SWARAGINI- A Modern Tale of Love (Episode 57) (Last Episode)

Heyy guys!!
I AM SOO SORRY FOR THE DELAY, I had a few events I was organizing lined up last week which is why I couldn’t update!
Link to the last one: http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-modern-tale-love-episode-56-part-1/

“Swara, what the hell is your problem? Let me sleep for god’s sake, I am sure it is not that hard for you to let me sleep for another 3 hours,” I snapped brutally at Swara who was nudging me violently as if there was no tomorrow.

Swara scowled at me with annoyance, “Ragini, go get ready. You will cause us a loss and I am not going to get you married to Laksh then,”

That got me to instantly jerk up and ask her while I rubbed my eyes, “Why am I doing this again?”

“Papa told you too, so now go and put on a nice dress,” she ordered in her usual authoritative tone while I sighed with dismay.

I almost choked when I heard papa tell me that I needed to go finalize this deal at 7 in the night. First of all, why me? Second, who the hell has a deal at 7? And then I am extremely tired today and nobody is letting me nap.

Did I tell you that me, food and sleep are all best friends? Well, we are!

“Okay, okay. You can go back to talking to Sanskaar now,” I snickered at her as I woke up from my lavish waterbed and yawed profusely.

“I was not doing that,”she responded shyly with a small brush on her cheek. This girl changed the minute she got engaged, I swear.

“Oh please, ever since you guys guys got engaged, all of you have been doing is talking to him right?” I decided to tease her some more while I walked to my closet to pick out a dress.

“We are moving to London after the wedding,” she screamed with information as I walked into the washroom to change into a knee length, blue laced dress with sleeveless hands.

“What? Why?” I asked back in shock as I walked out of the washroom and curled my hair.

Swara sighed as she took long strides to our big jewellery closet and pulled out matching tops and a necklace, “Apparently, Sanskaar is tired of India so he wants us to move,”

“I wonder when Laksh will propose me so I can come with you,” I let out a dreamy haze as I gave her a quick hug.

Look, the thing is that no matter how much ever we tease each other, hate each other at the end of the day is it us against the world.

“Poor guy doesn’t know that you have a ‘yes’ on the tip of your tongue right?” Swara took the chance to mock me while I added my make up on.

“I do, honestly I am ready to say a yes the minute he proposes me,” I honestly blurted out as I quickly put on the necklace, snatching it off her hand.

“Yeah sure,” she sarcastically said and added while I gave her a sheepish smile, “You didn’t even say I love you to him but you will agree to marry him,”

I chuckled at her scowl which made her walk outside the room, “Where are you going?”

“Unlike you, I have a company to run,” she taunted with a wink and left the room with a wave on her shoulder.

“Sisters,” I heard dadi say in a disgruntled tone as she shook her head and walked towards me.

She gave me a disapproved look with my dress but ignored me as she shoved a spoon of curd into my throat, “Ragini, here eat this,”

YUCK! Was the only thing my tastebuds were screaming while I swallowed it down hastily.

“What’s the need for all this? The company is not going to collapse if I don’t agree to the deal,” I asked her with disbelief as I saw her take out a thali from the back and do my aarti.

“Don’t say such inauspicious things. What will happen to my ladoo if you say no?” she asked me with concern in her melodramatic voice as she began to do my aarti.

Okay, I am soo confused, “Amn’t I your ladoo? What will happen to me if I say no?”

“Your sister got married, but what about you? Huh? Who will marry you?” she ranted out all her worries while I looked at her as if she has grown 2 heads.

“Ma, stop all this. Ragini is everything ready?” Papa asked me as he escorted me outside while Dadi kept worrying about me to Ma who was shaking her head.

“I am only going to make a deal right?” I asked them nonchalantly and perplexed as I looked at their tense faces.

“Yeah but remember it is very important, so think about wisely before saying yes or no. I always supported you in every decision and will continue to do so whatever your answer will be,” Papa gently said as he patted my head.

Of course they have to support me right? I mean they can’t really do anything if I don’t get the deal finalized and isn’t the contract already signed. All I am going to do is take the papers and negotiate with the conditions then why am I saying a yes or no again?

I gave him a quick nod and a smile as I walked away to the car waiting for me.

“My ladoo is so grown up, enough of all this, we need to get the arrangements done for celebration,” I heard Dadi exclaim and rush of into the house.

From when did my family start to celebrate finalizing deals? I am so lost.

“Go,” I told the driver as I sagged back into the comfy seats and pull out my phone to divert my attention.

“Good luck, enjoy your time!” I got a message from Swara with a huge smiley face at the end.

Okay, now I am extremely lost, am I supposed to enjoy finalizing a deal? I mean what is there to enjoy, all I do is take the contract, negotiate, bid them goodbye and come home. Where is the enjoyment part again?

Right as I was thinking that, the car halted into an abrupt stop which made me flinch. I placed my phone in my wallet and turned around to face my surroundings. All I could see was a dark park with faint images of bushes which freaked me out.

“Are you sure this is where we have to meet?” I asked the driver as I took a step out of the car, the sudden chill of breeze hit me in the face, causing shivers down my spine.

“The address is this ma’am,” he informed me as he showed me the address and the GPS.

“Okay, then, wait here till I go and check whether it is the right place or not,” I instructed him with worry as I walked a few steps into the park.

My heels clinged to the rugged floor and made a clingy sound while my breathing turned uneven with fear. Time to turn around, my brain told me as I bit my lips with nervousness and turned out halfway when I heard a voice which left me breathless, “2 years 8 months and 3 days ago, I met this laid back girl, wearing shorts and a tank top. Angelic face, perfect curves and a mischievous glint swirling in her eyes. The 2 hours I spent with her were not enough for me to know who she was,”

A grin blew out my face as I heard those words ring in my ears, it was Laksh and the girl was of course me. At that right moment, a light lit up before me revealing a stage with a path infront of me leading it to me.My foot involuntarily lunged forward to the stage which was well set up stage with my car which we burnt into the fisrt time we met them.

“Oh my god! This is amazing,” I shrieked like a teenager when I saw a bunch of sticky notes all over the car to remind us of the prank I pulled on him.

As I giggled, I heard Laksh speak again in a dreamy voice, “Little did I know that a few hours later, I will meet the same girl in my exclusive party. There I figured out her arrogance, her dramatic postures, her devil nature, her magnetic pull that kept me drawn towards her throughout this whole time,”

I chuckled at his words and another stage lit a few steps forward which made me run towards it. “Wow,” I exclaimed with extreme joy as I saw a cardboard type set up that represents the dance set up we had our first dance in his house.

He began again which got me excited and alerted as I heard him announce, “Hmm..after a few more hours, I met her again in her cute pajamas, chirping away in the dark forest. That’s when I figured her love for bikes, her craziness when drunk, her attraction towards me and finally her inner beauty and extreme madness towards stunts,”

“This is crazy,” I blurted out with extreme shock as I walked forwards to reveal a pair of scuba glasses, wine and surfing board to remind us what we did the other day at the beach.

I grinned at how the memories were freshly in our minds and the fact that he was taking the time to revive all these once in a lifetime memories. My heart began to beat a little faster and zap with electricity as eagerness filled my veins.

“In the next week I spent with her in France, this teenage attraction started to find it’s root of love. The player in me faded away and replaced with a fun, teasing and carefree teenager boy. Something about her made my day every morning and night and as destiny marks, we even bounded our fate with each other, ” he said everything in perfect dreamy voice.

I stood there stunned as another stage lit up a few steps away which was a mimic of the“Padlock bridge,”

This guy was AWESOME, he took the time to create the perfect mimic of a bridge and locks all over, the true symbol of our love.

“Spilling secrets was never as fun as with her, a normal date was never as amazing as with her, a normal stride in the walk was never as peaceful as with her hand in mine, a lame pickup line was never as funny as with her, my life was never more meaningful as with her,” he said to me which made me go all aww at his sweets words.

I swear if I get diabetes, it will be because of him! “Oh my god!” I shrieked as the next stage revealed a pictures of all our trips and all our time in a huge collage.

This time I actually walked onto the stage and caressed my hand over the pictures which caused me to burst out giggling jovially.

“They say that you never realize what something is worth until it is taken away from you, but in reality, I had always known her worth but I never thought I could have lost her until the day she left everything behind without thinking twice. For the first time in my entire life, I felt the oxygen in my lungs strangling me, the pain in me tightening, I loved her so much that it hurt,” as the words rang in my ears, tears filled my eyes and my knees went weak again.

The hurt and pain of love began to cloud me through me, letting all this emotions in me swirl and I am guessing it happened the same with Laksh when the next stage revealed rain as in tears.

He let me sink in before he continued, “Finally, after 2 years, the blood in my started to circulate again, the hope in me started to build up again, the happiness started to flow in me again, the sun started to lurk my soul again, life started to make sense again as I fell for her all over again,”

“Laksh,” I whispered lovingly as I saw the perfect model of the pineapple fountain where we met after 2 years which made me gasp with shock at his extreme effort.

Tears were openly spilling out my eyes as a grin exploded on my face as I heard him say, “The minute I started to think everything was going fine and I met win her back again, she was taken away from me once more, throwing hurdles of the past along my way, bringing back the dark past forward again,”

“Oh my!” I exclaimed as the next stage revealed Laksh himself with a mike in his hands.

I stood frozen at my face as my eyes locked with the intense emotions building in his eyes as he walked towards me. He was wearing black jeans, a navy blue shirt with a black tie and his hair in a handsome mess.

He smiled at me nervously as he took long strides towards me and bent on his knees, taking out a velvet box as he said, “After passing through so many up and downs, after waiting for so many years for this moment, after fighting destiny for this, after uniting with each other again and again, after falling for each other again, Ragini, will you marry me?”

I gasped in shock as tears continued to pour out of my eyes, for the first time I felt speechless, my knees went numb and I tried to process that information while his eyes sparkled with excitement. Now I realize why Dadi was so worried and what Papa was saying.

Should I say yes to enter my perfect life with my perfect one?

“After passing through so many up and downs, after waiting for so many years for this moment, after fighting destiny for this, after uniting with each other again and again, after falling for each other again, Ragini, will you marry me?” I asked her nervously as I stretched the diamond ring in front of her which had R+L in a heart.

It took me a lot of time to arrange the lights, the stages and get Sanskaar to play along while Swara was a great help!

I could see the tears stream down her face with her eyes searching my soul for honesty before she asked me dubiously, “Do I have a choice?”

I noded at her and mocked, “Of course you do, if you say yes than I will insert this ring in your finger. If by any odd chance you say no, then I will ask you why, let you go and come tomorrow while you are asleep to put the ring on,”

She chuckled at my words which made my face lit up and questioned again, “Doesn’t sound much of a choice to me. What if I say I need more time?”

“Then I will be at your place in an hour,” I teased as I winked at her which made her throw her head back and laugh.

“Will you keep taking me on dates?” she asked me with seriousness while I smiled at her cuteness.

“Totally,” I assured her as I wanted to yell, this position hurts.

“Not come between me and my food?” she asked me with I-will-kill-you look which made me nod instantly.

“I thought you would say me and Sanskaar, but okay,” I agreed hesitantly while she shook her head with disbelief.

“Never tell me that I am annoying,”

“Hard to say yes to that, but anything for you,”

“Let me go wherever and whenever I want,”

“As long as I am with you, hell yeah,”

“Keep loving ONLY me for the rest of your life?” she asked me in a mere whisper and her eyes gleaming with fear.

“That’s a tough choice, let me see,” I decided to tease her a little which made her shriek in horror.

“Laksh,” she warned me with her face leeched pale.

“Yes,” I told her with a bright smile.

“Then yes,” she said gently as she stretched her hand which made me hastily put the ring on her finger.

Her eyes twinkled with joy, her face was radiating happiness while I could tell her soul was beaming with pleasure. And so was mine.

She gave me one of her adorable smile as she looked at the ring while I stood up and pulled her in for a bone crushing hug, spinning her around in that process, “You have no idea how happy I am right now,”

“Not more than me,” I heard her whisper as she snuggled into my neck and pulled away snapping, “Why are you wearing this for a proposal?”

“To show you my s*xy side,” I teased as I kissed her cheek while she flushed bright red under my touch.

“I hate you,”he muttered annoyingly with an adorable face while I pinched her cheek and said with rich pleasure, “I know you love me,”

“When did I ever say that?” she asked me with her eyebrow raised and mouth twitched into a smirk.

“Of course you did like…once,” I shot back with a smirk and extreme uncertainty running through me.

“Un huh and when is that?” she cross questioned as she crossed her arms across her chest and smirked evilly.

“On the day after we found out Zain? When I saved you? At the beach?” I listed out various places but she shook her head at all of them.

My face fell and anger took over me as I screamed at her with irritation, “You devil, you never said I love you to me, say it now,”

“Nope, never, never, ever, ever,” she sang as she ran across the park with me chasing her wildly.

“Yes, yes, now,” I demanded with annoyance. She never said those magical words to me, can you believe that? I am so freaking pissed right now.

“No, no, never,”

“Say it or I will call Swara and tell her that you were the one who ruined her business deal last friday,” I threatened her slyly.

“You wouldn’t,” she retorted with horror.

“Try me,” I dared her as I called out, “Swara,”

‘Yeah, what’s up?” she came into view in the next 5 minutes with Sanskaar while Ragini’s face leeched away all the color.

“Okay, okay, I love you from the bottom of my heart and will love you till I grow old,” she finally confessed with genuine emotions which lurked my soul with happiness.

“What about when you grow old?” I questioned as I indicated Swara.

“I will love you then too,” she blurted out as she jumped towards me for a hug, while I chuckled at her.

Relief washed over me as I hugged her, after going through so much pain, this happiness and joy on her face was worth it. This was how it was supposed to be, out perfect life and I couldn’t wish for anything else.


A wide smile blew out my face as I looked at Ragini and Laksh hugging each other while I leaned back into Sanskaar’s chest and enthusiastically said, “awww…aren’t they cute?”

Sanskaar made an uncomfortable moment and mumbled, “I think I’m going to go sick,”

I smacked his arm and replied sternly, “Shut up, don’t be rude,”

“Anything you say darling,” he huskily muttered in my ear as he gave me a quick kiss.

“Can we please stay in India?” I asked him with pleading eyes and innocent face while I heard Ragini and Laksh go all cocky.

“Nope but we can take them to London,” he answered my request which made me frown stubbornly.

“You think we all will survive without getting in jail?” I asked him with seriousness in my voice while he shrugged it off playfully.

“I think we’ll live,” he stated casually as we strolled around the park with memories of the past flowing into me as I looked at the stages Laksh made for Ragini.

Was I jealous? Not at all, I am happy with a simple and quick proposal that Sanskaar gave me than bearing through all the pain to stand through a longer one. Sanskaar tightened his grip on my waist as I glanced at our engagement rings.

“I love you,” I lovingly said as I leaned onto him a little more.

“That was random but I love you too,” he whispered back with the same care and affection while we strolled around the park.

This was the life I never thought I would get, never thought I would fall in love with anyone and here I am walking with the love of my life. I never wished for a perfect life but now all I want was Sanskaar to remain with me for the rest of eternity.

OMG! That was IT GUYS!! HOW WAS LAKSH’S PROPOSAL??????? Did you guys like his idea??

I am almost in tears right now, I loved writing this and enjoyed my time with all you guys and your amazing comments. THANKS A LOT for bearing through my torture of irregular updates, complete story and extreme support. I WANT TO THANK EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART FOR THIS!!

Before I go, I want to tell you guys that I started to write this as a b’day present for one of my friend who is a crazy fan of Swaragini and loves me a lot. This is for you! I hope you enjoyed it!!

Secondly, Ruhani, you wanted to know about me right? Well I am honestly, a very crazy (I think you can see that) girl who is OBSESSED with chocolates, I also like hang with friends and cousins, and am extremely outgoing and loud. Painting is my passion and listening to music, my most basic hobby! Can anyone live without music??
I want to travel around the world….although I have seen most of it (no, not only in movies, big time traveler here 😉 ) try skydiving, paragliding ,bungee jumping and all other stunts I could drag myself to do!!! I write stories, to share my wonderful ideas with you 😉 , I definitely enjoy writing them….Of course I am not a professional writer but I do take the time to put in my best effort!! I love cars, hence Ragini’s love for cars 😉 and am a big foodie, not as much as Ragini but I can give her tough competition. What about you??

So that’s about me! I WANT ALL OF YOU READING THIS TO TAKE A MINUTE TO TELL ME THE BEST PART IN THE STORY AND ONE SMALL REQUEST FROM ME….CAN YOU ALL DO ME A FAVOUR (Ruhani, esp you yaar) and read my other STORY, Bond of! I WILL REALLY MISS ALL OF YOU, so just drop by and talk to me over there so that you don’t forget me!!

I hope you all had the same amount of fun as I had! AND DO COMMENT for a last goodbye, I don’t think I am going to write another Swaragini ff in the near future but you never know and do talk to me in the BOND OF if possible! WILL MISS YOU GUYS and sorry for the sudden ending.

BYE!!! Loads of love and best wishes! TC!

Credit to: Mandy


  1. Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???..

    What torture?? I like u r ff soo much.. Even I write many ff…. Scientific thriller in swaragini is written by me.. And other fff also.. So u write better than me..yaar

  2. Awwwww….the proposal was just awesome,mind blowing, touching and what else i say….i had tears in my eyes while reading this…i will miss this ff yaar….will miss u too…i know i never commented before…but i just want to say….love u for giving us the pleasure of reading this sweet cute amazing ff.

    • Mandy

      How sweet…even I had tears at the end of this!! Will miss you all soooooooo much!! The pleasure is all mine and I am extremely glad that all of you taking the time to let me know that. Thanks for reading the story, tc and loads of love!!

    • Mandy

      thanks a lot!! I do write another ff…it is called the Bond of..? GO check that out so we can meet there!! Thanks again for all the support…will miss you! Tc and loads of love!!

  3. Dhara

    Hey Mandy this was shocker. Last update? Anyways everything will end at sometime. This was superb mind blowing ff with crazy characters specially SwaRagSan. Lucky was too cute. Obvio I will miss this ff. There is a request from side. Please come up with the Epilogue for this ff. Plz plz plz…

    • Mandy

      Exactly…everything has to end! crazy for sure, after I am the writer 😉 I will miss you all sooo much!! Can’t tell you all how much 🙁 Epilogue??! Will see, fine fine, ONLY if you read my other ff…it is called the Bond Of..? and comment. I really dont want to loose all of you, so talk to me there!

      • Dhara

        For that I will have to start reading from the 1st chap 🙂 It will take time as well as I am mother and working women. But I will surely take time n read it. But don’t black mail me on that 🙂 Epliogue to banta hain dear.

    • Mandy

      Not fair 🙁 Thekhe…dungi par promise karna padega ki whenever you get time you will read it…only 19 chaps so. i understand so epilogue thode din main likhungi!

  4. asheeyana

    Wow…… I am jst in love with ur writing and laksh ‘s proposal was just awesome loved it…….though I nvr commented in ur ff , have read all your episodes…..love u ,hope you come with another ff❤????

    • Mandy

      Thank you soo much!! awww…Iam so glad you liked my writing! I write another ff too, it is called the Bond of..? Try reading that, I am sure you will like it as much as this one! Swaragini ff, I will try to but I am not sure whether I am going to have time or not. Anyways, loads of love and tc!

  5. Nupur

    Hi Mandy di…l know l haven’t commented in ur ff before but as they say ‘Better late than never’…urs was one of the first ff l might have read on Swaragini and l fell in love with ur crazy characterisation of all the four leads which were completely different from the actual show…l clearly loved to read ur each episode…u r truly a fantabulous writer…do come up with such interesting stories again to enthral ur readers…
    Loved ur whole ff and the last episode was no less than a Dhamakedhar movie…

    Lots of love and hugs for u and may u have a blessed future???

    • Mandy

      HIII!! Yes, totally better late than never! It is soo good to hear from you!! hahaa…for sure, my characters are very different as I like to portray them more naturally than what the show has made them into -_- awww…you are soo sweet! If you want more, than def read my other story The Bond of..? The characters there are very crazy and unique too…here is the link to the first part http://www.tellyupdates.com/the-bond-of-intro/
      DO have a look! Loads of love and all the best to you too!!

    • Mandy

      Thats soo sweet! Thanks a lot for all your support yaar, will miss you sooooo much!! All your suggestions were truly incredible! Do read my other story so we can talk there too!! Loads of love and tc!!

  6. Sofia

    I will miss ur ff very much..i was a silent reader and used to read ur ff regularly.
    Please come back with a new ff. Love u Mandy..

    • Mandy

      I am glad you told me that at the end! You are soo sweet! Love you very much!! I am already writing a ff..it is called The Bond Of..?
      DO check that out for now, I have exams coming up so let me see if I can be back after that! WIll miss you all so much! Loads of love, tc!

  7. $on!@

    last episode….. litetally…
    noooooo …. am gonna miss this story so badly. this story was just sooo awesome that I am in love with it.
    mandy you are undoubtedly a wonderful writer. I have read BOND OF also from the very beginning. …. and the way you put your thoughts in to words is just beautiful.
    I am glad you are writing other story still. And thanks for the wonderful story you have.

    • Mandy

      aww….but my big craziness has to come to an end right? Not sure if you guys can handle more of my craziness 😉 Thanks a lot for all your support! I am glad you are liking both my stories….means a lot to me!! The pleasure is all mine to get such amazing readers like you, couldn’t ask for more!! Loads of love, tc and meet you at the bond!

  8. Hey Mandy,
    The proposal is truly awesome.. 🙂
    I didn’t comment on any episode earlier,sorry.. 🙁
    I gonna miss this FF but not you as I’m gonna meet you in “The Bond”.. 🙂

    Stay blessed and be happy dear 🙂


    • Mandy

      hiii!! It’s totally fine as long as you enjoyed the journey here and I think you have, so all good!! Thank you soo much!! Haha..meet to I am going to miss writing this but def will meet at the bond, glad you are reading that!! Loads of love, tc!

      • Obvio I enjoyed the journey 😀
        I’m reading “The bond” as the story got it’s craziness,twists and turns and also crazy cousins that I don’t have many in real.. So enjoying all that craziness by reading the FF 😉
        You are a telugu girl.. I’m also a telugu girl and I’m from Andhra Pradesh.. 😀

        Hey we have got similar interests like painting and listening to music.. 🙂 You know, you made me go all crazy and crazy by listing out stunts like paragliding,sky diving.. I wish I could do those stunts once in my life.. 😀

        I’m glad to meet a person who share similar interests(nonetheless it’s in virtual world) 🙂

        Stay blessed dear.. 🙂


      • Mandy

        Avuna?? OMG!! i am meeting so many telugu ppl here!! I love those cousins, I have tons in real life but are scattered all over India and I am an NRI so we dont really meet much!! Wow..same pinch!! I didnt do all those stunts yet,..I did some but I am def going to do them. We shud do them together ? I know right…I am happy to meet you too!! What do you do btw? Study or work??

      • Avunu.. 😀 Lucky you got crazy cousins.. 😉 But sad to know you don’t meet them often..
        Of course we can do stunts together.. It will be a great fun.. 🙂
        I have completed my graduation in engineering and preparing for higher studies and also for civil services.. 🙂
        What about you??

  9. Shanaya

    Omg….lucky s proposal was awesome….I just loved it…. And…we r so similar painting is my passion too…and I don’t spend a day without listening to music….. And I am a foodie…. My sister complains that she is not getting enough place to sleep at night.. Lol….but the episode was awesome… I just loved it…. As said I love your other ff the bond of?? too….and I am waiting for that update…. And a last question where r u staying at the present???? I stay in Karnataka, India though I am from hyderabad… What about u????
    Lots of love…. <3

    • Mandy

      Hii! Really?! Wow…lol…that’s me too! But I dont listen at the night more in the break! Thanks for all the immense support..truly loved you for that!! I stay in Canada at the moment, ohhh..I am from hyd too!! SO you know telugu??! Loads of love, tc!

      • Shanaya

        Yes….of course I know telugu…. And how is Canada???heard it is an awesome place!!!

    • Mandy

      Ohhh! I know telugu too then!!yeah, canada is an amazing place to live in but it is also extremely cold here in the winters. Can go upto -40 degrees and the snowfall is pretty harsh too. Other than everything else is grt!

  10. Neha

    Hey Mandy last epi…. Had I missed ur epis or what I’m confused I read till swasan and raglak were in one room and sanlak were taking care of swaragini…. Gosh then family and all and swasan engagement…. I missed epis……I’ve to read….

    Wow laksh’s proposal was awesome in every way… Swasan was simple I guess but anything done with pure heart defines love….. U ended it really shocking for me now first I missed ur epis and now u ended up….
    I don’t know about ur other ff as I only read of swasan…. Will try but I’m unhappy u ended it….

    Ok anyways loved reading ur ff and I’m adventurous too but didn’t get time but wanna do something extraordinary very badly and I’m foodie too that’s why I personally used to love the adventure of ur ff…. Thanku for this

    • Mandy

      hii!!yeah, you have to read what happened in the past I think 5 epi to know what is going on. I rushed it through so def a lot has happened!
      Thanks a lot! ! I completely agree, anything done with pure heart is nothing less than an extravagent stuff..infact it is more! haha..sorry yaar but I have a lot of exams coming up and need to study…hope you understand!
      My other ff is not swasan but I am sure you will like it, here is the link to the first part, give it a shot…http://www.tellyupdates.com/the-bond-of-intro/
      Really??! Same pinch then, I think you can see that with all the adventure in my ff! Pleasure is all mine!! Loads of love, tc and hope to talk to you in the bond! Oh and Thanks a lot for all the support with this ff….will miss you a LOT!

      • Neha

        5?Mandy u r giving me shock after shock now I read last two but three more are left…. Ok I’ll give a reading to bond too but that will take some time as my exams are near too….. Tc 🙂

      • Mandy

        Lol!! Expect the unexpected from me after all! Yeah sure, I understand….I am in the same situation! Good luck on your exams!!

  11. Niku

    there is moment whn i said nt wow!! really each n everythng is amzaming…. i will miss u dr… lots of luv

  12. aashi

    Oh my dear!! That was just fab!…..
    I mean wow…..it was wonderful….
    But you didn’t give sanky pov….i would suggest you to write an epilogue…please it a request *puppy face *?…..
    Well Mandy dear…this was one of the best ff I had read…the fun, pranks, love , a bit rivalry.. It was a perfect combination of all!..
    Please do come back with a another one..I’m surely gonna miss you a lot!……
    Well I’m also too obsessed with chocolates……
    Yupp really I enjoyed your story a lot!…..
    Love you dear!! You’re the best ?…
    Lots of love and hugs!!
    ? ? ?? ???

    • Mandy

      Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!! That was soo sweet of you! haha..no sanky for today! Will see BUT for that you have to read my other ff : http://www.tellyupdates.com/the-bond-of-intro/ and tell me how that is for an epilogue.
      Swaragini ff…will see, I have exams coming up and then my work semester will start…so much to do but I will try my best for sure! I am glad you liked the story in general!! Same pinch then!!
      I will misss you soooooooooo much tooo!! Thanks again for all the support!! Loads of love, hugs and best of luck! Do check the other story so we can chat there too!!

    • Mandy

      AWWWW…thats so sweet!! I am going to miss you all too! I am already.writing another ff…it is called The Bond Of..? Check that out…I am not going to start another one just yet. I will miss you!!

  13. Anjali

    The first ff i ever read is finally coming to an end!! Thank you Mandy for such a sweet different love story.
    I absolutely loved it… The funny moments, the intense moments, the suspense, the action….

    <3 <3 <3 <3

    • Mandy

      Haha…thank you sooo much for all your support!! Pleasure is all mine dr! I am sooo glad you enjoyed the story! If you have time do read my other work The Bond of..? whenever possible!! Keep in touch there, loads of love, tc!

  14. Sueño

    OMG!!!!! I can’t believe u ended it……. ??
    U r so gud……. Lovd d ff lyk anything frm d strt till nw…….. Hope to see d epilogue fr sure……..
    Abt laksh proposal……. oMG it ws cute n cheesy too…… Bt thn so romantic n lovely as hell also………
    Wud luv to read ur ff….. If possible u cn write a new one too??

    • Mandy

      Sorryyy but all good things come to an end right?! I thank you soòooooooooo much from the bottom of my heart for alll your immense support!! I will see about the epilogue…will write it but dont know when. I am glad you liked Laksh’s proposal!! You should totally read my other one…it is called the bond of..? I really would love to write another one but no time and exams too so will see! Loads of love, hope to see u there and tc!

    • Mandy

      Awwe….thats soo sweet of you! Will miss you too and thanks a lot for all your support!! I am sure I will see you in the bond of, so see ya, loads of love and tc!

  15. shani

    Maddy I will miss ur ff very much…suerb story…I really loved it and I enjoied ur cute little differtent moments of our swaragini and sanlak…very nice story…keep writing..
    Hope to see u with another story…god bless u…

    • Mandy

      Thanks a lot!!! I am super happy you liked the story!! I am already writing another story so do check that out, it is called the bond of..? Other than that, I am not going to write any other stories for now due to exams….loads of love, tc!

    • Mandy

      Thanks a lot!! For all your support…but due to exams I cant really write another ff as of now but will think about it for the future….loads of love, and tc!!

  16. Ruhani

    Omg mandy u ended it so soon… I thought u will give 2 or 3 mre episodes n then end it.. I was a shock 4 me when is so ur ff logo mentioning the last epi.. Immediately I strd reading it…. It took nearly 1 hr to read this yr bcuz I was cherishing each and every line of this epi it was Mindblowing I hAv no words to describe yr.. First lets talk abt laksh’s date.. Wht was that lyk seriously hw do u cme up with such an amazing idea.. When I was reading through the last epi i was thinking wht kind of A date u will portray 4 raglak bcuz it has to be extraordinary taking ragini in to consideration bcuz it’s very difficult to convince her n after their first date I was sure u wud cme up with an out of the box thing… N exceeding my expectations u came up with this..Amazing dr… N u give a picture perfect ending but still it is incomplete without a epilogue.. Plz write it yr when u get tym I will surely wait 4 that… U always came up with some extraordinary things that I can’t help but fall in love with ur ff… U gave a new dimension to swaragini… U portrayed them as devil sisters n i loved it… I hAv been reading this frm its very beginning that it is very difficult to part with it… Lyk it says beautiful things doesn’t last 4 long it is same as in the case with ur ff.. U always came up with so many twists n turns that u had us glued to ur ff… I’m surely gonna miss this… It truly justified its title the modern tale of love..!

    U seem to be a very adventurous and jolly person mandy… Talking abt me I’m also a very adventurous person and at times I’m extremely childish… I love hanging out with my cuzns mre than my frnds bcuz no one can be as much crazy n annoying (in a gud way) n fun loving as my cuzns… I’m a civil engineering student enjoying my campus lyf n a lil’ bit worried abt my xams… I wud love to try para guiding n go for trekking in dark deep forest without snakes 4 my company bcuz I hate those creepy n slippery thing..yuck… Sometimes I prefer staying at home n catching up with all those cartoons along with my lil’ cuzn… I knw its crazy but I can’t help… My hobbies change with tym… Currently my hobby is reading all these ff’s though my parents n cuzns are pestering me to stop this n take up studies as my hobby which I’m not at all interested in n since u ended this i shud get back to my lessons as my xams r fast approaching… Unlike u I’m not obsessed with chocolates infact I’m obsessed with milk yum.. That’s abt me…

    I will definitely read ur ff bond of only 4 u bcuz I don’t wanna miss u.. U n Sharon r my 2 very spcl n crazy frnds here.. I don’t wanna part with this crazy frnd of mine.. Will u plz share me the link to bond of.. I will catch up with u there… Prepare well 4 ur xams… Love u.. See ya soon… ?????…

    ps. This is gonna be the longest comment I hAv ever written on any of the sites so plz bear me.. ?

    • Mandy

      Longest comment for sure…even for me! I was like woahhhh….sSooo big!! I was waiting for your comment from y’day and was about to yell at you for not commenting earlier but I guess this super long comment will make up for!!!

      Sorry yaar….I needed to end it as soon as possible as my exams are comimg up and me being me didnt do any preplanning yet. Thank YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR ALL YOUR SUPPORT!! Honestly, you were my NUMBER 1 reader and supporter throughout the ff, there were times where I would just write this ff for you!!

      I know right….Ragini is hard to convince which is why I had to come up with extraordinary date….I am so glad you liked it!! This date was the hardest to thimk of as I used up all my ideas on the other ones so I thought why not my dream date?? Epilogue….yeah many r asking so I think I will end it there! Will write one but will take a while!!

      Hahah…you are adventurous too! Yay! I hate animals in general so I feel yout disgust!!hey I like cartooons too….I mean who doesn’t right?! Hard to make studies ur hobbies I know but u shud get studying!! Milk?? What do you see in milk?

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/the-bond-of-intro/ is the link to the intro of bond. Read it and let me know what you think. It is only 18 chaps as of now and there are CRAZY cousins in here too so I can assure that u will relate to the story.
      Here is the link to all the chapters : http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Bond+of

      I hope you will like it!! Yeah…same! You are one of the closest I have here and I dont want to loose u either!! GOOD LUCK for all your exams….loads of love, hugs and tc!!

      • Ruhani

        Are wah I got longest reply ever for my longest comment.. Lol..! That was so sweet of u mandy that u continued this ff for me… I’m floating in the air ?.. Sry yr actually wht happened was yesterday I went to wonderla an amusement park in kochi n had a hell lot of fun trying out all those scary rides.. I even got stuck in one water ride bcuz I was less than 50 kgs… Well that was fun but aftereffects were too bad… I’m having severe back pain n slept as soon as I reached home… N when I woke up much to my pleasure n dismay I saw ur ff with last episode tagged in it… I was literally shocked… Anyways I will surely read bond of… I don’t knw yr hw I fell in love with milk.. I just love its smell its texture… I prefer raw cold milk though rosemilk is my favourite… I was going to ask u the link to all the episodes of bond of as I read the intro tumne toh meri dil ki baat janli… Maybe that’s lyk bff’s are.. It is an awesome story yr.. The way u portrayed her emotions is superb… I hAv one doubt is it based on any of the serials.? Well see u at bond of.!

      • Ruhani

        Well mandy my B’dAy is on August 4 will u plz write a one shot on swaragini as my B’dAy gift plz plz pretty plz.. N write it only if u r free.. U shud go n start ur preparations for ur xams.. Abt the epilogue its not needed u shud concentrate on ur studies mre… When will ur xams end? Do u hav vacations? U stay at Canada right? I guess it’s too much cold over there.,.

      • Mandy

        oh wow!!! That’s amazing….I loved wonderland in Toronto when I went!! hahaa…can imagine your state! My legs were almost about to break apart after I went on this ride which was spinning continously in all directions possible for 5 whole minutes. But I still liked it…so 😉 That still doesn’t convince me that milk is nice, I don’t hate milk but don’t like it either -_- Anyways, no bond is not based on any show, it is completely off my imagination!! I am so glad you liked it! I already gave you the links to the episode’s on the comment above! haha..true, we are totally bff’s! Aug 4…OMG! Mine is on Sept 4!!! A month apart, totally I will!! Just remind me a week before so that i don’t forget 😉 Also tell me what do you want it about as in adventure, love, sad story, emotional, as it is an OS…… Thanks!! Loads of love, tc!

      • Ruhani

        Bond of..? Is awesome yr i loved it… I haven’t cmpltd reading it… U totally rocked it babe I couldn’t comment there as the comment column is missing idk where it went ?… Her cuzns rocks.. They r amazing not mre than sana n her first love popcorn.. Her craving 4 popcorn is funny lol.! N aarav’s care n possessiveness 4 sana is so cute.. He is not that bad after knowing his past… N their wedding it’s the most amazing n hilarious wedding I hAv ever heard of lyk totally ? I don’t knw hw u cme up with such ideas.. U r such an amazing writer that u can take it up as a profession…

        Wow ur B’dAy is on September 4 that’s amazing c we are meant to be close buddies that’s y v hav so many things in common lol.! N hw old r u? I will b 19 this Aug.

      • Mandy

        Awww….thats so sweet! I am glad you are liking it! Writing as profession? Idk about that…I am not tht good. Just write something for timepass. Maybe realizing that u will write another one page long comment the comment npx ran away???? haha…yeah, the wedding was one hilarious one for sure.
        I am going to hit 18 in sep!!

  17. kalai

    first I will definitely miss ur ff…i m raglak fan bt I always prefer ragini more dan laksh… bt only in ur ff I jst luv laksh more dan anyone… he s something crazy u know nd all credit goes to u only…. I know in ur ff ragini s also somewhat crazy so to handle her s really a tough job….bt laksh handles her perfectly… overall I luved ur ff….must say u r perfect script writer… nd about laksh proposal it was mind blowing nd also different…. bst happy ending.. hope to c u in ur nxt swaragini or raglak ff….bye tc….

    • Mandy

      awww….that’s so sweet! Thanks a lot for all your support throughout the story! Means so much to me that I changed your view and I am glad you fell in love with Laksh’s character. ahahha…I agree that they both are extremely crazy in my ff, but after all it is written by me!! I am not going to write another swaragini ff as of now, so do check my other ff The Bond Of..? in the mean time! Loads of love, tc!

  18. Mandy

    I really really wanted to write a epilogue but I dont have time at all. By the time I have some time I think it will be way too late and have no meaning at all. I am extremely sorry for that! I hope you guys enjoyed this journey as much as I did, means a lot to me that most of you took the time to comment here! Do keep in touch with my other story..The Bond Of..? Loads of love to you all and best wishes!

    • Ruhani

      It’s ok mandy… I told u na it’s perfectly alright… Concentrate on ur studies mre… I will catch up with u at bond of 4 sure ?… N thnq once again for this wonderful fiction… It had a great tym reading it n was always waiting for it just to see the way they taunt each other… Loads of hugs n kisses… Luv u

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