Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-10

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reply to comments:

Swati, Naimi, Rafee, Misha, Ammu, Ananya, : Thank u so much dear for liking this part..

Defsi, lovely : thanks dear for liking raglak scenes..

Kriya, Tvisha, Alia, Ruhani, Meghs : thank u so much dear for liking dance face off and all of their bonding…

Renu : thanks dear..wow..u were there with them in park..i am glad i m able to make u smile…n ur commets bring smile on my face..

Megha : thank u dear..aww…u r addicted to this story..!! it means a lot to me…

Jyoti : uhhh..thank god you like that part..ya no need to say thanks dear as we are friends..

Musu(angel) : no need to thank dear as we are friends..i m happy to get sis like u…luv u…stay blessed dear..

Pooja : aww so sweet of u..thanks dear for loving this story and ha 4 ur flowers also..

Shan : thank u so much dear for liking both the couples…u find this shorter..Ohh sorry i will try to give all part longer one..

Divya : aww..thank u for liking this story & also for the complement..

Ani : aww..Ani dear…thank u so much for your good words about me and liking all of their bondings…ya..i am trying my best to give equal imp to all…

Jwala : thanks dear…actually i was not planning jealously stuff for swasan bz in this story they both don’t not like cheesy flirt type things…but for you i will surely write it while dance reality show….b4 their confession…

sorry if i hv skipped anyone…thank u silent readers also..i hv completed my 10 ch with your supports..

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Ch-9 link :

Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-9

Recap : Swasanraglak dance face off and their bonding..

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Ch-10 :

Raglak reach out of swasan Sight and start laughing loudly..they exchange hi fi…they both were thinking that they hv sent Swasan on their 1st long drive but they don’t realise that by doing this they will also hv their 1st long ride with eo..lucky was driving…

Ragini : (happy) wow…lucky your plan is superb…they will spend some good time together…

lucky : yup Lado…i know..i am the best..(wink at her)

Ragini : (cute angry face) Ohh hello..u no need to take whole credit..i was the one who hv executed the plan…(they both look at eo 4 sometime and laugh)

lucky : btw Lado they will not only spend some time together but also will definitely come close to eo…

Ragini : (confused) what..? how can be sure about that..?

lucky : actually..Shona can’t sit on bike without hugging me from back…(then he explained her something)…so as she is with Sanky and it is long distance..i am sure that…

Ragini : (excitedly) to hv comfortable ride..she will hold or hug him for sure…wowwww..that’s great..

lucky : ya it is..i am sure they will be very happy together…

Ragini : (dreamily) (looking at him)  i wish…i could hv got sach romantic bike ride with my love..

lucky : (star her for sometime) i hope you will find him soon dear..(teasingly) it seems you are very romantic girl…your partner will be lucky one..

Ragini : (monologue) Ohh god i don’t want any lucky one but i want you lucky…(blush) (loudly) stop teasing me lucky..

lucky : (tease more) ohhhooooo…someone is blushing…

Ragini blush lil more..lucky memorized by her beautiful blushing face..and confessed…

lucky : (smiles)  Lado..i am sorry..i hv not said anything about your singing…but fact is that i was…

Ragini looked at him curiously as she was waiting for his complement…

lucky : (confesed) i was lost in your melodious voice..i was speechless at that time…nd after that i was waiting for right time to complement you..you are a very awesome and beautiful dancer as well as singer…

Ragini : (feeling overwhelmed) thank you so much lucky for your complement…i must tell u that you are an outstanding dancer..

lucky: (proudly) ya..that i m..(wink at her)

They both smile..Ragini was happy receiving such an amazing complement from him..there lucky was also enjoying her company…

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Meanwhile there in parking lot…swasan watched raglak’s car getting out of their sight..they were angry and shocked…

Shona : (shouts) what the hell…what’s wrong with lucky..he know that i don’t like to go with anyone on bike other than him..then also he left me with you that to @ 10:15 pm..unbelievable…

Sanky : (shocked) Ohh god..how can ragini do this to me..when she know that i don’t like any girl behind me on bike except her..she left me with no option..

swasan make faces and look at eo..

Shona : (angry) i am not going to leave lucky..

Sanky : (angry) me too is not going to leave Lado..

Shona : hey..they went leaving us like this dose that means……

Sanky : (complete her sentence) Lado wanted to spend time with lucky..and may be lucky also wanted the same..

swasan : (excitedly) Wowwww…that’s awesome..(exchange hi fi)

Sanky : Shona..lets go now..its to late..and we are suppose to clear long distance..it will take abt 1 hour to reach your hotel..

Shona : (nodes) ya..lets go…

she sits behind him and hold back handle of bike..Sanky look her face on side mirror and smile…he start driving..he was driving at lil bit faster but not very fast..he look at her and saw worried expression on Shona’s face..

Sanky : Shona…what happened..? you like bike ride na..?

Shona : (tensed) no no Sanky..i love bike rides..nothing like that..i am ok..

Sanky : (now worried seeing her tensed face) ( stop bike and ask her) hey Shona…plz tell me..what is bothering you..? should i slow down the speed..are you feeling cold..??

Shona : (habitat) woh..actually..till now i hv my all bike rides with lucky only no one else…this is my 1st time i m on bike without him…

Sanky : So…?? tell me Shona..what’s the matter..?

Shona : (take a deep breath and finally speak out) actually..i hv a habit of sitting on bike hugging him tightly from back..whether he drive slow or fast…

Shona : (continue) because of that now when you are driving at normal speed only, still i m feeling lil bit uncomfortable..that’s it..nothing else..you start driving..i will be ok…

Sanky nodes..he don’t know what he should do..he start driving..

Sanky : (hasitetenly seeing her lil scared ) Shona…if you want then you can hold me…i mean only if you feel comfortable..plz don’t take me wrong..

Shona : (shocked..assured him) Ohh no no Sanky..don’t worry..i am ok..i am not scared but its just i am not used to with this..

Sanky nodes..and concentrate on road..after some 5-7 min he again saw tensed expression on her face…now that’s it 4 him..he stop bike..

he turned towards her..take her both hands and put them on each side of his waist..at first Shona protest but then after seeing his angry face..she hold him..(not hug)

Sanky start driving…Sanky watch her through side glass..she was feeling comfortable now and enjoying the ride with smile on her face…

Sanky : (complement her) Shona..i hv not said it till now but i must say that i was dumbstruck after watching your audition dance….i hv not seen any girl doing stunts which you were doing..i means u are fabulous dancer…

Shona : (smiles) aww..thank u so much Sanky…(return the complement )…you are also a mindblowing dancer..your every moves were showing your passion for dance..it was awesome..

Sanky : thank u…(teasingly) Ohh god..miss Shona has given me complement..this moment should be written in gold…

Shona : (fake anger) (smack his shoulder) You..You again started teasing me..(they laugh)

Shona : (accept) anyways..i must accept that we both are sharing many things comman..

Sanky : (agree) ya true..specially i m happy that you also hate that cheesy stuff just like me…it sounds so stupid…(teasingly) you were looking cute in your revolver rani mode…i pity on that girl n guy..who became your prey..lol..

Shona : (angry) if you hv forgotten then let me remind you that i hv also seen your vedio…u were no less then me..(Sanky stop lashing & make faces)

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In the car;

lucky : Lado have you inform your mom that you will be late ? i means u hv told Ap anty that u will reach by 11..but it may take some more time…

Ragini : don’t worry lucky..i hv sent meg to my Ma..she hv agreed…

lucky : (shock) Lado..doesn’t she become angry as its already 11 and u will be reaching home by 1 o’clock around at night…????!!!!!

Ragini : (smile) bz she know that i m very choosy with respect to making friends..so if i hv made friends they will be like me only…moreover Sanky is with me na…Ma trust him more than herself…that he will take good care of me…

lucky : (smile & nodes) ya that’s true..he is very caring…(emotional) u know till now i hv not let my kiddo be with anyone alone..but see i myself hv sent her with Sanky that to late night..bz i trust him..

Ragini : hmm…u know what..one day……………….(talk rendom things)

They both were talking and sharing about their friendship sweet incidences with swasan respectively…and enjoying eo’s company..

suddenly,

Ragini : (shout loudly) ” STOP” lucky stop the car..stop stop stop…

Lucky get shocked with her shouting and he was about to loose control on stearing..but he some how manage and apply break…

lucky : (angry & scold her) what the hell Lado…r u mad…i was suppose to loss control n we might hv met with an accident…now tell me why u shouted like that..?

Ragini : (make crying baby face due to his scolding) ( point towards ice-cream stole) bz i want to hv ice-cream…

lucky melted seeing her cute face….he shook his head..

lucky : (smile) Lado..u r mad..u shout like this for ice-cream…

Ragini : (puppy face) i love it so much…

lucky : (dramatically) Ohh god..i think i got another kiddo in my life…(to ragini) ok lets go Lado..

lucky get out of the car and went to open her door..Ragini make fake angry face..She try to remove sit belt..but it got stuck..lucky open the door but she didn’t come out so…

lucky : Ohh hello…r u going to come out or not…?!!

Ragini : (irritate) lucky..this belt has got stuck and i m not able to remove it..

lucky bent and see her struggling with it..

lucky : let me help you..

He bent further towards sit belt lock..he was facing ragini..they both were very close to eo..ragini’s lips were few inch away from his right check..ragini was sitting like statue with this closeness…

lucky was also affected by this as he was feeling ragini’s hot breath touching on his checks…He finally manage to remove the sit belt..when he was going backward by mistakenly his check brash with her lips…(it was not kiss)

Lucky widened his eyes..he immediately stood straight..he start going towards ice-cream stole without speaking or even waiting for her..he touched his check with his hand nd smile unknowingly…

Ragini’s condition was worst then him..she was blushing very hard..she was not able to control her emotions..she didn’t even move for few sec..then she finally manage to compose herself nd come out of the car..

She went towards stole and they ordered ice-cream..there was a silence between them while eating…they were having small small eye-locks in between…lucky finally break the silence…

lucky : wow yummy…ice-cream is very nice…do you like it…?

Ragini : Ohh ya i love it…u know this is my favorite flavour……

nd thanks to lucky..thy both started talking normally..they get back in to the car nd start going 2wards hotel…

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On bike;

swasan were laughing and enjoying their 1st long drive..Sanky was watching her every now and then..Shona was holding him tightly..

Sanky : (monologue) Ohh god Shona..i feeling very happy with you..i feel delighted with your smile and broken with your tears..In just 2 days you hv become everything for me..i want to hug you..hold you..take you for long drives forever…(surprise by his thoughts) hey…what’s happening to me…i think i…………………..

Shona : (monologue) Shona what’s happening to you..Sanky what hv you done with me…i loved my each and every moments with you…i felt shy with your closeness..i m happy when you give me complement..i love the way you tease me..i hv not missed lucky when i m with u…Ohh god…i think….i…………………

swasan : (think together) I Love you…

Sawsan : (smile & think) i will confess after uniting raglak…

both were extrimly happy realizing their feeling for eo…now they wanted to unit raglak at the earliest..

Shona : Sanky we hv to do something so that lucky accept his feelings…my idiot lucky has strong belief that be can’t fall in love…

Sanky : (seriously) Ohh ya…(he start giving suggestions) hey what about making him jealous..? i will act to go close to ragini…

Shona : worst idea…bz he knew that u & Lado are just friends only…n Mr short term memory loss..me & lucky are sharing same bonding..so he will never get jealous of you… (give idea) but he may be jealous of someone else..we can ask Lado to flirt with someone..

Sanky : can’t possible…i know Lado..she will never agree with this idea…what if Lado confess her feelings..?

Shona : nooooooooooo ways…it will create complications..may be he will break his friendship with you both…

Sanky : Shona we can do one thing…(then he explain his plan to her)

Shona: (excitedly) wowwww…Sanky awesome
idea…we will execute this plan…i loved it..(teasingly) it seems you are affected by my company..your brain has started working…

Sanky: Ohh hello..miss show off..u r taking credit of my idea…(confessed) n btw i am loving your company..

Shona : (happy & shocked) what..what do you mean..?

Sanky: (bite his tongue) (covers & tease ) I mean who will not enjoy company of little kid…i toh love kids very much..so…

Shona become angry as she was happy when he said he loved her company..

Shona: (smack him) you…how dare u again call me kid..now i m not going to talk with you..(make cute angry face)

Sanky : (smile) arre…Shona i am sorry…i was just kidding…(no response)

Sanky : (he gives her a chocolate from his pocket…) i am sorry Shona….plz talk to me..

Shona : (immediately take the chocolate) wow…ok i forgave you…any thing for chocolates..

Sanky : (smile) whatever you say Shona but you are a kiddo..look u become happy and start talking just like a lil kid do…(laugh)

Shona : (angry) you…

but  then she realise her act & join him in laughing..she finished her eating…they both were enjoying a lot…

Sanky wanted her to hug him form the moment she said that she has a habit of hugging lucky from back whlie bike riding…and now when he has realized his feeling for her.. he thought something and decided to execute his plan..

Sanky start increasing his driving speed…as expected Shona hold him more tightly…he intentionally start giving sudden breaks on speed breakers and again start driving faster….Shona could not stop herself from falling on him each time…then she again went back keeping distance between them…(actually Shona was also stopping her urge to hug him) this whole things happened for few times and at last his plan work..

Shona give up and hug him..pressing herself on him..wraping her arms around his chest tightly.. resting her check on his back..and close her eyes..

Sanky was feeling like he was in heaven…he wanted her to be like this forever..whereas Shona was feeling happy and protactive with him..both of them wanted that moment to freeze…

Sanky slow down the speed as he wanted to be with her like this as long as he can…nd he was happy as Shona didn’t move back even after he start driving slowly..now they both knew that they can’t live without eo..and hoping that other one is also feeling the same…

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Raglak reached hotel first and sat on bench of parking lot waiting for swasan…they both were talking..suddenly Ragini’s eyes got widened…lucky saw her..he turn back to look where she is looking..Swasan were coming towards them on bike…

lucky was shocked..hell shocked to see his Shona sleeping while hugging Sanky tightly from back…she was very comfortable with him…Sanky park his bike near their bench..

Sanky : wake up Shona..we reached your hotel…(no response she was still in same position)

Lucky went near them..He shake Shona…Shona open her eyes and saw her position…in next moment she open her eyes widely and jump down from bike…Sanky to get down..she look at lucky and went near him and hug him..she was feeling too sleepy…

Shona : (sleepy) lucky..i wanna sleep..i can’t walk till my room…plzzzzzz lift me…

lucky : sure my kiddo..

Ragini : (tease) it seems u both hv enjoyed a lot..

Raglak laugh..Shona was half asleep so didn’t react on their teasing but Sanky felt very embarrassed and smile awkwardly…

Sanky : its nothing like that…

Lucky was about to picked up Shona…she remembered something so…

Shona : (sleepy voice)  Lado..its already 12:30…its too late so it will be better that you stay with me tonight in my room..and Sanky will be in lucky ‘s room….i don’t hv enough strength to argue…so u hv to agree with me..

lucky : ya Sanky, Lado..Shona is right..its to late..so it will be better that you both accept it..

Sanky smile looking at Shona…he thinks though she is dam sleepy she remembered and started executing their plan..ya it was part of his plan..

Ragini : but….

Sanky : (interrupt) i think we should accept it Lado…its too late..lucky, you take Shona to her room…
Lado you go with them…
i will come after informing mom and Ap anty…

lucky nodes…he picked up Shona and start going towards her room…ragini was walking behind him with confused face…

ragini : (monologue) Y Sanky accept this so fast ? something is fishy..anyways let it be..

Lucky : (call her) Lado plz take out keys from my left pocket and open the door…bz right now my hands are busy..(laugh)

Ragini : (laugh) ya sure..

She put her hand in his pocket and take out the keys..they hv small eye-lock in between…Sanky reached there..she open the door…and went inside..

lucky placed Shona on bed and cover her with blanket…he pack her forehead…both ragsan saw them and smile…

lucky : lets go to our room Sanky..good night Lado…(smile)

Ragini : Good night lucky..good night Sanky..(hug him)

Sanky : (pack her forehead) good night Lado..sweet dreams..

sanlak went to there room and she closed the door..she ly on other side of bed…soon She doze off with bright smile on her face thinking about all her close moments with lucky..

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In lucky’s room :

Lucky : (smile) it was an amazing day of my life…thanks dude for everything…

Sanky : anything for friends..n btw i hv also enjoyed a lot…(think about Shona)

lucky : (low tone to tease him) with Shona..?

Sanky : (unknowingly) (smile) Ya…
(come back to senses) i mean with  you, Lado and Shona..

lucky : (tease) ya ya i know..with whom and how u hv enjoyed..

Sanky : whatever (change the topic) anyways are you feeling sleepy..??

lucky : no yar i am not feeling sleepy..actually i m used to sleep around 2-3 am…

Sanky : (happy) wow..that’s great…then lets hv it…

Lucky : (confuse) s..Sanky..what r u talking about..? (dramatically) look..i am not like that..i m normal & interested in girls only..so though we are alone here…we can’t hv it…

Sanky : (shocked & unbelievable) lucky k bachche…you dramebazz…you dirty minded..wait i will not leave you now…

he through pillow on him and soon they both were doing pillow fight…they were laughing and breathing hard…

lucky : btw Sanky…what you were talking abt..?

Sanky : ha..(smirk) he show him two bottles..lets hv drink..

lucky : (excited) Ohh wow dude…when you bring this..ya lets hv it…u know i hv not drink from abt last 6-7 months..u made my day…thanks yar..

Sanky smile as his plan was working..he make two drink..sanlak start drinking..

Precap : swasan executing their plan..megha audition practice

the end

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please excuse me for spelling and grammatical errors…sorry for not including megha audition practice in this part…as it is too lengthy..i hv written 4 chepters for one day picnic…but it was necessary for their bonding and love story..i hope u hv enjoyed it…how about this ch..? do you like it..? plz share your views…i am eagerly waiting for your comments..

Credit to: Namrata

18 comments

  1. renu

    Lovely wow yr u make every moment alive nice keep it up it was amazing … grand salute for ur writing skills dear waiting eagerly for next one…

  2. mitti

    Wow…even I love long bike rides….The way swara felt even I feel d same when I go for bike rides with bhai….raglan scene were awesome ….just loved it

  3. shan

    seriously i was just eagerly waiting for ur ff dr…..when i saw ur ff i was on cloud 9…..very interesting….i loved both raglak nd swasan scenes…..but i loved swasan long rides more…..its just a thought though swalak nd ragsan r bff hug s normal but kiss it s somewhat not nice…..its just my opinion….i dint hurt u….as we r indian der should b some limitations right..just my thought if i hurt u i m sry….

  4. Dr how u get such idea it’s just like I. M watching movie in Mal it’s beautiful actually u just write like official writer pls continue waiting for next update..then gn tc

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