(Swaragini) hamari adhuri kahani episode 23

hot dazzlers…
kunj – I will not be able to attend fresher’s party yaar…
Karthik – are you kidding…
kunj – no I am serious actually my dadaji is shifting here… but suddenly he fell sick you know after mom and dad he is only one I can say as family.. so I am going to dadaji.. once dadaji becomes fine, I will be back with him…
Karthik – k we can understand but we are angry with u..
kunj – why, what happened?
dhruv(pouting) – why it bothers you..
Karthik (pouting) – we are not your family na.. we strangers right…
kunj – sorry guys.. I don’t want to hurt u.. I am just worried about dadaji…
soumya – kunj don’t be sorry, they are just kidding..
kunj – guys I thought you are angry with me..
Karthik – how can we be angry with you…
shradda – k guys lets have a group hug don’t know how much time it takes for kunj to come back…
they have a group…

kunj (teasingly) – but before I return Karthik you should make riya forgives you and accepts you
Karthik (without realising) – Yes yaar I can’t stay long with the guilt of hurting my life…
all are in shock by hearing what Karthik just said.. swara and ragini just comes their
swara (shouts) – am I dreaming.. ragu just pinch me bai just reffered riya as his life…
Karthik (realises what he said) – its nothing like that it just slipped out of my mouth..
ragini – bai your heart agrees at this that is why it slipped out of your mouth… and bai their is nothing wrong in admitting that you started feeling for riya…
swara – now I am definitely dreaming ragu you are talking about heart and feelings..
ragini – swara I am just saying casually.. soumya – but what ragini said is true..
kunj – wow I will miss all these guys…
ragini – why you will miss…
dhruv – ragini is going to his dadaji’s place…
Karthik – kunj these all are talking rubbish.. their is nothing like that.. if something like that happens I will say to you first…
shradda (teasingly) – that means you are expecting something like that happens..
Karthik – stop it guys.. shona, ragu go to your classes if classes are not their then go to library…
swara – why bai it seems you are in hurry.. going to meet riya..
Karthik – shona…
swara – k sorry..

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ragini – kunj you are going..
kunj -ha ragini
ragini – I will miss you.. know we are not too close but you are my frnd and the only person I trust in this clg after Swara, bai and riya.. to be honest you are my first frnd I made by my self.. even riya is my frnd because of swara..
kunj – ragini i will also miss you a lot.. but don’t worry I will be soon back.. by the way you want to share something.. you messaged me to meet you…
ragini – actually, rajat tried to misbehave with me..
kunj(angry) – what?? and you are saying me know I will not leave that moron..
ragini – please don’t be angry at that time Sanskar saved me.. and see now I am fine..
kunj – hmm be careful ragini..
ragini – now I am afraid because i complained against rajat to princi and he told he will take action against rajat.. and if bai comes to know he will again fight with rajat that is why I am sharing this with you…
kunj – you done right don’t take tension and I will make Karthik understand… ragini thanks for trusting me and sharing with me…
ragini – of course we are frnds right how can I not trust you…
kunj and ragini have a friendly hug..
which was seen by Laksh who was burning in jealously because of their closeness…

Laksh pov..
is she out of her mind.. what is the need to hug him.. if they are only frnds they can talk normally why they are hugging..and why I am getting effected…lucky what is happening to you… you are the dare devil… everyone in the clg want to be your frnd and you are worrying about mystery girl.. you had decided right she will be only up to letters not more than that… don’t get emotionally attached to her…

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in princi cabin…
rajat is present along with Sanskar…
Sanskar – sir you had called me..
princi – ha Sanskar.. I actually called you to know the truth… whether rajat tried to misbehave with ragini…
rajat – sir I already told you that b***c is falsely accusing me..
Sanskar (shouts in anger) – enough rajat one more word about ragini i will not leave you…
princi – Sanskar control your anger… and rajat don’t forget that you are in my cabin..
rajat and Sanskar – sorry sir
Sanskar – sir, rajat is at fault he tried to misbehave with ragini i am ready to be witness..
princi – I know ragini had already complained about it.. I just called you for confirming it.. now you may leave..
Sanskar – k sir..
Sanskar leaves from their eyeing rajat angrily…
princi comes to rajat who was know shivering in fear…
rajat – sir wo..
princi slapped him hard on his cheek by which he fell on floor holding his cheek..
rajat – dad..
princi – don’t call me dad.. I am ashamed to say you are my son.. how can you do that rajat.. I already warned you never make me disappointed…
rajat – sorry dad…
princi – I am suspending you for 10 days..
rajat – dad how can you do this I am your son..
princi – that is why I am suspending you just for ten days not rusticating you..

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Sanskar is walking in the corridor thinking…he spots ragini sitting on bench and noting something..
Sanskar thinks – everyone over here are excited for fresher’s.. but this girl is sitting and writing that to in this much of noise..
Sanskar goes near ragini..
Sanskar (pointing the seat next to her) – may I sit here..
ragini (without seeing who he is) – If you are also studying in this clg then you can sit I am not owning this clg to ask my permission…
Sanskar smiles -you are having great sense of humour.. I never expected this from you… day by day you are becoming mysterious..
ragini raises her head and finds Sanskar…
ragini – I thought some one else..
Sanskar – its fine.. but should say you are not whom you show the world.. why are you hiding your self…
ragini – I am not hiding my self… I am like this only..
Sanskar – but I should appreciate you are stronger not week as you show.. princi called me and asked about that incident… you done a great job by complaining about rajat..
ragini – thanks.. and sorry I had talked rudely..
Sanskar – that’s fine.. I can understand your situation..
ragini – you are so sweet.. but your brother is so irritative..
Sanskar – don’t forget I am hear only and you are talking about my brother..
ragini bits her lips uttering sorry…
Sanskar smiles at her antics..
Sanskar – you know what your this innocence made me fall for you.. that is why I like you..
ragini eyes popped up in shock..
Sanskar – relax ragini i just said I like you not I love you their is still time for it.. and leaves from their leaving ragini in confusion…

Sanskar pov
what the hell wrong with you Sanskar.. this is first time you are having a normal convo with ragini and you said you like her.. what will she be thinking about you… you used to tease lucky for flirting with girls but now what you done is worst than it.. if lucky knows about it he will not leave a chance to tease you.. see ragini what you had done to me.. he smiles by brushing his hair…

ragini pov
what he just said.. he said he like me and still their is time for saying I love you… what does he mean… I think this is their new plan to torture me…I should not think more these brothers are unbelievable… but he sounded really genuine.. ragini just brush of your thoughts…. don’t think much just focus on your work..

rajat who heard their convo… so Sanskar likes ragini now I will show both of them what I can do… because of ragini dad is upset with me and he also suspended me.. I will not leave you so easily ragini gadodia..

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swara – riya please talk to me yaar don’t stay silent.. I can’t take it..
riya – swara I don’t want to force you to be my frnd when Karthik doesn’t like me..
Swara – don’t be stupid riya.. bai just said those words in anger.. and he is even feeling guilty for it.. please don’t be angry with me because of your fight with bai.. we are best frnds na..
riya – swara I am not angry with you.. I am angry on my self.. I can’t think of Karthik hating me..
swara – bai doesn’t hate you..but he really likes you I can see it in his eyes but he is just not aware of his feelings…
riya (excited) – really Karthik feels for me Like I feel for him…
swara (teasingly) – oh ho some one are excited. now tell me from when this is going on..
riya (stammering) – what.. their is nothing… I am talking about friendship not love..
swara – so you love bai and my guess is correct…
riya – its not like that..
swara – now you started hiding things from me… am I not your frnd any more..
riya – its not like that.. I was just afraid..
swara – don’t be… I will be the most happiest one if you and bai are together.. and even our families are ok with you and bai marriage…
riya (shocked) – when this happened
swara – don’t think about it..dadi are planning about marriage but bade Papa only said after bai finals he will take this proposal ahead..
riya – really
swara – know our mission is to make bai confess his feelings..
riya – but I don’t want to force him..
swara – Oh ho babhi ji.. taking care of bai from now only not bad but don’t worry I and ragu will help you and bai to come together without forcing him…
riya – thanku swara but where is ragini..
swara – she may be in library you go to ragini.. I will come in some time
riya – k

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sahil – hi swara..
swara – hi sahil…
sahil – swara will you come to with me out for coffee..
Swara – thats so sweet of you sahil but bai won’t agree.. I am sorry..
sahil – come on swara you are in clg not in school this is all common just say your bai that you are going to meet a frnd …
swara – no sahil, I can’t break his trust.. its not that I am always truthful.. I will also lie sometimes or hide something’s.. but this is not one of it.. don’t force me please
sahil – don’t talk like your behenji sis..
swara – enough sahil don’t cross your limits and leaves from their in anger..
sahil – this girl is not so easy to make her fall into my trap.. I should plan something else…..

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in mm…
Sanskar is lost in deep thoughts by smiling to him self….. Laksh comes with coffee cups as it is their usual routine to talk by having coffee….
Laksh – bai where are you lost…
Sanskar comes out of his thoughts and smiles…
Laksh – what why are you showing your smile is their something I should know..
Sanskar – love… its a awesome feeling right.. many times people behave out of their senses.. it is a like drug if once addicted it will make them mad….
Laksh – I don’t know about love but I know about you who is that special girl who made my bai to fall in love..
Sanskar – nothing like that lucky I was casually saying all these…
Laksh – cut the crap bai.. you are saying who is that girl or not…
Sanskar – I am saying na nothing is their to say…
Laksh – now watch what I will do… and he runs down..
Sanskar thinks – what is the need to blabber now don’t know what will Laksh do..
Laksh shouts maa, Papa, chachu, chachi, adharsh bai, uttu.. all comes to hall by hearing laksh..
sujatha – what happened Laksh why are you shouting
uttu – maa lucky bai had become mad..
Laksh – shut up uttu.
dp – now will you say why you called us..
Laksh – I called you all to say be ready to welcome two bahus not one..
sujatha – what are you saying Laksh..

Laksh – chachi Sanskar bai has already choosen a girl for him… all are in shock…
Sanskar comes their – maa, badi maa lucky had become mad don’t listen to him… he will not leave a chance to tease me..
adharsh (teasingly) – but I am not having any problem with it, we both can marry in one mandap..
Laksh gives his victory smiles…
Sanskar – bai please you to don’t start like lucky… and first you look at your self you not even talked to pari babhi once after fixing engagement and marriage dates..
Laksh – ha bai you should take babhi on date..
adharsh – lucky you should be on my side but you are supporting sanky..
Laksh – I am not on anyone’s side…
ap catches Laksh ears he wincing in pain…
Laksh – mom what are you doing..
ap – you want to make your brothers married soon so that your line get cleared….
Sanskar – ha badi maa catch another ear also on my behalf
sujatha – shut up Sanskar and jiji leave my Laksh….
Laksh – thanks chachi in this house no one loves me except you..
ap – sujatha you are spoiling him by pampering
sujatha – jiji I just want to say no need to make his line clear he already has a girl Written in his life..
Laksh (fake anger) – chachi you also started
uttu – takes a pic of him. wow I will show it to all my frnds who are dieing to meet lucky bai..
Laksh chases uttara for deleting his pic… all laughs by seeing them…

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in GM….
Karthik and swara are eyeing ragini angrily…
Karthik – shona tell her not to talk to me…
swara – bai even I am not talking with her…
swayam – ragu di what happened to these both why they are overacting…
Karthik – shut up swayam..
ragini pouts – they are angry on me
swayam – that I know but why…
swara – will you please shut up swayam..
swayam – why you both are showing angry on me.. see na ragu di..
Karthik – what she will say she never considers as our own..
swara – ha bai we are mad to consider her as our sis.. we come to know the happenings in her life from outsiders…
ragini – please don’t talk like that… I am sorry I always make you guys upset.. you will always face problems because of me that is why I had not said about rajat to you… and cry’s..
swara – ragu don’t think like that…
Karthik – ha ragu.. if we are in any difficult situation then you will leave us no na then how can we… we are siblings in every situation either it is good or bad we will be together.. that makes our bond together…and hugs her.. soon swara and swayam also joins the hug…
swayam – can anyone say me what happened at least now…
swara – it’s not necessary for you to know..
swayam (pouts) – that is why I to want to join in clg you guys are not saying anything to me thinking still I am a kid… trio laughs at his antics…
ragini hugs him tight and says you are our stress buster…..

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68 comments

  1. Toyi

    disappointed as a ragsan fan… I followed this ff thinking it’s a cute ragsan ff but I read in comments on previous chap that it’s going to be raglakπŸ˜”

    • Ragz_teju

      |Author

      sorry to make you disappoint dear.. but still their are lot of suspenses to be revealed… final pair may or may not be ragsan but you will see a different bonding between them

  2. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Awesome amazng marvellous episode dear πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ …awwwe!!!sanky is sooo cute heheheheh loved ragsan convo…sanlak teasing scene ws sooo awesome…dere bondng is superb..ragini-kunj convo ws really sweet n laksh jealousy is cherry on d top hahahaha πŸ˜€ ….d siblings convo ws lovely!!!
    All in all fantastic update dear…m super excieted to know who is destined in my ragz life !!!!
    U r mindblowng ragz-teju..keep on rockng n stay blessed sweety πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  3. Brij

    Can you please write one for me in Hindi
    I have already said you and you said that you will Post it with next chapter
    Plssssssssssssssssss
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    Write it

  4. sargam

    awwwwww loved it,1st step to being strong wow!!!!!!!
    loved the siblings bonding alot and yes ragkunj’s too
    i hope sanlak wont hurt eo in this process at any point of tym,fingers crossed for that
    pls reveal the past i m dieing here thinking about it all
    sorry for not commenting in prevoius epi,but it was a real dhamaka,laksh,the mystery man,yipee my guess was right!!!!!!!!
    but still the pairs r mystery right???so lets see
    u have jst tied me to this ff that i keep thinking about it only.
    love u a lot!!!!!!!!!!

      • Ragz_teju

        |Author

        it’s a story about identical twin sisters amber and dhara…

        they were so identical that even their mother found it difficult to distinguish between one from the other.. at least during their initial days after their birth..
        amber is 10 minutes elder to dhara..
        however, they are very different from each other when it comes to everything other than appearance..
        amber resembles sky where as dhara resembles earth.. like their names they are poles..
        amber is great friendship maker.. she likes spicy food, she is dad’s pet…
        dhara has no friends, she likes sweets, she is mom’s pet..
        amber is greedy and selfish while dhara is generous and selfless…
        when amber and dhara grown up… their mom and dad wanted to make them marry.. as amber is elder to dhara first they thought of searching groom for amber.. amber’s mom and dad finalised her marriage with a guy prudhvi who is a army officer.. she was happy as he was good looking.. after few days even for dhara they searched a guy sameer who is good looking and working as a software engineer..
        amber was jealous of dhara because sameer was earning more money compared to prudhvi and also prudhvi will stay in border where as sameer will stay in mumbai… after marriage she has to shift to border where prudhvi has to stay where their will be less facilities compared to mumbai… she refused to marry prudhvi.. dhara being matured one convinced her parents to make amber and sameer marry… she also convinced prudhvi and sameer…
        prudhvi has fallen for the selfless nature of dhara while sameer even though agreed to marry amber but he was not happy with it…
        amber and sameer married along with prudhvi and dhara..
        prudhvi and dhara leaved a happy married life while sameer and amber used to fight on little things.. sameer and amber’s relation got worse when sameer had to removed from his job when their company was facing losses.. amber insecurities has become more after this… soon amber and dhara got divorced…
        prudhvi and dhara’s love was increasing day by day.. prudhvi was promoted as a commando… he was also awarded for his braveness during the time of war… all started respecting dhara as the wife of prudhvi.. as being the wife of army officer dhara became inspiration for many ladies… soon prudhvi and dhara blessed with a baby boy…..
        amber lost her charm.. she went to depression as she was not able to bare the separation from her husband..
        dhara and prudhvi supported amber in her tough situation when even her parents and her husband were against her… amber realised how selfless dhara and prudhvi are and how selfish she was, she thought how foolish she is to reject prudhvi just for little comfort now.. amber got to know life is not just money and comfort.. but life is happiness which we get by being with our loved ones… she
        started working and turned into a independent women with the help of dhara she convinced her family and sameer, she apologied them.. sameer forgiven her and they got remarried…

        sameer and dhara where as prudhvi and dhara along with their child leaved happily ever after….

  5. kutty

    I was eagerly waiting for ur update. Today’s episode was awesome. Loved ragkunj bonding and lucky’s jealousy.. Want Raglak as pair. But u’r decision is final. Please try to update frequently. Bcos many of us waiting fr ur ff..

  6. Silent_writer

    |Registered Member

    I m still very cnfused about pairs plz tell me i wish it ragsan but as per ur story feeling raglak lets c anyways chappy was awsme as alwaysssπŸ’šπŸ’›πŸ’“ keep it up n tc

  7. Asra

    |Registered Member

    fabulous, amazing, superb dear….
    day by day it’s very interesting….
    eagerly waiting for nxt update and plz reveal the pair….u rock it….loved it soooo much….

  8. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Waaaaawww!!!! dear .. 1st time reading ur FF…. n i really love it… all d pairs are too gorgeous.. totally loved it… now from later on m gonna read it regularly… hmmmm…
    Thnk u Ragz_Teju…

  9. j.

    omg i m late read the part and one thing which i got is that sanskar is the one that writes letters and the letter’s that ragini writes laksh reads it and thinks her to be mystery girl maybe like this. is it right???? or this is my stupid crazy thinking amd lovely episode and coming to pairs i love ur story whatever r the pairs i’ll read it. update next part soon 😘😘😘

  10. Moni_ragz

    Im ragsan fan.. Bt i feel most probably it wil be raglak.. Evn then i like laksh jealousy, sanskar cuteness,rag-kunj bonding …. Whoever be the pair,ur a awesome wroter nd its a awesome ff….

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