swaragini swasan@ revenge, love n hate (teenage love) chapter 23 SANSKAR’S LIFELINE SWARA

PRECAP- swaragya bonding…n sanskar observing it… sanskar attracting towards swara.

guyzz these are the replys of ur comments.. plzz do read.. may contain some imp notes..
hayathi – yes dear.. he will know it soon..
manisha- sry dear.. im a bit lazy in writing ffs…actually i write it directly here.. b4 somedayzz i first used to note in my note pad bt now i write it directly
fransi- tq
akku- tq akku missed u too a lot…
sara- tq
swetha- yeah sure.. its tommorow christmas also.. so the whole ff will be fr swasan only..
fatima- tq
devi- thanks
shanaya- tq dear
chinni- tq
surbhi- bada wala tq
harani- mee tooo like it sooo much… tq
tara- yeah it will come out soon..
nishu- tommorow it will be there…tq
shabrin- thank u sooooo muuch
aqsa- tq dear.. missed u

its still night..
scene 1
1 old appartment in kolkata
kavita to herself- oh god! i havent visited here since last 9-10 years.. its tooo dirty..
then she enters her parents room..
kavita again to herself- ma.. papa.. love u a lot.. i.. she is sobbing.. crying bitterly..
ma… papa… chacha ji and chachi ji left me when i was 15… then.. she remembers her doings..actually her wrong doing…she has a big guilt in her heart.. bcoz she is meeting her late parents after so many years.. n she cant lie to them.. bt the next moment she gets up n ignores that guilt.. n says nothing wrong is done by me.. nothing wrong…

scene 2
swaraginiragya n sanlak break the hug..
sanskar comes to ragya..
sanskar- ragya u know what i call my mother as mom n i call my badi ma as ma….n
ragya completes his sentence- n i’m also doing the same thing…
lakshya- n ur parents are proud of u…
rags- bt ragya u didnt tell her how did u get this idea??
ragya bites her tongue .
ragya- yeah!!!! actually ma that one of my school friends also call her maasi as maasi ma so…
swara- whatever be the reason… i love u.. n u love me.. this is the only thing which matters…

scene 3
@ swasan mansion…
swasanragya change the dress..
swara makes ragya lie on the bed…
n then she with her sweet n melodious voice sings loori fr her…
sanskar gets mesmerised seeing her flowing hair, her voice, her beauty….
everything of her is making him crazyyy…

scene 4
@swasan mansion
its morning..
swasanragya are ready…
swara- ragya plz can u tell me which which things will u need whole day??? we will keep those things in this handbag??
ragya- ok.
while taking out things ragya says~~~~~~~~~~~
ragya- ma!! it will be soo much fun na!!!! i will be in ur clinic… i will click lots of selfies…. n send to mom also..
swasan smile….

scene 5
MY LIFELINE MULTISPECIALITY HOSPITAL
ITS A BIG BUILDING.. A BUILDING WITH LOTS OF APPARTMENTS CHANGED IN A HOSPITAL.. 1 APPPARTMENT OWNED BY 1 DOC..
apppartment no. 101
nameplate is of- DR. SWARA GADODIA..(dermatologist frm uk)
a nurse is changing the nameplate to DR. SWARA MAHESHWARI( dermatologist frm uk)
swara’s clinic (appparment) is like this…its 1 bhk
let me do like this..
in apppartment its like this——–1.hall
in clinic———————————–1.clinic
in appa.———————————–2.bedroom
in clinic———————————–2.bedroom n kitchen joint..
in appa.———————————-3. kitchen
in clinic———————————–3. kitchen n bedroom joint

swara attends patients while ragya plays with AISHA , swara’s assistent…
then swaragya n aisha go fr shopping, hav lunch…, etc..

scene 6
@ sanskar’s office
sanskars’ cabin
sanskar is alone in his thoughts.. having pen in his hand..n continouously writing swara swara swara on a check of 10 lacks…
ADVAIT, sanskar’s PA – sanskar (he is more friend less PA)!!!*tapping his shoulders* what are u doing??writing something on a check of 10 lacks???? oh god!!! we hav got this deal so hardly n u??? what the helll..
sanskar- this check doesnt matter… only 10 lack na..
sanskar(to himself)- swara if it would be 100 crores also na ..then also… u are the most imp fr me…

precap- CHRISTMAS N SWASAN N LOVE…………………………………………….

guyzzz guess what swasan would gift each other….
pppllllzzz coment…………………………………………..

Credit to: kritika

23 comments

  1. Anu

    Yr don’t make swara forgive sanky
    Agar tm ise current track se milaogi toh uske hisaab se swara ko toh sanky se bahut nafrat hogi
    See in this swara doubted sanskar but then she do soo many effort but of no use……use itni bar mafi mang li lekin sanky usse baat bhi nhi krta even divorce de diya
    But isme usne sirf uspar trust nhi kiya but shadi bhi revenge lene k liye kri

    I know u r notwriting current track or like serial but plz sanskar aur isliye forgive mat karna chahe woh kaisa bhi ho otherwise it will not be justice by swara’s character

    Ndd plz upload daily your ff because its one of the best ff according to me I just loved it
    Upload next part fast

    • bhavna

      Hey m srry bt i dnt agree wid u…swara sanskar ko maaf kyu na kare..if aap currnt trck se relt kroge thn swara se jada effrts sanskar ne liye the apne reltn ke liye …aur rahi sanskar ne swara ko divrc dene ki baat comn yaar koi apni feelngs ko baar baar kese tutta huya dekhe..sanskar toh har stp pe oske saath tha bt osne sirf chote resn ki vajese ospr trust nhi kiya…ye swara ne galat kiya..isi vajese bichara sansjar kitni baar apna dil tudvaye .
      aur rahi ff ki baat thn sbko ek scnd chnc milna chahiye….plz undrstnd…mk swasan unite fst…n srry if i hurt u..??

  2. bhavna

    Hey i read ur ff its really v good..cn u jst expln wht hppnd till nw in shrt.. plz…..keep wrtng..atb..??

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