Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-14

—————————————————————-

Hello friends…

Accounting to your votes results are :

Shona : 12
Sanky : 22
Lado : 08
Lucky : 06

Don’t worry friends they all will achieve theire goals…i will do give justice to each of their cherecter…

———————————————————————-

Thank u for your comments…i am at cloud 9 reading your comments….you all are loving my story its one of the best feeling of my life…thank u so much for encouraging me…

REPLY to comments of CH-12 & 13 :

TVISHA, KRIYA, MEGHA, MISHA,  RAFEE, HARSHU(NAIMI), RENU, AMMU, LOVELY, DHARA, SWATI, RAGLAK,POOJA : thank u soooooooooo much friends..i m glad you all like this story so much…& commenting everytime… 🙂

KAIRA, NIKKI, DOLLY, SAFIN, ANGEL, NIKITA, ANI, RIYA, SANCHMI, AARTI, SUJATA, : Thanks for breaking your silence…i m happy that you all also like my ff…plz keep reading & commnting…. 🙂

SUJATA : thanks dear for commenting… i thought something different with respect to jealously concept…in my ff swasan can’t do flirt with anyone…i hope you will like my idea.. plz share your view about it.. finger crossed..

SOFIA : thank u so much dear for your suggestion…ragini will be successful singer for sure but i can’t add any singing com in this story…i m sorry for that…

DIVYA : thanks u for your wishes dear..ya CA is a professional course…one of the toughest exam of India…thanks for liking my story… 🙂

ANI, SARA: thanks dear…but i m not writer…i m glad u r liking my way of writing… thanks for your good words for me & this ff…

JYOTI : ya i was upset due to Match only…the whole game was our hand but still we lost…i m feeling bed for India & Kohli also..
🙁 n ya off curse dear u can call me Di… 😉

SHAN : thank u dear for pointing out the scenes which you like in this part…me too like her dear..

MITTI : thank u so much dear…i m average dancer..but ya i do hv knowledge about all dance styles…

MUSU : my name is Namrata only dear…tell me something about you my lil sis..

HOPE : thank u dear…btw i m crazy for dance so i m huge huge fan of DID & also all other dance reality shows…SALMAN, PRINCE, D SIR, SAKTI, SANAM, RAGHV, SHYAM, all are my all time favorites…

Thank u so much friends…i m extremely SORRY if i hv missed any names…thank u silent readers also…

—————————————————————-
Link of Ch-13 :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-13/
Recap : swasan plan..Raglak confession…Shona kiss sanky on check…

————————————————————–

Ch-14 :

Shona came in her room after giveing pack on sanky’s check & saw raglak hugging eo..she was lil bit red due to blushing…but soon compose herself…she ran towards raglak & hug both of them happily…they hugged her back…

Shona : (happy) Ohh wow….congratulations both of you…omg…i can’t believe my lucky boy get his better half…(jump) i m soooooooooo happy for both of you…

Raglak : (smile seeing her happiness) thank u my kiddo….

Sanky joined them after coming out of shock..he huged both…

sanky : (smile)congratulations Lado…lucky…i m so happy for you…u both are officially couple now…

Raglak : (smile) thank u sanky…

Sanky looked at Shona but she was avoiding eye contact with him…and blushing a bit…he smile seeing her…Shona feel his gaze on her & try to divert his attention…..

Shona : Ohh…so finally i hv official right to tease both of you now…you both are going to become victims of teasing…

Lucky got bit nervous bz he knew his Shona…she can make anyone embarrassed by her teasing…
so he keep mum on her statement..but ragini was unaware about this fact and Spock b4 lucky could stop her…

Ragini : Ohh..we will see Shona..i know how innocent you are..so your teasing will be also innocent only…my sweet lil kiddo…

lucky put his hands on his head nd shook his head towards ragini with expression we-are-gone-now..
Sanky saw all this.. ragsan were confused with lucky’s behaviour…

sanlakrag looked at Shona which was fuming with anger as ragini was not taking her seriously.. But next second a naughty smile came on her face…which make ragsan confused & lucky scared…he tried to escape…

lucky : (fake yawning) uuuu…Bye guys i m feeling sleepy…good night…(he hurriedly start going 2words door)

Shona : (Call him) (straching) luckyyyy…!!!

he stop there & turn nervously…Shona went near him hold his hand & drag him…she made him stand near ragini…

Shona : (naughty smile) Lucky…where were you going ha…(lower tone) bz when i come you both were besy in hugging and looking very happy & fresh…

Lucky smile nervously…ragini blush little on her comment..sanky looks on..she continues..

Shona : (fake concerned face) btw lucky how’s your knee now..i must be paining na…(lucky make scared face he know what’s coming next )

(TO LADO) (with fake confuse face) Di, when lucky ask you 2 stand up..at that time you become red like tomato..why ? (wink at her)   naughty girl, did u thought that he is asking for a KI…….? 😉

leave her sentence incomplete..ragini blush hard & also felt  nervous..she gave sorry expression to lucky…

Shona : (continue naughtily) Di, don’t blush like this or else lucky will loose his control & may end up making lo………

Lucky : (close her mouth with his hand) Shona…plz stop now…you are not at all kiddo in this matter..i think ragini has also understand by now..hena ragini..!??

Ragini : (still blushing) (touch her ear) (agree) i was so wrong dear..i am sorry for taking you granted…i will not repeat this mistake my kiddo…plz spare us now…(puppy face)

Shona : (look at raglak) (broust out laughing) Ohh god..lucky..Di your face…hahhahha..lol..are red like tomatoes…(control) ok ok now enough for today…

raglak : (sigh) thank god…

Shona hug raglak…they look at sanky…he was standing with shock expression…his eyes & mouth were wide open…seeing Shona teasing like this…

lucky : (shake him) Sanky…where r u gone ??

Sanky : ahhh…(gulp seeing Shona) wo…vo…nothing…i was just…

lucky : (complete his sentence) Shocked to see Shona like this hena..?? don’t worry you & lado will soon get to know all about her…she is like kiddo but at the same time INNOCENT DEVIL..

Shona look at him angrily..trio smile seeing he expression..then all broust out laughing & share group hug…they sat on the bed talking…

Suddenly, Sanky see one dairy..its cover page was so beautiful…he went to see that dairy & take it in his hand..Shona see this & ran towards him, snatched her dairy from him & hold it tight near her chest in her both hands..Sanky was so shocked as everything happened in few secs only…raglak saw this..

Sanky : (shocked) What was that..??

Lucky : (worn him) hey sanky…don’t touch it..its her personal dairy..she even don’t allow me to touch it…

sanky got shocked to listen this as he couldn’t believe Shona will keep something secret from lucky..

lucky : (tease Shona) that dairy is all about the person whom she is  deeply & madly in love with from last 11 years..

Ragini : (ask) About you..???

lucky : (hurriedly) no no no…its not about me..she love me like friend only..the dairy is all about her Love the real that type of love…(smile naughtily)

Shona blush in dark shade red..Seeing her blushing like that lucky smile but Ragsan were shocked…sanky couldn’t believe the one whom he has started loving like mad is already in love with someone…he was very upset..ragini was also sad as she knew about his feelings…

Sanlak went to their room…soon raglak doze off thinking about their confession…Shona also sleep thinking about her moments with sanky…

but our Sanky darling was very sad..upset..jeaulose…angry..thinking about her Love & personal dairy..he was not at all getting sleeps..A small tear escape from his eye..after sometime he also doze off feeling very jealous & heart broken… 🙁

—————————————————————-

Next morning at 5:30 lucky get up and went to Swaragini’s room still in sleepy stat..room was open as he knew Shona will be at rehearsal hall as per her routin..he went inside & closed the door..

he looked at his angel sleeping with smile…he went near bed & lied down besides her..he gently picked her head up and slid his arm under her head & take her into his embrace…he closed his eyes & sleep again..now both of them were sleeping tightly hugging eo…

—————————————————————–

Shona went to rehearsal hall for dance practice…all were sleeping so she was practicing alone…

there sanky also gets up early..he was needed to involve his mind in dance so that he don’t think about Shona’s dairy..he went to rehearsal hall…

He went inside and saw Shona dancing there..she was doing straching, spinning & split practice.. she was doing it with so much grace & perfection…sanky stood there watching her smilingly…she forget all about her Love & dairy..just lost in her…

soon she complete her practice and wipe her face with napkin..she drink some water & sat there..as door of hall was side way & sanky was standing behind the door..Shona could not see him but he can see and hear her…

She takes out her personal dairy from her handbag…She open it..she was smiling & blushing while turning the page..she was crassing photos in between…

Shona : (talk slowly looking at pics ) I love you soooooooooo much my dear…you know i m in love with you from when i was 9 year old…(laugh to herself & continue) at that time i was not knowing the meaning of love…the day i saw you for the 1st time u made place in my heart…(continue) i m open book for lucky but i even don’t allow him to touch this dairy…(Blush) i really love you so much…(kissed the photo) Mummmha…

Sanky who saw and heard everything was feeling so much jealous seeing Shona’s love for that person…he was feeling very heart broken…he went from there without speaking anything…he went to his room…he was not in his senses..he don’t know what will he do now..lucky was not there so he closed the door…

Sanky : (heart broken) why god why this happen with me only..? you know na..how much i love Shona…i can’t think my life without her..then y u did this to me…what’s wrong i hv done with anyone that u r punishing me like this..i was suppose to propose her…

Sanky open his & Shona’s pic in mobile…

Sanky : (angry) y did u do this to me Shona..? can’t you understand that i love you… if u were already in love with someone they y u come near me..what was that hug & kiss for…(realize) no sanky may be you hv mistaken her friendship..she do hug & kiss to lucky also..but he is just her best friend..may be she also think u as her best friend only…

Sanky : (jealous) she love that person only…who is he..? does he handsome then me ? can he dance like me ? does he care about u like me..?Ohh god…Shona i was boiling when u kissed his pic…(hold his head in both hands) how lucky he is that u love him so much that to from 11 years…(wipe his tears) clam down sanky…Shona is not for u..just befriend with her..don’t think much…

He somehow compose himself with so much difficulty…he went to take a bath & come out of his room & towards rehearsal hall…he was looking dull & tiered…

—————————————————————-

Ragini open her eyes & found herself in lucky’s arm..she thought she is dreaming…

Ragini : (smile & murmur) Ohh god..lucky…u hv made me crazy…see i m dreaming that you are sleeping here hugging me..how badly i want this dream to come true..i love you so much…

Lucky who heard her smile & tighten his grip pulling her more close to him….now ragini widen her eyes as she understand that its not dream but reality…she tried to get our of his grip..

Lucky : (open his eyes & smile) Good morning..i love you too my angel..( pack her forehead)

Ragini : (blush & stammer) ggg good morning lucky…what are you doing here..?plz  leave me…Shona will come anytime…she will not leave us seeing us like this..

Lucky : (tighten his grip) shhhh…don’t worry ragini…i hv already sent meg her not to come till the time i call her…

Ragini : Ohh god..now she will tease us like hell…what hv u done lucky…?

lucky : (assure her) don’t worry angel…kiddo will not do anything till we don’t make her angry or tease her..so now forget about her & concentrate on US…(wink at her)

Ragini blush hard listening to his last line..lucky see her blushing face & lost in his angel’s morning beauty…ragini felt his intense gaze on her..

Ragini : (bush) lucky plz don’t star me like that…i feel…

lucky : (huskily) you what angel..? tell me…

Ragini blush more..now that was enough for him..he roll over..now ragini was on her back & lucky was on top of her..they were toooo close…

Lucky kissed her forehead…ragini close her eyes…then he kissed her both closed eyes..then her nose…then her both checks..then he kissed on her cheen very near to lower lips..ragini give blushing smile..she opened her eyes..they both look at eo..their eyes were filled with love & passion for eo..lucky look at her lips & ask permission to kiss her with his eyes..she understand..she part her lips and closed her eyes giving him positive signal..lucky smile & leaned to her lips..they both were breathing heavily..they were very closed & can feel their hot breath on their lips..

they were about to kiss when ragini’s phone rang…they open their eyes..lucky get up from her & ragini picked up the call..it was ap’s call…she was talking on the phone still blushing hard…she looked at lucky who was frustrated bz of disturbance…she complete the call…

Lucky : what a timing yar..we were about to hv our first kiss but……(give naughty smile) anyways lets complete our work…

Ragini : (blush) Lucky..you are so shameless…we will do it latter…let me go and get ready we need go for rehearsal…

Lucky : (make sad puppy face) ya..ok…i m going to my room…

lucky was about to go when ragini hold his hand…she went near him & kissed his right check…lucky become very happy…she blushed..

lucky : (forwarding his left check) plz here also…

Ragini smack his shoulder playfully & kissed his left check also…he become very happy and hugged her tightly…

lucky : (happy) thank u so much my angel…

ragini : (blush) now go…c u at rehearsal hall…bye…

she pushed him out & closed the door..they both were very happy..they were smiling remembering their recent romantic moments…
————————————————————–

Shona received lucky’s meg telling her not to come to room till he call her..she smile..& happy for lucky & Lado…So after sometime she again start her dance practice…at that time sanky come there…

Shona blush remembering yesterday’s kiss but compose herself…she found sanky in deep thought & looking bit dull…she got worried about him…

Shona : good morning sanky (worried) r u all right..? y u r looking so dull…? is anything wrong with you..? tell me what bothering you…? you are…

Sanky become happy seeing her concerned for him..but he remember about her love & become very angry…he hold her hands & pinned her to the glass wall…went close to her…she was shocked with his behaviour…

Sanky : (angrily) i m perfectly alright…swara…you don’t need to worry about me…don’t interfere in my matters…i don’t need your sympathy…

Shona got tears in her eyes seeing his anger…she has not seen him like this before…moreover he addressed her as Swara…she start wiping silently…Sanky stop seeing her tears & realized what he has done…he immediately release her grip…

Sanky : (hurriedly ) i m so sorry Shona…i didn’t mean to hurt you…plz don’t cry…i was upset and…..i m so sorry….plz plz forgive me…(he knelt down & hold his ears)

Shona was very angry on him due to his behaviour & harsh words but she melt after seeing him apologizing like this..she thought something is really bothering him..

Shona made him sit properly..she give him water to drink…she sat besides him & hold his hand..he was feeling more guilty seeing her care for him & her teary eyes…

Shona : (teary voice) (pat his shoulder) its ok sanky…sometimes its happenes…don’t feel guilty…

Sanky : (stammer) sh..Shona…i m sor……

Shona : (interrupt) i m fine sanky…i m not angry on you…

She hugged sanky assuring him that she is fine…sanky too hugged her back…tears were flowing from both of their eyes…they break the hug…

Shona : (try to lightn the environment) Ohh god…i didn’t think that MR. kadus is so emotional…

Sanky : (smile) and i too didn’t think that this lil kid can act maturdly…

Shona : (make fake angry face) don’t call me kid…(serious tone) i know something is bothering you…don’t tell me now…take your all time…just remember one thing that i will be always there with you…

sanky was touched by her words and nodes…
Shona received meg from lucky that she can went to her room now…so she got up and start going from there…

Sanky : (call her from back) Shona..i m sorry once again…

Shona : (smile) its ok sanky…(make cute face) but plz don’t do like this again…

Sanky nodes & she left from there to her room…sanky watch her going out ..

Sanky : (monologue) why i m feeling that you also love me as much as i do from your care.. your concerned..your eyes..your actions…? Ohh god…i m going  mad…

Sanky : (jeaulose) no sanky didn’t you heard in morning how much she love that person…the villan of  my life…ahhh…i m not able to think Shona with someone else…

Sanky : (determined) now i need to find out about that person…i know its wrong to check someone’s personal dairy but i badly need to check it…i will….

Suddenly he saw Shona’s handbag there…Shona forget to take her handbag…he remember her taking out dairy from that beg…his face lightened…he immediately ran towards door and locked it from inside…

She took out her dairy from the beg..his hands were shivering due to nervousness…he finally open first page…his eyes widened reading the line written on that…

” The one who will read my dairy without my permission will become frog in his next birth ”

In his state of nervousness also he smile seeing her childishness reading that sentence..He took courage and finally turned the page………………………………….

Precap : Sanky come to know about Shona’s love…raglak masti…small villans entry..

The end

————————————————————————

So…friends how was the epi..? did u like raglak romance..? jeaulose sanky…? i hope i hv not made u bored with this…plz plz comment friends…eagerly waiting for your comments…

Credit to: Namrata

24 comments

  1. Sofia

    Thanks 4 ur reply. U rocked it. Raglak scenes were awsm and Sanky’s monologue and jealousy was perfectly balanced.

  2. Ani

    I just like loved Raglak scenes it was cute and romantic ??? it was really funny which Shona wrote on her first page???

  3. Hope

    Hey…i have a small request can u add our DIDians in an epi in a cameo role.a round where all d contestants are assigned wid celeb dancers
    sanskar with shakti
    laksh with did s5 winner ( i 4got her name)
    ragini with sanam
    swara with crocrox.
    Or can u add d3 team..not d full team only kriyansh and swaron..
    I don’t want any fighting nor jealousy..i just wanna see some nok jhok… Only if d story requires…no worries if u didn’t lyk my idea.

  4. Hope

    Waiting 4 d diary to open..i think it would be something related to dance or her career..maybe a totally unexpected silly matter,can’t wait.eager 4 nxt update..

  5. sujata

    Literally the jealous drama was nt atall expected it’s totally a idea dear… hats off.. u write really very well… cant wait to know who is the person. .. I feel that it will come to be something funny… may be a actor… just a guess.. n I know it’s a stupid one ? plz upload nxt ASAP. .. cant wait to read next

    • sujata

      N I have a polite request can u add d3 leads in other finale… lyk they have to team up with participants. .. lyk
      Sanky with kriya(shakti mohan)
      Swara with rey
      Lucky with Sharon
      Ragini with swayam

      U can add any content may it be jealousy ya nok jhok… entertainment toh is ur department. .. srry if I offended u just a suggestion. .. as if I get any idea I can wait till poping it out. ..

  6. pooja

    hey!!! namarata di as u r 2 yrs older dan me!!!!
    i hope u don’t mind calling u di…….
    u r a dancer wow!!!! dats a great info…. u gave about urself…..
    all d best 4 ur future ….as u r going 2 be a ca ……..

    ya superb part
    omg!!!! raglak so romantic…….
    sanky is awsm…..

  7. mitti

    Raglak scenes were just awesome n passionate…..sanky jealousy was soo cute….I love boys when they r jealous with their cute angry expression. ….
    Just one request plzzzz. ..can u plzzzz include dancers from D3 …or u can also include dharmesh or raghav. …..it’s completely ur choice dr. …..keep writing like this n I love u ♥ 🙂

  8. kriya

    superb epi…..raglak scene was superb…..especially sanky jealousy part…..eagerly waiting for shona’s diary secret…….

  9. shan

    very very nice…..u r an awesome writer narmada…..raglak romance was superb….whether swara love sanky from d age f 9????I think n d diary der will b sankys pht…..but u have stopped today’s part at a suspense…..so pls update next asap….

  10. kalai

    till nw I’m silent reader of ur ff bt today I can’t control myself
    u r jst fabulous writer i must say
    raglak scenes r awsm I luved it so much
    u jst nailed it
    can’t wait fr nxt one
    jst waitng fr ur nxt update

  11. Jyoti

    I think her love of her life is a famous dancer only…superb epi di..eagerly waiting to know who is the diary’s lucky person

  12. Ruhani

    Omg it was too gud yr raglak romance was awesome i loved their chemistry n love for each other… Poor sanky I guess that person is a filmstar hope he find out soon…

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..