SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE EPISODE 30 (NOTE FOR READERS, swasan pain)

Note for readers please please read it anyhow
So yesterday I gave sanky past, I know many of you may not like it or may have felt it is common .
.many says he must not choose that path.
I will also say that he did wrong of choosing that path but guys think differently one time. I am not supporting his deeds but I am telling the real reason behind doing all these things.
Guys when his father left him.
He didn’t had food to eat and good house to live.
Because they were living in rent room and I told you before that whenever anyone family people is jailed people badmouth them.
Same condition with sanky in the small age of 18 no one is giving him good job at that place.
As you all know very well no one give job to child of murderer because no one trust them.
His father was known in full Indore because his father killed very rich person so no one used to give him job but for him money was highly needed.
To study as well as to save his father. One more thing to save his father he needed a lot of money urgently because he have to search good lawyer to fight case which is highly. Urgent and there was No. Lawyer who were accepting such a case of his father because it is linked. To rich people so. To get good lawyer. He needs. Huge money very urgent so tell me who will give him huge amount of money in 10 to 30 days and one more thing Indian
Police takes a lot of black money from relative of criminal also may be you must. Have. Seen in news channel that police take black money from prisoner relative that they will give less torture and think about sanky father who is very. Big criminal so from. Where sanky will bring money to give them. and in court money is needed just take example for small case only we have to give huge amount of money than think his father had murder case of such rich person. If many of you know huge amount of money needed to fight case if someone gone through this situation
thing

You must be knowing very well how much money it is needed to fight a case and how much we have to go for documentation process and also we have to give black money to police also because many police people ask for money
So think from where he will bring money where no one is giving him job.
He can’t wait for small work to do that in 5 to 6 years he may get little money and how he will do work in this small age also he is too much depressed alllso
His father jailed, his sister died, he had to leave his college in small age there was no one to give his good path and to support him in his bad time.
He also didn’t had money and if you say he must uses mahan work than think It would he able to save his father for this many years. He would had been given life prisoners but from starting he is fighting case in big court and increasing time by giving good money to save his father.
So here I am only want to give light on those people whose parents jailed and how there condition become bad.
Mostly cases many go for wrong work because no one show love to them but with sanky condition was worst he didn’t had money for lawyer also
Than only he had one option to go because he had too much berdon in his life.
And he got bad environment where they gave me good money to do bad work so he only got one option so he thought to do that work
And all friends and people supported him to do that work so he gone for this s*x work so that he can save his father.
Overall no one was there to give him good path and also he badly needed money to save his father so only one option he got so he went on this option.
He was young poor badly needed money and depress and got bad envoironment in this small age which is age of growth where person grows but didn’t become mature and this age people have curiosity so everything was there who made him to go for this work.

One more thing I also wanted to give light on those students who go for this work
Guys I have many things to tell you to tell sanky condition but you will feel it is boring
One more thing I don’t know from where many of you felt that this was common past because I never raised this topic before because the past of children whose father is in jail is less common but if somother people had taken for it big sorry from my side
One more thing guys when at your house also if police takes your father in jail you all will use huge amount of money to give to lawyer to save them and if not Than you will go for big court so for sanky money was highly needed it was emergency work not like that if your father is jailed this year than you will do any small work and after 10 years you will able to get little good money till that time will court will wait for you to judge so guys think practical.
I know he did wrong
One more thing I am not telling that if you are poor you will go for those work
I know I have seen few poors who became reach by doing hard work but for them condition was Good that didn’t need money in emergency they had there family to support them and give them strength but for sanky no one is there so that example is not much valid for sanky.
He was helpless he had to go for this work he didn’t had other options
I know he is wrong but we also can’t say that it was his mistake. He was helpless at his point neither which I explained you above.
So guys I think you got point ..
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Episode starts with sanky thinking that swara left him,
Other side swara is going somewhere by her car.
But after some journey she stops her car in front of house.
Swara knocks door.
Just than a girl opens the door She was not other than kavya.
Swara without thinking anything hugs kavya tightly.
Kavya while caressing her back what happened swara please tell me your worry.
But swara didn’t says anything.
Swara still hugging, Kavya brings her to couch where swara was crying.
Kavya thinks may be something happened between SWASAN
Other side sanky was too much worried about swara that will she leave him .
He thinks Now it’s time to tell the reality.
Sanky searches his phone thinks to call Kavya because she is good friend of her.
Just than kavya recieves a call from sanky .
She immediately picks
Sanky with hesitation is there swara there .
Kavya while moving her gaze to crying swara says yes she is with me.
Sanky immediately cuts call and took car to Kavya house
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In kavya house
Sanky car stops in front of swara kavya house.
Sanky immediately runs inside kavya house and sees swara crying.
Sanky whisper swara.
Swara still hugging kavya sees him crying.
Sanky slowly comes toward her and touches her shoulder and says please give me one more time I want to tell you one thing swara. Please just come with me last time.
Swara cryingly nods in negative.
Sanky pleades please swara.
Kavya while consoling swara tells please swara listen what he want to tell last time.
Swara speaks please I need time.
Sanky – but I thing this is correct time swara please come with me only just last time swara. Than everything will be dependent on you. Please swara come with me.
Kavya – please swara please for me go with him.
Swara again nods in negativity.
Sanky didn’t had option he takes swara in his arms and make her sit in car both share painful eyelock.
After sometime sanky stops car in front of one small house.
Again he takes her IN his arms and made her sit in one chair of one room which was fully covered by white curtens.
Sanky – today I wanted to tell you something swara……………………………….

Precap – good news for SWASAN and raglak scene
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Sorry raglak fans for not able to add there part because I was really not in good mood and I just wanted to explain people and Also I don’t had time and raglak part need good time and good mood so in next episode you will get good raglak scene also
So please try to understand guys
Sorry from my side of not giving sanky part

89 comments

  1. Haya malik

    |Registered Member

    Totally agreed with your point….but the thing is when we talk about some one being in s*x profession the first thing comes to our mind is thatay be some financial reason… That’s why I said in last episode that its so common thing in last episode you reacted positively but after reading today’s note I can make it clear that you somewhere is hurt with ours pov…so I m really sorry because can’t take a risk to annoy a writer….well leave

    Coming to chappy it was actually really short but its OK as it was worth it….waiting for next

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Hey please don’t say like this
      I am not hurt from your point but I was too much tired by all guys question so I thought to give note about sanky character but I really didn’t got hurt because when I was writing at that time I wrote in flow only.
      So I just added all those points because 2 other also asked this question but there point was different so for them I told and this financial reasons yeah you are 200% correct but what to we have to give this financial type past
      I was thinking to give some other past but here in tellyupdates you know very well mostly girls can’t see there favourite character in bad work so they mostly want them to be mahan which is impossible in real life
      So for them I have to take mixed past means what we want to show we have to show in differwnt way so that they like that it’s OK he had problem but what i wanted to tell that I showed but for it I had to give big story for it
      You don’t take tension you are really good person so please don’t ask sorry for it
      Because I am feeling guilty on myself keep smiling always

    • Mica

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      if you explain everything like this.. i will surely agree with the view……
      seem finally you explained because me, somehow have a doubt.. since in those story it self, ended in –Sanskar just tell Swara, he did it for 3 reason, save his papa, study fee, and build business..
      which is i just hate the 2 last reasons…(for me, the first reason uncommon, but 2, 3 reason are common thing) it happening nowadays that why i hate this
      (nowadays, even boyz can be mistress of men for study or business reason) uugghh!..
      thought Sanskar’s dad released from jail already as he bailed him..
      but somehow i’m happy, since my doubt trigger you to explain everything..
      love it,.. ty
      come to story….
      wweeew Sanskar!! you know Swara inside and out, even when she leave you, you know where to find her!

      • Pathan

        |Author

        No you are not single who had doubt if you will see commentor in my last episode
        Some had doubt and there one girl thara also had doubt and I told her that I will explain in next episode
        That reply I did before replying to your comment because I know many didn’t think in deep way
        I thought all will think little by using there mind but mostly didn’t thought in deep way so many had doubt
        And I replied to your comment because I know you are too much curious so I just replied it and nothing else
        I gave this much explaination for those people who don’t comment and still had doubt and also to them who had doubt but they just asked me

        Because your doubt I cleared in last episode only so I think you understood for whom I explained this much.

        One more thing it is simple common sense thing that if anyone parent Is in jail that person will immediately need huge amount of money to give to police and lawyer because it is big case
        But I thought people will automatically understand but many didn’t but
        I am happy that now you understand my point
        I can also understand your point you are somewhat correct
        Keep smiling always

  2. Mahjabeen

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    Yeah ur i got ir point of view bro..u hvexplained vry nicely…well u gave a short part of da epi..well m happy to rd it..hope sanky is gng to tell all da truth to swara abt his father nd sister..waitng egrly fr nxt

  3. Vidhi

    Nice one n I truly understand sanskar’s condition…. N what’s the suspense… Plz update soon n reveal it๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  4. Yashasvi

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    bro it was hsort but awesome….. yes i understand sanky’s condition….. he didnt had any other option so he had to choose it yrrrrr…….
    and hope swara sunne sanky ki baat…..
    good really precap pad k maza aa gya……
    and no worries at all i know u are very busy and still for us u take ur precious tyme and write this….. is a really very very big thing for me…..
    and i will be waiting fr next epi and do msg me when u r free….. and take care..
    and dont feel bad it’s just that some of them thought it was the same reason but didn’t thought the deep meaning of it….
    and u have explained it and now i think no one will have this objection……
    and remember i’m always with u…..
    post asap…………..

    keep smiling and stay blessed……………๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Love u bro…..โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค
    Yashu !!!!!!โคโคโค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  5. CrazygirlS.P

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    Bhai, its superb.
    Everyone has a past some have to do what Sanky did, cause he was broken from the inside and from the outside and some people get forced to do that job, cause they want to give food to their children and pya rent with it

  6. Riya

    Episode is really good…What I will say?But now Swara is acting like kids… I am hell angry on her character…Anyways in the note you wrote absolutely correct… But I don’t know why these readers are saying this…But this past is not common… I also read a lot of ff in Swaragini…But I can’t get time to give comment in every ffs…And as far as I know there is not any writer who gave this type of bitter past…I think there is not this type of past in any ff…And somebody says that “YOU GAVE WRONG MESSAGE TO TEENAGER”…I think she/he don’t have any mind… You are fully correct in your point… And about teenagers then what message you will give to them?You just writes a fiction… You are not here to give messages to them… Or you are not a god who will give message to others… I think its really a brainless type of thought… And about right wrong path then its really hard to choose right or wrong path when bad time comes specially for them who don’t have family supports also… And I think here somebody don’t know about Indian government… And you said correct about Indian Police…OK overall the episode is good…Keep smiling…

    • Mica

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      sorry Pathan…please ignore my comment here for sometime..

      Riya.. i did say this…on that previous episodes, Sanskar said that after he save his papa from jail, then he became gigolo for study fee and capital for build business.. that why i angry to Sanskar..
      better you confront me why i said that than pointing me that i have no mind..
      for me, Sanskar did it for his papa, i can understand, totally understand, but when he did it for build business, it’s not good,…because for me starting business by sell his dignity is bad.
      i don’t talk about saving his father, i just hate him when the reason was study fee and build business…but i dunno than about your mind, may your mind too good to agree to someone start his business by selling his body.
      being writer, somehow they can rule the world by their pens, don’t and never underestimate the writer power,,…and you said it is brainless ?

      • Riya

        Mica at first I want to tell you that I didn’t confronted you in the previous episode because I am highly busy in celebrating Durga Puja…But I didn’t underestimated any writer’s power…And I talked about what you said about teenagers that Irfan gave wrong message to them…I didn’t talked about your thoughts or what you are thinking about Sanskar’s character… And its a fiction so from where messages and all comes here??? I just said it…And that time Sanskar was helpless… So he did this job for build a business and for studies… Because without study we can’t get any job…I also know this that he sell his dignity for these things and it’s good…But bad time teaches us everything…When he did these things nobody was there with him…He was alone he didn’t had family support also who will support him…That’s why he did this job…And I think you don’t remember one thing that when he went to meet his father in jail he said that he don’t like to live between rich people…So from here we can get a very good example that why he did this… I think you got my point…

    • Mica

      |Registered Member

      Riya, you busy those time not to confront me but you have time to badmouthing me here..
      FYI, Pathan himself ever told me that he want to show people or readers about condition and reason of people to choose wrong path, to understand their pain through his story which is this ff <—— this is the reason i said that so.. so don't you only said that — And its a fiction so from where messages and all comes here???—
      because somehow your opinion was opposite with pathan's mission.

      • Riya

        Yes I am busy…And I said it in my comment… I didn’t do any argument like you…And moreover what I will do or what not I will not ask you…It’s my personal matter… Yes he told this that he want to show society’s condition…I know it very well…But some kind of people don’t understands this….You also didn’t understood this and questioned him…So that’s why I said this about teenager people…And my opinion is not opposite from Irfan’s mission…I know about his mission he already said it to me…But the way you said that “YOU GAVE WRONG MESSAGE TO TEENAGER” its really too much rude…So that’s why I said this…And yourself told that he want to show people that why they are choosing these things…So that’s why he made Sanky’s past in this way to show people’s condition in society… And yes Sanskar didn’t take scholarship because for this family supports and all are mostly need a lot…Which he don’t have…And he was just 18 years old so who will encourage him to choose right path????So I think what he think that its better for him he just did it….

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        even i don’t ask your personal matter,…
        is that so rude ? so what should i said if i feel that so ? i didn’t even mention that Pathan have no mind or become brainless,
        it’s just a common words,
        i feel that so regarding to Sanskar’s sentences.. ( see my other comment to answer you)…
        ohoho, it’s Pathan ‘s story, it’s not yours, and it’s my rite as readers to questioning him as writer. what to say!!!

    • Mica

      |Registered Member

      another info, i heard news (mostly about a month ago) from statistic data, mentioned that India’s students who sent out in scholarship have almost biggest amount among other countries (including mine).
      so, based those statistic, i thought that India government has good concern regarging the youngster education, that why in my thought why sanskar didn’t take scholarship than being gigolo.
      so sorry if my GOOD OPINION about your country hurt you all..

      • Riya

        You know what you only knows this that how to argue with others…Except this thing you don’t know anything…So I didn’t said anything about my personal matter… And I never said that you said Irfan brainless and he have no mind…And moreover I know that its Irfan’s story not mine..But if you will say that “YOU GAVE WRONG MESSAGE TO TEENAGERS” then how I will shut my mouth….And one more thing no need to mention this that its not my story because I knows it very well…And please for god sake stop this argument… I am not good in argument like you….

    • Mica

      |Registered Member

      i think you forgot 1 thing also..
      this is what Sanskar said to Swara — i also had seen my freinds who are poor also comes in this job because this job gives huge amount of money in one night with pleasure, this thing had become common in many colleges.——
      (if you forget, just read again the last episode ) from that sentences, somehow i fell sanskar thought that this gigolo thing become something common..
      that why i angry on him also…

      • Riya

        Hey did I ask you that why are you angry on Sanskar????So why are you saying this to me???Yes may be he thought like that….So what I will do???And I don’t forgot any thing about this ff…Because I love this ff a lot…And also Irfan is my best friend… And I think you saw in the previous episodes that whenever anyone bashed Irfan I always supports him and bashed them…So please stop it….

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        so, you think i bashed him ? uh no, you even don’t know the differences arguing and bashing… what to say!

      • Riya

        You knows the differences.. That’s why you always argues with others… But I didn’t think that you bashed him..I just only said that “I DON’T FORGOT ANYTHING ABOUT THIS FF…BECAUSE I LOVE THIS FF A LOT…AND ALSO IRFAN IS MY BEST FRIEND…AND I THINK YOU SAW IN THE PREVIOUS EPISODES THAT WHENEVER ANYONE BASHED IRFAN I ALWAYS SUPPORTS HIM AND BASHED THEM”…You told that I forgot one thing…So I said this thing…And you even can’t understand this simple thing… And I said stop it…It means I wanted to tell you that stop this argument… And I always supports Irfan so I gave an example…But you didn’t understand… First read my reply properly…

    • Mica

      |Registered Member

      Pathan…
      thank you for the explanation.. (please you can read my comment under haya malik comment bout my though, if you have time)
      i just wanna say, i’m not a common reader who will just say awesome part or bla bla bla… i’m talkative reader who will love to torture writers with my though as i love their story..
      -i ever asked writer to change the time leap because a 2 years old boy will not talk properly (the boy talk properly and sound illogical for me), and she changed, ty for that.
      -i ever asked writer to not united Swasan because they/swasan’s wrong deed was unforgivable..etc..etc..etc..
      in this story, i love this much, moreover you ever mention to me about your mission, it’s a great idea… and i surely support you… i love to read a story with social issue…
      you want to show me about people with NO WAY around to solve their problem.
      but, poor you to have stupid reader kinda me who always need explanation why they did that related to your story as sometime your sentence gave me ambiguity meaning (kinda a book page which need a footnote). sorry about that.
      (you can read my answer to riya if you have time also)

      Did you remember when i asked you about a man/Sanskar felt, that was he know it’s the first time for Swara ? you said yes..
      did you remember when asked you bout self service ?
      related your mission about NO WAY aka dead end on swara’s problem (you have objection when i called them cheaters)
      you portrait so damn good about NO WAY on Swasan first romance, even i can’t judge them,
      then i was angry on their second romance and then you gave us about Kavvya suggestion to swara regarding her increased hormone due wrong med (gigolo),
      but there was OTHER WAY you/kavvya didn’t mention, which is self service aka mast*rb*tion with stuffs so called vibr*tor, d*ldo or s*x toy , they can buy them online .
      (get satisfy, low guilty feeling, covered from society)
      (uuhh how experience i’m :3) , you didn’t bother to explained it as no readers asked them not even me (thought it’s to crucial to asked in comment, and i uncomfortable to ask you in private).
      based on that, as reader i found a hole in your story, that in your NO WAY, i found OTHER WAY, (or you mentioned but i didn’t notice, sorry).
      that’s why somehow i got adamant about Sanskar’s problem…
      really sorry to bother you.. and leave it…

  7. Jj

    Hi, I can understand of sanky situation he need money for studies and save his father so he can do this s*x job . so it is not his fault ,all r understand how he feels for do such kind of job,it will be hurt him a lot, so please they were understand his situation. Sanky can’t do this job for luxury life . so sanskar is not his fault. This chapter is so short but I like it. And sorry for not command for the previous part because I went to North side tour for all my family so l can’t read the ff, now only I read all ur chapter so now I will comment in ur ff.

  8. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Irfan !! did u feel bad by my questions on previous chappy… i really didn’t mean to hurt u…
    U explained ur POV to us too greatly… i love it n understand it too…

    coming to d chappy

    *FINGERS CROSSED…
    Hope everything goes well…

    N yeah don’t take soo much of tention… coz in tention we forgot to smile,, to eat … n without eating u’ll become thin n also loose waight…n Aayat bhabhi will be shock … huhuhuhu… sooo
    keep smiling… ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Malika

      |Registered Member

      Kakali haha… What you said is absolutely right . Aayat will be shocked to see you like that irfan haha… Omg… and kakali did you update a new ff.

      Coming to this ep. What you did irfan. !!!! Am asking you sanskar also??? First laksh, then swara then ragini and now my sanky. Aaaaaaah he also suffered a lot. Nowadays you are writing emotional scene why… And yes sanky my sanky was in pain from inside . Why!!! Why!! Superb chotu and keep it up not like this please. I agree with everyone who commented. They are all absolutely correct. Update when you are free.

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        Yeahh dii ,, 1st n 2nd chappy has already posted… have a look… i wanted to inform u… but u know na my problem… soooo…

      • Pathan

        |Author

        I know they are correct at there point but just i wanted to clear little missunderstanding which some have
        Thanks for commenting

        Don’t take tension your bhabhi will not laugh but I will get little more care

    • Pathan

      |Author

      No yar I didn’t got hurt by your point
      Many readers had this type of doubt.
      So I just thought to clear it.
      Don’t take tension I will take care of my health and your bhabhi will not be shocked

      But I think I may get little more care from her side isn’t it

  9. Maryum

    |Registered Member

    I don’t agree completely with u yes I agree that time he have to choirs that way but u say he is very young so he can not find right way I don’t agree if your upbringing is strong then u never choirs wrong way but in your story he don’t have that so ya he is right no his point sorry if my comment hart u I don’t mean it I just give u my point

    • Pathan

      |Author

      OK I can understand your point
      You are correct at your point fully

      But about this upbringing think I just want to put my pov
      In the age of 18 we are matured but not properly
      In this age child may go to bad work if he has given because this is a age of curiosity of every person
      But you are also correct and please don’t ask sorry I never hurt it’s your work to ask your point or doubt
      Keep smiling always

  10. NDSG

    |Registered Member

    Sanky ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ but his heart is broken๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

  11. Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Hey can I Call you bhei if you like ?
    ..
    Coming to today epi I agree with you bec..In life we have to Face lots of thing when your parents are not there to suporting you will take wrong path not only Boys even girl also take wrong path…Bad time teach everyone a good Lesson…
    You are right sanky shouldnt have choose this path but to survive he did and i dont its wrong…
    Because when you are and nobody is here to help to Support you what will you even in Bad time our relative leave US alone…….I really loved sanky past it was hurt full you know…

    I must say not every Girl is good n not every boy…even Girls do this job…

    I love your thinking really keep going like this…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Really thanks for commenting and you can call me Bhai and thanks for giving such good and valuable comment
      Keep smiling always

  12. zoya

    sry I couldn’t comment on the last 2 episodes actually my exams were going on sooo……..well coming to the chappy it was awesome

  13. Angel-16

    its very short but an awesome chappy Bhai…. thanks for posting it soon…. eagerly waiting for the good news…. n haan aap plz sorry mat bolo…. bcoz its just a fictional story…. so aap jo chahe wo likh skte ho…. waise you make us understand sanky’s situation very well…. hats off for you for that…. n Bhai plz keep this in ur mind that YOU ARE A WONDERFUL N A VERY TALENTED WRITER…. just keep writing in this way only…. I just love ur writing skills verrrrrrrry much…. OK… so bye, take care, stay blessed n don’t take any type of tension….

  14. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Well the past of Sanky is painful than anyone else’s in this story.. I do agree with this male pr*stitution thing,I’ve seen that happening in real in many of the crime shows..Okay let’s just accept it,it’s the stark naked truth of our society..And writing s*x scenes for a teen is far difficult than a married person,you are doing that and hats off to you for that..Truth to be told I can read the s*x scenes,I definitely cannot bring up myself to write them..People should accept about what’s happening in society but not come out and bash any person who is trying to show you the truth..
    Don’t worry brother,you are doing great and well you do have so many people to support you here,I’m glad to see the girls who are supporting you.. ๐Ÿ™‚ Stay blessed and keep smiling.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Wow in this much small words you told everything
      You are very cleaver and too too good Di
      You are real law student
      Your each and every word is true Di.
      Yes Di for me like you reader is there so I didn’t need to take tension and worry.
      Yes you are correct Di people don’t accept it but rather than giving there unnecessary and useless logic in story and increases tension of writer

  15. xavia

    Hlooo bhai…hwz uhhh…..hwz ua clg goin on…..m sooooo sry fo being late……uh know studz n ol dat stuff..
    ..well chappy wz too emotional……n oh my goodness another suspense ….sanky z really a mystery prsn…..n dun feel bad abt wt odrs said abt past revealation…dey r olso crct on der POV n uh r olso…so frgt dat….i know uh dun read odr ffs dats y uh didn’t know d dey olso gv same past in such cases….so take a chill pill๐Ÿ˜‰…..n stay happy….

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Wow such nice comment
      You are really very good
      How is your health
      And thanks for supporting me
      Yes you are correct slowly slowly it takes time to cope up with new environment but really happy to see your care
      Keep like this only
      Don’t change

      • xavia

        M fine bhai…..thanks fo asking….n yup it vl take sm tym to cope up wid new environmnt…..i wz waiting fo ua reply…..n finally uh replied…..thanks fo replying….it makes me feel gd….stay blessed….

  16. xavia

    Hlooo bhai…hwz uhhh…..hwz ua clg goin on…..m sooooo sry fo being late……uh know studz n ol dat stuff..
    ..well chappy wz too emotional……n oh my goodness another suspense ….sanky z really a mystery prsn…..n dun feel guity bhai…in such a bzy schedule uh take tym to write dats enough fo us………..so take a chill pill๐Ÿ˜‰…..n stay happy….love uhhh loads…..

    • xavia

      N bhai in prvs epi’s cmnt uh said na dat uh r away frm family…..wid d passage of tym uh vl learn to live away frm ua family….i hv olso gone through dsame….in bgng uh vl face sm problms bt dn it vl b ol ok…..so dun wry… n be happy alwyz….

  17. Shruti

    At first so sorry for the delay.. I was highly bzy from yesterday night…. And a big wala thnx for explain Sanky’s part like this much wonderful way…. Bcz some people in ur comment box can’t understand his condition properly…. N again thnx for make them realise Sanky’s position… Bcz I didn’t felt in ur previous epi tht u didn’t wrote Sanky’s part properly…. Anyways nowadays I m becomes vry talkative…. The episode is awsm….. And dont bother to some cheap low class people…. They dont hv any work thts y they r always writes like this…. Keep smiling and stay happy always…

  18. Mica

    |Registered Member

    Pathanโ€ฆ
    thank you for the explanation.. (please you can read my comment under haya malik comment bout my though, if you have time)
    i just wanna say, iโ€™m not a common reader who will just say awesome part or bla bla blaโ€ฆ iโ€™m talkative reader who will love to torture writers with my though as i love their story..
    -i ever asked writer to change the time leap because a 2 years old boy will not talk properly (the boy talk properly and sound illogical for me), and she changed, ty for that.
    -i ever asked writer to not united Swasan because they/swasanโ€™s wrong deed was unforgivable..etc..etc..etc..
    in this story, i love this much, moreover you ever mention to me about your mission, itโ€™s a great ideaโ€ฆ and i surely support youโ€ฆ i love to read a story with social issueโ€ฆ
    you want to show me about people with NO WAY around to solve their problem.
    but, poor you to have stupid reader kinda me who always need explanation why they did that related to your story as sometime your sentence gave me ambiguity meaning (kinda a book page which need a footnote). sorry about that.
    (you can read my answer to riya if you have time also)

    Did you remember when i asked you about a man/Sanskar felt, that was he know itโ€™s the first time for Swara ? you said yes..
    did you remember when asked you bout self service ?
    related your mission about NO WAY aka dead end on swaraโ€™s problem (you have objection when i called them cheaters)
    you portrait so damn good about NO WAY on Swasan first romance, even i canโ€™t judge them,
    then i was angry on their second romance and then you gave us about Kavvya suggestion to swara regarding her increased hormone due wrong med (gigolo),
    but there was OTHER WAY you/kavvya didnโ€™t mention, which is self service aka mast*rb*tion with stuffs so called vibr*tor, d*ldo or s*x toy , they can buy them online .
    (get satisfy, low guilty feeling, covered from society)
    (uuhh how experience iโ€™m :3) , you didnโ€™t bother to explained it as no readers asked them not even me (thought itโ€™s to crucial to asked in comment, and i uncomfortable to ask you in private).
    based on that, as reader i found a hole in your story, that in your NO WAY, i found OTHER WAY, (or you mentioned but i didnโ€™t notice, sorry).
    thatโ€™s why somehow i got adamant about Sanskarโ€™s problemโ€ฆ
    really sorry to bother you.. and leave itโ€ฆ

    • Pathan

      |Author

      See I have many things to reply you but I am helpless of my busy timing only

      But if you told me about s*x toy, masturbation and all
      That she should use these things

      But if you remember I used this things
      Just read previous episodes you will get to know
      I used the word fingering and pleasuring herself in swara point of view when she thought
      But I didn’t used this s*x toy and other word because first of all I was in high pressure that people are saying my story is vulgar and for tellyupdates people this things don’t look good because there are many small people who are too uncomfortable with these words but I used simple and perfect word that she also gone for this things also but may be you may missed it so you can see 15 to 20 episode before you will get to know everything
      But I am telling this s*x toy don’t work much for swara like girls and also that work don’t work properly also
      Because 20 episode before in swara point she herself told that from these 3 years I am doing this work of fingering and pleasuring myself but now this work is also not working
      Now I am not able to control my increased desire due to Side effect of these medicines
      So this was her statement
      I think I used this things in 2 to 3 episode so just go through previous episodes you will get to know everything

      I am writer and I thought too much about this things than only I write anything because I saw every possible aspect which I always show in my story so for it readers have to think daily in little detailed way what I am writing so automatically ,
      One more thing I don’t know about other writer what they are writing and in which way they are going and what they changed and why they changed anything in there story I don’t know
      But I only know one till now there is not single thing in my story which I should change. Till now it is going perfect and in future i pray it also should go perfect because this story is going to end soon

      One more thing many times I don’t understand your message because you many times comment little bit puzzled in this comment also I didn’t understand something but I will also not ask you

      One more thing it is good habit to argue with anyone and writer because this thing is good and helpful but over argument is harmful
      So it’s good that you are telling your views about my writing and all, it really helps

      And you told to read your reply to riya so I will not read because I am doing Mbbs
      It is one of the most difficult degree to pursue so I don’t get time of all this things

      I am very busy person
      I write story by decreasing my playing time

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        huh! that why i said sorry in advance if i didn’t notice that ..(said -huh! -regarding to fake anger), so, don’t take it seriously….
        sorry to always argue you, really i didn’t mean it, after reading Sanskar’s sentences,
        —this is what Sanskar said to Swara โ€” i also had seen my freinds who are poor also comes in this job because this job gives huge amount of money in one night with pleasure, this thing had become common in many colleges.โ€”โ€”

        that’s thought pop up in my mine,..
        1. i agreed when he did it for his papa…
        2, i thought that his papa released from jail already.
        i forget that his papa STILL in jail,..that why asked him to stop it..
        aahh leave it…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Before telling NO WAY AND OTHER WAY in
      Strict way
      First read each part of story and thinks about it
      I think you will not need to do single argument also because I always write by thinking every possible way
      Sometimes I may not but 95% I think every aspect
      So go through it
      One more thing you don’t know about this things of s*x and all batter than me because I am medical student

      So try to understand other point also because in every aspect we are not correct.
      If you will read commentor of my ff from starting there are many people who commented that they are doctor and told that by reading my story face of those boys and girls come in there mind which go through this type of problem and they are happy that I am taking story in realistic way
      So those doctors are assuring story that it is correct
      So you please try to understand and divert your thinking in other way also

      I am happy that you are commenting in my story

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        huh! i don’t know about s*x ? wow, u underestimate me ahem ahem :3 :3
        hmm.. i’m social students (post) business field, that why i’m more concern about social part..
        the part that i didn’t read your story clearly, it’s the correct one.. the fault was mine..
        i dunno about medical thing, sorry if sometime i use my friends experience , for example when they said using good quality s*x toys gave them pleasure than their husbands or bla bla bla…that why i somehow questioning it…
        really sorry…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      It’s OK I can understand ur point as social student but as doctor we too are too much social
      We have to think about everyone point because doctor have to talk to patients are of different type as well as character

      And about that point sanky told that his friends are involved in this s*x thing
      From that he was just telling normally because I only want to say that in college life some students do this type of work
      I know it is wrong but we can’t change them.
      I am telling my experience I saw some boys in big cities who do this type of work so I ask them they says it’s pleasurable job as well as they get money for studying.
      I was also angry on them by seeing there thinking but what to do this type of people exist, they do this type of work
      That’s why you must had felt bad and it is correct at your point but what to do we have to ignore them and also I just wanted to show that this type of people exist in world because many girls don’t know about them.
      So be happy always
      And happy that you belong to social type field
      By the way what course you are doing in studies and from which country

      And don’t ask sorry from me
      Many times we don’t remember many things so it is not mistake but you asked so your doubt got cleared it is very good
      Keep smiling always
      You are good person

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        of course i know that type, few of my friends indulged in this works,
        even my neighbor become gigolo for gay along with his 4 college friends,
        they become kinda mistress for a male doctor.. uuggghhh,
        one of my business friend (girl) using her body to get tender, what to say!! ๐Ÿ˜€
        youngster become materialistic nowadays..
        they take short way to be rich….
        yups, as you said, we angry on them but can’t do anything, that why maybe i burst out on sanskar for my frustrated state omg.. silly me ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
        i’m graduated and now start to build my own business, come from Indonesia, weird isn’t ? ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

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