swaragini love in slums of india and other with full of lust episode 6

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guys thanks too much for giving ur precious time to my story and commenting her, i am realy happy by seeing ur comment guys keep commenting and lking story
i have seen ur comments i got ur all point u still want ragini to live her new life but also raglak meeting so according to it i will change plot i will think good idea
of raglak meeting but today u enjjoy ragini courageous life and in next episode also thAN raglak meeting
in swasan part story may take drastic change after 2 to 3 episode so till now enjoy there bonding (i also do not know change but i am thinking to do some up and down in 2 to 3 episode)

IN NIGHT TIME ONLY
sanky was seeing thunderstoom and was not feeling good
atif comes
atif- bhai let us sleep
sanky does not say anything
atif sees him and again says bhai why are u tensed too much
sanky comes out of senses replies nervously atif swara is alone at her house no body lives with her, today thunderstorm is very high may be she got scared
atif listens it remembers swara’s words one time says ya bhai i am realy sorry swara is afraid of thunder, she told me one day
by listening his words sanky gots shocked as well as worry he could not understand anything he did not think about surrounding, he ran towards her house he did not bother
about rain that he is getting drenched, he only had one thing in my mind whether swara is fine or not in this process he reaches swara’s house, he opens his mouth but
he started knocking door but no response as time was passing sanky’s fear was increasing he starts he was madly knocking her door, he was sweating yes he was sweating
in this rain also by the fear if anything happened to swara, now he was restless he broke the door, as he enter the room he frozed ar his place he feels his heart stop
breathing he could feel the pain in his heart, he did not had power now to walk a single step also he was frozed he never thought that swara would be in this condition
every drops of her blood was making more pain in sanky’s heart, his mind was stoped working, not able to react but he gains consius from a voice atif while jerking him
bhai please take di to our house fast bhai fast, sanky was out of words his gaze was on swara he difficultily said ya
now his motion become fast he immediately grabs swara in his lap, tears were rolling from the eyes of both brothers sanky cupping her face swara please wake up in cracking
voice but no response from swara’s side, he immediately took her in his arms he runs by taking her in his arms towards hospital, there was heavy rain fall, he was fully
drenched, his swara was is his arms, as rain drops on swara’s body changes to red colour, red colour water was falling from swara’s body sanky was seeing all this from
teary eyes he felt very helpless today after a run of 20 minuted he reached to hospital, doctor sees her and says sanskar ji this are just small injury no need to take
tention but sanky’s eyes fall in her torned shoulder he sees marks of chabuk, he says doctor see she was beaten by chabuk, doctor sees ya she was brutely beaten by chabuk
now sanky was cursing himself for not taking care of swara he was hell ansry and was full in rage, he thinks whoever done this condition to swara, i will not spare him
i will make his life to hell but suddenlly he comes to senses by a beautiful voice that is of swara, she only says one word KAVYAAAA……………
sanky’s got his heart back he sees her but again he comes to thought process and thiks who is kavya…. but it is not important question for him but againhe heard another
word SANSKAR WE WILL LIVE TOGATHER………… but this time sanky was not shocked he was happy some where he comes towards her (she was still closing her eyes), smile
come on his face and saYS yes i will not live u swara u are my best freind, by hearing his amazing voice swara feels happy and opens her eyes, she sees most important
person of her life that is her sanky, she immediately opens her arms sanky hugs her, this hug was promise to not leaving each other both were lost in each other embrance
both forgot each other sorrow,

atif- ohh both forgot me
swara sees him and gives inviting smile to her he also hug her all three were lost in each other but comes out of senses when doctor said if u completed ur hugging than
let me do my work
sanky smilimg yes
but he sees swara who was in teary eyes
sanky- why are u crying
swara- these are tear of happiness that i have u two to keep me safe
sanky- comes closer to her and holds her hand i am sorry swara i am sory i could not protect u from evil world
swara- no please do not say like this u are the person who always support ,e
sanky- but who done this thing with u
swara recalls what she had done but thinks not to tell him she says voh some goons beated me
sanky angrily how dare them to beat u
swara- ohho sanky just leave them
sanky- no i will not leave them just tell me who were they
swara- i do not know who were they i went to mandir so some boys came and beated me hardly but all were in mask i was running like mad i did not know what to do i
came to my house and lockes it
sanky- u must had come to my house
swara- my mind was not working and sanky please do not talk about incidense my head is paining
sanky- okk but from now whereever u go u have to either take atif or me got it in strict tone
swara nods like innoscent girl…………………
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screen shfts to ragini side
ragini was seating in temple because it was night and there was heavy rainfall, she thinks today i have to sleep in this temple only because rain is very heavy,
she thinks to sleep but when she sees she sees around temple nothing was there to cover her she thought atleast one mate must be there to sleep neither she found any
bad sheet not she found any mate to sleep, she touches floor it was very cold, she thinks how she will sleep but she somehow manages to sleep on floor but again sits
due to cold flooor but thinks no ragini u do not have any other option so with stone heart she lyes in the floor by folding her legs and her knees here touching to her
stomach she was shivering, and tears were rolling down from her eyes, she started thinking about her past life, her mind starts thinking am i the same ragini who
never slept without ac and heater, she thinks her past days when his farther used to tell ragini beta u should not use ac and heater excessively but she never hears it
she also remembers a day when her ac was not working properly and mechanik told that he will give ac after 2 days she strictly told her dad she can not sleep without ac
her dad told ok beta u sleep in my room, ragini strictly said dad iu know about me i never sleep in other room because i do not get sleep because my sleeping bad is more
comfertable than ur sleeping bed so i can not sleep in ur room so i want ac anyhow in my room today itself, she comes out of her thought process by cold and sees floor
cried hardly says i never felt that ragini who slips with all confertable animities is sleeping on that floor who do not have mate also, she cries and thinks that we
can not understand our destiny where it will take us but ragini has accepted this form of life also ragini smiles and says i am not weak i will fight with all hurdels of
life i am happy in this new form of life also and sleeps because of stress of whole day
there was sweat morning chirping sound of birds made ragini wake up she wakes up and shocked that she is sleeping on floor but remembers her condition but she smiles
and says so ragini get ready for new destination of life, she sees temple prays there and thinks now what to do after thinking too much she got to know she do not have
money and for money she have to earn so she thinks to find good job but who will give me job i do not have my marks car with me ohh god what to do she got idea as she
seen in movie and goes outside the temple and dances on a song (dil joode bina hi lut gae)
she starts dancing [READ THE LYRICS OF SONG]
dil jude bina hi tute gaye hath miila ke
likhe na likh kismat ne
baar baar rod akhiyon tainu jo na kaha
khol aaye aaj kudrat ne
khatam mai ki ve din teri soth tere
main toh jiya na mara
chan se jo tute koi sapna
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns

[SHE GOES IN FRONT OF TEMPLE MOVES HERE AND THERE IN DANCE STEP AND THINKS ABOUT HOW SHE LOVES VEER HOW THEY RAN THERE HAPPY MOMENT AND HIS BETRAYEL HER FORCEFUL MOLEST ACT HER EYES BECOME MOIST ]

hai to yeh kyun hota hai
jab yeh dil rota hai
roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
jag suna suna
chan se jo tute koi sapna
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage
koi rahe na jab apns
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage ree

[SHE AGAIN COMES CENTER MOVES HER HAND ON UPWARDS DIRECTION WHILE SLIGHT JUMP AND THINKS HOW SHE THINKS HOW SOCIETY PEOPLE BEATED HER HOW THEY LOCKED HER IN ONE ROOM]

roothi rothi sari ratein
fikhe fikhe sare din
virani si virani hai
tanhai hi tanhai he
aur ek hum hai pyar ke bin
har palchin

[SHE PUTS BOTH THE HAND ON HER ARMS AND STARTS MOVING BACK AND FORTH FASTLY TEARS START COMMING IN HER EYES AND THINKS HE LONELYNESS IN THAT ROOM AND LAST NIGHT SLEEPING IN TEMPLE]
chan se jo tute koi sapna
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage
koi rahe na jab apns
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage
pathoro ki is nagari me
pathar chehre pathar dil
pathirtha hai mara
kyun rahon mein tu awara
yahan na hoga kuch hasi mere dildar
chan se jo tute koi sapna
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns

[NOW SHE STARTS REVOLVING AT ONE PLACE BY LOOKING TOWARDS SKY TEARS CONTINUESLY FALLING FROM HER EYES, SHE THINKS HOW HELPLESS SHE WAS WHEN SHE WAS HUNGRY, SHE BECAME BEGAR ALSO FOR THIS STOMACH HOW CRUELY PEOPLE INSULTED HER WHEN SHE WAS HUNGRY AND SOCIETY TAUNTS]

hai to yeh kyun hota hai
jab yeh dil rota hai
roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
jag suna suna
chan se jo tute koi sapna
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage
koi rahe na jab apns
jag suna suns lage
jag suna suns lage ree

[SHE FALLS ON GROUND WITH THUD AND CRIES HARDER BY PUTTING HER FACE ON GROUND BECAUSE TODAY HER ALL PAIN RENEWENED IN HER EYES ]

people sees her dance and throws money of 5 or 10 rupees on her, she was still crying but she was also heardin the sound of than coins which all people are throwing on
her due to her dance, she wipes her tears, she sits on her knees and painfully grabs all the one rupee 2 rupe or 5 or 10 rs coins and smiles painfully thinks there was
one day ragini never touch 5 or 10 rupees because wherever she goes if 5 rs is remaining she never brings it her dad always scold her to respect money she always tells
his dad ohh what will happen in 5 rs or this 1to 2 rs but her dad always tells her beta this 1 rs is also very important because when u will need money that there will
not be a person who will give 1 rs also to u, but today she got to know how this 2rs are also important, sometime she was feeling ashamed of her life ya old ragini
is feeling realy insulted on her todays condition but new ragini is happhy that this is income of her hard work now she grabed all the money and stands and starts going
from this place with proud face because she got money from her hardwork not doing any cheap work this new ragini is not ashamed of her insult which old ragini feeling
she smiles proudly counts moneu and says 147rs i got wov, so now ready to explore bhopal ragini………………

PRECAP- u will get to know in next episode

note- if u want to feel pain of ragini that play this song on ur mobile close ur eyes and remember about ragini life with each word of song u will realy feel exact
track of story and exact pain and u will perfectly enjoy story if u have time u can do it
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from next time episode will not be longer like this

NOTE- guys this type of story of ragini i am giving because this type of things are very common in girls means many girls have many dreams about life and girls live comfertable
in her life they do not think much about money and many things they only get luxurious life with good food nice amount of money and they do not know about surrounding
world much, girls are just pampered in mother father and brotherly love so due to this reason survival of girls in such a drastic condition which ragini is living is
very less (means they can not adjust with surrounding if bed condition happens ) they realy loses there courage in such drastic situation and many people take this
opportunity and they are taken in wrong pathway so here from ragini i just want to say that to accept each and every thin and think of life courageously and never ashamed
of any work which we do (many people feels disgusted if they do low class work but we need to accept our fate guys)
u can see how ragini life was in past and how she changed her life according to fate how courageously and happily she is accepting this new world
up and down comes more in girls life than boys life boys life is smooth but girls life have to bear many changes in her whole life

IF I HURTED ANYBODY PLEASE PLEASE FORGIVE ME AND IF U FEEL I AM INCORRECT AT MY POV PLEASE TELL ME AND GUYS THIS TYPE OF THING IS COMMON IN GIRLS OF LESS AGE BELOW 18 OR 19 TYPE
but above 23 girls are realy matured max. type

TOMOROW I WILL SAY ABOUT SWASAN LOVE STORY
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THANKS FOR READING MY LECTURE AND SORRRY IF I WOULD HAD BORED TO U

50 comments

  1. Ragz_teju

    |Registered Member

    Awesome I really really adore your writingsthe way u described ragini pov was awesome and this is the reality, swasan bonding was nice. please continue

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I am happy u liked my writing skill u will more love swasan bonding in story in upcoming episode

  2. Shruti

    I don’t know tht y I hate Asansol…. Y u know tht Asansol z vry gud????Aap kya iss ct mein visit liye hai????N I don’t know how 2 register in telly update….I m not interested at all….By d way d ep was really awsm…Just lvd it….

      • Pathan

        |Author

        Oh sruti I am not angry on u and I do not know why u felt I am angry please do not feel like this and be happy do not take tension and by the way register option u may get in ur Mobil there u can register and no need to ask forgiveness other things boys do not get angry very fast

    • Pathan

      |Author

      I just said like that only I heard about this city many times so I said it is good but why u hate this city and registering in twllyupdates is really good because we do not need to write email id and name everytime u can send private messages to ur friend u may get notifications when anybody reply to ur comment and many more and thanks for ur comment and keep commenting

  3. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Loved Ragini’s boldness and confidence
    Waiting for the next one……….

  4. Shain

    Oh Irfan it is just amazing story line and one thing I want to say that u gives equal importance to both the pairs and that is best thing in story and I really loved sanky care towards swara and for ragini also and struggle in ragini life

  5. Samu

    Wow such nice story line how can u manage two couples simultaneously and CVS should learn from u to give equal importance to pairs and today episode was awesome

  6. Shruthis

    |Registered Member

    awesome …what ever you said is correct …you write on slums there are many people out there are going through the same which ragini is going through..great job 🙂
    past ragini contradiction to present raginis situation it is superb ..i loved it the most 🙂

  7. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey bro U REALLY ROCKED !!!!!!!!!!! u know i love ur writing skills the way u expressed every feeling of gaini , n sowed ragini strong was so adorable…………….!!!!!!!!!!!! u did nice that added the song that played a really good bg music as wt happened with her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n bro for this mindblowing , awesome..just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n no words bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’M JUST SPEECHLESS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U R A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY REALLY VERY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  8. Riya

    Nice episode…. Waiting for the next episode…. Nd what u said in the last part of this episode was really true….. It is not ur lecture don’t say like this…. Aur humlog utne bhi bure nahi hai jo humlog twin hai isska faida uthayenge☺???

    • Riya

      Nd bro I have a question if u don’t mind that how old r u??????Nd one more thing plzzz forgive Shruti…..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for supporting me my sister but at least u should do little bit prank because god had given u chance to do prank nobody gets this opportunity u are lucky thanks for liking story and no need to ask forgiveness for sruti I am not angry on her so be happy

  9. ansa

    Hey pathan keep rocking like this .. and u r ri8 I Uf seen many girls like this . Well I wanna ask that u r Muslim? Sorry if u hurt by my ques

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for supporting me and yes I am Muslim my religion is Islam and do not say sorry I didn’t hurt because there is no point of getting hurt and thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking

  10. piyali

    I really cried by thinking ragini condition when I learn half pov , mujhe laga aage ka nahi pad paungi but then I manage somehow and read fully it’s just really heart touching and kisi bhi chij ko accept karna easy nahi hota but ragini accept the condition it’s good and sanskaar is my fav character in the original show but by reading this I like his character more than show keep writing like this only and I also suggest song for swaragini condition you too hear this ankhiya from do lafzo ki kahani it’s first stanza for swara and 2nd for ragini

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I am sorry for making u cry and I am happy that you deeply loved my story and yes u are correct it is difficult to accept and u will really love sanky character when story will proceed thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking

  11. ABC

    Hey pathan i read in ur last or before last part u said that u r from mandsaur city of mp i want to say that i am also from the same city actually near the city n the part was good…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Ya I belong from mandsaur destrict and I live in village name Belary near which is 10km distance from sitamau in mandsaur district and from where u belong

  12. Pavani

    |Registered Member

    Woww its simply superb I loved the way u presented the story nd our metured ragini she is wasome .yep u r right we should accept our fate .as a girl I agree it is very difficult for a girl to adjust but every girl they will be pampered a lot in mothers house nd its will become very difficult for them to adjust in in laws house but time changes everything if we accepted it it becomes easy (with experience) he he he .won’t u write about struggling of boys make Laksh released about to face the socity with out Money its just a suggestion hope u will implement it .bye bro

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks Di for liking my story and it’s moral u are 100 percent correct that girls had to do many changes in their life because after marriage they don’t know their fate may be may get good in-laws house but may be not but maximum have to suffer in starting of there life and had to change I
      Thanks Di for ur suggestion about lucky and Di u really wanted to say that na ki lucky will not have money own house and he will live futpath life is it correct Di

      • Pavani

        |Registered Member

        Yep every father will bash his dad for being strict as they don’t know their responsibility once they come to know about their responsibility they can feel the pain of father.every one says about mothers love but they forget about dad who is main .how he sacrifises his wishes for his family .I just want to say that y can’t u show about the struggle of a boy for his family .hmm

      • Pathan

        |Author

        Sure di for this type of struggle u will soon get in sanky character but I was also thinking to write different ff about this but this thing I added in Sanky character which I already submitted and thanks Di for ur suggestion please please please please please please keep supporting and suggeating me di u are very good Di

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment jwala I am very happy that you are regularly commenting here and also liking story please keep commenting

  13. Menaz

    Really so sorry for late comment. But the episode is awesome awesome very & emotional scenes of ragini feeling very sad about this types of survival girls. Some of them accept there conditions happily but some r not like that. & the song lines r too good perfect on condition. And u r not angry on me na ? Really u forgive me na ? & in some homes not always girls r pampered by family . my studies r going good but too much burdens of completing assignments & journal. Keep smiling always.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment menaz and I am not angry on u I know everyone have personal life they have many other work to and no need for sorry and before also I was not angry on u I was just saying like that only and thanks for liking my pov and u are correct that in some house girls are not pampered in good way but that type of girl will also have to do change in there life after marriage thatbis biggest task and keep studying well and get good marks in exam if u need any help than do not hesitate to ask okk

  14. Pathan

    |Author

    Guys I had uploaded my next chapter with the name swaragini love in slums of India and other full of lust (sanky struggle verses lucky romance) please read it

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