SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE EPISODE 17 BY PATHAN (ANALYSIS ON BASHER )

GUYS I WAS FEELING SO DISHEARTED BY NASTY COMMENTS OF FANS TOWARDS SWARA, RAGINI AND VARUN AND I FELT INSULTED ON MYSELF THAT I AM WRITER OF DOUBLE FACE PEOPLE (ONLY

SOME BASHERS)I WILL NOT TELL ANYTHING HERE TODAY FIRST AND LAST TIME I GAVE ANALYSIS ON SOME VIEWERS DEMAND ABOUT BASHERS JUST READ THAT ANALYSIS AND ASKED EVERY

READER OF MY FF TO HAVE BOND WITH MY FF THAT IF THEY ARE READING MY FF THEY CAN NOT BASH ANY OF CHARACTER IN ANY OF THE FORUM, IF THEY DO SO THERE NAME WILL BE TAKEN

IN HIT LIST IN MY FF AND ALL WILL POINT THAT PERSON AND IF THEY CAN NOT BE IN THAT BOND SO THEY CAN STOP READING MY FF ALSO I WILL NOT HAVE ANY PROBLEM, BUT YOU HAVE

TO COME IN THAT BOND, I DO NOT CARE IF I GET 5 COMMENT ALSO I WILL BE HAPPY THAT I AM WITER OF GOOD PEOPLE NOT OF DOUBLE FACE PEOPLE,
DUE TO THIS REASON FOR 4 DAYS I DID NOT UPDATED MY FF BECAUSE I WAS NOT FEELING TO WRITE MORE AND TODAY I JUST WROTE LIKE THAT ONLY YOU MAY FEEL IN THIS EPISODE I DID

NOT HAD MUCH INTEREST
IF MY 5 READERS FOUND BASHING I GUARRANTEE THAT WILL BE MY LAST DAY OF SWARAGINI FAN FICTION BECAUSE I WANT LOYAL READERS
I AM TOO ANGRY ON ALL THESE STUFFS AND I TOOK OUT MY ALL FRUSTATION BY GIVING ANALYSIS AND THAT MAY BE UPDATED SOON
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episode starts with swasan shaking hands to each other,
just than sanky gets call
he picks it and says to swara that he has some important work so he is going
swara- gives him assuring smile
IN SANKY HOTEL ROOM
SANKY was doin his office work just than he gets call from neha
neha- hi mr, hotty
sanky- yes tell
neha- wow sanky you are too clever
sanky questioning means i did not understand
neha- oh do not become innoscent, you are really a drama person
sanky smiles proudly yes i am
neha- and tell thanks to us also that we did your work easy
sanky- yes but really hero is me only
neha- ya i know, so ready for mission
sanky yes
and both cuts call
sanky thinks deeply and says NOW IT IS TIME TO WORK ON MY MISSION FOR WHICH I REALLY CAME HERE SO GET READY SWARA MAHESHWARI………………
other side
swara was litle happy that now her biggest problem is solved, sometime her mind was saying that he is not good boy he always thinks about his profit,may be he must

came for some profit to me or may be not, oh god swara it is too much confusing,
swara ask question to herself can i trust him, is he worth enough to trust, may be yes but if he betrayes me and may use my goodness i really confused about his

character but onething i must clear that i should give time to understand and trust him because he can defame me also infront of everyone, so now we are freinds so i

will be able to know that this person really can be trusted or not
her mind is full of this thoughts only just than she hears docotr voice and he says now you can go to your house
swara nods
in this mean time sanky also comes to see her
sanky while coming inside room gives her smile and ask how are you
swara while arranging medicines in bag, fine and just doing packing and all
sanky-i will help you in it
swara- no its ok
sanky concerned please let me do this work
sanky puts all her medicine in beg says so let us go
swara questioning where to go,
sanky- to mumbai
swara- but my work did not completed
sanky- i know but now you must go to mumbai than come here to complete your work and now we both are working togather so no problem in it
swara- ok in dissapointed tone
sanky so let us go
swara- no i can go by myself you go yourself
sanky we both are going togather because you are weak so please do not become stubborn
swara- ok
both swasan goes to mumbai where sanky drops her to her house………
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raglak side
lucky was continuing his story
one day my father went to gadodia house for some work, he did not found shekhar gadodia so while searching he reached to shekhar room and he gots shocked by seeing her

wife like this, he could not understand anything all files from his hand dropped by this sound both ap and shekhar sees that and hurriedly wears cloths, my father only

could whisper are you annapurna
ap thinks now it is high time to reveal everything, she goes near him and says yes i am your annapurna only to whom you could not love properly, by her words dp can’t

undersand is she same women to whom he married
tears dropes from his eyes, but a rage of betrayel came in his mind and he holds her neck and shouts how dare you to betrayed me was my love not enough for you, my

care and everything was not enough for you but you betrayed me
dp pushes her and claps wow shekhar you are really a good freind of mine before he could complete his sentence the btrayel andpain given by her was not able to control

for him and he cried vigourosly like small child that he btrayed by his loved one
ap comes near him and says now stop your drama and go from here
dp stands and slaps ap hard and forces her to take with him
but she jerks him and says do not dare you to take me with you, now i will live with him and you do not have any power to take me with you because you already signed

divorce paper by saying this she throws divorce paper on dp face, dp got again one more shock
just than lucky also comes behind dp, he also got to know about everything, he consoles dp and says papa please come with me we do not need like this women
ap- just take your name sake father with you
lucky- do not dare to say like this
ap- what to not to say, you do not know his truth, your father can not give love to his wife as other person can do, i was craving for our intimacy but he has hormonal

problem and i can not live with this person those who can not give wifery right which every girl wants and this i got from shekhar and now i will live with him only

just take this person with you
lucky also got shock that what ap is telling to him, he shouts do not dare to lie for my father, i never thought that my mother will leave me like this
ap- huh mother, by saying mother she laughs, i am not your mother and he is not your father how can we have children when i am living with incomplete man
lucky shouts ma
ap- do not shout on me, your real father is ram kapoor about whom your father did not cared, he throwed them out of there house when they needed money just simple

reason that you will love them more than this selfish person dp, for his insecurity he did not cared about your real parents and throwed them out of house in there

critical condition with 2 children, i saw your father ram living in footpath life but this selfish person did not cared for one time also
for lucky these was like heartattack only, he do not know what is going on now, did ap is telling truth or anything else but today he only knows one thing that dp

needs him at this time so he did not cared about ap talk his mind was only revolving that dp is in pain and he only could whisper stop your non sense ap
ap- today you are thinking that i am doing my non sense but when you will got to know reality than only you will understand, he is very selfish person he knows very

well from before that he is not real man than why he married to me why he made my life to hell, but you do not know, when you will go from this position you will get

to know that how much i am correct, he is selfish person he only thought about his respect in society, because he did not want to get defame in society so married me

for name sake and made my life hell, every girl have there dreams of there marriage but this person spoilt my life, my will, my faminine desre and character everything
tears starts brimming in ap eyes by saying this words, lucky could clearly see this tears are genuine not for name sake but also lucky could not see understand the

tears of ap his mind still not able to understand what all she is telling for him these all things for him was out of world
ap continued he made my life hell now he also made your life complex by his selfishness and he thrown ram out of his house only for his own selfishness
by saying this ap sits on ground still crying she shouts take this man out of my eyes i can not see him for 1 second also, he spoilt my young age
lucky mind was in shock he was not able to get what is going on here, he did not know what all happened now, he ran out of house without caring about anyone, he stood

in garden area he also do not know for how much time he was standing there, he also do not know what is correct and what is not
he comes out of sense by seeing swara throwing dp out of the house, he gets shocked by seeing that swara like girl is helpig his father when he is wrong he respected

swara alot but today she lost all respect the way she was accusing dp and shouting on him this made him furious and he angrily shouts stop your non-sense swara and he

takes dp with him after this dp was living like lifeless, he also told his deeds, i know he did very bad with me and ap but he was also not fully wrong at his place

but god had given him punishment for what he did with me and ap but i never left him my love towards him was same as before even after knowing the whole truth because

i know this time he needs me too much, he really loved ap ma but ma left him, she never cared about me and dad, my dp dad only had hope that may be ap will come to

meet him but she did not came she was too much angry on him, she did not came to meet him, he many times called her for asking sorry for what he did but ap ma never

tried to think about us that time was my worst time of my life ragini, at that time i lost everything i got big shock the person to whome i loved most and the people

about whom i was thinking they are my real parents but i was wrong at that time all made me fool that they are my parents, when i got to know real reason at that time

everything was messed up, i know dp is person who separated to me with my father but i can not leave him because from my childhood i saw him in my father place only

and he was repenting to his deeds he was in very bad condition and living in worst stage of his life god automatically given him punishment for his deeds so i did not

left him, i gave same respect to him so that he forget the pain about which he was going through, i never realised him about my pain because i do not want to increase

his pain, daily i used to cry myself in my room craving for my parents love, yes ragini those childrens whose parents having extra- marital affairs there children life

is like hell, they are not able to get pure love from there parents and which all happend to my ap left me, she even did not thought for me at one time also, she did

not thought about the love which i gave to her, i never go against to him but she left me, i loved her more than anything but she left me, i betryed by most important

and most respected of my life, yes for children there parents are like that most respected person but both had lost the respect from my eyes, my ap mother started

lving her life in other house than shkhar house because they know they can face humilitation but that women humilitated dp father in public that he is incomplete man

which made a huge loss in maheshwari empire my life became sorrow of bucket where only sorrw is there no love no care nothing, i did not get to know about real parents

and neither they tried to contact me i know my real father was working in gadodia company but he did not came to see me in my life worst stage, ragini in small age i

saw the dreadfull face of this world which no one saw, i became empty i felt loneliness, my real father did not came, my real father was knowing everything but atleast

for me he must come, i had to stay with dp because he was in last stage, only one thing he everyday whipered i am sorry lucky for what i did with you and in some

months of his pain he died in my arms, my one hope of happiness was lost, now i was alone after him, i have to see maheshwari empire who lost its charm, for year i was

living in one room i did not go anywhere i forgot the real world the happiness everything ragini, but after dp death also my father did not came to see me i needed a

shoulder but there was no one to see me, only one person came that was swara she usually used to come and see me when my father died but i never resisted her in

anything but i hated her most in my life but i never got to know to her that i hate her, BUT STill i was lonely in my life than i thought nothing will happen by all

this things now i have to become strong and i came infront of world, i had to face humilitation but i accepted each and every humilitation of this world my only aim id

to make maheshwari empire again in top of this mumbai and that i did
this was my past ragini, he told while tears were coming from his eyes by thinking about this worst days of his life

PRECAP- LUCKY CHANGES MEDICINES OF SWARA, SWASAN MOMENTS
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109 comments

  1. Ashnoor

    Bhaiya character of swara, ragni and sanskar are superb . Well it’s something different from real serial but a fantastic one . Anyways it’s my one of the favourite ff for which I just can’t wait to read the suspense . Don’t end it plz . Point of views of different persons are different. So don’t feal bad about it .

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Ya they are different from main serial character but it is needed and I am frustrated by girls act by there bashing comment but I am overwhelmed to see that it is your favorite ff and you liked my work

  2. Mica

    |Registered Member

    ahh god, swara getting revenge from both side ? laksh and sanskar ? O.o
    yess… extra marital affair mostly affect to the children..

  3. Pathan

    |Author

    Guys in my anger I think many of my readers may felt bad but guys I want to say that you all are very good I know many of you may felt that I am not trusting on you but guys I trust you unconditionally but guys and I think in my ff all are good readers but at least I think may be by chance if there is exception do I told like this but if other felt bad so for that big big sorry

  4. mahi

    IRFAN dont worry about that. we are here na and coming to the epi it was really awesome touching moments and feeling sad for lucky. dont worry yaar

  5. Anjali

    Hey pathan don’t feel sorry andI’m confused dear. I’m not understanding what is happening and really really sorry for not commenting on your previous ep. Can you give me the previous link .

  6. Anjali

    Thank you so much. I have read all. It was painful and emotional yaar. And yes the analysis on basher I was completely shocked yaar. I didn’t have any idea about this and I understand even I am a writer. Your ff is fabulous can’t tell you. The way you give equal importance to raglak and swasan it was superb. Continue like this.

    Aaaaaaaah. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 many are not recognizing me because my logo had changed. Sor ry for my bak bak ha ha….. Anyways update soon can’t wait. I’m loving your ff. You are becoming my best writter .

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and immense support towards my ff and I am happy that you are writer and a writer is liking my ff I really got happy to hear this thing

  7. mou(swasan lover)

    irfan vai juth nahe bolonga main srif swasan lyk karta ho
    yeh fiction parta ho only 4r swasan n apke written skill ki bajse.bt mujhe Raglak main koi interest nahe hai.bt mujhe raglak se koi prblm bhi nahe hai.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      So you are boy isn’t it brother
      I can understand ur likeness and dislikes I will keep this thing in the mind
      Next episode will be fully swasan

  8. Pavani

    |Registered Member

    First of all tnk u for showing luckies struggle nd I hope now people can understand his emotions nd as usual it was a nice epi

  9. Angel-16

    what an emotional chappy Bhai…. It was really heart touching…. feeling bad for lucky…. n plz don’t end it so soon, reading ur ff is becoming my habit n post the next part soon….. n haan no need to say sorry…. we can understand ur pov…. even I too thinks the same as u….

    • Pathan

      |Author

      I will not end this story my sister and I can understand toye feeling I am overwhelmed to see by seeing your love and support towards my story
      Thanks for ur beautiful analysis

  10. Jj

    Hi, it is very nice and pain full chapter. Oh correct extra affair is affect the childrens. But dp did a big mistake, because before marriage he now that have hormones problem, then why he marry ap it really a big betrayal for every girls,and do is selfish man who don’t care about women’s feelings. But I don’t now which work will sanky want to start. He to want to take any revenge for swara,oh no this suspense I can’t sleep properly. But I don’t know why swara behave like this with do,I think it defently have any reason because can’t do this. Please don’t finish the ff so soon please. Oh I am not a double face girl,I told its from my heart in every chapter. I don’t like ur ff I told frankly. But I like no o love ur ff. I ready ur all ff slum love and one more ff please sorry I forgot the name its all r my favorite. So I love ur ff so much so don’t be sad..OK goodnight.

    • Mica

      |Registered Member

      haa.. you are rite, both DP and AP did wrong thing
      first, DP should tell the truth before their wedding….
      and Ap, why u didn’t ask divorce first ? hmmm…..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      I am overwhelmed to see that you read my all story
      You are fully correct that extra marital affair make children life hell
      In this story both are incorrect dp as well as ap but first mistake was done by dp and secondly by ap so both are wrong but mostly dp and everything will be cleared soon and i am happy to see your analysis in my ff keep supporting me in this way only

  11. Shruti

    Just marvellous.. How can u write this much beautiful episode???? Stay blessed…☺☺😊😊

  12. Mica

    |Registered Member

    what laksh did, he did the same as DP….
    i dunno the reason of Swara throwing DP ?
    she did it because of her father or because laksh ? i mean she heard AP’s story that DP had given sorrow to laksh’s parent ? so, because she loved laksh, she couldn’t resist herself to hurt DP.
    but she taken care to laksh when laksh alone, rite ?

    • Pathan

      |Author

      That reason I will tell soon may be you are 50% correct and thanks for giving analysis
      You will get to know soon but it will be strong reason only

  13. Riya

    Its a lovely and emotional episode…Feeling bad for Lucky…. But I can’t understand Sanky’s character…. What he actually want to do???Seriously very confusing character…. Waiting for the next episode….

  14. Kakali

    Hufffff!!!!!! u again made me speechless…😊.. this is not done😩… what should i say now????

    Seriously the chappy was too painful n emotional… each n every word of Laksh was heart touching…specially d way u express it,, was out of d world…. i had never thought he was going through this much!!!!

    bt at d same time feeling very bad for Swara… LAKSAN both r taking revenge on her… poor girl….😒

    u know what ur FF is one of my fav FF…u give equal importance to the both pairs…which i love d most…. n d reality u show here through ur words its just fabulous….Thnx for ur amazing FF… u r soooooo rit “” REAL WRITER IS THAT PERSON WHO LIVES IN THE HEART OF WRITER””… coz u actually live in our heart…😊😊

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god it is really amazing comment for me I can’t believe that you will love this ff unconditionally
      I am not that good writer but I am really happy that I made place in your heart
      Thanks for liking my writing skills and yes lucky past is very bad and he had to suffer too much in his small age but everything will become good soon

  15. Saanvi

    |Registered Member

    Laksh couldn’t control his desires in his marriage with Swara so he opted other sources for s*x but he even now blames Ap for opting other option for her life…I pity Laksh for his diffrential thoughts…May be Ap also went through the physical n mental torture which Swara is going through in order to control her hormonal functions…So Ap has gone to Shekar…
    I know you left suspense wantedly as of why Swara threw Dp out of the house…I guess you will reveal that with a twist and dhamaka πŸ˜‚
    Please make Laksh understand that logic soon and turn him into a positive character πŸ˜›πŸ˜…
    You threw light on the fact how extramarital affairs effect children…It’s shown very nicely…Keep it upπŸ‘πŸ»

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks Di for your suggestion yes in this thing lucky is wrong on his different pov and yes ap also went from all this things
      Both ap and dp is wrong but lucky will become positive soon

  16. sweety

    Hi pathan I’m new to swaragini ff but after I read one episode it makes read all episodes and ff of urs I don’t no how many ffs u wrote I just saw yesterday from yesterday non stop I’m reading u r ffs I read 2 ffs slums and dis one both r awesome
    But I have one request pls I hope u will fulfil I want lak want to feel guilty for doing wrong on swara
    Pls make genuine reason for swara to throw dp out of d house and I want lak will find out d reason behind swara through out dp plss plss plss and I want lak want to feel sry for unnecessary torchre gave by lak plss plss I want DAT episode badly if I said wrong r hurt u pls forgive mee but I’m u r fan super ff and y lak change medicines plss do realise lak pls

    • Pathan

      |Author

      First of all I am overwhelmed to see that you are new here but liking and reading my story I only wrote 2 ff before on swaragini page but I Am happy that you are liking my story and I will go through your suggestion only he will suffer but later
      Thanks for ur beautiful comment

  17. Vidhi

    Very emotional one…. Feeling bad for swara as well as laksh as both has to suffer πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

  18. Kakali

    u r engage… woooowwww!!! it superb… it means she us our bhabi..(((hope u dont mind if i call u bhai😊))). awwwww congratulation … may this relation beings lotsss lotsss lotsss of happiness in ur life.. stay blessed…😊

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god thanks my sister for your wish toward me and you can call me Bhai I will be happy and I also wish that you get your prince soon

    • Anjali

      And you know what after seeing this pictures I am remembering mine engagement haha…. πŸ˜‚Now I understand why you are not regular you must be busy.

      • Pathan

        |Author

        No anjali I am not able to talk to her also I usually meets her in any program and function or party
        That also very secretly I have to do all plannings to meet her so for me all this things are too difficult to meet her anytime because in our culture they don’t allow to meet boys and girls before marriage so

        I am happy that you are engaged also by the way what is your age

      • Anjali

        I am 19 years old soon to turn 20 and I am too young that I know. In my culture we are engaged earlier.. After two year I will married but I will continue my studies .
        I understand dear haha… How difficult is it. You must be missing her right and is her name aayat if I am not wrong. Such a sweet name like her.

      • Anjali

        Hey after two years I will not get married soory for mistakes . Like you after my studies l will. Sorry for mistake.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh very good anjali so in which community you belong
      I will marry her after completing my study and I am happy that you will marry after your studies

  19. Kakali

    Thnxx bro…. but chilll u r going tooo fast… m just 17…..me n my family have many dreams to fulfil… after fulfilling them i’ll think…😊..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      No I will marry after completing my study
      Only and I can understand you are very small age my sister study in good way and fulfill dreana than marry

  20. Naughty pumpkin

    Oh wah oh
    Congo bro
    Mubarakaaaaan
    Frm where ? Pak r india
    Ayat nyc name
    New relations
    Blessing
    God bless u

  21. xavia

    Hiiii bro….hope uh remember me ….i olso cmntd on d last epi of love in slums……congrats fo ua engagement…..may uhh live a happy life ahead…..sry i know m tooo late bt wt to do i wz ltl bit bzy dez days……n coming back to d chappy seriously i frgt all d wrds…wt to say amazing osm fab dez wrds seems to b small fo ua writing…….

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