(Swaragini) hamari adhuri kahani episode 16

hi guys…
thank u everyone for the wonderful response and also silent readers ….sorry in advance as I can’t give my further Updates till monday because i will be travelling but I will be regular after that….

episode-15

in clg….
kunj – ragini i think you should say what happened in canteen to Karthik..
ragini – no kunj its just our dought we don’t even know if their is something mixed in that juice or not
kunj – k meet you tmrw…
ragini – hmm bai…

riya – swara how you are going to convince ragini for tmrw
swara – not just me we are going to convince
riya – what
swara – Yes today you are going to stay in our house so that we can plan for tmrw
riya (thinks) – swara’s house means Karthik will also be their.. with much difficulty I am hiding my feelings now what I will do…
swara – riya where are you lost…
riya – nothing but I should convince mom..
Swara – don’t worry I will talk to anty…

Karthik – shona and ragu come lets go home….
Swara – ya bai and today riya is coming with us to our house..
Karthik – why… I mean anything special
swara – I thought of girls night out any problem for U…
Karthik – why their will be a problem for me… come lets go….

Karthik sits in driving seat.swara in from, ragini and riya are sitting back…
swara is blabbering something or the other. Karthik and ragini is just looking at swara and laughing… while riya is in deep thoughts…
riya (thinks) – I think Karthik is not happy with me coming to his home… I should have not agreed to swara what he might be thinking about me….
Karthik see riya from rare view…
Karthik – riya is something making you worry?? you are looking dull…
riya – no their is nothing to worry (but feels happy inside as Karthik noticed that she is worried)
swara – riya don’t worry anty will not say anything I will talk to her…
Karthik – what still you not asked anty… shona you are spoiling even riya…
ragini – Yes riya first we will inform anty then we will go home…
swara – come on bai and ragu … don’t worry I know anty she will not say anything…
Karthik – but.. interrupted by
swara – bai please you are making riya more worried…
Karthik – k baba riya I will talk to anty…. because you are also my responsibility like shona and ragu….
riya is in cloud nine by listening to Karthik..
riya (thinks) – Karthik thinks I am his responsibility…. Oh god today is my lucky day….

soon they reaches GM….
Karthik – you three go inside I will go to office and come with Papa and chote papa..
trio says k and goes inside….
swara (to riya) – before bai returns we should convince ragini for tmrw….
riya – you think she will agree..
swara – hope so…

sunaina – you are back… how is clg
ragu – good badi maa…
riya takes blessings from elders and greet them….
sunaina – riya beta how are you??
riya – fine anty…
swara – badi maa today riya will stay with us…
sunaina – that’s good… riya beta feel comfortable…
riya smiles – k anty…
sumi – I will prepare snacks for you all go and fresh up…
they leave…

ragini is standing in the balcony and looking at sky….
swara and riya comes to her room…
swara – ragu I need to say you something…..
ragini – (turning towards them) – swara you can say it.. no need to hesitate…
swara – today I heard dare devils are conspiring against you…
ragini – what…
swara – Yes they are making plans against you…
ragini – our dought was true…
riya – what and whose dought…
ragini – I will tell you but what are you saying….
swara – wo I confronted them about it… they said they won’t interfere in our lifes if we agree to their challenge…
ragini – then what you said…
riya – she said Yes…
ragini – what is need for it… first we could have consulted Karthik bai… what is the challenge…
riya – performing in front of them….
ragini – I think they are doing all these on purpose….
riya – swara can play guitar but their is a problem….
ragini – now what is problem…
riya – even you should perform like singing, dancing or acting any of it…
ragini – riya are you kidding…
swara – ragu please if you will not agree then we will loose…
ragini – sorry swara I can’t, you know I feel nervous to do something like that. I never participated in any of school programmes because of stage fear….
riya – ragini if you do it they won’t trouble you further and even Karthik will be out of tension…. you know how much he was worried about you and swara after that incident…
swara – ha ragu riya is telling true for Karthik bai and his gang… they are feeling guilty because of rivalry between hot dazzlers and dare devils we are suffering…
ragini – how much you try to convince me their is no Use swara I can’t do it….

swara and riya requests her so much but ragini is not convinced… after so many efforts also they are not able ti convince her but at last swara used her weapon of emotional blackmailing at last ragini said Yes…. Swara and riya hugged her in excitement….
swayam came inside looking for them and heard what they are talking ….
swayam – clg life is so excited… hope I was in clg…
swara – swayam can’t you knock before entering and you heard what we are talking…
swayam – take a chill pill…
swara – shut up and leave from.. we had a lot to do…
swayam – come on I will not say to any one but left me watch what you will do…
swara – no need just leave…
ragini – let him be na swara…
riya – ha swara, look how cute he is like Karthik and you are saying him to leave… soon realises what she said and bits her tounge…. looks around to find trio watching her…
swayam (teasingly) – wow riya di Karthik bai looks cute for you…
riya (stammering) – I just want to say you both look similar….
ragini – its k riya don’t take swayam seriously…
riya leaves from their by saying to use washroom….
Swara (thinks) – I think Karthik bai is reason for riya’s wired behaviour. I should find out about riya’s feelings towards bai …

in mm…
lucky is seen deeply thinking…
sanky – lucky atleast now say me what are you going to do tmrw
lucky – bai don’t worry I will not do anything wrong… don’t you trust me…
sanky – lucky I trust you more than my self but I am curious to know what will happen tmrw… you never backed out of your plans… then today why you told swara that if they complete their challenge you will not bother them…
lucky – because bai I think they can’t do it…
sanky -I to think you are right… may be…
uttara – what are you both talking about…
sanky – uttu don’t get into boys matters..
uttara – but I have right to know what my bai’s are talking about…
lucky – uttu doll you are still a kid… go and sleep with mumma..
uttara – I am not a kid… I am 16 in few months I turn 17…
sanky (teasingly) – ha lucky, in a year and few months she turns 18 I think we should find a good match to her so that we can get her married…
lucky (teasingly) – ha bai… we should do uttu and adharsh bai marriage in same mandap.. I will say papa to look for groom from now it self so that we can get the best one…
uttara – how mean… go I am not talking to you both and leaves from their in anger…. as soon as uttara leaves, sanky and lucky give hi fi to each other and starts laughing…

in GM….
swara, ragini, riya and swayam are sitting together and discussing about their performance…
swara – listen all of you.. bai should not know about this otherwise he will become angry and will not allow to this….
riya – k but lets plan what you are doing tmrw…
swara – I will play guitar on song which I learnt recently… and ragini..
ragini is looking tensely….
swayam – di don’t worry…
ragini – I can’t even talk in front of strangers….
Swara – you are the one who fought with those brothers…
ragini – thats different swara…
riya – nothing is different just be calm and composed
swara – ha ragu… their will be only eight of us…
swayam – who are these eight…
riya – me, swara, ragini and dare devils… they are five..
swayam – di you already know riya di and shona di, they are just five of them who are strangers so no need to worry…. you just think they are not present and do it …
ragini – but what I will do…
Swara – I forgot about it….
riya – you sing any song ragini or play any instruments who bothers if it is nice or not …
ragini – no riya music is not my cup of tea….
swara – once give it a try….
swayam – di you dance on any song….
Swara – ha ragu that’s good…
ragini – I don’t know how to dance….
riya – don’t worry I will teach you….
swayam – I will also help… last time for our school function I learnt few steps…
swara – k then I will decide a song in which ragu will dance tmrw….

at kunj place….
kunj is reading a book…. but suddenly he remembers ragini…
kunj (thinks) – ragini she is such a innocent girl… she is way different from what I thought… but why I think I know her, I saw her before…. but where…

in Dark room…
person – sahil why you came hear at this time…
sahil – dad you know about ragini
person – ha what is their to know about her
sahil – but dad we are missing something today by listening to their talk, I can say we still are completely aware of ragini’s childhood
person – hmm I will enquire about it but you concentrate on gaining their trust..
sahil – k dad now I am friend of swara.. but soon she will be my key to enter gadodia family..
both person and sahil smirks….

in GM…
swara, riya and swayam are trying hard to make ragini learn some dance moves
but failing even after several attempts…
ragini is in the verge to cry after continuous efferts of learning dance moves….
swara (thinks) -ragu is hell nervous she is enable to dance in front of us how can she do in front of them… I should have thought before accepting it… they will make fun of ragu if she enable to do it I should think another alternative… I can’t let them win….

precap – swara rocks dare devils shocks…. sanskar take a stand for ragini….

45 comments

  1. sargam

    its awesummmmmm
    but our ragu ppls yaar change her into a daring girl.
    mysteries,ragini’s childhood, so he knows her???
    sanky will take a stand for her.awwww

  2. lisa

    loved every part of ur ff but what is the mystery who is the secret savor of ragini
    seriously m curious now plz next 1 asap or isay bi zyada bara hehe love ur work

  3. j.

    is kunj brother of ragini???? hahhahaaah i kbow it is weird but i felt so and i think the pairs are ragsan and swalak

  4. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Superb fantastic awesomeeeeeeee……waitng for nxt part eagerlyyy!!!!awwww precap is so sweet dat sanky wl stand for rags…..m eager to know about d pairs yaaar😶😶😶……well all in all mindblowngggg story dear…keep rockng n stay blessed 😉 😉

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