Swaragini (His Love for her and Her love for him) Maha Episode

Hey guys I am back….But today I am back with a maha big twist….Hope u like the twist….

Recap:Swalak reconciled.

Laksh wakes Swara up.She realizes she was dreaming.
Swara:Laksh u know…I dreamt that I became pregnant.
He cups her face.
Laksh:Ur wish will surely come true one day.
He kisses her forehead and goes.She smiles and looks on.

All are having breakfast.
Annapurna:Ragini,Swara,Laksh,Sanskaar……..We all have decided that we will send u four on a mini honeymoon.Adarsh and Parineeta will also go.
Parineeta gets shy.
Parineeta:But Mummyji why me and Adarsh?
Annapurna:When they are going u also can go on a second honeymoon.
All smile.

Ragini and Sanskaar pack their bags.
Ragini:Somebody is in hurry to go on honeymoon.
They laugh.Ragini suddenly becomes silent.He asks what happened.
Ragini:I dont know Sanskaar,I feel as if this vacation is going to seperate us….we will stay together but we will not be one.
He jokes and makes her smile.She hugs him and is still worried. He goes from the room.She sees their wedding photo on the wall and takes it.She caresses it.Suddenly the photo slips from her hand and it falls,breaking the frame glass.She gets shocked and shouts Sanskaar.He comes there and gets shocked seeing her crying.He shouts Ragini.He comes to her and hugs her, consoling her

Swalak,Ragsan and Aari(adarsh and Parineeta) leave the house.Sujata sees the diyas blowing off and gets worried.

The couples reach Goa and smile seeing the city.They shop all day.

Sanskaar:Bhai,Lucky, I think that we will go bankrupt today….that too by our wives only.
Laksh:Even I think so.
The three laugh.
Swara:Poor husbands,they are getting bored there.
Parineeta:Then let us make it interesting for them!
They go outside the shop and call their husbands and ask them to find their wives.

Laksh looks for Swara.He sees someone standing and assumes her to be Swara.He goes to her and hugs her from behind.He says I love u.Its Ragini.She turns and they both get shocked seeing each other.He apologizes to her.She looks on and asks him not to make it awkward,we are friends naa….
They smile.

Sanskaar searches for Ragini.He sees Swara’s back and says even Ragini is wearing this coat.He hugs her tightly.She says Sanskaar….He says sorry and is nervous.She goes from there.

Adarsh finds Parineeta and hugs her.They all three couple return to their hotel.
The girls sleep together in a room and push the boys outside the room and give them another room’s keys.
The girls talk.
Ragini:I think our idea was not so good.
Swara:Even I think so….
They both think of hug.Parineeta looks at them.
Parineeta:O hello! Where r u both lost? Why was it not a good idea?
Swara dismisses it and goes to sleep.

In the night,Ragini wakes up and goes outside.She sits in the lawn of the hotel.Its raining.Sanskaar comes from behind and covers her with a shawl.They side hug.
Sanskaar:What happened?
Ragini:I was not getting sleep.Anyway lets go.
She turns to go.He holds her hand.
Sanskaar:I know u r worried.Tell me whats the matter?
Ragini:Sanskaar…..I am feeling strange.Dont know why.
He hugs her.

They go inside and find Swalak and Aari partying.They smile and join them.They drink a lot and are drunk.They dance on kar gayi Chull…plays….and Break up song….plays…..
Swara stands on the table and shouts(funny scene) Go ka Queen B kaun!!!!!!(Who is the Queen B of Goa).Me!!!!!
Sanskaar goes to her.
Sanskaar:S……sssssss….
Swara:Yeh Sss Sss kya kar rahe ho? (What r u doing Ssss Sss).
Sanskaar:Swara!!! Get down….right now…
They look at each other and laugh.She stumbles and he holds her.They look at each other.Music plays…..She stands up and they laugh again.

Ragini sits on the floor(another funny scene).Laksh comes to her and sits with her.She makes a cute sad face.
Laksh:What happened to my princess?
She looks at him.She pretends to cry loudly.He shuts her mouth.They come close and have an eyelock.She then laughs and calls him duffer but cute one(pulling his cheeks.)

Parineeta and Adarsh come to room and fall asleep on the couch itself.Swaragini and Sanlak sit in the lawn of the hotel.Swara sits near Sanskaar and Ragini sits near Laksh.The four fall asleep on each other’s lap.Its morning, Some people see them and gossip.The panchayat(of that town) come to that hotel.Swasan and Raglak wake up and and get shocked seeing themselves in an intimate position.(they did got get intimate).They compose themselves and stand up.They look down.
Panchayat:What is this misbehaviour in this hotel?
Manager:Sir forgive me! They are married couple so…..
Panchayat:If they are married they must give proof.
Ragini:Proof? Proof is the mangalsutra and sindoor which Swara and I are wearing.And even our husbands are wearing wedding ring.
Panchayat:Come outside the hotel in 20 mins.

Swaragini and Sanlak come outside after freshing up.Swara(in her yellow salwar kameez with hair open) and Ragini(in her salwar kameez which she wore when she saw Laksh as Abhimanyu).
Panchayat:So u say u r married couple right?
Ragini sternly says yes.
A man gives sindoor in Sanskaar and Laksh’s hands and ask them to fill it in their wives’s hairline.(maang)
Sanskaar takes a pinch and proceeds to put it in Ragini’s maang.Laksh also does the same with Swara.Panchayat stops them.
Panchayat:Arrey!(ohh) what were u going t do? U had to fill ur wives’s hairline.
Sanskaar:But we were going to do the same.
Panchayat shows them the picture he clicked when they were sleeping.(the man is enemy with Shekhar and had vowed to ruin his daughter’s lives.)He smirks.
Panchayat:U(Sanskaar) have to fill this girl’s maang(Swara) and U (laksh) has to fill this her maang(Ragini).
Ragini and Swara cries and are shocked.
Ragini:R u out of ur mind? I told u that I am married with Sanskaar Maheshwari and this is my Sister Swara.She is married to Laksh Maheshwari.R ur doubts clear now?
Panchayat:Look if u dont get married now,this pic will be published in the newspaper tomorrow and ur family will lose name.
They are shocked and look on.
Parineeta:How dare u blackmail us? We are the Maheshwaris remember that.We dont care if u put this pic anywhere u want coz they are not at fault.

The panchayat chef signs a man.Some goons Put Adarsh and Parineeta at gunpoint.
Sanskaar:Bhai!!!
Swara:Parineeta Bhabhi!!
Panchayat:No u have to marry or else ur dear brother and sister in law will lose their lives.
Ragini gets angry and goes to him.
Ragini:Why r u forcing us like this? Why?
He plays with his moustache and she remembers in her childhood he used to come and fight with Shekhar.
Ragini:Oh so u want to take revenge on us by doing all this?
He laughs and says u r smart.Swara comes and holds Ragini’s hand.She says Ragini is not alone.Swaragini plays…..

More goons come and surround them.They are shocked and look on.Laksh gets angry and tries to beat the goons but they hurt Adarsh so he stops.Chef asks them to decide fast.Swaragini look at Aari and cries miserably.They then look at each other.Chef understand their answer and brings two bridal dupattas for them and dorns in on them.Swaragini stare him angrily.He then asks Swaragini to remove their mangalsutra and gives Sanlak.Swaragini remember their marriage while removing the mangalsutra.Parineeta gets angry and shouts no Swara!! No Ragini! Adarsh also shouts Laksh Sanskaar stop them.Sanlak also cry.Ragini gives Laksh the mangalsutra while looking at Sanskaar.Swara also does the same.Aapki Aashiqui….plays….

Sanskaar unwillingly makes Swara wears the mangalsutra and fills her maang with Sindoor.Laksh also does the same and gets sad seeing Ragini crying.Swaragini and Sanlak cry miserably.Parineeta and Adarsh also cry badly.Aapki Aashiqui….plays….

Precap:Swaragini and Sanlak return home.Annapurna gets happy seeing them.She brings the pooja thali and gets shocked seeing Sanskaar holding Swara’s hand and Laksh holding Ragini’s hand.Swaragini are in shock.The four are wearing garland.Annapurna drops the thali in shock and cries.She shouts no.

Hey guys so this was the twist that I will make the couple become Swasan and Raglak from Swalak and Ragsan.Hope u liked it….Plzzz comment how it was….love u lots guys and always keep smiling :)…..

34 comments

  1. Kakali

    It’s just kinda disrespecting marriage.. !!! n without proper divorce they r still not new couple.. !!
    but i seriously liked d twist… huhhh what to do.. m a die heart SWASAN fan.. so can’t imagine them with other…
    n Raglak they look perfect with EO.. like made for EO..
    Loved it dear !!!
    Thnk u.. ;-*

  2. Siva

    Its very disgusting.it s just insult to the marriage and love and bad twist .if it is before their marriage it is not that bad .but they are married and swara had already lost her child its really disgusting sry to say this but I hate this ff I won’t read hereafter.

  3. Sally_blr

    |Registered Member

    Hello sweetheart. First thing are you from India? Because here in India marriage is really a sacred relationship. I know you wanted to give a twist but this is unacceptable for many reasons one being they aren’t divorced. If you wanted to have SwaSan and RagLak only then you should have brought a divorce track in between or like they were just engaged not married. And moreover living under the same roof it is not only disrespecting marriage but all the relations like brothers, sisters and brother in law sister in law. We are Indians and our lives run on these relations. Hope you will understand. Please don’t hurt the feelings of your readers. They expect you to entertain them. Even if it is just fiction you should not hurt any emotions. Hope you will understand. Keep writing but think about what I said once. Connecting to your readers is most important than presenting your story and thoughts. Hope I did not hurt you. If so really sorry. Take care.

  4. Asra

    |Registered Member

    superbbb dear….what a twist ya…but seriously I don’t like that twist…plz don’t change the pair…plz don’t separate ragsan and swalak….am sry dear if I hurt u…tkcr dear…

  5. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    hey dear, i always love your stories, right from the passionate love story. i am completely agree with sally. first they are not divorced, so their new marriage is illegal or completely null and void as per Indian law. second they love their spouses so much and having a great married life. so there is no chance to love another person who is your owns husband’s brother and your own sisters husband and vice versa. marriage is a sacred relationship, and we all believe in this institution no matter what. so if you want swasan and raglak as pairs then first divorced them and then unite them. i love both swasan raglak and ragsan, swalak. i do apologies if i hurt you. dont feel bad, we all like your story, pls do continue, waiting for the next.

  6. Pari123

    |Registered Member

    What a bad twist after showing so many cute moments you changed the pair sorry for hurting you but i didn’t like it if you have this idea you should tell us in the starting please reunite them

  7. Vk

    What the hell has happened…U can’t disrespect a sacred relationship like marriage… ragsan and swalak love each other alot…U must not separate them… they didn’t got divorce still they r married to each other…U literally made fun of marriage…have u forgot what you mentioned in the first episode about pairs…even in the precap of the previous episode what you said that ragini shouts Sanskar and fainted…. then why it doesn’t happened…why you changed the pairs in a bad way…
    If you like Raglak and swasan alot then write a new ff for them by finishing this…why u swapped the pairs just like that … marriage is not a joke…
    Until now I haven’t commented negatively in any ffs…. bcoz I don’t want to hurt the writer…but today u made me to comment like this…
    Plz don’t separate ragsan and swalak
    If still u didn’t make it as ragsan and swalak then good bye to this ff
    And I’m extremely sorry if I hurted ur feelings…and the final decision about the pairs is urs…hope u make it as ragsan and swalak

  8. Kajal

    I like your ff from the starting but today i disappointed in your ff
    plss dont lose the charm of the story and plsssss change it back to ragsan and swalak

  9. Silent_writer

    |Registered Member

    Sorry dear but its not acceptable that married couple again married with swapping i dnt understand anything n if u want to swap than u can but on beginning not like that

  10. A.xx

    |Registered Member

    fab but i think if u wanted to switch the pairs you could have found anotherway but honestly this isn’t the right way and to turn it right u can show that being already married you cannot marry a second person without divorce…..so plz post soon and set it right and using this mishap you cna slowly change the pairs but not likethis.xx

  11. isha

    Please now u don’t become another Rashmi sharma…. Pls for god’s sake don’t do this… Let it be ragsan n swalak only please yaar dont do this to us… Its a request….

  12. sanam

    Because this is just an ff u can’t disrespect the sacred relationship like marriage… Common man this is just not done. …

    Please yar don’t do this… In indian culture its just not acceptable to marry again when ur partner is still alive n they haven’t been divorced also… Just make it RAGSAN n SWALAK!? Or u may lose many readers common yaar…

  13. shona

    This is so __________ I don’t even have words…. There could b a better way to swap the pairs… I’m telling I didn’t liked it at all……

  14. Jazzy

    |Registered Member

    hey this is not done this is not a joke or a game where u can swap pairs like this marriage is not a joke okk not is not done i never thought u r going to do like this how can just removing ur mangalsutra make u free from a marriage
    sry to be rude but this is seriously stupidity if u wanted pair as swasan and raglak soo u shouldnt have done like this

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