swaragini fixing broken relation is it pure or impure EPISODE 11 BY PATHAN (SWASAN HOT ROMANCE)

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guys i am really and too much happy by getting very good marks in my exam to shoare this happiness i thought to give hot romance between swasan as a treat to all my

readers, as per story i decided to take there romance part after 3 to 4 episode but i changed plot and take swasan romance part today and for raglak fans there romance

special episode is comming soon but i have to use tooo much brain to think and write this part as well as too much time
episode starts with swara was still hugging sanky, sanky in shock jerks her, he made her stand infront of him she was looking towards him
sanky- why you are spying on me
swara angrily it is my father factory can’t i come here, by the way for what purpose you came here
sanky fumbles vo vo
swara- vo vo what, why you came here mid night
sanky gets idea replies in your father murder case some workers were also died from that one was my relative
swara- who
sanky- voh alok nath
swara questioned ok but why you came in midnight
sanky sees her questioning face replies i came here to see proof
swara- oh i also came here for that work
now sanky reminds something and places his hand on his head oh god but who closed that door
swara forgot in there argument but remembers and fearly says may be ghost
sanky chuckles hey stop your ghost drama
swara anguwingly how dare you to tell it as my ghost drama, now tell me who will close door
sanky seeing other side may be that person who killed your father
swara gulps in fear what
sanky naughtily yes or may be he want to kill you
swara- no please dont say like this replies in fearfull voice
sanky- so what i should tell, now please stop your drama and let me found way to go out of this place
swara- with tough voice ok ok
sanky sees doors it is closed,
swara- worriedly oh god now what will happen how we will escape from here and what will happen now
sanky- making his face closer to her now your favourate ghost will come and winks at her
swara- hey please don’t tease me
sanky- ok i don’t care now i am going to sleep
swara- stops him while he was going voh we can do one work
sanky fake seriously yes tell me
swara- fumbles and replies voh this whole factory is open there is no roof here so we can climb on it
sanky again fake serious”achha” by noding his hand in positivity
swara innscently nods
sanky again in fake serious tone ” so you are spiderman
swara nods no
sanky smiles at her and says so how we will climb on it and please don’t waste my time i am going to sleep
swara angrily where
sanky – here this is good place to sleep,
swara thinks oh god the person to whome i don’t like, i have to become good infront of him to go out of this place, i never thought in my dream i have to be with him

for one night in this place it is most worst thing, i tried to become good in front of him but he is not allowing to go out i have to sleep here only, i know he is

that type of person who can do anything for money, he is most characterless person who can go for any extent to do his work but now i am helpless, i am trapped here i

have to do acting of good girl with him, till i don’t come out of this trap, but now the biggest problem is that i did not bring my sleeping pillls, now my whole body

will shiver like hell i can’t control my emotion, today i also did not bring my hormons decreasing pills, and this person is with me, now this night he may see my real

dissorder now my head starts paining i know now my body will shiver like hell please god help me
she comes out of thought process by sanky voice mrs. maheshwari you can sleep there and i will sleep here
swara thinks its ok it is distance pleace and he will not able to see me
swara immediately goes towards that place and sleep that he can not see her, now 1 hour passed swara was rolling here and there she can’t able to sleep her haunting

past again took place in her head, she was remebering each and every day of her haunting life tears were excaping continuesly drom her eyes, she wants that she don’t

remember anything but she don’t have any good memory to think, her head was paining like scorpio bited her, cold breaze of rainy season was flowing, whole environment

was happy and very pleasent stars and moon was seeing her helplessly lying on floor, they were seeing her tears her, now they sees she was shivering on floor because

of medcine effect that her body badly needs medicines but she is helpless, she rolles on ground like snack, now she cant do anything also because she has fear that no

one should know her weakness, as time passes body was demanding sleeping pills and hormone depressing tablets as she was addicted this thing like alcoholist but the

shiver and depression which alcoholist gets when he don’t get alcohol for one time is 50% time more for swara because the hormonal depressing tablets and sleeping

pills are most needed part her hormons are fluctuating of her body, she was feeling that she can die at anytime she thinks rather than this pain she thinks it is

better to have death where there is no pain
BUT one person was seeing her continuesly that was non other than sanky he was seeing her helplessness from distance, now they heard thunderstorm, sanky runs towards

swara, swara was also very afraid while seating only she hugs him, rain starts falling environment became wet, coldness was increased but the heat developing within

both the souls due to touch of respective body is increasing heat inside there body, cold breaze was playing there hearts were beating fast lonlyness of environment

making environment romantic
Sanky feels shiver running inside his body by her touch.her closeness was making him restless his desire was inceasing more, his cloth become wet, swara could easily

see his musculine chest and his abs from clothes, hthis was also tempting her to move to next level, sanky lifts her head to see her beauty from his lusted eyes, both

shares eyes lock, his gaze move on her soft lips on which dropes of rain was falling they were looking more hot and desirable by rain drops, He touches her lower lip

in his hand but swara moves nearer to him due to her shyness. This time both their lips are inch apart. Sanky can’t control his emotion and he can’t avoid her anymore.

Sanky can’t resist himself and comes closer to her and holds her from waist and. He cups her face and places his lips to her shivering lips. Swara closes her eyes to

feel first touch of man in her life. Sanky softly puts his rough lips on her two soft lips he was softly kissing the lips as honey bee suck nector from flower without

affecting its beauty. Both their lips meet heat inside there body was increasing sanky was playing with her both the lips first upper than lower lip softly swara pulls

him closer towards her. She finds the touch of his lips is relexing from all her pain worries of her life which she has. Sanskar tightens his grip around her while

swara rubs his neck and their bodies are sliding slowly to each other. Both of their lips are playing with each other, sanky forces his tongue to inside her mouth

which increases hotness in body even if in the rainy season rain drop was increasing hotness inside there body The burning body was attracting each other. Sanky

explore her mouth and testing her mouth in that way as child eat and suck hunny bee nector, now sanky moves his hand on her waist and pulls her closer to him with no

gap between them, now rain drop was falling not on two body it was flowing only on one body, his hand slowly exploring her wet body which making swara to calm and

relax by his soft touch Swara and sanky part away from each other to feel and takes some oxigen. Both are breathing heavily and due to the different feelings they had

they are not making eye contact with each other due to shyness, but intensity to make love with her made sanky to take this step in next level, he cups her face and

sees her whole drenched body with desire and lust now Rain is almost stopped by now but they’re still wet, an inch distance is between them. Sanky goes forward and

crosses this one inch gap between them. Swara is still breathing heavily and his proximity is increasing with her heartbeats.today sanky’ touch was making her wild,

her incomplete desire is completing she is out of senses her desire has overpowered her mind today she don’t want to stop by fullfiling her incomplete desire, she

wants to flow with her desire today she don’t want to stop BG plays

Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re

Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re

[Sanky touches her glowing face which is only visible by the dim moonlight. There’s a deep silence between them, only their heartbeats are making noise of their

emotion. He slowly comes more nearer to her by bridging the gap & makes her lay down on the rainy grass. both sees each other and have long eye lock he comes top of

her he interwind with her legs sensually to not to move inch apart both heart beat was rising falling, swara puts her both hand on his neck to give him more excess to

see her body, both can here each other heart beats which are perfectly coupled as they are of only one person, Sanky puts his lips on her face. She tightens her grip

around his neck and sanky rubs his legs on her legs sesualy. He jently kisses her forhead, her hazel eyes to calm her desire and to assure her, he sensualy moves his

mouth on her neck kissing and giving his mark on her. he was also inhelling the jasmine smell from her body which was making him more romantically, he moves towards

ear lob which gives tigling sensation inside her body Swara feels extreme pleasure by his touch]

Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ujli kori preet piya
Satrang laga de re

Ang laga de re
Mohey rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

[His emotion was overpower him he madly wants to explore her soft delicate body from his face. He wants every inch of her body to know his presence on her but her

clothes are becoming a barrier between them he don;t want passage of ai. He removes the saree from her shoulder and slowly puts his lips her shoulder. kisses and

markes his presesnce which was making rising of heat inside swara body.he moves his face all over exposed portion to make her more comfertable with him for his

blissfull ride]

Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Tere seene ki lau
Mere andar bhi hai

Tu hawa de isey
Toh mera tann jale
Jala de re sang jala de re
Mohey ang laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

[Swara resists a bit to remove the barriers between them because of her shyness while Sanky kisses on her cheek slowly .Meanwhile his hand removes the upper portion of

her body. The toned part of upper body is clearly visible which was increasing mainly desire in sanky emotion, He jently kisses on it sucks in flow.he reaches to her

neck where he was giving sweat tortures to her, his mouth again goes to her exposed part now he was sucking and kissing like hungry tiger, swara was feeling that today

she is most happiest women of this world, Unable to meet his gaze, Swara blushes and closes her eyes. Sanky stares at her. Now its turn to remove the remaining

barriers which were sttoping of there initmacy, he slowly removes them which makes shy in swara’s eyes, he comes top of her, his body is perfectly sheltered her body he

romanticaly moves his legs on her legs slowly exploring her body from his body with sensual movement with rithem.]

Raas hai raat mein
Teri har baat mein
Raas hai raat mein
Teri har baat mein
Bol main kya karun
Aise haalaat mein
Hoon main teri malang
Tu hi mera nasha
Chadha de re bhang chadha de re
Prem ki bhang chadha de re

[sanky takes his own time, explore her delightful, unused pure body, he was marking his presence on every parts of her body, he kissingly comes down towards her thighs

now desire of him increased more he can’t resist himself by seeing her exposed part, he puts his mouth also kisses her to give pleasure which she was craving from

years, he was first person who touched that part but today she can’t resist him, his kisses and suck making her reach in blissfll world both were like heavenly bodies

of the world, where sanky was giving her that thing which she did not get till now, it was like that honey bee while moving on floor reches to main part of flower

which is inside and sucking nector of it and same way sanky mouth was sucking the nector which was coming out, which is making him more hornly, now he moves his face

again on her exposed part to give his sign on it]

Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re…

[it’s time to go ahead of it, after taking her to blissful ride, its time to come to complete the most important desire between them, sanky puts his seed inside her,

swara screamed in pain by his movement, he gently kisses her lips to decrease her pain, as his seed moves inside her, she screamed loud, but the environment was fully

silent only screaming and moaning sound of swara and sanky was echoing on whole factory, there scream and intimacy made both of them fully drench by there sweat this

time sweat was flowing from there body in place of rainy water, but sanky did not stop to give the ride of this blissful thing which she was getting first time, he

gently kisses her exposed upper potion, his lips sucks the honey from her body to make there love more intense,intensity of there ride was increased by sanky which

was giving her more pleasure with this amazing feeling now environment becomes hot it is time to make both the heavenly couples to relax from this blissful feeling,

both couples climaxed together with full pleasure and intense feeling and slept while hugging each other in fully nudity]
today swara was sleeping most beautifull sleep after making love with sanky, she got sleep immediately due to tiredness given by sanky to play with her body both the

boduies played the ride of heaven………………………………..

PRECAP- swasan hot argument, swara guilt, raglak hot romance (may be 12 or 13 episode there romance and will have special episode)

now my head as well as hand are paining after writing this part and did you liked swasan blissfull ride
guys did you liked today part it took too much time for me to write this part but i really want to give you treat as well as wishes of rakhi as well, you don’t know to

write this part it took too much time and i really had to think too much to give that it must not be vulgar as well as hot and my mind really starts paining after

writing this part because i have to take too much stress to write this part
guys i think this part was not vulgar if you feel that please tell me i will not add next time
GUYS PLEASE love your brother and sister if you got if you have any miss understanding between you guys please clear it on this special occasion and keep loving to

your brother sister and don’t hat them, because if you have brother sister you don’t know about there importance much but just ask to those people who are craving for

brotherly or sisterly love, for them this special occasion is nothing but for them i want to say one thing guys real brother or sister is not that to whome we have

blood relation but the real relation comes only by spreading love between them, if a boy is giving you brotherly love than that person is more than blood relation

brother, brother sister love can be happen between anyone irrespective of any cast religion and anything so guys never spoil this beautiful relation and never show

that type of love which is fake and for name sake just to tie rakhi on your brother if your tying rakhi on any person than it is your responsibility to take that

relation more stronger in next rakhi festival, and never says that we don’t have brother you will get good brother irrespective he don’t have blood relation to you and

that type of brother really gives you more love that you would not get when you may have brother so never think this negative point you are also god gifted guys

because you can choose any of the brother from this world to whom you feel is perfect keep loving and spreading love guys


  1. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hiiii bro OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean really long time ha……………. did u missed my cmnts………………………………. awesome and have done reading till 4th epi omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kitna acha likhte ho bt a request hope aap puri karo actaully my mid – term exams r coming so hav to study n manage 3 ffs tooo soooooooooooooooooooooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz as kal rakhi thi toh pehke toh happy raksha bandhan bro as a gift of rakhi kya aap epi- 4 to epi 10 tak ki summary de skte ho plzzzz it would be very helpful for me……………………………….. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz and this epi was something mindblowing HATS OFF TO U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


      • Yashasvi

        |Registered Member

        thanku shooo se bhi zyada bro…………………. fr remembering n missing me…………………….. my exams were awesome like always bas iss bar aap sab ki duaayen bhi thi 😘😘 ohhkkk bro i ‘ ll read the 3 epi’s aapne mere liye itna likha thats enough fr me……………………… and i’m fine now just a little fever……………..

        Keep smiling n stay blessed my dear bro 😘😘😘😘

    • Pathan


      Hey yashu I already typed it by seeing your comment so I will give you summary of remaining episode also which I already typed and I am really happy that your exams gon well and I know you are my regular reader as well as my cute yashu
      And same to you for rakhi

      • Yashasvi

        |Registered Member

        Awwww thanku bhaiya do give the links………………….. thanks yrrrrrrrrr u did sooo much fr me , thanku thanku !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes even mee tooo soo damm happy !!!!!!!!!!!
        yes i’ll always be ur yashu !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

        Keep smiling n stay blessed my dear bro 😘😘😘😘

  2. Mica

    |Registered Member

    oh poor Swara… the situation made her become unfaithful wife huhuhuhu
    i have no brother… would you beco9me my bro, pathan ? hehehe

    • Pathan


      Yes you are accepted as my sister and no need to ask for it I will be always available for new relationship and yes swara have to become unfaithful wife

    • Pathan


      Oh I am glad to know that you are addicted to my ff I never thought you will like in this extent but I am really happy by seeing your reply

  3. AnuAnn

    |Registered Member

    Firstly a belated rakshabhandan to you bro… And abt this part.. It was too awesome excellent and amazing.. Even though it was an intense romance part you did it well.. It didn’t seemed to be any vulger .. Loved it yaar.. And love swasan.. Sorry for not commenting in some previous parts

    • Pathan


      Same to you for rakshabamdham and it’s OK if you could not comment in back part but I really felt amazed that you really liked romance of my story and keep liking story

  4. Maha6

    |Registered Member

    Bro frst of all i want to say it is not vulgar. It’s really awesome. U wrote greatly. I didn’t give any comments before because I didn’t get time to read as I had my exams. Bit today I read it n giving u the complement as a comment. Sry for not commenting on before episodes. I hope u won’t mind.

  5. mahi

    awesome , amazing, wonderful ,splendid yaar just loved it so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……. and ya congrats for ur beautiful marks.

  6. Jj

    Hi bro,it is not vulgar,and super romance in between swasan l love it. Please swara don’t cheat her husband, first of all laksh is not suitable for a right husband. So don’t told unfaithful to her husband and characterless of swara. All woman would be understood of swara conditions.

    • Pathan


      I am really happy that you didn’t felt swasan romwce vulgar and realy liked that part and second thing I am thankful that you are regularly commenting here and about swara she have to cheat her husband because the plot is that only about those women who cheats her husband

    • Pathan


      I really got happy that I got new reader of my ff and thanks a lot of reading my ff by taking your time
      I am OK writer but happy that you liked my writing skill

  7. Shruti

    Hey at first congrats 4 ur gud marks.N happy rakhi 2 u also.N bout ep it was jst awsm,lovely,wonderful & mind blowing.Stay blessed Irfan.N tumhe phir se congrats tumhare gud marks ke liye Irfan.

    • Pathan


      Thanks for your wish for my good marks and liking my episode also with this much comment it really feel blessed to have such a good readers of my ff

  8. Riya

    Oh god its really very big episode….. But u said that may be something something but its more than something something…. Anyways its really very romantic episode….And the song was perfect for this scene…Awesome episode… Keep writing like this…. And happy raksha bandhan to u too… And congratulations for your good marks….And one more u r correct brothers and sisters relation can happen in any cast in any religion…It doesn’t matter that its a blood relation or not…Stay happy and blessed…..

    • Pathan


      Same to you for rakhi and ya this is most big episode till now I submitted and I was thinking of something something only but I want to give treat so I have to show more than something something but I am glad that you really liked romance of my story and thanks for liking my speech as well as song and also supporting me till now

  9. Sethooty

    |Registered Member

    Hey…superb… The way u handled it superb… Its not vulgar…. Only romance and love..poor swara..today she is complete by all means

    • Pathan


      Ya you are correct today she is completed by all means but now she also have to bear consequences for it and thanks for liking romance part

  10. avni

    it ws awsm…wndrfull..amazng..feelng sad for swara..don’t make her characterless infront of others..plzzz..iz sanky really loves swara???i have a doubt dat he loves swara in past and still now..but revenge overpowerd love..its just my guess….nd happy rakshabhandan..a late wish..i don’t hav any brthrs to tie rakhii …………………………………………………

    • Pathan


      You are 50 % correct at your guess but you will get to know fully soon what is up-to sanky and I didn’t think till now whether to make swara characterless or not but I will keep your suggestion in my mind and same to you for rakshabandhan and I written if we don’t have brother we can choose our own brothers because real brother is that who loves you unconditionally Or not for name sake
      Feel me as your brother and next time find a good brother and tie rakhi and don’t feel dishearted for it

  11. sriya

    vow its superb…eventhough its a unwanted relation bt still love it bcs of swasan..swasan the magical couple and my cutie swara

  12. Tooba

    Hey bro sorry for coming late but I read all parts in one go……. They are amazing😍😍😍 Thanks a lot for giving Swasan romance😘😘😘😘😘 and happy Rakhsha bandhan Day to you

    • Pathan


      Happy rakhi to you also and thanks a lot for liking swasan romantic scene and again thanks for taking time and reading my ff

  13. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Hello!!!Remember me??Sorry brother,was hell busy these days and still didn’t even read the updates,will finish reading as soon as I can and PM you,alright? Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂

    • Pathan


      Di I never forgot you but I badly missed your amazing comment which you always gives to me and I thought to ask in tomorrow but today I really got your comment I felt that you must be busy so could not comment and Di I wrote summary of my story till episode 7 and it’s link is here you can go through it but it is not that much good but still it is OK if you don’t get time you can read summary and it’s link is here http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-summary-till-now/
      And happy rakhi to you and how is your health

      • Sweetie

        |Registered Member

        Hi brother,I’m absolutely fine and how are you??Thanks for the link..Will surely read.. 🙂 Life is hell hectic these days.. 🙁
        Thank you and belated happy rakhi to you too.. 🙂

    • Pathan


      Same to you di for rakhi and I am fully fine
      I can understand ur hectic schedule and I wrote summary from episode 8 to 11 also you can go and read it
      And I am fully fine Di

  14. Jj

    Hi,please don’t make swara as characterless its not a right,when doctor told go and s*x with another man swara refuse and its better to die,even kavya refer the club that time also he avoid she is faithful to her husband, but what he did he is very cheap husband chii. But this suitvastion is difference she can’t avoid that. She even have sleeping and hormone pills to control herself she also knows this type of pills can be death or form cancer,but she is honest for her husband, but her husband is s*x with other woman how cheap guy he is. So please don’t call swara is a characterless and unfaithful for her husband. Husband means they have to respect for her wife felling and understood her conditions but he is happy with another woman swara only suffer her,please read all the chapter carefully understood swara problem and her condition, I think it is not wrong ,swara is pure but suitvastion is out of controll. Please don’t blame only for woman for this matter. So swara is right for his side.

    • Pathan


      Swara is fully correct at her place this time she is out of control she couldn’t do anything and yeah lucky is really bed person who is not caring about her feelings he is bed person and swara will not be shown characterless she will be good girl for others
      Her condition is very bed which made her to go for s*x with sanky and I am really happy by seeing your beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story and happy rakhi to you
      If you have more doubt you can ask freely

  15. Shamz

    |Registered Member

    Hello Irfan Pathan,
    Is this ur real name or ur a big Irfan Parjan fan????
    Well I’m not a Swaragini fan…I’m a crazily crazy Sidhant Gupta fan…. but yesterday night I saw ur comment in recent comments and was curious to know whether males are also writing and reading stories??? In fact one my readers asked me dat do oder gender read ff or not….now I see that they write also…I don’t know wat u wrote in earlier in this ff but on today’s epi the way u portrayed the sensitive scene which may had become vulgar but it was not vulgar…I had read one story in that she also wanted to show the same things but it went wrong and ultimately she had to delete dat episode… For that I salute you…the way u were comparing things with nature reminds me of mine Hindi poems which I used to love to read and to attend my Hindi class I used to go and sit on the first bench…so dat I cud concentrate fully and even my friends used to get miffed me wid as they don’t want to go to first bench…but they knew very well wen I need concentration then I need it by hook or by crook…sorry for sharing my PL but seriously bro hats off to u…

    • Pathan


      Hey shamz I am really glad to see your beautiful comment even if you are not reading any swasan stories and second thing Irfan pathan is my real name only and profile pic is also by the way I usually hate serial and don’t like serial also and I never read any ff of tellyupdates and frankly telling I really don’t know where all fictions are updated I never go to fan fictions page and for my story if I get notification then I come to this page
      And for writing here story it have very big story as my sister was writing ff here and due to some problems she couldn’t complete so she told me to just complete her incomplete work as I had interest in writing from before but didn’t write so due to sister force I wrote story but as I wrote I really got interest in writing story so I thought but writing I can increase my writing skill as well as thinking skill

    • Pathan


      I really felt blessed by seeing your amazing comment and I really don’t know anything about this tellyupdates and serail Also I am just writing story awing to increase my writing skill not that I like any one and second thing I really felt too too too much good by seeing your analysis on this episode it is very good for me that you specially read my ff by taking your own time even if you are not fan of this serial
      And really I felt to good that you shared your personal experience with me I really got happy by seeing that you shared your personal experience with me I felt very good by knowing that how much you were desperate and connected as well as loyal to your studies and stay blessed and keep smiling always and don’t forget me

  16. seethal

    it was awam..i read it now.but thwy way u poetrated everythng was awsm..i read some these type of parts..in most they failed to make that scenes perfect insted it bcms vulgur..but in this ff it was perfect..it was nt vulgur..and feeling. bad for swara

    • Pathan


      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and also liking this romance part and again thank to reading whole story on one go it really feels blessed by hearing this and yes I also feel bed for her

  17. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Hey… Hi.. Pathan bhai….. Assalamwalekum..
    I know u don’t me but let me tell u I’m one of a silent reader of ur ff….

    I don’t read any of the swaragini ff’s as I’m huge.. Crazy Sidhantian fan…. But I still remember one day I was replying back to the comments on my ff nd in recent comments I found ur ff nd u were replying back to ur ff comments…. Nd then I started to read ur ff…. I never visit swaragini page but for ur ff I used to do now……. Nd I’m so happy that finally I read ur ff…. Its my favourite one…

    U will find my words weird.. As I didn’t commented earlier nd suddenly I commented today nd that too so long one… But u don’t know at TEI TU page I’m famous for my long comments only.. Sorry if I’m making u bore…
    Just now I read ur episode nd when I saw comment of Shamz ( she is my closest comrade) ; I thought that I should also comment…
    She said right that one of the person tried to portray the episode but it went very vulgar but urs one it was balanced one…. U portrayed it so well… It wasn’t vulgar at all infact it was the best…. I can seriously imagine how much labour u did for this episode….
    Being a writer I also know it’s very difficult to depict such scene’s… Even I feel so difficulty while writing these scene’s but hats off to u.. Kudos to u 👍👏…. U made me spellbound….. Awesome… Amazing episode….

    Loved it to the core….

    Ur thoughts on bro nd sis relation is amazing.. Though I don’t have a real bro but still my cousin’s r most important for me…..
    I hope I can call u bhai…..

    Love ur ff……
    Allah Hafiz

    • Pathan


      First of all walekum asslam sayeeda sis and you can call me Bhai this is one of my favourite comment because your comment is really amazing I didn’t felt this comment weird it is really realistic comment and I never thought that fans of other ff will read my ff even if you are not swaragini serial fan this is best gift of any write
      I didn’t felt bed that you commented first time but this comment you did is really too good and ya it took too much time and effort to write this part but I am happy that people really praised it
      Thanks for liking bro and sis thought of mine and once again thanks for praising me I am average writer but you all loved it

      Keep smiling always take care and khuda Hafiz
      If you have any problem or any query you can ask me as thinking your brother

  18. naaz

    hey irfan it is really amazing as always no words to describe it and I told you my challenge you have to accept it to wirte ff on chakravati ashoka serial and I know it is difficult task as you don’t know anything about that serial and also not heard its name but please atleast write small story on that serial

    • Pathan


      I will give more swasan scene and they are lead in this story and they are lead in story and ya I am really happy that you are 100th commentor of my ff and you made century and I think you are new reader of my story

  19. jackzz

    i loved swasan romance..super se upar..amazng part..loved it alot

    i only read swasan scenes in every ff..so i dnt knw abt raglak and didnt read them..so i dnt knw whts the feeling of laksh towards swara..plz give reply to me..actually i dnt lyk ragini and i didnt read any of her parts.alwys u shw lucky with ragini so i want to knw the luckyz feelngs towards swara..is it revenge or smthng else???plz give reply to me.

    • Pathan


      OK I understand your feelings but in raglak part lucky doesnt love swara he is just taking revenge and one more thing also revealed that lucky is brother of sanky which is unknown to both as sanky real name is atif so he only knows sanky old name and both are unaware of this fact and lucky mother and sabky mother both were real sister and lucky father dp took lucky from ram Prasad as they can’t conceive child
      And if you have more doubt or couldn’t understand part Di you can ask again from me

  20. azure

    love this part.swasan is best.feeling sad for swara plz dont make her characterless infront of others.because in indian culture a girl have any relation with a boy other than her husband is not good..every one shld call her characterless.please keep this thing in mind

    • Pathan


      I’m know but now a days secret relationship with other boy for having s*x is increased now a days and I will not make her characterless in front of others and just see how story will frame you will really like it and keep liking my story and I will keep your suggestion in my mind

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