Guys I am too busy so no time to bak bak but I will do bak bak in next episode
Sorry for short update


Episode starts with raglak entering inside their house,
Ragini in nervous voice, ok, I will sleep in this room.
Lucky just nods.
Both are in auquard situation, so no one dared to talk, so both moves towards there room.
Ragini enters in that room but forgot to close door, her eyes fall on her mirror which was showing her reflection.

Ragini moves her hand on her face, thinks, am I this much bad that everyone hates me,
Why god why, you always give me pain, why it always with me.
For other people mirror shows virtual reflection but this mirror is showing me defeated and helpless ragini who dont have anything, which is fully dark from inside where no light of happiness, only darkness took place in my life. I always wanted that from now I will live happily but, no every time destiny plays game with me and make my life hell.

She sits at that place with thud sound, she cries bitterly, I am sorry swara, I am sorry for what I did with you today, I always wanted your happiness and for your happiness, I xan go to any extent, so today I sacrificed my life for your happiness swara, I know you will be very angry on me but I am helpless, I didnt had any option to support you because If I would not had been acted bad and as lucky wife so whole life you would not be able to move in your life because you whole time would be thinking about lucky only but now you will hate me as well as lucky and this will help you to move in your life swara, but I am really happy swara that I could help you in your life, I just pray for you that you will live happy life, again I my life played with me and now I am living with lucky just for agreement only ,

Ragini wipes her tears and thinks, from childhood I didnt got love but after my mother death, guardian supported me and I gone through so much painful life but I didnt got my love. But I still remember that day when I mate with sanky, he is really good guy who always took care of mine and supported me in every bad situation,

He was only person who helped me to come out of me hell life, I started liking his friendship and I got attracted towards him, because of his care, support and friendly love towards me because he was also alone in his life, I have seen his struggling life but always he supported me as good friend even if he was in deep tension, slowly slowly I started thinking that he has fallen for me only, I always used to think that he helped me too much so he must be loving me, so I started dreaming about him only, I had different type of love towards him which is not found in couples but I had some attraction towards him.

but my destiny again played, he didnt loved me, he just likes me as good friend but not more than that, which again made broke down in my life which is unacceptable for me.
I just thought to live my life with him happily but no he has some attraction towards swara. So he wanted my help to make swara out of this hell life, I also wanted to see my friend happily, so I got happy to see swasan marriage because now my both the friends will be happy in their life because my life is just like joker who dont have any value, neither any love,

While doing work with lucky, I dont know what happened to me I started attracting towards him but I dont know it was different, the attraction towards sanky and lucky was totally different, I dont know what type of attraction I had towards lucky and this is reason, i kissed him, I know very well how much I cried that day, but sanky was there to support me as always as best friend, but the day at which I crossed limits with lucky, from that day only I just took out the thought of living happy life in future because now no one will accept a non virgin girl who slept with strangers, that day again made big hole of my life but I never complained to anyone because it was not his mistake also but one thing, I know I cant get love in my life, I just suppressed my feeling towards lucky also, thats why I tried to go away from him, because I cant accept one more break down in my life, I cant break down again. But destiny played with me and I came to his house.

Just than she hears knocking sound of door.
Ragini immediately stands, lucky comes towards her.
Ragini makes herself presentable in front of lucky.

Sanky takes swara in his house.
Swara sees his house which was not better than maheshwari mansion but it was good house where any one can live closer comfortable.
Sanky shows her room and says it is our room
Swara- our room means
Sanky – mine and your
Swara – angrily I can’t live with you
Sanky – but you have to live with me because you have no chance
Swara – no I can’t live with you got it
Sanky holds swara hand whisper please come with me
Swara resist but sanky holds her hand and made her sit on the bed

And he sits on his knees where his face and he was seeing swar.
Sanky places his hand on swara hand and continues I know you are very angry on me because of my deeds but please try to understand swara. I didn’t did anything which hurts you, all I did to save you swara please try to understand
Swara – in stern voice never please don’t start this drama again, I will not come in your trap
Tears escaped from sanky eyes but he hides it,
Sanky – it’s OK swara, its fully your wish, I will not say anything
Sanky stands and goes and bring tablets
Sanky – swara this is your tablet
Swara – but how
Sanky – I brought this tablets before only so eat it and sleep today you are very tired
Swara don’t resist and eats tablet,
Sanky made her lay down on the bad .
He sleeps other side by giving good space between them
Swasan thinks of their past life.
But no one slept

Background music

Khamoshiyaan aawaaz hain
Tum sun-ne to aao kabhi
Chhookar tumhe khil jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqaraar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..

Silences are sounds,
Sometime, come to listen..
They’ll blossom by just touching you,
Sometime call them home.
They’re restless to talk to you,
Let them speak..

(swasan were seeing each other with painful eyes of there past relationships and what all happened now, but no one open each other mouth but still sanky was feeling her pain)

Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyaan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyaan

Silences, yours and mine,
Silences, wrapped around us, silences..

Kya us gali mein kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahaan se zamaane ko guzre zamaana hua
Mera samay to waheen pe hai thehra hua
Bataaun tumhe kya mere saath kya kya hua

Have you been to that street ever (again)
That the world hasn’t passed by for long..
My time is stuck there only,
What do I tell you what has hardened with me..

(sanky thinks of his past life and his bad days where he thinks no one would have gone at that place which is worst, swara also thinks of her dreadful past)

Khamoshiyan ek saaz hain
Tum dhun koi laao zaraa
Khamoshiyan alfaaz hain
Kabhi aa gunguna le zara
Bekaraar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa.. haan..

Silences are a musical instrument,
You bring some tune,
Silences are words,
Come, sometime hum it with me..
They’re restless to talk,
Let them speak for a bit..

Khamoshiyaan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyaan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan

(sanky can feel restless tears of swara, but he has guilt thet he is also one of the reason of her tears but couldn’t speak because the dead silence of this room is speaking many things without uttering a word, only little cold air voice was coming in the room but full of pin drop silence )

Nadiya ka paani bhi khaamosh behta yahaan
Khili chaandni mein chhipi laakh khamoshiyan
Baarish ki boondon ki hoti kahaan hai zubaan
Sulagte dilon mein hai khaamosh uth-ta dhuaan

Even the river water flows silently here,
There are a million silences hidden in blossoming moonlight..
Where do raindrops ever have tongues,
In burning hearts, there is for rising silently..
(sanky place his hand on swara cheeks to remove her tears but swara don’t give any reaction because she was totally involved in her own thinking)

Khamoshiyan aakaash hain
Tum udne to aao zara
Khamoshiyan ehsaas hain
Tumhe mehsoos hoti hain kya
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zara.. haan..

Silences are sky,
Come, come to fly..
Silences are feelings,
Do you feel them?
They’re restless to talk to you,
Let them speak..

Khaamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khaamoshiyaan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan

( sanky was removing swara tears but no one was speaking but both were feeling touch of each other body in this bad time also which was making them calm from this all worries and tensions, but only heart beats sound was coming inside them because of there touch
Slowly after some minute of there silence love both slept)


  1. Rosey

    |Registered Member

    i must say ragini’s character is very twisting but i like her character
    and sanky how cutely was he trying to pacify swara

  2. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    Heyyyy broo……………………… remember me………………. ur chotu sis yashu………………. ohhhhhhhhhhhhh god u have done such a marvellous job i mean dnt hav words i can connect to each emotion and really hav tears in my eyes !!!!!!!!!

    Hats off to u bro…………………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i’m speechless in ur honour………

    awesome epi………….. just looking frwrd for happy moments between swasan and raglak…………………….. hope they get a happy life………….


    willing not to comment but cant control myself hoping for some raglak moment but again you did not give it. Hope get them in next part plz dont make next part boring by long flashback and normal convesation between raglak because in whole ff from 1st episode getting only on or two raglak moments otherwise they were talking about their previous life.feel bad for ragini hope in future she got true love and swara will understand her why ragini do that

    • Pathan


      First of all I am not writer who will write anything
      My stories are always taken little slow and one more thing just for raglak I can’t ignore swasan because swasan readers are reading story so daily swasan are must of this ff because I am happy by swasan readers that no one told that I gave more raglak part but all supported me and one more thing they all also supporte me when I wrote any raglak special but here raglak fans are 3 to 4 only and they don’t have much problem with swasan because they are reading for story not for useless swasan and raglak fight and in this only 2 to 3 are there including you who are pure raglak and you guys never give any good comment even if I write raglak part but you will always bring out useless mistake so as a writer I know very well where to give raglak or swasan scene and one more thing raglak were taken neatly in this story

      One more thing till yesterday you were bashing me because in story ragini was shown negative but today when I showed ragini positive than again problem
      I don’t know your thinking criteria
      One more thing if you really can’t say good things to person than we should also not say bad words also because I am also human and I told you before now raglak love story will start than also you are not understanding anything, I told this thing 100 times but I don’t know what is going in your mind, I really got pissed of you guys tantrums

      One more thing I know you will feel bad but think about me who madly thinks of its readers that they will never feel bad but you guys never gave me any satisfactory comment.
      So before pointing out any one first think 2 times

    • Pathan


      Hey ankita I can understand ur problem but yar trust me and if I give good raglak scene than at least give good comment because your every comment dissapoint me

      I think you got my point of view

    • Pathan


      You have to think little with broad mind because at this time it is needed to show ragini good Character and without giving raglak scene only her character can be revealed so today episode was needed but you told you dissapointed but I think you only like romance part only as you told I don’t like normal conversation so what is remaining in it either some happy time or romance which can’t be given now so understand story don’t revolve your mind around raglak only
      Think about story not on this fans fandom fight

      I like criticising comment and suggestion type comment but I hate these useless immature fans fandom comment

      • Ankita

        I am not talking about raglak romantic moment as you already said there love story is coming soon I am expecting there touchy moments so don’t assume youself

    • Pathan


      So please have patience in all these touchy moments and all
      Don’t do hurry everything will come but slowly slowly as story will proceed
      We can’t give anything directly

      I know what type of scene you want but for that you have to trust on me that you never do

    • Pathan


      Oh god leave it
      I really don’t want your trust
      I am fade up of all these arguments
      Because this thing will never make you understand anything

  4. Mica

    |Registered Member

    what is this Pathan ? no your bak bak, no joke time, no intense romance…:D πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    *igniting fire
    oohhh poor Ragini…. Laksh there for you Dear!
    Sanskar’s heart beat for Swara only…

    • Pathan


      OK from next time I will give joke time and bak bak pakka and about romance scene that are coming soon
      Just wait for ahem ahem ahem in this story

      Thanks for liking story

  5. Vidhi

    Wow the swasan moment were awesome…. 😘thank u for the update… N ragini did for swara wow she is so sweet 😘😍😘😘😍😘😍

  6. Riya

    Lovely episode… Feeling bad for Ragini… When I read Ragini’s part I was felt to cry… Very emotional episode…And the song was also very good… One of my favourite song… Waiting for the next episode… Stay happy and blessed… Keep smiling…

    • Riya

      And one more thing where is joke time??? Its really disappointing 😩… I know that you are really too much that’s why you didn’t do your bak bak also(don’t feel bad) but one joke is needed… But it’s OK no problem I can understand you situation… And the translation was also very good…I know that you took it from internet but it also took a lot of time… But I really like the episode so don’t feel bad…

    • Pathan


      Oh god I replied to you before but I think couldn’t replied
      OK I am again writing by the way I also think from now I will surely give joke time that is really very good because it make story good
      And don’t take tension on next episode I will write good bak bak

      But really happy that you understood about my struggle in song selection it really means a lot to me
      You are really good
      Keep smiling always

  7. Shruti

    First of all thnx 4 chusing dis song…Bcz dis z 1 of my favr8favr888888888888888 song….But der z a big wala reason 4 lving d song dis much….OK d ep was really vry nyc….D translation also..I know tht u tuk it from net….Feeling bad 4 my cute Ragini n 4 SwaSan also..Stay blessed n keep smiling always…

    • Shruti

      Hey dont feel bad whatever u did in this ep it was really heart touching..N no need for ur bak bak..U can do it in future eps also…

    • Pathan


      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I am glad to see your support towards my ff and don’t take tension in next episode I will give long bak bak which will be in place of today’s bak bak so wait for next episode
      Thanks for liking ragini
      I know you must be happy today

    • Pathan


      Yes Di she is very mahan thats why I was telling to wait for 2 episodes but some useless reader cant understand anything

      It’s OK you don’t like but I only had two options either to make her mahan or to make her negative which is unacceptable by pessesive readers so batter to make mahan
      But what to do Di raglak fans badly wanted to make her mahan so I have to make it but then also, no one praised me and told some useless mistakes except you Shruti and Riya which you guys always do

      • Pavani

        |Registered Member

        He he he yaa I know u was little irritated with some raglak fans I can understand but plzz don’t take them wrong bro they like u nd ur writing skills so they were expecting raglak story from u that’s it ya I know it’s hurting u by their comments but they really love u.iam not supporting them iam just telling their view nd I already told u there will bee bashing while writing but take them positively nd goo onn those will make u strong to face the society I know I have given a big lecture but I just said my view if u feel my words are fake then also no problem it’s ok just try to understand them don’t start hating them we all love you

    • Pathan


      No it’s OK Di you are correct but I don’t know what type of hurt they are if I write raglak scene than also they will bring some new mistake
      I saw these type of useless comment from my slums story where raglak were really having better love story than swasan
      There also

      Here in this story when ever I write anything about them
      If I wrote there s*x scene also in that 3 to 4 gave me lecture and told there useless point but now what they did really I am pissed of all these fans fandom

      But don’t take tension
      I will write good raglak story even if they say anything
      You know very well only on your words I told to write good raglak story so don’t take tension there will be very good raglak story

      • Pavani

        |Registered Member

        Yep I know u r writing raglak track only for mee that’s y I always supports you nd ya iam not tensed about the role I was little concedered that may be all these things u may not hate ragini that’s it nd don’t worry we can not satisfy every reader that doesn’t mean we are not good writers as a writer I can understand ur intention as I too faced this type of bashing in one of my ff where swasan fans used to say will u doo this with ur hus and all then I just laughed at their immeture toughts

    • Pathan


      I don’t know Di about your ff but you are correct this thing is common in swaragini but don’t take tension
      I know these fans fandom always create problems but leave it
      Because I am writing for 3 to 4 people who always support me that are you Shruti riya malika sreevinjay

  8. xavia

    Oh my goddness…wt wz dat bhai……m just dumbfound….u r amazing….d way uhhh potrayed der feeling wz just awestruck…….n i knew it uh won’t make ragini bad……so dear bashers do uh wanna say anything now….i think ua mouths r zipped ..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…..yahooooooo ….n nxt tym before bashing think abt ua wrds n abt whom u r talking…..keep smiling alwyz bhai……😊😊😊😊

    • Pathan


      Wow sister such a good reply to bashers

      I am happy that you liked ragini positive part but I was telling from before to these bashers to just wait for 2 episodes because sabar ka fal mitha hota he but these guys didn’t understand and bashed

      But it’s OK I am happy that you trust me unconditionally

      • xavia

        Uh r ryt bhai …sabar ka fal hmesha mitha hi hota hai …bt dez bashers r too much restless dat they can’t wait fo 1 or 2 episodes to reveal d mystery…..i hope now dey will thnk thrice bfr typing doz unacceptable wrds….

  9. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Well done Irfan…. loved d way u portrayed Ragini’s self conversation…
    it’s very painful to know about it… But don’t worry Ragini time is going to change ,, ur life is going to change ,, ur sorrow is going to convert into happiness ,, u just have some faith to GOD…(it’s for some readers too)

    Coming to SWASAN part ,,,, it’s really pleasurable for mee..Sometimes silence speaks more then word n work..The song u selected wass preety much perfect with d scene..loved it…

    Sanskar’s heart only beats for his princess… awwwwwwww…. thiss iss soo true… if u didn’t tell me na though i knew itt… it’s UNIVERSAL TRUTH…like sun rises in d east ,,, n my SWASAN love each other unconditionally…. *board smile*

    But Swara don’t u trust him ΒΏ*confuse* huhhh u do u doo ,, that’s why u r with him…. accept it okkkk….

    Thnxx Irfan for d chappy…

    • Malika

      |Registered Member

      Kakali please forgive me. 😒😒😒😒😒😒 and radhika is saying that we are fighting like them. Just read her reply. I didn’t get any email from you. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        Really dii ??? but i did … don’t know what’s wrong ΒΏΒΏΒΏ today also i mailed u…just cheek once dii…

        n about Radhika she iss a sweet kiddo ,,, she is just joking…

      • Malika

        |Registered Member

        Yes but we really are not fighting naaa like raglak. Tom and Jerry. Just tell me one thing did you email radhika if she reply then tell her about me. She will explain you mine situation.

    • Pathan


      Thank for your beautiful comment kakali and really thanks for liking ragini part

      Oh I know your sanky loves your swara unconditionally so don’t take tension he will make her understand

      One more thing swara will soon understand him and his care because now she is little scared about it

  10. Mahjabeen

    Aahh bro i m really confused wth rags charcter…well c did all dis fr swara..its rlly gud..hope truth come out soon…nd swasan scene ws too good…loved it…waitng fr nxt

  11. Angel-16

    wow! what an emotional chappy Bhai…. Literally I feel like crying…. how could you write so good about everyone’s feelings….? I mean seriously day by day you are making me a very big fan of yours…. plz post the next part soon….

  12. Malika

    |Registered Member

    Raginiiiiiiiiii feeling bad for you.!!!!!!! What is this yr irfan. Hate you. !!!!!! She suffered a lot. She sacrifice everything for her friends Swasan. Aaaaaaaah. It was emotional yr when I read ragini scene. It touch my heart. Why why so much sadness. Can’t see her like that man. When I read ragini part tears was forming in my eyes but when I read swasan part I started crying. Everyone swasan, ragini, and laksh also suffered a lot. It was really painful yr.

    Yes mica truly speaking .ragini !!!laksh is there naa for you don’t worry. He will fill your life with happiness and love. For swasan they need each other company and support. Irfan you are very bad. You made me cry!!!!!!! Aaaah i missed her yr. I missed my friend after reading your ff. You say that you don’t know how to write emotional scene then what is this.??????? Y

    Update soon!!!!! And yes if you get time please be regular. I know you are busy still please. Can’t wait for next ep. Keep entertaining us but not like this ep. I don’t want any painful and enotinal scene . Sorry if you feel bad. May Allah bless you.

    • Pathan


      I am happy to see your suggestive comment but what to do story badly needs emotional part and in ragini part if I would not had added emotional scene to make her positive and didn’t told her mahan work than raglak readers would really had bashed me.
      So I really trying my level best to keep story liked by every readers but from next time I will try my level best to best to decrease emotional scene because from now emotional scene are too much in this story

      I am happy to see your amazing comment towards my ff

      Don’t think much about your friend because now nothing can be changed but just pray for her that she must be happy whenever she is

      • Malika

        |Registered Member

        OK boss I can forget her in my mind but not in my heart. I always pray for her and you all also. Don’t worry about them . If they truly love ragini then they will understand .

  13. sanya

    Amazing yaar I love Rags Charakter poor Girl….Feeling really Bad for her…n also for swasan 😒😒😒😒😒

  14. Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    hey !!!!! pathan πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    howz u……

    in previous chappy i didn’t able to comment more of my health issue ..but m fyn dis tym πŸ˜‰

    coming to chappy….
    superb part as always πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    ur writing skills are awsm .
    give some to me that i can score well in my law subjects πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    ya… post asap….tc…

    ya ya bhabhi se milne ta tareeka pooja ko pasand aaya !!
    carry on guyzz…!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    • Pathan


      Thanks for liking my story and it’s OK I can understand ur studies are more important and don’t take tension of commenting whenever your are free you can comment on my ff
      And it’s cool you liked mine idea

      By the way in your laws subject you have to merge up everything

  15. Tharu

    |Registered Member

    I just got chance to read your ff as I was not well..so ragini has sacrificed for swasan …you have amazing writing skill but when it comes to me I always got low marks for literature..waiting for next part…

  16. Tharu

    |Registered Member

    I just got chance to read this ff as I was not well…but it made me feel better…so ragini has sacrificed for swasan and I am swasan fan and I believe that you will never do injustice with ragini or raglak…..writing skill is awesome but when it comes to me I got low marks for literature…waiting for next part..

    • Pathan


      Oh really thanks for liking my writing skills but I don’t think I have good skills because I don’t use good and effective words in story but really it means a lot to me
      Thanks for giving time to read story

  17. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Good going brother.. πŸ™‚ The thing I like about your story is all the characters are grey shaded..I don’t know about everybody,but it is human nature to satisfy his needs..So the things which he does can be accepted or rejected..If they are accepted,he becomes mahaan or else shaitaan..Sorry thoda mera bak bak zyaada ho gaya..Anyways lovely episode and loved all the characters.. πŸ™‚ Stay blessed.. πŸ™‚

    • Pathan


      No need for asking sorry Di but really your comment made me happy that you are liking my story
      It really means a lot to me
      You are fully correct Di at your point ,
      Keep smiling always

  18. Zoya

    Awesomee it was too good specially the way sanky pacified swara I really love sans kar’s character in ur story

  19. xavia

    Bhai uh vr saying in prvs epi cmnts dat uh r goin to end ds ff soon plz don’t do ds…..uh olso ended love in slums too soon…. bt if uh r really goin to end ds dn plz cm back wid new season or new story….cz i dun want to lose my 1 n only bhai……pijjjjjjjjjjjjjj….

    • Pathan


      I will end this ff after 10 to 15 episode when I will feel that is correct time to end this ff
      So keep loving this ff and don’t take tension I have many ideas for other ff

      • maha016

        yes irfan my exams are but really i was busy now more then before because one side neet coaching class and other side i want to study books also so i cant write my ff i just cant manage all this and just now i came from neet class after 3 hours


  21. Saanvi

    |Registered Member

    Well I know I’m very much late but sorry Irfan I was very busy all these days..I hope you understand because we are from same profession..
    Feeling very sad for Ragini..Although you don’t like Ragini I’m impressed the way you designed her character beautifully with emotional side πŸ™‚
    Khamoshiyan meri favorite song hai..So nice to see that as background music for SwaSan πŸ˜€

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