SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE EPISODE 21 (SWASAN GUILT , RAGLAK SPECIAL)

happy ganesh chaturthi to all my readers, i forgot to tell yesterday
hi guys i think all are amazed to see me this much early but i got time so wrote next part
guys i got to know that people really wanted to take story in next level, i am also thinking to take story in next level but i was thinking to take after 3 to 4

episode but i think people will loose there interest from story and many not like this track so i an thinking to take that track within 1 to 2 episode and i will wrap

up that part in 1 to 2 episode, that part is before swasan marriage, so i am thinking in this way to take this track little faster and do swasan marriage by seeing

viewers reaction. i will take that part little faster

link of episode 19 of this article – http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-19-irfan-pathan/
link of episode 20 SWASAN HOT ROMANCE PART of this article – http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-20-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
LINK OF all episode of whole article of this story is – http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+unwanted+relation+with+my+husband+freind+
and link of whole article with new name – http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swaragini+fixing+broken+relation+is+it+pure+or+impure
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REAL LOVE STORY OF RAGLAK WILL START AFTER SWASAN MARRIAGE ONLY
EPISODE STARTS WITH swasan were looking each other, there was intense eye lock between them
sanky sees tears from swara eyes which were oozing out again today,
again guilt took place inside her, swara knows this whole mistake of her only, she only did this mess again, swara don’t say anything, so she tries to go out of sanky

grip but sanky holds her tightly
sanky- whisper please don’t go swara………..
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RAGLAK PART
IN PARTY
ragini was standing at one place, lucky comes towards her
lucky- ragini why you are standing here
ragini- i am not interested in all these parties
lucky- oh its ok
ragini- your work is done
lucky- i don’t know but i think today it may be completed let us see what happen next
ragini- but what you did
lucky- gives her smile, you will get to know soon
ragini- oh its ok
lucky- do you know ragini
ragini moves her gaze towards him as he must be telling some serious matter and nods
lucky- i completed my one work yesterday and i think one more work today it may be completed if it is completed than i will be free from all mess
ragini confused what work and which mess
lucky smiles and smirk at her yesterday i made swara sign on divorce paper
ragini shocked what
lucky sees him and gives her winning smile, yes ragini i gave her divorce, now my one work is completed and one more work i think today it will be completed
ragini in serious tone which work you are talking about
lucky – you will get to know soon
ragini- ok
lucky- so i want to give you treat of my winning
ragini- what treat
lucky- let us go i will take you to my favorite place
ragini- which favorite place
lucky- let us go na
ragini just goes behind lucky,
lucky stops his car infron of ice-cream parlour, lucky signals ragini to see towards parlour,
ragini confused ice-cream parlour
lucky happily yes let us go,
he moves out of car happily
ragini got confused by thinking that lucky like person going towards ice-cream parlour that is also a road side type
lucky turns while going, ragini what are you doing here please come yar
ragini- yes i am coming.
ragini confusingly goes behind him murmering that why he likes this place
lucky can see her confused face and ask what happened ragini
ragini- vo vo… i am asking why you came here for eating ice-cream
just than shopkeeper replies mama he daily comes to this place from his childhood
ragini again got another shock, she sees lucky doubtfully
lucky gives her assuring smile and says don’t think much, first eat this ice-cream than i will clear your every doubts
ragini nods and gives fake smile to him
shopkeeper gives two ice-cream to raglak
lucky while taking ice-cream ragini it is special ice-cream of this corner,
RAGINI while eating wow its yummy
lucky- i know it is famous one of this place
both raglak eats it while ragini was about to go towards car, please stop ragin lucky says
ragini turns towards him, what happened
lucky- come with me there is garden
ragini again goes behind him
there was silence between them
lucky while looking beauty of garden, how this garden is ragini
ragini- its good
lucky- i know you will like it, and this is one of the place where i used to come here when i was living my happy days of life
ragini confused what
lucky- why that ice-cream parlour is important to me
ragini- yes tell
lucky- it is because in my childhood till 3 years before i used to come here daily
ragini- oh
lucky- i was very happy at those time of my life i and swara we both used to come here to eat ice-cream here and sometimes uttara also comes with us in childhood
ragini- you swara and uttara
lucky- yes ragini when i was small in my childhood from that time i used to come there
ragini- you really had good relation with swara than why you are taking revenge from her
lucky- you know reason
ragini- but i did’nt satisfied with your reason lucky
lucky narrowed his eyes and ask what
ragini- because i don’t think that is perfect reason for this revenge
lucky sees ragini, just gives her faint smile, ragini everything has its strong reason but its not correct time to tell you everything because i can’t tell anything

before completing my second work
ragini- its ok i understand but please think before doing all these things
lucky- yes i know it
ragini- by the way your sujata mom of ram uncle, where is she
lucky- i don’t know about her where she went
ragini confused i did not understand lucky
lucky- sujata mom left ram uncle
ragini- what
lucky- yes
ragini- but why
lucky- because of her boyfreind and money
ragini- i didn’t understand
lucky- sujata mom father married sujata mom forcefully to ram uncle, she never wanted to marry him but she had to do marry because of all these bussiness, sujata mom

was not happy by her marriage but still she was living with ram uncle for society sake,and gave birth to three children but when ram uncle came on footpath,she could

not live like this life, she always took help of her boyfreind to get money, both used to meet daily because sujata mom could not forget her love, she thought that she

can forget him but she could not forget him, so there life was going like this only ram uncle and sujata mom had hitted argument everytime because sujata mom could not

take care of children properly and she was very confused in her life, first she was not able to take care of there children properly, other side she was not able to

give time to her boyfreind and her husband, she was too confused in the mess created in her life, she also was not able to live in poor life, she was very

uncomfertable at this place, her life was fully messed, her boyfreind always told her to leave ram, she was not able to give that love to ram uncle also, so in her

children, her husband, her boyfreind and in proverty she was not able to understand what to do, her life was fully messed by all this things, so she decided to suicite

and she killed herself and by falling in river,
ragini- i am sorry lucky for asking about this i can understand your black past
lucky- its ok
ragini thinks lucky you don’t know real truth of all these incidense, you only knows what everyone told you but you don’t know reality lucky, it is just half truth but

real truth is different which i can’t tell you now lucky
but she tells lucky i can understand everything but whenever you take next step please think twice
lucky-i know ragini please don’t take tention
ragini- yes its ok
lucky- ya sure
ragini- now it has became too dark, we should leave from here
lucky- yes i also think so
both raglak goes and lucky drops ragini to her house and moves towards his house
ragini in her house thinks oh god ragini there is too much mess in all there life, i have to think to go for next step because no one knows my real idenstity…….
while lucky in his house thinks now its time to proceed on last stage of my work……..
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swasan side
swara did not cared about his words swara again tries to go out but sanky was adamed to not to leave her
swara cries please leave me sanky
sanky while holding her tightly no
swara stoped protesting she sees into his eyes and shouts please leave me
again swara was about to go sanky holds her and whisper till when you will run swara
swara gets shocked by his statement she sees him in full of shock
sanky understand she wants to hear his point of view, so he slowly sleep beside her and takes baedsheet and wrapes both of them in one badsheet only, both were still

nude, now swara tries to sit but sanky again takes her in his arms, swara head was on sanky arms, she was inside his arms both were looking each other very closely
swara breaks eye contact, ask what you want to say
sanky makes his grip on her more tightly, i am just saying till when you will run from reality swara…………………
episode ends on shocked face of swara

PRECAP- swasan emotional conversation, story takes leap,
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i know you all are too much confused about character but don’t take tention now revealation time is started of this ff, after wraping up this part in 2 episodes, your

each and every confusion is cleared because it is high time to reveal all suspenses in this story and i already decided that after swasan marriage everything will be

revealed in this story
GUYS I FORGOT TO GIVE YOU BEST WISHES FROM YOUR EXAMS BECAUSE I GOT TO KNOW MANY PEOPLE EXAM IS STARTED, SP STUDY WELL AND HARD
ENJOY TODAY SUNDAY BECAUSE I THINK TODAY ALL WILL BE FREE
ONE MORE THING GUYS MANY ASKING ABOUT ME AND BHABHI, SO SHE IS STUDYING IN SCHOOL ONLY AND SHE IS 2 YEAR YOUNGER THAN ME AND WE BOTH ARE BEST FREIND FROM CHILDHOOD

ONLY AND ABOUT OUR ENGANGEMENT AND ALL I WILL TELL YOU NEXT TIME BECAUSE TODAY I AM LITTLE HURRY SO SORRY FOR THAT

116 comments

  1. Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    swasan forever……. ๐Ÿ˜‰
    loved it !!!!!!!

    awsm
    superb
    amazing……. chappy…..

    post asap…….. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    ya enjoying ur day with little bros & sis ……. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and yes I am enjoying with friends and both little monster
      Big thanks for liking my story part
      How you are enjoying your today

      • Pooja26

        |Registered Member

        aree nothing much yr…. ;( ;(
        ghar mai baithi huin……..
        boring weekend h yeh…..
        no parties ……
        no hookah……;)
        nothing……..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh it’s OK I can understand but enjoy with your family people that will be too good and amazing experience and your Bhopal has many places to visit like lake view and many more amazing museum which are really too good
      Bhopal is fully nice place you can visit everywhere and that db mall is also Amazing and it’s pub also

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for liking swasan part
      One more thing you know very well that I am too busy than also giving episode very fast so it will be short update only
      But in next episode you will get long update of swasan thanks for commenting

  2. Mahjabeen

    Awesome awesome awesome rlly loved it…nd wats raginis real identity?m relly confuse abt it…nd rlly its so sweet, so good to knw dat u nd bhabhi were best friends n nw u both wil b life partners..congrats bro..waitng fr ur nxt part…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Ya you are correct sister that we both are good friends so we will not have much problem in future and really thanks for liking my story and everything will be revealed soon and how is your Sunday planning

  3. Ashnoor

    “HAPPY GANESH CHATURTHI” to u to bro . Awesome episode ……and swasan and raglak scenes are cute . njy your Sunday . And what’s ragni ‘ s real identity waiting for the suspense to be out .

  4. mou(swasan lover)

    swasan part r too gd.I hate lucky to core of my heart.ek ladki ke sath aisa kaisa kar sakte hai……………….

  5. Jj

    Hi,it is really a nice chapter, I like swasan scene very much. What is lucky plan. How dare he cheat swara and got sign from divorce paper,I think lucky know about swasan relations. But ur plan will be backfire,because swasan are together their after stupid laksh he very unlucky man. Ragini is correct without now the full truth he want to take the revenge stupid and backbone less man,without brain god created this type of stupid man, but don’t worry swara god close one gate,really open the next one. So lucky will get out ur life,and sanky will enter with ur life is full of love so don’t worry. I will wait for next long swasan emotion talk. I want to see ur full talent, because emotional scene wrote is very difficult to give the proper words ,ooat of all writer may be fail for heart touching scene. So be careful. “Happy eid Mubarak”

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for giving such big comment on my ff
      Oh god you gave me big challenge of writing emotional part but I will accept this challenge and I will try to write good part of emotions scene
      I am not good writer but I will surely try to write best emotional scene and you will tell whether I could reach up-to your expectations or not
      Oh god you hate lucky the most I can understand ur feeling but everything is not revealed till now, it will take time for revelation
      Yes from now swasan will be together and thanks for giving such amazing comment everytime and what is your real name

  6. Anjali30

    |Registered Member

    Everyone has been telling me a lot about ur work, so I sat down and decided to read this….
    I Srsly liked it a lot!!!

    You know how to deliver emotions and I enjoyed the plot a lot!!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    I am a swasan fan in general.. but I like Raglak too…. and love the characters of all the 4…..
    Waiting for the next!!!!

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for taking your precious time to read my story and commenting here
      I am very happy to see your comment
      Here I don’t read any ff but I heard your name from many people that anjali is top writer of swaragini page I don’t know name of ff but I know that you are top writer
      And for like me writer it is really blessing that like you good writer is liking my story it really means a lot to me
      Keep smiling always

      • Anjali30

        |Registered Member

        Aww.. That’s really sweet of you to say….

        I am no top writer and all…. But I have been here a long time…
        I have heard a lot about u nowadays.. and i also read the article you wrote…
        My sentiments exactly!!!!

        I’ll def read ur story.. But sorry if I can’t comment in each chappie…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god thanks for reading my article and I am really happy that you also have some point of view
      But I know that you are very good writer

      I never thought people will praise me this much about my story

      It’s OK I can understand about comment for me most important thing is that you are reading my story and about comment you can give anytime it’s your wish

  7. zoya

    Seriously it was awesome but confusing too u r really a very good writer and u show emotions very well…..waiting for the next

  8. xavia

    Hiiii bahi …hwz uh…EID MUBARAK in advance…..cmng back to chapoy it wz osmm…bt too much suspense oh gosh..plz reveal dm soon….

  9. Kakali

    Is it short??? nooo i don’t think sooo… I know u have a busy schedule though u give us chappy… that’s really enough for me…
    Day before yesterday u gave us ur chappy… n again today..this is not done… now from where should i collect words to describe about todays chappy…????

    coming back to chappy i will say just one word “”BEAUTIFUL””…!!!!
    i like this Laksh thoda thoda ((only like not love))..that too for Ragini…coz he is soo calm with Ragini…

    about SWASAN scenes… it was less but had a great impact on mine…. M just thinking what is Sanskar going to say?? after that what will be Swara’s reaction?? i just hope that everything will be perfect…((coz i know it will,, just eagerly waiting for that)) Thnx Irfan for d chappy..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment kakali and everything will be fine between swasan just wait and watch and thanks for giving such big comment of analysis it really means a lot to me

      Oh god kakali really I don’t know that you are this much liking my story keep liking it always and stay blessed
      Keep smiling

  10. Angel-16

    omg! what a pleasant surprise Bhai…. you post it really soon….. thanks for this chappy…. n its really very nice…. hope everything will be revealed soon…. eagerly waiting for swasan’s marriage…. n yaa once you told that your ff will come to an end after swasan’s marriage…. is it true….??? plz don’t end it so soon…. plzzzzzzzzzzz….. by the way how are you….???

      • Tamanna

        |Registered Member

        I am really sorry… Actually I was busy so didn’t comment…..

        Today I read all the chappy that I missed…..and all of those were amazing….

    • Pathan

      |Author

      I can understand ur problem aapi and thanks for reading whole part and liking story and keep supporting my like this and aapi sorry I couldn’t reply your message today but surely I will reply to you tomorrow because today i was little busy on all this things

  11. Jj

    Hi,my real name is Jaya and studying 1yr bsc.computer science. Has I will see how you write emotional part,and I am surely comment that part,ha I am challenging u because romance part it very easy to write, but the emotional part I not a cup of coffee it is very difficult but I am eagerly wait ur see the emotional side of writing, because ur good writer, OK I am waiting.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh very nice name you have but you told that romance is easy but really for me writing romance was very tough because I have to think and relate the romance part with day to day life activities this is most most toughest job to do because it takes too much long time to think that which will relate with romance part

      One more thing it is also very tough to write romance also because we have to think how much extent to take that reader may not feel vulgar because I don’t use vulgar word and I have to explain everything in different ways so romance is very difficult part for me

      I think emotional part I gave on this story many times of swara and raglak and sanky also in previous episodes I gave emotional part of you see

      But surely I will accept your challenge of writing emotional part

      So in next episode your work is to analyze Mr and give your feedback whether I could reach up-to your expectations or not

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and praising me

  12. Anjali

    Hey bro sorry for late reply but what to do now I woke up. And I read your ff. It was awesome and fabulous Really. Love raglak. I’m a big fan of raglak . And please reply this because tomorrow I can’t as I will go home your jiju give me permissions. And did Mubarak in advance to you. Later I will talk to you I think someone has come.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      First of all eid Mubarak to you also on advance
      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my today’s part
      I don’t know that you are this much big raglak fan and I know you are totally confused with my story but don’t take tension it will take little time to come out of all revelation and suspenses but you will really enjoy it
      So I got to know how you fall down from stairs so it is fully your mistake only and jiju did correct to scold you because it is really carelessness
      But oh god you were really this much excited when jiju comes even if you are allowed to meet him, really you are too romantic in all this things and jiju also he is very good and caring person and he did correct to scold you and your parents also did good work to support him so that next time you will not be this much careless about your health, by the way from next time don’t become this much eager to meet jiju, suppress your feeling so that you don’t get accident next time
      And you told that we boys are same but we are really same and good also that we care about person and jiju is correct and I support him. Most importantly thing please do take care of yourself not for you but for jiju, because jiju cares a lot of yours

      One more thing so you admitted in jiju hospital It is really good and amazing experience where jiju is in front of you full time it’s good but don’t take this experience next time

      Think if by chance some deffect in your body may happened or may be your mind become little bit disturbed so it will affect your whole life so take care of yourself and don’t do this thing next time so that jiju feels bad of himself that because of him your condition is bad and this question may really arises if I would not had come at this time so you wouldn’t had gone with such accident so automatically it is affecting jiju and he will also not able to work properly and will surely affect his work because of tension that your condition is not good and also somewhere a guilt that because of him you got accident
      I know it is not because of him you got accident and he also don’t have single fault also but it’s human mind and all human finds there own mistake that they think that they are responsible for this mess

      I don’t know much about jiju but I just told common point of thinking of person
      Sorry if I hurt you from my comment but you have to take care of yourself it is must

      And yes don’t take this name again of death and all its not good
      And I am happy that you will be freed tomorrow from hospital
      Keep smiling always and stay blessed
      Take care of yourself as well as jiju

      • Anjali

        Yes you are right in fact you are absolutely correct. But it’s a small wound still tomorrow I will apology to him and your imagination is seriously I think bhabhi is very lucky to have you. I will show him this reply but I didn’t do it intentionally. You don’t know me if someone is hurt because of me I will said sorry that too in front of our family Nd all people.I didn’t get hurt in fact you show me the correct way. I am really happy to have you .

        Best of luck for your challenge . I will take care of your jiju and me also. Everyone don’t get true love I have seen it. They always fight in fact they kill their lover. I am always afraid of it. I trust him but still I’m afraid . What about you. How was your day

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for supporting me anjali in my emotional part challenge
      Take care and sorry for this much big reply and take care of yourself
      And be happy always and keep loving jiju like this

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god I am not that much good but I am little mature boy only this and thanks for complementing me for this thing and really I know you are also not at fault it is fault of destiny because we don’t know anything can happen with us but always there is small reason and we just think about that reason if this thing I would not had did nothing would had happened but reality is that we are not fault but destiny always gives reason of all bad thing happened in our life but we think it’s our fault and I know you are really very good person and no need to ask sorry for him in front of everyone because it is not your mistake it is mistake of destiny
      If by chance we think that the work which we did because of it we get injured so does we really knew before that we will be injured but answer is no we don’t know anything but one thing you must note every bad thing happens only by giving reason but they are not correct reason

      OK but you can talk to jiju personaly and just comfort him all the matter rather than saying in front of family just confront him when you both are alone

      I enjoyed whole day with friend and my sister’s son and daughter and also made chowmin for everyone of my house and friends because they specialy came to eat my hand cowmin

      Please don’t take tension about love and all if your love is pure then no one can separate you
      One more thing your family is happy with your both relationship so there is no need of worry about this thing of death

      And about my point of view I will tell you tomorrow because now I am going to sleep
      Good night
      Take care
      Sweet Dreams

  13. SWARA MALIK

    Hmm i am also thinking to take new step towards u
    n
    m frm NEPAL m 4 yrs old
    n m illiterate (uneducate)
    i dnt knw anything

      • SWARA MALIK

        I will only be happy if u be wid me only naa
        sry fr kidding i am 14 yrs old study in grade 10

        aap appi marriage date bta dena hme maybe i can replace bride ..hahahaha

  14. Pavani

    |Registered Member

    Hey bro after a long time actually I was also busy these days soo sorry for not replying nd u got engaged????really??omg y that much hurry u r still younger for all these its ok that’s ur wish nd enjoy the new change in life nd about episode it was nice nd I was eager to know about rags past

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh yes after long time I saw your beautiful and amazing comment Di
      About rags past it will be revealed soon
      ————–
      Yes I am enganged but reason is there that I will tell in next episode and Di ya in very young age I engaged because she is my good friend so I decided to live remaining life with her only
      How is your health and stay well always

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Di I am just engaged only and nothing more then That
      And about marriage it will happen only after completing my full doctor degree only till then I will live my bachelor life only

      And after this engagement also nothing changed in my life she live her life on her own and me my own we both don’t interfair
      Thanks for asking your doubt Di and if you have more you can ask Di it’s your right
      Take care of my jiju and your baby

      • Pavani

        |Registered Member

        Then it’s nice u can enjoy a lot nd can have some romantic eye locks in every meeting (hey naa) I know altough she is ur best friend till now but the feeling of ur better half is different nd enjoy these days nd understand her completely nd make her to love u as u r (I was saying as u told she was a school girl her mind set will be different ) no doubs iam happy for u nd ur future always bee happy nd congratulations

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks pavani Di for best wishes and yes after our engagement and all she became formal to me so we both are little formal to each other but usually talks when ever we meet
      Keep smiling always Di

  15. Anjali

    Hey bro I’m back again . First thing you said that everyday you don’t write romance ep I agree with you but I was saying about yesterday and raglak,romance in room swasan romance in I don’t know . Second thing on telly update I am unable to register or login otherwise I could have message you personally . Third thing you really want to know how I fall so listen .

    That day I was alone at home. My parents were attending a wedding but before they went , they informed your jiju so that he would come at my place to spend some times. I was chatting with my friend in Skype. At about 20:30 approximately I saw your jiju coming from the window Nd without losing time I run to meet him. I was running in the stairs that I slip and fall down and then blank. I got hurt in my head and loss some blood thank God I didn’t loss my memory haha……. AND yes your jiju scolded me a lot. I have one question for you are all boys the same. Because now a days everyone even my parents Are in his side. Tomorrow I will go home thank God your jiju give me permission.

    Coming to thing ep. Tell me one thing how many past did laksh has yaar. ?????? What Are swaragini planning.?????? What is the half true??????. What is ragini really identity ?????? Soo many questions at a time. I really love raglak part it was fabulous and awesome .swasan part was superb. I really love your writing skill and imagination . Seriously I am becoming a fan of this ff because I have never ever this type of ff in my life. I really want to know the reality. Really your ff is full of suspense . And sorry for any grammatical mistakes and eid Mubarak to you in advance. I will take care of myself and you also take care.

    I have read that some one is challenging you to write an emotional scene so best of luck because I know how difficult it is but you will succeed. Waiting for next ep. By the way how was your day on Sunday. ????? ND SORRY I will never use this word I have die. Sorry.

  16. Anjali

    AAAAAH SUCH A LONG COMMENTS SORRY BRO. I THINK IT’S YOUR TURN TO REPLY MY QUESTION I WILL WAIT BUT PLEASE REPLY TODAY ITSELF .

  17. Jyotii

    |Registered Member

    I heard a lot about uh frm my few TU frnds n came here to read it…. Wooww…. Its too good. I like the concept very much… I rarely read ffs here cuz of mu busy schedule. Even I hv taken break in writing.. But reading this gave me an ultimate pleasure… Coming to this chappy…. I luvf swasan in it…… M damn confused about Ragini…. Who is she??๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
    Anyways I ll try to be regular and read this!!โ˜บ

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thank for your beautiful comment
      I am glad to see that even if in this much busy schedule you took stress to read this ff and I also thanks to those person who liked my story and told you
      Yes every confusion will be cleared soon as story proceed
      Keep smiling always

  18. Jj

    Hi,has u wrote already emotional science,but it is different. First u wrote swara part yaa it is not emotional but I can understand her pain in that part,after raglak part yaa that little but emotional for her past but not up to react heart sorry. And next sanky and his father part yaa that also emotional scene l like that ,but friend it all about related to him past life. But this not like that how sanky convenience his full emotions is coming up to his heart,to explain swara how he feels at all ,hope u u understand the differences, what I will told. And thank u like my name. If I hurt u with mycomments i really very sooooooooo sorry please.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      I am not hurt

      I am happy that you wrote what you thought and about next part seriously telling I also don’t know what I will write I think it will be like that part when sanky comforts swara at the time of there first s*x scene in hospital I think you remembered it so this type of scene it will be there
      I think you got sketch of next episode bu
      One thing is clear that sanky Wil not speak to his heart out in next episode
      But if I say really really I also don’t know what I will write in next episode because I didn’t planed anything in this story about future much

      One more thing the way sanky comforts swara before that type of scene will be there and I think that was emotional one only which was liked by mane people but let’s see what I will write next

  19. Riya

    What to say????Awesome episode as usual… And story isn’t boring anymore… I never felt that its boring….Belated Ganesh Chaturthi to you too…And Eid Mubarak to you…. And yesterday I was busy with celebrating “TEACHER’S DAY”…Stay happy….

    • Riya

      And I am not getting Ragini’s character properly… What she is up to???What she want to do????What’s her real intention????Who is she????What’s her real identity??? And how she knows Swara????? Enough of my questions…. But what to do totally confused about her character…

  20. Shruti

    First of all b lated Ganesh Chaturthi 2 u 22 n also Eid mubarak….D ep was really awsm….N yeah I dont think tht its boring…How can u imagine tht ur ff vll b boring???N about Ragini’s character I don’t think tht its not a proper character…Bcz I think tht der vll b a jhatka which u always gives…. Actually I m vry much bzy vth my studies…Stay happy n blessed..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and supporting me and same to you happy eid to you also as well as riya I forgot to say this thing to her and I can understand you must be busy in your work
      And yes you will get jhataka about ragini character so just wait and read story
      Keep smiling always you both

  21. Feriha_Tanu

    |Registered Member

    Just now came to home from clg after writing the exam …and checked the TU and found ur ff ….
    Hmmmmmmm
    Now I have no words to say ….wait I will think …hmmmm marvellous …
    I think it is also ..less .hmm no words
    It was super se duper se uper wala epi
    Coz my swasan …really bhaiyo u r awesome keeping smiling

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment sister and how was your exam and are all exams over
      Really I never thought you will like this much extent this story
      Your comment really makes me happy and study well keep smiling always
      Take care

  22. Anjali

    What is your point of view and today I did it. I say it wow I am very comfortable. Thank you sooooo much. Yes I am a big fan of raglak and ragsan also.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for it
      And I am happy that I could help you
      And eid Mubarak to you
      It mean you are fan of ragini so that’s why like raglak and ragsan
      But I hate ragsan from core of my heart because I really don’t like to change husband and wife
      I know all or 90% raglak fans likes ragsan as pair because sanky is most liked person of swaragini so that’s why ragini fans like ragsan
      Sorry if I hurt you by this fan fandom
      Keep smiling always

  23. Mica

    |Registered Member

    whoohoo, Laksh blinded by his one side story.. waiting swasan wedding ohohooo
    and Pathan.. omg…. the people on your ff are cheaters, the group of cheaters,, ๐Ÿ˜€
    luv it ty

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment mica but can I ask you one question why people on my ff are cheater
      Means by which reason you told that they are cheater I didn’t understand and really really thanks for liking my writing and story
      Stay happy
      Take care
      And please reply to this question

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        DP cheated Ap by hiding the fact that he was incomplete man
        Ap cheated DP, laksh cheated Swara, Swara cheated Laksh, sujata cheated Ram
        Ragini cheated swara.. see.. group of cheaters.. hehheheh

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh yes you are correct but I really wanted to show different cases of extra marital affair in this story but really you only knows 30% truth till now and most important and real truth is remaining in this story which will come slowly slowly just wait for it
      According to your point of view you are really correct

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        `i know, but somehow, no matter what the reason, extra marital affair kinda cheating to God, rite ?
        it’s OK for me Pathan, it just a story rite ? everything can happen according to the fabulous idea of the writer…it just kinda casual comment from me, no offense..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Yes extramarital affair is like cheating only but what to do it happens in every 3rd or 4th house of India so as a writer I should show the real world and nothing else
      Yes it is cheating but the pain which they go through really makes person cheater
      They are also not happy by this things but they have to go through this things in few cases

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        i know it, but by justified the reason behind the act, we kinda push them to the valley. Sometime being to not understand with their situation will lead them to the rite part instead of being understandable and let the wrong happened..
        aahh whatever the reason.. they are cheater…rite ? ๐Ÿ˜€

    • Pathan

      |Author

      It’s OK I understand
      Because you didn’t gone through this stage and you didn’t saw the people who are in prone to this things so you don’t know you are just thinking by taking yourself only
      You are not thinking broadly about other people and we can’t understand there situation till we are not suffered from it and yes overall they are cheater but they have to go through we can take same example with some poor who steals money because they are hungry and here is same condition

      But in this type of extra Marital affair in 85% cases people are wrong but 15% people have to go from this stage like swara
      I think you got my point of view

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        hmm.. why you take it personally ? i tld you already that i’m comment casually about your character.
        i know what your aim , but even if 15 % of them, should stand in that worst situation, we can’t hide the fact that they DO CHEAT, i talk about their ACTION, i didn’t talk about society judgement or my judgement..
        can i ask you, did swara cheat Laksh or not ?
        Did laksh cheat swara or not ?
        Did Ap cheat DP or not ?
        Did Dp cheat Ap or not ?
        even if the poor steals money for foods, we can’t hide the fact that their action called as STEALING
        i didn’t talk about RIGHT or WRONG, not yet, if i talk about rite or wrong, you then you can judge my point of view….wish you got my point.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      It’s not like that I didn’t take personally I am just telling about those people I was just telling that we can’t think about there condition properly because we never gone through this type of situation and I know your comment is casual but I told you the point of view of those people and yes I am telling that they are cheating but somewhere they have to go through this situation to live there life like poor people if he is not getting money and he don’t have any source of money he have to do stealing for surviving in this world
      So this is same condition of some people and don’t take tension I didn’t feel bad and if you hurt by my point for it big sorry from my side

      I think we should stop this useless discussion because nothing will happen and next episode I will post soon

      Keep smiling always
      Take care
      Bye
      If you have more doubt about this topic you can personally message me on tellyupdates and ask I will surly help you

  24. Jj

    Hi,yaa I will sketch the little thinks about next one. Yes I like hospital scene after her first s*x. Why sanky can’t speak her heart out,but I really think he love swara it has no doub about that one. Friend I frankly told u write anything about on swasan scene I really love that one,u have no doubt on its.OK bye goodnight.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my part
      Really thanks for liking hospital scene part and keep supporting me
      Everything will be revealed soon and keep liking story
      Stay blessed
      Keep smiling always

  25. mahi

    hi pathan i m back and my exams got postponded so i got a leave for 4 days but last 2days i was busy in my studies but now i m free till thursday and coming to the epi .i read all the epis which i missed and this epi it was really awesome what is laksh plan i m very eager to know it . the epi was really awesome.

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