Swaragini ff (Swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-23

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Ch-22 Link :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-22/

Precap : Swaragini & sanlak moments, Swasan first kiss, Swasanraglak fights & masti

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Note :

Friends i m not at all good at this twist & all bz honestly speaking i don’t like this stuff…but still i hv tried to add this…i hope i will not make u all disappointed with that…Finger crossed…

Till 10th April i will try to give u 2 parts per day…

Thank u so much for your wishes..

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Ch-23 :

Nikhil watched swasan & raglak hugging eo. He decided to breck raglak relation..He was standing near door of dinning area..kabir come there..

Kabir : Good morning Nikhil…why are u standing here..?

Nikhil : (fake smile) nothig yar..just was thinking something..lets go in..

Both kabir & nikhil join Swasanraglak on dinning table..Soon servent come & started serving them breckfasts.. raglak were sitting togather opposite to swasan.. Kabir was sitting besides sanky & Nikhil was besides Lucky..

Swasan were holding eo’s hands under table & doing their hand romance..whereas ragini was not at all allowing lucky to hold her hand to tease him..Lucky got frusteted after sometime & finally managed to hold her hand.. He give her winning look & Ragini glare him…

Ragini : (whisphered) Lucky plz leave my hand..

Lucky : (Same tone) no ways..my angel..i hv not hold your hand to leave..

Ragini :(fake smile) hahaha…nice dielog..u copy cat…

Lucky : thanks angel..

Swasan notice the whole scense & saw them murmuring…they thought to tease them..

Sanky : (tease them) Lukey y u r smiling like this..? anything special..(wink at him)

Shona : (Join sanky) ya..it looks like you hv got some beautiful thing in your hands..(rise her brow)

Ragini start coughing on her sentense & give her angry look..Shona smile naughtily at her..Lucky made her drink water with his right hand still holding her left hand tightly..he turned to swasan..

Lucky : (smirk) sanky shona.. i was smiling bz i got the same thing which u both r having…(Swasan glare him & he wink at them)

Nikhil : (confused) and whats that Lucky…??

Lucky : (smile) its…..

he looked at swasanrag who were looking at him as if he will speck anything then they will kill him..he give smile to trio & looked at kabir & nikhil who were watching him curiously…

Lucky : (laugh) its AALU KA PARATHA…i was talkig about our breckfast..

Kabir : (laugh) ohh god, lucky u made all of us interested in your talk & after that u r passing sach PJ…

All start laughing..Nikhil got dought & dropped her spoon intentionally..he bent down & saw raglak holding their hands..he become very angry..but cant do anything at that time..soon all completed their breckfast & get back to dance practice…

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Nikhil was passing here & there in his room..he was thinking about the plan..finally he got one idea & smile evilly..He called someone…& explain his plan..that person agreed to do as he said..

Nikhil : (monolouge) now i will see ragini how long will u trust lucky..i think by today evening you will brock up with him & then i will propose you…(he laugh)

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Every week, Designers come to decide all contestents costumes for their next performances accrding to the Dance style & choreography…

This week also two Show designers 1 girl named Sia & 1 guy named Sahil has come..Contestents were supposed to meet them at costume rooms in pairs..1st they went to boys costume room..they call sanky & kabir inside..they complete their work with both of them..then they call lucky and nikhil inside..they both went in..

Nikhil signal someone to start their plan..ya she was Sia..She was his college friend..so she agreed to help him..

Sia : Sahil.. I forget the new matrial which we hv purchased recently according to this week theme in our car..will u plz go and get that..?

Shahil : (smile) sure dear.. i will be back..

Sahil left from there..Sia & Nikhil smile at eo..they took next step..Nikhil act as if getting imp call..

Nikhil : excuse me guys..i m getting an imp call..i will be come back soon.. (he left)

now only Sia & lucky were present in the room..lucky didnt get dought on them bz everything was happening casually..

Sia start asking about his performance..he start explaining..After 5-7 min he was done with explaining..

he stand up to go out of the room..Sia also stand up & walk along with him..she act as if she lost her balance & fall on the ground pulling lucky on her..she was wearing a top having slives of very thin material which can easily be torn..she did it while falling…Nikhil come inside smilingly..

Lucky immediately got up from him..and ask sorry to her..but she start yelling…and crying loudly..she messed her make up while crying..

Soon swasan, Rag, Sahil, kabir also come inside..no.one else was present in the house..they shocked to see the site infornt of them..Sia’s slives were torn & she was in messed condition..

Shona : (shocked) what happened here..?

Lucky was about to speck something but Nikhil interrupt him…

Nikhil : (act) Woh…when i come inside i saw that lucky was on top of Sia…& she was pushing him…

Sia : (cry) He fall on me & tore my slives..y did u do this to me laksh..? Why..? (she knelt down on floor crying harder)

Sahil : (run near her) What hv you done laksh…how can u play with girls reputation…i was fan of your dancing till now…but u..i feel ashamed of saying anything…

All were shocked..swasan were hell shocked..Ragini start crying…& looked at lucky…lucky was shooking his head in no…but she was not at all responding…seeing this Nikhil smile victoriously…

Shona : (glare Sahil)  (went near Sia & make her stand) hey..stop crying..u r misunderstanding lucky…i think it was accident…u r…

Sia : (interrupt cryingly) No way..i m a girl i can tell u from his touch that he tried to molest me…

Sanky : (angry) what the hell are you speaking…? Are u out of your sense..? Do you know about whom u r talking ?

Shona : (anger) look Sia..i was trying to make u understand that whatever u r thinking is wrong…but that dose not mean i will hear any kind of rubbish thing against lucky…

Kabir : (confused) i also think there is some misunderstanding..lucky can’t do anything like this..

Ragini was standing like statue..lucky was looking at her with teary eyes..Nikhil thought now Ragini will not trust lucky..

Seeing swasan’s anger, Sia got scared but she still try to act…

Tia : (crying) u r telling it bz u r his friends..but the truth is that he…

SLAP…

Ya its Ragini…she slap her hard making everyone shocked except swasanlak…they smile a lil with teary eyes..

Ragini : (angry) shut up..not a single word against my lucky…do u hv any idea how kind & gentle he is…!!! He will not even think to do like this…i do trust him fully..we all trust him…

Sia was very scared now…Nikhil also start sweating as his plan get flop..

Sia : but he…

Sanky : (interrupt) ok than tell us the whole situation…we right now right here will prove that lucky is innocent…

Ragini : (firmly) ya..now start your story…

Sia : (stammer) when i lost my balance i held his hand for support but he intentionally fall…

Sanky : (angry) stop right there..1st point it was you who held lucky’s hand not he…

Shona : (angry) there can be two possibility…1) when u held his hand he also lost his balance & fall…nd 2) (glaring at her) you pulled him & make him fall…

Now Sia was shivering bz of their introgation…she was not getting anything what to do next..but still continue her drama…

Sia : then what will u tell about my torn slives…?

Ragini went near her & tore her slive more…

Ragini : (angry) look your slives are not actually called slives also..this material can get tore by simple staching…so it must be torned while u fall…

Shona : (firmly) nd i wonder y u r wearing this type of cloth today…bz till today u hv wore only sholdrless dresses…then how come this thin slive dress today..

Sanky : 1st we hv thought that you r mistaken with respect to situation..u r not at fault..but…

Ragini : now it seems that its all your planning against lucky…u hv created all the situations to put blame on lucky…

Sia : (hell scared)  but Nikhil has seen us….

Ragini : (interrupt & went near Nikhil) tell me Nikhil did u see him doing anything to her..? Just tell us…

Nikhil : (monologue) no Nikhil..now your plan has gone totally flop..if u will lie now then Ragini will never talk with u..nd they any how gonna prove lucky innocent…Dam it…

Sanky : (lil louder) Nikhil…tell us fast…

Nikhil : (sweating) i just saw both of them on floor…lucky was on top of her..then he stand up immediately…

All looked at sia…she understand that Nikhil has given up with the plan…so..

Sia : (crying) i m sorry…i thought he did it intentionally…nd i put such a nasty blame on him…plz forgive me…i m sorry…i didn’t even think that it may be accident also…plz forgive me..i m sorry laksh (she fold her hands)

Kabir : (angry) u should hv thought b4 putting such big blame on anyone & creating such a big seen out of nothing…

Ragini : (angry) You know what bz of girls like u…some kind boys hv to suffered…being a girl u r not respecting about girl’s dignity…it seems u do not care about this & used this as victim weapon…u r playing with your own respect…moreover u put such a bl**dy blame on lucky…i wish i could hv kill u b4 u speck anything like that…

Shona : (firm tone) u know 90% of me is telling that u hv done all this intentionily…but still we are not complaining against u just giving u the benefit of dought that what you r telling right now is truth..u mistaken the situation…moreover we can’t stoop such low like u…but i want u to give resignation by yourself…

Sanky : (strictly) (angrily) one thing you all need to get in your mind…this incidence should not be discussed out side this room with any single person…(point his finger) if it will happen then i sware i  will ruin the life of that person to the hell..is it understood..Kabir..Sahil..Nikhil..?

Trio : ok Sanky…we will never talk about this..it will end the next moment we get out of this room..

Sia : (actual tears) i hv committed very big mistake…i blame lucky then also u r not doing complain against me…thanks…i m extremely sorry…

Ragini : (yelled) now Sia..plz b4 we lose our temper..u just get lost from here…& never show your face to any of us…

Sia hurriedly leave from there…b4 going she looked at Nikhil…he thank her through his eyes for not splitting his name…

Sahil : (went near lucky) (fold his hands) i m sorry laksh…i got carried away with the situation..i didn’t think b4 speaking those rubbish things…plz i m sorry..

Lucky just node his head..Sahil left from there…lucky was very happy that his love..his angel & his best buddies trust him so much…he was glad the way they took stand for him..& prove him innocent…they all come out in the hall…

Kabir : (hug lucky) i m happy that you are proven innocent dear…i knew u can’t do like this…

Nikhil : (fake concerned) i m happy for u…plz don’t think much about this…

They all left to their rooms…Swasanraglak come in to sanlak’s room…Sanky locked the door…Shona hugged lucky tightly…Ragini also joined them…Sanky too join them…they all share emotional group hug…

Lucky : (finally speck ) i m very lucky to hv friends like u …who trust me & support me in any kind of situation…i will not say thank u bz its very small word what u hv done for me..

Shona : (crying) r u mad…lucky.. We all are same..this blame was not only on you but on all of us…nd We all trust u so much..how can we leave u alon in such nasty situation…

Sanky : (emotional) pagal..don’t become senty… U must hv done the same if any of us struck in this kind of situation…

Lucky : (cry) Angel..(she hugged him & cry)

Ragini : (crying) don’t say anything lucky…i was shattered at first seeing u in this type of situation…that y i was not reacting…i love u lucky..i trust u more than anything…i love u lucky..i love u…

Lucky : i love u too angel…

Swasan side hugged eo..seeing their buddies..
They come near them & hugged them…they  knew lucky & Lado will want to be together tonight…so they great them good night & left to swaragini’s room…

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Swasan & raglak were lying in eo’s arm in their respective rooms…& having senty talks..

Ragini : u know what trust is the most imp thing in every relation…whether it is lovers,parents & children, siblings, friends,relatives..

Sanky : if  in any relation there is a trust but not love…then also that relation will survive for infinite time…nd by the passage of time their trust wil lead them to love eo truly…

Lucky : but if there is love but absence of trust…then inspite of having lots of love but due to lack of trust that relation will not survive long…

Shona : So we should always be with the person who trust us more…rather then with the one who love us but don’t trust us…

Ragini : but its very difficult to figure out whom we should trust or whom we should not trust..

Lucky : bz we can’t trust anyone blindly..it may lead to disaster also..

Shona : we should know how to identify the good & bed intentions of person from their behaviour..we should not make fool ourselves by ignoring their wrong doings..

Sanky : Trust is a very small word having deep meaning…which can make or destroy someone’s life…

soon they all doze off after having emotional convo feeling happy & protected in their partner’s arms…

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Nikhil was very frustrated and afraid after evening incidence…he called Sia & thanked & apologized her…Sia scolded him for playing with such good peoples b4 disconnecting the call…

Nikhil : (angry) Ohh god…i can’t beliv they trust lucky even after such blame…my plan got totally flop…thank god Sia did not split my name…I think it will be difficult to break raglak’s relation…ahh..Ragini…what should i do now…? That Sanky & swara were also hell angry…the way Sanky warned i think if they will come to know that i hv done all this then…..(he imagine 4 of them attacking on him)..Noooo…

He opened his eyes…he thought something..he called someone & instruct him about his work…then he smile evilly & doze off…

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4 days passed…its result day today…

1st All contestants performed & got comments from the judges… Now stage lights gone to dangerous red color..they all are standing holding eo’s hands…

Jai : (suspense tone) so now public has decided who will be the top 5 contestants of Zara nach k dikha…now the one who got the highest vote is…

Ragini Mathur

All become happy & clapped…Ragini was crying due to happiness…swasanlak were jumping with happiness…

Jai : congratulations Ragini…now the one who is at no 2 is…

Nikhil Roy

He become happy & start jumping..Few of them clapped for him…judges were not happy bz among them six he was the weaker one..

Jai : now 3rd & 4th one are swara & laksh…

They got huge round of applause..judges & Sanky were extremely happy…but Swalakrag were upset…all were thinking how Sanky can be in bottom two…

Jai : (open the next envelop) The one who is going to leave this munch today is….Ohh my god…i can’t belive this….Sanskar kapoor

Remo sir : (shocked) What…??!!! Public can’t take such wrong decision…

Marzi sir : (unbelievable) this can not be happened…the one who is eligible to win the show is…no no its not possible…

Geeta ma : (teary voice) our wildcard round has also completed…we hv also used our vitto power already.. there is no way to call u back. ..i was hoping u in top 3 but its truly unbelievable…

Everyone become silent…no one was ready accept what has happened…swaragini start crying…Lukcy was having teary eyes… Sanky was upset but he shows the sportsman spirit & console his friends…

All were talking & discussing…judges went to the production team…they were arguing for Sanky…creative team shown them that he has to be eliminated bz he has got very less votes…judges become upset & come to the stage…

Remo sir : (heavy & sad voice) I m sorry to say but…Sanskar u hv to leave the show…

Sanky give painful smile…and hugged every judges & took their blessings…he hugged swalakrag…they were crying…

Sanky : hey plz don’t cry…i m not going losing anything…i will be winner seeing anyone of u winning the show…so promise me that u will not think about all this…be happy…work hard & take care of yourself…u hv to win the show..

Swaraglak promised him..They four share group hug…all become emotional seeing them…

BG Song :

” Hum rahe ya na rahe kal….kal yad ayenge ye pal…pal ye hai pyar k pal……..”

At last Sanky come in center of the stage…he knelt down & touched his forehead on floor…then he kissed the stage…he stand up..wave hands & gave flying kisses to everyone & left from there…

The end.

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Sorry if i hv made u bored with this chepter..plz tell me what do you think about this part ..? Did u like it…? Please friends do comments..i m waiting for your opinion…positive negative whatever it is…i request everyone to comment..plz

Credit to: Namrata

48 comments

  1. Sanskriti ( die hard fan of swasan )

    Di it was awsooooommmmmeeeee sanky’s elimination was done by nikhil no but pls bring our sanky back and breakdown our shona and part from that everything was sooooooooo goooooooood luv u di ??

    • Namrata

      thank u soooooooooo much dear SANSKRITI.. 🙂 nd don’t worry.. Shona will not break down and about Sanky u need to wait for next part.. 😉

  2. Jwala

    it was superb and wonderful Namrata.. don’t feel bad by seeing some comments.. your daily readers loves your all updates.. some jealous people comment bad for making you weak.. but we love your updates.. such a wonderful update.. i think some people jealous of your ff and commenting from different id’s.. don’t take it seriously.. such an amazing episode .. their trust is unique and strong .. loved it a lot..

    • Namrata

      aww..thank u soooooooo much Jwala dear.. i m getting your support from the very 1st cheater.. thanks for being there with me in this ff journey… 🙂

      honestly speaking i care about the one who really appreciated my work when they liked it…if they are giving me negative comments then i hv to work hard for reaching up to their expectation…

      but the one who hv never commented in my good updates n discouraging in any epi like this..i really don’t care…

      thanks for liking this part.. 🙂 luv u dear

  3. Jwala

    hey rapanzuel and tapasya i think you are same person commenting from different id’s.. and please don’t read if you don’t like. nobody forcing you to read this.. have some shame and kindnessin your heart.. shut your mouth if you don’t know to appreciate others works.. Namerata doing her job wonderfully.. don’t dare to speak against her ff..

    • Namrata

      thank u sooooooooooo much Jwala dear 🙂 i m glad with your kind gesture.. thanks for taking stand for me & this ff… thanks for supporting & encouraging me everytime …

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much ANI dear for liking what i hv written about trust… 🙂 about Sanky plz wait till next part..

    • Namrata

      Don’t worry dear NIKITA 🙂 i also can’t be without him… 😉 but u need to wait for next part.. thanks for commenting

  4. shan

    its nice dr…..swasanraglak trust was nice…..y no precap???i think nikhil had done dis nd d blame will go to laksh i think so…..so dat ragini will leave laksh bcoz ragsan r best buddies….but his plan will b flopped…..should b a flop one…..nd expose nikhil soon…..

    • Namrata

      thank u so much dear SHAN.. 🙂 for liking this part.. nd about Precap i was not wanting to give any hint so..i don’t add it… nd regarding Sanky’s elimination…u need to wait for next part.. i hope u will like it

  5. Sofia

    Super episode!! Loved trust convo & shocking elemination. I think that Niklil
    might have hacked voting lines to eleminate sanky.Please expose Nikhil soon.

    • Namrata

      Ohh god..sofia dear u partially got the point..ya i will not drag Nikhil part.. 😉

      thank u so much for liking this part & trust convo.. 🙂

  6. mitti

    Hey namrata! !!….great dr d importance of trust u showed today in ur update was fabulous! !!!!…If such kind of bond n trust exist In every relation then no one ll feel unprotected! !!
    Sorry if I bored u with this but I personally believe that trust is d backbone of bondage…nu showed it beautifully today 🙂
    N ya sanskar elimination was sad but I know U have something in ur mind 😉

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear MITTI… 🙂 nd how can u bore me with your comment..infact u always point out my favorite part.. 😉 thank for liking it dear.. nd for Sanky.. u need to wait 4 next part 😉

    • Namrata

      thank u so much dear kavya for breaking your silence & commenting…i m glad u like this.. 🙂 about Sanky…u just need to wait for next part dear..

  7. kriya

    swasanraglak bonding was superb…..felling bad for sanky bring him back…….eagerly waiting for next part……

    • Namrata

      thank u so much dear 🙂 for liking their bonding & trust… nd i hv already uploaded next part…

  8. it’s awesome dea ……loved it rags just rocked even swasan ……..thanks for saying the importance of TRUST …loved it dea…..love u

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear NAIMI 🙂 i m glad u like that trust part.. also rag & swasan support to lucky..

    • Namrata

      Thanks jyoti dear for liking that trust part 🙂 n about Sanky plz wait till next epi..

  9. Namrata

    I m sad not bz u both said this epi is boring one but its bz u commented in this part to tell that its not at all good but u never commented even simply “nice” also to the parts which you might hv liked it b4..or u r commenting without reading any pre epi…

    • Namrata

      Thank u so much dear DIVYA.. 🙂

      happy new year to u too dear.. may all your dreams & wishes come true.. hv happy, healthy & successful year ahead.. :

      nd about Sanky plz wait till next part… 😉

  10. Awesome di… #there trust on each other … # there bonding … #there love..mind blowing. …. that evil nikhil…. waiting fir the next part di…. keep smiling di….

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