Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-11

friends i m posting this ch lil early bz i will be busy at evening…upps..i think we all will be busy in evening…after all its our semi-final match in t-20 world cup….we can’t miss it…Everybody plz Cheers for India…
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Thank u so much everyone for loving this story..keep reading and supporting..ur comments made my day..

Reply to comments :

Priya : thank u so much dear..i hv seen your comment in ch-9..

Tvisha, Misha, Naimi, swati, Jyoti, Defsi, Megha, Ammu, meghs, zzzz(charming), Kriya, Pooja, annanya : thank u so much dear for liking my story and commenting…

Renu : thank u so much for your grand salute dear…i m glad u all r able to imagine all moments…

mitti : aww…how sweet…thank u so much dear for commenting and also for sharing your moments..

Shan : thank u so much dear for waiting for my ff..i hv tried to give some expaination in terms of note plz read it…

Divya : aww…i am glad you like my ff this much…thank us so much for your good words about me & this story…

sorry if i hv skipped anyone here…i think i hv included all till now…i will reply latter to the one who will comment after i uploaded this part..thank u silent readers also..

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Note :

Friends i want to Share onething about swalak & ragsan relation…PLZ READ THIS…

in my story, Swalak are together since when Shona was 4 and lucky was 6 year old…So they were eo’s very 1st friend..they hv seen eo growing up i.e. kiddhood, teenhood and now youth..friends 16 years is very long time period..they practically do everything together..so i show that lucky give pack on
Shona’s forehead and Shona give on lucky’s check….for ragsan, their bonding is also lil diff from other and  i wanna give them equal imp so i m showing their friendly moments…

If i hv hurt you with this then i m extrimly sorry…after all i m also Indian..a Proud Indian..

but i just tried to show that a girl and guy can share this different friendship bonding without turning into lovers…

my intention was not to hurt you…i m soooooooooo sorry…it was just friendly kisses not even kiss its just small pack..but now on i will not write any such scenes…sorry…

thank you so much SHAN for pointing out this ..i hope you will forgive me for this…n i m not at all hurt by your comment…in fact i m thankful that you bring my attention to this point…sorry once again..

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Ch-10 link :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-10/
Recap: swasan bike ride, raglak in car, swasan realize their love and make plan to unit raglak…

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Ch – 11 :

Sanlak start drinking…actually the fact was that one bottle was of wine and one of just water…Sanky was having water..so practically only lucky was drinking…

Lucky got full drunk in 2-3 packs only…as he doesn’t hv habit of drinking…

Lucky : (Shouts) y this room is spinning…Ohh god…its earthquake…Ohh..no…somebody help us…(he start running here & there)…help..help…plz save us…

Sanky laugh seeing his cute antics in drunken stat…

lucky : (continues) (hold Sanky’s hand) Sanky…lets run from here…i don’t wanna die soon…i wanna become best dancer…i can’t die now…i hv not even kissed any girl yet..(cute puppy face)

It was hard for Sanky to control his laughter seeing Lucky’s drama….he thought Shona was right lucky can not handle drinks…He saw lucky running here & there shouting for help…Sanky made him sit on the bed…

Sanky : lucky…its not earthquake…u were spinning so you though that room is spinning…sit here…

lucky : (innocently) ohhh…is it so…how budhdhu(idiot) i m..!! ha ha ha ha…lol..

lucky was dancing and jumping…now it was becoming very hard for Sanky to manage him…so he thought that now its time to ask him…he made him sit on bed..lucky was laughing uncontrollably…

Sanky : Lucky…tell me what do u think about me, Shona & Lado…?

lucky : arre buddhu…ladies should be first….you even don’t know this…(laugh like kid) so u should ask..”what do u thing bout Shona, Lado & me..?”…

Sanky looks on & smile…lucky continue..

lucky : (drunken voice)(with cute smile) Shona..my cuuuuteeee…sweetest…lilllllll kiddooooo…my babyyyyyyyyy….i love her soooooooooo much…u know we can’t live a single day without eo…we know eo more than we know ourselves…(stammer) shhheeeee iss myyyy beeeest bubbbddyy…i am glad that god hv sent Shona in my life….

Sanky was watching him with smile as he was telling about him & Shona..

Sanky :(monologue) Ohh wow…lucky & Shona are sharing a very beautiful and amazing bonding…(made puppy face) Ohh god..will Shona ever love me..like she loves lucky..!!! (scold himself) abbe idiot..you are suppose to think about raglak and u r thinking abt urself..you selfish..now ask him abt Lado…

Sanky : (loudly) lucky now its Ragini’s turn..

lucky : (cute smile) (dreamily) Ragini….she is not girl…

Sanky : (shocked & shouts) What…??!!!!

lucky : (baby crying face) you didn’t let me complete my sentence..you shouted on me..u r very bad go i m not talking to you…

Sanky : i m sorry lucky..(hold his ear) plz forgive me..tell me what do you think about Lado..?

Sanky start vedio recording his confession…

lucky : (DREAMILY) ragini..she is not girl..she is an ANGEL..a sweet..innocent..beautiful angel…when i 1st time saw her i felt as if i m having some connection with her..(MAKE PUPPY FACE) u know Sanky i hv dated many girls but i didn’t feel anything like i feel with Lado..i hv shared many things with her which till now i don’t like to share with anyone except Shona..(CONFUSED) i hv huged Shona n no of times..Shona had kissed me on my check almost every day…but i didn’t felt anything like i felt when Lado is close to me…(SMILE) ( TOUCH HS CHECK)  when her lips slightly brash against my check in car..i felt current passed through my body…i love to spend time with her..my angel..i love her smile..i love her innocence..i love her dance…i love her singing…i love everything about her..i think i love…………….

Lucky fell on bed and he doze off…Sanky stop vedio recording…he made lucky sleep properly and put blanket on him…he was extrimly happy with lucky’s confession..now he was sure that lucky is truly in love with his Lado..

He look at the time..it was 1:50 am..he messaged Shona..

” 1st phase of plan is successful ”

Then he went on other side of bed and ly down..he smile remembering every moments spend with Shona specially her back hug on bike and feel butterfly in his stomach..soon he also doze off..

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Next day Morning 5:30…

Shona get up as per her routine…she saw ragini sleeping…she smile looking at her and checked her phone…she saw Sanky’s meg and jump with happiness but control her as ragini was sleeping…

She get up from bed..soon she started her morning dance practice..she was doing different dance steps and moves..after 1 hour ragini woke up..he saw swara doing dance practice..she smile at her..

Shona : (smile back) good morning Lado…

Lado : ( strach her arms) good morning Shona….so u r maintaining your daily routine here in hotel also..good…

Shona : u know na Lado i can’t compromise with my dance in any dam situation…common lets dance together..

Ragini went to freshen up and joined her..Shona plays the “rabata” song…

” Kehte hai khuda  ne is jahan me sabhi k liye..kisi na kisi ko hai banaya her kisi k liye..tera milna hai…………………….”

They both were dancing in contemmprory style..they both were beautiful and perfect…they both do split at the end facing eo…After that they do some more dance practice..both learn some new steps from eo..then they both went to take bath and get ready..oyyyeee offcourse one by one..

Ragini : Shona lets go and wake up boys..they both must be still sleeping…its 8:25 now..

Shona : (stop her as she know they hv slept after 2 am ) ragini let them sleep for some more time..thy must hv slept late yesterday..Lets talk sometime..we hv not gotten any chance to spend time alone..

Ragini : (happily agrees) ya that’s true..lets talk…(tease her) Vese…u know someone was hugging someone tightly yesterdays…what’s the matter ha…tell me..tell me..

Shona shocked with her sudden teasing..but compose herself and tease her back after all she was master in that..

Shona : nothing..i was just feeling sleepy at that time..(tease) anyways…i hv notice someone getting jealous when lucky was flirting…(wink at her)

Ragini : (shocked & tried to cover) no no Shona..it was nothing like that…u r thinking wrong…y should i be jealous ??

Shona : (smile) bz you are in love with him…from your 1st meeting itself…

Ragini : (hell shocked) how do you know..?? I mean..vo…actually…i…

Shona : (smile) Lado..you are very nice girl beautiful from outside and inside…u r perfect match for my lucky..n i will be the happiest person if you both will be together…

Ragini : (blush) thank u so much Shona..(hug her)

Shona : (tease) ohhoo someone is blushing…(she blush more)(they both laugh) btw Lado..tell me onething..i hv seen u boiling with anger when he was flirting with other girl from distance…but i hv not noticed any kind of jealously on your face when i m near him..i mean we are really very close to eo..why..??

Ragini : (confessed) initially i was confused with respect to your relation..but when lucky cleared my dought..and tell me about your above friendship below love relation..i hv understand that you both love eo so much but just as best friends..and moreover i m also sharing some what of same relation with Sanky so there is no need to get jealous..

Shona : aww…i am glad that you understand our bonding…i will never come in between your love life…i love you Lado..(teary eyes)

Ragini : (emotional) arre Shona..what r u talking..u will be always his 1st priority…you are just like my younger sister dear…i love too my kiddo…

Shona : (smile) till now i hv not let anyone call me kiddo except lucky…but as u r going to be his better half..u hv full right on me just like he has..

Ragini : aww..how sweet..!!! (sad) but lucky don’t beliv in love…how will i be able to change his pov…

Shona : (assure her) don’t worry Di…you will get his love soon…don’t worry..just keep faith on your love..now lets go and wake them up..its 9:15 now…(Ragini nodes)

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They both went to lucky’s room and knocked the door…after sometime Sanky open the door..girls went inside..as expected our cool guy lucky was still sleeping..

swaragini : (smiles) good morning Sanky…

Sanky : (sleepy tone) good morning girls..

Shona see lucky sleeping and get one awesome idea..he messaged Sanky something and signal him to check..he read her meg and do as she said without ragini’s notice..

Shona : Sanky i need to buy something..so will u plz take me to some near by shop..?

Sanky : ya sure Shona..y not…

Shona : cool…lets go..Lado you go and wake up lucky..we will come soon..bye..

swasan left from there closing door behind them…Shona drag Sanky to her room and lock the door…she adjust her phone on table in front of them and they both seat on the couch…

Sanky : (confused) Shona, will u plz tell me what we r doing..? why you msged me to do skypyy call to you..and than hide my phone at such place from where bed can be seen…? y u told to lower down call volume to zero..? you are…

Shona : (interrupt excitedly) ( put her finger on his lips) Shhhh….just watch…u will understand everything…

Sanky dreamily nodes…Then she realize her finger on his lips..they both hv n intense eye-lock..Sanky wanted to kiss her finger but control his emotions..Shona take her finger off from his lips immediately…they compose themselves…and start watching…they saw ragini going near bed to wack up lucky…

ragini : (murmur) aww..how sweet he is looking while sleeping…!!!! Ohh god..he is so handsome yar (pat her forehead) control yourself Lado…and wake him up…

Swasan saw her and heard her murmuring exchange smile and again start watching them…

Ragini : (loudly) lucky wake up…its already 9:30..(no response)

Ragini tried for few time by waking up without going near him but she got only no response from him..so she went near him and shake him a bit from shoulder…

ragini : lucky get…………(shocked)

B4 ragini could complete her sentence..lucky pulled her on bed near him and put his 1 hand on her hand ( friends with proper distance not close)…

lucky : (closed eyes) (sleepy tone) Shona let me sleep for 15 min plz…and u also sleep for sometime..i know here also u must hv wake up at 5:30…so plz sleep my kiddo..

Ragini : lucky…i m…..(he cut her nd told again to sleep for sometime without speaking)

Ragini was shocked..hell shocked…she was not able to think anything…she just ly there like statue..she was having mixed feeling shocked..surprised…happy…confused..etc..

Shona jumped on couch and hold  Sanky’s hand when lucky pulled ragini…Sanky was also in shock..now he understand y Shona did this..

Sanky : (shocked & happy) Ohh god…he pulled her..now i understand y u told me to do so…it was a awesome idea yar…

Shona : (happy) ya i know..i am just great..lucky do this with me whenever i go to wake him up…

Sanky : (shocked) what…??? he pulled you on bed..!!??

Shona : (saw his expression) (serious tone)  Sanky plz don’t take us wrong…we are just best buddies and we very well know our limits..it just we are like this from childhood…i know its strange but…..

Sanky : (smile and interrupt) y r u giving examinations to me..? i & Lado both hv understand your bonding..we respect your relation dear…we trust u both..you see..me & Lado are this much close in just 7-8 months..whereas u both r 2gather from last 16 years…so you no need to give any clarification…

Shona was overwhelmed by his answer..afterall she is in love with Sanky..and by his this answer she was in cloud 9..now she was sure that Sanky will accept her with her friendship with lucky…

Sanky was also happy that Shona tried to give clarification to him..that means his thinking  some how affect her..

Sanky : (teasingly) btw y are you telling me all this..? y does my thinking about you matters to you this much ? (raise her brow)

Shona : (blush) wo…(covers ) (firm tone) you are Lado’s best friend..i don’t want you to think anything ill about lucky..and you are also our friend now…so that y i was giving you clarification…nothing else..

Sanky : (smile & tease) Ohh i see..then y r u holding my hand from last 5-7 min like this…(he point towards his hand which Shona was holding tightly)

Shona : ( release his hand)  (blush & summers) wo..wo..ac..actually..ha..i was become happy seeing raglak..that y i hold your hand in excitement..(cute flat tone) you don’t need to give stress to your tiny brain..

Sanky smile seeing her cute antics…he was falling more and more for her..he wanted to confess his feeling now only..but control himself..they look at vedio call..

Ragini was still lying like statue and sweating…lucky was sleeping..ragini tried to get up but he was holding her hand tightly…ragini finally decide to wake him up as he was thinking her as Shona and its wrong to keep silence..

Ragini : (shake him with lil force) lucky…wake up..its not Shona..its me ragini..

lucky open his eyes widely…he look their position..he was holding her hand very tightly…he smile slightly seeing his angel’s face 1st after opening his eyes..he stay still for few second..

He saw her sweating & he understand that he had commented a big mistake..he had created a very awkward situation between them…so he thought something..

he release her hand..Ragini immediately get up from bed.. He stand up on bed & start doing drama to remove their awkwardness…

Lucky : (shout) help…help…somebody help me plz…

swasan start laughing seeing his drama..

Ragini : (shocked) lucky..??? what happened ?

Lucky : (DRAMA) you……you stay away from me……i hv considered you as my friend and you try to chiiii……..!!! (HE PUT HIS BOTH AND CROSSING ON HIS SHOULDERS) ( ACT AS IF SCARED)  I am alone here that does not mean you can do anything with me……i know i am so handsome but you can’t..you can’t play with my reputation……(CROSS HIS ARMS) one more thing i know KARATE..so don’t come near me..

{ Such an dramebazz he is..!!!!! }

ragini was hell angry by now as he was the one who pulled her on bed and now he is playing victim card making her criminal…

Ragini : (angry) Lucky now you are gone..now i m actually gonna do what you are talking…now no one on earth can save you from me…she start going near him…

lucky : (run & shouts) ahhhhhhhhh…Help….somebody help me…Bacho…

he was running here and there in the room and Ragini was chasing him…at last thy both fell on the bed..(don’t think much not on eo but besides eo) ragini start beating him with her hands then with pillows..lucky hold her hand and they both get up and sit…they look into eo eyes for few minits and broust out laughing remembering recent drama..

Lucky : (serious tone) (hold his ears) I am extrimly sorry Lado…i thought you as Shona and drag u on bed…i am soooooooooo sorry…trust me i didn’t do it intentionally….sorry sorry sorry sorry…plz forgive me…

Ragini : (melt by his cute face) its ok lucky i forgave you…(tease) but yar i must say…you are such a dramebazz…you reverse the cards in one second…

There swasan was enjoying their morning ROMCOM movie…they were laughing like anything watching lucky’s drama..they exchange Hi fi…they cut the vedio call…

Sanky : (laugh) Ohh god…lucky is nautanki no 1..i can’t control my laugh yar…(mimic)” you can’t play with my reputation” ha ha ha…lol..

Shona : (laugh) ha ha ha..Ohh gosh..my stomach is aching now…poor ragini…hey did you notice her shocked angry expression…lol

Sanky : ya..i did..but i must say lucky has smartly removed the awkward situation created between them..he is a genius man..

Shona : ya he is…he know how to handle every situation..now i wish he accept his love soon…btw hv you taken the vedio of his confession…

Sanky : ya..i hv..(take a sigh) btw it was very hand for me to manage him in that stat..you need to give me some gift for that..

Shona went near her beg and take out one silk bubbly from it..Sanky smile at her..thy both ate chocolate nd talk about their next step…

Sanky laugh seeing her..as her hands and face were dirty due to eating chocolate like a kid..Shona make cute angry face..

Sanky take out his hanky and went near her..lil close to her..he start wiping her face with hanky..his fingers were touching her nose, checks and lips..both were breathing heavily…thy were lost in eo..they come to their sense when Shona’s phone rings..they compose themselves and avoid eye contact..

Shona : hello lucky..we r coming in 5 min only…

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Swasan come to lucky’s room..lucky was sitting with his lappy…

lucky : hey…Shona Sanky come here…list of rules for mega audition performance have been declared…

swasan : what…lets see..

They read all the rules…out of that 2 rules were like this..

” contestants can not respect dance style which they hv done in audition round ”

” contestants has to perform dance on one song with 2 different dance styles ”

they become very happy and excited..they start discussing about that…

Sanky : awesome…i will perform on cramping with break dance…on title song of movie “Bang Bang”

Sanky : i will perform on contemmprory and contoson…and song will be ” Duhai ” from ABCD..

Shona : i will perform on locking popping and robotics…on song ” tip tip barsa pani ”

Ragini : (sad) what will i do..? i can perfectly do only 3 styles i.e. classical, contemmprory & bollywood…i can’t perform classical and can’t mix contemmprory & bollywood in any song…

Shona : (hug her) ( cupped her face ) Di don’t worry…n its not like that you can’t do other styles..it just you need more practice for that..it happens to everyone…if anyone will tell me to do classical than i will go black at first..

Ragini was overwhelmed seeing shona’s concerned for her and she feel better with her words…

lucky : don’t worry Lado..we all are with you..we will help you with other style…we will think something…

Sanky : no need to think Lucky…i hv decided her dance style in which she will not need our help much..

Sanlakrag look at him curiously…he smiles and plays the song…

Sanky : so my dear Lado..u will perform on hiphop & Lavni(marathi falk) style on “Apsara aalli “…u can use basic hiphop steps which u know and in Lavni..u r toh master..(wink at her)

All become happy…they share group hug…

Lucky : btw Sanky did you notice something..(signal him) when Shona was talking with Lado…

Sanky : arre ha…Shona from when Lado become your Di..?? ha…

swaragini : (smile) (together ) from today morning only…

Shona : (side hug her) my sweety Di…

ragini : (hug back) my cute kiddo..

lucky : Ohh gosh..its a miracle..Shona you allow her to call u kiddo..?!!! (puppy face)  how can you share my right with her..

Shona : (smile) my Di has full right on me from today…i got a sweet sis in her…

swaragini hug eo with teary eyes…sanlak become emotional and happy seeing their bondings…

Sanky : Ohh so you both become swaragini from today ha..

swarag : Swaragini …??!!!

lucky : yup..swara + Ragini = swaragini

Shona : wowwww….our name also get attached just like us..

ragini : now we will be together forever…

they become happy…all spent some time together and decide to meet for dinner…then ragsan left to their home..they all got engaged in their megha audition practice…

Precap : Swasn-raglak at dinner…raglak romantic dance..day of mega audition..

The end

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so i think its dam lengthy part…i hope i hv not made u feel bored with this part ..did u like this…? hv u enjoyed this ch ? plz share your views..i m eagerly waiting for your comments…its my energy pills for writing next part….so plz do comments…

Credit to: Namrata

47 comments

  1. Dafsi

    Its really awesome, Laksh was hillarious and you perfectly described eash moment keep going dude

    • Namrata

      thank us so much dhara… i m sorry u missed swasan..don’t worry dear there will be more swasan scene after 1 ch.. 🙂

  2. great dear and can i ask u 1 question can i call you DI you are my sister na and sorry i forgot to post comment on on 10 epi but it was just great and post asap please l am waiting by your choti sister

    • Namrata

      off curse u can call me Di dear… i will be so happy.. 🙂 i hv missed ur comment on last epi 🙁 but its ok.. i m glad u liked it..

      btw if u r comfortable then tell me abt u something..? what r u studying ?

  3. Priya

    Superb dear. Your ff is awesome and so are you. If you can, please update the next epi today itself. Can’t wait. Waiting for Laksh to tell his feelings to Ragini.

    • Namrata

      thank u so much priya dear.. i am glad u liked those story… 🙂

      i m sorry dear i can’t post it today…as i hv not even started writing due to match.. 😉 but…i will try my best to post it 2moro morning… 🙂

    • Namrata

      thank u aol much Renu for loving my ff.. 🙂 your comment always bring smile on my face.. :*

  4. kriya

    superb epi n swasan n raglak scene was awesome i loved it n eagerly waiting for next part…..

    • Namrata

      thank u so much dear Kriya for liking both couples and your regular support to this me & this story… 🙂

  5. Jyoti

    Aww just awesome…and ya India is the best..and don’t worry about swalak and ragsan bonding I perfectly understand it

    • Namrata

      i m glad u understand my point with respect to swalak ragsan…

      n ya right now India is doing grate in match….. 🙂 my virat again rocked today 😉

      i will not say thanks to u as we are friends na… 😉

  6. I loved your ff I am a silent reader and not a full Indian a fan of you and my life is for you your ff made my morning and also my evening I may not be good at things but I know I am good at picking right ff

    • Namrata

      thank u so much dear…your comment made my day…thanks for your good words.. 🙂 i m happy that i m able to make you happy with this story… i m not a writer dear but i will try my best to not make u disappoint… i m dancing right now reading your comment.. 😉 thanks for breaking your silence…luv u dear… 🙂

    • Namrata

      thank u so much dear Mitti for liking swaragini bond…i m happy that u comment abt it… 🙂

      btw i m a classical dancer..n can do bollywood & some falk dance..i hv tried hiphop also…

      n i am a crazy lover of dance…if i will c anyone dancing anywhere i will stop my all work and will engage in watching dance… 😉

  7. pooja

    lol!!! man
    lucky is damn funnnyyy
    hahaha
    i can’t control my laugh ….
    awsm part namrata…..
    luv u…..;)

    • Namrata

      thank u so much Pooja…i am glad that i make u laugh…:) ur comment always make me happy…luv u too dear 😉

  8. shan

    first of all thank you for considering my thought…..i dint mention to hurt u…..but u took it positively thank u very much…..very very nice…..no words to explain….today lucky really rocked….i love laksh but after dis kavya entry i started to hate him….nd now after kavyas death drama lightly i love laksh….but after reading ur ff i love lucky a lot…..seriously fabulous…..luckys drama was superbbbbb…..

    • Namrata

      hey Shan….i hv to consider your opinion dear..after all i m writing this story for you all…you hv full right to put your point…i m glad you start loving laksh after reading this part.. 😉 so sweet of you…

      thank u so much for encouraging me every time..luv u dear…

  9. Namrata

    thank u so much dear Renu for loving my ff..everytime your comment bring smile on my face… 🙂

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  11. Ani

    Loved the episode ??? I was awesome… Laksh confession was funny and cute??? his drama? Ofcourse he is no.1 dramebazzz…

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