Swaragini “I’m yours” (chap38….coldness of wintery night )

Mera Sham Salona Shah Piya
Humain Maar Gayi Teri Chah Piya
Kabhi Jaro’n Mai Zehar Utar Liya
Kabi Labo’n K Pechay Marliya
Is Dar Say Kay Dukh Ki Shidat Main
Kahin Nikal Na Jaye Ahh Piya
Mera Shaam Salona Shah Piya
Humain Maar Gayi Teri Chah Piya
Humain Jungal Jungal Bhatka Do
Humain Suli Suli Latka Do
Jo G Say Chaho Yaar Karo
Hum Parh Jo Gaye Teri Rah Piya
Mera Shaam Salona Shah Piya
Humain Maar Gayi Teri Chah Piya

Recap:raglak got fight and swasan sung a song.

Swasan at swara’s apartment:
Swara:”lets celebrate this triumph” Sanskar confused:”which triumph?”
Swara is moving here and there and her every action shows her happiness of heart.:”triumph to complete my project! You don’t understand, how am I feel!! Ufff finaly im free… Free…free” she’s jumping on the sofa like flying butterfly and sanskar is smiling to see her childish behaviour.

Sanskar:”yeah right! We’ll go for long drive first then we eat ice cream, visit beach etc etc! Full night hanging out done?” Swara hugs her:”wowww!!
Sanskar you’re so good naa!!” Sanskar:”I’m good and you also good because you’ll pay the bill every where” swara hits her and smiles:”ok! Done! For my friend!” Both smile to see each others and his eyes are replete with love, but she cant bear the heat of his love, so she downs her eyes with shyness (swara what’s wrong with you, you’re not here to play love’s hide and seek, your mission is complete, sanskar is ready to meet his parents, ill leave that house before sanskar’s arriving at Kolkata! So you should control yourself).

She composed herself and takes out the keys of car.:”ill drive tonight” Sanskar:”it means I’ll gonna die soon” he teases her but her face’s color suddenly changed:”what’s wrong with you sanskar! Please don’t say again” Sanskar smiles to see her concern for him. Swara hits him:”you’re smiling idiot! I’ll not talk to you, and this time, you’ve to charge penalty”

Sanskar smiles and hold her hand to drag her to the door:”what type of penalty my dear?” Swara:”tonight is my day, uppss my night, so you’ve to do what I’ll say to you” swara locked the door and holds his arm. They’re happily walking towards the lift. Sanskar:(in his heart)”I wish I can hold your smile in my fist and keep it in my dairy like a rose and when we’ll get old, I’ll open that diary to recall your smile, but just a minute! I’m gonna give you lots of smile in future.” Swara shakes his shoulder:”what are you thinking?” Sanskar:”Nothing Shona! Lets go” Swara takes the driving seat and as usual she’s doing rush driving while Sanskar is screaming:”you’re scarring me Shona! Slow the speed” Swara:”no way!!!! This is my night, my rules…” She hoots and switch on the music loud music. And she also singing with Akon. She stops the car next to ice cream parlor. Swara orders:”three spoon, Belgium chocolate, two spoon tooti fruity, one spoon vanilla, one spoon pineapple and two spoon chocolate chip ice cream bowl, (she turns to sanskar)what will you take?” Sanskar looks her with open mouth:”in this winter, you’re going to ice cream with 1..2..(he counts the spoon)9 spoons of ice creams and who’s eat these all flavour in one bowl?” Sanskar:”are you gonna order or not?” Sanskar raise his hand:”ok! Two spoon pistachio” waiter takes orders and leave. Sanskar:”you look so pretty!” Swara:”what do you want?” Sanskar scabies his ear with embarrassment. Waiter brings out their order and she mixes all flavor,, Sanskar:”what thing is you?” Swara:”im Shona!!” She gives her wide smile and both laugh. Sanskar:”yar please dont eat all ice cream, it already very cold and you’re eating this complete ice cream bowl, you can get flow” SwarA:”nothing will happen dear! Dont worry”, she’s eating ice cream and talking continuously while Sanskar is forget to eat his ice cream, just looking her.

Raglak at room:
Ragini gets worried about laksh. She’s trying his number many times but it still switch off. Mid of night, he comes at home. He avoids eye contact with her, she wanna ask her but doesn’t find any courage in her. Laksh takes his pillow to go outside while Ragini stops him:”why are you going outside the room?” Laksh in cold tone:”you need to work whole night for your exhibition, so my presence will disturb you” Ragini:”you sleep in your room, im going to workshop, you stay here” Laksh gives her strong look and shuts the door while ragini goes to workshop. She cant concentrate on her work because of laksh’s behaviour, because as an artist, her work is depend on her mood, she holds the brush and takes black color, and purposelessly paint on canvas. She recalls all the moments with laksh, tears are rolling down from her eyes and her canvas convey her state of heart. Shade of are gulp down light of her happiness. Black color is covering the white part of canvas but she continuously spread this color on canvas. At the end, she throws it and falls on the floor. She bend down the knees and keeps her head on her knees. And starts weeping slowly slowly, her moaning voice are resemble with the muse of iktara! Which echoes in the cliff of mountains! When first drop of rain falls on the top of cliff but coldness of peak turns this into fog. This fog is in her heart which turns into sighs. While laksh cant sleep, he takes side many times with restlessness. But he doesn’t find peace at any side of bed. He’s not crying, he just so much sad and as he recalls their moments, he observed that every time, he came to her but she gave only importance to her work and home. Laksh:”come Ragini! Please, try to understand! What I want from you? I gave you complete space, I didn’t restrict you from anything, but for this? I just want your time? Is it a big deal for you? I dont need your cooked food or fulfilled other responsibilities, I want your time” he’s rough and tough man, but ragini makes him cry.

Sweet winter breeze turns into cold shivering wind which can freeze the emotions but heat of theirs tears aren’t let them realize the cold winter between them. Their sighs are making fog in the airs which absorb their tears and give a cold ice touch to theirs heart.

Swasan at the beach:
Swara is running on the shore with sweet exclamation. Her frock is flowing with wind and her hairs are playing with fireflies of love. While Sanskar’s eyes are following her. He bent his arms and looks her like he’s sight counters her from the influence of evil eyes.

Swara comes to him and holds his hand and drags towards the waves of sea. Waves of ocean are wetting their feet and they feel the sweet coldness of winter. Suddenly it start slow raining.. And it likes that god is shower blessing upon them. Swara:”woww!! I love rain!” And she sneezes. Sanskar:”ohhh!! Finally you got flow, come lets go Shona! You’ll get ill”
Swara:”noo way… ” she runs away from him, amc sanskar follows her.:”Shona! You already eat lots of ice cream! You’re also wearing sleeveless frock, come here Shona!” Swara:”first Catch me” she makes a face to him and running continuously.

Sanskar runs behind her and holds her finally.:”finally! I catch you, now come home” Swara tries to free herself:”sanskar leave me naa! Look how beautiful this weather is!!” They’re wetting in the rain, and this rain isn’t that which falls from clouds, this rain is from the heart which irrigated their heart.

Sanskar pulls her toward him, her back is on his chest and his heartbeat is kisses to her back and she suddenly realized her position but he’s in the spell of love. He tighten her grip around her, she breathes heavily. Sanskar whispers in her ears:”Shona! I love you” She suddenly rotate and looks him with shock, spell is vanished in the airs due to his three magical words. Shona steps back but her hands are still in his hands, rain are increasing slowly slowly and now they’re complete wet but their heat of love isn’t let them realized the coldness of winter.
Shona jerks his hand but he doesn’t noticed it… She looks him with great shock.

Raglak room:
Ragini comes into room, laksh is still awakening but as he sees her to coming to room, he closes his eyes and pretend to sleep like. Ragini goes to her bed. Light is still on. She switches off the light, and the darkness of winter is scattered everywhere.
She looks laksh sadly and touch his face, a tear rolled down from her eye and absorb in his hairs. But suddenly she recalls his words and wipes her tears and give a strong look to herself. :”if you don’t understand me, then ill also not care about you” laksh who’s heart was melting because of her tears are freeze again because of her words. She leans down and closes her eyes but his words are still echoed in her ears. Both control the pain and takes place the coldness in theirs heart.

Swasan scene:
Swara looks him unbelievably… She steps back one by one.
Sanskar comes to her:”ill give you all happiness of my life Shona! Just help me to derive out from our pain! I’ll forget you all your pain, just be with me” he extends his hand to her.
Swara start clapping:”Bravo! Sanskar Maheshwari! Bravo!! Hatts off to you(she posture like salute) you come to me, friendship with me! Yeah you help me when I need someone, im grateful you for this” sanskar tries to hold her but she doesn’t allow him.
Swara continues:”you.. You’re married man sanskar! You already spoil that girl’s life! How selfish you’re! You’re proposing me!! Good!! And I’m such a fool who was thinking that you ve changed!!”

Sanskar:”Shona! try to understand! I don’t want this unwanted relationship! Dont worry naa! We’ll separate with mutual decision, ill divorce her then we’ll start new life” he comes close to her and tried to holds her hands. A deep layers of rage comes in her mind, her hand raises and touches his face hardly and slaps him.
Sanskar is shocked to see her reaction, she again slaps him and holds her collor:”for you, marriage will be joke! But not for me!!! I hate you Sanskar! I hate you! If you respect me, then never come in front of me”

Drops of rain are mingled with her tears! Precious pearls mixed with blessing of God and this mixture of bliss are bathing their face. Coldness of winter are spreading in swara’s heart while
Sanskar is freeze in his same state! His heart isn’t understand what happened to him, he’s just looking her untill she has disappeared from his eyes. Rain is still wetting him and his emotions are screaming in his heart but his tongue is freeze with her words.
Night is travelling along with winter with teary eyes to see four of them.

Credit to: Saba

85 comments

    • Kashis

      Hi rishi.. U have asked me about my ff (an angel is my love) in episode 10.. Do u find out the links? As after that I didn’t find ur comments so I shared my views with u here..

      • rishi

        Hey kashish.i was trying to find the page in which i asked the links and forgot about it due to exams! Yesterday took a long break from studies .wil surely read and let you know! Sorry for disappointing you.tc

    • Saba

      Hey rishi! I read your comment and you’re so sweet of you, you read my ff during exams! I dont know about extra sweet, but I was not sarcastic in my reply don’t worry! Yeah you also right im careless because! I’ll try my best In Shaa Allah to proofread ffs! And thanks dear to realize my mistake. I’m not taking you bad, because when you exhibit something, you’ve to face buyer criticism also! And I still say that im in learning stage, there’s lot of things I’ve to learn before to be a professional!!

  1. Seeba

    Superb…sanskar should realize d value of marriage..and pain of swara not shona…u r rocking…daily I am checking this page 4 ur ff..I never forgot to do this….one more thing ur new ff is also fantastic..u have more heights to reach…all d best friend..

    • Saba

      Hey seeba!! Your name is much similar to mine! Well thanks dear to like my both ff! Well sanskar and swara both are right in their place! And thanks dear! I’ve posted this in night, dont know why it takes so much time to upload

  2. rishi

    Do u mean scoop or spoon of icecream? I asked as if its spoon of icecream then its not a prob for swara.but if its scoop of icecream i would say she is the bukkad of the year hahahhaha no offence im a foodie too!

    • Saba

      Hey rishi! Thanks again for your concern, well this is scoop and these are not so big then fill the bucket, these will make a large bowl, at least I can eat ice cream in winter too! When I make swara’s character actually I reflect myself! Like when she said I eat palak paneeer with rice (actually I eat palak ghosht with rice) so there’s many similarities! If I write then definitely I’ve experienced! And one more thing, she’ll also pay to eat this big bowl!.
      I’m not mind! But you should be careful dear! And be thankful to god that im not short temper, otherwise it’ll be first case of online murder! Hahaha!!

  3. Lucky

    An outstanding and wonderful episode 🙂
    At starting its really cute scenes between swasan.. very tuff moment for raglak but i hope they will patch up soon..this slap i think he deserve it.. and saba pls don’t make swara leave maheswari house before sanskar’s arrival bcz now i think this is a time to sanskar to get to know that shona is swara.. i am sorry if i said anything wrong dear..
    Do you use Facebook saba?

    • Saba

      Hey lucky!! Thanks dear for being such a great supporter and friend! Yeah he’ll know this fact verrrrryyyy soon!! I’ll not tell exact episode because I don’t wanna spoil the suspense!
      Well dear swara will not leave the house because she doesn’t expect his arrival

      • Lucky

        ok and now i am excited to read next one thank you dear.. Can you pls give ur facebook name (if u don’t mind) ?

    • Saba

      Lucky! In previous episode of swasan I shared link of my fb! You can check well you can search me Saba Shiekh on fb, you’ll find same one poem(mera sham salona) on my timeline and cover photo of swasan hug photo

  4. Kashis

    This is what I call an episode.. Splendid.. Sanskar deserves the slap.. From swara’s point of view I can understand how difficult it would be for her to resist her emotions & deny his proposal by slapping him.. Coming to Raglak part!! What can I say.. Too immature to handle the situations.. Ego, desire come in between.. Miles to go before they cherish their marriage fully..
    Finally look I have commented here.. But definitely won’t comment in swasan.. Signing off…

    • Saba

      Hey Kashis!! You’re becoming such a devil! I think you’re gonna face multi personality disorder obviously!! And your second personality is sanskar of my ff(swasan) hahaha! Because he also doesn’t spare anyone who hurts him!! Now my ff is affecting your mind! But don’t worry dear! After few years In Shaa Allah ill become psychologist to treat you! Wait until ill become your therapist!! Hahaha ?

      • Kashis

        But I will spare u for sure.. As u r my friend.. And I don’t want to hurt you anytime.. I can never be a personality like sanskar of ur character of swasan. U know why as I value relations… What ever may be the case I can’t play with anybody’s life… 2nd thing is that first clear ur objective of life. U wanna be a writer or psychologist.. Then I may think about having multi personality disorder.. As of now I won’t. As future of urs is totally uncertain… Hi!hi!hi

    • Saba

      Hey Kashis! Dont be serious! Sorry dear if ihurt you I was just kidding! I know you value the relationships! I was just joking! And ill carry the psychology as my profession but writing is my passion, whatever career ill choose, I always become writer dear! Because its beyond the professional thing

      • Kashis

        You made me cry… I know that you are kidding.. Am I scared you so much that u told sorry… Dear we r friends yaar.. When u will understand my humor?? Don’t tell sorry…

    • Saba

      Dear I thought you felt bad because of me! I dont wanna hurt my friends! That’s a reason and I didn’t understand your humor but maybe ill be used to it don’t worry!!

  5. jo

    i knew dis……..
    truly speaking swara is playing wid sanksar’s emotions….
    when sanskar was in pain,he was alone…bt at time of swara whole family was standing wid her….
    sanskar behavior was very wrong wid swara and he has to pay for it…..
    bt dis time she is playing wid his emotions….
    there is no differences between swara and sanskar….she is doing same things wht sanskar did wid her….
    sanskar ne jo kiya gusse me kiya par swara ne jo kiya janbuj kar kiya….sanskar ne swara ko koi ummid nahi di thi par shona ne umid jagayi…dnt leave me sanksar and alll….
    agr wo sach me chahti toh k sanksar wapas ghar aaye ya iska pyar sach hota to swara shona bankar nahi swara bankar uski jindgi me aati aur usko uski galti ka ehsaas dilati…..
    she played game wid sanskar….

    • Saba

      Hey Jo!! Thanks to read my story so deeply!! But please dont spoil the suspense of my ff! Yeah this is actually what I planned to reveal in my further episode!
      But us ne yeh Jan bujh kar plan kar k nahi kiya! Haan unintentionally jab usko uski feelings pata chali to woh selfish ho gai tumhari baqi Ki baton k jawab mere next episodes main aa Jae ge thanks dear

  6. Shraddha

    What an episode saba!!!! Very well described. Both raglak and SwaSan parts awesome. Honestly I want SwaSan to unite but as in one of your episodes you had mentioned values bhi koi cheez hai. Very well written yaar. Keep going looking forward for upcoming chapters??

  7. ahana

    raglak is fighting….
    pls unite them soon
    n swasan also fighting…

    Swasan fight was expected
    i also expected swara will react like this… but she didn’t reveal her identity…

    from swara point of view she was correct n he deserve her slap.. how can he think marriage as joke . …
    he left her after marriage .. anyway feeling sad for sanskar he doesnot know truth…

  8. ahana

    pls reveal truth to sanskar .. i expected u will do it today bt it not happend..
    update next part soon …

  9. Wow!!!! Amazing epi saba…. superb.. bt sanskaar does nt knw shona is swara na?? Y is swara scolding sanskaar…?? She is acting as shona nly na… then wt??? Bt nw i think if sanskaar comes to knw abt swara as shona dhn vil he think that she came to mumbai to manipulate his mind.. so many questions are arising in me….

    • Saba

      Hey Daniela! First of all thanks dear to liking my ff! And secondly, I can understand sometimes, it’ll be difficult to understand the character
      Yeah dear! She’s acting as Shona you’re right, but when people get hyper, it’ll difficult to control their words, same case with swara! And wait for sanskar’s reaction! I know there’s many questions in your mind, but in my further episodes, you’ll get know everything

  10. bhuvi

    Good episode saba… Felt sorry for sanskar… But he deserves it… Enough saba now its time to patch both… Plz saba reveal swara Indentity to sanskar soon…

  11. hadi

    Fabulous saba no words to describe ur skills jani the reaction of swara is expected raglak fi8 is so sweet now I am eagerly waiting for sanky reaction after knowing swara identity ..
    Whenever I read ur ff I think that k kash next part bhi upload foran ho jaye but unfortunately we have to w8 for 24 hours to read the next part how unfair are u..:-D just kidding jani concentrate on ur exams

  12. Saba

    Hey rishi! You’re also write, sometimes it just becomes the stamp of society! But we carry many relationships for only show to the world!
    Hey hadi! Thanks dear! Yeah its unfair dear I know! But ff takes so much time to complete! You’ve to wait dear
    Thanks appu! Yeah hayathi it’s painful!
    Hey jyoti! I’m also with you, he deserves this slap to realize his mistake
    Thanks bhuvi! And dont worry dear, they’ll patch up sooooooo sooon!!
    Hey akalya rockstar! I got you on fb now and thanks dear!
    Thanks sravya Sri Thanks dear! I’m glad to see you as my supporter!!
    Hey trishika and ahana! He’ll know in next episode! Thanks dear
    Yeah nita its painful!
    Thanks deepa and fantasanta!
    Hey sharadha! Thanks alot dear! They’ll unite soon dear dont worry!yeah ahana! You also don’t worry its right time to come out from mist

  13. Saba

    Thanks dear devi!
    Thanks akku, sahasra and ruby! Thanks alot guys ! Yeah kusuma! They’ll unite soon dear! It’s not so much long as real track and if ill unite them at once, this will be unnatural dear! Please understand
    I also want them togather

  14. Tania

    Tight slap was the only thing he needed. But now he need love so much of love and care from his family and swara too.I love ur both ff, and I want to ask u a question… what do u wantto to become??
    I mean what profession u want to choose for urself and where r u from.
    Badly missing ur ff path from hate to love 🙁

    • Saba

      Hey Tania! Thanks alot dear! I’m agree with you for sanky’s condition! Well I wanna serve in psychology! But off course as I said! Whatever career I chose ill definitely become writer(even housewife too)

      • Tania

        That is really very good choice. And u also want to be a housewife this means that u love ur family a lot and ur career too and want to justify both the responsibility.
        It’s nice meeting u( talking to u)

  15. Sanskar… I can understand what he is going through right now.. But this time, it wasn’t Sanskaar’s fault. Damn his promises.! He should have told Shona that he has talked to his wife and they have decided for a mutual divorce. This guy has already gone through a lot. So has Swara. But this time it was her fault.

    She was the one who approached Sanskaar and not the other way round. She literally MADE him fall in love with her(though unintentionally). But still somewhere or the other she was aware that Sanskaar has fallen for Shona.

    Now after getting to know that Shona is Swara, if Sanskaar starts hating her for whatever she did to him, then I won’t blame him. He too is a human afterall.

    And Saba. Who are awesome.! Trully, really, honestly. There was another ff on Swasan which ended recently and I was really upset that it ended. I literally loved it. And then I found your ff.. Thanks a hell lot for continuing your ff so beautifully 🙂

    • Saba

      First of all abhi! Thanks alot to sink in the depth of my story! I’m agree with your every words, it means you’re going right!
      Sanskar is right on his place! But as a girl, she doesn’t wanna give him space! She’s in self pity dear! Well your confusion will clear in next episodes!! Keep in touch dear! Your comments worth for me!

  16. leku

    Saba dear frankly speaking I don’t have idea how to appreciate u dear!!!finally swara slapped sanskar!!!!swara each word (superb)!!!! Simply ur winter episode rockzzz!!! Coming to raglak part its really coldwar between their heart!!! Ragini is right but still she should respect laksh feelings also dear!!!(though career is important even family also)? and u asked in previous episode y I felt bad for sanskar being his fan just felt it dear!!!… Swara shouldn’t forgive him so easily ( plzz) n thank u for fabulous episode….then when wil u update next part 2mrw morg or night???

    • Kashis

      Hi leku… Its saba how will one day make me a patient dear.. Thanks u.. As u fulfilled my wish.. Till now ur comment is last.. Proud of u.. Hi-fi.. Leku… Saba I hate u from core… U know that…

    • Saba

      Hey leku! Thanks dear alot for your comment in last and one more thing, this time I’m boys side of my ff! Because I think this time girls are making mistakes ! Well you know everything!
      And leku, Kashis!! Give me a hi fi to this time because im testing your patience to give a gap of two days!! I’ll update my next episode after tomorrow of im yours! And wait long for swasan!! Hahaha

  17. sethooty

    Wow ..saba great i like that tight slap ys we expected this from her and he deserves it.swara’s behaviour and reaction was awesome., I loved the way he proposed her.( though he got a slap..haha ).it was mind blowing beach, rain ,situation was perfect.
    In her point of view, her husband proposed to other women, made their marriage as a joke, she should be react like this.but one thing I must say this time sanskar alone is not wrong swara is also a culprit na.bz she cheated him through her silent love, made him fall for her .we can say it happened unintentionally, BT she can feel his love from his eyes and affectionate hands and that hugs, .the ques is that then y did n’ t she kept a distance from him, y didn’t she avoid him..saba swara must justify this na..
    Wen sanskar comes to know about swara is shona..then , he may start hating her…my guess only..
    I just want to knw sanskar reaction….
    Again must say wonderful episode yaar…

    • Saba

      Hey sethooty!! Happy to see your comment, yeah she’ll be justified to do that! I’ll write an episode which clear all of your doubt and wait for his reaction dear! And thanks

  18. Hey frndz. ….hi Saba….sry fah d late cmnt….an awesum episode again. …i think i should search fah words in dictionary to cmnt ur ff…ur story line is unpredictable. ..its way too gud….so itz gr8 to c many cmnts in ua ff…so u’ve made an achievement of breaking d silence of so many silent readers ….n i juzt today came to know abt ur other ff “swasan a path hate to love” ..as der wer too many FFs on swaragini. .i stopped reading dem all frm 27th of nov n i just read urs n telly updates of d real swaragini serial. …n i itz juzt today wer i also came to kno abt d ff of kashis so i was reading dem frm chap 1.. n till today’s update….d other ff of urs is awesum again saba. .nd I’ve also snt a msg in fb frm d same name pretty pie…

    • Saba

      Hey priya! Thanks alot for your concern and love! I’m glad that there’s many silent readers start commenting! One more thing dear I didn’t receive any message on my fb! Go to link dear which I gave on previous episode

  19. Tania

    Is there anyone who knows that where is akshita reddy writer of ff( swaragini a new start)… from so many days she is not uploading new episodes
    I am waiting for her story’s next episode.

  20. sindhuja

    getting in the shoes of sanskar, he is correct… what swara is expecting him to do??? when he doesn’t know who swara really is and when he doesn’t love her and when he wants her, swara to be happy by releasing her from this loveless relationship… marriage is a divine relationship but it can’t be out of guilt r hatred… he also is a human being… when he fell apart, shona came to him and made him to feel better… yes… he did a sin by using swara to teach his father a lesson… but he repents for it… if swara loves him, then why she doesn’t understand these things… if she slapped him in the name swara, i agreed with her… in the name of shona, i was disappointed with her… her situation also is miserable but she can’t blame him only… why she didn’t ask answer from the elders too… i want swara to realise it soon… and repent for it… marriage is important but the person’s feeling is more important than it…. and by the way… it’s an amazing update… you brought the reality in the raglak fight… spending time is crucial… loved it… thumbs up…

    • Saba

      Hey sindhuja! first time I read your comment thanks to breaking your silent! You’re absolutely right! But you know what the problem of swara! She’s at the that level of self pity which was carried by Sanskar! She thinks that he did wrong with him, many things aren’t clear yet dear! You’ll clear all these in my further episode! Dont worry it’ll be justified

      • sindhuja

        true to say… i am not a regular reader due to some reasons… i read 4 to 5 updates continuously… i comment the last one i read… i hope now on wards you will see my comments… 😉

  21. Saba

    Hey deepshikha! Yeah there’s a really suspense there!
    Thanks surbhi! Thanks rupsikha! Bhavna! Dont worry they’ll unite soon!
    Hey guys! I’m taking one day leave from my both ff because of some issue! I hope you don’t mind sorry guys! In Shaa Allah ill upload my next ff tomorrow’s night thanks alot

  22. [email protected]

    Saba please update next part of ur both ff …..I’m eagerly waiting to read ur ff

  23. Shazia

    Assalamoalikum Saba u r grt yar.. Wow yr NYC ff… Fabulous mind blowing full of imagination etc etc…

    Keeeeppp writing dear

  24. Mansi

    Omg Saba !!!once again u nailed it i m just obssesed with ur ffs . I m simply waiting for ur ffs nd wen everything turns right . swasan nd raglak r just made for each other . ur imagination is beyond the heights . Keep it up nd All the best !!! for ur exams .;-)

  25. Saba

    Hey guys! Sorry dear for late update! Ridika! I’m not playing all you, I was just kidding with Kashis and leku! But actually I really had the work! So I didn’t time to update next! Well guys! There’s good news I’ve posted next episode! You’ll read soon and thanks alot dear

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