SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE EPISODE 13 PATHAN (SWASAN KISS, RAGINI GUILT)

must read guys- first of all i am overwhelmed to see 100+ comment in consecutive 2 episode so for that happiness enjoy long episode, i never thought you all will realy

love in this extent its a big pleasure for me
second thing please not that yesterday i read saanvi os as she gave me link, i know many of you think that i do not know about fan fiction page how can i read her os

so the reason is i tolf her that i can read os so she gave me link of that os so i could go through it but mote that i can not read ff because i do not get time but

guys that os is really too too much amazing i tell you must read, i know you all have faith on me so with this faith just read her os, because when i read i just loved

that os it is really amazing and please do not go with the pairs in this os, i know pairs are ragsan but guys there are no intense ragasan scene so you can read it and

after reading that os you will realy say that yes ragini and sanky were needed in that os and it is highly inspiring os so just read without bothering about pairs you

will really love it its my assurance and here is link you just go through and read you will not regret it, for link click here – http://www.tellyupdates.com/pride-nation-ragsan-os-saanvi
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link of episode 11 of this article http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-11-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
link of episode 10 of this article http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-12-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
link of all episode of whole article of this story is http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+unwanted+relation+with+my+husband+freind+
and link of whole article with new name http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swaragini+fixing+broken+relation+is+it+pure+or+impure

today i gave you 4 joke time because today part is emotional so must read joke time
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episode is long and i did not do proof reading
episode starts with the heavenly couple swasan were sleeping peacefully,
it is fine morning, air was very cold and fine which was flowing smoothly after rain, some rain droplets were also present in air, birds were chirping with full of

pleasure of cute morning, now the sun also comes to increase beauty of surrounding which made to open eyes of both couples
swara slowly opens her eyes she feels something hot on her chest side she sees sanky and same happens with sanky both see each other there was unnamed silence and eye

lock was between them, now they invvoluntery stand infront of each other and highly embrassed by seeing each other, both shouts nooooooooooooooooo……..
and turns there face,
swasan hurriedly pics there clothes and wear it
after wearing clothes
swara feels pain one her body and main organs, she thinks may be she slept with sanky, she screams noooooooooooooooooooooo it can’t be true
sanky turns his face and comes towards her to hug her
swara jerks him angrily in full and he falls on ground in she was in full rage by thinking what she did today everything of her night was coming infront of her eyes,

her intimacy her moans, her lost verginity, yes today she lost her verginity, she again scraems loudly that this can’t be truthn no no i can’t loose my verginity, i

can’t betrayed my husband, her mind stoped working her subcontious mind took lead on her mind, she knows she wanted this thing in her life, she badly needs it but she

never wanted this thing to happen with her with stranger, she madly sees marks of her hand of there intimacy, she moves her hand here and there and see markes on it,

she touches her neck she can feel all marks, she cries loudly oh god oh god………… tears of helplessness comes out of her eyes, she cries bittelry while seeing

her hand which remarked loosing her verginity, her head revoles round that what she did, she cries i can’t do like this i can’t…………………
sanky comes closer to pacify her she again jerks him madly which made he falls on ground but his head injured due to hitting but swara did not care about it, she was

lost in her thought, her sound of crying increased more, she is not state of accepting this truth, her eyes became big like cow due to excessive crying, only she could

use one word no it can’t be true, her eyes fall on sanky where blood was oozing out on his head, but we didnt find a single layer of concern on swara eyes, may be

layer of spark came to see him in blood which may decrease her pain by seeing him pain, her eys were totally showing mad hatred towards sanky, sanky understood swara

is out of control she can burst out any time on him like wild lioness, sanky tries to stand up but before that he felt immence pain on his right cheek which turned

into red, now again he felt pain on his left cheak, his eyes falls on blood boiling eyes of swara which were seeing him that anytime she can kill him, whose hands were

working to slap sanky madly, sanky angrily holds her hand and shouts have you gone mad swara, why can’t you accept this fact we intimated last night, swara jerks her

hand, ohhhh fact wow your so called womaiser fact, you will not have any problem but before she could complete again tears comes out, now she holds his collar and

punches him hard on his stomach which make sanky rinse in pain, she also punch on his main point by her leg which made sanky fall on ground with thud due to pain, she

angrily shouts this is punishment of yours to play dirty game with me,
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joke time
kya mausam aaya hai..

har taraf pani pani failaya hai…

tum bahar mat nikalna,
nahi to aisa lagega ki,
barish hui nahi aur mendhak bahr aaya hai…
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she sees the love marks given by sanky to her body which she hated most she can’t see this marks which was always making her remember her last night intimacy, for her

rather than that mark the mark of stick or of hot rod was good which give only physical pain when it is touched but these marks are giving her mental pain her

helplessness last night her lost verginity, her betrayel to husband, most important loosing her self respect in front of her only she sees them ” no i do not want this

mark i can not see them anymore, she madly scraches her hand but than also they don’t scaratch she sees hear and there and takes stick and beats herself to remove this

unwanted marks of her skin which were giving her immence pain in her heart, this marks are like happiness for other girls, this gives them more pleasure by seeing this

mark this shows love of there partner towards them, no girls want to remove this mark but swara case was different this marks were giving her immence pain, sanky could

see her beating herself, he hardly stands from his place and jerks stick from her hand
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joke time
ladki (atm room me) : muje apna balance check karna hai,
aap meri help karo… plz…

ladke ne piche jor ki laat mari,
wo muh ke bal giri…
ladki aage ke 2 tute danto ke sath khadi hoti hai…

ladka : balance to bahot kharab hai tumhara…
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baad mein ladki ne aage laat maari,
wo naagin ki tarah rengtey rengtey gaya…
ladka abhi tak ghar nahi pahuncha…
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swara- please leave me
sanky was in full angerness no never
swara tries to free herself
sanky pins her to wall, he angrily shouts please swara calm down it was not your mistake, it is also not mine mistake swara
swara- so what you want to say everything happened between us was correct
sanky in understanding voice, swara sometime our hormones over power our thinking ability
swara angrily stop your good drama you useless person, i know like you leave me let me give me punsihment
swara was not stoping her blubber, sanky angrily puts his lip on swara blubbering lips to calm her
swara eyes were opened by his sudden act,
sanky in angerness and to clam her starts sucking and eating her lower and upper lips one by one, taking her one lip between his lips, he starts giving torture to her lips swara

tried to get away but sanky took grip more tight and took kiss more dipper to calm her, he starts swallowing her lower lips inside his mouth by pulling with his lips to test them fully now her lower lip is fully inside his mouth and fives her torture to forget her pain, he now takes her upper lips also just like swallowing in his mouth by his lips, now both the lips of swara were fully inside his mouth to whom he was chubbing, sucking like lolypomp and greeting

in his teeth and sucking them madly giving tortures to her, swara slowly calming down, her subconsious mind affect was decreasing, she don’t know again her

desire was making a way in her heart but she don’t want her desire to overpower her now, in one way she was enjoying it and other way she was feeling disgusted by his

act but sanky was doing his works, still her both the lips were inside his mouth which were forcefully fixed by his hard lips now his tongue was touching surfaces of lips and moving overall the lips to to decrease pain and make her calm down, his tongue exploring her both lips, sometime enters insdide them to reach her mouth and taste her honey but he was tightly holding her, now he looses the grip of his lips which were holding swara lips which

made swara to take some air inside her but still her full mouth was in his mouth only, she could feel his hot breath was entering inside her body with air because she is taking air of his mouth only this was making her calm, her

subcontious mind was fully controlled now,his hot breaths was reaching every part of her body which was making her whole body and every part to feel relaxed, sanky could feel relaxaton in her body, swara unknowingly

enjoying it and his breath was like healing every part of her body from inside, sanky also calms down by sweat taste of her lips where still her both mouth were inside him they were fit like in matchstick box lower potion in which all matchstick are kept is wrapped by upper portion, in this way only both the mouth were fit where upper portion of matchstick box was sanky and lower or inside part was swara, now he moves his head

back to take out her lips from his mouth which were fully inside his mouth, swara lips were sticked in his mouth but it detached as increase in separation and her lips came out of his mouth,

he can easily sees swolen, red lips which was fully wet due to his mouth, but both the bodies calm down by this needed kiss, swara did not understand what is happening with her she falls

on groung unconssiously but sanky takes her in his arms and took her to hospital,
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joke time
baburao : aye raju… aaj meri kutti ne anda diya…
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raju : ye kutti kab se anda dene lagi…
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baburao : ye baburao ka style hai re baba…
apni murgi ka naam kutti rakha hai…
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in hospital
sanky was restless outside the room,
after sometime doctor comes and he ask about swara health
doctor- see mr. kapoor her condition in very bed, the medicines which she daily takes was directly affecting her mind, they were destroying her nueral system, becuase

these hormanal tablets and this high dose sleeping pills directly affect her mind, because they are working on her nervous system because there work to make her mind

to subcontious mind, so that people can forget all there worries and hormonal problem, in subcontious mind they sleep so by taking daily these type of pills she has

hormonal imbalance also, due to daily interference of this medicines in her mind is creating problem in functioning of her brain so whenver she gets angry and she is

sad her subcontious mind overpowers her, she looses her thinking ability in front of her subcontious mind, the thing which is running in her mind only comes again and

again whoch she can’t take it so for this this type of people think to harm themself so that there pain can be removed they never think of good and bed in subcontious

mind so she harms herself, but do not take tention i had given some injections which will make her normal but please remember one thing you should try level bes to

decrease her dependency on these medicines, because adverse affect of these medicines and excessive use of it will made her brain problems, and please try level best

to not to make her come in subcontious mind which is dreadfull for her……………….
doctor leaves by saying these words by leaving sanky speachless and in shock………………………
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joke time
must read
aaj kal to jiske 4-5 boyfriend hai,

wo bhi kahti hai ki,

“pyar andha hota hai…”

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arey ! pyar andha nahi hai bahan…

tune pyar andha-dhundh kiya hai….
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now its time to see raglak scene guys whats is going on there
in dubai
there was also sweat morning of hotel room where raglak were sleeping peacefully
small part of window was open from where sun rays were coming which falls on raglak eyes
raglak opens there eyes, first they feel it is hellucination or may be they are seeing dreams, they again closes eyes for sometime and opens it, after some confusing

eyelock both stands while shouting ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………….
ragini sees him turns her face while shouting wear your clothes (ragini body was wraped by badsheet and lucky was in his undergarments)
lucky gets totally embrassed by seeing him in this condition he immediately takes his clothes scatterd on ground by picking them where ragini was looking him

annoyingly
while picking he sees ragini upper garment, he ask whose it is
ragini thinks it is looking like mine garment but my garments will be on my body na but she feels her body loose loose she sees inside the blanket and found she did

not wear clothes now she screams noooooooooooooooo this can’t happen
till now lucky weared all his clothes and ask what can’t happen
ragini shouts how dare you to come in my room
lucky sees here and there and says are you insane it is my room you came in my room, he feels proud that she came in his room
ragini eyes falls on all over the room and finde she is in his room
ragini confusingly how can i come in your room
lucky- who know you must have only come

ragini- no i was in party after that, she stresses and says after that i do not know
lucky- hey you stop it but i know very well how i cam to my room
ragini questioningly how
lucky thinks but he says i also not getting anything but he sees that she has wrapped bedsheet so he ask, why you are wrapped in this bedsheet take it out
ragini- voh nothing (remember lucky did not get that she is nude )
lucky- what nothing he comes forward to take this bedsheet
ragini runs away to him she ask just stay away
lucky- while chasing her why to stay away, i am taking my favourite badsheet please give yar
ragini- no no
as lucky was moving he sees ragini lower part undergarment and her t shirt, he questioningly sees first of all we did not know how we came here and i was only in

underwear and second thing which girl was she her all clothes and undergarment are scattered on floor
ragini sees him in fear
lucky eyes fall on t shirt and ask this t shirt is of your ragini which you wore yesterday
ragini hesitately may be it is like my t shirt
lucky was very close to her now he takes his hand on bedsheet, he was about to take it from her body ragini shouts i did not wear any clothes
lucky sees her in full shock both have shocking eyes lock, there was silence in room both were looking each other in full shock now they are remembering everything

from morning like lucky clothes were on floor and ragini clothes also lying on clothes, they also got to know that in night after drinking that drink they don’t know

what has happend after it but by seeing some marks on ragini neck and ragini also sees lipstick marks on lucky face both came to conclusion and immediately shouts
s*xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
episode end on shocked faces of raglak as well as sanky

precap- sanky care for swara, swara tell everything to kavya and neha, raglak drama (which i will not tell now)

my hands are paining after writing such a long episode
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shock laga by seeing swara in full madness avtar, but the big shock was that sanky kisses swara in too too much intense way unexpectedly
i know many of you may be laughing by seeing raglak drama and loved it also and some also wants some funny and light hearted drama in swasan but that will come soon

because i can’t show funny drama because of swara that’s why
i know many of you wanted more in raglak part but i want to end in shock so guess what will be there reaction now think think think
by the way guys guess that now in normal state what will be swara reaction by seeing sanky, will she able to understand that sanky was also not in fault or some more

drama, just guess it is you can guess and what you feel of sanky character by seeing him today is something fishy or nothing or he is trapping her think about it
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by the way did joke time made you entertained in such a emtional episode or not guys
big big big sorry from my side that kiss was really too intense and vulgar but when i was writing, it wrote intense without my knowledge but you reallly did not like please say to me i know it is really vulgar

119 comments

    • Pathan

      |Author

      He will love soon because if he will start loving her now than there story will be ended this scenes you are getting will not be there so he will love later

  1. Pathan

    |Author

    Guys big sorry from my side I will never give this much intense and vulgar kiss and if you don’t liked it please please tell to m and you can criticize also because I want to go with you guys and again sorry for too vulgar kiss

  2. ami

    Hey Irfan PATHAN you are really romance king the way you gives romance in Amazing because romance is one of the weak point of writer but really you give romance very nicely with day to day examples it is really realistic
    Grim where you get this ideas to compare romance with daily needed things
    Don’t apologize it it is good romance

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god please don’t praise me this much I am glad to see your support towards me
      I am really happy that you are liking examples which are used in comparison of romance it is best thing for me
      Again thanks for liking my romance part

    • Anisha

      |Registered Member

      Mica ji???
      You are a child right?? You don’t read intense romance and all ha??
      Now what happened?? 😉😉
      You have problem with my romantic scenes?? Now what??…

      • Pathan

        |Author

        Hey anisha I can understand your feelings and I am really happy that you are reading my ff but we shouldn’t fight here in comment box you can go in private messages because people will think that Irfan PATHAN is using cheap tricks to increase his comments in ff and I didn’t give any too intense type of romance in my story but only this episode was vulgar you can go to previous episodes I gave s*x romance of swasan and raglak which every age group can read it so she read that part because they can’t have any problem for it I have given link also you can go through it
        Second thing every readers have different taste so we can’t force anyone
        But I am really happy by seeing your support towards my story and keep supporting in this way
        And if you felt my comment rude for that big sorry from my side
        You can criticize my story by writing I Never feels bed but I like it that at least you criticized my story so that you are reading my story and giving me suggestion so that I can improve in my writing but I can’t here anything against to my readers they are very important for me and all readers have some good place in my heart so I don’t like if any one bash them bit you can criticize as much as you can

        Sorry if I hurted by my reply big sorry for that and I am happy that you read my story

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        anishaaaa.. hahahhah, iizh i skipped the romance for sure (just the vulgar one, not the whole chapter, wish you get my point, on your ff, i skipped when i read c*nd*m), :3 :3 :3,
        i did also on pathan previous part, that why i just comment about swara unfaithfulness.
        now in this part, i commented about hand mark since i didn’t understand, what happened to ppl after getting romance….
        mostly i will read the ff casually before read all chapter to make sure where i have to stop my read or continue it.
        i’m not a child, but innocent lady :3 :3 :3

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        i have no problem with romantic scene since i can manage it myself..
        but it will be big favor to me if the writer give warning about the intense romance…
        i just so afraid that intense romance will eat my brain :3 :3 :3
        you know, i’m normal person! *wink

      • Anisha

        |Registered Member

        Perhaps…..
        Shall I tell you both something? Smarty pants??

        Mica is one of my readers she just mentioned that she doesn’t read intense romance when I saw her comment here…. I was just awe!!…

        And with that I just played a prank!!…

        Pathan!! Chillaxx!!… It was a prank!
        Mica😡😡
        U took it seriously??…
        Don’t talk to me!

      • Pathan

        |Author

        But really I will not get dreams that she is your friend Because it I see like this comment I usually don’t want because these type of comment unnecessary increases comment which I hate most and second thing it doesn’t look good in ff so I told like this but sorry if you felt bed but before this pranks please tell me first but it’s OK I can understand keep praking to your friends but really I replied you in hurry because I know there are many readers will surely bash you so I thought rather than creating fight I should comment you but please whenever you do prank just write kidding before it

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Mark in hand means when in intimacy many times bangles may broke down due to force and jerks from male partner and due to intimacy many times both partner nails may dig because of holding to each other so Mark may come on hand and but they don’t get to know at the time of intimacy

    • Pathan

      |Author

      By the way mica can you reply that when I used vulgar words in my romance section I think I wrote clear and neat romance in which there was not single word also I didn’t use it turn to vulgar in swasan part full part was descent that any one can read I think you got my point keep supporting my story in this way

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        hehehe.. let it be pathan.. using vulgar word or symbolic is doesn’t matter for me, as i know there is “something-something” i will stop myself… it’s about me.. don’t be bothered OK!

  3. Tamanna

    |Registered Member

    Awesome…. Really nice…. Kiss wasn’t vulgar…..the way you compare kiss with matchstick is appreciable….. Jokes are nice….raglak scenes were funny….

    • Pathan

      |Author

      You are really amazing aapi the way you are supporting me from starting is really amazing and I am happy that you loved comparison of kiss with box it really means for me and also liking joke part keep supporting me in this way

  4. Shruthis

    |Registered Member

    you have your unique style of writing bro. some may call it vulgar but in reality in is different right :)..romance is my weak point to write but you write it very nicely 🙂
    sorry I AM not able to comment on ur ff’s but seriously i am not getting time to connect 🙂

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh you are really amazing sister I am happy that you supported my writing and feeling parts that are not vulgar it is really means a lot to me so I am happy that you are writer I think you must be very good writer who gives such a nice analysis you must be good writer and I can understand that you are not able to comment in my story I can understand you must have some important work but you are reading story it is good for me
      By the way are you busy in studies or any other things keep supporting me in this way

      • Shruthis

        |Registered Member

        Recently i joined college for my masters in computer science so it will take some time to adjust everything …coming to my writing i don’t think i am great writer… then see as a writer i know how difficult it is to portray such scenes…and haan once do check grammar while you write …like you write one sentence and see the vocabulary is fitting in a perfect manner simple i hope you don’t take me wrong…
        sorry if i hurt you …..
        And wish me luck for my cllge life 🙂

    • Pathan

      |Author

      No shruthis I am really happy that you gave me such a good suggestion because I don’t do proof reading but from next time I will really do proof reading and I can understand u must be really busy but I am that u are reading my story

  5. Shruti

    What should I tell..It is really important for Swara. And it is also important for calm her down… And Raglak part is really just awsm.Joke time is also very funny..😊😊😊😊The entire episode was really just mind blowing… Fabulous…Wonderful…. You and your mind is really very wonderful….Just lvd this epi a lot…Stay blessed MR.COOL BOY.😉😉😉😉

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh you are really amazing sister I am happy that you supported my writing and feeling parts that are not vulgar it is really means a lot to me so I am happy that you are writer I think you must be very good writer who gives such a nice analysis you must be good writer and I can understand that you are not able to comment in my story I can understand you must have some important work but you are reading story it is good for me
      By the way are you busy in studies or any other things keep supporting me in this way

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Sorry I replied to you wrongly you are really amazing girls the way you are supporting me is too much for me I am really happy by seeing this keep supporting me in this way you are really good and thanks for thinking part is not vulgar

  6. Anisha

    |Registered Member

    Uummm… Pathan talking about you….
    I really don’t know what to say…..
    You should express the things more properly… I have started reading your ff today itself.
    Use some punctuation marks yaar….
    Warna it’s really very difficult!!..
    Thank You
    Keep writing….
    Well we have many things Comm’n…
    Extra marital affairs and all… 😂😂😂😂

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment anisha and did you read my full story till now or just one episode
      Second thing please Tell me where I am not able to express emotional correctly so I will change my mistake because I don’t know my mistake so please tell me because you are writer as you told so you will be able to correct my mistake because I am really not good writer I am just average writer so please the mistake which you are able to see please tell me I will change
      Ya you are correct I don’t give punctuation mark many time and some spelling mistake so for that I already told to readers that I never do proof reading so this type of problems will persist so they told it’s OK but you didn’t like so I will try to use more punctuation mark
      Really I don’t know anything about tellyupdates and I don’t read ff or tellyupdates so for that really sorry that I didn’t read your story but I am really happy that you also working on same concept and you must be really good writer because the way you cared about punctuation and everything it feels blessed that write is reading my story
      Keep smiling always and tell me my mistake I will improve in it

    • Pathan

      |Author

      I understand anisha that you must have not read not part but I am really happy that you conveyed your feelings about my story
      It really means a lot to me that you are reading my story and commenting also
      Sorry if you felt my comment rude or felt bed

      By the way you really must be good writer if your ff must be really good

      • Anisha

        |Registered Member

        I didnt feel bad!
        And Ya i don’t know about that, if I’m good or not!!..
        N
        But not more than you I guess.

  7. Riya

    Lovely episode… But I agree with ami u r a romance king the way u always writes the romance with day to day example is totally amazing… No one can beat u in writing and giving romantic scenes…..Seriously u r a romance king….I can’t understands it that how u write this types of romance with day to day example….But it wasn’t vulgar…..And all the jokes was really entertaining…..U r an amazing writer…..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      What to say about you you are really amazing sister who is supporting me constantly and it really feels too good by seeing your comment just keep supporting me as you always do

  8. sunidhi

    very nice part as i was very eager to know swasan reaction n i just wish that swara start to love sanky

  9. AnuAnn

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dear… Kiss didn’t seemed vulger .. It is your speciality bro, that you can write intense or hot romance without getting vulgur ..It is the first time I’m seeing a writer who wrote romantic scenes at the most intense way and we didn’t feel it vulgur at any point

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god I never thought you liked my story this much it really feels blessed I never thought that you will like this much I am really happy by seeing your support towards me and I am average writer only but thanks for supporting me and not feeling kiss part vulgar

  10. Saanvi

    |Registered Member

    Good one 🙂 Keep rocking and nothing was vulgar in this episode.. It was needed to show how Swara was going through trauma and how she needs love n care to soothe down…

  11. Kakali

    Oh my God!! it was so awesome.. I love ur FF.. the way u write;, the way u describe their character;; the way u describe their feelings n emotions,,, these r jst tooooo perfect..😊..
    ur writing style is very unique as well as fabulous, mind blowing n tempting also….
    I must say ur writing talent is GOD GIFTED…. thnxx.. n n n ur FF is just P.E.R.F.E.CT……😊😊😊

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh thanks kakali I am glad to see your analysis on my ff it really mean a lot to me and thanks for liking my writing skills

  12. Jj

    Hi,this soooooo nice chapter ,I love swasan chapter. Very feel bad for swara conditions. Oh super romance for swasan very good and keep it up. I am sorry I can’t give the prepare comments because I am get ready to go Andhara Pradesh for visit temple because I will go for monthly once to thirupati,so I am busy but in this time also I will study ur ff and comment, so sorry OK bye

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh I can understand ur feeling and go to temple it is really good to know that you every year goes to temple and I am happy to see your beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story

  13. Vidhi

    Nice one dear…. Loved it… N felt very bad for swara…. Can understand from which situation she is going through…. Update soon 😘😍😘😘😍😊😊😊

  14. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey bro !!!!!!!!!!! yaad he mein koun hu……………..hehehehehe ………………. aree sorry i read every episode actually i was having fever thatswhy didnt cmnt and u knw the worst thng is that my mid-term exams r again starting from 9-26 i think…………….. ohhh hooooo just exhausted abhi abhi toh huye the aur exams me TU par bhi nhi aa pati bt will try to read urs ……………………….. and bro u r just mind-blowing…………..

    i mean no words……………………….
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    i ‘m speechless in ur honor !!!!!!!……………………… ab aur kya keh sakti hu aapki tareef me just wish ki thoda talent mujhme bhi hota……………..

    keep smiling n stay blessed……………….

    …….;;;

    U R AN AMAZING AND AWESOME WRITER………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and glad to see your support towards me and now how is your health are fine and first study well

  15. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Finally today I got ur ff link easily or else I have to work so hard for searching it….
    OMG….. What to compliment your writing skills…. I’m speechless 😷😷😷…..
    My whole vocabulary is emptied…. I’m but finding words to appreciate u…..
    I’m ur big big jabra fan…. U write amazingly well…..
    Swara pain was so well expressed…. 👏👏👏….. Swasan kiss was not at all vulgar instead of that u depicted the pain Sanky is suffering from seeing Swara in guilt…. Hats off to u…..

    Raglak scene’s were fab…. Fantastic… Nd hilarious too…. 😂😂😂….

    Nd ur jokes in between of the episode was too good…..

    Overall I really enjoyed the whole episode to the core… Yesterday whole day I was waiting for ur ff update…. Thanks for updating it…

    Allah hafiz… Take care…
    Keep smiling 😊😊

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh god sayeeda you are really amazing I Never thought that you will love in this extent and keep supporting me and if any time you feel story is out if track so please give your valuable suggestion I will think about it
      I am not that good writer but really I am amazed to see your love toward my story
      Keep supporting me in this way and really big sorry that you have to do too much struggle for that I will personally message you the link of next update so no need to come to swaragini page or you can open my profile in new tab where you refresh wall post of mine you will get my ff when it will be updated it will be easy process but I will personally message you also do keep supporting me like this

  16. AnuAnn

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dear… Kiss didn’t seemed vulger .. It is your speciality bro, that you can write intense or hot romance without getting vulgur ..It is the first time I’m seeing a writer who wrote romantic scenes in the most intense way and we didn’t feel it vulgur at any poin
    Waiting for more swasan scenes and raglak part was also nice… 2nd time posting same comment

  17. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Loved Raglak scenes alot
    Raglak confusion and shock
    Waiting for the next one…………m

  18. Angel-16

    hey till now I was a silent reader… but ur writing skills had made me a very big fan of yours…. it was an awesome part pathan Bhai… n its not at all vulgar… I love ur ff….. n eagerly waiting for the next part…. plz post it soon…. hope u don’t mind if I call you BHAI….

    • Pathan

      |Author

      You can call me Bhai I don’t have any problem but I am glad to see that silent reader commented on my ff keep reading my story on this way it really means a lot to me and thanks for liking my ff and not feeling it’s vulgar

  19. Prit

    It is totally awesome… I loved the way you describe the scenes between the two couples…. Thanks a lot for this beautiful ff…

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for liking my story and I never felt that you all guys are loving my story in this extent it really means a lot to me keep supporting in this way

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Sorry couldn’t complete comment so I was saying that teaser part will come after 10 to 15 episode because that will remark the ending of this ff and that time I took because I was in hurry to complete the ff

  20. Angel-16

    my pleasure Bhai … but seriously aapka ff hai hi aisa ki mai comment krne par majbur ho gayi…. I just love ur ff

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Oh I am glad to see your love toward my ff and keep supporting me immensely in this way it is amazing for me And in which class u are studying

  21. Kaynatk01

    |Registered Member

    hey irfan see i love the way you write the romance and all and its not vulgur i really appreciate your writing go on 👍

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur amazing comment and immense support towards my story it is really mean alot to me I am happy that you are not feeling vulgar

  22. Mahjabeen

    Awesome yaar. felt vry bad wen swra was cryng miserably nd ws beatng herself…c is gng through a lot of pain..loved it..nd pls reveal some past?y lucky marraige swara, y he wants to tk revenge frm her??..waitng fr nxt..

  23. Priya

    Superb….raglan scenes r jst awesome…nd l hv doubt y u r using bed instead of bad…I askd u in yr earlier ff nly bt u didnt replied

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