Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-16

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Thank u so much everyone for loving this story..i m overwhelmed to receive Such response..i love u all so much..keep reading and supporting..ur comments made my day…thank u silent readers also…

Repay to comments: (sorry if i hv skipped anyone)

SANCHAMI, MISHA, AARTI, TVISHA, SWATI, DIVYA, AMMU, RAFEE, LOVELY : thank u thank u thank u so much dear.. 🙂

DHARA : thank u dear..wow..u also love shahid ha..

ANI, SOFIA : thank u dear for liking raglak scenes.. 🙂 n for elimination u need to read this part…

SHAN, SARA, NAIMI, MITTI, KRIYA : thank u so much dear for pointing out your favorite scenes of this part.. 🙂

HOPE : thank u so much dear.. abously shahid is gonna come..how can my story end without shahid..he will also make our sanky jealous 😉

SUJATA : thank u dear… i also love this song so much..but i hv already used this song in Ch-12 for raglak first dance… keep giving suggestions…

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I wanna tell u all something..i m showing my love & craziness towards shahid in Shona..i love shahid since i was 9 yr old..all things are same only diff is that i hv not made any dairy…but i hv his photos, interviews, dialogs, songs everything in my pc…i just love him..

I do love one more person like this only..its Varun kapoor..since i hv seen him as kabir in hum se hai life…

sorry for this bak bak..lets start this chapter…

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Ch-15 Link :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-15/

Recap : Swasan confession, Raglak 1st kiss, kavita planning against ragini…

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Ch-16 :

After receiving face of challenge :

All contestants were practicing hard…all were determined to win the challenge…swasan were dancing with awesome chemistry…lucky is the best in lyrical hiphop…no one on earth can win against ragini in classical…

Choreography of all contestants were all set & whole day they were practicing their dance Performances…

Kavita, Nikhil & tanu were besy in their planning against ragini…Nikhil was having crush on ragini but he was involved in this one bz he has dought on raglak & second to distract swasan so that he can win…they complete all their work related to execution of their plan…

At night, dining table…

All contestants were present there except Shona..sanlakrag trio were also there..Shona has received an important call regarding her CS exams..so she was in her room..

Kavita signal Tanu to start their plan…

Tanu : (hyper tone) Ohh god…my ring…i lost my ring…(fake crying) it was given by my dad..its very previous for me…(cry loudly)

Kartik : (give her water) Ohmg..Tanu don’t cry..we all will help to find your ring…(all agree)

Lucky : try to remember when you hv seen it last time…?

Sanky : hv you taken it out while practicing..?

Tanu : (act crying) i don’t know…i don’t remember anything…

Kavita sit besides her & act consoling he..she smile evilly looking at ragini who seems thinking something…kavita remembered the flash back…

FB start :

In Girls costume room…Ragini, Tanu, Shona & kavita were there trying their dance costumes…kavita told Tanu to keep her ring somewhere when ragini is watching her…and Tanu kept her ring in dressing table & ragini watched her…

FB end..

Ragini : (excitedly) i know where you hv kept that ring…Tanu i saw you keeping that ring on dressing table of our costume room…(all become very happy..specially kavita…)

Kavita : (act tensed & sweetly) ragini…see Tanu’s condition…can u do one favour..as you know where she has kept..will u go and bring it here..??

Ragini : arre..sure y not..

Sanlak also found it normal..ragini got up went towards girls dressing room…Nikhil, Tanu, Kartik & kavita smile evilly seeing eo..

In that house…all other contestants rooms & rehearsal hall where on 2nd floor..swasanraglak were on 1st floor…kitchen ,dining room & the main hall was on ground floor parted by door…the hall was very BIG..

costume rooms, Prop room & store room are connected to hall…but there was a small soft marble stone path connecting all above to hall….one hv to walk on that to enter any of above rooms…

Kavita had mixed many sharp glass prices with marble stones on path of girls costume rooms…the one who will put a leg on it will defiantly not able to stand for few weeks..This was their planning against ragini…

Ragini come out of the dining area..she was going towards costume room…at that time Shona come down stairs..she was facing ragini’s right side..she saw ragini going there..she smile & start going towards her..she casually look down at marble stone while walking..she found something shining there…

Shona : (confused) what’s that..i hv never seen anything like that..(saw it) omg glass prices…(look at ragini) Di…

Shona saw ragini was very near to the path..she was not looking down bz they hv walked on that path N no of times during this 2 weeks…Shona ran in the direction of ragini…she was about to put her feet on that path..but…

Shona : (Scream) Raginiiiiiiiiii……

She pushed her before she put her feet on that path…they both fall down…All heard Shona’s screaming…

Lucky : (tensed) it was Shona’s scream na…

Sanky : (worried) Shona..Lado…!!!!

Kavita & party was happy…they thought their plan has worked..All ran in the hall…they show ragini & Shona lying on the floor…they reach near them…

Sanlak : (worried) what happened..? (they sits besides them) are you both ok…???

Shona : (breathing heavily) Ragini….are you ok…???

Ragini : (put her hand on her) ya dear i m ok.. But Shona…y u pushed me like that..what happened..?

Shona : (still breathing hevenly)  (point towards marble path) look at there..there are so many sharp glass pices on that marble path…if you hv put your feet on it then……….(left her sentence incomplete)

Sanky : what…??? (went towards it & check) yes..its true..there are so many glass pices here..

Lucky : (angrily) that means someone do this to harm ragini…

Sanky : (angrily) so that she can not perform..

Sanlak : (look at eo) we are not going to spar them…

Kavita & party got scared seeing their anger..they were looking at Shona angrily to spoil their plan…

Lucky : (sit near her & tensed) ragini are you all right na…?

Ragini was not responding after understanding the whole situation…she might hv to leave the show if Shona has not saved her…they were still sitting on floor…

Ragini : (crying) Shona (hug her) i don’t know how to say thanks to you…you hv not only save me..you hv saved my dreams also…

Shona : (crying) what r u saying Di…i love you so much Di..so how can i let anything happen to you when i m here…

Ragini :(again hug her) i love you too Shona..(she kiss her forehead)

Sanlak were also having tears in their eyes seeing their bonding…at the same time they were angry also…

Sanky : (heavy voice) Shona Lado get up…lets go to room now…

Ragini got up…Shona tried to got up but she was not able to move her right feet…she again fall down..she sit there holding her right foot..sanlakrag become worried & went near her..

Lucky : (worried) What happened Shona..? Are you ok…?

Sanky : (tensed) why are you holding your feet…? Show me…

They checked her feet…her feet was twisted whn she fall on the floor..sanky touched her feet…

Shona : (shouts & cry) ahhhhhhhh….its paining badly…ahh…

Sanraglak were dying seeing her in this state..ragini was feeling very bad bz Shona is in that condition while saving her..Nikhil & Tanu was happy due to her injury..sanky picked her in his arm & took her to the couch placed in the hall…

Raj : i hv called Doctor & also hv informed the Show team..they will be here in some time..

Kabir : (bring water for Shona) lucky take this and make her drink some water…

Lucky nodes & thanked him..Shona was in deep pain..she was crying…ragini was also crying seeing her..sanlak were having tears in their eyes…

Sanky : (hold her hand) plz don’t cry dear..i can’t see u like this…

Lucky : (cupped her face) Shona…you are my brave girl…don’t cry dear..everything will be all right..

Ragini : (hug her) i m sorry Shona..its all bz of me u got this pain…

Shona : (crying) Di plz don’t say like this..its not at all your fault..plz don’t blame yourself it gives more pain to me…

Soon doctor & all show team came there..Remo sir & Geeta ma also has come there..Geeta ma sit besides Shona & crasses her hair..swara cry looking at her.. 🙁

Geeta ma : don’t worry swara..everything will be fine..you will alright soon…

Raj told whole incidence to everyone..show team immediately start their work to remove that glass pices..& find out culprits..
Nikhil & co were happy as well as afraid…

Remo sir sent all the contestants to their room except Sanraglak as they knew about their friendship…now only doctor, Remo sir, Geeta ma, sanky, lucky & Lado are there.

Remo sir : Doctor..how is she now ? Does the injury is deep.?

Doctor : we need to take her to the hospital now & do necessary treatments..

Ragini : what..? (panic) is she not ok..?

lucky : (teary voice) tell us doctor..what happened..? fracture..?

doctor : no no…its not fracture..but due to twisting her right feet has minor injury…she will be alright in few days..

Shona : (uncertain voice) doctor..will i be able to dance this week…?

doctor keep silence..all were looking at him..he nodes in no…they all become sad..Shona start crying badly…

sanky : (console her) Shona..dear don’t think about it now…you will be alright soon…

Remo sir : (sad tone) swara you are personally my favorite dancer..i don’t know show producer will let you be in competition or not without performing..

Geeta ma : (hug her) Swara..don’t worry…you hv proved yourself..you are indeed one of the best dancer of India..

swasanraglak were broken by this as she may hv to leave the show…
Judges left blessing & consoling swara..they told that they will talk with show producer & let them know it 2morow..

they took her to the hospital..Dr did necessary treatment & wrap her leg in medical belt…Dr strictly told her not to put her leg on floor at least for few days..

They come back to “Zara nach k dikha house”. sanky has picked her up in his arm & take her to swaragini’s room & placed her on the bed..she was sleeping due to pain killer injections…sanlakrag come out of her room..

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They were standing near window of swaragini’s room…three of them were having tears in their eyes…they share much needed hug with eo..

Ragini : (crying) its all bz of me only…she is in this state bz…

lucky : (cupped her face & interrupt) no angel…its not bz of you…my kiddo will be more upset if she will come to know that you are blaming yourself…

Sanky : (teary voice) Ya Lado…its not at all your fault…we all hv to be strong for her..

lucky : (emotional) this proves that how much we all love eo..we all will not think for sec to give our life for eo…

Ragini : (crying) but what about her dreams..Remo sir told that show producers may not allow her to be in the show…

Sanky : (worried) how will we manage her…? she will be broken after that…(knelt down holding his head) Ohh god…plz do something…

lucky : (sat beside him) (hug him) sanky Shona needs our support..if we will break down like this then who will handle her..

Ragini also sit & hug both of them…they were crying…then they compose themselves & stand up…they went inside the room & look at Shona sleeping…

sanlak : (together) I will be with Shona tonight…

they both look at each other..Both thought that other one is having more right on Shona…

sanky : (sadly) ok lucky..you stay with Shona..only you hv taken care of her till now…so..tc of my princess

lucky : so what..you idiot…but the day you hv proposed her..its your duty to take care of her..so you stay with her..n tc of my kiddo

Ragini : (crying ) you both are very bad…you forgot me..i m her Di..she is my kiddo too..its my right to take care of her…you both can’t stop me..i will stay with her..

Shona has wake up when they were discussing who will be with her..she smile seeing their care & concerned for her…she was crying.. she sat taking bed support..

Shona : (smile with tears) hey..you all will stay here..you idiots..bz i know non of you will able to sleep if you will not stay here…

Sanlakrag : Shona…!!!!!

They went near her & all sat in bed besides her..they were about to ask her many questions but….

Shona : (smile) b4 you all shoot your questions on me..let me tell you that i m fine…its not paining much..n (sadly) i will accept whatever show producers decision is…so don’t worry…

lucky : (hug her) ya..that’s like my brave girl..

Ragini : (worried) i hope they will take decision in our favour only…

Sanky : (kissed Shona’s forehead) you hv really done a very good job today my princess..i m so proud of you…i love you so much..

lucky : (angrily) we need to find the one who has planned all this against ragini…

sanky : (angrily) ya..correct lucky..we will not leave them..bz of them Shona is in this condition…

Ragini : (anger) hmm..i m having dought on kavita…i think she may hv done this to win dance face off..

Sanlak : (thinking) Ohh ya…it can be possible..lets go and confront her..(they were abt to stand up)

Shona : (stop them) no guys l..not now..she will get her punishment..ragini will give her..(to ragini) Di..we all know that no one can beat you in classical…now you need to throw her out of the show with your performance…it will be her punishment…

Sanlak : (oppose) But….

Ragini : (interrupt) Shona is right..this week will be the last week of her in the show…

Sanlak agreed..Then they all share group hug…they greet eo good night..

then sanky went on left side of Shona & took her in his arm & they both sleeps on the right side of the bed & raglak sleeps on the left side in same position..

the size of bed was normal dublebed only…but both the couples were sleeping hugging very tight to their partners as if they are one only…they doze off praying god not to make Shona leave the show…

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Next day in the hall,

all were waiting judges to come and give decision of show producers…Marzi sir, Remo sir & Geeta ma come there..all greet them good morning…all were standing & Shona was sitting on couch…

Marzi sir : i come to know about yesterdays incidence…i m sad with your injury but i must say you are very brave girl..i m proud of you dear…

Geeta ma : (cupped her face) how are you dear now..? are you ok ?

Shona : (smile) yes mam..its lil better than yesterday…thank u so much for your concerned Geeta ma..

Lucky : (worried) Remo sir…hv you talked with producers..?

Ragini : (almost in tears) plz tell us sir…what’s their decision…?

Sanky : (tensed) they will not make Shona leave the show..hena..?

Remo Sir : (with heavy heart) we hv talked with them..we also told them that how strong dancer you are..!! you hv a capability to win the show…

sanraglak were watching him with heavy heart…but Shona seems to be calm..Remo sir look them all & finally said…

Remo sir : (in one breath) Its written in show’s contract that if any contestant is not able to perform then they hv to left the show…

Geeta ma : (hold her hand) and doctor has told us that he will not allow you even to put your leg down on the floor bz of your injury…

Marzi sir : (upset tone) i m sorry to say dear but that means as you can not perform so you hv to leave the show……………………….

Precap : Elimination….

The end

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sorry for short update…friends i hv written this part in very bad mood due to heavy work schedule…i hope i hv not made u feel bored with this part ..did u like this…? plz share your views..i m eagerly waiting for your comments…so plz do comments…

Credit to: Namrata

21 comments

  1. kriya

    swasanraglak scene was superb…….feeling bad for swara……eagerly waiting for next part….

  2. superbb n sanraglak argue for swara was so cute n i think sanskar will help swara in dancing ,like by making her sit on a table n she will perform with hands n all but doesn’t use legs ….i think so …whatever it may be ….will be waiting

  3. shan

    i think sanky will make shona to keep her leg on his leg nd he will dance bcoz its a couple dance nd i think due to this reason only u have planned couple dance for swasan i think so…..

  4. Hope

    No…no…shona can’t leave d show..i think swasan will dance..sanky will take it as a challenge to dance widout hurting swara..pls..don’t eleminate swara…

  5. Sanskriti ( die hard fan of swasan )

    It’s awesome waiting for next part but why did u eliminate swara

  6. Hope

    And i 4got to tell u…i’m a big fan of varun since humse hai liife…but i was kind of happy dat he didn’t had any pair in dat show..:-P;-):-P my bff used to call him CUTE KABIR….
    Infact we started watching swaragini after he came..and me n my bff made a bet (after his revelation about his revenge& being normal..) about his pair.. Mera bff kaha ki ragsan hoga..rags will change him and all dat..but i said he’s gonna fall hard for swara..and obiviously i won..she bought me 2 snickers..

  7. Ruhani

    Awesome epi dr but sad felt bad for shona.. Their bonding n chemistry were amazing… I guess sanky will do something so that swara can dance without putting her feet on the floor

  8. Nice episode … but made me emotional… plz don’t make swra leave.. bring her back… plz dear and by the way can I to call u di as in previous comments I read that u r 19 and I m only 13 so can I plzzz…..

  9. Jyoti

    Awesome epi di…i’m sure swasan will dance and sanky won’t let any chance to swara to put down a foot…eagerly waiting for the next epi

  10. Sofia

    I think shona will not be eleminated,right? Sanskaar will do something 4 her.hey..my pet name is also Shona. Can u add some funny moments ?? Moreover the episode was emotional. Thanks for writing 2parts a day. I am waiting 4 the elimination.

  11. Jwala

    It was superb dear.. poor shona.. commenting your ff after a long time.. but I’m really glad that all are liking your ff.. I’m a big fan of your ff.. by the way you like varun only? don’t you like helly? helly is my favorite.. amazing update dear

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