swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-8


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Initially, i hv thought to wind up my story in 7-8 part but when i started writing my thoughts..now its 8th ch and the main story has just started..i.e.their journey in dance show and their love story..so it seems i need to write few more Chepters to give proper justice to my story..

Ch-7 link :


Recap : swasan and raglak at picnic spot..


Ch-8 :

Swasan start going towards mini zoo..Sanky was draging Shona with him..after going away from sight of raglak..Shona stops and look at him with cute angry face..Sanky saw her cute expression and adore her cuteness and childishness…Shona found him staring with intense look..she was feeling shy but compose herself..

Shona : (cute angry face) (showers so many questions) hey you..MR.KIDNAPPER…y u agree to go with me ? Y are you dragging me like this ? Y u told me to keep quite ? What’s that in your mind ? Do you wanna fight with me again ?

Sanky : (shocked & angry) hey..how dare you call me as Mr Kidnapper..you MISS QUESTION BANK..

Shona : (firmly) you took me without my permission that’s y i called you Mr. Kidnapper..(angry)  huh..but how can you call me Miss question bank..you…

Sanky : (interrupt) simple bz you showered so many questions on me..even without taking breath..

Shona was about to speak but Sanky stoped and gave answers of  her ques..

Sanky : first of all i don’t agree willingly to come with you..y should i put my feet on axe..there is a valid reason that y i drag you from there and told you to keep quite..

Shona looks on..Sanky continues..

Sanky : (hesitately) actually..i wanted Lado and lucky to spend some time together alone..bz..

Shona : (interrupt) bz Lado has fallen in love with lucky..right ?

Sanky : (shocked) how do you know ? Does lucky also..

Shona: (interrupt & excitedly) lets sit somewhere..we need to talk about this matter..

Sanky nodes and they start walking..they sat on grass near a tree..the place was lonely & beautiful…

Shona share her thoughts with Sanky..how she has noticed ragini’s expression..she also told about lucky’s reaction on raglak’s first eye-lock,on seeing ragini’s dance etc..

Shona : (happy) so i think lucky has also started liking Lado..he..

Sanky : (excitedly interrupt her) Ohh wow…that’s great news..in fact awesome..i am so happy…i..

Shona : (interrupt) Ohh hello..MR EXPRESS..cool down..there is a small problem…

Sanky : (confuse) and what’s that MISS SPEED BREAKER ??

Shona : seriously..miss speed breaker..??!!!!

Sanky : if i am Mr express than you are speed breaker..(Shona make faces) (then come to the point)

Shona : (sadly) Lucky don’t believe in love and relationship…(then she told everything about lucky’s mentality with respect to love)
So if he is in love with ragini,then also he will never accept this fact..

Sanky : (shock & sad) Ohh shit..i think we hv to plan something…

Shona : to make him accept his love towards ragini…

Sanky : hmm..(look towards Shona) we should be together to unit them…

Shona : (agree) ya..you are right..(extend her hand for handshake) so will you become my partner for that..??

Sanky : (happily do handshake) yup..partners..(soft tone) so i think we should not fight with eo now on..

Shona : (smile) Ya..but only in this matter..

They both look at eo and smiles…Shona’s phone start ringing..she excuse herself and went lil far to attend the call..

Sanky watch her talking..shook his head and look towards other side..

Sanky : (murmur) Shona..!!! i don’t want our fights to end…i hv loved and enjoyed my each and every fight with you..its very special for me..

Shona who has just come back after completing her call..heard him..she sit besides him..

Shona : (flat tone) i heard it Sanky…

Sanky: (shocked & embarrassed ) wo..actually…i was saying that…

Shona : (interrupt and confessed) me too feel the same…

Sanky look at her surprisingly..She smiled at him and he returned it…they both were very happy with their this new bond…

they stand up and starts walking towards mini zoo…they were walking silently..so to break the silence..

Sanky : (teasingly ) Ohh god..in just two days..you hv given me too many names..MR.OVERSMART..MR KIDNAPPER..MR EXPRESS…i don’t know how many more name i am going to hv in near future…

Shona : (angry) Ohh hello..MR.SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS…if you hv forgotten then let me remind you that you hv also called me by different name..like MISS SHOW OFF..MISS QUESTION BANK..MISS SPEED BREAKER..so no need to do this drama…

Sanky : (unbelievable) not again..i can’t belive MISS ANGRY BIRD.. you hv given me new name in just few mins..

Shona: Ohh god and you too gave  me new name..

They both look at eo with shock and laugh out loudly..

Sanky : (laugh) Ohh gosh..our naming score is 4 now..

Shona : (laugh) ya..n i wonder how many names we both are going to hv in future due to our fights..

They both hv cute eye-lock and exchange smile..they both were extrimly happy..they reached near zoo..


Meanwhile, after Swasan left..raglak ly down on the carpet..besides eo but with extra distance….there eyes were closed..actually they were pretending to be a sleep but non of them was getting sleep..ragini open her eyes and turned towards lucky and saw his cute sleeping face…

Ragini : (monologue) Ohh god…he is so handsome..i am falling more and more for him after seeing his friendly caring nature, respect towards girls, his bonding with shona…plz god do something..

Ragini : (continue thinking ) Roshni and rahul was right…i hv fallen for the guy..who is flirt…and also don’t believe in love…offfo..(make faces)

Ragini : (determined) but as i hv said i will change his pov and make him fall for me..i will try my best to win his heart..

Lucky was not sleeping..but his eyes were still close..he turned another(facing back to ragini) side and open his eyes..he watch towards lake and thinks..

Lucky : (monologue) this is not me…what’s happening to me..i am behaving wearied from yesterday…i hv not even flirt with girls properly..i let Shona go alone with Sanky..

Lucky : (monologue continue)lucky beta what’s happening to you..(thinks about ragini) is this bz of ragini..?? Y i m feeling different whenever i look or touch her..? Y i like to tease her ? How can i stare he like that..? Hv i started…

Lucky : (shook his head) no ways dude…its nothing like this…its just bz she is sweet & beautiful and danced very well…now change in to your cool dude mode and stop thinking about all this..lucky can never be in love…

Ragini get up and sit there seeing beautiful nature and was lost in her thoughts..lucky turned and look at ragini…he also get up and sit..

Lucky : Lado..(ragini come back to her senses) (shocked listening Lado from lucky) (lucky see her expression and apologize) woh sorry i heard Sanky calling you by this name so…

Ragini : (was very happy) its alright lucky..you can call me Lado just like i call you lucky…(lucky smile and nodes)

Lucky : didn’t you want to hv nap ?

Ragini : i don’t know but I m not getting sleep now..

Lucky : me too…(he thought about swasan) hey Lado..i wanted to talk with you about swasan…

Ragini : (turn his side excitedly ) ya..i forgot..i also wanna talk about them..that’s y i hv asked Sanky to take Shona…

Lucky : that’s cool…actually i think Shona has started liking Sanky..(he told about Shona’s excitement while she was talking with Sanky)

Ragini : (clap with excitement ) Ohh god… wow..wowwww..that’s amazing…you know lucky i hv noticed the same thing in Sanky’s behaviour…

Lucky : (happy) that’s great news..it means both hv feeling for eo…i like Sanky very much..i think he will be perfect partner for my Shona..

Ragini : ya..Shona is so sweet and friendly girl..i like her so much so she will be best for my Sanky.. both of their nature and likings are also same…

Lucky : i think we need not to do anything…their fights will only get them close…

Ragini : ya true..by the end of this reality show i think they both will be deeply and madly in love with eo…

Lucky : (shook his head) i don’t understand y people fall in love..? I can’t believe this love shove type things…

Ragini : (happily in firm tone) whether you accept or not but you do believe in love lucky…

Lucky : (unbelievable expression) what are you talking ragini..are you crazy…how can you say like that..

Ragini : (smilingly) bz though Shona has not told you that she likes Sanky, you understand her feeling..

Lucky : its just bz i am her best buddy and i know her better than she knows herself..nothing else..

Ragini : (firm tone) one day you will realize that love is the best feeling of the world and the one who get their true love are the luckiest persons..

Lucky : whatever…i don’t care..btw it seems you are more interested in love and all…then tell me do you love anyone..?

Ragini blush hard as the question was asked by the person whom she is in love with..ragini compose herself..

Ragini : ya i do believe in love but i m still waiting for the person who is made for me..(look at him) and i think i will get my love soon..

Lucky : (teasingly) ohhoo…i pity on the person who will be with you…you will always be ready with your sward to attack him…poor guy..(stand up and start running)

Ragini : (angry ) you lucky k bachche…(stand up and start chasing him) wait i will show you how jahsi ki rani beat the person who irritate her…

Lucky : (laugh) catch me if you can…

Lucky was running here and there and ragini was chasing him..but she could not catch him…as he was too fast…so she thinks about most common filmy idea…

Ragini : (shout) Ouch..ahhh..(sit down and hold her leg with painful expression) Ohh god…ahhh…mamma…

Lucky : (run towards her with worried expression ) ragini…(sit near her) Ohh god what happened..are you fine..? I am sorry u got hurt bz of me..

Ragini got tears in her eyes and become extremely happy seeing his concern and care..but compose herself…

Ragini : (naughtily) lucky…nothing has happened to me but soon something is going to be happened with you…

Lucky :(confuse) what..? What do you mean..

Before he understand anything or complete his sentence..ragini start hitting him with her both hands..

Lucky : (shock) Ouch…ahhh ragini..

Lucky understand that it was ragini’s prank to catch him..ragini was beating him..lucky hold her both hands..then he start tickling her to stop her from beating…they both were laughing..they were very close to eo, ragini lost her balance and fall on top of him…

they both stop laughing and lost in eo’ eyes…they hv most intense eye-lock…they both were affected by their close proximity…soon they both come to their senses and see their position..Ragini get up from lucky and sit besides him..she was blushing hard..Lucky also get up & lost in her blushing face.. he was also feeling as if some current has passed through his body…

Ragini : (stammer) v..voo..i..i..am..m sorry…i lost my balance and fall..

Lucky : (smile and interrupt ) its ok ragini…(change topic to remove awkwardness) Vese…after seeing your sweet innocent face…no one on earth can think that..

Ragini : (confuse and curious) what..what..?

Lucky : (go near her ear) (whispering tone) you are…you are (pause)

By now Ragini was breathing heavily bz of his this act..

Lucky : (shouts in her ears) you are a dramaqueen…(start laughing loudly)

Ragini : (come to her sense) what..???!!!

She look at him angrily…lucky stop seeing her angry face…after few seconds..ragini starts laughing..and lucky take sigh and join her in laughing…they both hv lots of fun…they click lots of snaps and selfies…they were enjoying eo’s company…


There swasan reached the zoo..Shona excitedly run towards the entrance..Sanky watch her & shook his head and went near ticket counter..Shona was about to enter but a security guard stop her and ask for ticket..she become sad and about to go back..Sanky reached there and give their tickets to security..they both entered in zoo..

Sanky : (laugh) Ohh god..don’t you know that we hv to purchase ticket b4 entering zoo..you MISS UTSAHI (enthusiastic)..

Shona : (make faces) i know that..but it didn’t come in to my mind due to excitement..don’t make fun of me..you MR. KHADUS..

Sanky : now score is 5..

Shona : enough…that’s it for today…now today we will not give any new name to eo..

Sanky : ya it will be better..lets go inside..

Shona start running to the cage of animals..as it was a mini zoo there were only small animals like deer..rabbits..monkeys..different birds..etc..Shona was watching them like a small kid…Sanky smile seeing her childishness..

Shona : (teasingly)  hey Sanky watch there..she is staring at you..

Sanky : (proudly without seeing where Shona is pointing)  ya..may be she could not control herself after seeing handsome dude like me..

he turn and look in the direction where Shona is pointing..it was monkey..Shona stat laughing loudly on him..he felt embarrassed…

Sanky : (angrily) ha ha..so funny..(make faces)

Shona was still laughing seeing his angry face..Sanky see her laughing like that and mesmerized by her..then They go ahead..

Shona : Ohh wow..Sanky see that little rabbit is so cute..i wanna touch it yar..aww..its dam cute..

Sanky : (unknowingly) not more than you..

Shona : (shock) what..??!!!!

Sanky : (come back to his sense & covers ) wo..i mean you are more little than that rabbit..(teasingly) what did you think..ha ?

Shona : (embarrassed) wo..nothing..(angry) you are too much..how can you call me lil than that rabbit..?

Sanky : (same teasing tone) arre..you are running here and there like a small kid..so i m sure you are lil than it..

Shona : (angry) You..you are gone now..

He start running and Shona start chasing him…she caught him..she lost her balance and about to fall..but Sanky turned and hold her from her waist b4 she fall down..Shona close her eyes tightly due to fear..Sanky was staring at her..Shona open her eyes and found herself safe in his arms..she blush a lil..Sanky smile seeing her blushing…they hv cute eye-lock..they compose themselves and Sanky made her stand..

Sanky : are you ok Shona ??

Shona : ya Sanky..i am fine..(whispered) thank you..

Sanky : (shocked) WHAT..?(put his finger in ear as if cleaning his ear) what did you just said..(teasingly) i think i heard something wrong…

Shona : (fake angry face) nothing..go to hell..

She start walking angrily..Sanky smile seeing her cute anger and hold her hand..

Sanky : (smile & in soft tone) you are always welcome Shona..any time (wink at her)

Shona again blush..she nodes and smile..

Then Shona and Sanky takes many snaps and selfies..they do lots of masti..they played some pranks on eo..they both enjoyed alot..

they come out of the zoo and start walking towards raglak…they were laughing and talking…they hv decided to think some ideas to unit raglak tonight by themselves and discuss about it with eo 2moro..and then select and execute the best idea..


Raglak were sitting and talking..lucky’s phone rings..he pick up the call..it was from one of his ex-gf..

Lucky : (flirting) Hii..sweety…how are you…i know you hv missed me alot..after our break up i too hv missed you so much darling..

Ragini’s blood was boiling after hearing him flirting like that..she was feeling jealous and angry..

Lucky : (still taking on phone) Ohh its bad luck of yours that you loss bf like me and getting married to that idiot..btw i m happy 4 u..all the best for your future life…bubye..

Ragini felt relived after hearing that girl is going to merry someone..she take sigh and smile looking at lucky..but still she was upset..

Lucky end the call and look at ragini who was staring at him with some what of angry face..he thought she may be thinking that he disrespected the girls..

Lucky : hey Lado, y are u staring me like that..? Ohh..is it because of my way of talking with this girl..

Ragini : woh..

Lucky : (dramatically scared) then let me cleare you  jahsi ki rani b4 you take out your sward and cut my head..

Ragini : (angry) huh..you Mr. Flirt..i will..

Lucky : (interrupt & in one breath) ragini..i do flirting with the girl who do flirt with me..and i made gf to that girl only who is not serious about relationship..and she was just one of them…i do respect the girls..

Ragini : (smile after listening his thoughts) i know lucky..i got to know about this yesterday only..

Lucky : Ohh thank god..(confuse) but then y were  you looking angry when i was talking on phone ??

Ragini : ( embarrassed and stammer) w..woh..(covers) ha..i was not angry..i was just wondering..how many gfs you might hv..i mean the one who don’t believe in love..??

Lucky : Ohh..is it so..then let me tell you..its may be (counting in mind) i guess..25 to 30…

Ragini : (open her mouth wide ) 25 to 30…??

Lucky : (smile seeing her expression ) number is less na..i told Shona that..i want to complete at least half century..it should be min 50..what do you think ? (wink at her )

Ragini : (monologue) Ohh god..30 gfs..i am feeling like to kill him here only..i can’t believe i hv fallen for a guy who hv been with 30 girls..and want to be with at least 50..Ohh god what will i do now..(make faces) (her thoughts were broken by lucky )

Lucky : (serious tone) ragini, b4 you think anything about me..let me clear one thing that i hv not crossed my limit with any girl..i don’t even hv kissed any of them…till now except Shona i hv not shared this thing with anyone..i don’t know y i am sharing this with you..may be bz i found a very good friend in u and Sanky..

Ragini was feeling like dancing and jumping but she compose herself..

Ragini : (super duper happy) Thank you lucky for sharing your secret..don’t worry i was not thinking anything ill about you..i know you are a very decent guy..

Lucky nodes..both look at eo…and smiles..then look in other direction..

Lucky : (monologue) what is this yar..what was the need to share this thing with her…? Y u concerned with her thinking about you this much..? Ohh god..lucky dude calm down..its nothing like that..she is just your good friend..

Ragini : (monologue) y he share this with me..? I think he too feel something for me..god plz help me to find out about his feelings..i am so happy that he considered me as his very good friend…


Swasan reached at their place..raglak ask Shona about zoo…they talk normally for sometime..

Ragini : hey park closing time is 10:30…its 7 o’clock now..so we still hv 3 hours here..and when would you all want to take dinner ??

Sanky : i think 8:30 will be perfect for dinner…

Swaraglak agrees with him…

Sanky : Okk so what you wanna do before dinner..?

Swalak : (together ) DANCE FACE OFF..

Shona : actually me and lucky are used to do at least one dance face off everyday….

Lucky : and our today’s routine is pending..so y don’t we all hv dance face off…

Ragsan : (excitedly) (together) awesome idea..

Ragini : me and Sanky also used to do dance practice together regularly..

Sanky : and today we hv not done it yet..how can our day end without our DANCE..

ALL : SO LET’S HV DANCE FACE OFF…(they all laugh and shouts)

Precap : swaragsanlak dance face off…their megha audition practice…swasan planning for raglak…

The end


Hey friends ..what do you think about this part…? Do you like swasan raglak scenes ? I hope i hv not made you disappointed..plz share your views..plz silent readers do comment..i wanna know how many readers are liking my ff…so plz plz do comments…and give me suggestions..so that i can improve my writing…

Credit to: Namrata

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  1. awesome.. upload asap… please

  2. Superb. Loved both SwaSan n raglak.

  3. Awsm yr

  4. swasan & raglak scenes are awesome n waiting for next epi……..

  5. Awesome, love the chemistry of raglak

  6. Awesome ff..it’s just a request can u pls make a scene where someone proposes swara with cheesy words(especially”baby” lol) and she rejects him just for that and gives a bashan in her style leaving sanky shocked and surprised bcoz they have same thinking…it’s just That I would really like such a scene and of course the decision is yours

  7. raglak scenes are adorable

  8. no u have not disappointed me….its very very nice…..i loved both d couples….nd i loved d way both swasan giving diff names nd luckys truth to ragini by saying he does not have kissed anyone its very nice….


  10. u rocked it

  11. Super duper… Loved ur episode… Thanks for such a long episode… Swasan keeping names for each other??? really very funny… Make Raglak confession soon…

  12. Amazing storyline!!! Great balance between swasan and raglak…loved it!

  13. Awesome building up very strong bonding and luv the way u write pls keep writing like this thank u…..

  14. superb……
    swasan& raglak are just awsmmmmmmmmmmmmmm……
    ya i luv u….

  15. Superb dear

  16. you are amazing writer

  17. It was an awesome update loved raglak scenes the most the way they were concerned abt each other n everything… Swasan scenes were so cute their silly fights.. I’m excited for nxt epi

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