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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini-Jag ghoomeya thare jaisa na koyi – Shot 2 Part-2
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Swaragini-Jag ghoomeya thare jaisa na koyi – Shot 2 Part-2

Aditi.AyanshBy Aditi.AyanshJune 13, 201760 Comments6 Mins Read
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Thank u so much everyone ..thanx a lot for all ur lovely comments but sry i could not reply all of them but don’t wry i’ll now sit and reply to all of u…and from nxt shot i’ll not be late in replying everyone..so take cr…love u all..and guys my REAL name is A.B.Gopika pet name Lachu and nick name Aditi…well till we meet nxt time keep smiling keep caring..and Aadya a big thank u to u one more time its all becoz of u doll…..and guys if u ever want to talk just sent me a message ..and never hesitate…Tk cr everyone
Love
Adi 🙂

Nxt day.
Its morning.
Ragini gets up as the sun rays are disturbing her sleep.
Ragini: who drew the curtains ..
Laksh: i did..good morning.
Ragini: wat the hell..subhah subhah aa gaya dimaak kharaab karna
Laksh: kiska?
Ragini: mera
Laksh: tumhe dimaak bhi hain..donkey.
Ragini gets up
Ragini: donkey kisko bola?
Laksh: yh but wen i called ur real name u got up..so fast.
Ragini curses herself..
Ragini: go away
Laksh: on my way.
Ragini: what is ur problem
Laksh: what is my problem like u are all normal.
Ragini: i am normal.
Laksh: thts wat all mad people say
Ragini: i knw but…what i am mad…u r mad buffon.
Laksh: really…
He looks at here cutely
Ragini: i wasn’t praising you
Ragini is about to go laksh holds her hand.
Ragini: how dare u
Laksh: i just holded ur hand i didnt asked u to marry me ook.
Ragini becomes calm.
Laksh: why r u fi8ing with me
Ragini turns to the other side
Laksh: u don’t like me?….
Ragini doesn’t say anything
Laksh: or u simply afraid
Ragini looks at him
Laksh: r u afraid because ur Mishtu is nw my Mishtu?
Ragini looks on
Laksh: r u afraid like everyone leaves u ur Mishtu will also leave u
Ragini stays silent
Laksh: r u afraid of tht Ragini?
Ragini doesn’t say anything.
Laksh: speak up Ragini.
Ragini nodes her head in yes.
Laksh: oho..Ragini why do u even think like tht do u think ur Mishtu will leave u for me?
Ragini again nodes her head in yes.

Laksh: don’t u even think tht she is never going to leave u..and y hi knw i am very handsome and all but still
Ragini smiles a little
Laksh: wow…u look like an angel while smiling…
Ragini smiles even brighter
Laksh: oh my god am i dreaming.
Ragini: no u r not..or do u want me to pinch u
Laksh: pls go on..becoz i knw u cant never talk to me tht sweetly
Ragini: sry..
Laksh: pls My Mishtu’s Laado don’t give me a heart attack like this
Ragini smiles again.
Laksh: hey i knw its already very late still..hey do u wanna build a snow man???
Ragini:what…
Laksh: sry this is Stupid Lucky…waise haven’t u watched Frozen?
Ragini: no
Laksh: oh dr i feel so sorry for u ..u have not seen this film ..hmmm well nope no problem we can watch it today..by the way u can be my friend ok.
Ragini: what..but.
Laksh leaves.
Laksh: yh yh now don’t start thanking me …
Laksh goes.

Ragini stands there and smiles
Mishti comes there.
Mishti: Good morning Laado.
Ragini smiles
Mishti: what happened to u Laado..all these suddenly ..u r smiling and today u r not going to office.
Ragini; i am not going to office?..who said that?
Mishti: Lucky…now don’t go and fi8 with him
Ragini: ok Mishtu..i am not going
Mishti: what!!! Laado u r not going to office? U r taking off today
Ragini: who is taking off..i am bunking office today.
Ragini goes to bathroom singing.
Mishti stands there with shock.
Mishti: Laado..thank u Lucky.
Mishti goes to kitchen and sees Laksh toasting bread.
Mishti goes and hugs him her tears wet his shirt
Mishti: Thank u Lucky becoz of u i saw my Ladoo just like she was.
Laksh: Mishtu now don’t embarrass me..
Laksh try to make face.
Mishti: pagal..
Ragini sees them and smile..
Laksh: see Mishtu ur Laado is burning with jealousy.
Mishti; oh i can see that
Ragini: stop it both of u..so come on get ready we r going for a small outing or should i leave both of u here?
Laksh and Mishti; NO
Ragini: gud then get ready fast.
They all get ready.
Ragini drives with Mishti beside her and Laksh seats at back.

They first go to beach..they enjoy themself..
They have lunch in a restaurant
Mishti: Laado..i have a friend here..i’ll meet her and will straight away come home.
Laksh: wow Mishtu ur friend lives here in this restaurant ?
Mishti: thts a very bad joke Lucky.
Ragini: tk cr Mishtu..
Mishti goes.
Laksh: so its just u and me
Ragini: and fun!!!
They hang out together…
They enjoys the day.
Ragini: Ice ream Ice cream…
Laksh: which flavour..
Ragini ; make me an offer.
Laksh and Ragini have ice reams…
They reach home late.
Mishti stands and the door and glares them.
Mishti: u both forgot ur watches ri8
Ragini and Laksh looks at their watch.
Laksh: god 11 pm
Mishti: sry did u say smthing?
Both shook their head in no.
Laksh: stay behind me my Mishtu’s Laado i’ll handle this.
Ragini: don’t u bother.
Laksh; what?
Ragini: Mishti woh….
Ragini feels dizzy and she falls down.
Laksh; oh my god Mishtu..Laado.
Mishti: very nice acting Laado..now both of u stop ur drama and come in..
Mishti goes..
Ragini opens one eye and sees..
And later opens her eyes.
Laksh; awe..u r such a bad actor…yuck..
Ragini hits his head.
Mishti: had food?
Laksh: Mishtu don’t bother we had dinner…what abt u?
Mishtu: i really don’t bother Lucky i had my dinner and there is nothing here for u guys to EAT ..
Mishti goes to sleep.
Ragini: Thank u so much Lucky i had some real fun today after many days.
Laksh: Lucky is for my Mishtu gf…for a girl like u its Laksh’s like Laado’s Laksh
Ragini laughs…
Ragini; tht was a bad one..
Laksh: i really don’t think so..
Ragini: good ni8..and give ome rest to ur so called brain.
Laksh: yh u don’t have one ri8
Ragini goes to beat him but slips and fall on him.
Ragini tries to get up.
Laksh: wow..
Ragini looks at him.
Laksh: what r u looking?
Ragini : u said wow
Laksh: wat…brainless girl i said awe…not wow…get up u r very fat..burn ur fat.
Ragini: what i am fat..acha..
she pushes him down with her body on his.
Ragini: now hw r u feeling?
Laksh: heaven!!!
Ragini: u r unbelievable
Ragini gets up and go..
Laksh: believe me Ragini….
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
Days pass on Raglak become good friends. Ragini started smiling again..Mishti was happy Laksh was with both of them..until tht day everything was perfect but then Laksh asked Ragini…..
…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Precap; what might have Laksh asked Ragini any guesses?
Nxt update will be on Thursday guys stay tunned and drop ur valuable comments …

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    60 Comments

    1. Jayanti on June 13, 2017 11:47 pm

      The episode was awesome choti….raglak cute fight…ragini insecurity and laksh clearing it…ragini such a bad actor…haha…can’t imagine that now….next part soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 7:44 am

        Thank u so much Jayu di !!! ???? love u di 🙂

    2. Sreevijayan on June 14, 2017 12:02 am

      Nice update dr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 7:45 am

        Thank u so much Sree chechi 🙂

    3. IQRA222 on June 14, 2017 12:24 am

      adi di it was simply superb loved it soo much
      finally the tom eand jerry are friends
      lucky is so sweet and cute love him!!
      and their moments in the end were superb too
      loved all of them
      waiting for the next part
      take care
      keep smiling and writing
      love you soo much!!! <3 <3
      bye bye

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 7:59 am

        hey iqu dr thank u so much for this beautiful comment yh finally tom and jerry are friends!!…take cr sweety and keep smiling keep reading..dr ..love u soooo much <3<3<3…bye bye sweethearrt 🙂 ?

    4. CrazygirlS.P on June 14, 2017 12:40 am

      Fabulous dear, I love it❤️❤️❤️

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 8:00 am

        Sam…thank u so much dr 🙂 ❤️️

    5. Sunny on June 14, 2017 5:14 am

      Amazing di. Keep going. Loved their nok jhok. It was really cute. Cant wait for Thursday. Does he ask to be friends?
      U like frozen? I love it. But I love beauty and the beast more

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 8:05 am

        Hi Sunny dr…thank u and yh good guess..well i watch most of the Disney Pixer movies ..last one i saw was zootopia GOD..loved it to the core of my heart 🙂

    6. nymisha281 on June 14, 2017 9:33 am

      Awesome dear….loved it

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 9:42 am

        Thank u so much dr Nymisha 🙂

    7. Megha on June 14, 2017 10:06 am

      Amazing update dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:38 pm

        Thank u so much Megha di 🙂

    8. avika on June 14, 2017 10:20 am

      superrrrr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:42 pm

        Thank u so much avika di 🙂

    9. asra on June 14, 2017 11:16 am

      awesome adi dear….loved it alot…ohh laksh u say our ragu s bad actor…u don’t know about her….adi tell him about our ragu…he ask about her change behaviour….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:45 pm

        Thank u so much Asra di…yh humari Ragu good actor hain…aur aapko toh pata hi haina..meri har ff mein kuch toh honga..suspense toh..intezaar karo…love u lots di tk cr 🙂

    10. Ammy on June 14, 2017 11:26 am

      awesome dr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:45 pm

        Thank u so much Ammy dr 🙂

    11. Rehna on June 14, 2017 12:40 pm

      Superb dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:46 pm

        Thank u sooo much Rehna di 🙂

    12. Bela on June 14, 2017 12:53 pm

      Kya poocha Lakshya ne? Kya????? CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!

      Amazing part???

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:46 pm

        Thank u so much Bela di…thanx a lot 🙂

    13. aleeza on June 14, 2017 4:40 pm

      Amazing

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:49 pm

        Thank u so much aleeza 🙂

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:55 pm

        sry Aleeza di…..

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:55 pm

        🙂

    14. Jiyani on June 14, 2017 4:52 pm

      Awesome and cute Raglak

    15. Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 4:56 pm

      Thank u so much Jiyani di 🙂

    16. Aamy on June 14, 2017 5:16 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 7:49 am

        Thank u so much Aamy di 🙂

    17. Monu on June 14, 2017 7:11 pm

      Superb episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 7:50 am

        Thank u so much Monu di 🙂

    18. Ammu on June 14, 2017 9:34 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak fighting scenes are superb. Precap is interesting and eagerly waiting for next episode. Please post next part ASAP

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 7:51 am

        Thank u so much Ammu di..will update nxt part today tk cr di.. 🙂

    19. Malu on June 15, 2017 3:48 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 5:57 pm

        Thank u so much Malu di 🙂

    20. Elizebathlovely on June 15, 2017 4:30 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 5:59 pm

        Thank u so much Elizebathlovely 🙂

    21. Soumya on June 15, 2017 5:12 pm

      Simply superb di…post next soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 6:01 pm

        Thank u so much Soumya di 🙂

    22. Arjuna on June 15, 2017 5:32 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 6:02 pm

        Thank u so much Arjuna di 🙂

    23. Laashya on June 15, 2017 6:12 pm

      Wonderful episode and what happened next? Can’t wait for next

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 16, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thank u so much Laashya di 🙂

    24. Vennila on June 15, 2017 7:32 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 16, 2017 1:47 pm

        Thank u so much Vennila di 🙂

    25. Anju on June 15, 2017 7:34 pm

      Interesting episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 16, 2017 1:48 pm

        Thank u so much Anju di 🙂

    26. Monisha on June 15, 2017 8:50 pm

      Superb dr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 16, 2017 2:30 pm

        Thank u so much Monisha di 🙂

    27. Pearly on June 15, 2017 9:41 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 16, 2017 2:44 pm

        Thank u so much Pearly di 🙂

    28. Vini on June 15, 2017 9:43 pm

      Good going

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 16, 2017 2:59 pm

        Thank u so much Vini di 🙂

    29. hemalattha on June 17, 2017 10:49 pm

      Amazing

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 19, 2017 1:58 pm

        Thank u so much Hemalattha di 🙂

    30. jazzy on June 21, 2017 2:37 pm

      superbb

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:36 am

        Thank u so much Jazzy di 🙂

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