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swaragini love in slums of india and other with full of lust prologue (mistake by ragini and swara )

pathanBy 43 Comments5 Mins Read

guys many people misunderstood swaragini love slums in india and other full of lust intro part 2 as episode and some as different story but guys it is same story and

intro 1 it was just a promo okk and from today story will start so please read it u will enjoy and comment
guys link of previous part is given below
intro 1 of story- http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-love-slums-india-forcefully-intro/
intro 2 of story- http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-love-slums-india-full-lust-intro-part-2/

GUYS PLEASE SUGGEST ME MY ONE FREIND gave me one suggestio

episode starts with one girl is pacing here and there in roomand she is realy confused
just than call arives
caller- hey ragini are u ready
ragini- please let me think one time
caller- ohh my baby i am calling fron 1 hour please come fast before ur inlaws house came to see u
ragin- i know but i can noy betray my parents
caller- ohh ragu think once more it is matter of ur life
ragini- i know but for me my parents reputation is also equaly important
caller- i know but will u be able to live with that person to whome u never love or with that person who will not think about ur carrier of modeling
ragini- i know but i am afraid
caller- do u love me ragini
ragini- i love u too much
caller- can u live without me in ur whole life
ragini- no i can not
caller- so ragini think urself if u will marry with other boy than ur as well as ur family and of that boy life will be spoiled because u will not able to love him and

u will not able to give him that place which all wife gives because u love only me and u will be unhappy whole life if u will be unhappy than ur parents will also be

unhapppy so this is good u run with me we will live happy married life and ur parents will also be happy because they will think that u will be happy in ur life and ya

i know today they will break down but after 4-5 days they will be normal and other side u are also decreasing there burdon of there life they will not have to waste

money for ur marriage
ragini- u are correct
person- so my love pack ur bags and come we will live our life happily and i will fulfill ur dreams of becoming model
ragini without thinking anything packs her bags and left the house still she had guilt in her heart but one side happy that she will decrease burdone of there family

so she runs with that boy
where boy thinks evily so my ragini baby i know how to convince u poor and village girl no u see what will happen with u, and smiles and says ohh coming with me to

decrease parents burdon now i will make ur life as burdon
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scene shifts to other side one girl is running very fast from some boys
boy- ohh disko danser why are u running from us
swara- please leave me i am not like other girls
boy- so which type of girl u are just come baby
swara- please do not run behind me i came here due to my helplessness
boy- so please sleep with me i will fulfilll ur dreams
while running swara falls and boy catches her and says ohh u look very hot and going to kiss her but one hand comes inbetween that was our hero sanskar
sanskar jerks that boy and beats him but some more goons come to beat them
now sanky was afraid from inside but he goes near the goons with too much courage but after completing 2-3 steps he hold swara’s hand and both runs from there
after running too much both stands at place
sanky- hey bhgwan how much body builder boys were there they would had killed me
swara laughs by his reaction and says thank u tooo much u are stranger than also saved my life
sanky- hey beautiful why are u telling stranger to this handsom boy u should become my freind u will be in profit
swara laughs and says ohh flirting with girl
sanky- i am boy u are a girl so chhora chhori ko hi flirt karega na
swara- okk okk thanxx what is ur name
sanky says my name is sanskar maheshwari
swara my name is swara gadodia
swara- ohhh surname to maheshwari the richest person of BHOPAL or rehte ho slum me
sanky- ya what to do we maheshwari are tired of living in banglow so thought to explore this slum
swara- u are realy funny
sanky- i know…………

PRECAP-story will start with 3 month leap
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guys please suggest me my one freind VRITHIKA gave me suggestio and i also liked her suggestion so she told me to change swasan character as raglak character and

raglak as servant in swasan house and best friend of swara but sanskar doesn’t like the friendship and have to torture swara like hell and he will be womaniser and

raglak will have good freindship and they will live in slums
so guys do u want that i go with this suggestion, or the way in which story is going on is, but in this suggestion only difference will be that swasan part will change

into raglak and vice versa nothing extra so please select option
1) i will take story same as it is going
2)i will take story with the suggestion of VRITHIKA
so please comment

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43 Comments

  2. deeksha on

    nice dear…………..update soon…………it is completely ur wish………….

  12. Riya on

    No no no option one is better….. Don’t make Raglak as Swasan’s servant…. Stick to ur plot….. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t change it…. It is really very interesting…. Plzzzzzz don’t change it….. It’s a humble request….

  13. Sruti on

    I hv an suggestion….Make Swasan as Raglak’s servant….N if u do this I vll cry a lot bcz I m huuuuuuuuuuuge fan of Raglak n I hate Swara from d core of my heart….N in many ffs Sanskar was a womanizer but Laksh was not….So plzzzzzz don’t change Laksh’s character…So I think option 1 z best than option 2…Between ep was awsm bro….Hats off 2 u n ur mind……Stay blessed….

  15. Aasthu on

    plzzz don’t make anyone other’s servant………let it be the way it was when u gave us the first intro…….

  16. pavani on

    Let it bee dear it is nice now nd don’t change ur story for others u write wt u decided

  17. yashasvi on

    hey bhaijaan pehle toh i was confused that this the the same or u r writing 3rd also , but atually i would prefer 1st no doubt this is also owsm bt i hav seen sanky as womaniser in many ff bt not laksh n in previous one i loved ragini’s bold avtar, so acc to me old one … bt final decision is ur bro

    • pathan on

      thanxx for ur comment and intro 2 was just promo of this story and keep commenting sis

  20. Akshata on

    original story is nice, stick to your story. i cant tolerate raglak as servant in swasan’s house. no way…….. i even cant imagine it.

  22. Poota on

    Dear watever u want u can take… but don’t make one couple as others servant it will hurt d feeling of der fans although m a swasan fan but I respect other couples fans feelings also

  23. Prakriti on

    Sorry for late comment bro…I think option 1 is better….BTW the way story is awesome…
    Keep writing…