swaragini…..from laksh s views (Episode 1)

Hello everyone …..i thought to write something different so have written laksh’s pov plz read it once.
Laksh ‘s pov.
I know i was not a so called GOOD BOY , but i changed my self…..In starting if you remember..i was a spoilt boy who just cared about himself and his needs….. i met swara and we were like pakistan and india fighting for kashmir……
I remember the day when I was told that my marriage is fixed…..I was shocked that why haven’t they asked me..but still I was ready…
I got to know that my marriage was fixed with ragini . I was in a shock…I wondered that why was my pov not asked about marriage…..I have never told that I don’t want to marry but I just wanted to choose a girl of my choice…….a girl who could be my best friend too.she should be bold and at same time a little shy……..but why am I giving my views as I won’t be asked from my dad……

He has never given me such freedom that I can choose my way of life and this made me to change to lucky from laksh…….
I met her on our engagement ceremony ..she was beautiful and she must be very nice girl too but she was not the one whom I wanted to be my wife…. his father was even angry from me and I wanted him to break this marriage…….Swara again tried to save ragini from me and reveal my lucky side .she did it but it didn’t broke my marriage but just made my father angry from me.
I decided to take revenge…I kidnapped her …kept her at a lonely place …plan was going perfectly but don’t know how those goons reached there..they tried to kidnap her but I can’t let her in trouble as I have planned just a prank ……I saved her and took her from there….
When I reached her baadi ..the ladies were shocked as I was carrying her in arms..she looked cute .I left her there but she was not knowing I did it ..she thought those kidnappers did so…….

And this made us to take a step forward towards friendship……
My father forgave me and even I wanted to meet ragini to make everything clear ..I entered her baadi in night ….there Swara helped me to talk to ragini….everything was right when people came to know that there is some thief there and they all became attentive……..I was struck there ..but with the help of shekhar uncle and sharmishta aunty I was safe but they were trapped….people thought that they met at night …which my father also came to know……..
My father acted arrogantly….next day he took me there ..broke the relationship and in front of all the community members he insulted the gadodias….there face was colored black …but swaragini saved them ..they announced each other as sisters………

My father returned to home but I was too touched by this incident…I decided to leave my house…….
I went to gadodia house and they asked me to stay there….there me and Swara became best friends….
We three decided to make shekhar uncle and sharmishta aunty unite again….we did every possible effort we can do.and at last they got United and raginis Dadi s truth was revealed…
I returned to my home…..but in all this I didn’t realized that I have started falling for Swara….
One day a boy came to ragini s house ..he was mentally disturbed…he turned out to be my brother sanskar. He was in a bad condition…we thought he was dead but he returned…..
Everyone tried to take him home but he was just listening to ragini….with her efforts we took Bhai to home…..but he beacame restless again…I promise him that I will bring ragini and when I reached there….her Dadi asked me to do engagement with her……and I have to do it for my Bhai……I announced that I’ll marry her…..

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She came there …everything became fine …my family decided to do our engagement…..then I realized that I love Swara…but it was too late….
On my engagement day I even told her …but by listening this I even lost my friend…..she was not even talking to me…..my engagement finished…but I found it wrong as I can’t marry a girl whom I don’t love…it will be unfair for ragini….
After some days she came to know the truth she was broken…totally broken…she was not even talking to Swara….all because of me…..
I decided to move on…I promised my dad that I will never marry Swara……I started working…..I worked hardly…which made me closer to my dad….
One day …..I met ragini ..she called me and Swara…..she told that she will drink poison but Swara snatched it from her and was about to drink…but I can’t see her doing so and snatch it from her and this kept on going and then ragini took and drank it….she was joking it was juice…..to make us closer…….

It was swaras birthday…..she met me but to our astonishment…ragini was kidnapped…we tried to find her…when received call ..the caller told me to propose Swara…..and her to accept it after a lot of time she agreed ……she thought it to be my plan ….how can she even think of it …..the caller told us to dance and then to kiss ….I did everything…and we got ragini back….
I was put behind the bars…..Everyone thought that it was my plan….but no one listened me…when Swara came and made me free…she told that she believes me….I was happy…….she proved me innocent….and even won my father’s heart….he was ready for our marriage…Swara too realized everything….
Everything was going perfectly…it was our marriage day….but Swara was missing…..time passed but she didn’t returned……ragini tried to do suicide which made me to marry her…..
Swara returned back and told that every thing was raginis planning….but I was a fool not to believe her…and to protect everyone from raginis master plan…she married sanskar….
Sankar who was acting to be mentally disturbed was just taking revenge……he was absolutely alright….

I was shocked seeing her married…..I love her still but circumstances made me do that…..
She proved herself innocent and ragini culprit………but all this made me away from her….I would have believed her….my love…
She grew close to sanskar….I told her that I want to do a new starting of our relationship but she didn’t left sanskar……
Ragini with her plans took everything property and everything…and for taking it back I have to be good in front of her.I acted to live her and took back everything…
She realized her mistakes and became good again….
But I was made to marry her….but I don’t want to and for that I married kavya…..she was a mordern girl…who will be good for me.
Everyone blamed me…

From starting to end I m blamed….my happiness are sacrificed….always I have to give …but once if I thought about myself they made me away…..
Everyone is blaming me …they r not understanding my view……Swara married sanskar and she is happy….Everyone is liking ragini too ….but I’m still away ………………
Thanks for reading…

Credit to: silent reader

17 comments

  1. Lila

    wow a standing ovation for u….I totally agreed with u…. u have actually understood laksh as I did….people are now hating for what he did to Ragini….but all are forgetting that 2 hearts are actual broken….Ragini’s and Laskh…..seriously the writer did really bad with…..this whole show is becoming about Swara….why? the show name is swaragini…. they should have shown bth of them working together to overcome every problem that comes in their lives……..but instead the writer is making the main lead negative…..first giving us false hope about the pairs and then making main lead negative is not drama I call it….anyways….I loved what u wrote cuz every single word is true

  2. Thanks yaar for writing a ff about laksh pov I really thanking you he was really good only fault he did that he doesn’t dnt believe swara in their marriage day but I think in his place if any other one is there he also doing the same thing I knw when he realise his fault he apologise to swara but she is mahan na so she didn’t accept him actually nw everyone hate him because their swasan are separated (actually dnt knw i didn’t watch it from a long time )they hate him but really only situation is responsible for this thanks again for writing it yaar & I really love him if i insult anyone then heartly sorry for it

    • sara

      S i agree wid u. His only mistake was not believing on swara on marriage day.. that too he did on raginis blackmailing.. He was never allowed 2 take decisions on his wish..swara supported for ragini always even if she did bad but always blamed laksh.. He is the affected character

  3. sita ram

    YOU KNOW WHAT LAKSH SHOULD SAY WHAT HE FEELS AND HIS POINT OF AS SOFTLY AS POSSIBLE AND TRY NOT TO RUIN HIS LIFE BY AGREEING OTHERS WISHES AND NOT EVEN RUIN OTHERS LIFE BY AGREEING.

  4. Eva

    So true…..jo bhi apne likha hai woh bilkul sach hai…the writers should work on Laksh’s character….from the beginning…….i loved his character..but the way his character is shaping…i’m really not liking it…..now swaragini creaters…don’t try even of uniting Raglak….they r not meant for being together….ek sudharta hai toh dusra bigar jata hai…..both r excellent individuals….they will rock on being with someone else…..

  5. Laksh was never given a chance to prove himself his happiness were envied
    Swara is also not good she wants to put her so called pyaar ke liye kiya sister in place of kavya .i hate everyone who ruined my faviorate swalak
    Thanks for understanding lakshs charecter

  6. sara

    Awesome yaar.. Thanks for laksh pov.. everyone writes on swaragini and sanskar pov but laksh is the person who truly suffered.. swalak was the best.. even ragini did wrong accepted her mainly swara. But even for small mistakes laksh was blamed..now if ragini becomes good that doesn’t make her doings good.. but everyone blame laksh for betraying ragini.. Raglak should not unite bcoz if they do so one can do bad things but they at last get succeeded..I’m really happy that someone wrote on laksh pov.. Thank u yaar.. simply awesome

  7. minnu

    iam also a swalakian…plsss writter…pls unite swalak…i know it would not be happen..but…i wish it…love u swalak
    guys….when kavitha try to snatch sanskar from swara…every swasan fan say it is not fair…but when ragini snatch lucky from swara…no one can say anything…if rag get one chance…why dont kavitha…she is his first love…i love sanskar..but he started it…when lucky ask swara one chance again…he did not help him….but rag did everyone support her.

    i can’t understand swara’s mind…how can a girl live peacefully with with his ex-love brother…swalak did kiss and hug many times…even after swasan marriege…but i dont howshe behave like him this…plsss…i want swalak…dont make raglak…because he did not love her once…from beginning to end…he did not love her

  8. laksh is always my fav. He is actually so good by heart …..he thinks about everyone…..but no one think about him nd his happiness……after ragini did this much too him…..remember on the day of kavlak marriage nd ragini suicide attempt he was thinking about ragini and her letter……nd he was feeling pain when Ap was going to jail….nd they made him to take such steps…..i agree ur pov and i m really feeling so happy to read it….

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