Swaragini – Jodein Rishton Ke Sur (Episode 4)


Swaragini – Jodein Rishton Ke Sur
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Episode 4:

The episode starts with Rakesh stopping the car at Maheshwari Mansion. Ragini looks outside.

“This place seems familiar.” Ragini thinks.

Ragini steps out as Rajbeer, Rakesh, Leela, Jai and Abhay step out.

“Where have we came?” Ragini asks.

“Maheshwari Mansion.” Rakesh says.

Ragini is shocked, she looks around and realises it is Maheshwari mansion.

Rajbeer, Abhay and Rakesh walk inside.

“L…Leela I don’t feel well, I’ll go back.” Ragini lies.

“No Ragini, you’re coming with me.” Jai says.

“Leela, this is my sisters in law.” Ragini worriedly says.

Leela looks on.

“You mean this is Swara’s in law?” Leela asks.

Ragini nods yes.

“Ragini, you can’t leave me and go… Don’t worry, I’ll protect you.” Jai promises.

Ragini faint smiles but hesitates. Jai holds her hand and Ragini slowly walks towards the entrance. Leela stands besides her.

“I’m also here…” Leela assures.

Ragini worriedly nods yes, she then remembers Laksh, her engagement and all the memories she shared with MM. Ragini reaches the door but doesn’t enter, Jai pulls her and she comes inside.

“Jai, you don’t force someone…” Leela tells.

“Sorry Ragini.” Jai apologises.

“No, it’s okay.” Ragini says while looking at the stairs.

Her heart beat increases along with her nervousness. She takes deep breathes. Leela puts her hand on Ragini’s shoulder to support her.

“Ragini, why are you scared? I’m here Na?” Jai says.

Ragini nods yes with a faint smile.

Swara is shown in a yellow saree/Lengha with a pink blouse. She is attending some guests.

“Wow Swara, you look amazing.” One of the woman compliments.

“Thank you.” Swara says with a smile.

Ragini takes her step and Swara feels something and turns towards the step. She sees Jai coming up. Ragini then takes deep breath and walks up the stairs with Leela looking bold. Swara is stunned to see Ragini. Rakesh smiles at Ragini and she smiles back. He then walks forward and forwards his hand. Ragini unwillingly moves her hand forward but Jai puts his hand on top of Rakesh’s and Ragini places her hand in his with a smile. Rakesh gives Jai the glares.

“Ragini, come with me.” Jai says.

Ragini nods okay and Leela nods okay too, Leela then joins Rajbeer while Rakesh looks on at Ragini and Jai.

Swara looks on to see Ragini but Ragini doesn’t see Swara, tears develop in Swara’s eyes. AP and Sujata come down. Sujata is holding her grandson Ayaan. DP also walks down with RP and Adarsh and attends some guests.
Sanskaar attends some clients and Laksh is still getting ready in his room. Ragini is trying her best to avoid everyone.
Swara’s Pov:
Ragini? My Ragini, I saw her after 1 whole year… I can’t believe my eyes!

But why isn’t she looking at me? Why is she avoiding everyone? And who is that child and the man and the woman? Ragini can’t avoid me for so long… I know what I need to do.

I nodded my head and wiped my tears. After a while the lights turned off on my saying and the music starts playing.

I had no other song in mind expect from Ping… That sounds classical.

I stood in the middle and everyone were staring as the lights shined on me. Sanskaar was giving the the confused look but Ragini didn’t turn. Some other woman joined me in the back.

Inga ga pori
Pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori Pinga

The woman were mouthing, I saw Ragini turn slightly.

Mala pingyani maala
Bholavli raat
Ghalavli pori pinga

I started dancing and mouthing.

“Latpat latpat kamar daamini adhar ragini ho..” I mouthed and done some classical moves.

”Hey.. latpat latpat kamar daamini
Adhar ragini nirdhar aayi kaise saji dhaji” While spinning I walked up to Ragini.

”Dekho mere piya ki sanwari jiya se banwari” I mouthed and touched her shoulder but she jerked it.

”Mere angna mein dekho aaj khila hai chaand” I stood in front of her and made her look at me.

“Ke baaje dhun jham-jham jhamak jha” I held her hand and took her to the dance floor and span her.

”To nache mann cham-cham chamak cha” I mouthed and looked at everyone’s reaction. Ragini was just standing there. All the Maheshwari family were shocked, Maa and Baba were in the party but Dada Dadi weren’t as Dada Ji was ill. Maa and Baba are stunned to see her and Maa developed tears in her eyes.

“Inga ga pori
Pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori Pinga” all mouthed and danced but Ragini wasn’t dancing.

Ragini looked at someone, I guess that man and the child and the man nodded yes.

Ragini then nodded.

“Latpat latpat latpat kamar daamini” Ragini mouthed and danced.

It must be weird for her to say her own name, but she was facing towards that man and dancing. Her back was facing the stairs and I was standing on the side.

”Adhar ragini nirdhar aayi kaise saji dhaji” Ragini mouthed and done a classical move.

She’s a good dancer, better than me.

”Dekho mere piya ki sanwari jiya se banwari” Ragini mouthed and looked at the woman who came with her.

”Mere angna mein dekho aaj khila hai chaand” Ragini mouths and walks forward and brings that woman on the floor.

I guess her husband whom she was standing with smiled at her.

“Ke baaje dhun jham-jham jhamak jha
To nache mann cham-cham chamak cha” Ragini and that woman mouthed and danced.

“Inga ga pori
Pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori Pinga” I joined them and the trio of us started dancing.

End of Pov….
Ragini’s Pov:
I can’t believe Swara brought me in front of everyone…. I can’t even face them. All I’m doing us dancing with Leela and Swara and facing my Jai. I hope I don’t see Laksh.

It’s so weird to see their reaction to see me, I ignored them with a smile and concentrated at the dance.

And why did that Rakshas nod yes, I asked Jai, not him!

“Aa…” Me, Leela and Swara mouthed.

“Mere jiya mein utaari
Tune paini piya ki kataari” Swara mouths and dances.

”Haan.. tu jaane ye duniyadaari
Main tu hoon bas mohabbat ki maari” Leela mouths and dances but me and Swara dance with her.

I hate it when they all look at me like that. I’m trying hard to ignore.

“Jo peer meri hai so peer teri
Are dono ki maang laage
Sooni aadhi aadhi naa..” Swara and Leela both mouth and I only danced with them.

“Ke baaje dhun jham jham jhamak jhaa
To naache mann cham cham chamak chaa” We mouthed and danced.

It’s so hard to dance in a saree, I wonder how Leela feel.

”Ke baaje dhun jham jham jhamak jhaa” I feel like I’m about to fall.

Swara is smiling at me, it’s like she is happy to see me.

”To nache mann cham cham chamak chaa” I walked backwards while dancing as I didn’t want to just walk out. Swara and Leela seem to be enjoyed.

“Inga ga pori” I was about to trip but someone caught me on time.

”Pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori Pinga (x4)” Swara and Leela kept on dancing and that too 4 times.

I was looking at Swara and Leela and didn’t get time to see the person that caught me, so I turned and looked up, the person who caught me on time was… Laksh.

He was looking at me with shocked expression, I then turned towards Jai who looked on. Laksh saw me looking at someone and looked in that direction too. Rakesh was also glaring at our position. Stupid Rakshas! Everyone started clapping for Swara and Leela, Laksh made me stand and I composed my self. I guess only DP uncle and Sanskaar saw us and Jai and Rakesh.

I hurriedly left from there. I wish I could stare into his dark chocolate brown eyes. But he’s married to Swara.

He’s my sisters husband.

End of Pov…
I walked up to Jai and looked at Rakesh and looked down.

“Ms Ragini, you never told me you were a great dancer.” Rakesh asks.

“I never knew I was great myself.” Ragini says and looks at him.

“Ragini, are you okay?” Jai asks.

Ragini nods yes. Laksh looks at Ragini, Rakesh and Jai. Ragini feels Laksh looking at her and feels uncomfortable.
Laksh’s Pov:
Ragini? I can’t believe I saw Ragini! In fact I caught her… She was right here in my arms… It feels so good to see her. But she didn’t give me much attention… She was looking t that guy… Who is he and why was she looking at him? And Ragini? It’s so hard for me to believe that she’s here, I have been searching for her from the past two months.

I probably look like a jealous cow with that look I’m giving. And does she have a kid? But that kid seems like 9/10 years old and she went missing for a year. So it can’t be her child… Why am I so interested?

If she’s not giving me attention then why can’t I get my eyes off her? I guess I seen my friend after 1 whole year, she probably doesn’t remember that today is our friendship day… This day we had become friends.

She’s… She’s avoiding me. How can she avoid the hottest guy here right now?

I looked down and away to not seem like a pervert that keeps on looking at her, then some girls came up to me and took their phones out to take selfies. Aah, I could see how jealous Papa is getting from the inside. I done my s*xy and famous pout while taking pictures. I could actually smell something burning.

I looked at Papa and smirked while he was giving me the glares.

Hah! Get jealous!

I wish I could actually say that to him, he must’ve died from the inside after seeing my s*xy pout and the girls dying to take selfies.

After all the magazines came in handy.

“The most hottest, youngest and s*xy businessman.” The girls say and put it as their caption.

I looked up and saw Ragini looking here, as I looked at her, she looked away. Ragini… Ragini looks beautiful.

Just then a hot lady approached towards Papa, I got confused as itni hot lady ka Papa se Kya kaam. Papa was also getting happy. She got her camera ready. Papa was about to say something when she walked right past him and approached at me.
I felt like laughing my ass off… His reaction. He changed it into a cough and I just smirked.

“Laksh, success at 22? Secret?” The lady asks.

I just laughed and she moved the girls and took the selfie. Aaah, Papa’s reaction was worth watching. He thought she was coming for him.

End of Pov…
“All he can do is show off! In my days, I was on the magazine cover but Laksh! He stole my place! With his ugly mouth (pout)! He’s just showing off!” DP thinks and looks away.

Then a couple dance is announced, Swara walks up to Sanskaar abs he offers her to come, she agrees. Laksh stands on the side.

“Where are the girls now? Haven’t you got a partner?” DP whispers.

“I do but too many, but you have none, I doubt Maa would even want to dance with you… So get jealous.” Laksh whispers and smirks.

“Too many? I don’t even see one and of course, your mother would be ready anytime.” DP whispers angrily.

Laksh then points at a bunch of girls who are fighting over dancing with Laksh. DP looks on.

“If I dance with one the the others are going to get offended.” Laksh says.

Leela and Rajbeer also go on the dance floor.

“Ms Ragini, can you join me?” Rakesh asks.

Ragini looks on and then at Jai.

“No.” Jai says.

“Please Jai…” Rakesh requests.

Jai thinks.

“Please say no.” Ragini wishes.

“No.” Jai says again.

Rakesh gets irked.

Laksh comes there.

“May I have a dance?” Laksh asks.

Jai looks at him and Ragini looks on.

“No.” Rakesh angrily says.

Jai thinks and examines him.

“Okay fine but don’t get too close.” Jai says.

Ragini and Rakesh are shocked, Laksh looks at Rakesh.

“I said yes and why are you looking at him?” Jai asks.

Laksh then nods and forwards his hand, Jai picks Ragini’s hand and places it in Laksh’s. Laksh smiles and both walk to the dance floor.
DP and AP are also on the dance floor.

“Why isn’t laksj dancing with Swara? And why is Sanskaar with her?” Ragini thinks.

All the girls drop their jaws and get jealous looking at Laksh and Ragini. Rakesh angrily glares at Jai.

“You didn’t let her dance with me!” Rakesh angrily says.

“She’s my Ragini and I decide with whom she dances with and not. Just wait when I’m taller then I will be dancing with her.” Jai tells.

Rakesh huffs and gets irked.

“I can’t believe I’m here, but this was only a challenge.” DP thinks.

5 minuets ago:
DP and Laksh were talking.

“You can’t even dance with Maa.” Laksh says.

“I can and I will, but you will have to also but not with these girls, but the girls that are wearing sarees.” DP challenges.

“Okay.” Laksh says and looks at Ragini with a smile.

“Okay, challenge accepted.” DP says.

“I hope some decent song play.” DP wishes.

AP is surprised yet shy, Sujata looks on and then nudges RP and signs him to look.

“Haa, I am looking.” RP says.

Parineeta smile seeing AP and DP on the dance floor.

A song starts playing and DP release a breath of relief.

Bolna starts playing…

Laksh looks at Ragini but she doesn’t look at him, Sanskaar pulls Swara closer. SwaSan also are surprised seeing AP and DP.

“Why am I not feeling uncomfortable with his touch?” Ragini thinks.
Sanskaar’s POV:
I guess this song match’s Ragini and Laksh’s situation. Finally and all of a sudden, we found Ragini, our 12 months of search had paid back. It’s so good to see Ragini, I didn’t even get a chance to apologise to her.

After two months, the family forgave me but Laksh forgave me on that day. Oh, the song started…

Swara was looking beautiful as usual. But I’m shocked to see Bade Papa and Badi Maa on the floor but I know for a fact that I would be lost in Swara’s cute brown eyes.

Wait… Ragini doesn’t know that me and Swara are married…

End of Pov…

“Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna” All were moving side to slowly but Ragini was avoiding Laksh.

”Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna” All the male partner twirl their female partner.

Hmm… aa…

Jai was enjoying RagLak dance while Rakesh was fuming.

“Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal
Jindri bitavaan” All the male partner turned their female partner and hugged them from behind.

Including DP and AP.

“Kadi naiyo chhodna
Ishq di dor na” They turned them back around.

Laksh looked to the side and saw the girls glaring at him.

”Saare chhad jaayen maahi
Tu na chhodna” Ragini didn’t look at Laksh.

Swara smiled at Sanskaar.

”Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm…” Sanskaar pecks Swara’s forehead and all the male partners twirl their female partner.

“Tere sang hasna main
Tere sang rona
Tujhme hi rehna main
Tujhme hi khona” Sanskaar mouthed that part for Swara and Swara smiled.

DP seems to be enjoying the dance as he’s not getting too irritated.

“Dil mein chhupa ke tujhe
Dil naiyo kholna
Marke bhi maahi tosey
Munh na modna” All dance (slow dance)

”Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna” Sanskaar starts humming.

”Chhuteya na chhoote mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na” After a twirl, Ragini moves back and leaves.

Laksh also leaves.

”Bolna maahi bol na (bol na)
Bolna maahi bol na (mahi bol na)
Hmm… aa…” The couples finish dancing.

“It was so embarrassing while dancing with Laksh.” Ragini thinks.

“Ragini, did you enjoy?” Jai asks and seemed a little happy.

Ragini looked up and saw Rakesh fuming.

Ragini nods no.

“Kyu?” Jai asks.

“Because you weren’t there.” Ragini says.

“Ragini… Just wait till I grow tall and then I can dance with you.” Jai says.

Ragini smiles and nods okay.

“You can’t be with Ragini! Look at your age and her age.” Rakesh says in a angry tone.

“Why? Why not? She’s 19 and I’m 10 and you’re 28. So if I’m too young then you’re too old!” Jai says which makes Rakesh angrier.

“I’m only 9 years older than her.” Rakesh says.

“And I’m 9 years younger!.” Jai says.

Abhay walks there.

“And I’m 6 years younger.” Abhay says.

“But your chance is never coming in a hundreds and millions of years!” Jai says.

“You’re even shorter than me, so what are you on?” Abhay says.

“So what? Ragini will wait for me.” Jai says.

Ragini smiles and looks around, she sees the Maheshwari family and Gadodia family looking at her. She feels a little uncomfortable.
Laksh’s Pov:
While dancing, Ragini didn’t even look at me for… She didn’t even glance at me! How ruthless! Now by looking at them, it looks like a perfect family. Ragini, with her husband and two sons. But I wish I was there…

Wait, what did I just say? I wish I was there? Am I mad?

But no, I’m not the only one because my family and Gadodia family are staring at her. Like come on, give her some privacy.

After a while, I decided to talk to her so I went forward. Well, she never mentioned she is going to break our friendship. I could feel how uncomfortable she is when they all look at her.

I finally stood behind her, the little boy looked at me.

“Thank you for dancing with me.” I finally mummers.

Am I serious? Did I just say thank you for dancing? Ugh. But she turned and looked at me.

It felt so nice looking at her, loads of questions were running through her mind I guess. I was about to say something…

But Chachi ruined it all, she came and handed me Ayaan.

“Laksh, take care of Ayaan for a bit, I’ll be back.” Chachi said and fixed her saree.

Is she serious, out of all them family members she handed me Ayaan? I could see a confused look on Ragini’s face.

Wait, she thinks Ayaan is my son. He isn’t.

“Your son is cute.” The man said.

“Thank you but he isn’t my son.” I says.

Ragini looked up at me.

“Then who’s is it?” The cute 10 year old (I guess) boy asked.

“He’s my brothers son.” I said.

“Oh.” The boy sighed.

Ragini was giving me the confused looks, oh yeah, she doesn’t know that me and Swara didn’t get married.

But why did Chachi hand me Ayaan? That’s worth thinking, I need to ask he soon.

End of Pov…
Ragini’s Pov:
Ayaan? And he’s not Laksh’s child? He’s Sanskaar’s? There are a lot of questions popping in my mind. I don’t know how to gain answers.

I felt so uncomfortable with them looking at me but Ayaan is cute.

“Did you name him?” A question just slipped out.

Laksh nodded no.

“Swara did.” He said.

Just then Leela comes there.

“Are you all ready to leave?” She asked.

We all nodded yes.

“Okay, meet us outside in 5 minuets.” She said and leaves.

We all nodded, I felt like holding Ayaan but couldn’t. Sujata Chachi came back and took Ayaan from Laksh.

“Ragini, Chalein?” Jai asks.

I nodded yes.

“Rakesh Chachu, let’s go.” Abhay says.

Rakshas nodded and walked out with Abhay. It was just me and Jai left here.

“It’s been ages since I saw you… How have you been?” Laksh broke the silence.

“I have been fine.” I said.

“Ragini, I’m hungry.” Jai said.

I looked at him and smiled.

“We will go to eat in restaurant.” I said to him.

He got happy, Laksh was confused so I told him.

“This is Jai.” I said.

“Hi Jai.” Laksh said.

“Hi….” Jai obviously wanted to know his name.

“Laksh.” He said.

“Hi Laksh, it was nice to meet you.” Jai said.

I smiled, but I couldn’t face Shomi Maa, Baba, Annapurna Aunty, Durga Uncle, Swara, Sanskaar, Sujata Chachi, Ram Chachu, Uttra and Ayaan.

I guess Jai has a competition.

“Jai, I’ll come in 2 minuets.” I said.

“No, I’m coming with you.” Jai said,

I then nodded.

“So, you seem to be happy without us?” Laksh asked.

Of course no, I wanted my family back but Leela, Rajbeer, Abhay and Jai accepted me as their family member, it was so nice of them. But Jai had a different feeling towards me.

“I did miss some of you but got used to live without you all.” I said with a faint smile.

“You know each other?” Jai asked.

Me and Laksh both nodded yes.

“So, have you got married…?” Laksh asked sounding desperate.

I nodded no and he looked relieved.

“But she’s taken.” Jai said.

Laksh then looked at him.

“By who?” Laksh asked.

“By Me, she is my Ragini.” Jai said and hugged me.

Laksh chuckled and managed to control his laughter. Jai glared at him.

“Chalein?” I said.

Jai nodded yes and we left. I left without saying ‘Hi or hello’ to any of the family member.

End of Pov…
Swara’s Pov:
My sister left without even talking to me… She didn’t even talk to Maa and Baba. I wonder what she must’ve said to Laksh. And who were those people?

I couldn’t help myself and approached Laksh, he turned around and saw me.

“How is Ragini? Why isn’t she talking to us? Is she even Ragini?” I asked worriedly.

But all that came out of Laksh’s mouth was calm down.

Is he serious? Yaha mein parishaan hoon and he’s like calm down.

I glared at him.

“She said she’s been okay… and that she has got used to living without us… She is also taken.” Laksh said.

I was surprised, Ragini didn’t miss us at all? She got used to stay without us? No way, she’s lying… She couldn’t have not missed us.

“Taken?” I remembered and asked.

“Yes, by Jai.” Laksh pouts.

“Jai? Who’s Jai?” I thought.

Laksh then walked away and I was standing and thinking.

End of Pov…
Sanskaar’s Pov:
I didn’t even get to say sorry to her, she left all of a sudden and she’s taken? By Jai? Who is he?

I know I’m being nosy and I overheard but she didn’t even miss us?

I don’t believe this… Ragini has always and will always love Laksh. She can never think of anyone else to be her Mr.

I walked besides Swara and touched her shoulder, she turned instantly and looked at me.

“Swara, don’t worry, Ragini needs time.” I assured.

Swara nodded and hugged me. I hugged her back but our hug was broken by Mr Ayaan Sanskaar Maheshwari. I sighed.

End of Pov…

Swara smiled while Sanskaar sighed.

Train station:

Swara and Sanskaar reached the train station.

“Let’s ask the conductor… He might tell us if Ragini traveled or not.” Swara says.

Sanskaar nods okay and both head towards the ticket office.

“Sorry Ma’am, the ticket counter is closed today.” The man says.

“I just wanted to ask if Ragini traveled from here yesterday or not…” Swara says.

“Sorry Ma’am, I can’t give that information.” The man says.

“Please, it’s important for us to find her. She actually went missing and we need to find out what happened.” Sanskaar says.

“Sorry sir, we cannot give out personal details, this is against our system.” The man says.

“Please.” Swara requests.

The man thinks and nods okay. Swara and Sanskaar smile.

“What’s her name?” The man ask.

“Ragini, Ragini Gadodia.” Swara says.

“She left yesterday.” Sanskaar says.

The man types in and searches.

“Sorry, I can’t find any Ragini Gadodia in our system.” The man says.

“Are you sure?” Swara asks.

“Yes, there is no Ragini Gadodia that took a train yesterday.” The man says.

Swara and Sanskaar look on sadly.

They leave and the conductor presses something.

Swara and Sanskaar then come out of the train station and start thinking.

“Where can Ragini go?” Swara asks.

“We will find her soon.” Sanskaar assures.

Swara smiles at him and nods okay.

Swara walks forward but trips into Sanskaars chest, Sanskaar looks on.

She then composes herself.

“Sorry…” Swara says.

“No… It’s okay…” Sanskaar says.

Swara faint smiles, then both sit in the car.

End of Flashback.

Swara closes the album and smiles.

“I wish at that time you confessed your love earlier… I would’ve thought about it and accepted it… If I hadn’t tripped that day, then Sanskaar wouldn’t have realised his feelings…” Swara says and faint smiles.

Episode ends.

Precap: SwaSan special with maybe a little bit of Ayaan, Ragini, Jai and Laksh…?
Rajbeer Suryavanshi – Gaurav Khanna.

Leela Rajbeer Suryavanshi – Shefali Sharma

Rakesh Suryavanshi – Rohit Bhardwaj

Jai Rajbeer Suryavanshi – Shivansh Kotia.

Abhay Rajbeer Suryavanshi – Gautam Ahuja.
Do comment to tell me how you find this FF and what I need to improve on… ?

The next episode will maybe delayed…?

Keep smiling, take care and stay blessed ?

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  1. whoa! such a big one love this chappy

    1. Thank you Monica…?

  2. Hi Didi how r u

    1. Hey Shri, I’m alright, what about you?

  3. Mica

    ROFL…..,,, Laksh and DP ????????? seriously i’m rolling on the floor laughing..
    Laksh,!!!!!!even after saw ragini, you still thinking about your silly competition with your papa ?….*hit laksh’ head with hammer
    and those damn silly ppl Jai and Rakesh.. omg…..
    but at the end, im blushing myself thinking about swasan love story.. aaawwww..
    love it soo much Halima !! you rocked i shocked..

    1. Thank you Mica…??
      I’m glad you love it

  4. Awesome

    1. Thank you Shagun…?

    1. Thank you Divya…?

  5. Love it dear. Really awesome . Update soon

    1. Thank you Anjali…?

    1. Thank you Ragz_Teju…?

  6. Superb episide!!!!lh n dp scenes were helarious!!!!????…awww!!!!lovedraglak …swasan scenes were awesome!!!!waitng for more raglak momentsss!!!!keep rockng n stay blessed dear???

    1. Thank you Fairy…??

  7. awesome

    1. Thank you Ashly…?

  8. Vyshu10

    nice….loved d dance sequence…It was funny imaganing Dp dancing. Very excited for next part…swasan special

    1. Thank you Vyshu…?

  9. Snehahari

    jai so cute

    1. Thank you for reading and commenting Snehari…?

  10. loved it love ragini and jai cute bond hate rakshas

    1. Thank you Lisa…?
      I’m glad you loved it.

  11. Wow loved it

    1. Thank you Ashnoor…?
      I’m glad you loved it.

  12. Fats

    Great update Halima. Lol DP and Laksh were really funny like always. It’s not always we get it to read DP jealous of Laksh being a ladies man ?. And aww, I loved the dance scene ❤️. RagLak dancing with each other was pure bliss. And lol I’m glad Jai doesn’t mind Laksh and he gave him permission to dance with Raginj. Can’t wait to read more ?

    1. Thank you Fats…?
      I’m glad you loved it and are looking forward to read more…?

  13. Akshata

    DP, Laksh, Rakesh and Jai all are belongs to same planet. how funny they are. at one side father and son’s competition and other side 10 yrs child and 28 yrs adult are fighting for rags. my poor rags doesnt know how to react. but i loved Jai he is so cute. waiting for raglak’s moments. awesome update.

    1. Thank you Akshata…?
      I’m glad they entertain you…?

  14. Raglak scenes are nice

    1. Thank you Lovely…?

  15. _Angel_

    This was
    Mind blowing
    And much more
    Loved dp and laksh’s comic scenes ??
    Loved raglak basically loved all of it
    (Lol I knw ur waiting for my ff and it’s really a pleasure knowing that u wait for my ff but dnt worry I won’t keep U waiting for long I’ll try and upload it soon)

    1. Thank you Angel…?
      I’m glad you liked it.

    1. Thank you Jannatul…?

  16. Superb superb superb episode

    1. Thank you Ammu…?

  17. Rasha

    I enjoyed the dp & laksh funny fight with jealous lol it’s awesome & after longback of ragini arrival , 2mnths of searching her but he is thinking about dp unbelievabe man he was.. jai & rakesh fight was more spicy to the fun btw abhay few scene peeking.. I most loved is jai, he is so cute & jai rag bond is amazing really am feeling that more than laksh jai will b perfect for our rag how sweet & cutely he speaking, anskering, handling r protecting rag from everyone.. jai is best for rag..
    entirely I very much enjoyed dear..

    1. Thank you Rasha…?
      I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  18. Awesome….lak-dp scence was superb
    Swasan wow

    1. Thank you SwaSan…?

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    1. Thank you Dharani…?

  20. Hemalattha

    awesome.ap and dp scene are super.

    1. Thank you Hemalattha…?

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