..and she had lost her mother..but you are only concerned with your loss..
Saying this he went inside his room.
Everyone cries…

Dadi: You only says sharmistha..if you can then let swara fulfill my ragini’s duties….
Everyone looks on..
Dadi: What happened…I know you can’t…..so no need to show me…noone can take my ladoo’s place..she killed my ladoo…she went inside….
Shekhar: Come sumi…
In swaragini’s room,
Sanskaar cuddles misti…he makes her sleep..
Sanskaar: Why Ragini? Why you left me..you betrayed me..i will never forgive you…what do you think. I cant take care of misti.. I will take care of her alone..
Shekhar puts his hand on his shoulder..sanskaar hugs him and cries…
Sanskaar: I cant leave without her…i cant papa..
Shekhar: Be strong sanskaar. You have to be strong for misti…misti needs you.. he pats him and leaves..
In shekhar’s room,
Sumi: Shekhar, I heard everything…what we will do now..
Shekhar: What do you mean.
Sumi: I thought a lot about it..I think maa is right….swara should fulfill ragini’s duties..
Shekhar turns to her: No sharmistha…dont even think about it..we can’t ruin swara’s life…and even swara will not accept it..

Sumi: Swara has lost her memory..she will believe whatever we says..we will say that sanskaar is her husband…i cant find no other way…..misti will get a mother..she needs a mother…please try to understand Shekhar…
Shekhar: And what about swara…her life…
Sumi: Shekhar, sanskaar is a good boy..her life will not be ruin….
Shekhar: And if she regains her memory.
Sumi: Then choice will be hers..what she want to choose….shekhar think about it…
Annapurna enters: But what if she fails to give mother’s love to misti…
Shekhar: Sharmistha had no relation with Ragini….and she gave a lot of love to Ragini…swara is misti’s masi…she only can fufill,her duties..
Sanskaar: What is happening here..what you all want..dont expect anything from me…i can take care of misti alone..he leaves angrily.

Anaapurna: But sanskaar….sumi cuts her words.
Sumi: No Annapurnaji, I will talk to sanskaar….i will make him understand…
Shekhar: I hope we are not doing wrong to swara..
Sumi: No Shekhar..i had thought a lot and took this decision..am her mother…i won’t do anything that will ruin her life…I will talk to sanskaar….i will fulfill my duties..
At night:
knock knock.
Sanskaar: Maa…come in..you not need to knock.
Sumi: Misti slept..
Sanskaar: Yes…she was crying a lot…..now slept..
Sumi: Sanskaar i want to talk to you..am waiting for you in balcony..come..
In balcony,
Sanskaar: Maa, I know what you want to talk about..i don’t want to talk about it..
Sumi: Listen to me sanskaar….won’t you give me this much respect..
Sanskaar: Maa..i respect you…but this is wrong..we can’t do this to swara..we can’t ruin her life..
Sumi: Sanskaar, swara has lost her memory..she don’t remember anything…and Shekhar will think for her marriage now..so we don’t think its wrong…

Sanskaar: And what if swara love someone else..
Sumi: I don’t think so..she never talked about it…if she love someone, she must have told me..
Sanskaar: I don’t know maa..but I think she loves someone…we never talked about it much..i don’t know that person..
Sumi: But..swara don’t remember him now…and when she will regain her memory, we wont force her..choice will be hers..
Sanskaar: But maa, i can’t give ragini’s space to anyone….i can’t..
Sumi: To shape up your future it is not essential that you forget your past. I want swara to be only misti’s mother..i only expect you to give that space..please sanskaar, try to understand..misti needs a mother..am doing everything for misti..
Sanskaar: I can’t understand maa….ok incase for misti I agree but what about our lives…what about swara..? What will happen if she regains her memory..?
Sharmistha: There are winds of destiny that blow when we least expect them. Sometimes they gust with the fury of a hurricane, sometimes they barely fan one’s cheek. But the winds cannot be denied, bringing as they often do a future that is impossible to ignore..
Sanskaar: Am not able to understand anything maa..right now I want to stay alone..
Sharmistha: Okayy…Think about it sanskaar. Tomorrow we will go to meet swara..come in the hospital and give your introduction yourself….
She gets up..and one request sanskaar. Whatever decision you will take, keep in mind we are doing everything for misti….if swara’s memory would have not lost, she would had done the same thing..think about it..
Sharmistha says to herself: I just want you to accept swara as misti’s mother..loving her or not will depend on time..because women can make anything happen in this world.
She pats his shoulder and leaves…

Sanskaar close his eyes..where are you Ragini..i need you…
Am here only..by your side..she rests her head on his shoulder..
Sanskaar: You listened Ragini..what maa had said..how can I give that space to swara.
Ragini: she is doing everything for my misti..and you have to take care of my misti..she needs her mother…
Sanskaar: And what about swara..i can’t spoil her life..
Ragini: I was only a step towards your destiny sanskaar…you destiny is waiting for you ahead..
Sanskaar: What do you mean?
Ragini: Its not important right now..take your decision..I have to go..byee…
Sanskaar: I want you to stay more..he turns her head and she is nowhere..she had left..
Just then sanskaar heard misti crying..he goes to her and cuddled her…..
Next day. In morning everyone went to hospital..
Doctor: Please don’t cry Infront of her…be happy..
Sharmistha: Swara beta, see your maa is here..how are you..
Swara: I don’t remember anything..i don’t remember anyone..

Shekhar: Don’t worry..everything will be fine..am your papa..
Swara meets everyone..
Sharmistha asks to Shekhar: Where is sanskaar…
Shekhar: I don’t know..he must have come..
Just then sanskaar enters..
Swara: Maa. Who is he.
Everyone look towards sanskaar.

Precap: Sanskaar’s decision.

Credit to: simran


    • simran

      Thanks a lot dear..i will update next part tomorrow..its not completed yet…. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  1. Pari

    Hey I liked your story a lot..but don’t u think that u r being unfair to Swara? I mean for her sister’s family why should she sacrifice her love? Now when Swara will get her memory back..she will fall for Sanky…and Sanky will even love Swara..but what about Laksh then? For making it swasan u should not do this to
    …love birds shouldn’t be ever separated..no hard feelings..just expressing my view…

    • simran

      Hey Pari..I understand what are you thinking…but don’t worry…I won’t do any injustice to her..when swara will know the truth, I will show her point of view too….and laksh was only an supporting actor in this story…he will unite them… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • simran

      Hey Pari..I understand what are you thinking…but don’t worry…I won’t do any injustice to her..when swara will know the truth, I will show her point of view too….

      • Pari

        Okay then ta ta….I’m going…cause i can’t read this ff which does so much injustice to two lovers…u could have made it swasan in other way..but this way is too wrong….and about Laksh being an supporting actor only…..he is your ff’s female lead’s love…..and i know u r trying to make Raglak the cupid of Swasan’s love story….but your way is absolutely wrong…..no hard feelings….

      • simran

        Pari..i know they are doing wrong..but have patience..obviously swara will not accept everything so easily after knowing the truth….it will take time…

  2. tanya

    Amazing twist…I thought it will be the same story like other where swara loses her memory but I was wrong..this is a different story..i loved it…please upload next part soon..

  3. this is interesting.. i didn’t think about her memory loss .. but its ok..
    i like this episode bit emotional.. but sumi’s clarification is too good..
    nice dear keep it up πŸ™‚

  4. sinzo

    hey simran…..dnt be angry episode was really awesome…..but dont you think they are taking advantage of Swara’s memory loss……..yeah i knw they are thinking of Mishti to give her motherly love…..but i thinks its not right…..
    and dnt take it wrong way ,i will continue reading your ff because its amazing ………juz told wat i felt wrong……

    M really sorry if you are hurt ….but episode was amazing……

    • simran

      Thanks sinzo…iam not hurt….infact it’s right to express your views…
      Yes..it is wrong..I understand what are you thinking…but don’t worry…I won’t do any injustice to swara..when swara will know the truth, I will show her point of view too…..

  5. jkn

    I was a silent reader of your story.and enjoying.after reading today’s episode my reaction is How disgusting it is.it’s totally worng yar.i agree wid we have to give a space to writer but stop writing like this yar.they are using her.how can people think so low.it’s really disgusting.

    • simran

      Hey..i understand its wrong….you may feel right now that she is being used….but don’t worry…I won’t do any injustice to swara..when swara will know the truth, I will show her point of view too….and then you will understand better….

    • simran

      Swara lost her memory..she don’t remember laksh..if not sanskaar, then too she can fall for some other person….

  6. geetha

    I don’t think so , there is nothing wrong. it is destiny …we have accept it..sanskar has to accept her as wife…u are writing very well…i liked it…continue…like this..

    • simran

      Thanks a lot dear…n yeahh..you are write..its destiny….even Ragini gave him a hint today… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  7. niki

    Disgusting. How could u think like this.?u paired swasan.i am ok with that.sorry i am human being.i wann b good human.i hate today’s episode. never support this low kind of thinking.how can people use someone.shiiiiiijliiiiiiiii… Swara has to recover first.i am leaving beacuse i can support this cheap mentality.

    • simran

      Niki it is destiny..you are feeling its wrong today..but when swara will know the truth, I will show her point of view too…then you will understand better….and also swara don’t remember laksh. So she can fall for,some other person as well…and no one knows about laksh..sanskaar only has a hint..he too don’t know him…so according to their situation, there is nothing wrong.

      • niki

        U dnt understand. I really donot care about pair.i am not supporting cheap mentality. Means swara lost her memory and her family use her as per them’s wish.it’s disgusting. Destiny.really.means so cheap yar.i hate this mentality.jo log apne hisab se kisi or ka USE kare aise soch vale people se or unsko support karne valon ko me support nahi karti.isliye leaving your ff.

  8. Crazygirl

    This twist is so wrong and crap because you shouldn’t separate two lovers, it’s just unfair for them.

    • simran

      you are feeling its wrong today..but when swara will know the truth, I will show her point of view too…then you will understand better….and also swara don’t remember laksh. So she can fall for,some other person as well…and no one knows about laksh..sanskaar only has a hint..he too don’t know him…so according to their situation, there is nothing wrong

  9. Naina

    Suprb,awsum,mind blowing and fantastic….u did a great job by separating the couples like this…..i will read your ff till Swara gets her memory..and then if she says that she has fallen for Sanskar…then i promise…I’m gonna leave……cause…..love is never based on a lie…..u r making Swasan in a base of lie only…..before all these answer my questions..
    1.Why should Swara sacrifice her life and love for her sister’s family? Is dadi really correct that Swara killed her ladoo and now she has to fulfill Ragini’s responsibily?
    2.Sanskar knows that Swara loves someone else….then why does he think about taking such a decision? Swara said to him that she has someone in her life…..for his daughter..how can he ignore Swara?
    3.What kind of family is this? Ek nehi toh dusre sehh kam chala lo…is that what u believe?
    I must say….I’m a diehard Swasan fan..but really disappointed..i thought that u would do something else to unite swasan..but only one word for the way u r trying to unite swasan…..thats DISGUSTING….no hard feelings…I’m not bashing anyone….just wrote my point of view and questions…..Simran..if u read this then plz reply…ANSWER MY QUESTIONS…..

    • simran

      Hey naina….swara will not accept everything so easily when she will know the truth…thats obvious….so,for that you have to wait..let the story move ahead…
      Its true that this relation is based on lie…and this is the story…all had done wrong..and that’s the main point..i cant solve everything in one episode…..

    • simran

      I will answer all your questions.
      1) till now I hadn’t shown that swara agreed to sacrifice her love..she is unaware of that..when she will know the truth. She will make a choice..she will not accept the relation so easily..
      Till now dadi is unaware of this decision…this part I am going to show in next episode..

      2),sanskaar and swara never had a conversation about this topic…sanskaar only had a guess about it..he didn’t know the person whom she loves..and still I haven’t shown sanskaar’ point of view..though he will agree to this lie..but his point of view is yet to be shown..
      3) swara’s family also had no idea of swara being in love…so they cared about Mishti right now….and yes they are doing wrong that they lied to her..but that’s the story…
      Have patience…you will get all the answers when the story will move ahead….

    • simran

      Hey rasha..actually at that time I didn’t thought about the next episode much..so I had given this precap…. πŸ™‚

  10. Simran ur 100% true because destiny shd decide because their is no will tat every love story should be complete.every lover should be unite . if it’s complete means their is no value for love only..now at present swara loss her memory today or tomorrow her parents make her to marry someone know..instead of someone they r marring sanskar tats it..her destiny already written has sanskar..no one can change..pls don’t blush her pls let her to express her view….then Simian dr even in kannada we have dis movie I have seen its superb. .song r very nice pls continue dr I. M waiting for swasan love track ..don’t bother for negative comments..all is well..

    • simran

      Thanks a lot Divya for supporting me…n you are correct..if every love story completes, then value of love will be lost..
      Yes..if not sanskaar, then too her parents will make her marry someone else..so according to their point of view they are right to make her marry to sanskaar… πŸ™‚

  11. Hi Simran..
    I read ur all ff to day itself..
    n i have to say that the dialogue u used about love is so matured.. n out of box… i love the story too much.. keep it up dear..
    stay blessed πŸ™‚

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