SWARAGINI A NEW START…………(swasan and raglak) fan fiction EPISODE-28

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am so sorry anu ……..i promise to make swasan moments in next epi for sure , am so sorry

RECAP: rag’s confession , laksh change over.

Dev: we will meet in ccd today evening , rag’s shud not know abt this .
all agree n leave to have break fast………..
as all elders have completed their breakfast swasanlakragdev are left n they sit n serve them selves (dev-rag’s-lak-san-swa sitting order)
laksh is continuously staring at rag’s n swasan are smiling as they know abt rag’s feelings for laksh n dev is sighing them keep quite , but in vain.
rag’s is fed up by all these actions n she takes a deep breath.
rag’s: lucky , please stop staring at me like that
laksh is not even responding , he is still staring her n rag’s is irked n she hits on laksh head
laksh : ahhhh!….y r u hitting me?
rag’S: stop staring at me
laksh : i am not staring at u .
rag’s: i am not blind okay , u stare at me as if u wanna eat me.
laksh is again lost in rag’s n staring at with a spoon (reversed) in his mouth n he is leaning over table..
rag’s: swasan why r u guys smiling .
sanskar: we can’t even smile at our own ?
rag’s: i didn’t mean it , am aksing y are smiling at me??
swara: nothing rag’s , jus like that.
dev is hitting his head as the others are spoiling n trying to sigh laksh , who is not in his senses .
rag’s: since , morning u guys are behaving weird (jus then she looks at laksh , he is still staring her . she gives a disgust expression n hits again (hard) )
laksh: it’s hurting
rag’s: it should , i will kill u if again stare at me u idiot n go to hell all of u (she leaves without having breakfast)
dev: guys wt is wrong with u , u r spoiling everything
swara: sorry dev, we are remembering all her words n jus stop laughing .
dev hits laksh

laksh: y sre u all hitting me??
dev: shut up !! okay , if do like this , she will never admit her feelings for u
laksh: okay , sorry , from now i do as u say
dev: stop staring at her
laksh: but i just can’t take off my eyes from , her , she is so pretty .
dev: laksh , talk to her , compliment her but not more a bit
laksh: okay
dev: make her happy , tell her about ua family sweet memories . remember she is not ragini , she is rag’s who doesn’t know anything
laksh: ookay
dev: i have to go to rag’s , she didn’t had her breakfast , do as i say
dev leaves , swasan are shocked by dev’s words abt ragini
swara: laksh , do dev know abt past
laksh: yeah , i said him , as the attack can happen at any time to rag’s , if dev gonna know abt her , then he can comfort her.
swara: hmm…
dev goes to rag’s n feed her breakfast in rag’s room…….swasanlak also go to rag’s room.
swasanlak reach rag’s room , they are stopped by hearing laksh name n they step aside n hear to rag’s

rag’s: lucky!!!!!..dev ,wt the hell is happening to me yaar.
dev: it’s love my cutie rock star !!!!
rag’s: will u please stop it!!!
dev: no no no……as far as i know even lucky is feeling for u , wait n watch he sing feel my love feel my love in front of u…(swasanlak smile)
rag’s: bull shit!!! okay , let’s think he also feels for me but he never gonna say it , he just gonna stare at me…(laksh hits his head )
dev: so u admit it
rag’s: no way……please !!!
dev: ziddi , have ua break fast first
rag’s: but , i have to say , he is damn s*xy!!! (swasan open their mouth wide n laksh closes his eyes n blushes out n keeps his hand on his face)
dev: ohhh!!! go n tell him that he is s*xy
rag’s: i said him that he is , dashing …..
dev: if he gonna listen all these , he’d die.
they both laugh …..(sanskar tickle laksh)
swara goes a bit back n calls out rag’s , then swasanlak enter rag’s room n ragdev stopped laughing…
rag’s: hey guys , completed ua breakfast.??
swara: yeah .
rag’s: am sorry , i was a bit rude.
sanskar: we are sorry , we were just playing prank on …
rag’s: oh… but becoz of this lucky , i lost my wits n shouted.
laksh: wt did i do?
rag’s: thats wt u did nothing .
laksh: what to do , as u are looking so pretty , i couldn’t take off my eyes from u.
swasandev are shocked n rag’s is surprised..(in her mind – omg!!! lucky it is hard to control man )
rag’s: lucky are u okay??
laksh: yeah , but y r u asking me??
rag’s:just like that ….
dadi comes to them ….
dadi: rago , u are still here
rag’s: yes
dadi: bechaara , dev ko thang kyu karti ho ??
dev: see dadi , rag’s is torturing me..
rag’s: oh really , (she twists his ears) , this is torture……
dev: i will not leave u ………….rag’s run ,here n there n hide behind laksh n laksh sigh him to leave …dev stops
rag’s: u can’t catch me………..hahahaha
dev : come let’s go , it’s late now…..they all leave to office n swasanlakdev meet in ccd n discuss

ccd:
dev: lucky , she is admitting that she feels for , in the morning , when i went to rag’s , u know u she said…
swara: yeah , dev we were outside , we heard u n rag’s.
sanskar: we heard eveything .
dev: (smiles): ohh!! lucky !!
laksh: stop it , please i beg of u guys
swasandev laugh……
dev: okay , i have a plan , swara u will talk to rag’s n tell her abt u n sanskar , as she listens to u n after that we will create that swasan are fighting these days n lucky n rag’s will make plans together to unite swasan , in this way , lucky n rag’s will get some time , to spend together n i will make an excuse n be at office.
laksh: but why??
dev: if i gonna stay with u n rag’s , she will not even talk to you…..
laksh: okay..

just then rag’s passes from there n see swasanlakdev n they also see rag’s n all are shocked
dev: rag’s??????
rag’s: thank god !!!
she comes to lucky n hold hi hand (laksh is surprised)
dev see someone coming towards them
dev: raj???? wt r u doing here???
raj: dev??, even u are here.
dev: yeah , but wt are u doing here??
raj: look at rag’s man , i love a lot , but she never cared me n now , she is telling that she is in relation .
dev: what??
rag’s: yes!! raj , he is lucky my boyfriend .
swasandev are surprised n shocked

dev is rag’s college mate , he is kind hearted, he loves rag’s from the day he saw her , but rag’s doesn’t . so raj came to India to convince rag’s. (he just lasts only in this epi )

dev: yeah , raj , lucky is rag’s bf
raj: i will not believe , rag’s love n that to in this short period.
rag’s: there is no specified time for love , okay .
raj: i know , but i can’t believe . do u like him??
rag’s: wt do u mean , i love him okay .
dev: raj , u know me right , rag’s really love lucky.
raj is heart broken…….
raj: rag’s , i hope u are not lying n i will love u forever u are my first n u will remain forever
rag’s: raj please , u say u love me right ? then why are giving me pain. if u move on ua life then only i can stay happy .
raj: it’s not possible
rag’s: so u want me to stay in guilt that , i spoiled ua life right??
raj: no …please don’t tell , like that
rag’s: then promise me ….
dev: raj , u know her , just do it
raj’: okay rock star i promise , but it will take some time.
rag’s smile
raj: i hate u lucky , i hate u from the core. but take good care of rag’s , she is so innocent
rag’s: me??
raj: yeah u , i have fallen for ua innocence only
rag’s: okay , come lets go home , u have to dadu n dadi
raj: no , i will take a leave now , bye
rag’s: but.
dev: rag’s…..
rag’s: okay , please take care .
raj: love u rag’s , i will miss u good bye….
raj exits………rag’s just sits down n catches her head…..
swasanlak are still confused….they have no idea wt is happening there.
dev: are u alright ??
rag’s: no , i am not.

dev: calm down .
she aks swasalak to sit n he narrates about raj…..
rag’s: i am so sorry lucky , i didn’t mean to hurt u n ua feelings , but there was no other option..
dev: rag’s it’s okay ..
rag’s: no it’s not dev, i know he loves me a lot , but i don’t feel anything for him . he just called me when i was in office , i searched for u n lucky , but u both were not there ,so came to meet him, for the first time he was so desperate n he said he will commit suicide n i said that i love someone n was leaving n saw lucky here n just said whatever came in mt mouth. am so sorry lucky.
laksh: it’s okay …
rag’s: but , i broke his heart .how can do this to him , i betrayed him.
dev: rag’s come lets go home.. first
they all go home in rag’s room
dev: rag’s please take some rest.
rag’s: i can’t , will raj be fine??
dev: raj , always keeps his promise . he will be fine , i will talk to him . u just take rest.
rag’s: okay.
rag’s rests n all go out
dev: lucky , this why i don’t want her , know her past. she just can’t bear it n what r u doing here , u stay with rag’s , i have to talk to raj.
laksh: but,
dev: oh god , no but , just go n stay with her.
laksh goes inside n sits beside rag’s n caress her hair n dev goes to talk with raj , swasan accompany him………

friends , i promise to make the next update more interesting n soon , swasan fans i am so sorry in nxt update u can see swasan moments ………….i am so sorry if u don’t like this update plz comment ………….

Credit to: Akshitha Reddy

13 comments

  1. tani

    Awesome episode.enjoyed all the moments.
    I was just imagining all these as i was watching it live..
    You are a mind blowing writer..
    Keep it up.

  2. ahana

    its gud yar..
    devs plan unite raglak was awsome…
    raj part made rags to talk her true feeling for laksh even she said it becz raj pressurizing her i loved it….
    n rags as always rocking….

  3. Ashlyn

    I m a silent reader of ur ff. It’s really awesome has a totally diff storyline. I luv the raglak story. I m happy ? that u will show some swasan moments as I m a swasan fan. Waiting for the next update.

  4. Tara

    Akshitha need not be sorry. It’s an awesome episode. I just loved it. Rags s rocking in ur fiction. I luv ur fiction a lottt. Never missed anything. Superbbbb .. raglak scenes make me laugh.. i imagine their expressions and I do it and laugh.. ??? superbb yaar.. post nxt epi soon

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