SWARAGINI A NEW START…………(swasan and raglak) fan fiction EPISODE-22

thanks a lot for your comments…………..

HESBY , TEMMY ,AHANA : i am ragini fan , i just love her N i will limit her energy package , she was so innocent in the serial n i like her to be a rockstar so i created this singhania’s drama . if she regains her memory . the first thing is the freshness of raglak love misses. she will be guilt for her deeds n she can’t forgive herself n she will become innocent again , which i don’t want . but i will make it like she will know about her past through some media or person as she can’t remember her past clearly she can forgive herself soon . so sorry , but please think once n comment , if u guys not only hesby,temmy n ahana ,also others n silent readers really want to get ragini memory back……..plz comment

sravya , hayathi ,manisha ,sri , esha ,arti ,surbhi ,lucky ,nita , shanaya , hesby , temmy,meera ,varsha , ahana ,aqsa , aman ,sabrina , naina bunny…………..thanks for your support , if i missed any one ,forgive me ……………i am trying update soon ………..sabrina thanks for your first comment…………..

RECAP: swasanraglak moments n action episode ………

It’s morning:
raglak:
laksh is sleeping in rag’s room , last night he fall asleep without his knowledge ……..laksh opens his eyes n see rag’s face , she was sleeping peacefully n was very beautiful he just stares at her , just then rag’s turns to laksh side. as before she was straight n her hand touches laksh face , rags moves her hand over his face ,then she opens her eyes n is surprised to see laksh n she speaks out.
Rag’s: he might have fallen asleep last night , rag’s u are torturing him a lot dear , poor lucky ,(she forwards her hand to wake him up) , let him sleep rag’s , i have to talk to u lucky , i don’t why i feel very strong for u , there is something special in u which attracts me , i tried a lot to ignore this feel but i can’t . either i should get rid of it or speak to u about it. ( she brushes his hair with her hand n smiles at him )………….rag’s go to take bath……….laksh opens his eyes n says u will soon accept your feelings for me n i will help u in that ……he closes his eyes…….

rag’s comes out of bathroom she was wearing a 3/4 blue jeans with a slim lace top….she forgets that laksh is in her room n she throws towel oh bed , which lands on laksh face disturbing his sleep . he removes n see rag’s loosening her hair n starts to sing pehla nasha pehla khumaar …………..she also dances while singing . she twirls n looses her balance n was about to fall she closes her eyes tightly but laksh holds her by her waist , she opens her eyes n see in laksh eyes , they both share a intense eye lock (sunona sung marmar ……..plays in bg). knock at door disturbs them , they both come yo senses n rag’s avoid eye contact where laksh stares at her ……dadi is at door she asks rag’s to come fast …….rag;s says lucky we will meet down stairs okay….laksh nods with a smile n leaves…..rag’s says shit!!

raglaksan leave to office they spend a hectic day n raglaksan go to ccd n swara joins them……..there rag’s informs them that she ruined khanna in business market but we should send him to jail also . for this i need your help

SWASANLAK nod their head in acceptance ………….rag’s says swasan will go to khanna house n get a cd by which he is blackmailing his secretary if we get that we can logde a complaint against him n lucky n i will go to office for the bond papers which he got by betraying his brother ……….then his chapter will be closed ……..
they all leave to home n at night without informing to anyone they go out of home by walk n separate their ways n after the work is done they will meet at a tea stall near their home

swasan:
they reach khanna house n enter the house by back door which leads to kitchen…….swara sees gulab jamun in a bowl n she just can’t control herself n she slowly go near the desk n start to eat . sanskar is talking to swara about their plan n turns . he is tensed as swara is not beside him , he looks around n finds swara eating gulab jamun n is irked n goes to her ,then he hits her on her head (gently n as swara mouth is full of jamun) n says are u mad we came to rob not for dinner u idiot come on n he grabs her hand n takes her from there . they reach the staircase n see someone coming down n rush to a corner , they are very close n breathing heavily and they share a deep eye lock (manchaala plays ) swara comes to her senses n shakes sanskar n says we came to rob not for date . they both laugh n go to khanna room . they search all places but are not able to find any cd . then swara notices keys under khanna’s pillow n sighs to sanskar . he tries a lot to get the keys but fails , at last he tickles khanna n khanna turns a side swara grabs the keys n open the cupboard n get the CD . they replace the keys n are tip toeing . just then they hear a voice

STOP THERE……….swasan are terrified and freeze …
Khanna: how dare u ??
swasan are sweating n are damn scared….
khanna: i will tell to teacher that u took my pencil…
swasan are surprised n turn around n find khanna sleeping n he is talking in his sleep ………they are relieved . they soon get out …….

Raglak:

they both enter without making noise as the guard was sleeping , but just then something fells down n the guard wakes up , raglak rush to the store room n hide behind door …..they are standing closely n share a eye lock (dheere dheere se plays ) just then guard comes near store room n says these cats never let me sleep n he then closes the storeroom (he just bolts it) ……laksh using a stick opens the door. by seeing this rag’s tells it seem u have experience in opening the doors secretly . laksh says yeah when i was small papa used to close me in room n i used to get out like this ..rag’s smiles . they both go to khanna cabin n find the bond papers . rag’s is damn happy n she hugs laksh n says yes we got it . she realizes her actions n compose herself . they both go down n they don’t see guard in his chair n rush but just then they hear whistle n hide under the guard desk . the guard come n sit in his chair n he shakes his legs , by this rag’s moves close to laksh . the guard spreads his legs under the table (table is wide but there only one open side ) rag’s sits on laksh lap ….

they share an eye lock ( zehnaseeb plays ) . suddenly rag’s get hiccups . laksh close rag’s mouth as the hiccup sound may disturb the guard sleep . rag’s gets down from laksh lap slowly . hiccups are still on . laksh slowly peep outside to see weather the guard is asleep or not. rag’s find a water bottle under the desk n drinks it (it’s vodka) . laksh catches rag’s hand n take her out . they reach the tea stall……..
swsan are already waiting for them , now rag’s is completely under vodka effect . she acts crazy . she was about to fall but laksh holds her n share a few seconds eye lock . sanskar notices the bottle in rag’s hand understands that she is drunk …..

laksh: rag’s control yourself
Rag’s: u scolded me , she cries
Swara: rag’s why are u crying ?
Rag’s: i want to cry , but tears aren’t coming , this angry young man made me cry . say sorry
Laksh: but i already apologized
Rag’s: yeah u did . so what ! can’t u again apologize
Laksh: okay i am sorry
Rag’s: suicide
Swasanlak are shocked
rag’s : suicide . gaanvwalo suicide
laksh understands n says . she is doing sholay scene
she climbs the bench near the tea stall . she says basanthi……….she see swara n say hey jai
Swara: rag’s get down

Rag’s: nahi jai mujhe basanthi chaiye yeh budiyaa (she points laksh) ne mujhe apni basanthi se dhoor kar di. arrey chacha (she points sanskar) mere khaani main tragedy hain , emotions hain aur aur main hoon (she laughs)
Swara: basanthi ghoom gayi hum jaake usse dhundege ab chaalo
Rag’s: jai mere bhai i love u chaalo …..rag’s keeps her hand on swara neck , then suddenly swara gets hiccups
Rag’s (laughs): mujhe bhi aisa hi hua aur main yeh paani peeli , mere veeru tum bhi peelo ( she forcibly makes swara drink the rest vodka)
sanskar says swara……..both the sisters explore the streets n have fun …sanlak are back of them ………at last sanlak get grip of swarag . they both take swarag in their arms
Swara: hey veeru i love basanthi
Rag’s: bhabhi hai woh teri
Swara: oh sorry , i love my radha , dheko mujhe apni ghood main uthake le ke jha raha hain
Rag’s: meri basanthi toh nahi hain , yeh budiyaa ne usse chupaya ,
Swara: meri radha bahut acchi hai , i love u (she kisses sanskar n rests her head on sanskar shoulder)
Rag’s: i miss u basanthi ,( she twists laksh ears )
Laksh: ouchh ! leave my ears
Rag’s: chhila kyun rahi hoon , chup , main lucky ko batha dungi tumhaare bare main (even she rests her head on his shoulder)

all the way to home swarag’s –jaibeeru conversation goes on
they reach home

swasan :
sanskar lies swara on bed n goes near cupboard n takes towel n turns around n surprised . as swara was stnding on bed
Sanskar: swara sit down
Swara: nahi main villian hoon aur tum heroine ho……….
Sanskar : swara…
Swara : shhh …….hum tum ek kamreme baandh ho ……(she sings ) main tumhe rape karungi (sanskar opens his eyes wide open in surprise) aur tum chhilao , chiko , bachao bachao bolo tab hero ayega .aur tum hero ko tapad marke mere paas ajao , kunki main tumse bahut pyaar kaarti hoon .
swara falls , sanskar holds her n take her to bed n makes her sleep

Raglak:
as soon as rag’s see her room she gets down from laksh arms n rushes but can’t walk properly , laksh comes to her n holds by her arms . he takes her to bed but both fall on bed , laksh is on rag’s . rag’s hands are around laksh neck . he tries to get off the grip of her hands . rag’s accidentally kisses on laksh cheek . his heart races at once but he loosens his grip n make her sleep properly . all the while rag’s was talking about laksh .. before leaving he says love u forever , sleep well.

it’s morning:

swasan:
swara wakes up with a hang over ……
sanskar: good morning veeru , feeling dizzy?
Swara: veeru? what are u talking? ahh! my head
Sanskar: oh ! so u don’t remember what happened yesterday, u said that u will do rape
Swara: what?? (she remembers everything n smiles)
Sanskar: first take this lemon juice , it will reduce ua hangover
swara takes it sanskar teases her mostly by saying the last part…….
they both get ready n come down n take blessings ……..DP asks for rag’s , swara goes to rag’s room

rag’s room:
swara: rag’s darling get up
even rag’s suffer hangover n drinks the juice n remembers everything n both the sister have fun , recalling what they done last night
Sanskar: swara bade papa sent u to call rag’s , but u are chi chatting with her, rag’s hurry up bade papa is waiting for u
Rag’s: okay give 10 min
swasan leave ……….rag’s comes down she was wearing a dual color shirt n black skinny jeans n left her hair open .she comes down n wishes everyone
Dining table:
DP: ragini beta i am proud of u , u fulfilled your promise that khanna came in the morning n pleaded in front of me n he got arrested
Rag’s is surprised: thats great , but i didn’t do anything
Sanskar: bade papa , rag’s planned , we four collected evidence n lucky complained against him
Rag’s: so soon , by the way where is lucky??
SAnakar: he went out on some work

SANskar goes out n calls lucky n asks him come home fast as rag’s was asking for him , laksh replies he is on the way. swara comes to sanskar
Swara: where is laksh , rag’s is restless, his phone is not reachable
Laksh: i am here
Sanakar: come on lucky (just then laksh phone rings he excuses n takes the call)

just then a Black Jaguar stops in front of maheshwari mansion . swsan go near car . A handsome , cool n hot guy gets down from car ………….he is dev
sAnskar: how can i help u??
Dev: this maheshwari mansion right ?? i need to meet DP ji
Sanskar: yes , please come in
dev swasan go inside n laksh follows them , dev doesnot notice laksh as he was busy in call

they enter hall , Dev see rag’s n smiles at her , laksh notices this n is irked.
Sanskar: bade…
Dev: Shhhhhh… u are spoiling my surprise
he goes tip toeing to dining table n closes rag’s eyes
Rag’s: LUCKY!!
laksh is damn happy to hear his name , swasan smile .
Dev: since i was not there for few days , u forgot me ah? (he removes his hands meanwhile )
rag’s turns n see dev
Rag’s: (shouts) DEVV!!!!!
she jumps out of chair n hugs him in excitement (she was jumping all while) ( laksh is in shock to see rag’s reaction)
Rag’s: what a surprise , i missed u a lot , am so happy
Dev: but i am not
Rag’s: i am so sorry (she catches her ears )
Dev (he pinches her cheeks ) : cutiee , i missed u a lot (they again hug)
laksh feels a deep pain in his heart seeing the scene
Dadi: dev ! when did u came ??(she just came out of kitchen)
Dev: dadi how r u ?? (he takes blessings) where is dada??
Dadu: i am here young man
Dev: dada , (takes blessings)
swasanlak come to dining table ……
Dev: namasthe dp uncle
DP: namsthe beta
Dadu: dp remember dayal mathur of your batch
DP: yes kaka, he was a flirt , in those days
Dadu: haan , dev is his son.
DP: oh , how is your dad is he still , flirt??

Dev: yeah uncle ….
Rag’s: where is aunt n uncle ?
Dev: they will come by evening
Rag’s: wow!! we gonna have a blast.
Dev: by the way u are looking pretty barbie rock star! (laksh fumes hearing this)
Rag’s: thank u
Dev: where are your friends ??
Rag’s turns where swasanlak are standing
Dev: wait let me guess!! (he points sanskar ) handsome n decent so you are sanskar n u are swara …the love birds right?
Sanskar: yeah (he hug sanskar n shakes hand with swara)
Dev: you are lucky , i mean laksh , angry young man
Laksh: yes , how do u know
Dev: rag’s in formed me about all of you……

PRECAP: laksh jealously…………..

guys please do think of ragini regaining her memory please comment about it n this epi too………………:-)

Credit to: Akshitha Reddy

33 comments

  1. ahana

    sry i want ragini memory back but..don’t mean that i want old traditional ragini.. you r mistake i lv roclstar rags more..
    i want ragini memory back as i feel sad for laksh..
    n ya devs entry finally… laksh is super jealous…
    don’t make dev to spoil our raglak k ..

  2. ahana

    sry i want ragini memory back but..don’t mean that i want old traditional ragini.. you r mistaken i lv rockstar rags more..
    i want ragini memory back as i feel sad for laksh..
    n ya devs entry finally… laksh is super jealous…
    don’t make dev to spoil our raglak k ..

  3. Lucky

    its really cool and funny.. i really want her to remember everything (her past and also don’t forget her present bcz normally when a amnesia patient remember his past she/he will forget his present but i want ragini to remember everything). Really awesome. i just love that vodka scene and bedroom wala scene

  4. Good epi… Really could imagine karan wahi as dev.. He is one of ma fav…and yeah… I hav an idea.. Let rags find raglaks marriage pic.. But only after rags realizing her love to laksh… And wen rags regains her memory.. She’ll feel sorry and will tell that she’ ll go away from their lyf.. But laksh stops her and confess his love.. Happy moments.. Rags will become innocent as before.. But lucky changes her and tells dat he wants ragini to be bold and naughty as rags.. So she accept his request…. Howzzz it…? Akshitha.. So ua fans will be happy aswell as u too coz u want bold ragini na:-);-)

    • ahana

      naina nice thought i also want that way..
      rags should regain memory n she also should be rockstar as now..

  5. Akshitha… If u lyk ma idea make it fast..and dont thank me instead update nxt epi soon… Today itself:-);-)…plzzz..:-) coz am studying in 12th…and ma exms are ahead… So i cant read it for a few days… And today ma last day of freedom before exms..;-) dats y.. So plzzz try yaaaaar..

  6. Varsha

    first of thank u for giving us so much impotance and for reading our comment so seriously…and lastliy it is my request plz dont make ragini remember old think..make him just know about her past.. not remember..and as alwayes superb episode

  7. Ridhima

    I need old ragini and this Dev no need …. But before that this rags should fall in love with laksh …then let her get back her memory …

  8. Hesby

    No man in this character she is cool but the writer is exaggerating it she is making her too cool and bold and she drinks as well she should be cool but not that much

  9. even me pls get dev out as soon as possible n let rags not get her memory back as i like it being like this only …… ????
    pls continue
    eagerly waiting for nxt update

  10. sri

    let rag’s be as such.. dnt make her innocent again.. its gng well.. rockstar sis r rocking.. dnt change it plz… superb episode. vodka scene is superb

  11. Tara

    Extraordinary. . I luv ragini n ur stry. D way u r portraying her new avatar is simply super.. i luv tis stry.. let her gain memory after sumtime.. tis s so cool btwn raglak

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