Swaragini FF (Swasan-Raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-26

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I hv completed 25 epi.. with your all supports.. πŸ™‚

u know i hv played every pranks which i hv written in last part & many more on my friends & cousins..they used to call me Prankster… πŸ˜‰

Thank u so much for wishing me for my exams…

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Friends.. πŸ™Β  u know what

πŸ™ My this part got deleted πŸ™ b4 i save it… πŸ™

i hv completed writing this one at 4 pm only but…my worst luck…i m already running out of time & this happened..i ws feeling like crying…now i m posting it by 11 pm…after rewriting it..

ya i hv rewrited this whole epi aging.. πŸ™ but in sad & upset mood…

so plz i m telling u all sorry in advance…i hope its not boring… πŸ™

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Ch-25 link :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-25/

Recap : Sanky’s prank on swaraglak…swasan & raglak romance…sanky’s jealousy…

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Ch-26 :

Shona was extrimly happy after knowing that shahid is gonna come…raglak were also happy…Sanky was happy nd jealous both..

Now as shahid was coming so all contestants need to perform on his songs…they hv to get their dance ready in 2 days…they were going to perform in pairs…so1)Swaragini 2) sanlak 3) Kabnik
They were engaged in dance practice for these 2 days…

Pve night of performance…dinner table : all contestants were there..

Nikhil : (tease) hey…swara..r u excited for tomorrow…?

Kabir : (join him) hey wait wait…tell me What will u do after shahid come infornt of you..?

Sanky glare them to bring this topic…raglak laugh..

Shona : (smile) yah..i m soooooooooo excited…nd i will not act like crazy typical fan infornt of him…i just wanna hug him.. that’s it..

Ragini : (smile sweetly) i also like him alot..i want to hug him..but i wanna do couple dance with him too…he is great dancer…

Lucky start coughing badly after hearing Ragini….now Sanky smirk seeing his condition…

Ragini : (dreamily) He is so…

Shona : (same) dashing…
Ragini :Β  & Handsome…
Shona : & charming…
Ragini : & Cute…
Shona : & Sweet…
Shona : & Hot…
Ragini : & Smart…
Shona : &…..

Lucky : (interrupt) enough..now stop it u both…

Both Swaragini come back to their senses…they smile shyly…Nikhil & Kabir laugh & tease them..Sanky was jealous but at the same time gone through this type of situation…

But lucky…for him it was 1st time Ragini talking about other guy..that to with such a dreamy smile..he was feeling very jealous…

Lucky : Lado…about Shona we know that she loves shahid but you…y u r behaving like this…?

Ragini : arre nothing like that lucky…i just like him as actor & dancer a lot…

Lucky take sigh of relief & he smile naughtily at Sanky…Sanky glare him…their expressions were noticed by Ragini…she smiles as she understand that lucky was feeling jealous when she was speaking about shahid…she got a naughty idea to tease lucky after going to their room…

Shona : (happily) finally tomorrow is the day when i meet my shahid live in front of me..

Lucky : (tease her specially to made Sanky jealous) ohhhooooo…my shahid…?!!!!!

Shona blush…raglak share hifi…all laugh…but Sanky fume…

Sanky : (angrily) stop it guys.. lucky he is MEERA’s shahid…& not Shona’s..did u get that…

Raglak & Nikhil understand that he is feeling jealous…Kabir thought that he is speaking practical thing…

but Shona…she felt hurt by his words & left from there even without speaking a word…Sanky notice tears in her eyes while she was leaving…he felt guilty for hurting her…

Sanky : (upset) Ohh god…what i hv done…?

Kabir : upps…it seems she felt hurt by your words…

Ragini : (stand up with concern) let me go and check her..

Lucky : (hold her hand) Wait Lado..let Sanky go…

Sanky looked at him with sad face…lucky assure him with his eyes that Shona will be ok…Sanky nodes & left for Swaragini’s room..

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Shona come inside Swaragini’s room & looked the door…she was feeling hurt by Sanky’s words..so she start crying…

Shona : (like kid) how can he say that shahid is not Shona’s…? When Shona loves him alot…(realise) ok fine i agree he is not mine but meera’s & he also even don’t know me..

Shona : (thinks) but y Sanky seems angry from past two days…? Y he is getting hyper when someone speck about shahid..?

Then she analyse all the previous behaviour of Sanky…she stop crying & smile widely….

Shona : (smile) bz he is feeling jealous….(laugh) Ohh god…Sanky is feeling jealous…awww…he was looking so cute with that angry face…my prince is becoming passasive about me…wow…

Shona : (smile) he is such an idiot yar…ya i love shahid but i never hv intention to spend my life with him…infact I love Sanky more than anyone..my love towards u & SHAHID are not comparable…I…

She was interrupt by knock on the door…she checked it was Sanky…

she thought to tease him more…so he will pampered her…she make crying & upset face…she opened the door & turn back side..

Sanky come inside & closed the door…he hurriedly start to apologies…she was facing her back to him…

Sanky : look princess i didn’t mean to hurt you…i m sorry…i don’t know how i Spock like that…sorry…plz sorry na…

Shona smile but pretend..

Shona : (fake crying) no Sanky..you hurt me intentionally…

Sanky : (pleading) no Shona..i sware i didn’t do it intentionally…how can i even think do something which hurts my princess… I m sorry…plz…

Shona : (drama) but still how can u speck like that when u know how much i love shahid…?

She noticed Sanky’s face from corner of he eyes…which turned pleading to jealous..she giggle a bit & control it…but our hero notice it..

Sanky : (monologue) did i just see her giggling..? Ohh ya i did…that means she is faking her anger…so that i pampered her…such a drama queen she is…(smile) now see my princess how i will make you confess this….

Sanky : (act as gave up) ok Shona.. I try to apologize but if u r not ready then take your time i will not put any kind of pressure on you.i m leaving…

He was about to turn when Shona hurriedly turn &…

Shona : arre how can u go like this….? (confessed) I thought u will pampered me that’s y i was pretending to be angry but you are going without doing that …(make a child face) that’s not fair…

Sanky smile naughtily…then she realize that she confessed…she smack her head…Sanky pulled her towards him & kissed her on lips for few min…then he hugged her tight…

Sanky : (emotional) i love you so much…you know what princess…i was angry on myself for hurting you…i m sorry…i really didn’t mean to hurt you…i sware…

Shona : (put her hand of his lips) i know Sanky…u can not hurt me even in ur dreams also…nd i love you so much…

Sanky : (confused) but i hv seen tears in your eyes when u left the table…? Then…

Sanky was holding her from her waist…she thought not to tell the truth right now…so..

Shona : ya..i was angry at first then i understand that you said partially the right thing…

Sanky : (confused) partially…!!!???

Shona : (smile naughty) yah…he is meera’s..that’s right one..but i still love him…

Sanky : (make faces) hmmm..

He hugged her to hide his expression..but Shona has already seen that…she control her laugh…

They went & meet raglak…they spend some buddy time and come back to Swaragini’s room leaving raglak in sanlak room…

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There Ragini thought to tease lucky by making him jealous…lucky went to washroom for changing…at that time Ragini kept her phone on air-port mode…she open her ring tone list..she played her ring tone when lucky come out…she act as if receiving the call sitting in such way that lucky couldn’t see her phone’s screen & crossing his side..

Ragini : Hello…who’s there…? Why are you calling me at this time..?

She paused as if listening to other side person…she act as if excited & jumped a lil…

Ragini : (smile) Ohh…wowwww…..i can’t belive you r calling me…i m very happy yar…

Lucky looked at her….he is not jealous till now bz Ragini was talking casual..he thought he is just her friend..

Ragini : (shyly) what are u talking handsome…how can juliet forget her Romio…? (paused) you are the most handsome & dashing guy i hv even met in my life…(paused) aree…i m telling the truth…(paused) (blushed) aww..u think i m beautiful & hot….thank u so much…

Ragini was acting as if talking on the phone..After listening all this he was boiling in anger & jealously…

Lucky : (monologue) who is this Romio now..? How can he say that Ragini is hot…only i hv that right..he is flirting with my angel…nd my angel is also giving him lines..she said that he is the most handsome man…that means more than me…(make cute angry face )

Ragini watched all his expression from her corner of eyes…she was controlling her laughing…she act as if ends the call & turned to him.

Lucky : (angry) angel…who was that..?!!

Ragini : (innocently) he was my friend…

Lucky : (angry) Ohh really..? I hv never seen you talking like this with Sanky even..when he is buddy…then…

Ragini : (fake stammer) woh…we talked after many time..that y …

Lucky : (jealous) what’s that Romio & juliet ?

Ragini : (smile) we hv acted in drama as Romio juliet in clg from that day he called me juliet & i call u Romio…

Lucky was hell jealous & angry…

Lucky : (jealous) but how can you let him flirt with you..? Nd even u were flirting with him..?

Ragini : (fake anger) offo y r u acting like typical boy friend…now i can’t even talked with friends..

Lucky : (angry) you can angel..but not like this…you were literally flitting with him & i was…….

Ragini : (interrupt) feeling Jealous..

Lucky : (agree) yah…(realise) no no i mean…i…

Ragini : hhahahhahha…lol..lucky…you look very cute…when u r angry…lol..

Ragini start laughing loudly…lucky was shocked & confused to see her laughing like this..he was angry also due to that phone call..

Lucky : (angry) stop it Lado…i m still angry the way you talked…

Ragini stand up & give her phone to him…he open the call log & see no calls…then he saw that phone was on air port mode…

Lucky : that means it was a prank..to make me jealous…?

Ragini : yes my sweetheart…i saw you getting jealous when i was talking about shahid..at that time i thought to made u jealous..bz u look very cute in that expression..

Lucky : (pulled her angrily) Lado..plz don’t play such pranks on me..i was really feeling bad…i can’t even imagine u thinking anything about someone else…so plz don’t do like that…plz…i love you so much angel…

Ragini : (guilty) i m sorry lucky..i wont do it again…i hv also felt this jealously when u flirted with other girls in initial days b4 our confession…i know how its pain…i m sorry…nd i also love you aofia much…

Lucky kissed her on her lips for sometime & then they ly on bed huging eo & doze off..

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Performance day :

Epi start when Jai told audience about Sanky’s come back..then Judges welcome Sanky..they hugged him & blessed him..they were extrimly happy…

After that Firstly all the contestants performed their solo acts…& judges gave their comments…

Everyone was impatiently waiting for shahid kapoor specially Shona & except Sanky…

Jai : so now..its time for our guest entry…(confused) but where he is..i hv a news that he has entered the studio but he is…..

He was interrupted…

Someone : ” Silent hoja varana main vailent ho jaunga..”

All cheered and looked to cilling of the stage from where a big box come down..nd there he was…a heart of millions of girls…

SHAHID KAPOOR

All give him a huge round of applause…& cheers form him…

” shandar title track play ”

He danced on it for a while…& met judges & hugged them…then he wave his hand to all the contestants…there he noticed something…music stops..

Jai : (loudly) so plz welcome our special guest of tonight Shahid kapoor…

All clapped…he give flying kiss to audience & went to take his guest seat..he again looked at contestants area & notice something..he smiled..& sat down on the chair…

When shahid entered Shona’s heart beating like anything…she was holding her breath..when she saw him..she forget everything…all were standing & capping for him but she was sitting like statue & happy tears were forming in her eyes…she was just staring him.

Nd yup shahid noticed her when he turned towards contestants that she is sitting like statue & having teary eyes…

Sanky was standing but not at all looking at shahid…he was fuming with jealously seeing Shona’s condition…he was looking bit angry..

Nd it was also noticed by shahid when he was going towards his chair…so shahid noticed both Shona & Sanky’s reaction on his entry..

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Jai : lets start our special performances which all contestants hv prepared for shahid…firstly its turn for Nikhil & Kabir…

Nikhil & Kabir start performing…

at that time Jai went near shahid & show him one vedio from his phone…which he has secretly recorded when Shona start shouting & jumping…

In vedio Shona was running..dancing & jumping..shouting that yahoo & wow..shahid gonna come & all that…

Shahid smiled…he understand that she loves him alot…he also understand that Sanky is jealous bz he noticed his expression & moreover he saw him screming in that vedio…

Jai : now its turn for sanskar & laksh..plz welcome them on stage..

Song : (movie haidar)

” Bismil bismil bulbul-e-bismil (bismil..)
Mat mil mat mil gul se mat mil (mat mil..)
Aye Bismil bismil bulbul-e-bismil
Mat mil, mat mil gul se mat mil
Bismil bismil bulbul-e-bismil
Aye dil-e-bulbul bulbul-e-bismil
Mushkil-e-dil bhi mushkil hoti hain…”

[THEY BOTH START DANCING IN CRAMPING STYLE..WITH FULL FORCE & AGGRESSION…THEIR EXPRESSION WERE OUTSTANDING.. AT THE END THEY BOTH WENT TO THE SMALL STAGE PLACE IN THE CORNER & JUMP FROM THERE..& TOOK THE LAST PAUSE WITH ATTITUDE SMILE ]

all give them standing ovation…it was mindblowing dance…

Shahid : wow man…you guys just killed it…your moves..steps…expression were just fabulous…& that last jump was…breath taking…superb guys superb…outstanding.

sanlak : (happily) Thank u sir..

Jai : now its time for next performance plz welcome swara & Ragini…they took their places..

Song : (movie : Kaminey)

” Aaja aaja dil nichode, raat ki matki tode,
Koi goodluck nikaale, aaj gullak to phode
Hai till till taala mera teli ka tel,
Hai kaudi kaudi paisa paisa paise ka khel
Chal chal sadko pe hogi dhan tan Dhan te nan, te ne ne na…. ”

[BOTH THE GIRL START TO PERFORM.. SHONA WENT TO STAIRS & TAKE BAK FLIP FROM THERE MAKING EVERY ONE STAND UP FROM THEIR CHAIRS…RAGINI TAKE CONTINUATION FLIPS MAKING EVERYONE SHOCKED..BZ IT WAS HER FIRST TIME IN THIS TYPE OF DANCE STYLE..THEY GIVE FANTASTIC END PAUSE WIT ANGRY LOOK]

All gave them standing ovation..judges come on the stage & hugged both of them..they were extrimly amazed by their performance..

Shahid also was astonished with their dance..he come on the stage…1st hugged Ragini & then he hugged Shona for some more min.
When he break the hug he saw tears in her eyes…

Shahid : (take mike) outstanding…mindblowing…your expression..your attitude…your moves..your stunts…ahh..took my heart away..i hv not seen any girl performing like this… I must have to say that girls you left all the guys back…incredible…

Swaragini : (happily) Thank u so much sir…

They both were very happy…sanlak were also happy with their performance…they all went to their seats…

Jai : shahid today you will decided who will be the performance of the day…

Shahid : It was tough competition..all act were awesome…but today was the day of girls..so its Swara & Ragini.. (all clapped loudly)

Jai : we are extrimly happy to hv you in the show shahid…thanks for coming…

Shahid left from studio after meeting judges & wishing contestants…Sanky took sign of relief..Shona was lil sad when he left but also extrimly happy…

Jai : (seriously) now its time for the results…as we all know that due to huge public request sanskar has been already in out top 5 finalists…so now we hv to see who will join him out of other 5 contestants…so i request judges to come on the stage…& give the results opening these envelopes…

Remo sir : (smile) so the 1st finalists who got the highest votes is….(open the envelop)

Laksh Mehta

Geeta me : 2nd is….

Swara Bhatt…

Marzi sir : 3rd is…

Ragini Mathur..

all were very happy…they 4 share group hug & start jumping happily..

Remo sir : the one who will leave this stage is Nikhil Roy…

he become sad..he hugged all & went waving bye to all…epi end & they come back to their Nach house happily…

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when they enter inside…it was all dark in the hall…Swasanraglak & Kabir got confused….they went lil ahead…Sanky was about to go to open the lights but they saw flash light at the center of the hall…& a guy is standing facing his back…he clapped & music starts..he turn..its shahid…

song : (movie : Jab we met) {one of my favorite song πŸ™‚ }

Aa Aa..Aa Aa…Aa Aa..Aa Aa.. Aa..

[HE WENT NEAR SHONA & TOOK HER HAND..THEY COME TO CENTER STAGE & START DANCING]

Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona He Hai
Tera Na Hona, Jaane
Kuyn Hona He Hai
Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmayi Shaam Aati Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

[HE PUT ONE HAND ON HIS WAIST & HOLD HER OTHER HAND IN HIS..SHE PUT HER OTHER HAND ON HIS SHOULDER…WHILE DANCING..

HE WHISPERED : I LOVE YOU TOO SWARA…I M GLAD TO HV FAN LIKE YOU..I HV SEEN TEARS IN YOUR EYES WHILE U FIRST TIME SAW ME & HUG ME..U R MY SPECIAL FAN DEAR..]

Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona, Jaane
Kuyn Hona Hi Hai

[SHONA GOT HAPPY TEARS AGAIN & GAVE HIM HER CUTE SMILE..HE ALSO SMILED & LOOKED AT SANKY…THEY WERE STILL DANCING…

HE : IT SEEMS YOUR BF IS GETTING JEALOUS OF ME…HE IS GIVING ME DEATH GLARE FROM LONG AGO…(SHE BLUSHED) OHH SO U BOTH LOVE EO SO MUCH..(SHE NODES) SO I THINK ITS TIME FOR U TO DANCE WITH HIM]

Aa Aa..Aa Aa…Aa Aa..Aa Aa.. Aa..

[HE DRAG HER TO SANKY WHO WAS RED DUE TO ANGER & GIVE HER HAND IN HIS HAND & SIGNAL THEM TO DANCE..SANKY BECOME EXTRIMLY HAPPY…IT WAS THE BEST MOMENT FOR HIM]

Aankho Mein Aankhe Teri
Bahoo Mein Bahe Teri
Mera Na Mujh Mein Kuch Raha
Hua Kya
Bathon Mein Bathein Teri
Rathe Saogathe Meri
Kuyn Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya
Hua Kya

[SANKY PULLED HER CLOSED TO HIM…THEY HV AN INTENSE EYELOCK…HE PUT HIS BOTH HAND ON HER WAIST & SHE PUT HER HAND AROUND HIS NACK..THEY WERE DANCING VERY CLOSELY..THEY WERE LOST IN EO]

Mein Kahin Bhi Jaata Hun
Tum Se Hi Mil Jatha Hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor Mein Khamoshi Hai
Thodi Si Behoshi Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

[MEANWHILE WHEN SWASAN WERE BESY IN DANCING..SHAHID TOOK RAGINI FOR DANCING…THEY START DOING NORMAL COUPLE DANCE…SHE BECOME HAPPY…IN BETWEEN SHAHID NOTICE HER LOOKING AT LAKSH..HE ASKED HER..SHE NODES SHYLY..]

Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa…

[SHAHID SMILED…HE TOOK HER TO LUCKY & ASKED BOTH OF THEM TO DANCE]

Aadha Sa Vaada Kabhi
Aadhe Se Zyada Kabhi
Jee Chahe Karlu Is Tarah
Wafa Ka
Chode Na Chute Kabhi
Tode Na Toote Kabhi
Jo Daaga Tum Se Jud Gaya
Wafa Ka
Mein Tera Sarmaya Hun
Jo Bhi Mein Ban Paya Hun

[RAGLAK START DANCING…HE MADE HER TWIRRAL AROUND HIM…THEN HE START DANCING SLITLY HUGGING HER FROM BACK..HE MADE HER TURN & THEY HV INTENSE EYE-LOCK]

Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste Mil Jate Hai
Manzile Mil Jati Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona He Hai
Tera Na Hona, Jaane
Kuyn Hona He Hai
Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa

[AT LAST BOTH COUPLE WERE DANCING VERY CLOSELY LOOKING INTO EO EYES FORGETTING ABOUT THE SURROUNDING..AT THE END GIRLS BENT BACKWARD & GUYS HOLD THEM FROM THEIR WAISTS..]

Form their dance Shahid, jai & kabir understand that they are adorable & made of eo couples…they clapped for them…

jai : (tease) Ohh god…we were having couples in our show & i even don’t know about it…you guys are Chuperustams…

Kabir : (make face) jai bhaiya..u r talking about u…i also don’t get doubt on them even after being with them 24/7 in same house…

swasan & raglak blush…all smile…they all took lots of selfies & snaps…specially Shona & shahid…

SHAHID : wow guys you are one of the best couples i hv met ever…all the very best for your love & dance journeys… πŸ™‚

all : Thank u so much shahid sir…

Sanky though about something…

sanky : (hesitantly) Sir will u plz come with me for sometime…i wanna talk with u alone..

shahid : (smile) sure..y not…lets go…

they both went to swaragini’s room..sanky took out Shona’s diary…& gave him..opening 2nd page & skipping 1st page… πŸ˜‰

Shahid start turning all the pages…he was shocked…surprised…happy…overwhelmed…he hv understood earlier that she is his bigest fan but he has not thought that she loves him this extent…

Shahid : (delighted) Ohh my god…she is crazy about me…she is having some of my pic which i even don’t hv right now…unbelievable…

Sanky : ya nd she was going crazy when she come to know about that u r coming in the show…(hasitanyly) nd i was….i was feeling jealous of you……

SHAHID : (smile) I know that…& who will not get jealousΒ  (shows him the dairy) after seeing this…i can understand after all i m also in love with my wife Meera… πŸ˜‰ nd u hv proved that u loves her so much by showing this dairy to me…you gave her happiness more imp than your jealousy…

Sanky : you know that…oh..I m sorry sir…i should not hv reacted like that…i m feeling guilty from when u gave her hand into my hand…(looks down) i hv…i hv course u for coming in between me & her…

Shahid : (hugged him) its ok dear…i can understand…now lets go…

sanky : sir plz don’t tell about this dairy to Shona…she don’t know that i hv read this…

shahid : (smile) ok dude…

they come down stare..Shahid met Shona once again & thanked her for loving him from past 11 years…he hugged her…he was also hving happy tears after knowing her pure love as his fan….Shona told him about how she is happy meeting him…then he met raglak..kabir..then jai & shahid left from there…all contestens went to their room happily after having wonderful day…

precap : some guests come to support their favorite finalists & their masti with them…

The end

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U know what i hv written about Shona’s feeling about SHAHID is mine one… i hv seen in previous comments there are many SHAHID fans here..i hope u will like this epi..

This is almost SHAHID & jealousy oriented epi…i hv rewrited it in very bad mood…I hope its not boring..? plz tell me what do you think about this part ..? Did u like it…?

Please friends do comments..i m waiting for your opinion…positive negative whatever it is…i request everyone to do comment..

Credit to: Namrata

48 comments

  1. meera

    Hello actually I am new here…..namruta ji can u tell at wat time did u posted this ff…i posted yesterday night but still it is not yet updated…..plz help me….

    • Namrata

      Hello meera…i hv posted my this part yesterday at 11 pm… don’t worry dear they will post your part soon… πŸ™‚

  2. Amazing like always, you’re so impressive and talented. Also I have commented on episode 25, so I hope to see your answer!! Anyways can’t wait for the next episode~Nusz

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ i m glad u like this part.. nd i hv already replied to your comment in last epi…take care dear..

  3. kriya

    all performances are superb especially shahid entry part n swaragini performance part…….in the nach house shahid dance with swaragini are superb…….eagerly waiting for next part……All the best for ur exams…….

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear for liking all performance…also shahid entry & dance with Swaragini… πŸ™‚ take care dear..i will try to post it soon..i hv just started writing it…

  4. sanskriti ( die hard fan of swasan )

    Di di di u made it awesome as always rocking arey di aap itni achi likhti ho Ki jab tak aap ka ff nahi aata Mein pagal ho jati Hu seriously di mind blowing basically di I am a south Indian but came to Pune luv u di ??

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear…u always made me smile by your comment…

      u know i hv thought from your name that u must me south Indian…u told that u from pune so i cal u puneri…but i was right about you… πŸ˜‰

      keep smiling dear…tc…luv u..

  5. Anjali

    Namrata…. I have never commented before on ur ff…. rather I never read it I suppose…
    But yesterday when I saw the analysis of all ffs and saw it there, I tried it out and now I’m very happy I read it…
    It’s a lovely story and I really enjoyed reading it… very funny sweet romantic…

    • Namrata

      Ohh thank u so much dear.. πŸ™‚ i m very happy that u read my story…nd find it good one… πŸ™‚

      you know i m a big big big fan of your ff… i just loved it a lot….now as my exams are coming i just read few ffs…nd your one is at top… i wanna thank u for writing it… & i m sorry for not commenting… kan pakad kar sorry plz forgive me for being silent reader… πŸ™ i love u nd your story so much… πŸ™‚ you are a grate writer…

  6. Niku

    Amazing one ….entry of shahid in nach house specially n d song u chosen Tum Se Hi …that’s also one of my fav. Gud job dr….

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ i m glad u like all songs… wow..u also liked tum se hi… πŸ™‚ take care dear..

    • Namrata

      Umm.. dear i will try but just bz muje last part 2 times likhana pada…i hv only written few scenes of next part… i will try my best

  7. Anu

    Hey Namrata! I read about dis ff in the analysis. And its lovely! Specially that u giv equal importance to both couples. Looking forward for the next chapter β™₯

  8. Sofia

    Its a nice episode. I loved ur feelings towards Shahid through Shona.. and I am so happy that u are giving equal importance to everyone. Love Shahid.. and I think that from tomorrow u are not posting as u said earlier.I will miss ur FF badly. Best of luck 4 ur exams. U know u can be a good judge because u r not partial with ur characters in ur story. Wish u a advance happy Bengali new year…as I am a Bengali.(I told u that my pet name is Shona and Sofia is just my pen name)

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ i m so happy reading your comment… thank u so much for your wish for exams… i will try to give 2 more epi… after that i need to seriously start my study…so…if i will be able to write in between breaks i will try but couldn’t say anything right now…

      thanks for understanding my feeling for shahid.. πŸ˜‰ i wish i could at least meet him & just hug him once in my life… πŸ™

      A very happy advance new year to you dear..may u hv a very happy healthy & successful year ahead…

      ya i remember your nick name Shona… πŸ˜‰ nd i love bangali language alot…its sound so sweet… πŸ™‚

  9. shan

    very nice narmata….today full f shahid scenes…..nd from dis epi i can clearly c how much u love shahid…..when i read about shonas love f shahid i imagined u only…..even i do no how u will b….but when i read i took it as narmata instead f shona….dia epi s seriously nice dr…..

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ i m so happy reading your comment…

      i wish i could at least meet him & just hug him once in my life…

      thanks for understanding my feeling πŸ˜‰

      take care dear…

  10. Namrata

    Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ i m glad u like all songs… wow..u also liked tum se hi… πŸ™‚ take care dear..

  11. mitti

    Ohh my god!!!!!! SHAHIDI! !!! Honestly in today’s episode I imagined myself as swara …I went into a momentary dream!!!!!! It was superb dear…sanlak jealousy was soooo cute!!!!!…shahid giving surprise to swara by coming to d house was soon sweet….even in real life he is a very kind and adorable person!!!!…..I ll wish that u meet him very soon πŸ™‚ #afterall crazy fan love u have for him!!! πŸ˜‰ β™₯β™₯
    N ya swaragini performance of d day!!!! Yeah!! Girls on top!!!

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much mitti dear.. πŸ™‚ thanks for liking shahid’s part.. & sanky’s jealousy…

      aww u imagine urself as Shona..so sweet..nd i badly wish i can meet him once & hug him..thanks for understanding my feelings.. πŸ˜‰

      nd yup…girls rocked… πŸ˜‰

      your comment again made me smile dear..thank u so much… πŸ™‚ take care..luv u

  12. pooja

    wow!!!!!!!! mine fav. also………..hehehe………
    lyk hmmmmm.i luv it diiiiiiii
    thank u so much……..4 dis epi…………..
    luv u…..tc

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much pooja dear πŸ™‚

      you too is shahid lover grate.. πŸ˜‰

      luv 2 dear…tc..

  13. Di I was Lil busy didn’t read some episodes bt when I read this is found it really awsm even I’m a die hard fan of shahid so thank u di

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ its totally ok.. i m glad u read it & liked it…

      nd one more shahid lover that’s awesome πŸ˜‰

      take care Dr.. πŸ™‚

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear πŸ™‚ I know u also shahid lover.. i m glad u liked it.. πŸ™‚ tc dear

  14. as always u just rocked it n iloved rags prank on lucky…..that was too cute n from shahid entry to exit i just loved it…..you are an awesome writer…..love u…..like u are a shahid fan ., i am your fan……awesome epi

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much naimi dear πŸ™‚ for liking this whole part…& specially ragini’s prank & shahid scene….

      nd u give a big complement by saying that u r fan of my ff…..it means a lot to me dear.. thank u thank u so much… πŸ™‚

      take care dear…luv u so much…

  15. Kavya

    Hi namrata I’m also a big fan of shahid???bcoz he is vry cute nd today’s epi was really nice?

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much kavya dear πŸ™‚

      woho another shahid lover..grate πŸ˜‰

      u know what kavya..today i hv saved your ff link in my phone bookmarks… i will surly read after my exam… πŸ™‚

      tc dear

  16. Namrata

    Thank u so much kavya dear πŸ™‚

    woho another shahid lover..grate πŸ˜‰

    u know what kavya..today i hv saved your ff link in my phone bookmarks… i will surly read after my exam… πŸ™‚

    tc dear

  17. I don’t know how … my comment got deleted…. I m really angry…. but di I must say as always this awesome … superbbb…. mind blowing
    I m a huge… huge fann of SHAHID KAPOOR….I wish I could also meet him… talk to him…. aaaw..just imagining. Sanky’s jealous face….. he must be looking so cute…. shona’s feelings fr shahid is similiar to mine ……
    The way ragini made lucky jealous by doing that was just outstanding…..
    And di ya I know the feeling when… u do something …. with hard work and full passion … and it get deleted or lost…..

    Don’t be sad
    Keep smiling

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