Swaragini – A love so pure can never be explained (ch-14)


Hii guys this is prateeksha back with another chapter. Hope you like it too. I would like to thank bharghavi, soujanya, Maya, s priya, lovely, ammu, kumu, roshni sis , sanchami dear, Natasha sis, asheeyana, anamica sis and Riya sis for their valuable comments. Your comments are my strength and they mean a lot to me. So keep commenting.I have replied individually to each and every comment. Please do take a look at it. I would also like to thank my silent readers too. So guys love you all a lot ? ? ?. Here goes the next chapter..
Recap : ragini and vishal meets. Laksh angered. Raglak and swasan plans to meet at the park.
Here is the link for the last chapter
In car :
On swasan side :
Sanskar is driving while swara is looking out of the window.
The atmosphere outside is awesome with trees waving slowly providing cool breeze to the already beautiful environment.
Swara is enjoying the atmosphere with a small smile in her face. Sanskar smirks seeing the smile on her face.
On raglak side :
The atmosphere in raglak side is totally different. There was awkward silence between them. Both were pissed at each other but both doesn’t know the reason for it. The only sound that comes from the car is the song “tu jaanae naa”. They both were silently listening to it with various thoughts in their mind.
On swasan side :
After a few minutes of driving swasan reached first to the park and are waiting for raglak. They found some children playing in the park with bubbles. Swasan were watching them playing and swara was playing with the bubbles that come to her side. Sanskar was watching her lovingly while the song “sawar loon” plays in their car.
On raglak side :
Ragini not able to take it anymore thought to break the silence. She spoke up,
Rag :lucky why are you so silent? Talk something na. It feels like we don’t even know each other.
Laksh thought for a second and smiled
Lak : nothing like that laado. K leave it. Now tell… How was your day today in colg? Anything interesting.
Ragini thought about her morning conversation with Nisha and immediately a smile appear in her lips. Laksh sees her smiling cutely and was admiring it for a while but immediately came back to reality and asks,
Lak :what so funny happened that you are smiling like this?
Rag :wo… Lucky actually I thought of an incident were I made a fun of myself.
Lak :o.. What is that incident?
Rag (in mind) : o God how will I say that to him? No.. No.. I can’t.
Rag :yaar nothing it’s so silly leave it. Now you say, how was your day with meera?
Laksh’s smile dissappears hearing meera’s name.
Lak 😮 please. Don’t even ask about it. Only God knows that how I escaped from her clutches.
Ragini gets happy hearing laksh’s words about meera.
On swasan side :
Swara sees sanskar watching her and blows a bubble from her side towards him. It hits his nose and he comes back to reality. He sees swara making fun of him seeing his expressions. He fakes anger and was about to hold her but swara sticks her tongue out and runs out of the car. Sanskar starts chasing her while swara crashes at someone.
@ Park :
The person is none other than ragini.
Rag (with raised eyebrows) :uh ho.. What’s happening here?
Swara blushed while sanskar stood there embarrassed.
San :wo… Laado… We were just playing.
Lak (with a shocked expression) :what…. bhai, is it really you? Am I dreaming or what ? U and playing. is it even possible.?
Hearing laksh’s question both doesn’t know what to speak.
Seeing their uncomfortable situation, ragini spoke
Rag :arey lucky what’s wrong with you. Why are you questioning like that? Is there any rule that we should quit playing once we grow up?
Swara hugs ragini as if accepting what she said and nods her head while ragini continued,
Rag (looking playfully at laksh) :shona, I think laksh has become too old to play. Hai na..
Sanskar gave hi-fi to ragini while swara hits her playfully for mocking her best friend.
Lak :hello Mr and Ms. Best buddies. You both are mocking me? The great laksh maheswari. I will show you who I am and I’m ready for playing.
Swara gave hi – fi to laksh while ragsan gave a “whatever” look.
Rag : so everyone ready. K let’s play.
San :hey but wait we have came here for discussing about something.
Lak :ya bhai I have totally forgot about it. K first let’s discuss and then play.
Everyone agreed and sanskar explained everyone about the case and what the inspector said to him. They were discussing it with a smile on their face as instructed by sanskar to avoid suspicion but inside they were very well aware of the seriousness.
San :laado, on that day you said that you have seen the goons who chased swara right?
Rag :Haan sanky I do remember it.
San :so only you and shona know their face. Inspector wants to enquire you both about the incident but you both shouldn’t go at the same time. It may raise their suspicion.
Sanskar turning towards ragini
Rag :laado tomorrow you go to police station and give your statement. I have already informed everything to the inspector. Lucky you also accompany laado to the police station as we can’t send her alone.
Laksh nodded and said :but bhai what about swara’s statement?
San :that we will decide after discussing with the inspector.
Everyone nodded and was thinking about it with a fake smile on their face. Laksh thinks to lighten the atmosphere and says
Lak :ok so discussions are over. now it’s time for fun
Everyone’s face brighten up hearing laksh.
Rag :k lucky what game we will play?
Lak :I don’t have any idea
Saying so he turned towards sanskar and said “bhai?”
San :I too don’t know. Lucky you very well know that I’m not the fun type.
Everyone was looking confused while swara sees something and smiles. She called everyone and points towards the thing that she saw . Every one looks at the direction and sees some children playing a game.
Everyone looks at each other with a small smile playing in their lips and shouted in unison “BLINDFOLD”.
They started playing the game.
Lak :so who will blindfold first?
Rag : who else other than you lucky?
Lak : O and Y so?
Rag : because I say so..
Saying so she shrugged her shoulders while laksh looked at her with an unbelievable expression. Seeing their silly fights sanskar stepped in,
San :k guys, don’t start again. Let me blindfold first, then lucky, then shona and then finally laado. K?
Everyone gave a thumbs up and blindfolded sanskar with a handkerchief.
They started playing and everyone was enjoying to the core. People passing by had a smile on their face seeing the grown up children.
All the four’s mind has a similar thought that “GOD I WISH, LET THIS MOMENT FREEZE FOREVER”.
The screen ends on smiling faces of swaragsanlak.
So guys that’s for today. Thanks for reading. Hope you like it too. K guys bye ? take care. Love you all a lot ☺☺☺

Credit to: Prateeksha

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  1. Awesome…

    1. Thanks soujanya dear for your continuous support ☺

  2. How sweet. Their friendship n bonding is just superb. Plz update daily plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    1. Thanks reethi dear for commenting. I’m happy that you liked it. I’m trying my level best to update regularly but what to do? These marraige rituals are never ending. ☺

  3. nice one siso luv u !!!!!

    1. Thanks siso. Love you a lot too ☺

  4. Fantastic ?

    1. Thanks ash dear. I’m happy that you liked it ☺

  5. Superb dr loved all their moments…

    1. Hii ruhani dear. After a long time I’m seeing your comment. I thought you stopped reading it. I’m happy that you liked it ☺

  6. loved it dear

    1. Thanks ammu dear for your continuous support . Love you dear ☺

    1. Thanks swati dear for commenting ☺

  7. Prateeksha dr I was waiting for ur ff like hell today’s episode is awesome yaar I really loved it

    1. Thanks sanchami dear for your continuous support. I’m happy that you liked it. Love you dear ☺

  8. Nice episode

    1. Thanks amu dear for commenting ☺

  9. Wow just superb

    1. Thanks lavanya dear for commenting and liking my story ☺

  10. Hi how r u..its nice waiting for next update..tc bye

    1. Hii Divya dear. I’m fine. How about you?. Will update soon. You to take care dear ☺

  11. Dr sorry for not commenting actually in my village currency shop closed so no net pack..but i read all episode without missing. . .anyways how r u..how marriage preparation is going on….how is bhai(ur fiance ) dr then eat well take care..

    1. No need to say sry dear. It’s not your fault. I’m very happy that you read all the episodes you have missed. I hope you liked all the chapters. Marriage preparations are on full swing dear. My fiance is also good dear. Thanks for your concern dear. I’m really happy to get a friend like you. Love you a lot. You too take care dear ☺. I hope you are fine.

  12. Wow…cute part..i just loved it…ur ff is like my refresher akka….keep going…well I guess tomorrow I cant comment nor read coz of tension…of my 2nd PUC result…finger crossed….tc love u akka….

    1. Thanks roshni sis for your wonderful comment. I’m glad that you enjoy my story. As for your result don’t worry dear. You will definitely nail it with awesome score. All the very best siso. Will miss your comment tomorrow. Love you a lot dear ☺

  13. Hi Dear it as usual awesome

    1. Thanks bharghavi dear for your continuous support. Love you dear ☺

  14. nyc..:)

    1. Thanks kumu dear for your continuous support ☺

  15. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Prathi…..innaiku epi sammaya irundhudhu…….unga ff theri mass…….luv ya??

    1. Natasha sis, ne tamizhnu enaku theriyathu. Anyways I’m very happy that you liked it. Comment pannathuku romba thanks. Love you a lot ☺

  16. Loved all 4 grown up children

    1. Thanks s priya for your constant support. I’m happy that you liked it. Love you a lot ☺

  17. hi di! how are you? di today’s episode was really cute and i have a smile on my face till the end! it was very nice di! keep it up! and i loved the way you give the two couple the same importance it was nice! take care di! lots of love! bye

    1. Thanks anamica dear for commenting. I’m happy that you liked it. I always had a doubt whether I gave equal importance to both the pairs. I’m happy that you find both the pairs to have equal importance. Love you a lot siso ☺

  18. I too love u dear..u have good name..Dr pls update next part soon I. M waiting..good night cutie..

    1. Thanks dear for the compliment. Will update soon ☺

  19. Tysm akka for ur wishes….well wat they tell in Tamil for all d best????

    1. Ellam nalla nadakum

      1. Ohh nice yepee I learnt new language here….

    1. Thanks lovely ☺

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