Swaragini (love connection) Part 36 (last part)


Part 36

Sumi went near urvashi who was also present at that place.Urvashi felt nervous seeing the rage on her eyes.
Urvashi:Why r u looking at me like this?I didn’t do anything!
Sumi:I know u did this.What have u told her?
Urvashi:She went on her wish..i didn’t force her.
Sumi:If u hadn’t done anything than then why did she left?She told me that she will never hurt me.If she has left then it is only because of ur taunts.

Urvashi stood there nervously.Suddenly her phone started to ring.Being startled she took the phone.She cut the call seeing the name.The phone rang again.She again cut the call.Sumi felt suspicious.She snatched the phone from her hand.The next time it rang,sumi answered the call.

Caller:Mam,ur job is done.We made the visa,passport and ticket of the girl and she has just collected it from us.

Sumi was shocked.
Sumi:What is the girl’s name?
Caller:Mam u forgot?U told us to make the ticket of ragini gaddodia.

That was another shock for her.

Sumi:Thanks..when is the flight?
Caller:It is on 4 pm.

Sumi cut the call and turned to urvashi who was scared to meet eyes with her.She gave a tight slap to urvashi shocking everyone.Urvashi holds her cheek in disbelief.

Sumi stopped her showing hand.
Sumi:No more words didi…i feel ashamed of being ur sister.U made her leave us all??I couldn’t imagine that u can stoop so low!

Urvashi:Yes..i did this…i made her sign the divorce papers..i told her to leave …so what?It’s good if she leaves us all.

She got another slap from sumi.
Sumi:I have tolarated u a lot..it’s u who should go…not her.

Swara was listening to all of this till now…she went from there.After some times she returned with a luggage.

Swara:U did all this so that ragini leaves right?Even u arranged her visa and tickets also!Now see..with that ticket u will return USA.U stayed here a lot…not anymore.

Laksh gave urvashi a disgusted look.
Laksh:I will deal with u later,so called maasi…now i have to take ragini back.Mom..when is the flight?
Sumi:At 4 pm.

Laksh looked at the watch.
Laksh:Still we have half an hour.We have to hurry.

All nodded.Then they rushed to the car.Laksh and swasan sat on one car.Sumi,shekhar along with urvashi sat on another car.Sumi and shekhar forcefully made urvashi sit along with her luggage.

Laksh drove the car fast.He didn’t even care about accident.Swara was also being restless.Sansker kept his hand on her shoulder and assured her that all will be fine.

Laksh was driving but his mind was not in the road.He was thinking about ragini.There first meeting,their fights,their marriage,their first night fights,working together…all flashed in his mind.

Hai kya jo yeh tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koyi daastaan hai
Lagane lagi abb jindagi khaali hai meri
Lagane lagi har saans bhi khaali
bin tere bin tere bin tere
koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere

As he wss too distracted in his thought,he almost clashed with another car.They escaped at the last time as sansker called him.Sansker understood his condition and told him to let him drive.Laksh agreed.Sansker drove the remaining way to airport.

Laksh didn’t wait a minute after reaching airport.He opened the door and ran quickly.Swasan also ran behind him.


Ragini lifted her luggage as her flight was announced.Last time she watched around.Her eyes were red as she was crying till now.She wiped the tears and submitted the visa and other papers.Then she went inside area.

Laksh was running like a mad.Swasan were a little behind him.

Swara stumbled on her way.Sansker hold her before falling.

Sansker:Sambhalke swara..u just got well after a major accident!
Swara:I have to find ragini…otherwise i can’t forgive myself.
Sansker:We will find her…relax.

They hold each others hand and kept searching.Now they couldn’t see laksh as he was searching in other area.

Laksh looked at the timing of the flights.He heard the announcement of the flight to USA.

“Shit!!She must be inside now!”he muttered and started to run to the entrance.But the police stopped him.
Police:U can’t go inside.U have to submit papers.
Laksh:Look…my wife is inside and i have to stop her.Please let me go.
Police:Whatever..u can’t go without the papers.

Laksh clenched his Jaw and shut his eyes due to irritation.Then he took a deep breath before starting.
Laksh:Ok..toh ap ayse nehi manenge?Ok i am going back.

Police nodded and he started to go back.Seeing him going back police looked on other side.He took this opportunity and ran inside jumping over the barricade.When police saw him he also started running behind him.

Ragini submitted the papers for last time and stood in the row for the last pass with a heavy heart.

As laksh was running from the police to reach ragini,police thought him as a terrorist and the police from whole area started to run behind him.One police caught him,he kicked the police and ran again.He yelled “sorry”to him while running.

At last he saw ragini..standing on the row.She was far from him but he could see her easily.His heart started racing as soon as he saw her.He stopped right there.

Taking this advantage some police,who was running behind him caught him tightly.He tried to free himself but failed as 4 of the strong police grabbed him.

Laksh:Bhai..jane do mujhe pls…meri biwi ja rahi hai.

But the police kept holding him.He looked at ragini who didn’t notice him.She started to move with the row.He called her being within the hold of the police.

“Ragini”he shouted as loud as possible.But she didn’t hear.She was still going ahead.

The policemen were confused seeing him calling a girl’s name.

He again shouted,”Raginiii”
This time also she didn’t hear.

He gave up on her name.He thought it’s all his fault as he never called her by her name.Now how will she know that he is calling her.So he decided to call her by the name he always called her.


Police were more confused this time.But they didn’t let him go.But this time ragini heard him.She felt strange and looked back.She was shocked to see laksh in that condition.

His face lit up as she looked at him.He continued calling “chipkali”.She was also confused as the policemen.She started to move the people and made her way to him.

Police saw at her and understood the reason of this mad boy’s running.

They looked at him and asked,”Ohh..toh this the case of love?”

Laksh:Haan bhai…wo mai kabse batane ki kashish kar raha hu…now let me go at least…biwi ki samne mera beizzati karwa di!

The policemen laughed and released him.He ran to ragini and stopped just in front of her breathing heavily.

Ragini:Laksh..u r here!How did u come?Why did u come?I gave u divorce papers..then..why…and why the police was holding u..how did u come here without papers…what….

God knows how much time she was going to continue this blabbering…laksh tried to stop her.
Laksh:Listen ragini…
Ragini:What listen?I can’t fight with u now…tell me what r u doing here..u can’t be here..my flight has arrived…and why police?R u a terrorist?I knew it!!…what….

Laksh couldn’t resist himself seeing her wet lips as those were moving with her bak bak.He kissed her lips which immediately shut her mouth.Her eyes were coming out of sockets at shock!She wanted to ask something,scold laksh…but she didn’t find the chance as laksh was kissing her.She wanted to push him but laksh was holding her both hands tightly.All the people present in the airport saw the two people kissing at a public place.What a shock for them!Some people started clapping and whistling.

At last being out of breath laksh left her.She was still shocked.
Laksh:You talk too much!At last…i found a way to shut ur mouth!

Ragini:You kissed me?(in an unbelievable tone)
Laksh:Then what could i do…u were talking non-stop! i had to shut u first if i wanted to say something!
Ragini:But u kissed me!(still shocked)

Laksh:Yeah stupid..i kissed u!How many times u will say?

Ragini got over the shock and realized that they were in public place!And the big idiot standing in front of her,kissed him in front of thousand people.This matter made her angry.

Ragini:U kissed me in a public place..in front of all these people!Moreover we r not married now..and this is illegal! i can file a case of s*xual harrashment against u!(angrily)
Laksh:What!(surprised and in disbelief).U r talking about s*xual harrashment till now!Duffer i kissed u because i love u…and listen one thing…we r married till now because i didn’t sign the divorce papers.

He took out the papers from pocket and threw it on the floor.

Laksh:But if u have any doubt till now,we can start new.

Then he knelt down in front of ragini.Ragini kept hands in her mouth in disbelief.People awed seeing this cute couple.

Laksh:Ragini gaddodia…i know we r fighting from the very first day we met!But u saved my life in spite of being my greatest enemy!(ragini rolled her eyes)No need to roll eyes..i got to know it reading ur diary today..(now she gave an i-will-kill-u look)ahh don’t kill me by ur dangerous look now…because i want to live with u hundred years..and i want to fight with u every day!But at the end of the day i want to tell one thing… that i love u…i love u so much that i can’t stop fighting with u!Will u allow this stupid,idiot,monkey..whatever u call me,to spend his whole life fighting with u??

“Say yes!Say yes!”everyone shouted.

Ragini just nodded her head and slowly said”yes”

A wide grin appeared at laksh’s face as he took out the bracelet from his pocket.

Ragini:Where did u find it?I lost it in party!
Laksh:This was with me till now.Will u allow me?
Ragini nodded and forwards her hand.Laksh made her wear the bracelet and stood up.Then he hugged her.She also hugged him back.Everybody clapped.

Swasan stopped searching ragini hearing the sound of clapping.They popped on through the crowd and saw raglak hugging each other.Swara sighed in relief seeing ragini.

Sansker:I told u na?He would find ragini!see..
Swara:Yes…they r just made for each other!
Sansker:Like us?
Swara:Yeah..just like us!

She wrapped her arms around his waist and rested her face on his chest!

She pulled apart only to see the police bringing raglak with handcuffs in their hands!Some lady police was bringing her luggage.The both were laughing as well blushing looking at each other with the handcuffs in their hands.How idiotic!

Swasan were shocked to see the view.Laksh waved his hands to sansker even though his hands were handcuffed!Sansker waved him faintly.

Laksh:I have found her bhai..see…i have told i love u to her too!
Sansker:Well done mere bhai!But why r u in handcuffs?
Laksh just shrugged.One policeman gave answer on his behalf.

Policeman:His first mistake is he broke the barricade and entered inside forcefully.

Swara:But why did u arrest my sister?What has she done?

Policeman coughed a little before answering.Ragini covered her face with hands.

Policeman:That’s because mam,they both kissed each other in public!And that’s against the rule.

Sansker looked at laksh in disbelief.Laksh just shrugged as if it wasn’t a big deal!

Swara:They r married for God’s sake!U can’t arrest them like that!
Policeman:I wouldn’t..if they had done this in their room..but mam..this is public place!

At that time sumi shekhar and urvashi reached there.Sumi and shekhar were shocked to see the scenario.

Sumi:What happened?Why r they in this state?

The police was going to tell them the matter but swara stopped him.

Swara:That’s a long story mom…u guys see off our sweet cute disgusting face maasi to her return trip to USA,me and sansker will handle them.

Sumi gave a peck on ragini’s forehead and forcefully take urvashi from there.

Sumi:Let’s go di..otherwise u will miss the flight…and then u have to book a hotel to stay..i wouldn’t like that!Ragini,where r the tickets?

Ragini gestures to the lady police and sumi took the ticket from her.

Sumi:That’s all we need!We have packed ur visa and passports in bag..let’s go.

She took her from there and made their way to reach the flight.

When they were passing by laksh,he made weird sound by his mouth.Urvashi looked at him angrily.
Laksh:See maasi..u booked ticket for her but u have to go now!Look at my hand na….i would definitely carry ur luggage if my hands were free!But afsoos!!U have to carry them alone now!

Urvashi gave him a death glare and walked past him.

“Have a safe journey maasi..and never come back”he shouted from behind.

Ragini let out a chuckle hearing him!

“How can u keep them in jail..they were just kissing!”sansker told leaning forward to the table of the inspector.

They were having conversation in jail as raglak were inside the bar.Looking at them it seemed like they have come to picnic!But swasan were dying in tension.

Inspector:Yes.. just kissing..but in public place!

Sansker:Ok..let me call someone…then u will understand.

He took out the phone and called the commissioner who was a friend of dp.After talking for sometime he cut the call.

Swara:What did he say?
Sansker:He will call that inspector over there and tell him that it’s not any fu**ing crime to kiss wife!

Swara:Cool down patidev!They will be out soon!
Sansker:How can i be?I had to talk with the man of my father’s age about…about this kiss thing!How embarrassing is that!All because of ur sister!
Swara:Hawww!!Don’t dare to blame my sister!What did she do?(scrunching face)

Sansker:If she wouldn’t go to the airport,then this thing wouldn’t happen!
Swara:Listen…ur brother kissed her without her consent..so it’s ur brothers fault!
Sansker:Couldn’t she push him?
Swara:And why would she do that?
Sansker:Whatever u say..it’s ur sisters fault.
Swara:Whatever u say..it’s ur brothers fault(mimics him)
Sansker:No ur sisters fault.
Swara:No ur brothers!

Then they started to fight like kids over this matter.They came in sense hearing laksh’s voice.

Laksh:R u guys gonna fight or take us out?I need to pee!
Sansker:Screw u idiot!

After getting call from commissioner,inspector released raglak.They came out and stood near swasan.Ragini looked some lady police laughing at laksh.She looked at him and noticed for the first time that he was wearing pink shirt!
Ragini:Ewwww..why r u wearing pink?It’s too girly!
Laksh:U noticed just now?!(his face fell in disappointment)
Ragini:I would beat u if i noticed it earlier!
Laksh:Why?u like this colour!
Ragini:Yeah..i like pink..but not on man!Yuck!
Laksh groaned.
Laksh:Mad woman! i wore that to impress u!
Ragini:How dare u to call me mad woman?
Laksh:I told that i wore this creepy pink to impress u..and all u took from the sentence is that ‘mad woman’?Unbelievable!!!
Ragini:What!U want to say that my favourite colour is creepy?

Then they started to fight in the police station like mad people.Sansker tried to stop them but in vein.He looked to swara who wasn’t trying at all to stop them.He opened his mouth to say something but swara turned her face from him.He understood that she is mad because of the fighting.He had to solve their fighting if he wanted to stop his brother’s.

“Both the sisters r mad”he thought.

“Sorry”he said softly.

Swara still didn’t look at him.

“Okey..it’s my brother’s fault to kiss ur sister and it’s my fault to fight with u..look i am holding ears!”he said holding his ears.

Now swara looked at him and laughed seeing him holding ears.She took off his hands from ears and pulled his cheek.

Swara:How can i be angry with u when u r being so cute!awww!!
Sansker:I am not cute!!(with a pout)
Swara:Yes u r!
Sansker:Okey i am…as u say!
Swara:Aww..so cute!
She took a step to him to hug him.But he thought that she is gonna kiss him…so he took a step back!Swara was confused.

Sanskar:Not now…we r already in police station for one kiss…i don’t wanna face the court for God’s sake.

“I wasn’t gonna kiss!”swara said being embarrassed.

“Hey bhai..let’s take selfie.”laksh told from their back.

Sansker looked at them amused.
Sansker:Ur fighting over?
Ragini:After all he was just trying to impress me!So how can i fight for so long!
Laksh just shrugged.Swara hugged ragini.

Laksh:Come on bhai…selfie in police station…so cool na??
Swara:Ohh..c’mon…it will be a memory!

Then the four took a selfie in the police station just to keep a memory of their being jail.

Screen freezes on their happy faces.

The end!!!!!!!!

Awww…i just finished an ff.Feeling so emotional right now!A big thanks to alllll of u who supported me by commenting…i made so many friends and even family here…love u all…lots of kisses and hugs!Btw..how did u like my surprise,raglak kiss and jail??(lol)

Good news(or bad):I am gonna start a new ff on swasan…name is dawat-e-ishq (may be).I will be happy if u read that too.And i would love to see the same names in the comment section.

Again i am gonna say it!


Lots of kisses to u allll(i hope police won’t arrest me for giving kisses in public place…lol)

And yeah…i owe u an epilogue…wanna read that??Just wait for some time!Take care!



  1. kamy

    Loved the episode it was so awesome the best of all it made me laugh a lot u are a very good writer keep the good work up

    • Chaitali


      Thanks kamy…glad u liked it! I always liked funny stories more than emotional ones…so i love to write funny and make people laugh

  2. Crazy

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    Cmmnting first time on ur ff
    But must say I read ur ff from start to end
    N its just awsm…..
    Waiting for ur next one too coz I m sure it ll b d best r say more best
    But ll miss this ff
    Btwn I too din knew yar
    A kiss n public place z crime…
    Anyway ff ki funiys mein all z possible…
    N NY tho all matlab many couples kiss
    N say bye n airport

    • Chaitali


      Thanks for commenting now….i am glad u liked it!Yeah i know it’s normal to kiss in the foreign countries!But it’s still little uncomfortable in India…and i saw in the movie “s*x and the city 2” that in soudi arab the lady was sent to jail for kissing in public…i just used the idea to add some fun…haha…sorry if it felt illogical!

  3. Megha123

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    Loved ur ff too much & i would miss u
    Today’s part was really Funny + awsm ????loved raglak proposal &their silly fights ??? I will surely miss them.???

    • Crazy

      |Registered Member

      Are no re baba..
      Me too from India only..
      But when I went to NY last month I saw this na…
      N I dint know so I just asked
      Btwn I really liked d concept Han
      But must say today’s episode was way toooooomuchhhh funnyyyy!!!

  4. lovely

    raglak story is amazing from start to end, wahh their confession also memorable

    please write one more story of raglak

    • Chaitali


      Thank u so much lovely for ur support from start to end…i will definitely try to keep ur request…after finishing the swasan ff..i will write on raglak possibly!

  5. Akshata

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    mind blowing…..i was laughing. loved it but you end it so soon. i am eagerly waiting for an epilogue. come back soon with ur new ff πŸ™‚

    • Chaitali


      Aww..thanks akshata…yeah i didn’t want to bore u with diminished idea on the ff…i planned this ending since starting….i will post my new ff soon…i will be happy if u read that too!

  6. Moni

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    I read all the epi today itself…i really loved it chaitali.hope to see you soon again☺☺☺

  7. ayisha

    It is fantastic i have no more words.u are just amazing thank u for such a beautiful ff.i even not missed qny episode.pls pls pls pls pls pls write one ff on raglak.its my request

    • Chaitali


      Thank u maha…bt i can’t continue it now as i am out of ideas….so it’s better not to bore u with this…thanks!

  8. Nami

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    Raglak confession was awesome. Loved it. Raglak scene were adorable. I fell in love with them all over again.

  9. RUPA

    |Registered Member

    Whole FF was fab.

    I loved every bit of it.

    I’m gonna miss u and FF.

    Anyways come back with epilogue soon.

    • Chaitali


      Thanks for the compliment!!
      U r not gonnna miss me as i am going to torture u all with another ff soon!
      Epilogue will be posted soon πŸ™‚

  10. Lol

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    I love it !! awesome !! Are you going to make a new one ???? I found the end way too funny especially Laksh

  11. Swasan

    Awesome…….ragini character was very good till now her bold avatar is nice……plz make ragini & lakash again same in another ff

    • Chaitali


      Thank u…can’t promise about laksh..but ragini character will be same bold in next ff too!And yeah..fighting will be the common thing in that too!

  12. AnuAnn

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    Awesome ff dear.. Gonna miss it badly .. W’ll surely read ur new ff b’coz I’m a crazy fan of swasan and helly

  13. Neha

    It was just amazing..raglak confesion was superb..i wil mis them..plz come back with another raglak ff dear

  14. Anika

    God! God god god god. Very god. Must say ur writing skils r god.best of luck for ur new ff dawat-e-isq. I will defenetly read ur ff. Again sry fr that behave. I did mistake and i angry with u. if anybdy hears he will surly laugh.ok bhai/sisy(i dont know what is ur gender.he he he) stay well write well.i will wait fr ur new ff . Fr nw bye. ;-);-)

    • Chaitali


      It’s okey dear…glad u liked this ff

      Hein??i am a girl!!my crazy maheswari family has made me sansker…but i am a girl in real life for God’s sake!!

  15. Prakriti

    Awesome Di ….Loved Police station part…..Bye and come soon with your new Fanfic…
    I am not sure That I will be able to comment on each episode of yours….As My School started…Bye and Take care..
    Love u so much…

    • Chaitali


      Thanks prakriti dear…best of luck for school…i will be gald if u read that just..school is necessary right now..not comment…lots of love..tc.

  16. Maddy_02

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    Yaar chaitali i will miss your ff and you. Will miss you badly. Come with anothef swasan raglak ff. Yaar i am going to miss. And it ws AWESOME,OUTSTANDING,SUPERB,GOOD,PERFECT,EXCELLENT,AMAZING. Have you thought to write a new ff. Tell me. Love you alot gone miss u. Be happy

    • Chaitali


      This ff was special for me as i started my writing through it!!no need to mias me as i am gonna torture u with another ff…it’s name is dawat-e-ishq…a swasan ff…love u maddy!

  17. Shanayasharma

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    Hey chaitali…. I am shanaya….I started reading ur ff yesterday and it took me around 4 hours to finish it…phew…. But it was so awesome that I didn’t even know what the time was….u write really well….waiting for the epilogue and ur next ff….
    Lots of love….take care…

    • Chaitali


      Shanaya!!!!!You read my whole ff!!Yayyyy…thank u soooo much….i love u tooo!!
      I will post epilogue and the intro of nxt ff soon!

  18. Lisa

    Raglak is toooooooooo good!!!!!!!! & u maintained raglak awesomeness till the end of the ff.. Hats off.. Pls write a new ff on Raglak..

  19. Shrutii

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    ahh…such a lovely ff dear….!! nd the best part was it ended wid raglak..!!!!! well as u see m a raglakian so sry as i won’t be able to read ur ff…but atvb for tht also πŸ™‚

    • Chaitali


      Thank u so much!no need to b sorry! i have a opan to write a raglak ff after the swasan one…so u will find me there…and thanks for the wish!

  20. dia

    my god dear ….. its fabulous ……..airport scene is too good .. I’m a silent lover of ur ff….. bt cant stop me from commenting after reading the last chapter….

  21. Fats

    Omg, it’s the last part!!! It was an amazing ending to the FF. I loved the reunion of the RagLak, it was just so sweet, cute, funny and romantic. The way Ragini heard Laksh calling her Chipkali was adorable ❀️❀️, their nicknames for eachother are so nice. And then the kiss ??, Laksh is right about kissing being the only way to stop Ragini. Well at least he got a good method to stop Ragini’s talks ??. Oh and the proposal was so unique. I loved how it was unique like it wasn’t a typical romantic proposal, but a chaitali’s RagLak kinda proposal. Anyways, LOOOL at how RagLak landed in jail for kissing and how Ragini didn’t like Laksh’s pink shirt ??. The poor guy cannot impress Ragini so easily ?. And aww at SwaSan too, their argument in jail was so SWEET!! Gosh your couple arguments are always so fun to read ??. But, other than couple romance, I also LOVED Urvashi’s slaps, she deserved that, glad she’s going America and her plan backfired ??. Alright and lastly, I LOVED the selfie ending in jail, what a nice and cute way to end the FF. Thank you so much for writing such a nice part ???

    • Chaitali


      Thank u,thank u sooo much!u know what!i was waiting for ur comment!i knew it will be a long wala comment!

      The proposal must be unique one ha?as they r my ffs raglak..as u say!aww i am feeling so happy right now that i have made my own style couple!thanks again for motivating me all the time!

      • Fats

        Lool the way you were waiting for my comment, I was also waiting for your update. As soon as I woke up I quickly went on my phone and checked telly updates to see if another part was updated ??. And AWW, although I started reading and commenting on your FF a little later, I’m happy to know I motivated you ???. Can’t wait for the epilogue now xx

  22. Abdul hafiz(uma).

    Sorry for late commenting. Awsm,marvelous chappy. What! for kissing in public,you sent them in jail.Esa rule pehli bar sunah hein,lol.When you are posting your nxt ff(with a innocent face and puppy eyes). Plz come back soon. I will miss you

    • Chaitali


      Thank uu so muvh sissy!Hehehe…esa rule maine bana liya!!
      i will post the intro of the new ff soon…may be tomorrow!!Will be waiting for ur response in that!Love u!!!

  23. Sree

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    How can u end it????? u said u will end it after 3-4 eps?????
    I was mad at u fir ending this but this is a perfect ending. I loved it?????
    Kiss in public place?????
    In jail????
    Everything was very nice???
    So a huge applause to u ??????
    And i will surely read ur nxt ff.
    I am waiting for the epilogue. ??
    Love u broooo??????

    • Chaitali


      Cool down bro!!!Don’t be mad!!hehe…after all he kissed her to shut her down..lol!!

      I am gonna come back soon with new ff….love u bro…

  24. Ruhani

    Omg such an amazing ff came to an end.. That’s not fair I thought u will continue it for long ??… But I must say u nailed it girl.. It is the best ever climax scene that I have ever read.. It was filled with romance comedy fights n everything.. Full on masaaledaar n dhamakedar epi… Raglak proposal was Mindblowing.. Laksh rocked today.. Them kissing in the airport aww so romantic… Serves gud for urvashi.. I’m glad that sumi slapped her twice n send her back… Will miss u dr n ur ff too.. Thnq so much for giving us such an amazing ff.. Raglak nok-jok was awesome n swasan silent romance was superb.. You portrayed all their emotions well n gave justice to their character… You gave us two diff kind of love story in one plate.. Plz come up with a new one.. I’m waiting eagerly for the epilogue.. Plz update it soon ?.. N loads of hugs n kisses frm my side too ????.. Stay blessed dr ?

    • Chaitali


      Awww…i am overwhelmed after reading ur comment…thank u so so much di!!
      I am really sorry that i can’t continue it…i really don’t wanna make it’s charm less…so i ended it till it was interesting!

      Love u so much…epilogue will be posted soon…and new ff intro tomorrow..

  25. Dafsi

    |Registered Member

    Vey pretty ff I loved in whole seriously simply superb awesom fantastic trust me this is the first time.commenting with so much of adjectives and yeah live you too amd come up with a new ff πŸ™‚

  26. Sethooty

    Superb yaar…from first to last …Raglak rocked….loved it..haha so funny airport and police station waala incidents…
    Waiting for ur swasan Ff…
    Ur Raglak was superb superb….am fall in love with them…u portrayed it very well…keep writing..write more Raglak..fictions….

    • Chaitali


      Thank u so much di!!!Feeling great seeing ur comment here!!
      I will post the intro of swasan ff soon…i will try my best to impress u all!
      And yeah…after swasan…i will try to write on raglak!

  27. lisa

    Oh god i was lol
    Love the kiss part jail part raglak part
    Ur ff is superb ur ending is super duper
    And i love rags so much

  28. Twinkle

    Hey sis!!! can i call u like that??? r u a school student?? if then which class??? coming t ur ff till nw i was a silent reader of ur ff but 2day after reading this chap i an’t stop myself from commenting. I was spellbound by reading this chapter. This is my one of fav chap of this ff. And this was just killer chap and also awsm. No words to say abt this chap. It was excellent perfect fab etc…….. Come back with bang!!! Wish u all the very best for ur future!!! Love u sis<3

    • Chaitali


      Hlww twinkle…u can call me sis of course…i am not a school student though…i am a college girl!

      Thank u for breaking the silence and commenting here…aww i have some spell in this ff which made u spellbound!!that’s a huge compliment…love u too!

  29. Krystal18

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god this was one of my favourite ff’s and now its going to end…….and the raglak kiss………too much funny

  30. shaikhsabiya

    I am scilent reader and i love your ff wow yaar you are amzing writer i must say i love your ff wow and i love raglak fight am gona miss there fight beacuse your ff is end so sad plz again right aa ff ??? and raglak fight ??plz

  31. Sammy_Kavi

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwww lolzzzz superb yar so sweet n cute and damn funny !!!!! Luvd it loads …. I swear I’ll never ever forget even a bit of this part …… Luv u

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