swaragini love in slums of india and other with full of lust OS (sanky strugle vrses lucky romance)

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guys this part is comparison of romance with work
guys i know u all wil be amazed that i update very early so there are 2 reason behind it one ur beautiful comment and support made me to write and other i am traveling
so i utilised that time so read this episode
it starts with swara sanky and atif going to there house from hospital swara was in between both the boys, both and both the hands of swara was in shoulder of both boys
she was walking with there support
swara sees sanky and atif gets teary eyed
sanky sees her and says what happened swara why are u crying in concerned tone
swara- this are tears of happiness that i have two person in my life who can support me, but sanky i am very afraid if we get separated
sanky gets angry do not dare to utter this useless word again infront of me, if u will repeat again i swear consequences will be worst
swara knows sanky’s anger she gulped in fear by seeing his red hazel eyes who were looking at her angrily, she could not utter word due to his eyes she just nods innoscently
making pout face, sanky sees her and meltd, he removes his gaze from her and does not face eyelock replies in low tone swara i am sorry i did not want to hurt u but please
whenever u use word our separation i can not grasp this state ment please never use this non sense word
swara- nods and says sorry
atif- u have to say sorry to me also, u have also hurted me
swara- okk sory dramebaz taking advantage of situation and hits him playfully\
atif smiles widely by looking both of there smile sanky also smiles slightly
now all 3 reached to house many people came to sanky house to ask about swara’s condition and about her health all people consoled her and went to there respective house

in sanky house sanky makes food and all eat happily swara condition became good by sanky care because atif went to school
swara and sanky both were seating (afternoon time)
swara- sanky why u cre for me this much
sanky sees her lovingly and says u are my best freind and i like u
swara feels current passing in her body as he said he likes her
swara nervously do u like me
sanky comes closer to her and says ya i like u as well as atif because there is no one in my world other that u both
swara gives him smile
now both were starring at each other continuesly swara blushed by his continues gaze and do not mate his eyes sanky sees her antiques and smiles now he started seeing other
side now swara ask him why u did not went to work\
sanky- because there is no work important than ur health
swara feels butterfly by hearing this words from his mouth but manages to say but now i am fine and u can go for half day atleast
sanky- no never
swara- no sanky i know how much stict ur malik is please go
sanky remembers how much important work was today and him malik told him to not to do leave today sanky gets scared but no this time he feels swara needs him more but
our swara was very stubborn and she forcefully convince him to go his work because she knows how much important the work is but sanky had no chance he unwillingly goes to
his work place
now swara was all alone in her room as sanky goes she cries harder and thinks I DO NOT KNOW HOW SANKY WILL REACT WHEN HE WILL KNOW THAT I AM MARRIED AS WELL AS pr*stitutE

SANKY AT HIS WORK PLACE (REAL LIFE INCIDENSE)
SANKY reaches to his malik and says malik- malik i came
malik sees him blood is boiling inside him he slaps him hard making sanky cheeks red, a tear falls from sanky’s eyes due to pain
malik- angrily i told u to come today ealry morning to do work but u did not come and comming in afternoon day time at 2:30pm
sanky-pleadingly malik i am sorry my freind health was not good he bent on his knees malik please forgive me
malik holds his hair tightly and says it is common excuse given by u all workers
sanky says malik believe me and i will realy do all work which i shoud do whole day just tell me what work should be done today
malik- removes his hand from his hair and says okk today we have to shift this whole gram of my godown to this trala because i am selling it and so he immediately goes towads
grams hip and starts filling plastic bag which can contain 65kg of grams but his malik comes and gives him bigger plastic bag which in which 90kg gram can be filled
and says today u came late so u have to fill this big bag and keep in truck
sanky nods and takes 90kg bag, he fills whole gram in plastic bag it contained 48 bags and it took him 3 hours and 30 minutes now he was fully drenched in his own sweat
(guys all worker has fixed amount of work or gram to fill in bag and put into truck)he sits and breathing heavily
one person brings tea he and all other workers drink it sanky back was paining due to continuesly filling of grams he sits
malik- hey u all workers start ur work, u all had become lazy just stand up and do work
sanky unwillingly stands his body wants to take rest but he have to obey his malik command he was now very worried how he will put take this all bag to truck by putting it on
his back one by one
but sanky had to do his work he removes his shirt and goes to one bag and takes it he feels ohh god how much heavy it is but he did not had any option he have to do work
sanky takes bag one by one and gently placed them in truck
now rain again starts
sanky and other worker- malik it is raining how we will cork
malik- you all kam chor people if today night i could not sell this gram than i will get huge lose because from tomorrow gram price will reduce so do not stop working do work
sanky starts working he knows no need of argument this because this people thinks only about their profit
(BY THE WAY MALIK OF SANKY IS OUR RAGINI’S FUTURE HUSBAND LUCKY)
lucky goes to the cabin of godown who had one bed and have all enimities which he needs now he goes towards inside where roof was open he was enjoying the rain a girl comes
and he starts feeling her hot breath and starts kissing her in this rain and removes her cloth and bites her everypart he also undressed himself
other side in heavy rain sanky was still working rain drops were falling on sanky body but the drops which were falling from his body was more than falling droplet on his
body because that drop were mixing with his sweat which was continuesly flowing, sanky was not feeling cold but in this heavy rain also he was feeling hot due to high work
there was same condition with lucky he was also was sweating in rain but his sweat was full of pleasure and he was also feeling hot but that was due to urge of doing romance,

one side sanky was feeling tiredness due to lifting of hight weight but other side lucky was feeling tired due to continues stroking a girl he was busy in his own world
one side sanky was feeling helplessness of doing wotk in rainy season but other side lucky was helpless that he can not stop doing romance with girl a single day
now sanky complted lifting 20 bags, he was tired now he sits for sometime due to pain in his back and stress otherside sanky stops stroking the girl because he reached
climax, and his back was paining due to continuesly entering inside her and stroking her he now take rest due to long s*x and leans on the other side of bed

one side now sanky gets courage he did not had courage to stAND but he thinks about swara and atif that he needs money to pamper his brother in good way and taking care
of swara and this feeling gives him courage to do any work because he badly needs money other side lucky again starts kissing and kneadling girl body because he can not
complete his lust in this short time so he again starts his work

one side now sanky starts lifting bags his back was feeling burning sensation due to continues lifting he was moaning in pain but still he was doing his work by keeping
the thought of swara and atif in his mind otherside lucky lucky’s body was feeling burning sensation due to his lust which is filled inside his body and due to his urge
of doing romance with his partner very happy

one side when sanky was going blood comes out from his neck due to touching of someone nail on his neck while keeping bad he feels pain other side blood was comming out
of his neck and nape due to s*xy torture and biting kiss given by his partner but he was not moaning in pain but he was moaning with immense pleasure

one side sanky cries on his condition and pain on his back and burning sensation on his body but he was taking this pain on him to decrease pain of atif and swara on the
other side lucky was smiling by seeing his partner in pain and smiling as she was crying when he was stroking her hardly

one side sanky was feeling that his body became hot due to continues work and he felt like fever he was not able to move now it was his last bef to put on truck but other
side lucky body was hot due to romance with his partner now his whole body was very tired due to continues and wild romance with partner he felt now would not be able to do romance more
because he was feeling that he was going to reach climax

one side sanky falls on one ground by completing his work due to immense pain in his whole body and hw was cursing rain that why it came today on the other side sanky
falls on other side of bed after reaching climax due to immense happiness in his heart as well as immense pain on his body due to romance but he was very happy that god sent rain to make his s*xual meeting romantic….

guys remaining part in next episode which may be updated after 2 to 3 days

precap- swara’s care for sanky, ragini courageous life, and ragini entry in maheshwari mension
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guys did u liked todays episode and comparision of romance with work please comment
guys i will upload swaragini love me after 2 to 3 days and this story episode will be updated after 3 days
pavani di apne mere muh ki bat hi chhin li mene socha that ki ab bouys ka struggle batau or apne bhi same socha di hats of to u, u may be realy a good writer just hats off di

56 comments

  1. ansa

    Hey I wanna ask u that swara and sanskar will unite or not ? And u know m also Muslim .. nice to know about u . Well u r awsome writer

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Ya swasan and raglak will be united at the end and I like happy ending not bad ending and thanks for liking my story and for ur beautiful comment

  2. Pathan

    |Author

    OMG when I updated this story I did not write it’s episode 7 because I want to write sanky struggle verses lucky romance but this tellyupdates added that os word in it may be they felt I did not write any episode name or number so it may be os so guys it is not os it is done by mistake from tellyupdates and it is episode 7 guys okk

  3. Ami

    OMG u are amazing writer u are the best writer ohhhh god the way u explained s*x of lucky with sanky work is just amazing hats of to u no words just hats off u are the best writer I ever see

  4. Sina

    Hey Irfan today u made me to do comment I never commented on Any ft but today I could not stop myself no words to say OMG I have seen many consummation scenE but the way u explained is just mind blowing by comparing with sanky condition is just Amazing hats off to u

  5. Menaz

    Amazing superb comparison. Really how poor people do hard work for their happiness. Seriously sanky’s role is awesome. Waiting for next part. & ya u r. saying right that every girls didn’t pampered by their family but after marriage their whole life get change. Thanx for ur concern sure I will study hard for my mom & bro & achieve highest marks. & if I get any doubt or any question related to study I will ask u . thanx. Be happy always , may god bless u. & I think after some more episodes characters life will get change as swara become rich. But after reading this episode I really hope that sanky become rich & lucky become poor. OK bye. I have to complete my assignments . good night.

    • Menaz

      & happy that u r not angry with me . & when u will post ur Swaragini love me ff. But next part is happy ending & raglak ‘s confession. Ur previous part is so nice & cute that swasan get reunion.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment Menaz and thanks for giving time to my story and liking it and keep studying good and u will really love sanky in story and my other story I will update within 2 days

  6. Paru

    Awesome yaar…one side he us work hard for his daily bread….someone on other side worked hard for satisfying his lust…strange

  7. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey bro awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ya even i was also staring at the tittle with OS bt then thought it would be a mistake n u maked the comparison really well bro !!!!!!111 i mean one was anky who was doing his hardwork fr his beloved and on the other sid w laksh , a womansier….oh this luksh is so rude……………. hope ragini will change him….waiting fr ragini’s courageous life n entry in MM and sanky n atif both r sucha sweet n caring person they cared of swara so much!!!!!!!! and swara is married ??? is that laksh !!!!!!!!!! i mean u showed that swara send ragini n that shocking promo!!!!!!!!!! EAGERLY WAITING FR NXT CHAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 LUV U A LOT BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks yashu for ur beautiful comment and u will more love sanky in upcoming episode and yes ragini will change lucky in very nice manner

  8. Pavani

    |Registered Member

    Its awsome bro .I liked one part in ur ff that is ur presentation of emotions u are carriying them very meturedly .its really contrast to compare struggle nd romancee he he he but u did it hats off broo nd iam not a fab writer but yes I too have fans who likes my ffs nd last but not least waiting for my darling rags story hmmm

  9. Shruthis

    |Registered Member

    you left me speechless … i have no words bro….just out of box which no one could think šŸ™‚
    between is it ok if i call you bro ?

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and u can call me brother I will really feel good and thanks for calling me bro shruthis and keep commenting and stay blessed

  10. Rasha

    |Registered Member

    Omg it’s awesome really some people enjoying life with thr parents earning & spending useless things.. but for penny of rupees we have to struggle a lot very excellently u written about sanskar but I hate this womanizer laksh so disgusting.. oh so sad means swara is lucky wife how sad & lucky is the Malik of sanskar.. Hey man u showing the true world of slum people life in ur beautiful words.. keep rockin..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks rasha for ur amazing comment and yes you will get to know more about slums people life and u will really love it just keep reading

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story and friend I will give equal importance to all character

  11. piyali

    Excellent representation of sanskaar condition and comparison b/w Laksh and sanskaar ,again you rock???

  12. Riya

    My age is 15+…..Nd mind blowing episode….. Superb,awsm,fantastic…..Laksh is such a cruel person nd poor Sanskar…. By the way u r in college na????In first year na?????

    • Pathan

      |Author

      thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting but i am realy sorry i will give equal priorities to both the couples

  13. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Hi Pathan..Finally caught up with all the episodes..I started reading your FF based on analysis posts and just completed in a go..I don’t read many FF’s here due to my time constraints you see..Lovely plot and you carry forward emotions very maturely dear..I loved it when Swara mistook lavatory to god idol..LOL..?I laughed my heart out while reading that scene..That rotten egg deo idea was fab..God!!After reading those two scenes I started to laugh like hell yaar..I liked the way you compared hard work of Sanskar with the physical intimacy of Laksh..?

    Coming to the morals you add up in the end,I really love each one of them..I don’t celebrate my b’day instead I give that money to NGO..About food wastage,I don’t eat the food which was cooked on the other part of the day..Guess I need to learn something from that..

    Woah!!Swara is a pr*stitute..That was a big blow now..Will love to see how you shape up the story..Is Swara suffering from multiple personality disorder??Just a guess..When I was reading the previous episode,I got that doubt actually..

    Waiting for the next..Don’t mind for the long comment,you see I need to compensate for all the previous episodes..Kudos for the lovely plot again..Stay blessed and keep smiling..All the best for your studies.. šŸ™‚

    • Pathan

      |Author

      i am overwhelmed by ur beautifull comment and i will not moind if u will call me brother i will be realy happy and thanks for giving time to my story and giving this beautifull comment and u made me really happy with ur comment and swara’s character will shape in very different way it will have many changes in this story because this story will more deal with moral, and please keep reading and commenting my story
      but sis i could not understand about analysis what does it mean because here i never read any friction or anything i just go to submit ur article link than here i reply from the notification box
      thanks for ur comment keep commenting

      • Sweetie

        |Registered Member

        Oh!! About that analysis section,some fans of the FF’s analyse about their favorite FF’s and post it as an article..That analysis post actually help people like me who cannot read all the FF’s posted on this site..I just read one of the analysis where some reader of your FF praised your work,so I started reading your FF..Hope I cleared your doubt..

        Will keep commenting and please don’t mind if I disappear for one or two episodes because I read two or more episodes in a go sometimes..Stay blessed and keep smiling brother.. šŸ™‚

    • Pathan

      |Author

      thanks for clearing my doubt and i will surely thank to person in next episode who wrote my story name in analysis, di i dont have problem if u could not comment for me it matters that u are reading my story
      i only needed one thing that people red story comment is secondary thing
      thanks fro giving time to my story DI

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