swaragini ff (Swasan-Raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-4


Thanks you so much friends.. i hv replied to your comments on pre ch…specially L.khan i hv try to clear your dought..plz check it..

Link for Ch 3 part-B :-

Recap : Ragsan friendship and swalak come to know about show

Chapter-4 :


Just like swalak sanky also watch the same advertisement of Dance reality Show..(guys i am not repeating it here)…sujata congratulate sanky for getting sach wonderful opportunity…

Sanky was at cloud 9..he was smiling widely along with teary eyes..he remember the time he has spent after dance..his dreams…now he know that he will defiantly going to achive his goal soon..he hug his mom and start dancing happily…

Sujata : Sanskar..beta..i am very happy for you..god bless u my son..god will surly give reward of your hardwork..(kiss his forehead)

Sanky : (excited) thank you so much mom…your support is my strength..(determined face) now i will take part in this show and will defiantly make my place in the list of Best dancers..

At that time his father come who heard the last sentence..become angry on him..

Ram : (shout) Sanskar..you are not going to take part in any such kind of competition..

Sanky : (pleading) but dad..dance is my passion..i am living because of my this dream to become dancer..plz don’t do this to me dad..

Sujata : suniye ji..he is working very hard to achive his dreams..now while he has got perfect opportunity, plz don’t snatch it from him..

Ram : (angry) what about your mba degree..you are in last sem..i will not allow you to destroy your future after your so called dance..you will get nothing from your dance..

Sanky : (bit louder) bas dad..i respect you a lot..i love you alot..but that doesn’t mean you will insult my dreams,my passion..(confident) and now its final that i will take part in this show and prove myself to you and to the world..n ha i can manage both..i will get my mba degree also..

Ram : (angry) ok do whatever you want to do..but today onward i am not going to talk with you..you are nothing for me..

He left from there angrily..Sanky has tears in his eye..sujata assure him that everything will be fine..they compose themselves..she give blessing to him..

Sanky : mom..i am going to meet ragini..she will also become happy after hearing this news..bye..i will come back soon..

Sujata : (agree) ok beta..drive slowly..take care..bye

Sanky left for orphanage..he meet ragini and told everything about the dance competition..all were very happy after hearing that news..all congratulate ragini and sanky both..

Ap : wow..that’s awesome now my Lado will make all of us proud by taking part in the show..

Ragini also become happy as now she will fulfil not only her but also her orphanage family’s dream..she was having happy tears in her eyes and bright smile on her face..

Ragini : (confidently) now we will show the world that..

Sanky : (complete her sentence) we are the best dancers of India..

They smile and hug eo tightly..then after sometime sanky left for his home..

At night, Swara, Sanky, rags and lucky in their respective rooms,

all were thinking about the dance reality show..about their dreams..they were very happy..they were waiting for tomorrow which will change their life..soon they doz off..

then screen split in 4 part showing them sleeping with present & bright smile on their faces..

Next day, Swalak and ragsan get complete details about the show from website and send their application forms. They all got reply and also time and place for their audition..The audition place is in Mumbai..(i am not writing this application part in detail bz its not needed)

They get engaged in dance rehearsal for their audition round performance.

Before 2days of audition, Swalak took blessing from their parents and left for Mumbai..Sapnoki nagari Mumbai will defiantly help to fulfil their dreams..

Mumbai,Audition center :

There were thousands of people who come to take part in the dance reality show..Swalak reach the center..they take a good look of surrounding and come near the entrance..they stop at entrance and look straight with confidence..

Shona : so watch out “zara nach k dikha”…….

Lucky : here come the Shona and lucky………

Shona : to rock the stage and……

Lucky : to steal the hearts of everyone…..

Shona : with our dance performance.

They both look at eo and smile broadly, hold eo’s hand, shout loudly with excitement and run inside the audition center..

( they are not over confident but they have work hard for this and confident about their dance)

Sanky went to pick up ragini…soon both ragsan reach the audition center…they see many peoples there..sanky seems to be very confident and excited..whereas ragini seems to be lil nervous but still excited..Sanky know that rag is lil scared..he hold her hand..

Ragini : finally the day hv come…

Sanky : we will prove ourselves…and achive our dreams..

Ragini : yup..i m very excited but bit nervous also..what will happen next !! (bit her nails)

Sanky : (assure her )we all trust you ragini..you hv to trust yourself..just give your best and i know you will get what you want..

They both share hug and went inside..all the contestants were sitting  and standing in the hall…they all have been given a number…they were suppose to go inside room next to audition stage in batch vise ( for example- 1 to 30, then 31 to 60…..)and then in audition room according to their number..our leads no were : Shona – 438, Sanky – 452,Lucky- 476 & Lado- 484. So swasan were in one batch and raglak were in another batch…

Swasan raglak were waiting for their turn in hall along with other participants…as theire no were in 400 they need to wait till evening..they were watching audition in big screen tv placed in the hall…

Swalak were sitting together and were watching their dance vedios which they have recorded in mobile..then lucky went to attend the call and Shona starts talking with other participants due to her talkative nature..

Meanwhile ragini was sitting alone listing her song in headphones near stairs bz sanky went outside in the ground to help one of his friend to improve his dance who was also going to take part in show..sanky was not going letting her alone but she only forced him to go and told him not to worry about her…A guy come there and start flirting with her..lucky was there..he can heard them but can’t see them..

Guy : Hii beautiful…it seems you are in need of my help..should i help you with your dance ? (wink at her)

Ragini : (firmly) No thanks..mind your own business..don’t try to act smart..(stand up and try to go from there)

Guy: arre arre…(still flirting) where are you going dear…you don’t need my help ha..that’s good..but i need your help plz do a favor for me by giving one kiss…

Ragini was very angry but she don’t want to create any seen there..so she decide to move from there. Meanwhile lucky who heard them come front side to see what happen..he saw ragini was moving to get out from there and the guy was trying to hold ragini from back as it was not crowded area..he immediately run in their direction…

that guy hold raginis hand and lean to go near her..ragini turn..lucky reach..but b4 that guy go near her, he gets tight slaps on both of his checks…ragini slap on his left check and lucky on right at the same time…

the guy was shocked he hold his both checks with his hand and run from there..lucky and ragini also get shocked…they both look at each other for sometime with surprise expression and then broust out laughing…remembering the slap scene…

ragini look at lucky and feel some strange sensation which she has never felt b4…lucky also mesmerized seeing her but he don’t know his feeling..they both have strong eye-lock…which was broken by Shona..(kabab me haddi)..who come there to find lucky..(she notice both lucky and ragini’s expression b4 breaking their eye-lock..)

Shona : hey lucky..dude what are you doing here..? (smile at ragini) Hii i am swara…he is laksh..

Ragini : (smile) i m….

Lucky : (interrupt) Jahnsi ki rani…..

Shona&Lado (together)  : what….??!!!

Lucky : ya she is jahsi ki rani…(then he told the whole incidence to Shona..) (to ragini) from your answer i found that you are brave but i didn’t expect that you will slap him..it was dam good..

Ragini was staring him with shy smile on her face while lucky was talking which was again noticed by our Shona the Jasoos..ragini for the first time feel comfortable with strangers..

Shona : (dramaticly) Ohh gosh…i missed that scene…wowwww..a guy getting slaps on his both checks from two people at the same time…what a seen it is yar..!!! ( trio laugh) (to ragini) btw what’s your name dear..? Would you like to become our friend ?

Ragini : Hii…i am ragini…ya sure..friends..nice to meet you..(swaragini hug eo)

Swara : so now you can call me Shona and (point to lucky) him lucky..we are going to hv lots of fun..we will…

Lucky: (cut her) ya ya sure..(shocked expression) Ohh gosh..now what will happen when both RIVOLVER RANI & JAHSI KI RANI will be together…(dramatically sacred ) plz god save all of us..

Ragini : (confuse) RIVOLVER RANI..??

Lucky : (pointing at Shona) she has broken bones of many guys…till now i hv seen this braveness in my Shona only…but now i can say that (point to Shona) my Gundi..find another Gundi..(point to ragini)

Ragini : (shock) what..??? Gundi..??

Shona : you lucky k bache i m going to kill you today..you wait and watch..(pinch lucky on his waist)

Lucky : awwchch Shona leave me..(to ragini) see this is y i call her Gundi..

Ragini laugh looking both of them but after few min become lil confuse seeing their bonding…she compose herself..

Ragini : ha ha ha..you both are so sweet..Shona i am happy to meet u..(to lucky) thanks laksh for helping me..(blush lil bit)

Shona : (again hug her) me too ragini..

Lucky: woho…your welcome but i don’t think that you were in need of my help jahsi ki rani… (wink at her and left to attend call)

Ragini blush lil more when he wink at her and call her jahsi ki rani…ya she understand that it was first site love..she smile seeing him talking on phone..

there was two more  person who got to know about her feeling from her blushing smile looking towards lucky..yup they were non other than Shona and Sanky…

Ya..Sanky come there while lucky was explaining the whole seen to Shona..he was about to go near them but he see some spark in ragini’s eyes seeing at lucky..so he decide to stand there and listen them…

sanky see shona’s drama..he smile unknowingly seeing her.. Shona was facing her back to sanky..so sanky can’t see shona’s face but he can see lucky and ragini..he also heard what lucky told about Shona..

he notice ragini’s feeling for lucky..he also wonder seeing ragini comfortably talking with strangers..& accepting their friendship in 1st meeting only..

Both sanky and ragini were happy with ragini’s feeling for lucky but confuse regarding swalak relation..there swara was also happy..she has seen something strange in lucky’s eye at the time of raglak’s eye-lock..she thought ragini is the girl who  is made for her lucky..n our cool dude lucky hv felt something seeing ragini but he is unknown about his own feelings..

Precap : swaragini bonding..Swasan meeting…sanlak meeting…Swasanraglak performance…

The end


I am ssooooooooooo sorry for no swasan meeting in this ch..bz if i would hv included swasan meeting here then it would hv become extra large chapter…bz its already very longer one..i need proper space for swasan meeting…hope you will understand…n to component with that i m posting this ch today instead of 2moro..

How about raglak meeting..do you like it..?? do you like swaraglak convo ?? I hope i have not made you all disappointed…

Plz plz plz guys share your views…..

Credit to: Namrata

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  1. Awsm yr. Specially slap scene

  2. raglak meeting was awesome n i hope next part is going to be more interesting….

  3. raglak scenes are awesome

  4. Swalak bonding is super and awesome…keep good swalak bonding…waiting for swasan scenes

  5. Awesome…..nd Once again thnx for clearing my misunderstanding I commented on previous episode also
    Ur ff is very different……nd i like it ?

  6. I just started reading your story overall it’s really good. Can’t wait for the next episode Namrata. I am also writing a ff, please do read mine and comment some ideas, its called Destiny vs love http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=destiny+vs+love+%28Thapki+pyaar+ki%29
    But your story is amazing, I love it~nusz

  7. Awesome yar. I loved the slap scene . Waiting for the next one. Please post as soon as possible.

  8. no no its wonderful…..i loved d slap a lot…..atfirst i thought ragini slapped laksh then i read other time then only i understood dey both slap on either sides…..very nice….i am a die hard swasan fan so i will comcentrate more on swasan part only n other ffs…..bt n dis ff i liked raglak a lot too…..first time i loved raglak scene…..very nice

  9. Superb dear

  10. Loved it too good

  11. Awesome amazing wonderful… Out of the world… Pls update one more part today pls soon
    …..friendly request…… Pls

  12. Whoa raglak meeting was too gud i lykd it a lot

  13. oh.. god superb dear.. raglak meeting was superb.. I’m waiting for swasan meeting.. your ff is more interesting day by day.. loving it

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