swaragini- its written ( episode 13)

Hello everyone..this is simran…sorry for late update…i had to reset my phone due to some issues and I had lost all the episodes I had written…am giving a short update today..next will be a long one…

lets start with the story.
Recap: Ragsan moments. Ragini reached Mumbai.
Ragini reached gadodia house..everyone greeted her and welcomed her..
Ragini: Dadi, how are you. I missed you all very much.
Dadi: Iam fine.we missed you too…now you are here..i will fulfil all my wishes. Afterall now grandma of maa…hainaaa guddia…she took misti ( baby) in her arms and cuddled her..
Sharmistha: Ragini you go and get fresh..swara will take care of misti.
Ragini nods and went inside..
She calls sanskaar.

Ragini: Hello.
Sanskaar: Hello Ragini.. Had you reached..
Ragini: Yes sanskaar I had reached home…and we didn’t faced any problem..you don’t worry..
Sanskaar: I worry about my life..
Ragini smiles..: So what are you doing.
Sanskaar: Till now I was waiting fir your phone call, now I will go to office..you tell how is everyone at home.
Ragini: Everyone is fine..
Sanskaar: How is misti. Say her papa is missing her very much..
Ragini: Misti is fine…misti is saying me and mumma is missing papa very much..
Sanskaar smiles: So y mumma went home leaving papa alone?
Just then sumi enters, Ragini come fast. Have snacks..
Ragini: Ji maa…sanskaar I will talk to you later..okaayy…bbiee…
Sanskaar: Okay.. Byee.. I love you.
Ragini: I love you too ?
Ragini had a quality family time spent.

At night, in swaragini’s room,
Ragini was cuddling misti.
Swara: Dii, you want to drink coffee?
Ragini smiles and says no..
Swara: Okay..want to eat cake?
Ragini: No.
Swara sadly: Okay di. Aaaaaaa…….dii tomorrow we will go for shopping..okay..
Ragini: Swaraaa calm down..what happened..what you want to say to me..
Swara smiles: Diii, actually i,met laksh. And he asked me about our marriage.
Ragini: Okayy…so you want me to talk to papa.
Swara: Haan di.. Am afraid..i cannot talk to him..you have to talk..
Ragini: Okayy swara..i will talk to him..
Swara excitingly hugs her: I loved youuu dii..you are the best…..
Ragini: I love you too..and misti loves you too…
Swara: Ohhh my baby…maasi,loves you too….
Then they both played with misti….

No precap.

AN IMPORTANT MESSAGE
i want to convey an important message to ragsan as well as swasan fans..please read with patience..
Firstly, this ff is a combination of many movies as I had told you earlier many times…but I had only taken the concepts from different movies..my way of presenting will be different…so tell me till now though my story is common, nothing new in it..don’t you enjoy it? Is my way of presenting till now is not different from those movies..plzz do reply me..i need to know so that I may not disappoint you all in future….
Secondly, for all swasan fans, in my ff swasan phase is starting now..so plzz comment and tell me is there anyone who is reading this story and is a swasan fan….
Third., from starting only I said that first it will be ragsan and then swasan..and many of my readers had guessed the story… But now I had read comments my readers don’t want me to kill Ragini…and even I don’t want to disappoint anyone..i understand…but this was my plot…if I don’t kill Ragini, then my story will be a boring one…and I have no other way to make it swasan….i had thought a lot upon it…i didn’t find other way…..
Now I had got two options and you can choose what you want among the two..
First: I will kill Ragini in this ff. But only her character will end..her role will not end..she will play a major role in uniting swasan…
Second: I will end her role temporarily and then she will return…but after returning, her character may turn into negative if my story needs so..
I pefer first one…..but my preference is of no use..your prefernces matters..,now you have to decide what you want..my final decision will be on your choices……because am going to end ragsan part, my last episode was full of ragsan scenes if u guys had noticed…I tried my best and will try to Improve further.
So now my story will shape according to your choice..if you guys want, I will end this ff incase you don’t like my ff.
Guys am writing this ff for you..so that you can read..you can enjoy..i don’t want to disappoint anyone…
Plzz everyone reading this comment and let me know your choices….silent readers plzzz do comment and tell me what you want……
I will wait for everyone’s comment till ..and then will upload my next episode…because for me your preferences matters.

Credit to: simran

65 comments

  1. Sarita

    Ragini mar janegi?….Simran …don’t so this..I mean this is not done na….how can u change the couples like this? I had been reading this ff from its first episode…..I’m a swasan and Raglak fan..but still u should not do this…i mean think about Laksh…….tbh I’m not a couple freak….but i don’t like such ffs which plays with readers feelings….and other people who r advising u to ignore the comments..actually they r too happy that u r writing Swasan….if u change your couple to swalak then i bet…they will be the one who will bash u…if u make this swasan then so sorry I’m not reading this……remember this that a swasan fan said that on your face…

  2. Aaradya

    R u kidding me…what is the point of killing ragini and separating ragsan…I just don’t get it, if u try to separate ragsan then a lot of people are going to dislike ur ff including me. I’m not trying to be rude but I just wanted to to tell u this. Since the first epi I started reading ur ff, I’m a huge raglak fan but after reading urs and some mother ragsan ff now o stared liking them. Again I’m sorry if my comment hurt ur feelings, I have no intention to hurt u. Please keep it ragsan and Swalak. If sanskar will forget ragini after she die then how is his love true for ragini and how will Lakshya feel.i can never agree
    With swasan and raglak pairing in ur ff. It’s just my opinion and no hurt feelings please

  3. very nice episode n i want rags to play crucial role in uniting swasan n what about laksh n i like ua plot a lot soo go on with it

  4. Anjali

    Wow….
    I saw the comments and then decided to read all the episodes..
    I had actually started it long back… but I had lost track of it in the middle…
    Anyways just finished reading and I have to say this….
    Its ur idea and ur work… you are writing for yourself ..not for us…
    You should write something that makes you happy….and when you write from ur heart, ppl can see it reflected in your chapters…so don’t bother about the comments… you do what you want.. even a single comment shows that there are ppl who care about you and like this ff…
    Simran, don’t get disheartened….it is really hard to think of ideas, believe me I know…and we readers are a tough crowd to please….
    Just write what comes in ur mind at that moment…as that is the best writing which comes straight from ur heart…
    If you felt annoyed by my comment… Im Sorry….
    Anyways I loved the story till now…
    I will not choose any option…rather I want you to choose the option, please don’t have polls… bcos then it seems like ur writing for others…
    Write for yourself.. write what makes you feel satisfied and happy….
    I can see that in eva’s writing, mandys, nehas…
    That’s why they are really awesome ffs…. bcos they write from the heart…

    Anyways sorry dear… didn’t mean to hurt you or anything, just counsel u…

  5. meena

    Option 2 ragini came back nd try to seperate swasan but sanskar loves swara nd she iz preagnent also laksh involved in it after some time they both fell for each other nd live happily ever after

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