Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-30 Last Chapter

Hello friends… 🙂

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Ch- 29 part-2 link :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-29-part-2-grand-finale/

Recap : Sanky win the show…parents surprise to swasanraglak..

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CHAPTER- 30 (last chepter)

5th day after grand finale…@ farm house…

Shona got up at 5:30 as usual…she kissed sanky’s check & come out of her room & went towards raglak room…door was not locked bz only they 4 in the house…& they knew their limits b4 marriage..she went inside..

{don’t worry friends buddies hv shared everything with eo..so she knew that raglak will not be in any kind of awkward condition..at least not for her & sanky.. 😉 }

She looked at Raglak who were sleeping peacefully in eo’s arms..Shona smile & give flying kiss to them…she went near bed & slowly shake Ragini..

Shona : (whispered) Di…plz wake up Di…(no response) Di…Di you promised me that you will teach me classical..so plz wake up…

Ragini : (sleepy tone) no kiddo..not now.. plz let me sleep for some time..we hv whole day with us…

Shona : (baby voice) Plz na Di..how can u do this to me…u know na i can learn very easily in early morning…will u not listen to your sweet cute innocent kiddo…

Ragini : (open her eyes) you forgot the adjective Dramebazz…(get up slowly not disturbing lucky) ok..u wait for me in hall..i m coming in 5 mins..

Shona : (hug her) yeh…thanks Di…love you…(she ran out side)

Ragini : (shook her head & smile) Pagal…

She packed lucky’s forehead & went out side…

Shona & Lado both do their dance practice..Ragini tought classical to Shona & learn locking & popping from her…both enjoyed very much…then they went to their respective rooms & come out after getting ready by 9:00..

They went into kitchen & start preparing their breakfast…upps…Ragini was preparing & Shona was giving her co in talking by sitting on kitchen slab..lol… they finished preparing their breakfast…

Ragini : now everything is ready…let me go nd wake up lucky..

Shona : (tease) oh that means u will not come back b4 1 hour bz i m sure as usual lucky will drag u nd then.. 😉

Ragini blush…at that time both saw sanky coming towards them after getting ready…one naughty idea struck in both of their mind at same time…

Ragini : (nautily) r u thinking the same kiddo… 😉

Shona : (smirk) ya…lets do it…

Sanky come..he hugged & greet both of them good morning…

Ragini : (act) Shona will u plz go and wake up lucky…i hv to finish this…

Shona : yah sure…(act as if receiving call) Ohh i m getting call..i will go after attending this…

Sanky : (casually) arre no no..its ok…i will go & wake him up..u both carry on with your work…

Swaragini : (sweetly) thanks sanky

He smiled & went towards raglak room…Swaragini share hifi…& went behind him to watch their morning comedy movie…sanky went inside & Swaragini stood near window excitedly…

Lucky was in deep sleep…sanky smile looking at him…

Sanky: lucky..wake up dude..its already 9:30… (no response)

So he went near him..as soon as he just touched his hand, lucky pulled him on bed & hugged him thinking about Lado… { friends he was in deep sleep so could not identify size diff of lado & sanky..lol.. 😉 }

Lucky : (sleepy with closed eyes) my sweet angel plz…let me sleep for some more time…& u also sleep with me…

Lucky tightened his grip on sanky…sanky was shocked at first but then he realize his position & feel very awkward..yuk…he was making dirty dirty faces.. 😮

Swaragini was controlling their laughter seeing their position & specially sanky’s yuk face..now they were excitedly waiting to watch lucky’s reaction…

Sanky tried to pushed lucky…but in return lucky tightened his grip on him & pulled him more closer..

Lucky : (sleepy) what r u doing angel…plz stay calm yar…let me sleep…nd what r u wearing..you are feeling diff today…lil bit larger then your size…leave all that plz kiss me…(still closed eyes & lean towards sanky)

Swaragini was watching with excitement but sanky got extremely afraid by now…he slapped on lucky’s check b4 he come near him…

Lucky : (open his eyes) what the…!!! 😮

He saw sanky in his arms giving him angry yuk looks…his eye widened & he immediately get up.

Lucky : (shouts) ahhhhhhh…what the hell r u doing here yar…? R u trying to R….

Sanky : (punch him) shut up you idiot…you almost snatched my dignity today…at least look b4 pulling anyone on bed…Kaminey..
(again punch him)

Lucky : (in pain) ouch…sorry yar 🙁

Swaragini share hifi & laughed…but control themselves… lucky notice their presence & understood that it was their prank….

Lucky thought something & cupped sanky’s face…

Sanky : (confused & angry) lucky what r u doing…? (hold his hand)

Lucky : (whispered) Angel & kiddo are standing near window & laughing at us…i think they played prank on us…

Sanky : (realize & whispered) oh..that means..oh gosh..this two drama queens…(smirk) i think we should do what they want… 😉

Lucky : (smile nautily) (loudly) (went bit near to sanky) Sanky…i know it was mistake but..i don’t know y it really feel good in your arms…

Sanky : (loudly) if i tell u truth then…umm… i think i also liked it…should we try once more… 😉

Then sanlak hugged eo {normal hug }…lucky looked at Swaragini whose laughing face changed in to shocked & then angry face…

Lucky : (whispered still hugging) they both r boiling with anger…our plan worked..now time for blast…( they brock the hug)

Sanky : (cupped lucky’s face) i enjoyed hugging you…now i really wanna try a kiss…

Lucky : (loudly) then kiss me… (he forward his right check)

sanky extra slowly lean towards him…that was it for Swaragini…the door brust open…sanky pulled apart…& looked at fuming faces of Swaragini…

Shona : (angry) what the hell were you doing…? do u hv any idea how cheap it was…?

Ragini : (angry) yukk…a guy kissing another…chili…its sounds so dirty…more over you both r cheating on us…

sanlak laughed looking their fuming faces…they share hifi..they were rolling on bed holding their stomach…Swaragini become more angry…

Shona : (shouts) its not at all funny…you…

Now sanlak become serious & angry…

sanky : (interrupt) (attitude) this is call TIT FOR TAT…

lucky : (attitude) we were doing what you both wanted to see us doing…m i right…?

Swaragini shocked & avoid eye-contact…sanlak get up from the bed & start going towards them…

Ragini : (stammer) woh…what r u talking about…we don’t know..?

sanky : (angry) You both tricked and sent me to wake up lucky intentionally..so that we both stuck in this type of dirty situation.

Swaragini start going backward & become speechless…they got scared seeing their angry gaze..

lucky : (angry) I saw both of you laughing & enjoying our condition…so we decide to return the favor…nd see its works…

sanky : (attitude) i think more than yours..(angry) (shout) but how can u both do like this..?

Shona & Lado stop when their backs touched to wall…sanky locked Shona between him & wall..whereas lucky do the same with Lado…they both leaned to their respective girls…

Shona : (stammer) woh…sanky..lucky…we r..we r..sorry for that…

Ragini : (afraid) yah..we just wanted to hv some fun…plz don’t be serious & angry guys… 🙁

sanlak were holding swarag by their waist respectively..they gave them blank expression…Swaragini make puppy face & hold their ears…sanlak looked at both of them turn by turn..& then eo…

nd they leave them & again brust out laughing….giving hifi to eo making Swaragini confused…

lucky : (laugh) arre angel kiddo…my cutiee piees..we can never be angry on you…it was our another prank… 😉

sanky : (laugh) hahahaha…lol…u both were looking scared…& sweating also…lol 😀

Swaragini looked at them with anger but soon join them in laughing…

Shona : (beat them) you both scared us…first by acting as if kissing…ewee…i scared to imagine it also…

Ragini : (join Shona) & then by your fake anger…you both are very bed…

sanky : (laugh) lol…how can u think that we will ki…ewww…(make faces)

lucky : (seriously) but i hv learnt one thing from this whole drama..

Swasanrag looked at him curiously

lucky : (continue) i m never ever going to pull anyone who come to wake me up without checking once….this can be way more dangerous…uff..i hv to b careful…(pout) 😮

they laughed again & share group hug…Swasanrag come out & lucky went to get ready…

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@ Lunch time : 2:30 PM

They were having their lunch & talking with eo…

sanky : (serious tone) guys..i hv opened one bank a/c on four of us joint name…we will hv equal rights on that….and i hv transferred whole show winning price money to that a/c..we will use that money to open NGO to give dance & music training to poor talented peoples & to extent lucky’s dance academy…

Swalakrag become overwhelmed & emotional after hearing him…

lucky : (emotional) I was suppose to do the same…but now i will transfer 8 lacs to that a/c only..and its not lucky’s academy…i hv already transferred it to Shona & angel’s name…so it will be of four of us…

Shona : (teary eyes) sanky transfered his winning price to all of our name & lucky transfered his academy on our name without anyone’s insists or advice….

Ragini : (emotional) these shows how much we love & care for eo..we always will be like this only…

Swasanlak : (smile) always…

Ragini : (to change topic) btw what we will do today…as finally we are free now after completing every formalities & all..

Shona : (interrupt) except sanky..he has to prepare for his exam..my poor prince… 🙁

Sanky : Don’t worry princess i m gonna start study from tomorrow…so today i m also free…but i don’t wanna go out side…(romantic) i just want to lock myself in our room with you… 😉 (Shona blush)

Ragini : (tease) Ohh ho…someone is blushing like tomato…

Sanky : (fake scolding) Ohh hello madam..don’t tease my princess…even your condition is also going to be like that only…(to lucky) m i right lucky…?

lucky : yup..angel you only think na..we hv not spent any romantic moment with eo after our engagement…due to works & all..so now as we are free how can i leave this golden chance…(wink at her )

Swasan : (laugh) Ohh someone is blushing… 😀

They do some more masti & teasing…they complete their lunch…then sanky picked up Shona & lucky picked up lado in bridle style…

Sanky : (smile) lucky Lado…now c u at dinner time…bubye…enjoy..don’t tease Lado much … 😉

Lucky : (smirk) hmm.. same to you buddy…& tc of my Kiddo… 🙂

Swaragini blush…They went to their respective rooms & locked the doors from inside..

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Raglak room ;

Lucky placed Ragini on bed & lied besides her taking her into his arms…

Lucky : (smile naughty) so my wild cat…what will u do for me today..?

Ragini : (blush)(get up on her elbow & plant a kiss on his lips) hmm…whatever my sweetheart want me to do…

Lucky : (smirk) not bad… I love when u tk lead…nd ya it must be some lil extra after all we are engaged now… 😉 (kissed on her nack)

Ragini : (blush hard) lucky…u r becoming naughty day by day..

Lucky : (smile) (flipped & come on top of her) what can i do darling…i forget all my morals whenever i see u…after all my angel is so beautiful & Hot…

Ragini : (smack him playfully) lucky please stop talking like this…

Lucky : (smirk) Ohh so you want me to stop talking & start the real action ha…(wink at her) 😉

Ragini : (blush) lucky please..

lucky : (packed her lips) but wait a lil darling…b4 that i want to give you your engagement gift…

Lucky get up from bed & went near wardrobe..Ragini get up & Sat on bed curiously…lucky took one packet out from there & gave it to Ragini…she start opening it…she become extremely happy after seeing the gift…

It was a beautiful diamond bracelet & in middle of that “Raglak” was written beautifully…

Ragini : (hugged him) its so beautiful lucky…thank u so much for this amazing gift..i loved it so much…

Lucky : (happy) thank god u liked it…Btw i must tell u Shona has suggested me this idea…now let me make u to wear it…

He put that bracelet in her hand..& kissed her both the hands…Ragini was having happy tears in her eyes…

lucky wipe her tears by kissing her both the checks…Ragini closed her eyes..he kissed her lips for few secs …

Then lucky took out one another bracelet which is for guys…it was silver bracelet & raglak was written on that also..he asked her to put it on his hand…she become more happy & she did as she was told…

Lucky : (he took his hand near her hand) look angel…this shows that we both are really ment to be together…how our names are joined with eo…

Ragini : (overwhelmed) ya lucky we r made for eo only…nd this both bracelets are very beautiful…thank u for this gift…

She cupped his face & start kissing him…lucky smile & made her ly on her back while kissing her…he was on top of her…it was extra hot passionate kiss…their tongue were paying with eo..they were tasting eo..non of them was ready to breck the kiss..this was their longest one till now..they got apart when they were out of breath…

Lucky touched his forehead with her & smile looking at her…she blushed…

Lucky : (huskily) wow angel it was grate…it felt so good..i love you so much…

Ragini : (blush) i love you too lucky…

Lucky take off her t-shirt..1st she blushed.. she was having her tracks on but at upper part she was now just in her strapless inner…but then she also take off his tee…lucky start kissing her bare nack, shoulders & belly…she was mourning his name & kissing on his shoulders & face…

Then he again come to her face & start kissing her lips..this time bit wildly showing his love & right on her…he was crassing her bare belly & she was roming her hands on his hairs…they both were lost in their intense moments…

{they hv not crossed their limits..after all they r not yet married…it was just lil extra hot after engagement romance..}

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Meanwhile in swasan room :

Sanky come inside the room & locked the door..he gently throw Shona on bed…& smile nautily looking at her…Shona blushed..she hold his hand and try to pull him on her…

Sanky : (stop her) hv some patience my princess…(smile nautily) we hv whole afternon & evening with us for doing that…my MISS IMPATIENT BEAUTY…(wink at her)

Shona : (blush) (fake anger) huh..now i m not going to talk with you..MR MOOD SPOILER…(turn her face from him)

Sanky : (smile) oh no..you become angry..arre i was just telling you to wait…..(he try to hold her from shoulders but she jerked his hands)

Shona : (interrupt) i don’t wanna listen anything right now…get lost..

She was about to throw pillow on him but he pinned her on the bed under him…she struggle for few mins…he was enjoying his angry princess…

Sanky : (smile) (lean on her) you know what you look more beautiful & cute in this angry face…..(packed her lips)

Shona : (blush hard)

Sanky: (lost in her blush) (huskily) nd when you blush like this…u look gorgeous & s*xy…(again packed her lips)

Shona : (blush crimson red) sanky please…don’t talk like this…

Sanky : (smile) (press himself more on her) (huskily) then tell me you are not angry on me…

Shona : (feel his hot breath on her lips) (closed her eyes) (stammer) (whispering tone) I…i m not angry on you my prince…

She was expecting that he will kiss her but instead he got up from her making her confused and frusteted…

Sanky : (went near his wardrobe) thank god..u r not angry..now listen i told u to wait bz i want to give you your engagement gift…

Shona who was angry bz he got up without kissing her jumped after hearing about gift..

Shona : (happy) wooww…gift…(pout) you should hv told me 1st na..i would hv not become angry on u…

Sanky : (smile) (kissed her pouting lips) i would hv told u if u hv let me speck anything….

Shona : Okk baba..sorry…now give it to me fast..

Sanky smile on her excitement…but instead of giving gift to her .he forward his left check infornt of her…she understand & smile…

She kissed his left check…then he forward his right check…she kissed…he gestured towards his lips..she blush & packed his lips..he smile broadly…

Sanky gave her gift pack…there were two gold chains in that box…having pendant of S&S..both were beautiful…Shona become so happy after looking that chains…she packed sanky’s both the checks…

Shona : (hugged him) thank u so much sanky…its so beautiful…i loved it…

sanky : (smile) your welcome my princess..nd i hv to confess that it was Lado’s idea…

Sanky then make her wear one chain & asked her to put other chain on his nack…they stood infornt of mirror & looked both the chains in their nack..they smile..& kissed on their respective chain pendants…

Sanky pulled her to him…he hold her t-shirt’s from lower to remove it…Shona blush & hold his hand..

Sanky : (serious tone) princess…don’t worry i know my limits…& i promise i will control myself…

Shona : (take off her hands from his) (whispered) I completely trust you my prince…u hv full right on me…

Sanky smile & took off her t-shirts..she was in her strapless inner & at bottom having her pajamas on…he star her lovingly..Shona blushed & put her both arms on her shoulder crossing eo…& looked down…sanky smile seeing her shyness…he remove his tee by himself & picked up her…he gently placed her on bed & ly on top of her…

He start kissing her bare belly…he gently bite her there…then he come to her nack & start giving open mouth kisses there…Shona was mourning his name…she was also kissing him on his nack…shoulders & face…

Finally sanky come to her face..he took her lower lip in his both lips and start sucking…she did the same with his upper lips…then sanky gently bit on her lower lips making her moun..he insert his tongue in her mouth & start doing franch kiss…

They hv kissed b4 but that all were normal one..this was 1st time he was doing franch kiss & tasting her…Shona become confused for sometime but after few min she also start doing the same with him…they were kissing eo showing their love & passion for eo…they brock the kiss when they were in lack of oxygen…

Sanky : (whispered) wow..Shona u r very good student… 😉 that feels awesome…i love u so much princess…

Shona : (blush) i love you too dear…. 🙂

Sanky again start kissing her everywhere…within his limits…they both were lost in their romantic moments…

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Dinner time : @ 8:30 PM

They hv ordered pizza for dinner…sanky & lucky were on dining table..Swaragini were in kitchen…

Sanky : (tease lucky) arre…lucky dude what happened in your hand…see there are lots of scratch marks… 😉

Lucky : (blush a lil) (but tease him back) nothing sanky…but u tell me na what there on your nack..that purple mark… 😀

Sanky : (touch his nack) (blush a bit) It was the bestest noon & eve of my life…

Lucky : (smile) yup..same here…btw that chain is very nice…

Sanky : (smile) thanks…& your bracelet is also very nice…(looked at kitchen door) what are they both doing inside…

Lucky : yah..exactly..(shouts) angel Kiddo…where are you both..come fast na..we r hungry…

Swaragini : (shouts back) Coming…

They come out of kitchen..Ragini was having one plate in her hand..she placed it on table..Shona sit near sanky & Ragini near lucky…they all start eating & also feeding eo..

sanky : (pout) now from tomorrow i hv to to start my study…

Ragini: (put her hand on his) aww..don’t worry sanky…u will surly get distinctions…

Shona : my CS final exams are also coming in June…i hv only one month to prepare…(bite her nails)

lucky : (pat her check) Ohh my brilliant beauty…you r surly going to clear your exam in 1St attempt so don’t worry….

Sanky : hmm..nd after that we hv to do something for Lado…just like u become dancer we want to see u as singer also…

Shona : yah..nd lucky…u also need to do something with respect to your cricket…

They got engaged in talking…They also pulls eo’s leg with respect to their beautiful noon…they were laughing & enjoying with eo…they complete their diner..sanlak helped Swaragini to clean the table & kitchen…

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They all come out to the hall after arranging kitchen…nd they start enjoying with eo again…

lucky : (smile) guys..our bonding with eo is just incredible..we will always be just like this only……..

Ragini : (smile) no matter what we r in any situation..we will support eo..we will take stand for eo…

Shona : (smile) our love, trust & care for eo will never decrease…but it will grow up by each passing day…

sanky : (smile) ” DIL DOSTI & DANCE ” these three things will always link us unseprablely with eo….

Swasanraglak : (shouts together) We promise that we will be together forever….

sanky played one song & they all start dancing on that…

“Yaaro dosti badi hi hasin hai
Ye na ho to kya phir bolo ye zindagi hai
Koi to ho razdar
Begaraj tera ho yaar Koi to ho razdar

[1st Swalak & ragsan start dance with eo…they were laughing and tickling eo ]

Teri har ke burai pe dante woh dost
Gam ki ho dhoop to saya bane tera woh dost
Nache bhi woh teri khushi mai

[Shona stomp her foot on lucky’s leg…he looked at her angrily…she hold her ears cutly…he smile & hug her….Sanky was troubling Lado by pulling her hair…she shouts on him…he make baby face..she smile & hug him… ]

Ari yaaro dosti badi hi haseen hai Ye na ho to kya phir bolo ye zindagi hai
Koi to ho razdar Begaraj tera ho yaar Koi to ho razdar

[ Then sanlak & swaragini danced with eo for sometime…They were running & chasing eo…teasing eo.. friendly kind of things while dancing… ]

Tan mann kar tujhpe fida mehbub woh
Palko pe jo rakhe tujhe mehbub woh
Jiski vafa tere liye ho

[ then swasan & raglak start dancing in couple dance style..holding eo’s hand… ]

Are yaaro mohabbat hi to bandagi hai
Ye na ho to kya phir bolo ye zindgi hai
Koi to dilbar ho yaar
Jisko tujhse ho pyaar
Koi to dilbar ho yaar

[ sanky twirled Shona around him…Ragini went a bit far…lucky pulled her on him..sanlak hold swarag by their waist respectively…& were dancing looking into their eyes…]

song completed…swasan & raglak share tight hug…then Swalak & ragsan share hug…then Swaragini & sanlak share hug…and at last they all share group hug…

screen paused on laughing faces of Swasanraglak…

🙂 THE END 🙂

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so friends how was this cheater..?..did u all liked it..? i tried to show all of their bondings in this part…i hope i hv not made u disappoint with this last part…

Sorry for grammar & spelling errors…

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sorry friends…i m ending this story here…i can’t beliv that i wrote 30 long episodes bz i was suppose to end this in 8 epi only..

I m really busy with my exams & CA final…after that i m hving my cousin marriage in May..so that i will not be having any time to write anything….that’s y i m ending this story hear…My exams are starting from tomorrow…

I m thinking to write D3 SEASON 2..I will continue these story from here onwards only…but i can write it from JUNE…in Apr & May i will not be available…

SO TELL ME FRIENDS DO U WANT ME TO COME UP WITH D3 SEASON 2 FROM JUNE…?????

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thank u for being there with me in my this ff journey…i m glad u all give your lots of love & support to my simple story…& appreciated my writing so much…though i m nothing infornt of other writers…

🙂 THANKS A LOT FRIENDS…I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH…I WILL MISS U ALL… 🙂

Nd i wanna say sorry if i hv hurt any of your feelings with my any chapter unintentionally..

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SPECIAL THANKS & LOTS OF LOVE TO FOLLOWINGS :-

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(I M soooooooooo sorry if i hv skipped anyone here…plz forgive me for that…i hv tried to write most of the names who hv commented )

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Please friends i request all of you including Silent readers to comment in this last cheater…i m waiting for your valuable feedback…

thank u soooooooooo much all of you…. 🙂

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BUBYE…KEEP SMILING…TAKE CARE…STAY BLESSED…HV A ROCKING & AWESOME DAYS AHEAD… 🙂 😉

Credit to: Namrata

87 comments

  1. kriya

    swasan n raglak scene was superb……especially their bonding with each other………dance part was awsm……..swaragini prank on sanlak was funny……..i want season 2…….all the best for ur exams…….

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear 🙂 for being there for me & my ff from starting to end…

      Thanks for your wishes… 🙂 tc dear…

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this story… 🙂

      nd ya in season 2…i will show swasanraglak next passion ie apart from dance life… person & professional life…. with certain ups & downs in their life… stay tune dear 😉 hope u will liked it…

  2. Hey …plz show their marriage atleast ….you r ending very soon…ur ff was amazing… Plz don’t stop the ff…plz it’s a humble request….plzzzzz

    • Namrata

      Thanks dear for liking my ff 🙂

      Jenisha, i wanted to show their other professional life & certain ups & downs in their life… b4 their marriage…

      nd i m not having time to write till June so i m ending this season & will come up with next one forwarding story from here only..

      so plz don’t be sad dear…

  3. shan

    seriously i m disappointed dr…..dat u r ending ur ff…..but k i can understand dr….its very very nice…..ending was fabulous……surely will miss u…..come with another ff dr

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…

      thanks for understanding dear…don’t be sad sweety… i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 tc…

  4. Hope

    I’m literally crying right now…freinds ke beech mein no sorry no thanks…so mujhe tnks math karnaa.. I’m gonna miss u my buddy..and i luvd d san lak bedroom scenes..i was laughing and my grandma lookd at me lyk i went mad..lol.. Lekin usse kya patha..bathaya toh mujhe agli maheene thak room mein lock karengi..she gives too much importants to morals..but i’m a born rebel..nd i don’t lyk being a moral police..nd also i respect our culture dat doesn’t mean i’m a traditional girl..(main freedom of expression ki bare mein essay likh raha tha or iski points jumped into my head.oops)
    Plz plz write season 2..enjoy ur exams nd celebrate ur cousins wedding..wish dem behalf of me.. Hoping to see u soon..

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…

      Don’t cry dear…or else i won’t able to hold my tears… 🙁 i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂

      nd i will miss your short short incidence sharing… 🙂 thank god you didn’t tell your grand ma abt this epi… or else she would hv scolded me in her mind… 😉

      all the best death for your exams..

      nd i will surly wish my bro & SIL on behalf of u… 😉

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this story… 🙂

      Ohh grate… All the very best for your journey in CA profession…

      nd thank u so much for your wish… tc dr 🙂

  5. I am silent reader after reading this ff I can’t stop myself from commenting.I loved it . It’s one of my favorite ff. Plz come back with season 2.I am eagerly waiting for it.

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this story.. 🙂 i m glad you commented… nd i will come back with season 2 soon.. tc dr 🙂

  6. tani

    OMG sanlak part was very comedy….awesome episode…ur idea of 2nd season is mind blowing…. return wid a bang….will miss u…all d best for our exams n enjoy ur cousins wedding…. pls return soon

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this ff… 🙂 ya i will come back with season 2..i hope u will like it also… thanks for your wishes 😀

  7. Ammu

    Superb ending dear and waiting for season 2. Both swasan and raglak scenes are awesome. Best of luck for ur exams. Miss u didi

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…

      thanks for your wish …i will miss u too dear..

      i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 tc…

  8. Sonia

    Awesome and beautiful story. Im gonna miss this story dearly although i wasnt a regular commentor but used to read every chapter.

    surely we gonna love the season 2. Hope to see you soon.
    All the best for your exams and enjoy the wedding.
    best wishes.

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear….Its ok for not commenting… but i m glad u read & liked my ff… 🙂

      thanks for your wishes.. 🙂

      nd i also hope that u all will like next season also… 😉 tc dear

  9. Niku

    I wanna tell u smthing today i m missing ur ff n u posted it today ty so much for that….n both chp. R amazing n mind blowing d way u end is awsome ……miss u dr n lots of love

    • Namrata

      Wow…what a confidence na… !!! Thank u so much dear for liking this story… & ending also… 🙂 will miss u too dear… tc..

  10. Hello diii…this last chapter was awesome…U showed their love and passion…incredible job….and dont u dare to say that u r not a good writer..every writer of this site have their own speciality and that apply to u too…and most imp we all are not mad who appreciate and loved ur work to this extent….u should understand by our comments that how much we love u and ur ff….also comments are the only way to shower love for everyone….and plsss plsss plsss surely come with the next season…..its a humble request….I willl eagerly wait for next season…..I will be the happiest person on the earth…plsssss…and take ur time…we wait for uhhh….love uhh sooo much….all the very best for ur exams…..enjoy ur cousins marriage to the fullest…..will miss uhh like anything….srsly gonna miss uh and D3 soooo much….thanxx for mentioning my name I m soo glad that u find me an encouraging one…Be happy….keep smiling di… 🙂 🙂

    AND MISS ME TOOO…. 😉 😛 Hehe…
    LOADS OF LOVE BY MY SIDE…again good luck for ur exams…I know u gonna rock that too….stay blessed….enough of my bak bak and I know u will miss my bak bak so if u want to hear it again soon come back in june…I will not have any problm to give it…. 😛 😛

    Ohhh soo sorry I completely forgot about today’s episode…srsly dii its initial was damn funny….lucky and sanky…OMG…hatts of to uhh….it was imagine the situation and laughing like anything….hahaha….still doing the same…and their romatic moments was also nice…now byyy…..c u soon….muahhhh…. ♥♡♥♡♥

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear…. 🙂 how can i forget u dear.. i hv to mention your name… u hv showered lots of love for my ff in your each comment… 😀 i m really very happy that i come to in contact with you through this ff.. 🙂

      i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 hope u all will like it also…

      thanks alot for your appreciation… u consider me good writer is very big thing for me… i just write my thought in simple way.. without using any kind of high level words & emotions… still u all liked it so much is kind of achievement for me… 😉

      i loved…i love….& i will always love reading your Bak bak… 😉 😀

      i will surly going to MISS U DEAR… 🙂 love u soooooooooo much… 🙂 keep smiling & take care…

      nd ha thanks for your wishes.. mumhhha 🙂

  11. L Khan

    Ur were amazing u rocked it dr……….surely cum up with season 2 nd i know it will also be a bang……..will miss u luv u ???

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear.. 🙂 i will come with next season & hope u all will like it also.. i will also miss u dear… tc… 🙂 love u

      nd dear i wanna say sorry to u bz u hv asked sammery of few part but due to my tight schedul i couldn’t give it to u… 🙁 sorry…

  12. sanskriti ( die hard fan of swasan )

    Diiiiiiiiiiiiiii first thing I m very angry on u for ending ur ff ? ok di I m just kidding I know u r very busy with exams and everything todays epi was soooooooooo amazing that I could not control my self I m literally very sad ? apart from.that rest was fabulous and di we r sisters we should not say tnxs to eo we should understand eo and forgive our mistakes and for season 2 of D3 I want to see hw Shona lucky laado and sanky give heights to their careers also their marriage and their kids and when they kids grow up they should be born dancers like their parents even they must proud of their parents for Shona and sanky daughter name is Sara and raglak son name Aman that’s what I want to say di take care luv u di see u soon ummmmahhh ??

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…

      thanks for understanding dear…don’t be sad & angry my lil sis… 🙁 i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 i hope u will like it also…

      Ohh god… you planned till their kids… 😮 i just hv some planning till their marriage… but still i will consider your suggestion & will think something about that…

      plz don’t be upset babu…or else i will become sad also… 🙁

      will miss U dear… love u…tc… 🙂 keep smiling

  13. Sueño

    Yp……. Definetly…… U shld continue……????
    Its jus lovely…….. Lovd thr bonding alot??

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear.. 🙂 for reading & liking this story & their bonding… 😀 i will surly continue…

  14. pooja

    aww diiiiiii i will miss u soooooooooo much…….
    mind blowing, fabulous ,fantastic, awsm, superb……
    all good words to dis ff………..
    loved all d chapters………..
    seriosly all parts are just superb,…………….

    all d very best 4 ur xams……
    ya obviosly plzz comeback wit seasan 2………….
    i will be waiting 4 u………..

    love u diiiiiiiiiiiiii…………;) 😉

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…

      i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 i hope u will like it also…

      thanks for your wishes… 😀

      I will miss U so much dear… love u…tc… 🙂 keep smiling

  15. Jyoti

    Superb di superb…. season 1 ending love it…of course i’ll wait till june ur ff is awesome..u have exams till 2 may na so good luck for that…looking forward for season 2 di…i’ll miss u badly

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…

      i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 i hope u will like it also…

      thanks for your wishes… 😀

      I will miss U so much dear… love u…tc… 🙂 keep smiling

  16. Ani

    U nvr informed us before tat u gonna end it? Gonna miss ur ff for these two months? Just hope these two months go in a swift .. I love ur ff alot… Always I used to take time for ur ff and sit and read patiently for hours as I used to read it and imagine the scenes… U just nailed the last episode with their masti fight romance… All the emotions in one episode oly u can do it… Each and every time whether u have work or not u give us lengthy episodes without disappointing us… Come back soon and all the best??

    • Namrata

      Thanks dear for always being there with me & my ff for starting till end…
      🙂

      Thank u so much for your appreciation…i m glad u liked my ff this much… 😀

      plz don’t be upset dear… 🙁 i m sorry for not informing b4..but i will surly come back by may end or June starting… 🙂 i hope u will like it also…

      thanks for your wishes… :D…love u…tc… 🙂 keep smiling

  17. Alina

    Wow superb mind blowing . . . no words to appreciate UA work. Will surely miss UA ff. Gud luck fa f exams

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this story & my work… 🙂 thanks for your wish.. 😀 …tc dear

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for commenting everytime from starting till end… nd i will surly read your ff also after my exams… 🙂 tc dear

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for your appreciation.. i m glad u like my ff… 🙂 i will surely read your ff after my exams dear… 🙂 take care 😀

  18. ashi

    Just awesome, awesome, awesome and awesome….. Luvd ur ff…..will miss you namrata and ur ff too?????????????✌✌✌???????

    • Namrata

      Thank u thank u thank u so much dear… 😀 i m glad u liked my ff so much… thanks for your wish… 🙂 tc dear

  19. rags

    its awsome but i am going to miss you and your ff namrata dii . i hope you will be back with new ff
    miss you and love you dii

  20. mitti

    I have tears in my eyes dear…its really weird for as I seldom become emotional not even with my closed ones but idk m feeling happy n also sad at d same time. …namrata seriously dear all these days reading ur ff I actually started living it!!!!..along with ur ff I also got a connection n bonding with u…I don’t know u but still u have become important. …maybe that’s d connection we have……
    …u don’t no namrata how much m wanting to write but just being not able to…..I never thought that without seeing nor even talking I ll get a friend like u in such a manner…:-) 😀

    In the fan fiction analysis wherever u r name n story was mentioned I myself felt proud n happy…love u loads dear

    Will wait for your second season eagerly n u ended it fabulously! !!!! 🙂

    Okay now m getting more emotional before I start crying I ll just say……… miss me ok!!! 😉 😉
    Haahaaaaaa! !!!…tc all the best for ur exams once again…love u muaahhhh! !!!♥♥♥♥

    • Namrata

      Umm..i don’t know mitti from where should i start… As i told u everytime.. ur comment always made me feel different…

      u know what when i was writing this Ch..some of your name come in my mind whomever i m going 2 miss so much… nd in that your name was the 1st one… 🙂

      Plz dear plz don’t cry… u know after reading your comment i got tears in my eyes & i just sat for sometime without doing anything…now when i m typing this comment still i m having teary eyes… 🙁

    • Namrata

      You hv understand my motive behind writing some points on relations…nd always appreciated me for that.. that always make me feel good… 😀

      As i hv told u… i think we both are sharing same nature… that automatically bond us together… 🙂 u understand me very well and encouraged me also…

      I also felt some bonding with you everytime…i hv also notice your comment in every swasan ff analysis where my ff is mentioned…

      i think i can say that its not my ff but its our ff seeing your love for this ff & me… 🙂

      I m feeling very lucky to meet you i mean to come in to contact with you through this ff… i will never ever forget you… 🙁 you will always be my freined… 🙂

      thank for your wishes… 🙂 nd plz don’t be upset else i will also feel the same…

      i WILL come back with season 2 in may end or June starting… 🙂 i m hoping we will meet again through OUR d3 season 2… 😉

      I WILL MISS U SO MUCH dear… love u alot… take care… keep smiling… 🙂 😀

    • Namrata

      Its totally ok anjli dear.. 🙂 i m glad u liked this ending… 🙂

      waiting for your ff plz post it soon ha…i m only reading yours ff only till my exams… 😉 tc dear

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this story.. 🙂 thanks for your wish.. 😀 …tc dear

  21. Namrata

    Thank u so much dear for reading & liking this story & my work… 🙂 thanks for your wish.. 😀 …tc dear

  22. Jwala

    Namu.. sorry I’m late.. and sad that your ff ending.. come back with season 2 soon. you are the best.. i want to ask you one thing.. what r you learning? r u a college student?

    • Namrata

      dear reply for your comment has been posted as different comment rather then here..plz checked it dear… 🙂

  23. awesome … mind blowing … sorry I was. not able to comment on last chapter was litttle busy … but di its outstanding….. loved it…… swasanraglak romance their bonding everything….. speacially the way u express every feeling … every scene… was adorable….. di I have become a huge…. huge.fan of yours … willl miss yr ff a lot di…… plz write a new ff ……. will miss yr veautiful writings……
    and Best of luck for yr exam its tomorrow I suppose
    keep smiling….

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much Sara dear for commenting almost everytime & liking this story.. 🙂 thanks for appreciating me… i m glad u liked this story so much… 🙂 i will also miss U.. tc dear…keep smiling… 😀 thanks for your wishes… yup..exam is from 2moro.. 🙁

  24. Namrata

    Its ok jwala… i m very happy seeing your comment… thank u so much dear for being always there with me & this ff.. 🙂

    I m a CA final student having my final attempt in May 17… My article ship training is going on… nd also i m doing my graduation along with that…

    i will miss u dear…tc 🙂

  25. Bhargavi

    It was such a superb story where I can’t see such bonding yar. Really you have done a great job. I would be super happy if you start with season 2

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear 🙂 for liking this story & their bonding so much… nd i will surly come up with next season..tc dear 😀

  26. Sofia

    Sorry Namrata 4 being late.. i was really busy yesterday. Your last episode showed all the bondings of the 4 …i loved and will miss ur ff badly and waiting for D3 season 2. Moreover my exams are also in may…busy preparing 4 that. Wish u all the best..:-)

    • Namrata

      Its ok sofia dear….i will also miss u so much… 🙂

      Thank u so much dear 🙂 for liking this story & their bonding so much… nd i will surly come up with next season..

      All the best for your exams…tc dear 😀

  27. Krystal

    Sorry namrata for the late comment but i just wanted to say that this ff was…MAGNIFICENT, FANTASTIC,SPECTACULAR,OUTSTANDING,AMAZING,AWESOME and all the other words!
    I just loved this ff lol and i cant wait until season 2
    And btw best of luck with your exams!

    • Namrata

      Its totally ok dear… i m so much happy that u read it & also commented… 🙂

      Thank u soooooooooo much dear for all the appreciation…i m glad u liked my ff so much… 🙂

      thanks for your wishes…

      i will surely come up with next season after 1 month appx… 🙂 tc dear

  28. Piya

    Dear i am a silent reader of ur ff. I nt only liked it bt lved it. I m eagerly waiting for the 2nd season…

  29. hey namrata so sorry dea couldn’t comment on the previous update as i was out of station n as soon as i came back i read it n u ended it …sad but it is okay as u will come up with season 2 …………..coming to update ….grand finale part 2 – swasan sun saathiya song n dance are super n swara jumping n lands om sanskars arms mind blowing N raglak wow wow wow…yaar the shadow theme fabulous …well swasanraglak answer for jai’s question so cute n manish yaar it was funny actually even i got confused a bit….swasanraglak getting excited thinking about the decorations n all Awwww sooooo cute …loved that scene n elders respecting their bond n decide not to separate them so sweet n yaa you are right too maybe lucky deserve the first place …..anyways by seeing their bond it doesn’t matter know …:-)

    last chapter:-( — swarag prank on sanlak was outstanding yaar i laughed out like hell n same with sanlak prank on swarag superrrr cool one i could imagine sanskar expressions specially poor sanskar n the joint account too good n obvious u rocked the romance too n even the respective gifts n lastly their dance awesome ending buddy loved it……
    take care n prepare well n will be waiting for next season to say desperately ….love u dea….good luck …:-)

  30. Dharsha

    Yaar I noticed d3 in fb yesterday only….?
    And now am here completely completed reading all the parts….?
    Just loved all the 30 parts….?
    Those were just out of the world….?
    No words to express how happy I am right now….?
    Loved ur ff dear?
    I am feeling really sorry that I could not have commented on each and every episode about….
    Swalak fraternity
    Ragsan friendship
    Swasan lovely love (my fav. Couple)
    Raglak romantic romance
    Their trust,love,friendship,……….lots and lots….thank you so much for providing all these in ur story?
    Also most importantly supportive…understanding…loving parents???
    Hats off to ur writing skills?
    Just no more words….only waiting for ur d3 season 2….?

    All the best for ur CA exams…..I know u will Rock it……..(if it is completed u must have rock it : lol)

    PS:didn’t thought to speak more but even still sad as am commentING only on the last part…..as I could not share all my feelings about each and every part….but from the bottom of my heart I just love this ff very much….
    Love you loads for this?

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